Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

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Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

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[mashish]

Update:-107 ​

Sabhi baat kar rahi thi tabhi bare se screen par poori ladies gange najar aane lagi.… Jivisha gusse me jor se chilla di... "Humare ye private time hai jahilon, isse public kyon kar rahe... Annahhh, Serin !! tumhara bhai pagal ho gaya hai"… Usse sun'kar sab hansne lagi...


Serin hansti hui khadi hui aur khadi hokar apni janta ke aadar me wo sar jhukati hui chinkh'kar kahne lagi... "Ek jit ka jaam hum sab saath me toast karenge.… Bus humare liye dua kijiye... Aur haan hum jinda laute uski dua mat kijiyega... Hum jab kaatna shuru kare to hum tab'tak na ruke, jabtak poora kaat na de, bus itni dua kijiyega"…


Serin ki baat par sabhi hooting karte huye Master Serin ke nare laga diye... Kafi halka mahol tha. Tabhi achanak pahle organisation ke pass kisi baat ko le'kar hulchal hui aur baad me Zoren planet ke sarkari vibhag ke space center me... 10 carore viman ke bede ke sath, organization of middle universe (OMU) me report kar rahe the earth ke air force. Jinka commanding leader tha Canon Cooper, aur Second commanding ooficer Saras Singh.


Inke sath pahunche the Organisation of Universe Affairs (OUA) ke Director Shivalker Tripathi aur uski team. Earth ke most wanted bhagode, Pratham aur Joy ki lash dekhne, unke sath pahunche the bade-bade agency, FBI, CIA, MOSSAD, aur Indian intelligence ke mukhiya aur uski team. Indian Intelligence ko Bakshi hi lead kar rahe the…


Jaise hi sabko pata chala, sabko hairani si honi lagi. Luma ne sabhi viman ko Zoren par utarne ki izazat dee. Issi ke sath organization of middle Universe se jo eklauta planet dur tha, wo bhi bhagidari lene pahunch gaye.


Earth ke organization se Middle universe ke organization ki baat chal rahi thi. Wahin sena ki mukhiya Luna ne 10 carore viman ki jab jaankari lee, to pata chala ki aircraft me load hokar inke chhote-chhote 10 carore viman aaye hain, jo 2 seater capacity wale hain… Middle Universe ke chhote range ke viman ke mukable bhi yah viman kafi chhota tha aur dau par thi earth ki 20 carore jindgiyan.


Idhar bade bhaiya Director... Nischal to unhe uthva hi liya land hote, aur bakiyon ko Viggo viman me jane diya. Bade bhaiyya Nischal ko dekh'kar… "Asli ruthva to idhar hai tera chhote"….


Nandni:- Kya bade bhaiya mujhse nahi mile...


Bade bhaiya, Nandni ke hath me ek letter thamate huye.… "Mubarak ho, Organization Of Universe Affair (OUA) ki leader aur Chief Secretary Nandni ji"…. Iske baad ek letter Ansh ke hath me dete... "Doctor sahab aap ko bhi badhaeyan… aap ban gaye hain OUA ke deputy secretary"…


Nandni, Apni badi-badi aankhon se Bade bhaiya ko ghurti... "Ye sab kya, kab, kaise, kyon… aapka yahan hona"


Bade bhaiya:- Aree thamba re ek hi baar me kitne sawal puchhogi, Doctor sahab ko dekh, kaise shant hai...


Nandni:- Wo doctor hai, emotionless.. main to nahi hun na... Aur ye OUA kya bala hai...


Bade bhaiya:- "Earth ki sabse badi organization hai aaj ke samay me. Isme 20 alag-alag department hai. Jaise Universal force, Universal IT cell, Universal economic forum... Un department ke 20 alag-alag head aur un 20 ke upar main director, Ansh Deputy Secratary aur tu Chief secretary".

"Jaise apne yahan IAS, IPS rank hai, waise hi bahar gaanv ke ussi tarah ke rank wale duniya bhar ke 10 lakh aala adhikari ki bahali ho gayi hai, aur 10 lakh ki bahali hogi... Uske baad chhote-chhote staff clerk rank tak, so alag... Mere khyal se pahle sal me OUA ke 2 carore karmchari honge duniyabhar me aur tum uski mukhiya...


Ansh:- Duniya ka sabse bada jhol. Ye 20 lakh top rank holders ke upar rahegi... Bhala ho iss OUA ka...


Nandni:- Huhhh !!! Kam bolo Ansh… bade bhaiya ye sun'ne me to kafi achha lag raha hai, lekin poore earth par Universe ke bare me kaise khabar lagi…


Bade bhaiya:- "Abhi kya bataun main.. achanak ye sab ho gaya.... Kisne kiya, kaise kiya, pata nahi. Lekin kuchh din pahle poore world ke network ko hi kisi ne hack kar liya... Aur jis desh ki jo bhi bhasha ho, wahan likha aa raha tha... "Poora earth sharmshar hai"... Uske baad jo hi tasveer usne dikhayi.. uss bande ne to universe ke server tak ko hack kar'ke, tum logon ke yudhh ki taiyari dikha diya"...

"Are kya lade the re baba tum log. Vimano se antriksh dhaka hua tha. Sala wo dusra paksh wala, je mayla wo sala Ghastak ne to Viman ka ambaar lagaye tha aur tum logon ke itna kam Viman the ki sabki shwans si ruki thi… aur jab tum sab ne unhe bhaga diya,tab likha aa raha tha…

"Inka pahla target earth hi hota hai, lekin universe ki ye organization, OMU, na to humare gopiniya tarike se rahne par kabhi sawal uthaye aur na hi kabhi hume kayar kahe... Lekin kab tak, humari ladai ye log ladenge".

"Baba re, uske baad usne dikhaya... Earth par ho rahi ajibo garib gathnao ko aur jo jaan maal ki hani hui, uska doshi wo Astak aur Surpmarich, jis se tum log ladne wale ho"...

"Fir kya tha apne hi desh ko, sabhi janta kosne lage. Sabhi ek sur me maang karne lage... "Humare yahan ghus'kar maarne walon se yadi badla nahi liya to itni surksha intzam kis baat ka... Aapas me bahut veer bane, ab jab sabke frustration nikalne ka mauka mil raha aur sath me poora shakti pradarshan ka, to fir pichhe kyon hat rahe"...

"Kya karishma dikhaya tha uss hacker ne. Ek hi raat me jo duniya humare liye anjaan thi, wo bahar aa gayi… Sab bade-bade parde par alians ko dekh rahe the, jo humse bilkul bhi alag nahi the.... Aur to aur usne teri (Nandni), meri aur doctor sahab ki tasveer duniya ko dikha dee".

"Je mayla kahta hai iske contacts Organization Of Middle Universe (OMU), ke mukhiya se hai... Aur uske baad Shwetna ki tasveer dikah dee.. fir anth me kuchh tasveeren humare aur Shwetna ke sath ki... 3 post to nir'vivad ghoshit kar diye, ye prithvi ke bahari gaanv ka mamale dekhne ke liye"...


Nischal:- Vardali ne lagta hai akl ke parde khol diye guruji ke... Bhannaye guruji ne to kamal hi kar diya…


Bade bhaiya:- Kaun wo Apasyu ki baat kar rahe…

Nischal:- Haan wahi…


Thik ussi waqt, Luna ka call aaya aur usne turant hi Nischal ko viggo viman par bulayi aur 10 carore viman ki detail de'kar pareshani batayi...


Nischal, apne sabhi vimano ke size dikhate... "Hum 20 carore zindgiyon ko dau par nahi laga skate hain sir.. aap humare centeral viman ke crew ko kyun nahi join kar lete..


Canon Cooper:- Ye humare vimano ke size se hume judge kar rahe hain singh...


Saras Singh:- Thik hai fir ek dostana trial ho jaye.. Aapke ye high speed bade-bade viman vs humre ye low speed chhote-chhote viman…


Nischal:- Uski jaroorat nahi hai... Agar samtal maidan ho lakh varg kilometer ka, to viman ko kitne niche tak laa'kar humla kar sakte ho...


