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Romance Tumhare Liye... (Completed)

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Thanks god!
Starting me main ye soch ke dar rahi thi ki story to start kar di hai maine but ise kaise likhugi and sabko pasand ayegi bhi ki nahi but finally yaha tak kisi tarah likh hi liya maine. I'm feeling very well.
Sabne mujhe support kiya uske liye sabko thank you

Special thanks for: Sanju ji....Leon ji....vikrant ji....mr perfect ji...kamdev ji....mr pandit ji and parkas ji and also thanks naina ji

Starting me jinhone mujhe support kiya tha unhe bhi thanks.
Ye story meri real life story thi jisme maine kuch chije alag se daali thi. Main apne aap par hairan hu ki maine itna kuch kaise likh liya. Sirf apni story bas likhni hoti to mujhe shayad jyada problem na hoti but alag se jo chije maine isme add kiya wo mere liye bahut mushkil tha coz uske liye mujhe sochna padta tha. Ab to main story ka end hi likh rahi hu to ab jyada nahi sochna pad raha coz end to mujhe pahle se hi pata tha. Mushkil sirf wo tha jise maine dala tha aur uske sath story ko apne soche huye end tak pahuchana tha. Anyway kuch updates aur hain uske baad story end hi ho jayegi.

Thanks to all
नीलम उस वक्त जिस मानसिक तनाव से गुजर रही थी उसका बिल्कुल अंदाज लगाया जा सकता है । उस समय उसकी इज्जत तो खतरे में थी ही , जान पर भी आन पड़ी थी ।
एक अकेली जवान लड़की....हर समय लाड़ प्यार में पली.... जिसे दुनियादारी का कोई तजुर्बा नहीं..... वो भला क्या करती !
हद से हद अपने को बाथरूम में बंद ही कर सकती थी । उसके पास कोई औजार भी तो नहीं था जिससे उन दरिंदों का सामना करती !
लेकिन सौभाग्य से मोबाइल उसके लिए वरदान साबित हुआ । उसने पुलिस को काॅल किया । इसके अलावा दुसरा कोई ओप्शन भी तो नहीं था । उसके सगे संबंधि भी तत्काल उपस्थित नहीं हो सकते थे ।
शायद उसने पुलिस को काॅल करने के बाद पुलिस के वहां पहुंचने तक अपने आपको बाथरूम में बंद कर लिया होगा ।

बेहतरीन अपडेट नीलम जी ।
 

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Uncle ji ke ghar se nikalne ke baad ashok uncle ne raaste me hi SP rama shankar ko phone kar ke saari baat bata di thi. Ashok ki baate sunne ke baad SP ne kaha ki agar ye sab sach hai to ab neelam aur nakul mumbai me hi hoge is liye unhe mumbai me hi talaash kiya jayega. Ashok uncle ne SP se kaha ki ab wo wakt barbaad na karte huye jald hi is maamle me kuch kare warna bahut bada anarth ho sakta hai. Ashok uncle ki is baat par SP ne unse kah diya tha ki ab wo is baat ki chinta na kare kyo ki ab wo khud bhi time barbaad nahi karege.

Ghar aa kar ashok uncle ne sabko saari baate bataai to sab ye jaan kar shock ho gaye the ki neelam aur nakul yaha pune me jinke yaha rah rahe the unse bade hi sanjog se uncle ki mulakaat ho gai thi aur saari baato ka pata bhi chal gaya tha.

"Agar un uncle ki baat sach hai to fir ab neelam sach me bade khatre me hai. Wo log un dono ko mumbai le gaye hoge aur ab jane wo log un dono ke sath kya karege. Mujhe to dono ki bahut chinta ho rahi hai ashok." Saroj aunty ne kaha.

"Chinta to mujhe bhi ho rahi hai saroj magar chinta karne se hoga kya. Main apni taraf se puri koshish kar raha hu ki un dono ka jald se jald pata lag jaye aur SP unhe khoj le." Ashok uncle ne kaha.

"Mujhe lagta hai dad ki SP ke sath aapko bhi mumbai jana chahiye. Aap sath me rahege to SP apne kaam me dhilaai nahi karega." Divya ne kaha.
"Divya sahi kah rahi hai uncle. Aap SP ke sath jayege to better rahega." Naina ne kaha.

