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shahi pariwar pranali pratha se thik pone aath baje shahee khane ki mej me khanan laga diya gaya shaahee rasoiya ke swara…………
jab aap apni brittiya sthiti ki samiksha he to keisa lagta he……..agar aapne thik thak dhan juta liya to kya aako santusht ka ehsaas hota he……shodh bastabiktya bayan karta he bohot se byakti birttiya se ausuntashi aur asurakshit mehsoos karte he….adhiktar log ye maante he ki wo behtar kar sakte the ya unhone abhi bohot achcha nehi kiya he……
hum paise aur sampatti ke baare ne keise sochte he ye koi upadan par nirbhar karta he……apne anubhab ke aadhar par hum paise se judi koi dharana bhi banate he humare haath me halaki kuch sutra hote he ki aisa karte to aur behtar ho sakta tha ya hum is tarike ki madat se behtar dhan doulat shohrat kama sakte the……aise bohot se log he jinke ummide bastabik sthiti me mel nehi khati…
bohot se dhani log bhay asurakshit ke maahol me jite he….saath me wo apni abhigrahan ko paryapt nehi mante…..hum jaan pehchaan wale chehre aur pasandida baat chit ke dayere me rehna pasand karte he…… humare aas paas ke logo ka byawhaar humari brittiya suraksha ya asuruksha paida karne me mahatvya bhumika nibhata he….koi parents jab bachche ko uski samta ke hisab se pradarshan naa karne ke liye daante he, ya jab koi bachcha padasi ki ke ghar ke sukh subidhaon ki baat karta he ya jab koi dost zarurat par saath nehi de pata to brittiya suraksha ya ausuraksha ka bhaw janm leta he……
mr. shurjit kr badaladev duniya ke liye sajjan byakti the……samudahik sanstha se jude rehna riti riwaz, sanskriti sampradaik parapmara uske liye mahatvyapurn tatva the………jitna apne bete se pyaar karta tha utna hi garvshali tha aur use bete ke jawan khoon se dar lagne laga tha ki kahi uska baris apne bans ki parampara ko khandit naa kar de……..
baladev pariwar 15 logo ki dining table ke ek sire me dinner karne baithe the…..naukar sakar bhadron kalapravin se dinner karwa raha tha….
mrs. baladev………." baby aaj kaal itne late kyu aate ho……."
shaan……. " kaha late aat hoon…..8 hi to baja he….."
mrs. baladev…….. " zamana kharab he…….aaj subah hi news me do bachche gayeb hone ki khabar padhe jaa rahe the….prashasan ko pukhta saboot mila he ki dono bachche aakhiri baar isi seher me dekha gaya tha…….bardaad bhi isi seher me huya he……..apni nehi to hume to aise sataya mat karo….."
shaan……." Good mind, good find…….jab tak me kisi ka kuch bigadu nehi to koi mera kyu kuch bigarega….."
Mrs. baladev……" always remember one thing ! it is never too late to correct our mistakes. And if we do not, we risk repeating them……"
shaan muskura ke bola…….." maine aisa koi galti nehi ki jo pachtawa ho…."
Mr. baladev………." shaan beta….tum us club me karte kya ho……."
shaan……" daddy bas time pass……subsections of day to day life……"
Mr. baladev……." I heard you guys play games there all day long…..kya ye sach he….."
shaan jhep gaya……wo sochne laga ki daddy ko aakhir pata chal hi gaya……wo ulajhan pe par gaya…..hamesa apne baap ki sawal jawab me wo niruttar ho jata he……..kabhi uske aur uske baap ki bichar mel nehi khate……
shaan……." nehi aapko puri baat nehi pata he…….asal me hum game devloper ka kaam karte he……."
Mr. baladev…….." MBA kar ke gumnam 15×18 square feet kamre ke club me do computer me game banate ho……."
shaan ko bohot gussa aaya…….lekin kisi sehenshilta ka ghut pi gaya hamesa ki tarah…..
Mr. baladev……." game bana ke karte kya ho……local company ko bechte ho…..ya khud illegally trade karte ho…..aaj kaal ke bachcho ka kya ho gaya he…….digital technology bane he zindegi behtar karne ke liye aur aaj kaal ke bachche shortcut ke sakkar me hacking becking dhanda chala raha he…….ye sab chhodo apni mom ke saath kaam shikho aur apna career banao……Do not destroy the abuser found in the inheritance……."
shaan itna gusaa ho gaya ki pitta sharir jhanjhna gaya….apne haath se sammach dining table de mara aur jhatt se khada ho gaya……chair ondhe muh kachu door gir gaya……
apni kamre ki taraf ped patakte huye chale gaye chidhiya chadte huye……..