Cooper:- Sab pagal hain humare pass... Aur sabse bada pagal to Singh hai.. ye jamin se ek fit upar se viman ko poori gati se bhagate huye humla kar sakta hai. Artillery khatm ho jaye to ye kuchal kar maar dega...


Singh:- Cooper ye kaarname to tum bhi kar sakte ho aur aise pilots ki kami hai kya...


Nischal:- HuYu apne pass bache Matel se aaj ki raat se le'kar kal uddan bharne tak kitne viman ko mask kar sakte ho...


HuYu:- Jitne Matel bache hain usme jitne ho jaye... Shayad inke 10 carore...


Nischal:- Aap dono inke sath chale jaeye... Viman me chhota sa modification hoga uske baad Luna aapko samjha degi kya karna hai...


HuYu jaise hi wahan se nikla, Luna…. "Kya soch rahe ho Sahjade...


Nischal:- Loop me istmal karogi inhe frontline se, to dushman ke jahaji bedon ko ghus'kar maar aayenge ye... Inke mudne ki kashmta adbhut hoti hai... Pichhe se loop nikal hi aayega.. aage se kitna majboot beda kyon na dikhe... Jaise pichhli baar 18 lakh viman ke sath tumne kiya tha. Jarra socho, ye best hain apne iss chhote viman ke sath, wo bhi 10 caror ki sankhya me. Aur inki commanding bhi kafi strong hai...


Luna:- Thik hai fir yahi karungi Sahjade. Aur haan, apna dhyan rakhna...


Baton ke dauran raat ke 11 baj chuke the. Sab settel hi the. Sabhi Viggo viman me hi baithe. Poori vanar sena, yani ke dragon babies ko sun rahe the… Bade bhaiya se aakhir jaan pahchan bhi to karwani thi...


Nandni ne shararat me aankh maar dee. Yun to bade bhaiya upar se fiki muskan hanste huye "haan-haan bacche hain" kah rahe the. Lekin dragon babies ka size dekh'kar ander se utna hi bhaybhit bhi the... Idhar Nandni ka ishara hua aur udhar Bitti apne panje me daboch'kar bade bhaiya ko hawa me le lee... "Bade chachu, humse itna dar kyon rahe" … Bechare bade bhaiya, dar se halat hui patli aur niche se aa rahi thi hansi ki kilkaari….


Luna:- Sab bilkul shant...


Shwetna Wishper se line par thi... Shwetna ne pahle Viggo viman ko connect kiya.… "Nischal koi Serin, Jivisha aur tumse baat karna chahti hai... Main line organization ko transfer karti hun… HuYu se bolo Dark Universe ke relay station ko jarra support kar de... Becharon ki picture quality ghatiya hai"...


Nischal.… "Bilkul... Luna sabko le'kar yahan se jao"…


2 minute baad line connect thi aur Arhcemia line par thi… Ek Screen par Jivisha aur Serin, dusre screen par Nischal najar aa rahe the.…


"Hum kuchh din nind me kya lete rahe, tum sab ne to hume joker sabit kar diya... Suna hai yuddh ki taiyari kafi jodon se chal rahi hai"… .


Jivisha apni haath upar kari sabko shant rahne rahne ka ishara kee... Screen par Jivisha ki muskurati hui tasveer... "Tumhe bhaukte huye sunn'ne ka jarra bhi mood nahi hai Arhcemia.... Hum kal ke baad dark universe me ghusenge. Yadi taiayri poori na ho to abhi bata do... Thodi mohlat tumhe de dungi"…


Saitan si hansi ki tej awaj aur uske baad utni hi karkas chillane ki awaj.… "York planet... Aur ye hain humare thal sainik.... 4000 carore ki force aur 46000 carore waiting me... Oh haan ek baat batana bhul hi gayi"…


Itna kahne ke baad Arhcemia ne najara dikhaya… 4 viman ek ke baad ek 4 bade missile girakar dur gayab ho gaye... Sabhi missile niche pahunchte-pahunchte hawa ho gaye..


"Abhi jo missile dekhi, wo iss brahmand ki itni takatvar missile thi, jiska ek prayog Aaynek walon ne kiya tha... Jiske natije to tumhe yaad hi honge... Haan wo iss se kayi guna shaktishali tha, lekin suna hai prithvi vasiyon se tumhara gahra naata hai. Jarra wahan se pata kar lena ki ek Atom Bomb ko girane ke kya parinaam hote hain"..

"Atom bomb, Brahmand ka sabse vidhvansh'kari bomb. Kya hua dekh liya teeno ne. Yahan niche aate-aate uske chemical aur elements sab raw material me tabdil ho'kar hawa me ghul gaye... That's the power of Drak universe. Tumne ladne ke liye humari jamin par utarna hoga... Jamin.. York ki jamin.. najara dekhoge yahan ke jamin ka... Haan"...

"Yahan 4000 carore wo vansaj fauj hain, jiske ek ki takat tumhare lakh sainik nahi jhel pate... Waise 4000 carore fauj frontline me. 46000 caror waiting me... Dar to nahi lag raha na tum sab ko... Taiyari me kuchh samay chahiye to 30 din ka aur samay le lo... Uske baad bhi fate to kah dena, hum me aane ki himmat nahi... Fir hum aayenge... Aur jab aayenge tab tum paoge ki tumhare middle universe banjar aur registan ho gaya hai... Jaise ki far universe wale desert planet ko bana'kar gaye the"…


Jivisha:- Jaisa ki main pahle kah chuki hun... Hum 2 din baad aayenge... Matlab aayenge... Apni taiyari ko aur pukhta karo… kyonki mere love ke liye waise bhi ye 1000, 2000 ki fauj se bhidna bejjati jaisa lagta hai... Aur mere love ke dialogue jo chori ki ho, wo aisa nahi tha … dhyan se sun'na… aur yaad karne ki katai jaroorat nahi hai kyonki iske baad tum dialogue maarne ke liye jinda na rahogi.… To hoga kuchh aisa jab mere love wahan ki jamin par honge"...

"Nischal jab katna shuru karega tab maut kab aayegi uski chinkh tak nahi niklegi... Bus wahan bhay ka mahol hoga... Hawa me kate-fate sharir ke chithre, ek hi waqt me najar aayenge. Aisa lagega jaise ek hi waqt me lakhon kide makode kaise kat gaye... Pichhe walon ko kisi ke maut ki chinkh to nahi sunai degi, lekin aankhon ke samne jo najara hoga, uske bhay se unka kaleja... Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar… tharrrraaaaa uthega…

"Aur tab tum paoge ki tumahri aabadi badi teji se ghat'ti chali ja rahi hai... Sahjada aur uska beraham khanjar, jab tum sabka imtihaan lena shuru karega, tab tumhe ehsaas hoga ki tumhare napunsak se 50000 carore ki fauj par ek akela bhadi par gaya... Aur parso ka din jab shuru hoga to yahi hokar rahega.. likh kar rakh lo abhi"...


Nischal:- "Bus kar pagal… dar se kahin abhi hi maidan chhod'kar bhag na jaye... Waise kahar ka eklauta manjar main hi nahi dikhaunga... Meri patni ne sirf ek ke bare me bataya hai... Parso ke din tumhe swyam mahakaal ke darshan karwane kayi log ander ghusenge... Tumhari jamin par khade ho'kar tumhe lalkaarenge.. aur tum sab ashaya sa apne samuday ko kamti hote dekhoge"...

"Oh waise mahakaal ke bare me nahi pata ho to humare bade bhaiya aur OUA ke director sawalkar Tripathi se puchh lena. Computer ji jarra bade bhaiya ka shakal dikhao idhar...

