Fantasy The Monopoly System

[सुमन]

1	Premkumar65	monty sharma	Delta101
2	Looteraaa	Lucky1999	Lucky..
3	King Pathan	111ramjain	Yasasvi3
4	Riky007	nplcool	Spm
5	Sager 330	solo nightstar	$ekhar
6	Hayat Mirza	sam_41	Dhakad boy
7	𝕯𝖊𝖛𝖎𝖑 𝖐𝖎𝖓𝖌👑	Dynamicakii	prideep meena
8	Avir	only_me	Sarb32
9	Ghost Rider ❣️	Mana6262	Ravisharma0143
10	red_devil_98	Abhid0609	Raj
11	Raju0053	Ashuk2705	king1969
12	Rocky2602	Mahendra Baranwal	Cobra99
13	deeyadil	SKY WORRIOR	Roy 07
14	Iron Man	Mahil	Hero tera
15	Gupta g	Ron10	Redhu420
16	Ramesh628	Mk1	mahesh_babu
17	Luv69	Adhir Rajput	samkhiv
18	Brshashi	gOlDy	Ayesha952
19	_Riya	dps	Adarsh8815
20	Ss mujrim	rajpurohitkikahani99	Deepak bhai
21	Power king	Lady Bug🥀	arushi67
22	Sidh	hiakarji	Jimmy
23	achinsaha	DINNA	kabir018
24	Chirag7574	itz hyper	johnsamuri
25	goyalabhishek818	Zaigham Bhatti	dhoni98

update 16 posted on page 27
update 17 posted on page 29 (MEGA UPDATE)
update 18 posted on page 35
update 19 posted on page 38
update 20 posted on page 41
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Hello readers,

my project work still going and it is an important project.
it may take a week or so.

isliye main update nehi bhej paa raha hu.
jaise hi project khatam hoga main jhat se update de dunga.

tab tak dusri kahani ko enjoy kariye.

thankyou for your support ​

 

[Raj]

Chapter 015​

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Do minute me translate karna khatm karne ke baad Soumya aur Arjun ne baith kar nashta kiya. Thodi der aram karne ke baad Arjun bola, “shopping karne chalogi?”

“Sach me.” Soumya khush hote hue boli. Akhir koi ladki shopping ke naam se khush na ho bhala aisa kabhi ho sakta hai.​

“Ekdam Sach” Arjun haa me sir hilate hue bola. Soumya khush hoti hui boli, “ruko main abhi apan baal bana leti hu.”

Soumya abhi nahayi thi aur baal bhiga hone ke karan usne bandhi nahi thi. Ab tak uske baal sukh gaye the. Wah apne bal ko bandh li.​

15 minute baad Soumya ne simple si choti bandh li. Uske baad dono hotel se bahar nikal gaye. “Chalo sabse pahle ek car leni hai mujhe.” Arjun bolta hai.

Arjun uske sath car ki show room me jata hai. Virpur third tier city thi. Lekin yaha electric vehicle ki showroom aa gayi thi.

Arjun Tata ki showroom me gaya. Waha abhi jyada bhir nahi thi. Subah ka samay tha aur koi session bhi nahi thi jaha jyada kharidari ho.

Ek saleslady ne Arjun aur Soumya ko greet kiya. “Welcome sir, welcome miss”

“Sir aap kaisi car dekhna chahenge. Apni koi preference bataiye.” Sales lady puchi.

“Tiago EV hai?” Arjun ko car pasand aa gayi thi aur apna samay barbad nahi karna chahta tha. Isliye sidhe mudde par aa gaya.

Sales lady pahle to chauk gayi phir uske face par ek badi si smile aa gayi thi. Akhir 10 lakh ki gadi bikne par usko bhi kuchh commision milenge.

Wah smile karti hui Arjun ko car ke bare me batayi uske baad usne color preference ke bare me pucha. “Soumya tum choose karo.”

Arjun ko jyada color mayne nahi rakhta tha. Woh Soumya se hi pucha. Gadi ke jyada color nahi the. Usne kuch der me gray color ko choos kar liya.​

Saleslady ne bataya ki ₹ 1.2 million hai. Aur ₹ 10,000 paperwork complete karne me lagenge. Usne docoment aur driving license mange.

Sales lady ne Arjun se document liya. Arjun ne extra kuch rupaye diye taki jaldi se paperwork pura ho jaye. Sales lady 15 minute rukne ke liye boli.

15 minute baad Arjun aur Soumya car me baith kar showroom se nikle. Abki baar unka target tha real estate office.

“Tum abhi real estate kyu le rahe ho?” Soumya puchi. Arjun ne abhi abhi car kharidi thi. Soumya ko laga ki Arjun kharch bahut adhik kar raha hai.