"Shayad tum dono thik kah rahi ho. Mujhe SP ke sath waha jana chahiye aur iske liye mujhe aaj hi nikalna hoga." Ashok uncle ne kaha.
"Main bhi aapke sath chalugi uncle." Naina ne kaha.
"Tum waha kyo jaaogi beti. Nahi nahi tumhara waha jana thik nahi hai. Tum yahi raho. Yaha tum mahfuj ho." Ashok uncle ne kaha.

"Main mumbai se yaha neelam ko khojne aai thi uncle. Wo meri dost hai aur ab tak to un logo ne use bhi bataya hoga ki unhone mujhe bhi pakad liya tha. Unki is baat se wo mere liye bhi pareshan hogi. Aapke sath jaaugi to main bhi usse mil lugi aur fir wahi se main un dono ke sath gaon chali jaaugi. Rahi baat mere mahfuj hone ki to main aapke sath mahfuj hi rahugi uncle." Naina ne kaha.

"Naina thik kah rahi hai ashok. Ise bhi apne sath hi le jaaiye aur haa agar ho sake to gaon me inke mata pita ko bhi khabar bhejwa dijiyega ki ye log mil gai hain. Is liye ab wo inke liye pareshan na ho." Saroj aunty ne kaha.

"Thik hai fir taiyar ho jaao. Ham kuch hi der me yaha se niklege. Waise surendra bhai sahab aur sanjay bhai sahab ka phone number to hai nahi mere paas to main kaise unhe suchit karuga." Ashok uncle ne kaha.
"Koi to jariya hoga hi un tak khabar pahuchane ka. Dekh lijiyega ya fir neelam ko number pata hoga. Jab wo mil jayegi to usi se number le kar gaon me in dono ke mata pita ko suchit kar dena." Saroj aunty ne kaha.

"Haa ye thik rahega." Ashok uncle ne kaha aur fir wo apne kamre ki taraf uth kar chale gaye.
"Jaao naina beti tum bhi taiyar ho jaao. Divya tu ja naina ke sath aur ise apne kapde de de pahanne ke liye." Saroj aunty ne kaha to divya ji mom kah kar sofe se uth gai. Uske baad naina aur divya apne kamre ki taraf badh gai.

Bees minute baad ashok uncle aur naina taiyar ho kar mumbai jane ke liye ready ho gaye. Ashok uncle ne SP ko phone kar ke bata diya ki wo apni car se mumbai ja rahe hain to wo use wahi milege. Ashok uncle ki baat par SP ne kaha thik hai. Divya ne naina ko apna ek chhota sa bag de diya tha jisme usne naina ke liye ek do jodi kapde aur kuch jarurat ka samaan rakh diya tha. Ashok uncle ne bhi saroj aunty ke kahne par ek chhota sa bag le liya tha. Saroj aunty ka kahna tha ki kya pata waha par kitne din lag jaye is liye pahanne ke liye kuch kapde wo apne sath hi le jaye. Naina divya aur saroj aunty se gale lag kar mili aur fir ashok uncle ke sath ghar se baahar ki taraf chal di. Thodi hi der me wo dono car me baith kar mumbai ki taraf chal diye.

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Udhar gaon me....
Ratan bhaiya teji se moter cycle chalate huye ghar pahuche. Unhone raaste me hi phone kar ke ravendra uncle ko is bare me bata diya tha. Jab wo ghar pahuche to ghar me dad aur ravendra uncle ke sath sath sanjay uncle bhi baithe huye the. Kuch hi doori par mom log bhi baithi hui thi. Sabke chehro par chinta jhalak rahi thi.

"Itni der kyo laga di tumne aane me." Ratan bhaiya ke aate hi ravendra uncle ne puchha.
"Wo main dad aur sanjay uncle ke liye train ki ticket banwane chala gaya tha. Usi me thoda time lag gaya mujhe." Ratan bhaiya ne kaha.