Mrs. baladev……." kya zaruri tha is tamache ki…..i'm fed up with you….thora time do…..jab man hoga tab apne aap samjh jayega……"
Mr. baldev……. " tumhi ne bidag ke rakha he use……uski umr me apne pariwar ko bhar pet khana khilata tha khud kama ke….."
Mrs. baladev bhi chidh gayi aur Mr. baladev ko ghurte huye uth gayi…….wo apne ladle bete ke kamre me gayi……darwaza knock ki……
shaan darwaaza khol ke bapach apni rocking recline footerst wali chair pe baith gaya………mrs. baladev uske paas futon pe baith gaya……
reena apne bete ke gusse se laal muh phulaye chehre ko dekhti rahi antray…..shaan gusse me apni maa ki taraf nazar nehi mila raha tha……
Mrs. baladev……." you hid me too……agar me tumahre adde pe na jati to pata hi nehi chalta……"
shaan hairan tha……" kya aap woha gayi thi…….aap mujhpe nazar daal rahi thi…..".
Mrs. baladev muskurai……." ab mere bete ki khayal ka sawal tha…..to nazar to rakhni padegi na……"
shaan abhimaan se bola……" kya mom……kyu kyu…..me shanti se jeena chahta hoon…."
Mrs. baladev….." haan to jee shanti se…..I was doing my duty…….."
shaan….." kounsi duty bete pe chori chupe nazar rakhne ki duty bolte ho……daddy ki tarah aap bhi mujhe wohi nakara samjhte ho naa….."
reena bhabuk ho gayi……bete ki hatheli apni chaati pe rakh ke pyaar jhata ke boli……" nehi aisa mat bolo baby……..you know how much i love you naaaa…..mujhe bas tumhari fikar lagi rehti he…..aaj kaal tum mujhe kuch bhi nehi batate….."…
shaan….." kya nehi batata me…..me kya koi school jata bachcha hoon jo…..mom aaj mujhe teacher ne mara isse usse jagra huya ye kiya wo kiya……aap chahte he waisa tota ban jau……meri bhi kuch privacy he……"
Mrs. baladev……" no baby when did i say that….me chahta hoon tum jo bhi kaam karo wo mujhe batao isi bahane hume kuch time spend karne ka mouka to milega…..aaj kaal hum baat bhi nehi kar pate good morning goodnight ke alava…….I don't want to be a boring mom……thik he agar tunhari care karna tumhari privacy me tak jhak karna he to god promise aaj ke baad tumse do feet door reh ke baat kiya karungi……"….
reena shaan se hath chura ke uth khadi hui aur jaane ko do kadam badhaye hi the……shaan bandar ki furtile ban ke apni maa ko piche se pakada aur recline chair pe bitha diya…..reena mand mand muskurane lagi……shaan niche carpet pe baith ke piche jhuk gaya jisse uska shir apni mom god me…….
reena uski pechani pe chum ke uske shir pe pyaar se haath pherne lagi……
shaan…….." emotional blackmail karna koi aapse shikhe…….ok sorry maine nehi bataya……par ho daddy ki Obedient wife…..sab unke kaan me bhar deti ho….."
Mrs. bakadev muskurai…….." har baat nehi batati jeise claas 10th me teri ek tinde jeisi girlfriend thi wo sab to kabhi nehi batayi…."…
shaan sharmane laga….." ab baas bhi karo…."
Mrs. baladev……." achcha yeha koi mili…..suna he yeha ki ladkiyan bohot gori hoti he….."
shaan muskuraya…." nehi abhi tak nehi…..miliegi to aapko bata dunga……"
Mrs. baladev……." har baar apne naye naye girlfriend ke baare me batati ho…..lekin kabhi milwate nehi ho….me kya dracula hoon jo kha jaungi teri girlfriend ko….."
shaan….." aisa koi mili nehi jo khas ho….agar kabhi mili aisi koi jisse meri feelings ubhar ke aaye tab zarur mila dunga….."
aaj ki drishya darsata he shanakya ka apne perents se keisa rista he……riste me ek tabassum tha sufipan……kabhi khatta to kabhi meetha……..
