Fantasy The Monopoly System

[सुमन]

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update 16 posted on page 27
update 17 posted on page 29 (MEGA UPDATE)
update 18 posted on page 35
update 19 posted on page 38
update 20 posted on page 41
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Hello readers,

my project work still going and it is an important project.
it may take a week or so.

isliye main update nehi bhej paa raha hu.
jaise hi project khatam hoga main jhat se update de dunga.

tab tak dusri kahani ko enjoy kariye.

thankyou for your support ​

 

[Raj]

Chapter 016​

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Arjun ne apni car ko flat ke paas laya aur parking space me khada kiya. Tab tak Soumya flat me saman ko dekh rahi thi.

Arjun flat me aakar Soumya se bola, “chalo shopping kar ke aate hai.”

Soumya jo abhi flat ko dekh rahi thi, wo uski taraf mudte hue boli, “baby, flat me bahut saman kami hai. Ruko list bana leti hu. Uske baad chalte hai.”

Arjun ko bhi uski baat sahi lagi. Wah ek kamre me jate hue bola, “thik hai baby to tum dekh lo kya kya lena hai. Waise bhi maine hotel kal tak ke liye book kar li hai. To hamare paas time hai.”

Soumya sahmati me sar hilati hui boli, “thik hai. Tum aaram kar lo.”

Arjun room me chala gaya. Wah sofe par baith kar paper nikal kar padhne laga. Wah do baar ache se usko padha. Yeh paper woh thi jisko Soumya ne translate kiya hua tha.

Arjun net se jadi butiyo ke bare me check karne laga. Usko is baat ki chinta thi ki kahi woh sab jadi butiya kaphi mahangi na ho.

Lekin Arjun ko woh sab jadi butiya common mili. Woh kisi bhi ayurvedic jadi butiyo ki dukan par mil jane wali thi.

Idhar Soumya khushi khushi ghar me ghum rahi thi aur paper par chijo ka note bana rahi thi. Adha ghanta laga usne upar upar se note bana liya tha. Wah kuch saman agle din kharidne ka sochi.

Wah list lekar Arjun ke paas pahuchi. “Yeh dekho, itne saman ghate hue hai. Aur bhi honge.”

“Ab tum is ghar ki malkin ho. Dekh lo tumhe hi sab sambhalna hai.” Arjun chidhate hue Soumya ko bola.​

Malkin shabd sun kar Soumya sharma gayi. Uske dil ki dhadkan badh gayi, “kya usne abhi mujhe propose kiya?” Soumya apne man me sochne lagi.

Arjun uske sath market ghumne chala gaya. Sabse pahle dono bed ki shop me gaye. Waise to palang thi, lekin Arjun king size bed chahta tha.​

Usne ek king size bed, aur do queen size bed kharide. Uske sath uspar jarurat ki chije bhi kharidi, jaise gadda, takiya, bedsheet aur bhi bahut kuch. Usi dukan se unhone sofa set bhi kharida.

Unhone ghar ka address de diya. Dukandar ne bola ki woh log kal aakar set kar denge. Uske baad dono kitchen ki saman lene gaye. Waha par bhi achhi chije kharidi.​

Uske baad sabhi room ke liye ek ek LED TV kharidi unhone. Sath me hi ek computer system aur ek study table kharidi.

Soumya boli ki woh ek room ko study me convert karna chahti hai. Uske baad woh log AC ki dukan par gaye. Waha se AC ke liye order kiya.

Sabhi saman kal unke ghar shift kar diya jayega. Sath me we log apni mistri bhejenge fit karne ke liye. Arjun in sab ki chinta nahi ki. Usne Soumya ko bola tha ki jo bhi ho best select karne ke liye. Paise ki chinta woh na kare.

Uske baad dono mobile phone ki dukan par gaye. Waha se Arjun ne Soumya ke liye mobile phone kharidi. “Ye lo maine wada kiya tha na mobile phone ka. Kaisa laga.” Arjun usko ek Iphone thamata hua bola. ​

“Hmm.” Soumya sharmate hue Arjun ki pehli gift accept kari. Arjun ne abhi tak bahut sari chije kharidi thi. Lekin usne pahli baar uske liye kuch kharidi thi.