"Train ki ticket wo kis liye." Dad ne pucha.
"Maine socha ki aisi khabar sun kar aap dono fauran hi mumbai jayege is liye udhar se aap dono ke liye ticket bhi banwa ke le aaya hu." Ratan bhaiya ne kaha.
"Oh ye tumne bahut achha kaam kiya hai aur shayad pahli baar. Kher ravemdra ne hame sab kuch bata diya hai. Hame to abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki hamare dost ka beta itna gira hua hoga. Man to karta hai ki abhi usko phone kare aur uski aisi taisi kare magar shayad aisa karna abhi thik nahi hoga. Kyo ki baat bigad bhi sakti hai. Isse achha yahi hai ki use phone na kar ke seedha uske paas hi pahuch jaye. Uske baad aankho ke saamne hi har baat hogi." Dad ne gusse me kaha.

"Train teen baje ki hai dad. Kal das ya gyaarah baje aap log mumbai pahuch jayege." Ratan bhaiya ne kaha.
"Thik hai. Hamare jane ki taiyari karo fatafat. Sanjay ja tu bhi fatafat taiyar ho ke aa ja. Wakt bilkul bhi nahi hai hamare paas." Dad ne kaha to sanjay uncle uth kar apne ghar ki taraf nikal gaye.

"Neelam aur us ladke nakul ka to pata chal gaya lekin sanjay bhai sahab ki ladki naina ka pata abhi tak nahi chala. Kahi aisa to nahi ki un logo ne naina ko bhi pakad rakha ho." Ravendra unce ne dad se kaha.
"Agar un logo ne naina ko pakad rakha hota to hamari beti is bare me ratan ko jarur batati lekin usne is bare me kuch nahi bataya. Iska matlab to yahi hua ki naina un logo ke paas nahi hai. Hame aaj tak samajh nahi aaya ki ye ladki aakhir gai to gai kaha." Dad ne kaha.

"Jis din neelam yaha se gai thi usi din se naina bhi gayab hai. Abhi tak hame is baat ka pata nahi tha ki asal baat kya hai. Aaj jab neelam ne ratan ko is bare me bataya tab ham is bare me soch rahe hain to naina agar usi din se gayab hai to ho sakta hai ki yahi baat ho." Ravendra uncle ne kaha.

"Neelam ne mujhse sirf ye kaha tha ki use aur nakul ko behosh kar ke raato raat pune se mumbai laya gaya hai. Use to pata bhi nahi chala tha ki behoshi ki haalat me use kaha le jaya ja raha hai. Uski jab aakh khuli to wo mumbai me us rohan ke hi flat wale kamre me thi. Is sabse wo ghabraai hui thi aur jab usne nakul ko us flat me nahi dekha to wo dar bhi gai hai. Uske man me dar aur ghabrahat bhar gai hai. Isi liye use lagta hai ki kuch galat hone wala hai. To ho sakta hai ki itni badi baat na ho jitni badi baat ki ham yaha baat kar rahe hain." Ratan bhaiya ne kaha.

"Agar itni badi baat na hoti to un dono ko is tarah behosh kar ke mumbai nahi laya jata. Mujhe to wo ladka rohan kuch thik nahi lag raha bhaiya. Neelam ne jo kuch bhi bataya hai usse saaf pata chalta hai ki baat gambhir hai aur mujhe pura yakeen hai ki naina bhi wahi hogi. Neelam ko naina ke bare me shayad is liye nahi pata hai kyo ki use uski najar me laya hi nahi gaya hoga." Ravendra uncle ne kaha.

"Shayad tum thik kah rahe ho ravendra. Hame bhi aisa hi lagta hai." Dad ne kaha aur fir wo uth kar apne kamre ki taraf chale gaye.
"Tumne dubara neelam se baat nahi ki kya." Ravendra uncle ne ratan bhaiya se pucha.

"Nahi abhi to nahi ki. Waise maine use bol diya hai ki wo apna mobile on hi rakhe. Agar koi baat hogi to wo mujhe message karegi ya fir phone karegi." Ratan bhaiya ne kaha.
"Agar wo rohan fraud type ka ladka hai to ho sakta hai ki wo neelam se uska mobile chheen le. Aise me fir neelam se sampark kaise hoga." Ravendra ne kaha.