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[mashish]

Update:-108 ​

Nischal:- "Bus kar pagal… dar se kahin abhi hi maidan chhod'kar bhag na jaye... Waise kahar ka eklauta manjar main hi nahi dikhaunga... Meri patni ne sirf ek ke bare me bataya hai... Parso ke din tumhe swyam mahakaal ke darshan karwane kayi log ander ghusenge... Tumhari jamin par khade ho'kar tumhe lalkaarenge.. aur tum sab ashaya sa apne samuday ko kamti hote dekhoge"...

"Oh waise mahakaal ke bare me nahi pata ho to humare bade bhaiya aur OUA ke director sawalkar Tripathi se puchh lena. Computer ji jarra bade bhaiya ka shakal dikhao idhar...


Jivisha, khush hoti... Bade bhaiya yahan.. Kya baat kar rahe ho Love... Mujhe pahle nahi bata sakte the...


Nischal:- Abhi chal rahe mahol me rah gaya batana...


Jivisha:- Tumhari himmat kaise hui ye baat bhulne ki...


Shwetna:- Shahsika poora middle universe dono tota-maina ko dekh raha hai aur main bhi batana bhul gayi, middle universe se earth bhi connect hai...


Jivisha apna muh chhipati... "Pahle nahi bata sakti thi"…


Arhcemia:- Aaj ki raat jata lo jitna pyar jatana hai... Kyonki kal jab tum sab mehanat karke wahan se yahan ke liye ravana hoge, uske pahle minute me hi fir kabhi pyar jatane ka mauka nahi milega...


Pichhe se Meena apne dono panje par chal'kar aayi aur pichhe se Jivisha ke kande me, apni wo upar sine ke niche wale 2 chhote paun ko baahn ki tarah lapet'kar apne bade se muh ko, chhota gol bana'kar, Jivisha ke gaal ko chumti….


"Maa isse dekh'kar ulti si aa rahi hai... Suno khisyayi dayan... Kar'ke batane ka, aise baat-baat bahut khel lee. Chalo ab screen band karo… Maa kasam kahti hun, tune itni dhamkiyan di hai na ki mere samne aayi to tujhe main aisa fadungi ki dobara janm lene se teri aatma daregi, chal bhag ab yahan se"….


Jivisha, Meena ke gaal ko chumti... "Tere dar se kahin wo sach me bhag gayi to.… Chal bhagi hogi to pakad lenge, yadi kahin heart attack aa gaya to tu faadegi kise"…


Serin:- Humare daamad ki hi faadegi... Kyon Meena…


Jivisha:- Meri Shashika, ab kya poora universe hume dikhata rahega... Suna nahi meri beti kya boli... Pahle iss Arhcemia ko hatao…..


Nischal:- Tum kaisi ho Baby…


Jivishsa:- Love... Serin ko main udhar bhej rahi hun... Mujhe lagta hai Serin wahan kuchh behatar karegi... Waise bhi master Serin aur master Nischal sath me honge, jispar super master Nandni ka hath hoga, fir maza hi kuchh aur hoga… waise bhi OUA ki Chief Secretary ki team hai... Kahar charo ore se barashna chahiye...


Nandni:- Kamini, to tu kuchh din pahle mujhe issi ki badhai de rahi thi… ghup-chup dimagi chat kar aayi apne atoot mitrvar se...


Jivisha:- Yaar uss khadus ne Jyoti bhabhi ko chhod diya re... Wo bhi hoti...


Ansh:- Organization Of Universal Affair (OUA) ko family affair hi bana dalo... Jo log laut'kar gaye yahan se, unhe kyon chhod dee...


Niachal:- Sab aaj hi baat kar lo. Hum OMU se connect hain aur poora Middle Universe hume sun raha. Ab jara sab shant rahenge… Jisa tumne hi Serin ko apne ore bulaya tha...


Jivishsa:- Haan to abhi main hi kah rahi hun na...


Nischal:- Lekin wahan tum kamjor...


Shwetna:- Main hun na, multivitamin deti rahungi, koi kamjori nahi hogi...


Meena:- Mujhe sab kyon bhul jate ho... Main hun idhar... Apni maa ke sath...


Nayla:- Abhi hum bhi hain idhar... Kisi ko shak hai kya…


Serin:- Nischal iss baar meri bhi ikchha hai ki main York ke uss maidan me rahun...


Tabhi sabhi screen kali ho gayi aur awaj aane lagi…. "Sab dekh rahe hai yahan earth par, aur sath me tumhare ghar ke log bhi... Organization ki line band kar lo, aur tum sab unse baat kar lo"…


Jivisha:- Mitr hume universe me hero bana'kar, khud ki pahchan chhipa liye... Kyon logon ke bich aam si jindgi jini hai tumhe kya???


Serin:- Apni baat bol'kar usne connection cut kar diya hai…


Jivisha:- Isse ulta taang'kar maine thappad nahi lagaya na to fir kahna... Apne logon ke bich chalne wali normal si jindgi ko kamine ne heroic bana diya. Waise mukhiya ji se kya kahungi... Bhagwan itne dino se sab kuchh sahi lay me tha, fir aise situation hi kyon…


Shwetna:- Bhagwan ne nahi ye situation tumhare atoot mitrvar ne diya hai...


Jivisha:- Ab to mitrta nibhani hi hogi... Serin tumhe abhi nikalna chahiye aur ye naag dansh tum le'kar jao... Yahan mere pass ek naag dansh hai...


Serin:- Bhabhi tum apni kshmta kam kar rahi ho...


Shwetna:- Bilkul bhi nahi kam hai... Ye sahi descision hai... Nischal se kahna hum sare connection ab tod rahe hain... Ab sidha nikalte waqt connect honge...


Idhar jab'tak Jivisha ki baaten chal rahi thi, udhar OMU me earth se sandesh aana shuru ho gaya ki kya jo unki aankhon ne atom bomb ka humla dekha, wo satya tha ya koi grafics desine aur VFX ka effect tha...


Organization se ek sandesh jaari hua, jisme na sirf earth ke liye, balki drishya dekh rahe 6000 planets par rah rahe aam log aur aam parivar jinke bacche iss ladai me samil the unke liye bhi tha.…


"Wo apni kshmta dikha'kar hume divert nahi kar sakte. Kisi ko bhaybhit hone ki jaroorat nahi aur Master Serin ne jaisa kaha... Ek jaam hum Middle Universe wale sath me toast karenge..… Isliye apne jaam takrane ko tayar rahiye... Raat jyada hai sabhi sukoon se so jaeye"…


Har koi raat me aaram karne ke baad, agli subah apna-apna suit up kar liye. Sabse pahli uddan Nischal ki team bharti... Jivisha Pvt linr par thi, uske sath Miya bhi thi... Miya muskurati hui Nischal se sirf itna hi kahi.… "Koi raham nahi"…


Itna kah'kar dono screen se out hui. Nischal ne apni team ko taiyar kiya. HuYu jo uss din complete suit par Nandni ki poori theory experiment kar chuka tha. Complete suit ka lab trail to ho chuka tha, ab ground test hone ja raha tha… HuYu ki poori team compete body mask me thi. Nilbhut sainikon ke 2 carore ka beda Nischal ke sath uske viman par tha... Lekin unhone metal ka body mask nahi liya tha…


Ansh, Nandni, sabhi dragon bacche, HuYu aur uski 30 ke team ke liye, HuYu ka complete mettelic suit tha, lekin sabhi ek Nilbhut senapti Aerobok ki command me the aur unhi ke order anusar sabhi Nilbhut sainik, team HuYu aur team dragon niche utarte...


Jivisha, Shwetna aur Nayla ke sath taiyar thi. 20 lakh Nilbhut striyon ka ek bada sa samuh tha inke bede me, aur 50 dragon babies. Yahan bhi same commanding process tha. Nayla yahan ki commanding incharge thi... Yahan bhi HuYu ka complete metallic suit pahunch chuka tha. Yahan bhi kisi Nilbhut stri ne complete body mask ka istamal nahi kiya tha... Haan lekin inke pass 5000 ki tukdi complete mettalic suit me thi.


