Ladies first तो शायद western concept...
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Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी
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लखनऊ में नवाब हीं पहले आप- पहले आप...
Writers have right for preferred treatment.
ना उम्र की सीमा हो..Wow lagta he sharab aur shabab ek hi glass me ghulne vala he. Amezing.
ना जनम का हो बंधन...
अरे रजिया खुद राजी...Wah komalji Raziya ko gundo se fasvabe khud hi floor par utar aai. Amezing creative seen superb
नहीं-नहीं ननदिया ने दो को बहका के फंसा लिया...Ye shapna to ham bhi kab se dekh rahe he. Ki kab lagega nandiya rani ka meena bazar.
ननदिया के अगवाड़े और पिछवाड़े दोनों ओर एक असली मसाले वाली खोँसूंगी और बोलूंगी, चल नाच रंडी की तरह
ufff sutta nashe ko aur jyada dugna kar dega. Uff do ladko ke bich nandiya fas gai. Amezing. Ek bhoujai ko tabhi shukun milta he. Jab nandiya randi....
चित्रों की प्रस्तुति भी कम रंगीन नहीं...Kitna rangin mahol banaya tha. Laga room tak le jaya jaega. Par bacha liya nandiya ko. Sab upar upar se hi. Par maza aa gaya.
सर्दी में गर्मी का अहसास...Ufff aapne to garmi la di. Socha kuchh aur tha. Par kanyarash se hi ham kam chala lenge. Amezing.
Yess.. An actual or true depiction of Disco nights and Floor scenes...Wow..super update Madam...each update of yours feel as if the events are happening just in front of us (even though this story is a fiction).
Your description of the events and conversations feel as if they are not part of any story but just a casual conversation happening between 2 people/friends.
No wonder...your story reaches new heights with each passing day...Bravo!!
komaalrani
Btw, for your next update..i need to think and come up with new praises for your story...you give me a very tough time
I need to use my full talent and repertoire of words to come up with something matching sentences of your updates!!! otherwise it will be a travesty of your efforts. I will try my best..but cant guarantee...hope you can understand
komaalrani
Creativity counts...Thanks so much and that is why I look forward to your comments. Only a discerning reader and experienced reviewer can identify the finer strands of the story and give satisfaction to the writer. I try to visualize scenes as if they are happening, try to put myself into the shoes of the characters and dialogues are not dialogues but as you rightly said, conversations between friends.
I am sure you will find something to say in your next comment and even the presence of, ' best reviewer' on my story is a mark of approval and a signal to other readers like Hallmark on gold is proof of quality, your review itself shows readers that story is worth a try.
Thanks soooooo much.
