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Romance Tumhare Liye... (Completed)
- Thread starterDear Neelam
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Mr. Perfect
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Neelam ji update kidhar hai. Kaha gayab ho gai aap_____
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Right and main bhi to inki vajah se hi fir se likhne lagi thi and ab to story end par bhi aa gai. Achha lagta hai jab support karne wale itne achhe log mile. Anyway jab time lage tab padhna story
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4 - 5 update to ab rahe hi nahi story me. Maybe do teen update hi hoge ab. Try karugi ki jaldi hi story finish kar duchaliye ishi khushi mein 4 - 5 update aur de dijiyeaaj hi
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Second story ke liye sochna padega coz mere dimag me abhi kuch nahi hai. Ye story to meri real life ki thi so mujhe problem nahi hui but dusri ke liye pahle sochugi tab possible ho sakega
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Thank you so much for your valuable feedbacknice update ..ashok uncle ke saath naina bhi ab mumbai aa rahi hai neelam ki khoj me ..
aur dad aur unke dost bhi mumbai jaa rahe hai ..
par naina ,ashok aur sp ko neelam kaha hai ye pata nahi aur dad ko pata hai ..
dekhte hai aaj ki raat kaise bachti hai neelam un darindo se ..
agar wo sharab piyenge to unse bachne me jyada pareshani nahi hogi neelam ko..
par kya police waqt pe madad kar payegi yaa nahi
aur nakul behosh hai par kya wo bhi bachane ke liye aa payega
pyar me bahut taakat hoti hai shayad jaha bhi nakul ko rakha ho waha se bachne me kaamiyab ho jaaye ..
Nakul to behosh hai aur use kaha rakha hai ye bhi pata nahi hai. Dad ko mere bare me pata hai but wo time par nahi pahuch payege. Police hi bachayegi coz maine police ko hi call kiya tha remember. Anyway thanks once again
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Electric ke jhatke se maar du un donohmm... so ek taraf great naina aur ashok uncle sp ke sang nikal pare Mumbai ki aurr to neelam ke pita ji, Sanjay uncle aur ravendra uncle bhi ravana huye Mumbai ke liye... lekin inhe pahunchne abhi der hai..
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par yahan to neelam ke sath bahot galat karne wala hai yeh deepak aur rohan...
are hawas ke pujari... tharki namakul dagabaaz dhokhebaz character less kahin ke... Besharmi ki hade paar kar di hai.. lagta hai inke baap bhi najayaz hai
Khair in kamino baatein kar kahe mood kharab karu...
so bade bhai ne chinta na karne aur police ko phone karne ke liye Salah de diya...aur Salah maan ke neelam ne bhi phone bhi laga di hai police..
Khair... ab yahan pe kuch baatein...
mata pita se badhkar koi nahi aur koi ho bhi nahi sakta.. unki chaya tale na rehkar apne pyar sang bhagne ka natiza aaj neelam bhali bhaanti dekh chuki hai... le ab kha dar dar ki thokde... kya mila ghar se bhag ke... yeh dar dar ke jina.. yeh rona bilakhna etc.. etc... ab dekho chad gayi na yeh do paapiyo ke hathe... udhar nakul ka bhi haal behaal
ab chinta karne se ya darne ya rone ki samay nahi hai iske paas... behtar yahin ki koi tarkib lagaye us flat se nikalne ke liye... Agar nikal nahi pa rahi hai to ek aur option hai iske paas.. Sabhi switch off karke kamre mein jitne bhi bulbs hai unko nikal de... aur jo electric wires hai sab ko ek ek karke nikal le wahan se khinch kar..
ab unko jamin pe kisi spider ki jaal ki tarah faila de .. phir bathroom se paani Lake us room ko pani se bhar de... phir chup chap jaake bathroom mein baithi rahe Darwaze band kar ke
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
Well said but iski jarurta nahi padegi coz police time se pahuch jayegi mere pass.
I think jab insan hosh rahte galtiya karta hai to ham dono to pyar ke andhe the. Us wakt kuch aur sujha hi nahi tha but thokar lagna bhi jaruri tha otherwise itni sari bato ka gyan kaise ho pata. Anyway thanks once again
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Righthar insaan mein ek lekhak chupa hota hai... deri hai to bas ushe tarashne ki...
aap ne mehnat ki.. fal ke roop mein aapko itne achhe readers aur un sabhi ke sameekshaye mile...
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