ati sundar....upadate 5
ek car tezz raftar se chal rahi thi…….achanak car ka balance bigar gaya aur khai me jaane laga lekin jaan lena wala us din chutti pe tha……car ek bade pattar se takra gayi aur pattar ne pahadi se niche gairne se rok liya……….
ek ladka apni bicycle pe usi raste pe tha…sadak puri tarah se sunsaan tha…..logo ka kehna tha ki wo pahadi ka sadak khurak mitate he……..
ladka us hadse ko dekh ke boukhla gaya tha….uski sujbujh chali gayi thi do pal ke liye………aas paas dekhne laga ek chuha bhi woha nehi tha us shaam…..
ladka dar dar ke us khai ki taraf utara aur kisi tarah kadam thame us car pe pohoch gaya…..car ke bonet wala hissa pichak gaya tha dhooya hi dhooya nikal raha tha…….use dar lagne laga kahi car me aag na lag jaye…….
usne sise se andar dekha ki car ke andar sirf ek hi driver tha aur wo bhi ek aurat air beg me uska shir lahun luhan ho rahi thi…….itna sara khoon dekh ke wo aur ghabra gaya……
wo kya kare kya na kare badi uljhan me phans gaya………kisi se madat bulaye wo aisa bhi nehi kar sakta tha…..zindegi me pehli baar aisa ghatna anubhav kiya tha….
usne darwaza kholne ki kashish ki to darwaza nehi khula…..sayed andar se lock tha ya phir accident ki wazah se kahi atak gaya…..
use bohot ghabrahat hone laga…..pata nehi jinda bhi he ya nehi….kahi me hi na phans jau…..kya karu me ab darwaza bhi nehi khul raha he…….
tabhi nuttkadang shetna jaag uthi aur usne ambulance pe number pe call lagaya aur accident ke baare me bataya………tab tak uske dimaag ke nashe khul gaye aur usne patthar utha kar sisha tod diya phir darwaze ko jor laga ke khola aur us lahoon luhan aurat ko car se bahar nikal ke ghas pe lita diya aur uski haath pakad ke hilate hue bolne laga….."he he……aankhe kholo….."
lekin wo aurat behoos tha……usne dar dar se usi nabs chek kiya to pata chala ki abhi jinda he….uske bhi jaan me jaan aaya………
thori hi der baad ambulance aayi…..aur ambulance wale ne us aurat ke saath use bhi ambulance me le ke gaya wo ladka jana nehi chahta tha lekin ambulance wale use witness bana ke le ke gaye………
us aurat shidha icu me admit kiya……..wo ladka icu ke bahar hi baitha tha….uska shirt bhi khoon se latpat tha…..
tabhi uske paas ek nurse aayi….." mister kya aap is patient ke saath ho…. l"
ladka kahi khoya huya tha…….use bhanak bhi nehi laga ki uske paas koi aake usse kuch puch raha he……
nurse dubara boli……" o mister…..listen to me…..idhar idhar….." uske muh pe chutki bajane lagi…
tabhi us ladke ki tandra tuti……aur nurse ki taraf dekh ke bola…." hhmm…. ji ji boliye…."
nurse….."aapka naam kya he….."
ladka bola…. " ji rahul…..rahul avasthi….."
nurse……" aap mere saath chaliye….."
nurse use reception pe le ke gaya….aur use ek form fill-up karne diya…….
nurse boli….." aap patient ke kya lagte ho….husband….."
rahul bola….." ji….ji nehi……mujhe nehi pata wo koun he……"
nurse….." to phir yeha aaye kyu ho…."
nurse berukhi se baat kar rahi thi sakal se chalu lag rahi thi……rahul man me sochne laga…..ye kounsa tarika he aise battimizi se baat karne ka…..sakal to kitni bhaddi he lipstik aise pot ke aayi he jiese kothe me baithi besbya paan khati hui……
rahul bola…… " me nehi aaya….ambulance walo ne zabardasti le ke aaya…..maine accident hote dekha aur ambulance walo ko bulaya…."
nurse ki bolti band ho gayi phir bhi aise ghura jeise use koi fark hi nehi….
nurse boli……" bill koun dega….abhi dawai bhi deni he…bill pay kijiye dawai andar jayegi……"
rahul ko bohot gussa aa raha tha…….wo gusse me kuch kehne hi wala tha ki tabhi ek awaz aayi…….
