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Reviews posted on or before 12th March 2022 11:59 PM will be considered for Best Supporting Reader
★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2022 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★
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प्रत्युत्पन्नमतिस्व ~ Lews Therin Telamon
dude WHAAT THEE FUCKKKK!!
matlab ekdum se waqt badal diya jazbaat badal diya..
abe ye hua kya.. kaha ekdum mast romance chal raha tha achanak wo chaku wala kaha se ghus gaya wo bhi almari pe kaise chadh baita...
ending kya huyi kyu huyi kuch nahi samjha..
aisa laga mano sidhi ja rahi kahani ko ekdum rok diya, chalti gadi ko achanak break maar diya..
mereko kahani do baar padhna pada lawda tab main ending sahi se samjha...
theme jabardast choose liya tha bhai aapke but ending me bahut jyada hi jaldi kar di isko aur bhi ache tarike se likha ja sakta tha starting me kahani me ek lay bana hua tha aage kya hoga iska exitement bhi sahi lag raha tha but ending was too rushed, matlab achanak romance ke beech me rashmi ke dimag me darwaje ka khayal aana navin ka room ke bahar aana fir rashmi ka ghabra ke bahar aana behosh hona,
kahani sahi hai but ending aur sahi ki ja sakti thi...
dude WHAAT THEE FUCKKKK!!
matlab ekdum se waqt badal diya jazbaat badal diya..
abe ye hua kya.. kaha ekdum mast romance chal raha tha achanak wo chaku wala kaha se ghus gaya wo bhi almari pe kaise chadh baita...
ending kya huyi kyu huyi kuch nahi samjha..
aisa laga mano sidhi ja rahi kahani ko ekdum rok diya, chalti gadi ko achanak break maar diya..
mereko kahani do baar padhna pada lawda tab main ending sahi se samjha...
theme jabardast choose liya tha bhai aapke but ending me bahut jyada hi jaldi kar di isko aur bhi ache tarike se likha ja sakta tha starting me kahani me ek lay bana hua tha aage kya hoga iska exitement bhi sahi lag raha tha but ending was too rushed, matlab achanak romance ke beech me rashmi ke dimag me darwaje ka khayal aana navin ka room ke bahar aana fir rashmi ka ghabra ke bahar aana behosh hona,
kahani sahi hai but ending aur sahi ki ja sakti thi...
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Flight ~ harshit1890
Harshit bhau ye USC me soch kar hi aye the ke logo ke dimag ka dahi banane ka hai aur wo kaam unhone bahut gajab tarike se kiya
this is not a normal story aur jo log Sci-fi ke fan nahi hai ya science ke concept se thoda dur hai unko is kahani ko samajhne me kafi dikkat aayegi
(kayi scenes par mera khud ka dimag ghuma hai :Sweat: )
this is a sci-fi masterpiece aur aisi stories aapko XF poar bahut kam padhne ko milengi..
kahani ka concept chunna aur fir usko itne badhiya tarike se sabke same pesh karna, time maze dizziness multiverse.. harshit1890 bhau deserves a huge applause for this story
Harshit bhau ye USC me soch kar hi aye the ke logo ke dimag ka dahi banane ka hai aur wo kaam unhone bahut gajab tarike se kiya
this is not a normal story aur jo log Sci-fi ke fan nahi hai ya science ke concept se thoda dur hai unko is kahani ko samajhne me kafi dikkat aayegi
(kayi scenes par mera khud ka dimag ghuma hai :Sweat: )
this is a sci-fi masterpiece aur aisi stories aapko XF poar bahut kam padhne ko milengi..
kahani ka concept chunna aur fir usko itne badhiya tarike se sabke same pesh karna, time maze dizziness multiverse.. harshit1890 bhau deserves a huge applause for this story
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Finally ~ The_Punisher
to be honest I am not a big fan of BDSM stories but sirf maine tere liye padhi hai ye kahani
coming on to the story there is nothing much to talk about it as it was a wild sex encounter between megha and arav,
megha who is a sub female finally got what she needed from arav,
kuch khali pan laga kahani me but ab wo kya laga sahi nahi bata sakta, maine aisi kahaniya bahut kam padhi hai as I said I am not a fan of BDSM stories though the story was erotic
aur jis tarah se tune isko english me likha hai it makes it more sexier
Overall an :Shag: experience.