Sath me Arjun ne uske liye ek laptop bhi kharidi. Uske baad woh log ek mall gaye. Unhone waha se kapde kharide. Soumya ke jidd karne par Arjun ne apne liye bhi kuch kapde aur suites kharide. Soumya ne kuch innerwear bhi kharide.​

Kul milakar unhone aaj bahut jyada shopping kari thi. Arjun ne check kiya to usne abhi tak lagbhag ₹ 10M ki shopping ki thi. Uske account me ₹ 19M rupaye the.

Jab sare saman kharid liye gaye tab Arjun ne car ko ek ayurvedic medicine shop ki taraf le kar gaya. Usko malum tha ki abhi usko medicine jarur kharidni chahiye. Warna kahi phir se aaj KLPD ho jayega.
​

SUPERB AWESOME EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE

 

[king1969]

Bahut badiya update

 

[_Riya]

Great start

 

[red_devil_98]

Chapter 016​

---

Arjun ne apni car ko flat ke paas laya aur parking space me khada kiya. Tab tak Soumya flat me saman ko dekh rahi thi.

Arjun flat me aakar Soumya se bola, “chalo shopping kar ke aate hai.”

Soumya jo abhi flat ko dekh rahi thi, wo uski taraf mudte hue boli, “baby, flat me bahut saman kami hai. Ruko list bana leti hu. Uske baad chalte hai.”

Arjun ko bhi uski baat sahi lagi. Wah ek kamre me jate hue bola, “thik hai baby to tum dekh lo kya kya lena hai. Waise bhi maine hotel kal tak ke liye book kar li hai. To hamare paas time hai.”

Soumya sahmati me sar hilati hui boli, “thik hai. Tum aaram kar lo.”

Arjun room me chala gaya. Wah sofe par baith kar paper nikal kar padhne laga. Wah do baar ache se usko padha. Yeh paper woh thi jisko Soumya ne translate kiya hua tha.

Arjun net se jadi butiyo ke bare me check karne laga. Usko is baat ki chinta thi ki kahi woh sab jadi butiya kaphi mahangi na ho.

Lekin Arjun ko woh sab jadi butiya common mili. Woh kisi bhi ayurvedic jadi butiyo ki dukan par mil jane wali thi.

Idhar Soumya khushi khushi ghar me ghum rahi thi aur paper par chijo ka note bana rahi thi. Adha ghanta laga usne upar upar se note bana liya tha. Wah kuch saman agle din kharidne ka sochi.

Wah list lekar Arjun ke paas pahuchi. “Yeh dekho, itne saman ghate hue hai. Aur bhi honge.”

“Ab tum is ghar ki malkin ho. Dekh lo tumhe hi sab sambhalna hai.” Arjun chidhate hue Soumya ko bola.​

Malkin shabd sun kar Soumya sharma gayi. Uske dil ki dhadkan badh gayi, “kya usne abhi mujhe propose kiya?” Soumya apne man me sochne lagi.

Arjun uske sath market ghumne chala gaya. Sabse pahle dono bed ki shop me gaye. Waise to palang thi, lekin Arjun king size bed chahta tha.​

Usne ek king size bed, aur do queen size bed kharide. Uske sath uspar jarurat ki chije bhi kharidi, jaise gadda, takiya, bedsheet aur bhi bahut kuch. Usi dukan se unhone sofa set bhi kharida.

Unhone ghar ka address de diya. Dukandar ne bola ki woh log kal aakar set kar denge. Uske baad dono kitchen ki saman lene gaye. Waha par bhi achhi chije kharidi.​

Uske baad sabhi room ke liye ek ek LED TV kharidi unhone. Sath me hi ek computer system aur ek study table kharidi.

Soumya boli ki woh ek room ko study me convert karna chahti hai. Uske baad woh log AC ki dukan par gaye. Waha se AC ke liye order kiya.

Sabhi saman kal unke ghar shift kar diya jayega. Sath me we log apni mistri bhejenge fit karne ke liye. Arjun in sab ki chinta nahi ki. Usne Soumya ko bola tha ki jo bhi ho best select karne ke liye. Paise ki chinta woh na kare.

Uske baad dono mobile phone ki dukan par gaye. Waha se Arjun ne Soumya ke liye mobile phone kharidi. “Ye lo maine wada kiya tha na mobile phone ka. Kaisa laga.” Arjun usko ek Iphone thamata hua bola. ​

“Hmm.” Soumya sharmate hue Arjun ki pehli gift accept kari. Arjun ne abhi tak bahut sari chije kharidi thi. Lekin usne pahli baar uske liye kuch kharidi thi.