"Agar wo neelam se mobile chheen bhi lega tab bhi wo pakda hi jayega uncle. Kyo ki ham to jante hi hain ki wo kaun hai aur dad ko bhi bata hi diya hai ki wo unke hi dost ka ladka hai. Itna kafi hai us tak pahuchne ke liye aur jab us tak pahuch jayege to usi se puchege ki neelam nakul aur naina kaha hai." Ratan bhaiya ne kaha.
"Haa ye sahi kaha tumne." Ravendra uncle ne kaha.

Tabhi sanjay uncle apne ghar se taiyar ho kar aa gaye. Kuch der baad dad aur sanjay uncle ravendra uncle ke sath car me baith kar railway station ki taraf chal pade. Jate time mom ne dad se kaha tha hamari bachchiyo ko surakshit ghar le kar aaiyega.

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Maine jab un dono ke sath nakul ko nahi dekha to mere dil ki dhadkane tej ho gai aur mujhe nakul ki bahut jyada chinta hone lagi. Nakul to mere sath hi tha jab ham dono ko behosh kiya gaya tha. Uske baad agar main yaha thi to nakul bhi yahi hona chahiye tha magar abhi tak maine nakul ko na dekha tha aur na hi uske bare me in dono ne mujhe bataya tha. Iska matlab kuch to baat jarur hai. Aakhir ye deepak nakul ko kaha le gaya hoga.

Deepak ki wo baate fir se mere dimaag me ubharne lagi jab usne mere behosh hote wakt us police wale se kahi thi. Aaj subah ye mere samne aisi baate kar raha tha jaise isne hame un police walo se bacha kar bahut bada ahsaan kiya tha. Agar yahi sach hai to fir nakul kaha hai is wakt. Maine ab tak uska chehra kyo nahi dekha. Kahi isi ne to nahi nakul ko gayab kiya hai. Kahi aisa to nahi ki isne nakul ke sath kuch galat kar diya ho. Hey bhagwan nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta. Mere nakul ko kuch nahi ho sakta. Ye sab sochte sochte ekdam se meri aakho se aashu bahne lage.

Tabhi meri najar un dono par padi. Wo dono kisi baat se haste huye aapas me koi baat kar rahe the. Mere man me ye janne ki curiosity hui ki aakhir wo itna haste huye kya baate kar rahe hain magar main unki baate kaise sunu. Main un dono ke kareeb nahi ja sakti thi kyo ki jaise hi main kamre se baahar nikalti to unki najar mujh par pad jati. Mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ab main kya karu. Abhi main ye soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi maine dekha ki dono kisi baat par haste huye jor se apne apne hath ko mila kar taali thoki aur fir palat kar mere kamre ki taraf dekhne lage. Main jaldi se ek taraf khasak gai jisse un dono ki najar mujh par na pade. Tabhi mere man me pata nahi kya aaya ki main jaldi se uthi aur bhaag kar attach bathroom me ghus gai. Bathroom ka darwaja band kar ke maine andar shower chalu kar diya. Bathroom me paani girne ki awaaj hone lagi. Main ekdam darwaje ke paas hi chup chaap khadi thi. Mujhse do fit ki doori par shower ka paani farsh par gir raha tha.

Is wakt pata nahi kyo par main andar se bahut jyada dari hui aur ghabraai hui thi. Tabhi mere kaano me un dono ki awaaj padi. Dono kamre me aa chuke the. Rohan ki awaaj maine saaf suni thi jisne mujhe neelam ji kah kar pukara tha. Uske pukarne par main chup hi rahi. Kuch der tak koi awaaj na aai. Shayad kamre me mujhe na dekh kar wo mujhe khojne ka prayas kar rahe the. Tabhi fir se mujhe awaaj sunaai di magar is baar deepak ki awaaj aai thi jo rohan se kah raha tha ki bathroom se pani girne ki awaaj aa rahi hai. Matlab wo waha hai aur shayad naha rahi hai.

"Ye to achhi baat hai na bhai. Naha dho ke chama cham ho jayegi tabhi to aur bhi khubsurat dikhegi aur fir hame uske jism ke har hisse ko chaatne me maja aayega." Rohan ki awaaj thi ye. Unhe lag raha tha ki andar main naha rahi hu is liye mujhe unki baate sunaai nahi de rahi hogi. Jabki main to unki baate achhe se sun pa rahi thi aur unki baate sun kar mere hosh bhi ud chuke the. Main andar darwaje ke paas khadi tharthar kaapne lagi thi unki aisi baate sun kar.

