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Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

komaalrani

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जोरू का गुलाम भाग २३६ - मंगलवार, दिल्ली

अपडेट पोस्टड, पृष्ठ १४३३ फायनेंसियल थ्रिलर का नया मोड़,

कृपया पढ़ें, आंनद लें और कमेंट जरूर करें
 
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komaalrani

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komaalrani

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Byw just one query in English version guddi ko bina bataye pregent karane wali thi na bhabhi??
aapki pichle 3 posts ka ek javaab kahani ke saath regularly bane rahiye sab pata chal jaayega aur is version men bahoot si baaten add huyi hain to bas is samaay is story ke saath saath chaaliye to pata chaqlata rahegaa. Ye asal men ek Novel ke scale pe hai , bahoot se patr bahoot si ghatnaaen sab aapas men jude huye,... jaise bahi Mrs Moitra aur unki betiyon ke bhi prasang aane hain Coaching ka bhi aur English Versioon to vahin Kahtam ho gaya tha jahan Guddi aa gayi thi aur Geeta Manju ka Guddi ke aane ke baad ka usme jikra nahi tha to bas yahi khungi, Jude rahiye Pahdte rahiye isi part ko aur un parts pe kiasa laga ye jaroor bataiye,..aage kya hone vaala hai ye koyi nahi janata jis tarh se post karne men dikkte aarahi hain comment dena mushkil ho raha hai, Mujhe khud pata nahi ek ek comment post karne men 3 baar likhna padata hai
 

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aapki pichle 3 posts ka ek javaab kahani ke saath regularly bane rahiye sab pata chal jaayega aur is version men bahoot si baaten add huyi hain to bas is samaay is story ke saath saath chaaliye to pata chaqlata rahegaa. Ye asal men ek Novel ke scale pe hai , bahoot se patr bahoot si ghatnaaen sab aapas men jude huye,... jaise bahi Mrs Moitra aur unki betiyon ke bhi prasang aane hain Coaching ka bhi aur English Versioon to vahin Kahtam ho gaya tha jahan Guddi aa gayi thi aur Geeta Manju ka Guddi ke aane ke baad ka usme jikra nahi tha to bas yahi khungi, Jude rahiye Pahdte rahiye isi part ko aur un parts pe kiasa laga ye jaroor bataiye,..aage kya hone vaala hai ye koyi nahi janata jis tarh se post karne men dikkte aarahi hain comment dena mushkil ho raha hai, Mujhe khud pata nahi ek ek comment post karne men 3 baar likhna padata hai
Actually main 2-3 weeks pehle hi post karne wala tha suhaag raat scene pe comment lekin pop ups ne pareshan kar diya tha.so login karane se better without login story padhna pasand karta hoon.
 

komaalrani

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Actually main 2-3 weeks pehle hi post karne wala tha suhaag raat scene pe comment lekin pop ups ne pareshan kar diya tha.so login karane se better without login story padhna pasand karta hoon.
ham sab ek hi naav men savar hain, aaap jo writers hain unke baare men sochiye, story post karne men kitani mushkil hoti hai, do tin attempt ke baad hi post ho paati hai aur kuch bhi idhar udhar hua to sb gayab. aur main kooshish karti hun ki har comment ka jvaab bhi dun,... fir adrishya pathkon ke rahte ye bhi nahi andaz lagata hai ki kisi ne kahani padhi bhi ya nahi, aur agali post likhne ki bhi ichaa nahi hoti. aur main ek baar phir vahi kahungi ki bas kahaani se jude rahiye aage ke baare men pata chal jaayegaa. lekin sirf padhiey hi mat jude rahiye comment dete rahiye, kyonki post karne ki dikkaton se mod, super mod aur super super mod sb waakif hain par unka yahi kahana hai ' Paisa do' Paid member bano,... aur main sidhant roop men khilaaf hun ki main unhe free me content provide kara rahi hun unke platform pe lo story padhne ya pics dekhne aate hai aur uskaa bhi paisa,... what cant be cured shall be endured. and thanks again for taking my response in the right spirit.
 

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Rasmalai to aap ki lekhni hai Komaal bhabhi, ekdam aap jaisi
ek-2 shabd se ras tapakta hai
upar se aapke dwara sajaye gaye ye sare charachters
uff, anand ki parikastha hoti hai jab aapke update padta hu
keep posting
love you
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