Luna, the centre of war Machine, Viggo viman me apne 6 lakh crew ke sath pahle uddan bharti, abhiyan ki shuwaat ki. Viggo viman jaise madmast hathi ho, jo apne dumdaar chal se sabko samjha raha ho ki kaun aa raha hai...


Luna ka viman Zoren space center me jakar khada hua aur sabse pahla command Luna ka... "Sahjade, Shashika aap dono uddan bhare"…


Nischal ke banaye 4 prism viman Jivisha ke pass tha aur 1 prism viman Nayla lekar gayi thi.… Paachon viman ko pahle se interconnect kar'ke, ek Central command ke sath, 4 sub command wala 110 varg kilometer ka bada sa prism viman khada tha. Viman me sawar ho'kar Jivisha apni poori team ke sath Wishper planet ke vayumandaliya kshetr se dhire-dhire bahar hui...


Wahin Nischal ne bhi Hyber Matel se bane 4 carore viman me se kuchh viman ko nikal'kar khud se modify kiya, aur 180 varg km ka uska bhi viman, apne sare crew ke sath kafi teji me uddan bharna shuru kiya.. Aage-Aage Nischal ka viman aur pichhe se kayi carore viman ek sath nikle...


Sabse aage Nischal ka viman pichhe 2 kinare se katar lagaye caroron viman ka jakhira... Uske pichhe Viggo viman tha jo Madhya ki postuin me tha kyonki uske charo ore gol formation me arbon viman apne rani, Viggo viman ke sath khadi thi.


Viggo viman ke sath anya large viman, prithvi ke air crafts ka career bana hua tha... Aur uske ander sabhi pilot apne command ka intzar kar rahe the…


Takriban 12 ghante baad sabhi Dark universe ke border par the... Nischal aur Jivisha ki viman sabse aage parellel thi. Wahin uske pichhe caroron viman ka beda aur uske pichhe madhumakkhi ki tarah formation me viggo viman, jiske upar-niche dayen-bayen, aage aur pichhe arbon viman ka beda...


Nischal aur Jivisha ka viman biche se passage ke through connect hua. Nischal apne kamre se jaise hi bahar aaya, aaj poorn mahakal hi ban'kar aaya tha. Kamar me kewal baagh ki chhal, sharir par chita bhashm lagaye. Bhasm ke niche vish ke sevan (zahar pine wala) ke karan uska halke nile rang ka chamkta hua poora badan.


Shant chehre ka wo bhavya swaroop, jise dekh'kar hi alokik roop hone jaisa mehsus ho. Ek aisa swaroop jise dekh'kar bhaybhit hui shamst jan samuday, apne rakshak ko dekhne ke jaisa mehsus kare aur uth khade ho aise, mano hauslon ne nayi unchai de di ho… Wahin shant swaroop ke alokik roop jab dushman dekh le, jiska sanhaar karne nikle ho, fir najaren poori fer le. Himmat jawab de jaye fir uss kaya ko poora dekhne maatr ke liye... Najren milani to dur ki baat hai...


Laal raushni bikherti Nischal ki laal aankhen... Uski chamak aaj dur se dekhi ja sakti thi... Uske shant swaroop par ye laal aankhen jaise bhay ka pratik ho.. khauff to khud hi paida ho jaye.


Jab Nischal ne apni maujoodgi darshayi... Aur mahakaal swaroop me aa'kar khada hua... Arbon vimano ke bede me dur-dur tak kisi ke hone ka ehsas ho raha tha. Koi aisa, jiske hone matr se hi dil me sahas aur josh paida hote ja raha tha...


Gale me raksha sutr ka pendent, jo bilkul gale se chipka aur ek mukhi rudraksha jaisa pratit ho raha tha. Kamar ke opar patle belt se laga uska beraham khanjar aur us khanjar ke handel me lagi 2 energy patthar ki chamak, aaj finki si thi kahin.


Dono naag-dansh sanyukt ho chuke the, jo Nischal ke hathon me tha... Naag dansh ke upar bane naag ki bindi jaisi aankhen, aaj laal aur nili, dono rang barabar bikher rahi thi... . Khule paun, hathon me lambi naag dansh, bevaak aur madmast chaal me Nischal passage ke ore badha...


Wahin Jivisha kisi maharani ki poshak me... Gahre laal rang ki saree, abhushan se gala aur hath bhada hua. Kamar ke halka upar kamarband aur bhadi chham chham karti payal ki awaj. Kamar ke side line se khula hissa, Jivisha ke khule hath, chehra gardan... Sharir ka har khula hissa, hire ki tarah chamkti shwet rang ki raushni bikher raha tha jo halka nila pratit hota.


Halki nili aakhen aur bilkul shwet rang ka uska manmohak chehra jo halka nile rang me lipta dikh raha tha... Jab wo chal rahi thi to mano aisa lag raha tha, gurur chal raha ho. Jab wo chal rahi to aisa lag raha tha abhiman chal raha ho... Dono sirf aur sirf yudhh me sammilit logon ke liye yahan mil rahe the.


Ye internal live telecast tha, jo koi aur nahi dekh sakta tha… Dono, passage ke bilkul madya me the... Viman itni unchai par thi ki wahan se sabhi 200 carore viman saaf najar aa rahe the...


Bade bhaiya aur ansh wahan agni prajwalit kiye huye the... Manntr uchharan jaise wahan ka vayu kar raha ho... Sankh naad hua aur bade bhaiya jab vijayi tilak lagane pahunche, Nischal aur Jivisha ko vayu me guru ke hone ke aabhash hua... Dono ke sar jhuk gaye... Hath naman ko, aur bade bhaiya ne dono ko vijayi tilak lagane ke sath hi, Nischal ke dono kalai aur gale me rudraksh ki maala daal diya...


Wahin Jivisha ke gale me 6 pendent ka ek hissa pahna diye... Aur 3 hissa Shwetna, Meena aur Nayla ke liye diya. Bache 2 hisse me se ek hissa Luna ko pahna diya gaya tha aur ek hissa Serin ko. Aur issi ke sath wahan yudhh ke bigul charo ore se phoonke ja rahe the...


Nischal aur Jivisha apne dono hath jod'kar, apne sabhi sainikon ke samman me sar jhukate huye…. "Mere sabhi sathiyon ko naman hai.…. Mirtyu bhi tab tak nahi aaye, jab tak hum apne lakshya me kamyab na ho jaye"


Jivisha ne hunkaar bhadi aur logon ne samman me sar jhuka'kar ek sath awaj laga diye... Sabhi 200 carore viman me maujood 5000 carore sainik, har koi apne ander romanch sa mehsus karne laga...


Nischal hath me ishare se samne Dark Universe ka darvaja dikhate.… "Iss seema ke pichhe na sirf wo Astak hai jo Dark Universe ka doshi hai aur Middle Universe ke upar buri najar dala, balki iss seema ke pichhe sadiyon se Middle universe par khtra bana, Middle Universe ka bhagoda Surpmarich bhi hai... Aur hum kisi ko bhi nahi bakshne wale."

"Jab jaan lena shuru karo to na koi raham karo, na ruko, aur na jhuko... Bus maro maro aur itna maro ki iss sansar me wapas janm lene se inki rooh bhi kaanp jaye, aage badho"...


Nischal ne jaise hi hath ka ishara kiya... Arbon Viman katar banaye nische se gujarne lage... Nischal aur Jivisha ki najar mili... Dono ke chehre bilkul shant the aur aankhon me ek dusre ke liye samman... Dono ek jhalak ek dusre ko dekhe aur mud chale apne wapas apne-apne viman me…

superb update

 

[mashish]

Update:-109 ​

Maharathi saje, ranbhumi saja, dhak gaya aakash.



Pahunche fir veeron ki toli karne anth'hin samrajya ka vinash.. ​

Ajib sa mahol tha. Megh saman charo ore ka ghanghor kaala mahol. Manhushiyat jiske pag-pag par virajman. Aakash poora vimano se dhak kar aur bhi uss mahol ko kaala bana rahi thi...


