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Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

komaalrani

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जोरू का गुलाम भाग २३६ - मंगलवार, दिल्ली

अपडेट पोस्टड, पृष्ठ १४३३ फायनेंसियल थ्रिलर का नया मोड़,

कृपया पढ़ें, आंनद लें और कमेंट जरूर करें
 
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"Maybe Raji's favorite KomaalRani's story as well might have crossed such a milestone...unfortunately, somehow due to lack of time, not following it. Sorry for that Komaal Madam...maybe I'll try..."

I think that was your comment.
and it was in reference to your another post,...

"
Congratulations Bhai...your story has now 4L words..that's an awesome milestone to achieve!!
Currently, i think there are only 4 running stories that have achieved this milestone. Not sure if you are following them :)
2 are by the evergreen super rohnny4545 (Majboori yaa Zaroorat and Bailgadi), one by DREAMBOY40 and the last one by TharkiPo
Btw, I think TharkiPo is leading...his story has crossed 7L words. :)
Raji, hope you are next in line
to achieve this milestone :)
Congratulations to all!!!
prkin TharkiPo DREAMBOY40 rohnny4545 Rajizexy"


I always respect your views, your choice and your priorities. some of us like me, keep on posting by sheer habit or force of inertia. it is not possible for every discerning reader to read every post and one makes choice, and my story attracts very few regular readers. I can only say.

Ars longa, vita brevis

Thank you so much for your kind words Madam. Really appreciate your views.
So kind of you to keep on posting since very long.. I think even you are worthy of Congratulations for 3 yrs completion of this super story. You are now in illustrious company :)
komaalrani prkin TharkiPo
Rajizexy
 
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Thank you so much for your kind words Madam. Really appreciate your views.
So kind of you to keep on posting since very long.. I think even you are worthy of Congratulations for 3 yrs completion of this super story. You are now in illustrious company :)
komaalrani prkin TharkiPo
Rajizexy
Thanks so much for placing even me, in the illustrious august company of such constellation of star writers. Although i am not even a pale shadow of the luminous authors, you have mentioned. And the criterion that a story is crawling, inching towards its goal for last three years without garnering views or appreciation i think does not tell a lot about either the author or the story. but its is your sheer magnanimity. Thanks again.

I am sorry to admit that i have not read story of two writers you have mentioned. my misfortune. But Rajize yes, we go a long way to the days of movie name games ( which now does not attract visitors) and i am a great fan of hers. She made a debut and her second story, ..a class by itself.

Incest is not my forte. But i do read only two writers on that theme, Rajize and Ashok Ji.

Thanks again and may i request even if you are short of time kindly have a look at my very short story, ' Its a hard rain" not more than 15-20 minutes and it will give you some idea the type of story i wish to tell.

here is the link

Thanks again .
 

komaalrani

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हाँ.. कहीं कोचिंग के लौंडे ना चढ़ाई कर दें....
एकदम डी एन ए तो मैच कराना पड़ेगा, इसलिए ताला खुलने के बाद अमृत वर्षा मेरे सैंया और उसके भैया की ही होगी,... वो भी हम सबके सामने, पॉजिशन मैं ही चुनूंगी गर्भाधान संस्कार के लिए
 

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हाँ.. कटपीस के साथ थान का भी...
एकदम और सबसे अच्छा तो ये होगा की तीनों के साथ एकसाथ

थ्री सम नहीं फोर सम,... सास, दो दो सालिया और ,... ये

और ये आइडिया मंजू का है वो बोली है तो करवा भी देगी
 

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शुरू से जुड़े हैं...
लेकिन अनुमान लगाने का हक तो मत छीनिए...
🙏🙏
 

komaalrani

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कुछ दिखता और कुछ दिखाती है..
तभी तो गुड्डी चंचल और शरारती है...
वाह वाह

:applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause:
 

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Thanks so much for placing even me, in the illustrious august company of such constellation of star writers. Although i am not even a pale shadow of the luminous authors, you have mentioned. And the criterion that a story is crawling, inching towards its goal for last three years without garnering views or appreciation i think does not tell a lot about either the author or the story. but its is your sheer magnanimity. Thanks again.

I am sorry to admit that i have not read story of two writers you have mentioned. my misfortune. But Rajize yes, we go a long way to the days of movie name games ( which now does not attract visitors) and i am a great fan of hers. She made a debut and her second story, ..a class by itself.

Incest is not my forte. But i do read only two writers on that theme, Rajize and Ashok Ji.

Thanks again and may i request even if you are short of time kindly have a look at my very short story, ' Its a hard rain" not more than 15-20 minutes and it will give you some idea the type of story i wish to tell.

here is the link

Thanks again .
Thank you for your words and msg. I will only say this thing: you are being too modest about yourself. Writing a story for 3 long years is by itself a magnificent achievement.
TharkiPo and prkin Would also admit about your achievement.
As you rightly said, Raji's stories (both) are very good. Every episode has some freshness to it. The other 2 are also very good writers. Their story is also very erotic and their scene creation and command of the language (especially prkin ) is very good. So is yours..the choice of words and pics in your stories are awesome!!
Even I like Ashok's stories very much. Even I an a big fan of his stories.
Reg the story that you asked me to read, I will surely do it and let you know. Just give me a couple of days pls. Thanks once again and keep entertaining us pls !! :)
komaalrani Rajizexy prkin TharkiPo
Ashokafun30
 
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Thanks so much for placing even me, in the illustrious august company of such constellation of star writers. Although i am not even a pale shadow of the luminous authors, you have mentioned. And the criterion that a story is crawling, inching towards its goal for last three years without garnering views or appreciation i think does not tell a lot about either the author or the story. but its is your sheer magnanimity. Thanks again.

I am sorry to admit that i have not read story of two writers you have mentioned. my misfortune. But Rajize yes, we go a long way to the days of movie name games ( which now does not attract visitors) and i am a great fan of hers. She made a debut and her second story, ..a class by itself.

Incest is not my forte. But i do read only two writers on that theme, Rajize and Ashok Ji.

Thanks again and may i request even if you are short of time kindly have a look at my very short story, ' Its a hard rain" not more than 15-20 minutes and it will give you some idea the type of story i wish to tell.

here is the link

Thanks again .
Thankyou so much for this much appreciation I don't think I an nowhere near deserving of it, and yes I have read some of your stories not the whole but parts of it and I really lved them, I can't name it but it was about Holi and a girl's erotic encounters of holi, presentation was really erotic and raw and best thing was local slangs abuses and folk songs. You're a really great writer keep doing it.
 

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Thankyou so much for this much appreciation I don't think I an nowhere near deserving of it, and yes I have read some of your stories not the whole but parts of it and I really lved them, I can't name it but it was about Holi and a girl's erotic encounters of holi, presentation was really erotic and raw and best thing was local slangs abuses and folk songs. You're a really great writer keep doing it.
True TharkiPo bhai..Komaal Madam is really a specialist in Holi stories and many stories of her are Holi based..and local languages and dialects. Honestly, no one can beat them!!
TharkiPo prkin Rajizexy komaalrani Ashokafun30
 

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घर का है डॉक्टर...
अब डर काहे का...
एकदम सही कहा, डाक्टरनी साहिबा ने पूरी जिम्मेदारी निभायी है और आगे भी निभाएंगी
 
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