Sath me Arjun ne uske liye ek laptop bhi kharidi. Uske baad woh log ek mall gaye. Unhone waha se kapde kharide. Soumya ke jidd karne par Arjun ne apne liye bhi kuch kapde aur suites kharide. Soumya ne kuch innerwear bhi kharide.​

Kul milakar unhone aaj bahut jyada shopping kari thi. Arjun ne check kiya to usne abhi tak lagbhag ₹ 10M ki shopping ki thi. Uske account me ₹ 19M rupaye the.

Jab sare saman kharid liye gaye tab Arjun ne car ko ek ayurvedic medicine shop ki taraf le kar gaya. Usko malum tha ki abhi usko medicine jarur kharidni chahiye. Warna kahi phir se aaj KLPD ho jayega.
​

Mast update tha writer Bhai

 

[सुमन]

Chapter 017​

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Arjun aur Soumya shaam hone tak naye flat me pahuch gaye the. Unhone suite me kuch der baad jane ka faisla kiya.

Arjun apni medicine le kar kitchen me busy hone chala gaya. Medicine banane ki vidhi jyada kathin nahi thi. Arjun ko pahle se khana banana aata tha to usko pata tha kya karna hai.

Arjun 20 minute ke andar apni dawai taiyar kar liya. Wah bedroom me chala gaya. Soumya abhi aundhi let kar mobile chala rahi thi.

Arjun ko system se warning mila tha ki dawa pite waqt sharir se toxin bhi niklegi. Isliye achha yeh hai ki wo shower me rahe.

Arjun shower on kar deta hai aur kadhe ki taraf dekhta hai. Uske baad apni naak band kar ke ek hi sath me pura gatak jata hai aur shower ke niche khada ho jata hai.

Pehle to usko kuch mehsoos nahi hua. Lekin kuch der baad uske sharir ke alag alag jagah me dard hone laga. Aisa lag raha tha ki uske sharir me hajaro chitiya reng rahi hai aur uski haddiyo ko kured rahi hai.

Arjun dard ke mare khada nahi ho paa raha tha. Kaise bhi kar ke woh apne sharir ko sambhal kar bathtub se tek lagakar let jata hai. Wah apne hotho ko kas ke daba ke rakha tha. Kisi bhi tarah apni dant bhinch kar awaj nikalne se apne aap ko rok raha tha.

Agar uski dard bhari chikh Soumya sun leti to woh pareshan ho jati aur to aur padosiyo ke ghar ki baat alag hai.

Yeh dard ka silsila panch minute tak chala. Jaise hi dard khatm hua. Uska sharir garam hone laga. Jaise kisi ne usko aag par baitha diya hai. Usko bahut tej pasine aane lage. Uske sath hi uske sharir se kale chip chipe chij nikal rahe the. Uske sath hi bahut tej gandh failne lagi.

Arjun samajh gaya ki uske sharir se toxin nikal rahi hai. Arjun ne bathtub ki exit ko khol diya. Jisse pani nikal kar pipe ke raste bahar jane lagi.

Kuch der me Arjun ke sharir se toxin nikalna band ho gaya tha. Ab wah apne sharir ko halka mehsoos kar sakta tha. Jaise kai saal ka bojh uske sharir se utar gaya ho.

Arjun ke sharir ki garmi shant hone lagi. Shower ki thanda pani jab uske sharir par gir raha tha to usko kaphi aaram mil raha tha. Pichhle 10-15 ki dard usko sadiyo ki tarah lagi thi.

Kuch der shower lene ke baad woh bathtub se nikla. Wah nanga shishe ke samne khada ho gaya. Waha ek body size mirror laga hua tha. Apna chehra mirror ke andar dekhne par Arjun dang rah gaya tha. Usko apna chehra kal ki apeksha aur bhi fair dikhai de raha tha.

Arjun ab apne sharir ko dekhne lagta hai. Uske fat ab thode kam ho gaye the aur woh thoda patla ho gaya tha. Uske sath hi uska sharir usko thoda takatwar lag raha tha.

Usne jab apne hathyar ko dekha to woh dang rah gaya. Uska hathiyar jo kal tak 15 cm ka tha wo thoda badh gaya tha. Waise jyada nahi badha tha. Lekin mota jarur ho gaya tha.