Nischal apne bade se viman me baith'kar niche maut ke vyakul log ko hi dekh raha the... Niche anginat narbhakshi aur uska mukhiya, apne najren aakash ke ore gadaye kewal peratiksha me the ki kab Nischal aur uski fauj niche utre aur wo ek he pal me unki leela samapt kar de...


Aakash se vimano ka jakhira dhire-dhire niche aa raha tha. Sabse niche Nischal ka hi viman tha aur uske charo ore se York planet ka hawai kshetr gherta anginat viman...


Sabhi viman me ek sath Pratham flash hua... "Kyon dar to nahi lag raha na Sahjade"…


Astak:- Kya soch raha hai chuhe, aaj mere iss giant fauj ke paun tale tu aur tere log kuchle na jaye yahi soch'kar niche aane me teri fat si rahi hai...


Nischal, Serin ke ore dekh'kar muskuraya... Serin kisi dost ki tarah kahndhe par hath dalti.… "Sirf hum dono, kandhe se kandha mila'kar"…


Ek yodhha jo aaj apni poorn kshmta ke sath nikli thi... Serin apni leather tight yudhh ke poshak me thi. Kamar ke dono ore uski apni wo talvar thi, jise dono (Nischal aur Serin) ne mil'kar kabhi Jaal mahal me poore 128 din me banaya tha...


Mishrit dhatu ki yah talvar, Guru Vashudhar ke margdarshan me bani thi… 4 alag-alag prakar ke dhatu jo iss Brahmand ke charo kono se layi gayi thi... Serin ki kamar me 20 meter ki patli blade kisi kamarband ki tarah chamak rahi thi...


Kandhe ke dono kinare patli si chain bandhi thi... Ek chain Serin ki to dusri Nischal ki thi... Aur viman ke bahari kinare se laga tha 2 khas hathiyar...


Nischal, apne baju ki pakad ko tight karte…. "Hum aaj bhi ussi ran'niti se utarenge Serin... Sirf main... Command ab tumhare hath me hai Serin aur uske baad Aerobok. Ab main chala...


Jamin se lagbhag 4000 fit ki unchai... Sharir par bhasm lapete, gale aur hath me badi si rudraksh ki mala lapete... Dhamnnn ki ek jordar awaj se jaisi wahan ki bhumi kaanpi ho...


Log chillaye... Maro isse.…


Sakdon hath hawa me the... Ek sath hi bijli, aandhi aur toofan sabhi hathon me samete.. lekin shayad ye bhid hi dhal thi Nischal ki, kyonki jab charo ore se jhund ghere ho to kitne hath humle kar sakte the Nischal par... 10, 20, 50… iss se jyada haath uthte to khud ke hi logon ko ghyal karte...


Gahri bhul wali yudhh yojna jahan na to yuddh me sainikon ki katar thi jo dusron ko maarne ke liye jagah se aur na ki yudhh karne ka koi formation... Thi to kewal wahan bhid aur kayi kashmtawale Astak ke vansaj chillate huye...


Nirbhik Sahjada, apne nirdayi khanjar ke sath kud chuka tha. Dushmano ke hath hawa me, 100 hath bijli aur acid ke humle ko vyakul aur idhar...


Nabj me khun ki raftaar, Nischal ke daurne ke raftaar se bhi atydhik... Garm shwans aisi thi ki aas paas ka mahol ko poora garm kiye huye the... Bus chand pal ruka wo, paglaye vansajon ki chinkh suna, unke hath hawa me dekha aur agle hi pal, na to wo hath the aur na hi halakh se kisi ki aawj nikli...


Uski toofani daur ki raftaar shuru hote hi maut ki chinkh nahi nikal rahi thi, lekin hawa me Kate fate sharir ke chitre, ek sath jab hajaro ki sankhya me jabtak bhumi par girne ko hote, algle hajaron ke chitre hawa me hote...


Fir to kaatne me koi raham nahi thi... Daur aur santulan ka pura najara Nischal pesh kar raha tha jabki Surpmarich ki kripa se arbon ki sankhya me vansaj sainik, Nischal ke saman tej daur rahe the...


Tej daur to rahe the, lekin utna tej daud'kar, khuli aankhon se dekhna aur humala karte aage badhna bhi to aana chahiye.… Aankh munde andhi daur thi, fir to Abhedi chamri ko bhedne ki bhi jaroorat nahi thi... Tej daudte huye jab vansaj sainik Nischal se takrate, tab aukkad bhi samjh me aa gayi...


Na to Nischal ki abhedi chamri thi aur naa hi takkar se bachne ki ratti bhar bhi kosis... Bus jo tha, wo tha aage badhne ka junnon aur mahaakal ban'kar sabko kaal ke gaal me pahunchana... Takkad to aise ho rahi thi jaise ek fraction second me bomb phootna shuru tha...


Aate takarate aur boom. Chithre unke jamin par bikhre pare hote… Bhasm me lipte uss sharir par ratti bhar bhi asar nahi... Bus aage badhne ki than rakhi thi... Nischal aage badhta raha jise takkar maarne ka shauk tha wo takkar maarte rahe, lekin na Nischal ruka aur na hi ruka uska beraham khanjar...


Jis bhay ki baat Jivisha uss raat kar gayi thi... Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar, Thar-Thar… trarrateee aur kaanpte vansaj sainik bus hawa me haath utha'kar vayumandaliya urja ko samet hi rahe hote, itne me to Nischal unke chithre udaa'kar aage badh chuka hota...


Bhay aur khuff ka aisa manjar dikha raha tha ki baukhlayi vansaj sena paglon ki tarah bijli gira rahe the. Acid ki bauchhar kar rahe the... Nischal to tej daud ke sath nikal jata, chapet me kewal unke hi log aate, aur wahi ghayal hote ja rahe the... 5 me se 2 kosika vibhajit karne wali judwa ki maut to Zoren par hui thi... 1 kosiska vibhajit karne wale vansaj bilkul aage, Nischal ke daud ke raste me khade the...


Wah bhid wala rasta jahan apni fauj ke bich chhipa tha Astak aur Joy.… Ussi raste par 1 kosiska vibhajit karne wale vansaj, Nischal ke intzar me tha. Ek kilometer ka kshter hi khali tha, jisme kewal kosikayen faili hui thi aur yadi wahan ladai hoti to aisa lagta Nischal hawa se lad raha... Hawa se ladtna padts to yahi sahi, lekin aaj uske kadam kahan rukne wala tha...


Nischal aur uska beraham khanjar, pahunch chuka ths uss khali se 1 km ke kshetr ke pass, jahan vyakul anginat naa dikhne wale dushman ghat lagaye the...


Yun to uski daur ko koi kosika nahi pakad sakta tha... Lekin fir bhi Nischal uss jagah ko paar karne se pahle ruka... Dushmano ka ilaka saaf karke wo ruka tha... Aur jaise hi ruka kadakti bijli uske ore iss raftaar se, aur itna jyada vistar se pahunch rahe the ki sampark matr me aane se Nischal ka sharir ko khak kar de...


Ek hath me khanjar to ab dusre hath me tha naag dansh aur Nischal apni jagah par khada... Apne hath ke uss lambe se naag dansh ko samne ke ore utha liya… Aakash ke kilometet ke kshetr ko ghere biljli aur acid ka badal, khud-v-khud naag dansh ke muh se connect ho gaya, aur simat'te huye sab uske anader sama gaya. Thik agle hi pal Nischal ne sar ke upar se naag dansh ko gol ghuma'kar, jaise hi bhumi par patka...


Jo sameta tha usska 100 guna bahar aaya... Naag dansh ke vish me lipt, jiski chapet me thi 10km ke aas-pass ka ilaka aur uss kshetr ke sabhi vansaj fauj kale padkar, hawa me raakh bankar unki haddiyan tak udd chali thi... aur ussi ke sath jal chuka tha Astak ke vansaj ka wo abhiman bhi, jis akele ke dum par poore planet ko hi nigalne ka dawa karte the...