" kya matlab he bill koun dega……".
rahul ne piche mud kar dekha……ek police inspector tha muso wala………wo inspector receptionist ki desk pe kohni rakh ke bola…… " hey you… what's your name……"
nurse buri tarah se ghabra gaya ….aur uth khadi hui……
inspector…." badtamiz kahi ki…..is tarah se baat karte ho…..noukri keise mili tumhe……"
nurse….." ji me to bas apna kaam kar rahi thi…..maine kaha badtamizi ki sir….."
inspector….." is ladke us paitent ki jaan bachahi …..ye us waqt nehi hota to sayed wo abhi tak hospital nehi pohochi hoti….aur sayed wohi……"
nurse ki akkal thikane lag gayi…..inspector ne do line me use line hazir kar diya……
inspector bola….." us patient ka husband me hoon……bill do mujhe "
nurse ki gala sukh gayi aur usne darte darte bill ka rasid diya……..inspector ne bill ka rasid dekh piche se wallet nikalte huye bola….." keisa hospital he re…..ilaz suru hone se peheli hi bill bharna padta he….."
tab tak rahul bhoot bane khada tha…….use biswas nehi ho raha tha ki jisko usne bachaya he uska pati ek police inspector hoga…….
inspector rahul ki taraf muskurte huye bola….." mujhe pata chala ki tumne hi ambulance ko phone kiya tha……pata nehi keise shukriya ada karu tunhara……tum nehi hote to aaj meri patni….."
rahul muskura ke bola……" ji aisi koi baat nehi….mujhe jo sahi laga wohi kiya…."
inspector……" nehi tumne bobot mahan kaam kiya he……log to sirf tamacha dekhte rehte he khade khade……."
rahul bola…." ji abhi wo keise he……"
inspector…… " doctor ne bola he ki abhi wo khatre se bahar he…..khoon zyada beh gaya he isliye thori complicated he….lekin kaha he wo thik ho jayegi…."
rahul……" me bhagwan se prathna karunga wo jaldi thik ho jayegi.."
inspector….." thank you so much….again and again…….achcha tumhe teen din ke andar thane me aana hoga….."
rahul thora ghabra gaya……" ji kyu….
inspector haas ke bola……" are daro mat……tum koi suspect ya criminal ki tarah nehi aana he……tum gawah ho to bas record me tunhara ek sign chahiye bas……tumhe aur koi paresaani nehi hogi…."
rahul muskura ke bola…. " ji zarur aaunga…..kya me abhi jaa sakta hoon…."
inspector….." yeah sure…..aur haa tunhara cycle to humne police station le gaya…..achcha jab tum sign dene aao tab le jaana….."
rahul…." oh koi baat nehi….me jab aaunga tab leke jaunga……abhi mujhe thora jaldi nikalna padega…..milte he….".
rahul hospital se nikal gaya aur paidal hi ghar jane laga……..
wohoooo.... ghazab updateupadate 6
rahul raat 10 baje ek Confectionery store me pohoch gaya…..store band ho rahi thi karmchari store ko band kar raha tha…..
store ke malik use dekh ke aashmabhit ho gaya……aur counter se nikal ke rahul ke paas aaya……
store ke malik ka naam jagan laal tha aur rahul use tao kar ke sambaddhit karta tha…..rahul pichle do mahino se uske Confectionery store pe kaam kar raha tha…..aur baki karmchariyo ke saath jagan laal ki ghar pe hi rehta tha jaha karmchari ka rehne ko alag se kamra aur sari niji subidhay di rakhi gayi thi…….
jagan lal…… " rahul tere shirt pe itne sare khoon….."
rahul…. " tau me aapko baad me sab batata boon……abhi mujhe saaf karna he…."
rahul store ki piche se nikalne wali raste se nikal gaya aur karmchari ke saamaany snaanaghar me ghus gaya….aur naha dho ke nikla……..
jagan laal ke pariwar wale bobot der se dinner karte the aur der raat tak jaagte the…….rahul ke ek nek dil ka ladka tha
jo sabke sukh dukh me sharik hota tha….sabse daya aur sahanubhuti se pesh aata tha….logo se vinamra se baata karta tha sabki sunnta tha…..jo sabko barabar bi sanmaan deta tha chahe wo koi usse chota hi kyu na ho….dusro ko kabhi nicha nehi dikhata tha aur har baat pe imandar tha……isliye jagan laal usse bobot prabhabhit tha aur dekhte hi dekhte jagan laal ke sabse bharasemand karmchari ban gaya tha……
rahul ko aksar dinner ya subah ki shay pe bulaya karti thi jagal lal ki patni sarda....uske bhalepan bikarsan chehre pe kaksiyat pe laddu thi.......
