Adultery गुजारिश

[HalfbludPrince]

Nice update bhai . Dev bach geya lekin sare raaj abhi bhi jaise ke taise hi hai. Kisi se toh parda utha do bhai..

Bas jaldi hi

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Kuch log aise hi hote hain isliye tension lene ka nahi

Sahi kaha

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Nice update

Thanks

 

[HalfbludPrince]

are yaar yeh nagin aur roopa dono hi toh kutte billion ki tarah ladne lag gaye...
Pehle main, pehle main karte huye
inko toh is baat ka khayal hi nahi ke jisko thik karne ke liye lad rahi hai woh dhire dhire mar raha hai...
chalo achha hua jo wo baba aa gaye...
So dev, roopa aur nagin teeno hi kisi ankahin dor se bandhi huyi hai...
par nagin ko kahe itni chiddh hai roopa se...

ishe kahte hai aa bail mujhe maar
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill
(aur haan woh nagin hi thakurain jashpreet thi, hai aur rahegi )

Nagin agar rupa ki help nahi lena chahti thi to uska ek bahut bada reason tha

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Nice update

Thanks

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Super update hai bhai

Thanks

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Narita story hao

Thanks

 

[HalfbludPrince]

बिल्कुल सही...देव , रूपा और नागीन ( शायद यही नागेश हो ) एक अनकही डोर से बंधे हुए हैं ।‌
जिस चरवाहों के तिबारा को कोई भी अपनी नंगी आंखों से नहीं देख सकता...उसे न केवल रूपा ने देखा बल्कि देव को भी देखवा दिया था ।
अब आपने किसे नागीन बनवा दिया... ठकुराइन जसप्रीत ?

Jassi ka yahan kuch lena dena nahi bhai, kahani bas char logo ki hai

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Gazab update bhai aakhir zakhm ki dawa mill gayi lekin dard se chutkara nahi milega ab dev ko iske liye rupa kya karti hai dekhana hai

Rupa dev ka dard legi

 

[HalfbludPrince]

mona hi chajje wali hai, roopa hi hai aayat aur yeh nagin hai jassi toh socho dev koun hai
bichadane ke ek arshe baad mil rahe hai yeh chaaro...aayat the ruh /aatma (roopa) , puja the chajje wali (mona), jassi the preet ki dor (nagin) aur kundan (dev)

Are ye idea mujhe kyo nahi aaya, part 3 ban jata