"Kya aisa nahi ho sakta boss ki ham dono ek sath hi uske jism ka bhog lagaye. Kasam se boss maja aa jayega aise me." Deepak ki is awaaj ne meri rooh tak ko jaise hila diya tha.
"Nahi aisa nahi kar sakte. Uski shakal se pata chalta hai ki wo abhi kuwari hai. Aisi najuk chij ko do log maslege to uski maa chud jayegi. Is liye use pahle main akele hi bhoguga magar pyar se. Uske baad tum bhogna." Rohan ki is baat se to main jaise patthar hi me badal gai thi. Mujhe aisa laga jaise mujhe abhi chakkar aa jayega.

Un dono ki baato se mujhe pata chal chuka tha ki main ab kitne bade khatre me thi aur mujhe is baat ka bhi andaja ho gaya tha ki nakul mujhe yaha par kyo nahi dikha tha. In dono ne jarur uske sath kuch galat kiya tha. Ye soch kar meri aakh se fir aashu bahne lage. Mujhe pahli baar ahsaas hua ki ghar se bhaag kar aur yaha aa kar hamne kitni badi galti ki thi. Mujhe pahli baar samajh aaya ki ye duniya kitni buri hai. Yaha par ek akeli ladki ek pal ke liye bhi safe nahi hai.

"Thik hai boss jaisi tumhari ichha. Waise abhi to wo naha rahi hai. Main ye soch raha hu ki aaj ki raat ko yaadgaar banaya jaye." Deepak ki awaaj mere kaano me padi.
"Yaadgaar to banegi hi yaar. Aisa shandar maal hath laga hai to din aur raat dono hi yaadgaar to banege." Rohan ne kaha.

"To fir ek kaam karte hain boss. Kuch daaru shaaru ka bhi intjaam kar lete hain. Shabab ke sath sharaab aur kabaab hoga to aur bhi maja aayega." Deepak ne kaha.
"Waah kya baat kahi tumne. Aise shabab ke sath sharab aur kabab na ho to sach me feeka feeka sa lagega." Rohan ne kaha.
"To fir chalo boss. Usko nahane do. Tab tak ham dono in dono cheejo ka bhi intjaam kar lete hain. Uske baad din bhi apna aur raat bhi apni hogi." Deepak ne kaha.

"Kya use yaha par akele chhodna thik rahega." Rohan ne kaha.
"Wo bhala kaha jayegi boss. Us time bhi to use akela hi chhod kar uske yaar ko le kar gaye the. Ham baahar gate par pahle ki tarah lock laga dege aur waise bhi use to abhi is baat ka pata bhi nahi hai ki uske sath kya hone wala hai." Deepak ne kaha.
"Ye bhi sahi kaha tumne. Chalo fir ab der karna bekaar hai." Rohan ne kaha.

Bathroom ke andar main dono ki baate sun rahi thi aur andar hi andar mare dar ke main tharthar kaape ja rahi thi. Uske baad wo dono kamre se chale gaye. Kafi der tak jab koi awaaj na aai to maine bathroom se nikalne ka socha magar meri himmat na hui ki main bathroom se baahar nikal kar kamre me jaau. Lekin ye bhi sach tha ki aakhir bathroom me main kab tak is tarah khadi rah sakti thi. Abhi to un dono ko yahi laga tha ki main naha rahi hu magar jab wo wapas yaha aayege aur tab bhi mere bathroom me hone ka andaja lagayege to samajh jayege ki kuch gadbad hai.

Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki main kya karu. Maine deepak ki baat suni thi. Usne baahar se gate lock kar ke jane ko bola tha. Matlab ki main is flat me ab ek kaidi ki tarah thi. Jitni chinta mujhe apni ho rahi thi utni hi chinta ye soch soch kar bhi ho rahi thi ki in logo ne nakul ke sath jane kya kiya hoga. Mera man kar raha tha ki main jor jor se cheekhu chillaau aur rone lagu magar isse kuch nahi hone wala tha.