rahul ko bhi badi jodo ki bhookh lagi thi to wo jagal lal ke dinner karne irade gaye.......jagal laal ko uske muh se puri bardaat jaanna tha to usne apne pehlu me bitha liya......dining table ke saaron pura pariwar tha jagal laal ke patni aur uske bahu bete samir aur ratna.........
jagan laal rahul ke thali matar panir ki sabji daal ke bola..... " lo beta aram se khate huye batao huya tha tumhara saath......"
sarda bhi kafi utsukt thi......wo rumali roti daal ke boli..... " haa tumhare mahajan bata rahe the ki tumahre shirt me khoon hi khoon tha....."
samir aur ratna bhi kud pade jeise behas-mubabisa me do paks sandehaspad arambh kar diya ho.......besara rahul khate huye charcha kare ya phir sabko shant karay is udherbund me paani pi puri glaas......
ek gehri saans le ke bola........." aap log mujhe bolne to......aap log to aise fikarmand ho rahe he jeise mujhe kuch ho gaya.....par dekho me aapke saamne bilkul susth tandrust baitha hoon......"
samir...... " keise naa kare bhai.......chota bhai manta hoon tujhe.....upar se lalluraam ho....."...
rahul....." thik he me lalluram hoon.....ab suno huya kya tha......" rahul ne puri ghatna bata diye......
sarada uske shir par haath rakh ke boli..... " haay daiyya tere saath itna bada hadsa ho gaya...."
ratna susti leti hui majhak me boli..... " mammi ji uske saath koi hadsa nehi huya he wo to hadse ka farista tha.....ye nehi hota to sayed us policwale ki biwi tey bol jati...."
jagan laal aankhe badi ki kar ke apni bahu ki taraf dekhta he.....jisse ratna nazre niche dar ke nivala muh me thusne lagti he......
jagan laal....." beta tune bobot bahaduri kaam kiya.......mujhe to garv hota tujh par.......tujhe me jaldi hi maneger bana dunga apni dukan ki......"
rahul tapak se bol pada......." tau mujhe maneger nehi banna he bas tankha badha do naa 475 rupaye......."
sab haas pade........
samir......." kyu 475 hi kyu badhwana he bhai...... "
rahul......." wo mujhe royal enfield bike lena he na.......maine down payment ki jugar kar liya he......5 hazar tankhe me 475 rupay badh jaye to mera hisab bethega....."
sarda apni bahu ko kohni maar ke boli....." sikh kuch is bachche se.......tujhe to iske saran dho ke pina chahiye......2 lakha haar chahiye...Gucci ki bag chahiye.... "
ratna ittrati julfe hata ke boli........" haa to kisne kaha chand jeise rajkumari bahu laa ke ghar pe bithane ki....."
rahul saas bahu ka nok jhonk dekh ke haasne laga.........sarda aur ratna ka naye sadi ke saas bahu ka chalta hi rehta tha.....ladte bhi the to apne pan se......
rahul......." tau mujhe ek baat thik nehi laga....."
jagan laal....." kya baat thik nehi lagi beta...."
rahul....... " pata he us aurat ki husband jo police wala tha....wo zara bhi dukhi nehi thi apne patni ki accident ko le kar......"
jagan laal........" police wala tha isliye jazbaat kabu kar liya hoga...... "
rahul shintit tha wo ghatnakram ke har ek bakiye ko apne dimag me dohrate huye samjhne ki kashish kar raha tha........"phir bhi tau.....uski patni zindagi aur mout se juj rahi thi aur uske aakhon me zara bhi dukh dard nehi tha....."
samir..... " oye chote bhai....tera farz tune nibhaya na ab khush reh.....koi khus hota he dukhi hota he isse tujhe kya lena dena.....makkhan maar ke roti kha aur aram se sona...."
ratna......" haa mere pyaar devar tere bhaiya sahi keh raha he..... tu bhi mammy ji ki tarah dukhiyari aatma mat ban.....waise bhi police wale kharuj hote he........."
sarda apni bahu ko khaa jane wali nigahon se dekhne lagi......uski sakal dekh ke sab haasne lage......