Kosika me vibhajit hone wala vansaj to bijli aur acid ke humle ke baad, Nischal par humla karne ki soch raha tha, lekin uss se pahle hi jhulas gayi thi har ek kosokauen.. jisme kisi ke ander ghus'kar nigalne ka dum tha...


"Tumhare ye badal, bijli, barshat mere kahar se nahi bacha sakte… yahan karne ko tum sab ke pass ek hi kaam hai, wo hai apne sathiyon ki maut dekhna. Kyonki maut tumhe kab chapet me legi, wo tum mehsus nahi kar paoge... Dekhna to dur ki baat hai"…


Thama karvaan fir chala... Hajaron Kate fate chitre, fraction of second me, hawa me hote. Un kate chithron ke niche aane se pahle, fir se hajaro chithre hawa me hote.… Rakranjit yah dharti hui ja rahi thi aur dark universe me kauff failaane wale, mutne lage the... Dimag sabke kabu hone ke baad bhi dekh rahe vansaj apne maut ke dar se thar-thar kaanp rahe the...


Bus kuchh pal ka fasla aur fir samne hote 2 dharti ke bojh, jise chid'kar iss dharti ko paavan bana dena tha... Badh chala fir Sahjada… mahakaal ka roop dharan kiye sabko chidte huye…


Tej si gati thi, laal aankhen aisi ki bhay ka parichayak sa bana tha, aur aankhon ke samne hi the dono... Joy aur Astak bade se aasan par baithe... Kadam to Nischal ke rukte nahi, lekin fir ek bhool ka ehsas Nischal ko bhi ho chala... Ek purani taknik, jo vilupt ho chuki thi, wo Nischal ke raftaar ke aade aa gayi... Jispar usse sochna chahiye tha...


Veg parivartak. Ek kushal dakshat ki bahut purani taknik, Jis se har Viggo ki gati ko shunya ki ja sakti thi... Usse ek jagah par khade hone ko vivash kiya ja sakta tha. Taiyari ke dauran ek chhoti si chuk thi jispar kisi ka dhyan nahi gaya aur samne Nischal ke saman hi 2 tej dushman dushman the.


Fir agle hi pal 2 khanjar utne hi teji ke sath Nischal ke uss nile sarir me ghus gaya... Rakht ki dhar khanjar ke niche se bahne lagi... Ek khanjar Astak ne bayen ore Nischal ke sine me ghusaya, to dusra khanjar Joy ne dayen ore se… Tej dard ki chinkh me wo lakh varg kilometer ka kshetr tharra gaya tha….


Dard ki wo aawaj upar vimano ki srinkhla par bhi sunai dee... Serin ussi pal ko rawana to hui... Lekin vimano ki shrinkhla ghiri hui thi adrishya vimano se... Ye bhi Zoren grah ki hi taknik thi, jo kisi jamane me, Mahamahim ne dur daraj ke technician se develope karwaya tha...


Serin apne samay se niche kudne wali thi, lekin kab unke vimano ki gherabandi hui kisi ko pata tak nahi chala... Aur Serin fans'kar rah gayi thi...


Nischal ki chinkh aur bhi tej hoti ja rahi thi, jab aage se ghusa khanjar pichhe pith se nikal gaya aur dhire-dhire dono ore se uske badan ko chidte huye niche aa raha tha...


Uske hath ka naag dansh uss chhaliya Surpmarich ke hath me thi. Nischal ka beraham khanjar Astak ke hath me... Dard aur gusse me lipt Nischal ki wo chinkh bhayawaah thi, jise sun'kar sab hans rahe the...


Ek chhaliya, aur ek kurur shashak ne mil'kar Nichal ko poora trap kiya tha... Nischal ke sine ke dono ore ghusa khanjar to aam hi thi, lekin usme lipt astak zahar, jise ek Dakshat samuday wale, Viggo ko marne ke liye istamal karte the, khanjar ko itna khas bana chuke the ki Nischal ka pahle se Nila sharir, ab gadha nile rang me tabdil hota ja raha tha… dur se dekhne par uska sharir bilkul kaala hi najar aa raha tha...


"Tumne kya socha, yahan aaoge aur mere samrajya ko tabbah kar doge"…. Gusse se pagal Astak ne khanjar se Nischal ke badan ko niche chidte huye chillaya.…


"Tumhe kya lagta hai mere hazaron varsh ki siddhi ko tum challenge kar jaoge... Bhulo mat mai Surpmarich hun... Maut bhi mujhe nahi maar sakti aur main jise marne ka soch lun, fir usse koi nahi bacha sakta"…. Surpmarich bhi chinkhte huye apni baat kaha aur khanjar ko Astak ke khanjar ke samanatar hi niche chidte huye la raha tha…


"Yahan tu mar raha hai, wahan teri jodi... Jiske gurur ki kahani meri raniyan khatm kar rahi... Wo raniyan jiske samne wo tinka barabar nahi, gurur ke sath mahal me ghusi thi shikar karne"… Astak chillaya aur sath hi sath Nischal ke najron ke samne ek screen par core planet ka najara dikhaya...


Surpmarich naag dansh ke upar lage naag ko apne hathon se noch kar bhumi par patka aur naag-dansh ko poori tarah se nishkriya karne ke baad, uss chhote se naag ke fan ko apne paun tale raund'kar, ek laat maar'kar kahin dur fenkte... "Ye tumhare 2 kaudi ke hathiyar... Inse mukabla karoge"…


Wahin Astak ji tod kosis karta raha khanjar ke energy stone ko nikalne ki, jab wo nahi nikal paya tab khanjar ko apne kamar me daal'kar…. "Niche tu mar raha hai... Upar teri bahan maregi kyonki tum dono ke maut ki kahani likhi ja chuki hai"…


Joy:- Hume andhere me rakh'kar khud par itna yakin ki 200 carore jahajon ka beda le'kar yahan aa gaya... Tujhe kya laga Vardali apni marji se wahan thi... Wo humare hukm ki gulaam hai... Kuchh sach bata'kar tujhe aisa phaansa ki tu sochta raha hum middle Universe se jankari lete rahenge, aur tum wahan mujhe rokte rahoge… Earth aur Middle Universe ki poori mission compromised hai, aur tumhari vajah se Vardali ko Orja bhi mil chuki hai...


Astak:- "Yahan tu hai, teri bahan hai, teri jodi hai. Middle universe ke tamam yoddha ke sath, tere 200 carore viman me se 199 carore viman Dark universe me hai... Jo ab humare 1000 carore viman ke ghere me hai"...

"1 caror viman ke sath tera wo viggo viman Zoren ke space station se kya kar lega. Usse de diye 2000 carore viman, joojhte huye kisi tarah apne air-strike ki kshmta dikhane ke liye... Baki mere 2000 carore viman me load ho chuke hain 40000 carore vansaj... Na sirf Middle Universe ke grahon par tabahi ka manjar hoga, balki humari fauj unpar kabja kar'ke, poore samuday ko hi nigal jayegi... Abhiyan pahle 10 grah se shuru hoga jo aakhri Zoren par khatm hoga"...

"Tum jaise badjaat ko sunane ab aa rahi hai meri sharv'shresth rani, kyonki usne tay kiya tha ki iss yudhh ka live telicast wo poore universe me dikhayegi... thik waise hi commentry jaise tu aur tere sathiyon ne kiya tha kabhi"…

awesome super update

 

[mashish]

Update:-110 ​

Ek ghinauni si jagah jahan kadam rakhte hi aisa mehsus hone lage ki yadi narak ki koi kalpna ki hogi, to issi jagah ko dhyan me rakh'kar ki hogi… Core planet ke bacche paida karne ki factory se lekar, usse jinda kaccha chaba jane ki ghinauna harkaten dur se hi iss core planet par mehsus ho jaye...


Apni maa ki sabse ladli dragon baby Meena, jab apni maa ke sath pahla kadam uss bhumi par rakhi, anjaane se dar ke sath apna bada sa sarir jitna sikod sakti thi, usse sikod'kar Jivisha ko bhinch lee.