Arjun ko apne sharir ki lambai bhi kuch jyada lagi. Woh idhar udhar napne ke liye kuch dhundne laga. Tabhi usko system ki yaad aayi. Usme uska height and weight diya tha. Usne jhat se system panel khola.

Waha usko sabse pahle ek special effect dikhi. Jaise game jitne par aati hai. Uske baad kuch likha hua ayaa. Padhne par pata chala ki uska physique activate ho gaya hai. Aur abhi pahle level me hai.

[Congratulations host. Apne apna physique activate kar liya hai. Ab se aapko monopoly system me Harem section activate ho gaya hai. Bhagwan ne aap ko ek life di hai. Kripya usko khul kar enjoy kare.]

[Name: Arjun Singh]

[Age: 18 years]

[Weight: 55 kg]

[Height: 160 cm]

[Dick: 17 cm, 7 cm]

[Duration: 20 minute]

[Balance: ₹ 19M]

[Physique: Nine Sun Physique - lvl 1]

[Items: Physique activation formula]

{Harem: 0}

Harem tab kuch file ki tarah thi. Arjun utsukta wash usko open kiya to waha bahut sari category thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki purane raja maharaja ki harem ko utha kar rakh diya hai.

[Harem section me aapka swagat hai. Aap yaha apne relation ki jankari ko rakh sakte hai. Aap ek vishesh insan ho. Har koi apne aap me raja hota hai. Raja ke kitne sambandh hote hai. Raja sab kisi se sex nahi karta. Harem matlab yeh nahi ki sex karne walo ko hi sammalit kiya jayega. Ha system kisi lady ko harem me rakhne se pahle aapka ray jarur legi. Ye apka pariwar hai aur aap uske malik hai.]

[Harem section me bahut sare relation hai jo niche diye gaye hai.]

[Patni (Wife): Harem mein sabse uchchi sthan patniyon ki hoti hai. Inki raja ki vidhi vidhan se shadi hoti hai. Jisko raja apne sath important party me le jate the. Leval: 5 star]

[Rakhail (Concubine): Harem me bahut sari ladki aisi hoti hai jinka raja se sambandh hota hai, lekin raja usse shadi nahi karta. Purane jamane me raja apna khas dhyan rakhte the. Unki sex drive bahut adhik hoti thi. Jiske karan harem mein rakhail raja ko shant karne ke liye rahti thi. In sabke paas wife se kam adhikar hota hai. Leval: 5 star]

[Sevika ya Dasiyan (Maid): raj pariwar ke harem me Maid patniyo aur rakhailo ki seva karti hai. Kabhi kabhi jab patni raja ko santusht karne me nakam ho jati hai to yeh field me utarti hai. leval: 2 star]

[Rajkumari (Princess): Raja ki betiya. Chahe woh patni ki ho, rakhail ki ho ya maids, mistress ki ho. Sabko princess ka darja milta tha. Ye harem me hi palti badhti hai. Apni shadi hone tak Harem ka hissa rahti thi. Khair agar raja incest me bharosha rakhta ho to inki shadi honi to dur ki baat hai. Yeh raja ki patni hi ban kar rahti thi. Leval: 5 star]

[Premika (Mistress): yeh rakhail ki tarah hi hoti hai. Lekin inka darja rakhail se upar rahta tha. Yeh raja ki lover hoti hai. Jisko aaj ke jamane me chudail kahte hai. (dekh woh chudail meri pati ko fasha li. He he he he) leval: 4 star]

[Sahayika (Ladies-in-Waiting): ab bhai raja hai to uske kuch mantri bhi honge. Uski beti bhi hogi. To mantri ki betiyo ko pahle se hi raja ki patniyo ya rakhailo ya premika ko chunne ko milta tha. Yeh maids ki tarah hoti thi jo patniyo ko salah mashwara deti ho. Haa ye bhi raja ke changul se bahar nahi nikal pati thi. Kabhi na kabhi raja inki seal tod hi deta tha. Leval: 3 star]

[Dai Maa (Nursemaids): ab bache hai to unko posne wala koi to hoga. Bacho ki maa to din bhar harem me ladai karne me lagi rahti hai. Isliye dai maa hi bacho ka khyal rakhti hai. Kabhi kabhi to yeh raja ke sath bhi inka sex ho jata hai. Lekin adhik bacho ko favor karti hai. Leval: 2 star]