jagan laal...." haa beta......tu ye sab shinta mat le ......"
rahul ne pura dinner kiya aur sone chala gaya ....... lekin usko achchi neend nehi aayi baar baar aakho ke samne us lahu luhan aurat ki sakal yaad aa raha tha jisko usne khoon se sani chehra anuman bhi nehi laga paya ki keisi dikhti hogi wo ...............
upadate 6
rahul raat 10 baje ek Confectionery store me pohoch gaya…..store band ho rahi thi karmchari store ko band kar raha tha…..
store ke malik use dekh ke aashmabhit ho gaya……aur counter se nikal ke rahul ke paas aaya……
store ke malik ka naam jagan laal tha aur rahul use tao kar ke sambaddhit karta tha…..rahul pichle do mahino se uske Confectionery store pe kaam kar raha tha…..aur baki karmchariyo ke saath jagan laal ki ghar pe hi rehta tha jaha karmchari ka rehne ko alag se kamra aur sari niji subidhay di rakhi gayi thi…….
jagan lal…… " rahul tere shirt pe itne sare khoon….."
rahul…. " tau me aapko baad me sab batata boon……abhi mujhe saaf karna he…."
rahul store ki piche se nikalne wali raste se nikal gaya aur karmchari ke saamaany snaanaghar me ghus gaya….aur naha dho ke nikla……..
jagan laal ke pariwar wale bobot der se dinner karte the aur der raat tak jaagte the…….rahul ke ek nek dil ka ladka tha
jo sabke sukh dukh me sharik hota tha….sabse daya aur sahanubhuti se pesh aata tha….logo se vinamra se baata karta tha sabki sunnta tha…..jo sabko barabar bi sanmaan deta tha chahe wo koi usse chota hi kyu na ho….dusro ko kabhi nicha nehi dikhata tha aur har baat pe imandar tha……isliye jagan laal usse bobot prabhabhit tha aur dekhte hi dekhte jagan laal ke sabse bharasemand karmchari ban gaya tha……
rahul ko aksar dinner ya subah ki shay pe bulaya karti thi jagal lal ki patni sarda....uske bhalepan bikarsan chehre pe kaksiyat pe laddu thi.......
rahul ko bhi badi jodo ki bhookh lagi thi to wo jagal lal ke dinner karne irade gaye.......jagal laal ko uske muh se puri bardaat jaanna tha to usne apne pehlu me bitha liya......dining table ke saaron pura pariwar tha jagal laal ke patni aur uske bahu bete samir aur ratna.........
jagan laal rahul ke thali matar panir ki sabji daal ke bola..... " lo beta aram se khate huye batao huya tha tumhara saath......"
sarda bhi kafi utsukt thi......wo rumali roti daal ke boli..... " haa tumhare mahajan bata rahe the ki tumahre shirt me khoon hi khoon tha....."
samir aur ratna bhi kud pade jeise behas-mubabisa me do paks sandehaspad arambh kar diya ho.......besara rahul khate huye charcha kare ya phir sabko shant karay is udherbund me paani pi puri glaas......
ek gehri saans le ke bola........." aap log mujhe bolne to......aap log to aise fikarmand ho rahe he jeise mujhe kuch ho gaya.....par dekho me aapke saamne bilkul susth tandrust baitha hoon......"
samir...... " keise naa kare bhai.......chota bhai manta hoon tujhe.....upar se lalluraam ho....."...
rahul....." thik he me lalluram hoon.....ab suno huya kya tha......" rahul ne puri ghatna bata diye......
sarada uske shir par haath rakh ke boli..... " haay daiyya tere saath itna bada hadsa ho gaya...."
ratna susti leti hui majhak me boli..... " mammi ji uske saath koi hadsa nehi huya he wo to hadse ka farista tha.....ye nehi hota to sayed us policwale ki biwi tey bol jati...."
jagan laal aankhe badi ki kar ke apni bahu ki taraf dekhta he.....jisse ratna nazre niche dar ke nivala muh me thusne lagti he......
jagan laal....." beta tune bobot bahaduri kaam kiya.......mujhe to garv hota tujh par.......tujhe me jaldi hi maneger bana dunga apni dukan ki......"
rahul tapak se bol pada......." tau mujhe maneger nehi banna he bas tankha badha do naa 475 rupaye......."
sab haas pade........
