Erotica The Girl Next Door (Completed)

[lone_hunterr]

Story completed

for this venture
Will be waiting for more of your stories

 

[Indian Princess]

Karma is bitch
Everybody finally meets their fate_____ It was one hell of a ride with this story____ Last 2 updates were blunt and dark (Euphemistically speaking)____ As much as I have sympathy for Meera; The way she took if opted by every human then our race in no time will turn into savages (Personal opinion)___ Dr. mithila should have tried to convince her to opt for legal way
Lots of innocents payed for something they never did starting from Naina to pankhudi to aditi and her daughters___ And I am not sure whether I liked that (But I loved your writing style)
Lot of scope for sequel of this story_____ Aarman's revenge with pankhudi's rescue or maybe Daughter's revenge for whatever happened to their mother aditi____ Please consider this request according to your convenience

Thanks so much for your support

Actually when I wrote this I was actually thinking like Meera. What would I have done in her place?

You know the original draft of this story consists of a scene where Meera actually lets Armaan and Pankhudi go unhurt because Armaan didnt rape Naina.

But then I changed my mind. What Meera was doing here was revenge, and not justice. And revenge is never fair and there is always a lot of collateral.

I've tried to paint the characters in different shades of grey. No one is all good or all bad, including Meera. And unfortunately innocents getting hurt is much more closer to reality.

I'm glad you liked most of the story.

 

[Shikari_golu]

Plot was so nice nd intresting....

but after reading all story....its disappoint me...dont mind...its my personal thought......

Actually i just want to make all victim dead..or some more punishment....but....u know...wht u did wid them...


Overall...story is good...but not fully justify wid d end....

Good luck 4 future.....?

 

[Indian Princess]

Plot was so nice nd intresting....

but after reading all story....its disappoint me...dont mind...its my personal thought......

Actually i just want to make all victim dead..or some more punishment....but....u know...wht u did wid them...


Overall...story is good...but not fully justify wid d end....

Good luck 4 future.....?

Thank you for your comment.

Sorry that you didn't like the end.

 

[lone_hunterr]

I'm glad you liked most of the story.

I loved the whole story.... Just didn't liked that its a hardcore revenge and not a happy ending fairy tale (But that part gives story its true color It is same as I don't like baingan but love baingan ka bharta)____
And I would love to read such story again (So please write )

 

[Indian Princess]

I loved the whole story.... Just didn't liked that its a hardcore revenge and not a happy ending fairy tale (But that part gives story its true color It is same as I don't like baingan but love baingan ka bharta)____
And I would love to read such story again (So please write )

I agree that the story is dark...very dark in fact, darker than dark seduction

You know what, writing this story took such an emotional toll on me that I couldn't sleep several nights

Imagining all that happened to the characters happening to me was just dreadful

 

[nain11ster]

I agree that the story is dark...very dark in fact, darker than dark seduction

You know what, writing this story took such an emotional toll on me that I couldn't sleep several nights

Imagining all that happened to the characters happening to me was just dreadful

Wo to hospital me night duty lagi hogi wo bhi emergency me isliye so na payi hogi ..

Joke a part .. just started the reading ...

 

[Indian Princess]

Dr. mithila should have tried to convince her to opt for legal way

I missed this point in my previous reply.

The rape took place 13 years ago, and apart from the video that Reyansh foolishly held on to, there was no other evidence. Secondly, Meera was prostitute, although forced to become one, but a prostitute nevertheless. How many law enforcement officers would even take the word of a prostitute seriously against four rich and powerful men from reputed families? And imagine all the humiliation she would have to face in court. She knew what these men were capable of, and with all the corruption prevailing our the system, they would have just crushed her like an insect like they crushed Naina.

She was able to do what she did only because she caught them off guard.

I am considering your suggestion for a sequel, let's hope it comes out well.

 

[lone_hunterr]

I am considering your suggestion for a sequel, let's hope it comes out well.

Just let me know somehow as soon as you start

 

[john stinston]

Superb story it was good, nice revenge story, but felt that it was unfair on aditi.
hoping to read more of your stories in future.