to be honest I am not a big fan of BDSM stories but sirf maine tere liye padhi hai ye kahani
coming on to the story there is nothing much to talk about it as it was a wild sex encounter between megha and arav,
megha who is a sub female finally got what she needed from arav,
kuch khali pan laga kahani me but ab wo kya laga sahi nahi bata sakta, maine aisi kahaniya bahut kam padhi hai as I said I am not a fan of BDSM stories though the story was erotic
aur jis tarah se tune isko english me likha hai it makes it more sexier
Overall an :Shag: experience.
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Lost Soul ~ sweet but psycho
writer has put on a great effort writing this story..
a story of a girl dealing with the trauma of her grandma's death..
a girl who chooses live in the world of her fantasies
the mental state of esha.. her confusion seeing the people around her, her struggle to find her own soul,
and a lack of understanding from family members
well this is a concept which is hard to portray and my friend you have done it beautifully...
great work mate
writer has put on a great effort writing this story..
a story of a girl dealing with the trauma of her grandma's death..
a girl who chooses live in the world of her fantasies
the mental state of esha.. her confusion seeing the people around her, her struggle to find her own soul,
and a lack of understanding from family members
well this is a concept which is hard to portray and my friend you have done it beautifully...
great work mate
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Breaker of chains : Rise of New Era ~ Dungeon Master
Well it is a multiverse of madness and a sheer treat for fantasy lovers
bhai ye kahani pe apan ek superhit comics bana sakta hai men isme wo sare elements hai jo ek badhiya fantasy comics me hone chahiye
hero hai villain hai jaadu hai ek nayi duniya hai dhamakedaar action hai aur dungeon master ki jabardast writing hai aur kya chahiye..
ye kahani kaha end hogi ye shuruwat me hi pata tha lekin wo sab hoga kaise ye sabse romanchak part tha..
tbh maine nahi socha tha ke mahamahim wapis se kahani ne dikhayi denge apun waiting for the battle between dungeon master and dark mage baki mahamaim ka wapis aana was a important turning point kyuki unke bagair dungeon master kabhi dark mage ke against fight jeet hi nahi pata..
ye kahani ek readers ko ek alag hi duniya me transform kar deti hai it was an amazing and thrilling experience reading this gem
Well it is a multiverse of madness and a sheer treat for fantasy lovers
bhai ye kahani pe apan ek superhit comics bana sakta hai men isme wo sare elements hai jo ek badhiya fantasy comics me hone chahiye
hero hai villain hai jaadu hai ek nayi duniya hai dhamakedaar action hai aur dungeon master ki jabardast writing hai aur kya chahiye..
ye kahani kaha end hogi ye shuruwat me hi pata tha lekin wo sab hoga kaise ye sabse romanchak part tha..
tbh maine nahi socha tha ke mahamahim wapis se kahani ne dikhayi denge apun waiting for the battle between dungeon master and dark mage baki mahamaim ka wapis aana was a important turning point kyuki unke bagair dungeon master kabhi dark mage ke against fight jeet hi nahi pata..
ye kahani ek readers ko ek alag hi duniya me transform kar deti hai it was an amazing and thrilling experience reading this gem
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This Shall Too Pass... ~ Sasha!
whoa....!!
that as my reaction after reding this gem... kudos to Sasha! for writing this mindblowing masterpiece..
well honestly I don't have words to discribe the brilience of this story, this one is one of the the best story of this contest and a perfect contender for winning position..
this story contains so many elements, emotions, drama, thrill, mystery, love, pain and what not.. and the language was cherry on the cake..
there are very few stories which makes me feel invested in them and this is one of those stories
it is a brilliently written plot, and the ending was just amazing.... while reading the story I never thought that this gonna end like this, with a murder of aman and thats where you steal the show...
you have written a masterpiece madam and I am glad that I got to read this.
whoa....!!
that as my reaction after reding this gem... kudos to Sasha! for writing this mindblowing masterpiece..
well honestly I don't have words to discribe the brilience of this story, this one is one of the the best story of this contest and a perfect contender for winning position..
this story contains so many elements, emotions, drama, thrill, mystery, love, pain and what not.. and the language was cherry on the cake..
there are very few stories which makes me feel invested in them and this is one of those stories
it is a brilliently written plot, and the ending was just amazing.... while reading the story I never thought that this gonna end like this, with a murder of aman and thats where you steal the show...
you have written a masterpiece madam and I am glad that I got to read this.