Jivisha hawa ki badi si baahn banati uske poore sar par ek baar me hath ferti... "Teri maa abhi tere sath hai, kisi baat ki chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hai tumhe. Nayla kisi ko bhi utarne mat kaho, sab viman me hi rahenge aur jaisa samjhaya hai wahi hoga. Meena tum Nayla ke sath viman me jao"..


Meena:- Maaaaa...


Jivisha:- Pagal hum unhe darane aaye hain… aur yaad hain na tumne maa ki kasam uthayi hai... Wo Arhcemia yahain hai...


Meena, Nayla ke sath viman me chadhti... "Maa hume jaldi call karna, intzar kar rahi hun"…


Shwetna:- Jakar suit up karo... Tum dushman ki jamin par ho… Tunhara darna tumhari maa ko kamjor bana sakta hai aur unki jaan ja sakti hai... Isliye dil majboot karo aur khud ko taiyar karo…


Meena haan me sar hilati hui wahan se ander chali gayi... Jivisha, Shwetna ke sath core planet ke core ilake me uss mashtishk mahal ke ore badhne lagi...


Jivisha:- Yahan ka mahol kitna ghinauna hai na...


Shwetna:- Ajib se narbhakshiyon ke hone ki bu hai Shashika... Sare gale se log jo insano ko chabate hain.…


Jivisha:- Mujhe bhi kuchh aisa hi lagta hai.... Ruko...


Viman takriban 200 meter ki duri par thi. Jivisha ne Shwetna ko rukne ka ishara kiya... Samne kuchh hi duri par wo bada sa mashtisk mahal... Jivisha kisi tarah ki seema ka anubhav kar'ke rukne ka ishara ki...


Jaise hi uske kadam ruke... Arhcemia ke tej hansi ki awaj charo ore gunjne lagi... "Tumhare chham-chham karte huye paun ki awaj ruk kyon gayi badjaat, aao aage badho"..


Shwetna:- Kash kuchh sanskaar sikh ler hoti... Chhodo ye bhi.. kash kuch jigra bhi hota ander... Tera grah, teri dharti, fir bhi dubki hui hai apne mahal me... Tum jitni ghinauni ho, utni hi badi darpok bhi"…


Arhcemia:- Ye yudhh niti hai... Aur hum apne surakha ghere me... Tumhari vishal si fauj mere darvaje par hai aur hum yaha 18 raniyan aur 120 upraniyon ke sath ander... Tum apni fauj le'kar ghuso..


Shwetna:- Kyon wo Surpmarich kisi rani me apna bij daal raha hai kya, iss planet ke kisi hisse me, jo wo yahan nahi hai... Ohhh shayad 121 up Raniyon ki ginti hogi... Ek uss Surpmarich ke sath bachhe ka bij le rahi, isliye 120 up rani aur Surpmarich ki koi charcha nahi..


Arhcemia:- Tujhe yudhh ke bich sambhog ka bada khyal aa raha... Kyon tere ya teri shashika ke ander bij nahi dala ab tak, iss baat se irshya to nahi... Kahin iss baat ka to malal nahi ki itna siddhiyon wala, tumhe ab tak apna bij kyon na de paya jabki ek lambe samay tak tha to tere hi pass...


Chham se payal ke chhamakne ki aawaj aayi aur Jivisha apna kadam aage badha chuki thi. Shwetna ne jaise hi kadam badhana chaha, usse Jivisha ke hath pichhe dikh rahe the jo na me ishare karti, aaage badh rahi thi…


Shwetna naag dansh ke baare me kahne lagi, lekin Jivisha usse bhi mana karti hui chali. Ek suddh aatma, ek kale ghanghore ilake me apne gurur aur abhiman ke sath ek ek kadam badhati hui chali ja rahi thi...


Chham-chham payal ki awaj ek lay me aana shuru ho chuki thi... Jivisha khuli aankhon se uss jagah ke charo ore ka najara dekh rahi thi... Ek bahut bada brain jiske ander Jivisha thi aur samne wo mahal tha. Uss brain ka central nervous system...


Ek dead brain me ghusne ka natija Jivisha janti thi. Ek dead brain me gum hona usse pata tha... Ek dead brain se agar Jivisha khud bahar nahi aa pati hai, tab jo bahar aayegi wo Jivisha nahi hogi...


Ek aisa prangan jo anant universe jaisa tha. Iska kendr to issi ke garv me tha lekin iska sanchalan kahin aur se ho raha tha. Koi aisa jiska gyan aur shaktiyan anant thi... Aur aise sanchalak ke prangan me Jivisha bina uske anumati ke ghusi thi…


Chham-chham karti wo aage badh rahi thi aur tabhi samne chudail ki shkal aur thik waise his bhesh me, hawa ke do shaye Jivisha ka rasta roke khade… Jivisha apni tej chamakti nili aankhon se dono ko ghurti... "Humla karne ke liye muhrat dekhogi kya???"…


"Tum yahan humare humle jhel paogi kya??"
"Tumhe maarne se pahle humne socha baat kar len"…


Dono ek ek kar'ke apni baat rakhi. Haalanki Jivisha unki baten sun kam rahi thi aur charo ore ka jayja jyada le rahi thi..… itne me wo dono Jivisha ke aas-pass mandrane lagi...


Agle hi pal Jivisha kisi shaye ki tarah uss mahol me gayab ho gayi aur attahas se paripoorn uski hansi.… "Mujhse hi khelne ki kosis rahi ho dono, tum aur tumhari jaisi maujood sabhi aatmaon se ek hi baat kahna chahungi.... Aaj main bilkul baat karne ke mood se nahi aayi aur aage jab koi mujh se milo to yah ummid mat rakhna ki main kisi ko chetavni de'kar marungi"…


Jivisha apni baat khatm kar niche bhumi par aayi aur apne ek hath ka sikanja jaise hi usne kasa, un dono Sayon ke gale par Jivisha ka panja kasta chala gaya...


Dono saye apne gale par aise hath pakdi, mano poori takat laga'kar Jivisha ke hath hatana chah rahi ho... Shawns na le pane ki ghutan unke chehre par saaf dekhi ja sakti thi...


Mahol aisa ho gaya ki unke pran ab tab me nikalne wale the. Lekin issi bich 16 raniyan samne ek sath khadi dikhi, jisme sabse aage Arhcemia thi. Jivisha ko dekh'kar wo jor-jor se hasti hui.....


"Vish-Jivisha ke badle murkh Jivisha kah dun to galat nahi hoga… number 8 jo bharm jaal ki mahir hai aur number 12 jo hamesa adrishya rahti hai, unhe hi maarne chali thi... Hahahaha... Ab dekho iss jagah ka kamal"…


Arhcemia ne hath ka ishara kiya aur... Aur wo dono Shaye bhi un 16 ke sath aa'kar khadi ho gayi, aur Jivisha hairani se samne dekhne lagi..


Number 12:- Kyon jhatka laga kya? Bechari hairan hai...


Jivisha:- Kitne log iss haram me gulaam ho, jo aapas me naam ke badle number se bulate ho...


Arhcemia:- Ab to main bhi baat karne ke mood se nahi hun... Iss badjaat ki itni himmat ki ye humare ilake me aise tan kar khadi thi... Iski wo nagin sathi hume lalkaare... Pakad kar lagbhag pran nikal lo iske, lekin maarna mat, kyonki abhi pahle inhe joker to bana lene do...


Jivisha:- Oo yahan chhoti si samasya hai...


Aur itna kah'kar Jivisha bilkul dhuyen ki tarah gayab ho gayi... Charo ore se chham-chham ki awaj aane shuru ho chuke the... 18 raniyan aur sath me Arhcemia apne dimag ko poore mahal me khula chhode thi...