Badi himmat kar ke maine pahle shower band kiya aur fir bathroom ka darwaja khola. Kamre me koi nahi tha. Mujhe to pata hi tha ki wo dono kis cheej ke intjaam ke liye baahar gaye hain. Har taraf khamoshi chhaai thi jo is wakt mujhe khaye ja rahi thi. Gujarta hua ek ek pal ab mere liye aisa tha jaise wo tinka tinka kar ke meri jaan le raha hai. Duniya bhar ke devi devta is wakt mujhe yaad aa rahe the aur main unse apne aur nakul ki safety ke liye minnate kar rahi thi ki achanak se mujhe ratan bhaiya ke mobile ki yaad aai.

Mobile ki yaad aate hi meri dhadkane tej tej chalne lagi aur man me ek ummid si jaag uthi. Ratan bhaiya ki baat yaad aa gai jo unhone kaha tha ki main apna mobile on hi rakhu aur agar main kisi musibat me hou to main unhe inform karu. Ye soch kar main teji se apne bag ke paas pahuchi. Bag ko khol kar maine jaldi se mobile nikala. Is wakt hadbadahat me mera pura jism kaap raha tha aur mere hath bhi. Maine kaapte hath se bhaiya ko call kar diya. Mere kaan me ring jane ki awaaj padi aur fir teesri hi ring par bhaiya ne call utha liya.

"Haa neel sab thik to hai na." Bhaiya ne ye pucha to main kuch kah na paai balki fafak fafak kar rone lagi. Mera dil kar raha tha ki is wakt mujhe ratan bhaiya mil jaye to main unse lipat kar tej tej rona shuru kar du. Udhar bhaiya mere is tarah rone par ekdam se chintit ho uthe aur baar baar mujhse puchne lage ki kya hua main kyo ro rahi hu. Aakhir kya baat ho gai hai. Pata nahi bhaiya aur kya kya puche ja rahe the aur main bas roye ja rahi thi. Mere is tarah rone se bhaiya bahut jyada chintit ho gaye aur pareshan bhi. Jab maine unke puchne par kuch nahi kaha to unhone apni kasam de kar kaha ki tujhe meri kasam hai neel. Tu bata ki aakhir tu itna ro kyo rahi hai. Kya us haramjade ne tere sath kisi tarah ki battamiji ki hai.

Ratan bhaiya ki kasam par maine apne aapko kisi tarah samhala aur fir rote rote hi unhe saari baate bata di aur last me ye bhi kaha ki mujhe is bhayankar sankat se bacha lijiye bhaiya. Aapki bahan neel ki ijjat ab khatre me hai. Meri saari baate sun kar bhaiya bhi jaise sannate me aa gaye the. Fir unhone mujhe samjhate huye kaha ki tu chinta mat kar neel. Dad aur sanjay uncle kal dopahar tak mumbai pahuch jayege aur fir wo us rohan ke baap ke paas ja kar uske bete ki kartoot usse batayege. Bhaiya ki in baato se mujhe thodi raahat to mili magar khatra to abhi hi tha mere liye aur abhi main kaise un dono se bach sakti thi is baat ke liye jab maine bhaiya se kaha to unhone kaha ki mere paas mobile hai to main fauran hi police ko call kar ke sab kuch bata du aur unse help maagu.

Ratan bhaiya ki is baat par mujhe bhi laga ki ye sabse best option hai. Bhaiya to yaha se kafi door hain aur dad log bhi kal hi yaha pahuchege to is wakt agar koi mujhe in darindo se bacha sakta tha to wo police hi bacha sakti thi. Maine bhaiya se kaha ki thik hai main police ko phone kar ke sab bata dugi. Uske baad bhaiya ne kaha ki wo dad ko bhi ye sab bata dege taaki unhe bhi iska pata rahe. Last me bhaiya ne mujhe samjhate huye kaha ki main bilkul bhi chinta na karu. Sab kuch thik ho jayega aur haa wo khud bhi waha se police walo se baat karege aur puri koshish karege ki mujhe kuch na hone paye.

Bhaiya se baat karne ke baad mujhe kafi raahat mil gai thi. Deepak aur rohan is wakt yaha nahi the is liye mere paas ye achha mauka tha jisse main police ko phone kar ke sab kuch bata bhi saku aur unse apne liye help ki maag bhi kar saku. Un dono ke irade bilkul bhi thik nahi the. Ho sakta hai ki baad me mujhe ye sab karne ka mauka na mile. Is liye maine jaldi se police ka number dial kar ke call laga diya.