DREAMBOY40
सपनों का सौदागर 😎
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Bahut bahut aabhaar mitraकानपुर से गोवा : एक यात्रा वृतांत ~ DREAMBOY40
The shaukeens
yahi sabse sahi hai shabd hai charo kirdaro ki samiksha karne ke liye, is kahani ko padhte huye hasi nahi ruk rahi thi
aapka comedy likhne ka style gajab hai bhai aur ye baat main shayad pehle bhi aapko ek kahani me bol chuka hu..
talking abuot the story char adhed umar ke dosto ki kahani hai ke wo kaise goa pahcuhe, halanki goa me unhone kya kya dhamal kiya wo janne me jada maja aata hame baki ye bhi sahi hai..
An enyoyable read..
lThe shaukeens ... ka trailer dekha maine jarur tha magar movie nhi dekhi aur mujhe nhi lgata us story se aur meri story ka koi common link hoga .
Meri ye story mere fav comedian raju shrivastav ki ek line pick ki thi ...
Jo ye thi
आप तो बस आंखे बंद करिये और कल्पना किजीए कि ये चार अधेड़ उम्र के रंगबाज दोस्त जब अपने स्पेशल धारिदार जान्घिये मे गोवा के बीच पर सनग्लास लगाये हुए घूमेंगे तो क्या नयी कहानिया तैयार होगी।
bas isi line par hamne apni kalpna me kuch kisso ko jod kar ye chhotu si kahani jod di ...
sun kar achcha laga ki aapko meri ye rachana pasnd aayi .
bahut bahut shukriya bhai ji
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Best Buddy ~ Scripted
aajkal ke nibba nibbis ke liye ekdum perfect story hai hai
well agar koi ladka ladki best friend hai aur ladki ka koi boyfriend hai to aksar hi us boyfriend ko best friend se chidh hone lagti hai...
aajkal ye bahut hi common hai aur aksar 90% launde jo best friend hote hai unhe us ladki ke liye feelings hoti hi hai
kahani kafi badhiya likhi gayi hai jisme pyaar se jyada dosti ki value batayi gayi hai.. jass ko poonam ke liye feelings hai par poonam bas uski dost hai aur jass ne kabhi bhi poonam par apna haq nahi jamaya and at the end friendzone ka shikar hua
overall a nice experience reading this..
aajkal ke nibba nibbis ke liye ekdum perfect story hai hai
well agar koi ladka ladki best friend hai aur ladki ka koi boyfriend hai to aksar hi us boyfriend ko best friend se chidh hone lagti hai...
aajkal ye bahut hi common hai aur aksar 90% launde jo best friend hote hai unhe us ladki ke liye feelings hoti hi hai
kahani kafi badhiya likhi gayi hai jisme pyaar se jyada dosti ki value batayi gayi hai.. jass ko poonam ke liye feelings hai par poonam bas uski dost hai aur jass ne kabhi bhi poonam par apna haq nahi jamaya and at the end friendzone ka shikar hua
overall a nice experience reading this..
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ye to maine bola hi hai ke is kahani ka usse koi lena dena hai, bas kahani padh ke ye laga ke ye charo dost ke whatsapp grp ka naam Shaukeen hona chahiye aur wahi maine bola baki story sahi thi
DREAMBOY40
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हा जान रहा हू ब्रो ...ye to maine bola hi hai ke is kahani ka usse koi lena dena hai, bas kahani padh ke ye laga ke ye charo dost ke whatsapp grp ka naam Shaukeen hona chahiye aur wahi maine bola baki story sahi thi
