★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2019 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★

[sharaabi]

Mera hero
Casinar
Wah sir bahut hi khubsurat story thii
Ki kese ek larki apna hero ko ko soch thii he
Ki kese hona chaye wo apna hero ko
Aur satish ka bhi role bahut khub he ek gunda kese sarif banta he ek kachre je dher se ek larki ko utha kar ek kabil jindagi bitata he wah bahut mast sir



10 of 10 from me

 

[kavya verma]

Mamta ki ek murat - MAA
ZOPION

Sir it was a heart touching story of a mother & her son .... Story was too close to reality .... A mother always sacrifices for their child ... she protects her child at any cost & under any circumstances but when that child got matured then he/she don't care about their parents .... Letter written by sudhiya was very very emotional

my rating 9.5 out of 10

All the best for contest

 

[zopion]

Mamta ki ek murat - MAA
ZOPION

Sir it was a heart touching story of a mother & her son .... Story was too close to reality .... A mother always sacrifices for their child ... she protects her child at any cost & under any circumstances but when that child got matured then he/she don't care about their parents .... Letter written by sudhiya was very very emotional

my rating 9.5 out of 10

All the best for contest

thanks kavya dear for your beautiful review

 

[Siraj Patel]

Index updated

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[Rahul]

Mamta ki ek murat - MAA
ZOPION
bahut pyari story likhi aapne bhai ji vastav me ma se uncha duniya me koi nahi hota jo khud bhukhi rahkar bhi apne bachchon ka pet bhar deti hai..bachche kitne bhi bade ho jayen par apne ma baap ki sonch tak pahunchne me unko kho chuke hote hain wo..ye ek marmsparshi kahani hai khusi hai iska ant achcha hua dono bhai sath ho gaye fir se..mai aapko is story ke liye 10 me 10 deta hun

 

[Werewolf]

My review for
Golden Eagle
By
Lone_wolf

First of all I am very thankful and grateful to you for posting an English short story, for at the time I had requested you to do so we almost had no English entries. So once again accept my heartfelt thanks.
Coming to the story, well I liked it, honestly. Had not at all expected a sci-fi story from you. But it is good. A true writer must try everything. And you did it well.
Doctors normally do use animals to test many meds and products before comercialising it.
This short story makes us wonder as the future can lead men to be so greedy as to undergo such things like it happens in the story.
Narration is good, description goes well with the narration and the writer remained stuck to the subject all along the story from start to end.
Only the end part seemed to me was hurried, or ended in a rush. The end could hv been much better and grand.
Anyhow, appreciated this one.
All the best for the contest bro.

Dhanyavad casi bhai
Keval aapke kehne pe hi entry ki mene
Ending mene jo dikhayi hai wo kahani ki shuruaat hai hahaha...
Isliye normal thi, short story bana ke mene contest ke liye taiyaar ki thi bas
Ye ek actually boht lambi story h meri jo baad me mein yaha forum pe hindi me post karunga
Anyways!! Boht boht shukriya review ke liye.

 

[zopion]

Mamta ki ek murat - MAA
ZOPION
bahut pyari story likhi aapne bhai ji vastav me ma se uncha duniya me koi nahi hota jo khud bhukhi rahkar bhi apne bachchon ka pet bhar deti hai..bachche kitne bhi bade ho jayen par apne ma baap ki sonch tak pahunchne me unko kho chuke hote hain wo..ye ek marmsparshi kahani hai khusi hai iska ant achcha hua dono bhai sath ho gaye fir se..mai aapko is story ke liye 10 me 10 deta hun

thanks Rahul bhai apki khubsurat pratikriya ke liye
Ek maa ke liye uski aulad hamesa aankho ka tara hote hain

 

[humtum]

Review for swipe left
By humtum
First of all thank you for this lovely story.
Ek bohat hi Achi peshkas hai ye story.
Pehle to mujhe bhi laga ki ye story family drama type ki hone wali but jab story Puri padhi tab story ka motive samjh aaya, bich Mai ek Baar laga ki ye vampire Bhai ki Adultery user ID password ki Tarah hogi but Apne is story ko ek bohat pyara sa end Diya .
Narration , no doubt experience bol Raha tha yahan , awwal number tha narration . Mujhe apki ye peshkas Bohat Pasand aayi.
Once again thank you for this lovely story.

Thanks immo bhai
Aapne time nikala review ke liye. Kuchh naya likhne ka soch raha tha aur bas line bunte chale gaye

 

[Rahul]

Mera hero
Casinaar bhai
wonderfull story casi bhai har point ko bahut majbuti se rakhkha aapne suru se lekar ant tak.dono ka pyar adbhut hai aur dono hi apni apni jagah par sahi hain..agar hero usse shadi kar leta to fir yahi hota ki wo khudgarj tha uski sari qurbani bekaar ho jani thi..ladki bhi apni jagah durust thi mai use koi dosh nahi dunga..bahut hi pyari shandaar kahani hai sach kahun to ab tak jitni bhi story padhi sab me number kaat sakta hun mai par is story me nahi kaat sakta hun chahkar bhi..mai aapko 10 me 10 deta hun aur sath me

 

[Casinar]

Mera hero
Casinar
Wah sir bahut hi khubsurat story thii
Ki kese ek larki apna hero ko ko soch thii he
Ki kese hona chaye wo apna hero ko
Aur satish ka bhi role bahut khub he ek gunda kese sarif banta he ek kachre je dher se ek larki ko utha kar ek kabil jindagi bitata he wah bahut mast sir



10 of 10 from me

Bahot shukriya sharabi bhai.
Mujhe khushi hai ke tumko kahani passand aayi.