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Greattt neelam ji. Such a mind blowing update and your writing skills. :applause: :applause: :applause:

Neelam to sach me critical situation me hai. Ye dono to bade wale haraami nikle. Neelam ko ab khud hi apni hifajat karni hogi. Uske dad and udhar se ashok uncle lagta nahi ki right time par pahuch payege. By the way neelam ne ratan ko apni situation ke bare me bata kar achha kiya and ratan ne bhi neelam ko sahi salaah di hai. Ab to police hi use bacha sakti hai un dono hawsiyo se. :coffee1:

Neelam ko bhi ab realise ho gaya hoga ki andhe pyar me pad kar usne nakul ke sath ghar se bhag kar kitni badi galti ki thi. Parents se badh kar koi nahi hota and parents jitna apne kids ke liye karte hain utna koi other nahi karta. Anyways let's see what happens next. :coffee1:



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Thanks god!
Starting me main ye soch ke dar rahi thi ki story to start kar di hai maine but ise kaise likhugi and sabko pasand ayegi bhi ki nahi but finally yaha tak kisi tarah likh hi liya maine. I'm feeling very well.
Sabne mujhe support kiya uske liye sabko thank you

Special thanks for: Sanju ji....Leon ji....vikrant ji....mr perfect ji...kamdev ji....mr pandit ji and parkas ji and also thanks naina ji

Starting me jinhone mujhe support kiya tha unhe bhi thanks.
Ye story meri real life story thi jisme maine kuch chije alag se daali thi. Main apne aap par hairan hu ki maine itna kuch kaise likh liya. Sirf apni story bas likhni hoti to mujhe shayad jyada problem na hoti but alag se jo chije maine isme add kiya wo mere liye bahut mushkil tha coz uske liye mujhe sochna padta tha. Ab to main story ka end hi likh rahi hu to ab jyada nahi sochna pad raha coz end to mujhe pahle se hi pata tha. Mushkil sirf wo tha jise maine dala tha aur uske sath story ko apne soche huye end tak pahuchana tha. Anyway kuch updates aur hain uske baad story end hi ho jayegi.

Thanks to all
I can understand. :)
Achha laga ki aapne ye story likhi and hame ise read karne ka mauka diya. Really laga hi nahi ki ye aapne first time likha hai. Read karte time hamesha yahi laga ki kisi majhe huye writer ne likha hai ye. Anyways best wishes for your next next story. W'll always with you. :)
 

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एक अकेली जवान लड़की....हर समय लाड़ प्यार में पली.... जिसे दुनियादारी का कोई तजुर्बा नहीं..... वो भला क्या करती

duniyadari ka tajurba nahi hai aur pyar karke bhag gayi ...
maine aise aurto ko bhi dekha hai jiske 2 bachche hai ( ladka ya ladki koi maayne nahi rakhta ) aur teesra pet me hai tab bhi wo pati ko chhodke premi ke saath bhag gayi hai 😔😔😔..

mera kehna yahi hai ki aajkal ki ladka ho yaa ladki apne pariwar ke baare me sochti nahi hai ..

ek incident batata hu real life ka ---- ek aurat jo 2 bachcho ki maa thi wo apne hi gaon ke ladke ke saath ( jo umar me usse aadha tha ) shadi kar li wo bhi bhagkar ( bina apne pati ko divorce diye ) ..
kya ye sahi lagta hai kisiko bhi ..

dono incident mere aaspaas huye hai jo real hai ..

kya us ladke ko us ladki ke pariwar yaa us ladki ke pati ke pariwar ke baare me sochna nahi chahiye ...

pyar karna galat nahi par uska natija kya hoga ye sochna chahiye ...


aur ek incident batata hu -- ek ladki ki mangni ho gayi aur uske baad wo kisi aur ke saath bhag gayi aur shadi ki ..

kya is matter me dono ki galti nahi lagti kisiko ???? ..

ye personal aur sachchi ghatna hai ...
 

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Dear neelam ji next update ka intjar hai_____
 

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Waiting for update______
 
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