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Thanks so much, It is your support and appreciation which makes me write, thanks againkomal ji ap bahut achhi tarah har relation ko ubhar kar lati hain. GAZAB.
Thanks so much, It is your support and appreciation which makes me write, thanks againkomal ji ap bahut achhi tarah har relation ko ubhar kar lati hain. GAZAB.
bahoot bahoot dhanyybaadBahut khub. Chanda bhabhi aur guddi ki mummy dono ka experience ka bahut sundar varna kiya hai.
main nomrally first person me kahaniyan likhti hun isliye automatically vo feminine perspective se ho jaati hain par ye kahaani meri akeli kahani hai jisme naarator male hai haan female characters isme bhi secondary nahi hai ye baat aapki sahi hai .Komal ji aapse ek request hai jis tarah se aap Heroine Pradhan rachana rachati ho usi prakar Ek rachana Hero Pradhan bhi likhiye aapki rachanayen bahut hi shandar or jandar hoti hain so please request pr thoda dhyan dijiyega
Dhanyawad
Thanks and welcome to the thread. The story has many thriller moments, and these teasers give some idea about it.ThanksBrilliant start with a thrilling beginning.
Just a small scene from a long part as a taste of things to comeExcellent Buid-up
झुकना उसका काम नहीं है, फाड़ना उसका नामWowww Komal ji kitna kamuk tarike se likhti ho aap. Lund maharaj jhukne ka nam hi nahi lete.
Thanks so much for such superb detailed commentsWow...super updates madam...
the erotic conversation between Anand Babu and Sandhya Bhabhi was awesome...and her nanand's name changed to "चूतगंज" was hilarious...
The shower sex, the foreplay...everything was first rate!!
Equally super were the associated photos in each section which elevates the update to even higher level!!
And to think that in each week, you post your updates on 3 different stories all of which are blockbusters!! This is no mean feat...
Amazing!! Great going!!
komaalrani
Please, if possible, report it to the suggestions and complaint thread. I hope it resolves soon, selfish and greedy as I am so are my stories. All three of them, esp. Chhutaki is eager to listen to your views.
Getting above screen since many days.
Not able to view any content as it going on and on.
After many attempts and hit and trial I got logged in this time but for how much time I will be able to continue I do not know.
If anybody faced the similar situation and was able to resolve.. Please do convey.
Also to the Admins/Mods.. Please suggest what may be the cause and workaround if any.
Thank you for your kind words and one clarification....Thanks so much for such superb detailed comments
only one explanationननद उनकी चेतगंज ( बनारस का एक मोहल्ला ) में रहती थीं तो उसी का नाम थोड़ा बिगाड़कर चिढाने के लिए , ' चूतगंज' तो वह ननद का पता था न की नाम