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☑️Prince In Exile..☠️
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Story :- ek aadhuri kahani
writer :- QUASAR
link :-
bahut hi shandar story thi bhai..
sab bahut hi sahi tarike se likha
ek perfect story mein jo hona chahiye wo aapne likh ke dikhyaa hai
perfect story thi aur end bhi dikha diya to bahut acha laga
mujhe bas ek scene hi acha na laga jab raj ne aarush ko goli mari
gopal ko marna koi option na tha lekin story ki demand mein wo bilkul sahi tha
isliye story mein koi kami najar na aayi..
trisha aur aarush ko mila to dete to ek bahut hi achi story ho sakti thi....
koi na aapne story ke end dikhaya wahi bahut acha laga
well aapki writting skills bahut achi hai..
best of luck for contest
Rating :- 4.7/5 stars
writer :- QUASAR
link :-
bahut hi shandar story thi bhai..
sab bahut hi sahi tarike se likha
ek perfect story mein jo hona chahiye wo aapne likh ke dikhyaa hai
perfect story thi aur end bhi dikha diya to bahut acha laga
mujhe bas ek scene hi acha na laga jab raj ne aarush ko goli mari
gopal ko marna koi option na tha lekin story ki demand mein wo bilkul sahi tha
isliye story mein koi kami najar na aayi..
trisha aur aarush ko mila to dete to ek bahut hi achi story ho sakti thi....
koi na aapne story ke end dikhaya wahi bahut acha laga
well aapki writting skills bahut achi hai..
best of luck for contest
Rating :- 4.7/5 stars