[Rajmata/Sutradhari Mata (Mother/stepmother of the King/): yeh raja ki maa yaa sauteli maa hoti hai. Jo purane raja ke hat jane ke baad bhi harem me rahti hai. Inki ranking naye raja ke relation ke adhar par hoti hai. Leval: 5 star]

[Raja ki Behen (Sisters of the King): ab raja hai to uski bahan bhi hogi. Jo shadi sudha hoti hai woh to apne ghar chali jati hai. Lekin jiski shadi nahi hui hoti woh harem me hoti hai aur apne bhai ki raj kaj me madad karti hai. Leval: 4 star]

[Nartaki (Dancing Girls): raj pariwar me manoranjan ka shadhan. Agar raja ko pasand aa gayi to akele me bula ke nanga naach nachata hai. Matlab samajh jao. Leval: 2 stars.]

[Rajnitik Bandhak (Political Hostages): ladai to hoti hi hai. To kai baar dusre desh ko jeet lene ke baat waha ki ladkiyo ko bandi bana liya jata hai. Agar kisi din raja ka mood bana to kuch kuch ho jata hai. Leval: 4 star]

[Pasandida Rakhail (Favored Concubine): ab itni sari rakhail hai to koi pasandida bhi hogi. Matlab woh raja ko achhe se khush kar de rahi hogi. Leval: 4 star]

[Naukrani (Servants): rasoi, safai, aur koi kaam karne keliye inko rakha jata hai. Leval: 1 star.]

[Bhabhiya aur Shaliya (sister-in-laws): ab raja ke bhai honge. Unki patniya bhi harem me hi rahti hogi. Waise to inka raja se koi khash sambandh nahi hota. Lekin agar koi raja incest namak vichitra chij me bharosha rakhta ho to yeh bach nahi sakti.]

[in sab ke alawa bahut sare log harem me rahte hai. Jaise mami, mausi, chachi, saas aur bahut kuch. Incest raja ka mood satka to inse maje lene me nahi chukta.]

[aur sabse aakhri baat. Meri pahle malik ki saikdo wife thi. Rakhail ki baat chhodo. Sath me woh vichitra tarah (incest) ke shauk bhi rakhte the. To aap ko mehnat karni padegi.]

[lekin aap ki duniya alag hai. Isliye aapko bahut kam option milenge. Scanning your world…….. Scanning completed…….. Information loaded….]

[Harem]

[Wife: 0] <5 star>

[Princess: 0] <5 star>

[Sisters: 0] <4 star>

[Mothers: 0] <4 star>

[Sister-in-laws: 0] <4 star>

[Mother-in-laws: 0]<4star>

[Aunts: 0] <4 star>

[Concubine: 0] <3 star>

[Maids: 0] <2 star>

[Harem section me unki hi information dekh sakte ho jiski aapke sath intimate relation ho.]

Arjun yeh sab padh kar stunned ho gaya tha. Uske sir chakkar khane lage the. Usne raja ke harem ke bare me to suna tha. Lekin itna lamba list hota hoga yeh nahi janta tha.

System ke pahle master ke bare me sunkar to uski fat ke hath me aa gayi thi. Koi insaan saikdo biwi ko kaise sambhal sakta hai. Yaha ek se do ho jaye to aadmi ki fati padti hai. Yeh saikdo kaise manage karta hoga. Usko chakkar aa rahe the. Isliye wo panel ko band kar diya. Arjun apne aap ko kuch der shant kiya. Wah jab shock se bahar aaya. To usne apni nayi kharidi hui kapdo me se ek nikal kar pahan liya. Shukra tha ki Arjun ne thoda bada kapda liya tha.

Arjun ke man me Soumya ka khayal aaya. Woh bagal wale kamre me thi. Jab Arjun waha gaya to dekha ki Soumya bistar par aundhe muh leti hai. Usne ek nighty pahni hui hai.

Arjun jab usko uthane gaya to usko Soumya ka sharir tapta hua mehsoos hota hai. Wah pareshan ho jata hai. Tabhi uski nazar bedsheet par jati hai. Waha par laal khun ka dhabba laga hua tha.

Arjun ko samajhte der nahi lagi ki Soumya ko periods aayi hai aur uske karan usko fever ho gayi hai. Wah apni sir hilata hua sochta hai, “sala main pichle janam me koi paap nahi kiya tha jo yeh ladki mere sath hamesha KLPD karti hai.”

