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Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

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rajkomal

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Jo share aur company ke bare me aapne likha hai na wo sar ke uper se ja raha hai. but itna to samjh aata hai ki story ka part hai aur jaruri hai. 2nd thing, Aap badi pahunchi hui chij ho, normal writer ni ho ki tharak me likh diya. Aapko bahut chijo ke bare me bahut kuch pata hai. isliye to I am you fan. Story achchi chal rahi hai. thoda scene inki mother aur inke beech ice break ka bhi karwa do.
 
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rajkomal

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Aapki ek story thi, barsan lagi badariya uska end aage badh sakta tha aapne adhura chhoda esa laga, 2nd solva savan me Ravindra ke bhog ka pura scene hona chahiye tha. mohe rang de me bhi aapne adhura chhoda yeh bol kar ki Banaras ka Ras 2nd part hoga but ni hua. Madam ji thoda dhyan do.
 
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