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Bhai aaj update ka koi chance hai kya.... @vj4u bhai aapne to bola tha ki 20 ke baad update regular ho jayenge.... To aaj kuchh chamatkaar kar do aur iss pyase ke pass kuaan pahuncha do....

Aapne shayad kahani ke flow pe dhyan nahi diya.... Nidhi ek wife ki tarah ya fir ek lover ki tarah veer ke liye feel karti hai... Tabhi to veer ke halke se touch se bhi bechain ho jaati hai....veer bhi kai baar kahani me ye bol chuka hai ki Nidhi ke pyar me gir jayega aur shayad gir chuka hai...

Koi twist hi nahi hai yaar bas ek Boring film ki tarah story flow me chalti jaa rahi hai....baaki mere comment se bura mat feel karna mera intention apaka moral down karna nahi hai.... Mai bas as a reader apne hisab se ke review likh rha hoon....

Yaar tumne to ladke ko ek pyar me pagal kutte ki tarah dikhaya hai.. . . Matlav ladki ladke ko jalatai rahi.. . Beizzat karte rahi.. . Fir bhi ladka uske aage piche ghum raha hai.... Chalo yahan tak thik thak hi tha... Lekin ladki ko ek baar bhi ab tak jalan nahi huii kisis se.... Lekin ladke...

Ek time ke liye laga ki veer use train me hi pakad lega lekin lagta hai abhi veer ko rjasthan jana likha hua hai... Aurr shayad veer ko Rajasthan me koi apna ya fir koi naya dost male ya female koi bhi ho sakta hai..... Baki sab mila ke aaj ka update thik thak tha... Bas ek hi kami thi ki pura...

@vj4u bhai aaj update de paoge kya.... Ya aaj nahi to agla update kab doge wohi bata do... Gajab ki story hai aapki bro... You have my respect 🙏🙏🙏... Bhai ho sake to aaj hi update de do

@Werewolf bhauu ajj update de paoge kya??

Aaj update aayega kya @Werewolf bhai

Bhai ji lage haath ye v do ki agla update kab aayega intejaar karne me rahat rahegi... Aur aaj ka update kafi badhiya tha

Sab ke sab nasedi bane huye hain iss kahani ke aur sabse bada wala main... 😅

Aree bhai ji @vj4u bhai jab tak update nahi dete hain tab tak kuchh time pass hi kar liya humne... Waise bura laga ho to mafi chahunga... Aur waise bhi bhai ji ek writer ko jo taklif hoti hai update likhne ke liye usse bada to humara intejaar kabhi ho hi nahi sakta... Isliye thoda aur intejaar...

Bas bhai ab rulao ge kya🤣🤣🤣

@vj4u bhai ab apki mom ki tabiyat kaisi hai... I hope o jaldi se thik ho jaye....

16 ko ayegi update..... Bhai 3 din aur intejar kar lo

Bhai apki story bahut achhi hai. .. Do din me sare update khatam kar diye hain itni achhi hai... Bas isko lamba khichna ..... Request hai....