Arjun man me to yeh sochta hai lekin phir bhi usko Soumya ki bahut fikar ho rahi thi. Usko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki woh kya kare. Akhir usne kabhi aisi situation handle nahi ki thi.

Arjun abhi kuch soch pata ki Soumya ka cell phone bajta hai. Caller screen par Kavita naam likha hua tha sath me ek ladki ki photo lagi hui thi. Arjun ne is ladki ko dekha tha. Yeh Soumya ki best friend aur roommate hai.

Arjun pahle to sochta hai ki wah phone na uthaye. Lekin tabhi uski nazar Soumya par padti hai. Usko idea aata hai. Wah call pick karta hai.

“Arey ladki kaha hai be tu. pata hai na ki aaj tumhari periods ki date hai. Tum hostel kyun nahi aayi.” udhar se Kavita ki dantti hui awaj Arjun ke kano me padi.

Abhi Arjun kuch reply deta ki udhar se Kavita ki awaj aati hai, “achha sun, tu kaha gayi hai. Woh harami phir se tujhe dhoondte hue aaya tha.”

“Dekh main kah de rahi hu. Agar tum us harami Rohit ke chakkar me padi to teri tange tod kar jindagi bhar ke liye apahiz kar dungi.” phir se kavita ki awaj phone se nikalti hai.

Arjun samajh jata hai ki agar usko roka nahi gaya to woh phir se kuch bolegi. Isliye Kavita kuch bolti usse pahle hi Arjun ne bolna shuru kiya, “dekho main Arjun hu. Main abhi Soumya ke sath hu. Usko tej fever aayi hai, sath me uski periods bhi aayi hai. Mujhe maloom nahi ki abhi kya karna chahiye. Tum college ki gate ke paas aao, main tumko pick kar loonga.”

“Achha tum Arjun ho. Thik hai aa jao. Aane se pahle ek halka bhiga kapda Soumya ke mathe par rakh dena.” Kavita ki awaj udhar se aayi.

Main ghar se nikla aur apni car se college chala gaya.​

 

[सुमन]

SUPERB AWESOME EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE

thanks Raj bhai....
Naya update post kar diya hu...

see page 29..

 

[सुमन]

Bahut badiya update

Thanks king1969 bhaii..

naya update post kar diya hu. See page 29

 

[सुमन]

Great start

thanks _Riya ji...
welcome to my threads...
naya update post ho gaya hai.. see page 29

 

[सुमन]

Mast update tha writer Bhai

thanks red_devil_98 bhai..
naya update post kar diya hu... see page 29

 

[सुमन]

1	Premkumar65	monty sharma	Delta101
2	Looteraaa	Lucky1999	Lucky..
3	King Pathan	111ramjain	Yasasvi3
4	Riky007	nplcool	Spm
5	Sager 330	solo nightstar	$ekhar
6	Hayat Mirza	sam_41	Dhakad boy
7	𝕯𝖊𝖛𝖎𝖑 𝖐𝖎𝖓𝖌👑	Dynamicakii	prideep meena
8	Avir	only_me	Sarb32
9	Ghost Rider ❣️	Mana6262	Ravisharma0143
10	red_devil_98	Abhid0609	Raj
11	Raju0053	Ashuk2705	king1969
12	Rocky2602	Mahendra Baranwal	Cobra99
13	deeyadil	SKY WORRIOR	Roy 07
14	Iron Man	Mahil	Hero tera
15	Gupta g	Ron10	Redhu420
16	Ramesh628	Mk1	mahesh_babu
17	Luv69	Adhir Rajput	samkhiv
18	Brshashi	gOlDy	Ayesha952
19	_Riya	dps	Adarsh8815
20	Ss mujrim	rajpurohitkikahani99	Deepak bhai
21	Power king	Lady Bug🥀	arushi67
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update 16 posted on page 27
update 17 posted on page 29 (MEGA UPDATE)

bhai padh ke comment kar ke jarur batana ki kaisa laga.
waise abhi to kahani ki shuruat hi ho rahi hai aur charectar ko build kar raha hu. lekin agar kuch problem dikhe yaa kahi koi kami dikhe to jarur batana. agar feedback doge to mujhe bhi pata chalta rahega ki main kaisa likh raha hu.
thankyou for your support ​