Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[Star Lover]

thanks and i feel in the entire context of story and main theme it was only a small sub-plot which generated more attention than it deserved based on the entire scheme of things. But every reader does have a world view and his look is coloured by that and nothing wrong with that. However, it does conflict with the stream and mood of story so i have learnt to avoid such pitfalls.

Devi Ji, Ismai aapki hi galti hai........ aapne itna accha likha hai ki saare pathako ko aapni lekhani se baand liya hai. Aapki itni suundar lekhani ke Karan readers Kahani ke Nayak ko aisi paristhiti mai shayad nahi dekh paa rahe hongain. Saare readers aapne aap ko aapke Pati se connect kar rahe hain. Wey bhul gaye ki khahani ka hero bisexual hai aur naayika use sex deprivation se nikalne ki koshish kar rahi hai.

Magar readers ka gussa hi aapka appreciation hai..... ki aap itna accha likh rahi hain ki kayi readers aapke Pati ko aisi isthi mai dekh kar gussa ho gaye aur Khalnayak komal ko yaa uske Jijaji ko bana diya. Again congrats for fantastic story.

 

[arushi_dayal]

सास ननद बहन भाभी जैसी रिलेशन मैं चुदाई जैसी स्टोरीज मैं आपका कोई मुकाबला नहीं है कोमल जी।
आपकी लेखन शैली की हमेशा मुरीद रही हूं। आप मेरे लिए हमेशा एक प्रेरणा स्रोत है।




बहन की सइयां करे चुदाई
पास में बैठे देखे भोजाई
हर छेद में बहना को चौदा
अपनी छिनार बना के रौंदा
कामरस से क्यारी को सिंचा
खूब दबा मम्मो को भींचा
जीवन अमृत से उसके भर दिया
बच्चा उसकी कोख में धार दिया

 

[Luckyloda]

Bhut hi shandaar update...... kya jabardast tarike se chudayi chal rahi hai guddi ki.......

 

[Luckyloda]

Har dhakka kuch kahta hai.....guddi ki siskari



Uski chiken....


Uski aaahe....



Sab badla hai komal bhabhi se haar huyi shart ka....


Komal bhabhi ki mehnat ka ....

 

[komaalrani]

Revo evening se

main waiting

 

[komaalrani]

Bhut hi shandaar update...... kya jabardast tarike se chudayi chal rahi hai guddi ki.......

Thanks so much

 

[komaalrani]

Har dhakka kuch kahta hai.....guddi ki siskari



Uski chiken....


Uski aaahe....



Sab badla hai komal bhabhi se haar huyi shart ka....


Komal bhabhi ki mehnat ka ....

aapne to chaar linon me nichod ke rakh diya , thanks sooooooooo much

 

[komaalrani]

Devi Ji, Ismai aapki hi galti hai........ aapne itna accha likha hai ki saare pathako ko aapni lekhani se baand liya hai. Aapki itni suundar lekhani ke Karan readers Kahani ke Nayak ko aisi paristhiti mai shayad nahi dekh paa rahe hongain. Saare readers aapne aap ko aapke Pati se connect kar rahe hain. Wey bhul gaye ki khahani ka hero bisexual hai aur naayika use sex deprivation se nikalne ki koshish kar rahi hai.

Magar readers ka gussa hi aapka appreciation hai..... ki aap itna accha likh rahi hain ki kayi readers aapke Pati ko aisi isthi mai dekh kar gussa ho gaye aur Khalnayak komal ko yaa uske Jijaji ko bana diya. Again congrats for fantastic story.

Apaka bhi Nazariya sahi and thanks soooooooooooo much for nice words,

 

[anvesharonny]

First of all congratulations for highest views in erotica story section views.

 

[anvesharonny]

Abhi Nancy ke pass bhi jana hain na bhaiya ne kharidi Hui gift ke liye??