“Kya har baar hotel me aane ka irada hai kya?” Arjun ankh marte hue bola. Pahle to Soumya ko samajh nahi aaya. Thodi der baad usko samajh aaya ki Arjun kya kahna chah raha hai.​

“Dhatt” Soumya sharma kar apna chehra niche kar leti hai. Lekin uske dil me abhi sweet feeling aa rahi thi. Arjun kuch hi der me new community me aa gaya. Yaha flat ki sale hoti thi.

“Chinta mat karo. Abhi city me real estate manda chal raha hai. Agar abhi hamne kharid liya to baad me isko bech bhi sakte hai.” Arjun samjhate hue bola.

Soumya ko samajh me aaya ki Arjun real estate kyun kharid raha hai. Arjun ke paas abhi kul milakar ₹ 2.42 million the. Usme usko koi decent flat to nahi milegi. Arjun EMI par kharidna chahta tha.

Saleslady dono ko flat dikhane le gayi. Arjun ne ek achha view wala 3BHK flat choose kiya. Flat pura furnish tha. Kewal bed, kitchen ki saman sab baki the. Jo log apni pasand se kharidte hai.​

Arjun ne flat book kar liya. Flat ₹ 6.9 million ke the. Usko month ke antim tak interest mila kar ₹ 7 million ho jane the. Saleslady ne bataya ki agar aap ek mahine ke andar amount pay kar dete ho to aapko flat mil jayega.

Arjun ne bahana banaya. “Miss mere account me one time upper limit ₹ 2 million ki hai. Isliye main ek baar me payment nahi kar sakta. Lekin aaj hi main payment kar dunga.”

Arjun ke kahne par Saleslady uski baat maan gayi. Arjun ne char baar me ₹ 7 million payment kar diya. Sath me usne do parking space ke liye ₹ 100,000 payment kiye. Jo do salo ke liye valid thi.

Sales lady bhi bahut efficient thi. Adhe ghante me usne sare paperwork complete kar diye. Usne gate par lock bhi change karwa diye. Ab Soumhya aur Arjun ke hath me ek-ek key padi hui thi.

Soumya achambha me khadi thi. Usko sab kuch sapna jaisa lag raha tha. Wah Arjun ke liye khush bhi thi. Sath me usko apne upar garv bhi ho raha tha ki usne sahi faisla liya tha.

Arjun ne apni balance check kiye. Uske account me ₹ 9.42 million the. Arjun ne pahli baar apni account me itna rupya dekha tha. Woh bahut exited tha. Aaj uske paas apni gadi aur makan tha.

Pichli life me uske paas kabhi descent si ghar aur car bhi nahi thi. Usne puri life struggle hi ki thi. Woh aaj satisfy tha. Uske naam par aaj ek flat tha aur ek car thi.​

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Chapter 016​

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Arjun ne apni car ko flat ke paas laya aur parking space me khada kiya. Tab tak Soumya flat me saman ko dekh rahi thi.

Arjun flat me aakar Soumya se bola, “chalo shopping kar ke aate hai.”

Soumya jo abhi flat ko dekh rahi thi, wo uski taraf mudte hue boli, “baby, flat me bahut saman kami hai. Ruko list bana leti hu. Uske baad chalte hai.”

Arjun ko bhi uski baat sahi lagi. Wah ek kamre me jate hue bola, “thik hai baby to tum dekh lo kya kya lena hai. Waise bhi maine hotel kal tak ke liye book kar li hai. To hamare paas time hai.”

Soumya sahmati me sar hilati hui boli, “thik hai. Tum aaram kar lo.”

Arjun room me chala gaya. Wah sofe par baith kar paper nikal kar padhne laga. Wah do baar ache se usko padha. Yeh paper woh thi jisko Soumya ne translate kiya hua tha.

Arjun net se jadi butiyo ke bare me check karne laga. Usko is baat ki chinta thi ki kahi woh sab jadi butiya kaphi mahangi na ho.

Lekin Arjun ko woh sab jadi butiya common mili. Woh kisi bhi ayurvedic jadi butiyo ki dukan par mil jane wali thi.

Idhar Soumya khushi khushi ghar me ghum rahi thi aur paper par chijo ka note bana rahi thi. Adha ghanta laga usne upar upar se note bana liya tha. Wah kuch saman agle din kharidne ka sochi.

Wah list lekar Arjun ke paas pahuchi. “Yeh dekho, itne saman ghate hue hai. Aur bhi honge.”

“Ab tum is ghar ki malkin ho. Dekh lo tumhe hi sab sambhalna hai.” Arjun chidhate hue Soumya ko bola.​

Malkin shabd sun kar Soumya sharma gayi. Uske dil ki dhadkan badh gayi, “kya usne abhi mujhe propose kiya?” Soumya apne man me sochne lagi.

