Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Hmmmm Good update......

Mostly Abhi's feelings and suffering.....ye mujhe kaafi achcha laga.....

Abhi ko sara raha hai us pal ko us wajah ko jis ke kaaran ki Ruhi uski life mai aayi.....lekin ye feeling bas kuch der ki hee hoti hai......

Abhi ki kuch nahi saari feelings baaki hai.....kuch der ke liye bhale hee wo bhul jaaye....lekin koi na koi chij ya ghatna ya kuch or use yaad dilata rahega.....

OR ye chij aaj hee nahi ant tak rahegi....phir bhale hee abhi ki life mai koi or aa jaaye....lekin ye rahegi.....

OR bhale hee wo dusra kitna bhi jyada pyar karne wala ho......lekin dil tanhaayi Mr ak bar jarur ye kah ta hai....

Kaash....kash yar wo saath hota.....to duniya se lad jata....duniya jeet leta....

OR jab ham aise kisi relationship or iss tarah ki situation me hote hai to har kisi ka dukh hame apna lagta hai.....OR ham apni situation ko bhi saamne waale ke saath jod ne lagte hai.....
Movie dekhte hue bhi aisa hee hua.....


Ab baat kare 2nd part ki....jisme ki diaries or Rahima ke liye bataya gaya hai......
To iss part ke baare aisa kya kahu......samajh hee nahi aa raha....OR aisa nahi hai ki likha hua thik nahi hai....

Lekin ye saari chije to maine pahle hee bata di thi......OR Rahima ka abhi ki tarah attractions or us se related possibilities bhi.....

Ha lekin Rahima ka abhi ki madad karna kaafi achcha tha.....

Ruhi ko maa ko darr he ki Rahima uski beti ko bhi apni tarah bana degi ya use bhaga degi Abhi ke saath.....
Agar use itni hee chinta hai to baat usne pahle hee kyo nahi sab control kar liya.....jab start hua tha tab bhi to khatm kar sakti thi.....

Ab baat kare Ruhi ki to wo diaries padhkar khush hui....bhale hee thodi see lekin usne padhi.....use bhi wo sab pal dubara jeene ka mauka mila hoga....

Lekin kya wo ye diaries sabke saamne padh rahi thi jo ki uski maa ne dekh kar chheen li....Padh to akele me hee rahi hogi na....
OR maa ke chheen ne ki baat bhi mujhe thik nahi laga rahi.....jab Ruhi khud kuch na kuch padti rahti hai....uske khud ke pass books ka ak collection hai....
Phir uski maa ko kaise pata ki wo abhi ki hee diaries hai....konsa koi uske cover par bade bade aksharo me ABHI ABHI likha hoga....OR abhi ki diaries to English mai hogi.....


Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks....

Thanks very very much Vikram bhai
bhai Ruhi hamesha padhti hai haan ....
aur weise hi padh rahi thi jaise usually padhti hai apne kamre mein jaakar
magar usski maa ko shak ho gayi, uss ne dekha hoga ke Rahima ke yahan se lekar aayi thi tab padh rahi hai, ro samajh gayi hogi ke abhi ka bheja hua chiz hai issi liye Ruhi se chiin kar Manoj ko diya padhne ke liye ke dekho iss mein Abhi ne kia kaha hai ussko kahin plan to nahin bana raha issko aakar uthaane ki.... kuch aisa hua hoga tab nah Manoj ne pura padha uss diaries ko
thanks loads vikram bhai

 

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casinar bhai for completing 300 pages of the story

Keep it up

bahot shukriya Kamdev bhai

 

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Casi bhai kahani kahan se kahan agayi achanak
ye kia ho gaya , kaise ho gaya sab kuch bahut jaldi nain hua kia?
mujhe jabardast jhatka laga iss update ko padh kar? aisa laga ke ruhi marr gayi usski janja nikla gaya
weise update bahut majedaar aur jabardast hai.....
Navina se shaadi ke pehle jo hua wo janna bahut jaruri hai umeed hai kal sab pata chal jaega
aap ne ek dhamaka de diya iss update se bhai

Appreciation ke liye bahot shukriya nayan bhai

 

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O Teri ki navina se shadi wo bhi Abhi ki

I cont believe it

Excellent birrilant fantastic good update

thanks very very much asif bhai

 

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for 30 pages bhai

thanks nayan bai

 

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badhiya update chalo abhi ko koi to dhang ki mil gayi jo use samjhi aur uski sathi bani

thanks Rahul

 

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Dimaag lagaya hee kaha hai yar.....1...2 din se mere dimaag mera saath nahi de raha....isliye normal chije hee likh raha hu.....

Ye jo review diya wo bhi jo man mai aaya qo likh kar de diya....jyada socha nahi....iske baare mai....kyoki as I said dimaag kaam nahi kar raha....

