Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

जोरू का गुलाम भाग २४२, 'कीड़े' और 'कीड़े पकड़ने की मशीन, पृष्ठ १४९१

अपडेट पोस्टेड, कृपया पढ़ें, लाइक करें और कमेंट जरूर दें

 

[rajkomal]

Jo share aur company ke bare me aapne likha hai na wo sar ke uper se ja raha hai. but itna to samjh aata hai ki story ka part hai aur jaruri hai. 2nd thing, Aap badi pahunchi hui chij ho, normal writer ni ho ki tharak me likh diya. Aapko bahut chijo ke bare me bahut kuch pata hai. isliye to I am you fan. Story achchi chal rahi hai. thoda scene inki mother aur inke beech ice break ka bhi karwa do.

 

[rajkomal]

Aapki ek story thi, barsan lagi badariya uska end aage badh sakta tha aapne adhura chhoda esa laga, 2nd solva savan me Ravindra ke bhog ka pura scene hona chahiye tha. mohe rang de me bhi aapne adhura chhoda yeh bol kar ki Banaras ka Ras 2nd part hoga but ni hua. Madam ji thoda dhyan do.

 

[komaalrani]

Waiting for next update bahut lamba gap hogaya mam

update has been posted on page 1443.
now waiting for your comments.

 

[Shetan]

Bas ab teej party ka intjar hai Komalji.

 

[komaalrani]

छुटकी -होली दीदी की ससुराल में अपडेट के बारे में अपडेट


भाग ९७
आज की रात -

ख़ुशख़बरी पृष्ठ १०१० पर

और एक मेगा अपडेट भाग ९८

खुशखबरी के बाद - नन्दोई जी और, ?

बस आज

 

[komaalrani]

Adultery - छुटकी - होली दीदी की ससुराल में

ये सौवां भाग ( ननद की बिदाई- बाँझिन का सोहर पृष्ठ १०३५) जैसा बन पड़ा आप लोगों की सेवा में हाजिर है और इन पोस्टों के लिखने के बाद कम से कम मैं ज्यादा कुछ कहने, बोलने की हालत में नहीं हूँ। हाँ बस कह सकती हूँ, जैसा कुछ आप लोगों को लगे, मन में महसूस हो तो हो सके तो दो चार लाइन लिख जरूर दीजियेगा।

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भाग ९८

अगली परेशानी - ननदोई जी, पृष्ठ १०१६

अपडेट पोस्टेड, कृपया पढ़ें, मजे ले, लाइक करें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[komaalrani]

Wow komalji. Isi ka to intjar tha. Aaj rat se hi start karungi. Thankyou very much.

Thanks so much for your support will try to post update on Phagun ke din chaar today

 

[komaalrani]

Hmmm karolbag me mitting ladki se wow. Joru ka gulam akhir pati banta hi kyo hai. Taki vo bole kam sune juada. Us sales girl se jyada to apni biwi se sikh liya hai. Bole kam aur dhyan se sune. Aur jab bhi bole samne vale ko encourage kare. Achha sikha hai unhone.

Achha sikhe hai. Apni kam ki bat nikalva hi lete hai. Khas kar market ke halat par najar rakhna jaruri hai. Aur vo ladki vahi likhti hai. Amezing game.

Ladki ki jankari badi siddat se de rahi ho. Nai jawan londiya hai. Guddi ki tarah. Koi game lonch karne vali ho kya??? Amezing.

Ye lo yaha to kanya unka muh khulvana chahti thi. Aur unhone bhi vahi bola. Jo vo sun na chahti hai. Bade khiladi ban gae hai vo wow. Amezing.

Wow bato bato me apne investment ke alava bas Washington office ki bas jarasi hint de di. Taki pichhe apna bada backup show kar sake. Unhe jo jatana tha. Vo jata diya. Amezing. Sayad machhali chara kha gai.

Bas ab kal tak ki news ka intjar hai. Jese hi retail shareholder tak ye khabar jae. Aur dhakadhak market value up. Kya plan hai. Amezing..

Ye muje abhi bhi samaz nahi aaya ki hotel booking me mrs demalo ko kyo show kiya. Khel bahot dilchasp hoga.

 

[komaalrani]

komaalrani ... Strategic update... i think it's almost 5-6 years when your story took a intermission/ gap due to Xossip was closed...But it linked with some of the last update's you posted on this site.

I want to tell you that you are always my best देवनागरी writer but it's also true that I really stop to read or comment on this thread because of pure रं*** you wrote after Reenu and his husband's arrival. It was too much vulgar and disturbing for a reader like me.

But now you got your old line & length again. Welcome back जिज्जी

Good Nice writing. I already told you that I have no words for you and your extraordinary writing skills .

Keep writing... अत्र कुशलं तत्रास्तु... जय जय

Thanks so much

 

[Mass]

updates posted, kindly read, enjoy and share your comments

I have come to this story after a very long time and have completely lost track of what's going on..
However, what i can say (or comment) on your update is that..this one (& maybe most of your updates) has its ears completely on the ground..the way you relate the happenings of the story with real life situations and places (like local trains, BSE, SEBI, etc) is unique in its own way...even though your story is fictional, the way you relate to day to day incidents and places is outstanding..
Great going!! Keep it up!!

komaalrani