Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

जोरू का गुलाम भाग २३६ - मंगलवार, दिल्ली

अपडेट पोस्टड, पृष्ठ १४३३ फायनेंसियल थ्रिलर का नया मोड़,

कृपया पढ़ें, आंनद लें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[komaalrani]

Abhi tak barish ke seen logo ne alag alag create kiye. Par kisi ne bhi lazbo seen vo bhi is tarah to create nahi kiya hoga.

thanks so much sab ek se badh kar ek

 

[komaalrani]

and inspired by your pics

बारिश-1 / परवीन शाकिर​

नवेद कोई बनाम-ए-मौसम
न तहनियत कोई चश्म ऐ नाम को
न मुस्कराने का था सबब कुछ
मगर मिले तो
ख़ुशी छुपाए न छुप रही थी
हम अपनी आवाज़ सुन के हैरान हो रहे थे
हमारे लहज़े में
रात में होने वाली बारिश खनक रही थी

 

[komaalrani]

देर तक बारिश होती / शहरयार​

शाम को इंजीर के पत्तों के पीछे

एक सरगोशी बरहना पाँव

इतनी तेज़ दौड़ी

मेरा दम घुटने लगा

रेत जैसे ज़ायक़े वाली किसी मशरूब की ख़्वाहिश हुई

वह वहाँ कुछ दूर एक आंधी चली

फिर देर तक बारिश हुई।


शब्दार्थ :

मशरूब=पेय

 

[komaalrani]

Kabhi is page ko dekhna. Ek se badhkar ek milegi.

https://xforum.live/threads/shararat-shetan-ki.104995/page-66

VOW HOT

 

[komaalrani]

Thank you for your words and msg. I will only say this thing: you are being too modest about yourself. Writing a story for 3 long years is by itself a magnificent achievement.
TharkiPo and prkin Would also admit about your achievement.
As you rightly said, Raji's stories (both) are very good. Every episode has some freshness to it. The other 2 are also very good writers. Their story is also very erotic and their scene creation and command of the language (especially prkin ) is very good. So is yours..the choice of words and pics in your stories are awesome!!
Even I like Ashok's stories very much. Even I an a big fan of his stories.
Reg the story that you asked me to read, I will surely do it and let you know. Just give me a couple of days pls. Thanks once again and keep entertaining us pls !!
komaalrani Rajizexy prkin TharkiPo
Ashokafun30

I am a great fan of Raji Ji. She came, she saw and she conquered.

now something about this story,

It was first posted in English a few years back. it was comparatively short and crisp with the background of light femdom and was more a tribute to an incomplete story of Incestbi, a perverted Indian wife.

we exchanged a few mails and i goaded him to complete his story, but he admitted that he was sort of not much interested or short of ideas how to push it ahead.

I was aware that there are really few stories with Indian backdrop about light or any femdom. and a story was born. I wanted to write as i felt all genre should be represented.


There was a clamour both for Hindi version and to extend the story after Guddi, the teenage sis-in law has gone along with her bhaiya and bhabhi.

and after i completed Fagun ke din chaar, i started writing Hindi version which became completely new and femdom gave way to SMTR ( she makes the rules).

it went on for more than a year and suddenly xossip got closed and story was left incomplete.

I never leave any story mid-way so i started it again here from the beginning with a lot of opposition and some hesitation. many readers wanted to start from where i have left, but my worry was supposing some new readers comes along? and again a lot of episodes were added.

now talking about words, Pahgun ke din chaar had almost 7 lakh words and this will be far exceeding that.

thanks

 

[komaalrani]

Thankyou so much for this much appreciation I don't think I an nowhere near deserving of it, and yes I have read some of your stories not the whole but parts of it and I really lved them, I can't name it but it was about Holi and a girl's erotic encounters of holi, presentation was really erotic and raw and best thing was local slangs abuses and folk songs. You're a really great writer keep doing it.

It is a pleasure to receive appreciation from a writer like you. Savan and fagun to me are the two most erotic seasons and many of my stories are tribute to them. Even in this story 3 previous posts are a tribute to Saavan. Thanks again for your best wishes, it will enthuse me to keep moving forward.

 

[Shetan]

and inspired by your pics

बारिश-1 / परवीन शाकिर​

नवेद कोई बनाम-ए-मौसम
न तहनियत कोई चश्म ऐ नाम को
न मुस्कराने का था सबब कुछ
मगर मिले तो
ख़ुशी छुपाए न छुप रही थी
हम अपनी आवाज़ सुन के हैरान हो रहे थे
हमारे लहज़े में
रात में होने वाली बारिश खनक रही थी

Amezing komalji. Par kuchh aur he mere pas jo aap ke kam aa sakta he.


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[Shetan]

देर तक बारिश होती / शहरयार​

शाम को इंजीर के पत्तों के पीछे

एक सरगोशी बरहना पाँव

इतनी तेज़ दौड़ी

मेरा दम घुटने लगा

रेत जैसे ज़ायक़े वाली किसी मशरूब की ख़्वाहिश हुई

वह वहाँ कुछ दूर एक आंधी चली

फिर देर तक बारिश हुई।


शब्दार्थ :

मशरूब=पेय

Special he. Shetan ki shararat vale page par. Dekhna aap ko pasand aae to.

 

[komaalrani]

True TharkiPo bhai..Komaal Madam is really a specialist in Holi stories and many stories of her are Holi based..and local languages and dialects. Honestly, no one can beat them!!
TharkiPo prkin Rajizexy komaalrani Ashokafun30

Thanks so much,

You are correct that many of my stories are tribute to Holi, but many of them are different. Just to name a few, and link

1. सोलवां सावन- भाभी के गाँव में एक किशोरी ननद , सावन का महीना ,... आगे हर फुहार तन मन सब भिगो देगी।​

Erotica - सोलवां सावन

सोलहवां सावन - भाभी के गाँव में एक किशोरी ननद , सावन का महीना ,... आगे हर फुहार तन मन सब भिगो देगी।

exforum.live

2. मोहे रंग दे ,
रंग की यह कहानी साजन के रंग में सजनी के रंगने की है ,

सजनी के रंग में साजन के रंगने की है ,
नेह के रंग की , देह के रंग की ,... एक ऐसी कहानी जो सिर्फ इस देस में हो सकती है ,वो रंग जो चढ़ता है सिर्फ उतरता नहीं

Erotica - मोहे रंग दे

मोहे रंग दे ,मोहे रंग दे ,रंग की यह कहानी साजन के रंग में सजनी के रंगने की है ,सजनी के रंग में साजन के रंगने की है ,और होली की है , ...और होली की नहीं भी है ,...मन और तन दोनों रंगने की है ,नेह के रंग की , देह के रंग की ,... एक ऐसी कहानी जो सिर्फ इस देस में हो...

exforum.live

 

[komaalrani]

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