Thanks

its okay vikram bhai

 

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:300 pages kek liye Casi bhai

Thanks Indian bhai

 

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Kitni jaldi Sab Kuchh Ho Gaya abhi ko Naveena ke roop mein Ek naye friend bhi Mili aur donon ki ki shaadi bhi ho gai per yah sab Kuchh Hua Kaise janne ki utsukta hai
Khoob Surat update

bhot shukriya James yara aaj ke aue ek do aane wale updates mein baaki ka pata chal jaega bhai

 

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Woooooowww
Very good update.....
Well written and described.....

Now time for details.....

Ye baat to sahi hai....Ruhi kaafi halki hai....OR chhoti bhi kisi bachchi ki tarah.....height ke hisaab se....

Abhi ka mukabla Ruhi ke pariwar ka koi nahi kar sakta....OR itni himmat or taakat Abhi mai bhi hai ki wo khidki iss kaam ko pura kar le.....lekin.....lekin....
Kar kiske liye le.....kya Ruhi iske liye raazi hogi....kya wo abhi ke saath aana chahegi....kya usme itni himmat hogi....Obviously not.....

Jo ladki apne lover ko iss tarah zaleel hote dekh kar....sun kar bhi wajah nahi aayi....OR apne maa baap ke ak bar kahne se give up kar de.....wo kya ghar se Abhi ke saath aane ki himmat dikhaaye gi....

Ab agar isi baat ko Ruhi ki magar se dekha jaaye.....to aaj tak jo bhi hua hai....Ruhi apne maa baap ke kahne ke hisaab se hee chali hai.....unki baat maan kar Abhi se dur bhi ho gayi.....sab kuch unke hisaab se kar rahi hai.....
Wo ladki kaise apne maa baap ko chhod kar Abhi ke saath chali aaye.....jabki use dhyaan he ko agar aisa kadam usne uthaya to uske maa baap ki izzat kharaab hogi....OR naam bhi....

Rahima ke liye Abhi ki soch sahi hai.....lekin ak hadd tak Rahima bhi sahi hai...

Abhi ne aakhir than hee liya ki wo kuch ban kar dikhaaye ga.....ki jab Ruhi ki maa use dekhegi to use apne faisla par dukh ho....

Saeed ne kaha ki Ruhi ki maa ak galat aurat hai.....uska vishwas nahi kiya jaa sakta.....thik he.....
Lekin uska khud ka kya....kya wo khud vishwas ke kaabil hai....God knows....


Pahle ye hee bus abhi ke Ruhi se milne ka jariya thi....uski kaafi saari yaade judi hai iss bus se or bus ke har hisse se....

Abhi ka bus ki khidki se bahar dekhne waala scene kaafi jyada achcha tha....
Koi ummid na hote hue ummid karna....dimaag sach jaanta hai....lekin maanta nahi....


Yanha mahboob ki baat sahi thi....Rahima ke jariye books Ruhi ko dena....ye chij Abhi ke liye sahi thi lekin Ruhi ke ghar waalo ke liye nahi upar se rahima ka past.....Jo ki iss baat ko or bhi suspicious banaya hai.....
Dono families me problem to honi hee thi....

Abhi ka counter or us par mahboob ka reply bhi thik tha....

Finally Abhi ne decide kar liya ki ab kabhi bhi wo uss gali me nahi jaayega....Abhi ke iss faisle par ak gana yaad aa gaya....
Aapne bhi jarur suna hoga....




Ruhi jab pura padh hee nahi paayi thi to massage kaise bhejti....diary mai....

Ha lekin Ruhi ko perfume dene ki wishing to puri ho gayi Abhi ki.....


Director se mila kar Abhi ne apne liye saari possibilities jaan li hai....director ko bhi Abhi me ak junooni ladka dikh raha hai....Jo kuch bhi kar sakta hai....OR final raasta zameen hai....lekin kya father raazi hoga....
Kyoki wo akele Abhi ki nahi uske sabhi bhai bahano ka bhi hai....OR phir jameen se unhe income bhi hoti hai....
OR sabse badi baat loan amount kaafi bada hai....to Abhi ko kaafi pareshani hogi father ko manane mai.....

Abhi badal gaya hai...lekin kya sach mai....ha wo sach mai badal gaya hai....lekin usme ye badlaav tab hee dikhaai dega jab wo kaam me laga hoga ya logo ke saath hoga....

Akele mai wo bilkul pahle jaisa sochega feel karega.....ak line Abhi ke liye.....

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मेरी आँख बन्‍द थी जब तलक,
वह नजर में नूरे-जमाल था
खुली आँख तो न ख़बर रही,
कि वह ख़्वाब था कि ख़याल था

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Naina ki lines Abhi ko clean shave dekh kar....kaafi achchi thi.....ye naina ke andar chhupi ak masoom bachchi ko dikhaate hai.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways...
Very good update
Thanks....

bahi dil ki gehraayi se aap ka dhayawaad itne ache detailed review ke liye jo mere liye anmol hai..
ziada kuch nahin kahunga bhai buss thanks thanks and thanks from the botom of my heart Vikram bhai