Arjun uske sath market ghumne chala gaya. Sabse pahle dono bed ki shop me gaye. Waise to palang thi, lekin Arjun king size bed chahta tha.​

Usne ek king size bed, aur do queen size bed kharide. Uske sath uspar jarurat ki chije bhi kharidi, jaise gadda, takiya, bedsheet aur bhi bahut kuch. Usi dukan se unhone sofa set bhi kharida.

Unhone ghar ka address de diya. Dukandar ne bola ki woh log kal aakar set kar denge. Uske baad dono kitchen ki saman lene gaye. Waha par bhi achhi chije kharidi.​

Uske baad sabhi room ke liye ek ek LED TV kharidi unhone. Sath me hi ek computer system aur ek study table kharidi.

Soumya boli ki woh ek room ko study me convert karna chahti hai. Uske baad woh log AC ki dukan par gaye. Waha se AC ke liye order kiya.

Sabhi saman kal unke ghar shift kar diya jayega. Sath me we log apni mistri bhejenge fit karne ke liye. Arjun in sab ki chinta nahi ki. Usne Soumya ko bola tha ki jo bhi ho best select karne ke liye. Paise ki chinta woh na kare.

Uske baad dono mobile phone ki dukan par gaye. Waha se Arjun ne Soumya ke liye mobile phone kharidi. “Ye lo maine wada kiya tha na mobile phone ka. Kaisa laga.” Arjun usko ek Iphone thamata hua bola. ​

“Hmm.” Soumya sharmate hue Arjun ki pehli gift accept kari. Arjun ne abhi tak bahut sari chije kharidi thi. Lekin usne pahli baar uske liye kuch kharidi thi.

Sath me Arjun ne uske liye ek laptop bhi kharidi. Uske baad woh log ek mall gaye. Unhone waha se kapde kharide. Soumya ke jidd karne par Arjun ne apne liye bhi kuch kapde aur suites kharide. Soumya ne kuch innerwear bhi kharide.​

Kul milakar unhone aaj bahut jyada shopping kari thi. Arjun ne check kiya to usne abhi tak lagbhag ₹ 10M ki shopping ki thi. Uske account me ₹ 19M rupaye the.

Jab sare saman kharid liye gaye tab Arjun ne car ko ek ayurvedic medicine shop ki taraf le kar gaya. Usko malum tha ki abhi usko medicine jarur kharidni chahiye. Warna kahi phir se aaj KLPD ho jayega.
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[सुमन]

1	Premkumar65	monty sharma	Delta101
2	Looteraaa	Lucky1999	Lucky..
3	King Pathan	111ramjain	Yasasvi3
4	Riky007	nplcool	Spm
5	Sager 330	solo nightstar	$ekhar
6	Hayat Mirza	sam_41	Dhakad boy
7	𝕯𝖊𝖛𝖎𝖑 𝖐𝖎𝖓𝖌👑	Dynamicakii	prideep meena
8	Avir	only_me	Sarb32
9	Ghost Rider ❣️	Mana6262	Ravisharma0143
10	red_devil_98	Abhid0609	Raj
11	Raju0053	Ashuk2705	king1969
12	Rocky2602	Mahendra Baranwal	Cobra99
13	deeyadil	SKY WORRIOR	Roy 07
14	Iron Man	Mahil	Hero tera
15	Gupta g	Ron10	Redhu420
16	Ramesh628	Mk1	mahesh_babu
17	Luv69	Adhir Rajput	samkhiv
18	Brshashi	gOlDy	Ayesha952
19	_Riya

update 16 posted on page 27


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Friends UPDATE 017 ek mega update hoga...
jisko main Tuesday ko post karunga...​

 

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Bahut hi mazedar update

thanks bhai...
maine update 16 post kar di hai. padh kar comment jarur kare..

 

[सुमन]

Nice

thanks Ayesha952 ji...
agla update bhi page 27 par post ho gaya hai. padh kar comment jarur kare.

 

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Bahut badhiya.... Keep it up

thanks gOlDy

agla update bhi page 27 par post ho gaya hai. padh kar comment jarur kare.

 

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Nice update

Thanks 111ramjain
agla update bhi page 27 par post ho gaya hai. padh kar comment jarur kare.

 

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The Villain System ye story me update kab aayega सुमन

only_me bhai....
us kahani ko fir se shuru karne me time lagega..
pahle jo chal raha hai usko khatm karna hai. uske baad hi agla shuru karunga...

 

[सुमन]

NICE AND INTERESTING UPDATE

Thanks Raj bhai....

agla update bhi page 27 par post ho gaya hai. padh kar comment jarur kare.

 

[सुमन]

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC LOVELY AND INTERESTING UPDATE

Thanks Raj bhai..
agla update bhi page 27 par post ho gaya hai. padh kar comment jarur kare.