Incest हवस के कारनामे ~ A Tale of Lust
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Baat to sach hai bhaiya ji, aap to jaante hain ki is maamle me apan bhaari shareef haiफिर वही बात ! इस बार पक्का सेक्सुअल सीन्स लिखने मे घबराहट हो रही है , जबकि कुछ अपडेट बाद तो इन्सेस्टियस एनकाउंटर भी लिखना है ।
Aree bahanebaazi hi to nahi karta apan. Jab kahani chhod kar jana hota hai to apan clearly sabko bol deta hai aur tab jata hai. Is story ke bare me to aisa abhi bola hi nahi apan ne....iska matlab abhi use chhodne ka time nahi aayla haiशुभम सर , ये बहानेबजी बार-बार नही चलेगी । अपडेट दीजिए ।
Baaki ye sach hai ki job me kaam ke silsile me apan log ko team ke sath ek hapte ke liye jana tha aur gaye bhi lekin do din baad wo pragram cancel ho gaya is liye return aa gaye. Ab apan ke paas update likhne ka time mil jayega to kal tak yaha chemp dega apan...
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Apan ki leela apan bhi kabhi jaan nahi paaya mitra....to ju ya koi kya hi jaanega
Well, pichhli do stories ko gayab karne ke do reasons the, first apun ke paas likhne ke liye waisa time nahi tha, aisi stories soch samajh ke likhne wali hoti hain second jab apan achhe content wali story shuru karta hai to lauda apan ki expectations bhi zyada ho jati hain, bole to apan ye expect karta hai ki readers log behtar response de aur kam se kam 15+ reviews har update me de. Aur jab Aisa nahi hota to apan ka mood kharaab ho jata hai, fir likhne ka jhaanth barabar bhi man nahi karta, yahi vajah hai ki un dono stories ko apan ne gayab kar diya. Ye story aisi hai jisme soch samajh ke likhne jaisa kuch nahi hai. Bole to jo man me aaye chempte jaao, betichod kaun sa logic dekhna hai kisi ko
Apan ki leela wala dialogue upar hai, read karne ka fir seAapka mood pal pal badalta rahta hai, koi nahi janta aap aage kya karne wale ho!!!
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Sahi hai phir jaldi se 20 updates pura kijiye phir indexApan ki leela apan bhi kabhi jaan nahi paaya mitra....to ju ya koi kya hi jaanega
Well, pichhli do stories ko gayab karne ke do reasons the, first apun ke paas likhne ke liye waisa time nahi tha, aisi stories soch samajh ke likhne wali hoti hain second jab apan achhe content wali story shuru karta hai to lauda apan ki expectations bhi zyada ho jati hain, bole to apan ye expect karta hai ki readers log behtar response de aur kam se kam 15+ reviews har update me de. Aur jab Aisa nahi hota to apan ka mood kharaab ho jata hai, fir likhne ka jhaanth barabar bhi man nahi karta, yahi vajah hai ki un dono stories ko apan ne gayab kar diya. Ye story aisi hai jisme soch samajh ke likhne jaisa kuch nahi hai. Bole to jo man me aaye chempte jaao, betichod kaun sa logic dekhna hai kisi ko
Apan ki leela wala dialogue upar hai, read karne ka fir se
bana daliye ...... Aalsi logo ke liye index.
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As you and everyone else know, man can only try. so i might as well trySahi hai phir jaldi se 20 updates pura kijiye phir index
SANJU ( V. R. )
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कर्म और दायित्व पहले है , बाकी सब बाद मे ।Baat to sach hai bhaiya ji, aap to jaante hain ki is maamle me apan bhaari shareef hai
Aree bahanebaazi hi to nahi karta apan. Jab kahani chhod kar jana hota hai to apan clearly sabko bol deta hai aur tab jata hai. Is story ke bare me to aisa abhi bola hi nahi apan ne....iska matlab abhi use chhodne ka time nahi aayla hai
Baaki ye sach hai ki job me kaam ke silsile me apan log ko team ke sath ek hapte ke liye jana tha aur gaye bhi lekin do din baad wo pragram cancel ho gaya is liye return aa gaye. Ab apan ke paas update likhne ka time mil jayega to kal tak yaha chemp dega apan...
मै भी पहले की तरह यहां कहां समय दे पाता हूं ! जब भी समय मिलता है उसमे जितना संभव होता है , पढ़ने की कोशिश करता हूं और कुछ कमेन्ट वगैरह करता हूं ।
कल फिर सुबह पांच बजे ही काम से बाहर निकलना है और वापसी रात के नौ दस तक ही सम्भव है ।
परसों दिन मे ही यहां आना सम्भव है ।