samir......." kyu 475 hi kyu badhwana he bhai...... "
rahul......." wo mujhe royal enfield bike lena he na.......maine down payment ki jugar kar liya he......5 hazar tankhe me 475 rupay badh jaye to mera hisab bethega....."
sarda apni bahu ko kohni maar ke boli....." sikh kuch is bachche se.......tujhe to iske saran dho ke pina chahiye......2 lakha haar chahiye...Gucci ki bag chahiye.... "
ratna ittrati julfe hata ke boli........" haa to kisne kaha chand jeise rajkumari bahu laa ke ghar pe bithane ki....."
rahul saas bahu ka nok jhonk dekh ke haasne laga.........sarda aur ratna ka naye sadi ke saas bahu ka chalta hi rehta tha.....ladte bhi the to apne pan se......
rahul......." tau mujhe ek baat thik nehi laga....."
jagan laal....." kya baat thik nehi lagi beta...."
rahul....... " pata he us aurat ki husband jo police wala tha....wo zara bhi dukhi nehi thi apne patni ki accident ko le kar......"
jagan laal........" police wala tha isliye jazbaat kabu kar liya hoga...... "
rahul shintit tha wo ghatnakram ke har ek bakiye ko apne dimag me dohrate huye samjhne ki kashish kar raha tha........"phir bhi tau.....uski patni zindagi aur mout se juj rahi thi aur uske aakhon me zara bhi dukh dard nehi tha....."
samir..... " oye chote bhai....tera farz tune nibhaya na ab khush reh.....koi khus hota he dukhi hota he isse tujhe kya lena dena.....makkhan maar ke roti kha aur aram se sona...."
ratna......" haa mere pyaar devar tere bhaiya sahi keh raha he..... tu bhi mammy ji ki tarah dukhiyari aatma mat ban.....waise bhi police wale kharuj hote he........."
sarda apni bahu ko khaa jane wali nigahon se dekhne lagi......uski sakal dekh ke sab haasne lage......
jagan laal...." haa beta......tu ye sab shinta mat le ......"
rahul ne pura dinner kiya aur sone chala gaya ....... lekin usko achchi neend nehi aayi baar baar aakho ke samne us lahu luhan aurat ki sakal yaad aa raha tha jisko usne khoon se sani chehra anuman bhi nehi laga paya ki keisi dikhti hogi wo ...............
beautiful flow of story... this is gonna rock....updated 7
shaan aaj badi jadli uth gaya………usne socha ki joging pe nikale lekin sard mausam tha saron taraf kohra hi kohra …..to wo sardi ke dar se bas aise hi hoodie aur jacket pehne hi bahar nikla tahelne ……..
Mr. and Mrs. baladev late uthe…..aaj dono ki koi zaruri kaam tha …koi business meating thi board ke members ke saath ……..
reena apni ghar ke office me meating ki zaruri file taiyar kar rahi thi ….. tabhi shirjit soul' lapete office me ghus gaye ….
Mrs. baladev……." honey this is not fair haan……ye mera office room he ……you should have come knocking on the door…….."
shurjit apni patni ko aagosh me leta he …..thand ke karan uske saans aur aah se dhooya nikal rahi thi……
Mr. baladev…….." oh come on…….aaj bohot thand he bahar barf gir raha he ……dhoop to he hi nehi …..thori masti kare …kya kehte ho "
Mrs. baladev……." ummhu aapne brush bhi nehi kiye ……jao der ho jayegi ….. meating ke baad jo masti karna he kar lenge……. be serious pata he na mr. govardhan ek deal rakhne wale he……"
Mr. baladev……." i know what deal he's gonna have……uski chui wohi pe atki he 8 % ka share keise 15 % tak badhaye……."
Mrs. baladev…….." to phir kuch socha he ki nehi ….."
Mr. baladev……." Don't you worry, I have already done what I had to do…….. waise humara rajkumar nazar nehi aa raha he……"
Mrs. baladev ……." wo tehelne gaya he mujhe msg kiya tha…..kyu "
Mr. baladev ……." are bas aise hi …..aaj baap se khafa jo rehta he …. kuch kahu to rocket bomb ban jata he "
Mrs. baladev…….." to aap barud pe chingari kyu dalte ho…… aapke kandhe pe baith ke khelne ki umr nehi uski ab …… thora sapce do jab zamidari ka ehsaas hoga tab aapke nakse kadam par hi chalega "
Mr. baladev…….." are me bas fikar jatata hoon……soch raha tha tum dono ke naam ek company khol loon ……tum dono company sambhalna usko bhi stape by stape lesson dete jana …."
Mrs. baladev………" no way …..naver……… teen teen company sambhal rahi hoon ….aap to bas round marne nikalte he jab man kare ….. aap hi usko shikhao …."
Mr. baladev ……." bhai wo shikhe to me shikhau ……waise wo tumhari har baat maanta he lekin meri ek nehi sunta …"
Mrs. baladev……" bachcha apne baap se zyada apni maa se jura hota he………aap se bohot pyar karta he bhale hi aapse baat na karta ho lekin apake baare puchta he aap thik ho ki nehi "
Mr. baladev ….. " mera sher puttar he ……thori garma garmi ho jaye "
Mr. baladev mood me the Mrs. baladev bhi mood me aa gayi dono pati panti baibyahik anand aise hi akasar behek jaate the ………..
shaan barf ke daldal me chalte jaa raha tha ……pahadi ke dhalan par thori doori pe use ek kaath ladki se bana huya ghar dikhai diya …..wo usi ghar ki taraf badh rahi thi bahar ek lamp jala huya tha subah ke 9 baje …….
shaan ghar ke darwaze pe khade ho ke awaaz lagaya " kaka …..o kaka "
andar se darwaza khula kar kar awaaz ke saath aur ek adher umr byakti shaan ko dekh bol " are chote Babu aap …… itni thand me mere ghar …… me bas nikal hi raha tha ….. aaj pata nehi chala thand ke maare ….."
shaan……" kaka andar to bulao…. shir par barf jama ho raha he"
" are me bhi na…. aao andar aao …. yehi he mera garib khana "
shaan saro aur nazar dekha ….. ladki ki deeware bhale majbuti se bani hui thi lekin barf ki andhi ko jhelne ki mukammal nehi tha …..
" kaka aap yeha rehte keise ho …. tufaan aata he to ye ghar jhel keise leta he"
" jhel leta he…..kya he ki andhi ka asar zyada nehi hota he ….. teeno aur ghane Jungle he unche ucnhe ped he aur samne ye pahad "
" phir bhi aap akele rehte ho …. aap chaho to humare baki servent ke mil ke reh sakte ho"
" are nehi malik ne pehle hi bobot kuch de rakha he aur me akele hi rehna chahta hoon mujhe logo ka jhanjhat hi pasand nehi he …. achcha batao to zara aapko yeha kyu aana huya "
" bas aise hi ghumne aaya tha socha ki aapse milta chala jau ….. say kafi kuch milegi kaka "
" milegi ….. kyu nehi milegi ….. malik ghar pe aaya he aur coffee na mile koi sawal hi nehi "
shaan ki nazar ek tuti phuti pustak daud pe padi aur wo pustak daud pe jaa ke koi sa bhi kitabe utha ke dekhne laga aur sochne laga ' ye kaka in kitabo ka kya karta he …. padhta he kya …."
" kaka ye kitabe to yuhi pade pade chadh raha he…. "
" haa aise hi rakha tha …. mera to koi kaam ka he nehi "
shaan ek upanyas utha ke aise hi paat kath padne laga aur uski nazar lekhak ke naam par padi jo RABHA KANT BASHYA ke naam se tha aur 1994 me prakaashit tha …… achnak shaan ke dimag me aaya ki kaka ka naam bhi to rabha kant he …. kya kaka ….
" kaka is upanyas me to aapka naam likha he ….."
kaka harbara gaya aur apni jhenp mitane ke liye muskuraya aur bola ….." are haa yaad aaya to wohi kitab he jiske lekhak mere hi naam se milta jhulta he thora bohot…..lekhak ka naam rabha kant bashya he aur mera naam adha he ….."
" achcha …….aap kuch rahe he …… aapki gala kyu sukh gaya ….."
" are nehi ….. lo coffee lo garma garm …..hume bhi an chalna chahiye malik ko koi jana hua hoga to mushkil ho jayegi "
" kaka tension mat lo do aur driver bhi he ….. lekin aapki harbarahat mujhe bata raha he ki aap kuch chupa rahe he ….. ab apna radio on kariye nehi to me daddy ko bol dunga ki aap tika ke driving karte he "
" are chote babu daya ……. bhukha mar jaunga malik ke shatra saya had gaya to ……..ruko batata hoon ….. bobot saitan bachche ho "
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