Issi bich Jivisha ek baar fir attahas se paripoorn apni hansi hansti... "Ek adrishya aur dusri bharm jaal"…


Hansi ke bich Jivisha ne 2 Raniyon ke bare me kahi... Sabhi Jivisha ko dhundh rahe the aur issi bich un sab ko wo dono raniyan hawa me dikhi.. number 8 aur number 12 ki kali lahrati hui body, bilkul hawa me aise bandhi thi, mano faile hui rui ko poora kaskar bandh diya gaya ho aisi sikudi hui thi dono.


Jab tak koi unhe madad kerne ke liye apni jagah se hil pata, dhuuu se aag lag gayi... Jaise petrol chhidak kar kisi ne machis laga di ho... Ek pal pahle Jivisha ne sabko apni baton se khincha aur agle hi pal dhuu-dhuu karke unka sharir jalne laga...


Chham-chham payal ki awaj charo ore se aise aa rahi thi, mano koi in logon ke kaan me rod ghusa'kar teasing kar raha ho. Pratham issi mashtishk mahal me baitha hua tha… jise York ladai ke maidan se kuchh der ke liye relief mili thi..


Surpmarich bhi ab bachi hui 16 Raniyon ke sath khada tha. Agle hi pal wo 3 Raniyon ke sath gayab hua... Ek rani jisme bijli ki shakti thi, ek rani jisme hawa ko bandhne ki shakti thi, aur ek rani jonk ki bhanti thi jo kisi ke bhi upar chipak'kar usse poora apne ander chuste huye khinch sakti thi...


Surpmarich Sampurn mantr ka malik tha, jo kisi bhi aatma ko bandh sakta tha... Wahin Jivisha Akshnd mantr ki malkin, jo apne mantr jaap se apne aatma ko vibhajit kar sakti thi... Haan lekin dono mantr me sadaiv Sampoorn mantr upar hi raha hai, kyonki ye aatma ko sidha sharir se jod deti hai... Uske baad yadi aatma tooti to mul sharir tootega aur natija nischit mirtyu...


Ek shaitan 3 shayak ke sath apni siddhi ka parichay dene nikla... Ek mashtishk jaal jo Jivisha ke shaktiyon ke viprit kaam karta tha... Ek masthisk jaal jo mrit mashtisk ke saman tha aur Jivisha mrit mashtisk ke viprit kaam kar rahi thi..


Mantron ka jaap jaise hi hawa me failna shuru hua, wahan arbon aatmayen na jane kaun-kaun se bil se nikalna shuru kar chuki thi… Wo aatmayen uss mashtishk jaal ki rakshak thi shayad, jise Surpmarich jagaa chuka tha aur usse teen hisson me bant diya tha, jiski mukhiya wo teen raniyan tha...


Jis rani ki jaisi shakti thi, wo arbon kali aatmayon ke pass apni shaktiyon ke sath-sath uske mukhiya rani ki shaktiyan bhi sama gayi.…


Chham-chham ki aawaj charo ore se aati... Kaali raat sa mahol tha. Arbon kaale saye ki laal aakhen tim tima rahi thi… Bahar se dekhne par kisi ko kuchh pata nahi chalta ki ander kya ho raha hai... Uss mashtishk ki seema ke ander ghus'kar Jivisha bhi abhi tak uss mahal yani CNS tak nahi pahunch payi thi...


Ek vikrut siddh purush Pratham ne apna poora jaal bichha diya tha… Jivisha bhi arbon dushmano ke bich ghiri, apni maujoodgi se sabko bhaybhit kee hui thi... Ek ore se hawa ko hi bandhne wali arbon aatmayen thi.. to dusri ore se arbon aatmayen bijli ka aisa kadkate najare dikha rahi thi, jiske sampark me aate hi, Jivisha poori tarah se achet ho jati... To teesri, arbon aatma ko jonk (leech) ki tarah cipkana aata tha... Bus wo ek mauke ki talash me the ki kaise bhi kar'ke ek baar wo Jivisha se chipak jaye... Fir ek ke baad ek sabhi parijivi parbhakhi (Parasite Predators) apne hi sathi aatma se chipkate huye, Jivisha ke upar poorn roop se chipak jaye...


Idhar Jivisha... Apne wahan hone ke poorn parichay deti, fijaon me chham-chham kar'ke apne Payal kee dhun charo ore bikher rahi thi… Jivisha uss jagah ke charo ore hawa ki tarah mandra rahi thi... Janlewa zahar ki tarah phail chuki thi... Akshnad mantr ka jaap aisa tha ki arbon ke bich me hath aa'kar bhi hath nahi aa rahi thi. Aur in sab ke bich jab uska kahar barasta tab koi mauka na milta bachne ka..


Hathon ke ek ishare se, zoom se ujli si raushni wahan charo ore phail jati aur uss raushni ki chapet me aa'kar kali aatmayen dhuyen ki tarah bikhar jati... Sabhi kaali aatma Jivisha ke charo ore mandra ke usko quid karne ki kosis me juti thi, aur Jivisha itni teji se unke vprit ghum'kar, unki kaali aatmaon ko baandh'kar iss had tak apna pressure badha deti, ki jhundh ke jhund foot'kar bhikhar jaate…


Wah aise humle kar rahi thi ki aatmaon ko Jivisha me bhakshak (consumer, eater) najar aane laga tha aur sabhi apne mukiya Raniyon ke sath poorn bhay se aage badh rahi thi... Dayra simat'te ja raha tha, Jivisha ka kahar baraste ja raha tha... Issi bich 4 leech aatma kisi tarah chipakne me kaamyab ho gayi...


Jaise hi wo Jivisha ke sharir par pahunchi fir to Jivisha par ek sath arbon aatamyen jakar chipak gayi... Uski gati sthir thi, uske sharir ko nigla ja raha tha.…. Surpmarich ne turant hi sampoorn mantr ke jaap se, Jivsha ke aatma ko suke sharir se bandh diya... Aur uske agle hi pal...


Aatma khinchne wali Astak ki rani ne turant apna fanda fenka aur Jivisha ki lagbhag aatma khinch kar quid kar chuki thi, matr kuchh ansh bache huye the... Aur Jivisha ke sharir par chipka tha jonk... Aisa lag raha tha Jivisha ander aur bahar dono jagah se mari thi... Bus itni jaan baki ki wo aankehn khol'kar sab dekh sakti thi..

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Shwans tootne se lage the.. Sharir jawab sa de chuka tha… dimag dono ke bojhil se the aur aakhen khuli hui... Ek lambe dard ki chinkh ko bardast kar gaye the... Pahle Nischal jis dard me tha... Wahi dard Jivisha bhi mehsus kar rahi thi...


2 bol (Astak aur Joy) chuke the, chinkh chinkh'kar... Teesri apna shikar pakadne ke baad ab sabse ru-baroo thi... Astak ke 4000 carore Viman ke vishal bede poore Middle Universe ko gher rahe the. Inme se 2000 carore vimano ka beda Zoren ki seema par, Viggo viman aur uske 1 carore ke bede ko ghere the. Vimano ki sankhya itni thi ki, Viggo Viman Universe ke kayi lakh kilomter tak dushman jahajon se ghira tha...


Yadi dushman vimano ko Viggo viman shikast deti hui rasta banati, to bhi usse lamba waqt lagte rasta bananane me. Waise bhi Luna ke pass itna waqt nahi tha, kyonki 64000 carore vansaj fauj ke sath, 2000 carore viman, middle universe ke har 6000 grahon me se, un grahon par utarte jahan jivan tha. Wo mahaj kuchh der me sabhi 6000 grah ek saman dikhte… bina jivan aur aabadi bina...


York ke maidan me Nischal fansa, Core planet par Jivisha. Jitne sare viman Dark universe me ghuse, sab 1000 carore ke bede me fase. Luna fansi thi 2000 carore vimano ke bich. Aur 64000 carore vansaj sipahi ke sath 2000 carore viman phail raha tha poore middle Universe me...


Arhcemia fir connect hui... OMU (organization of Middle Universe) se.. apne logon ke fajihat aur ghor apman ka badla lene... Tabahi ka manjar poore Middle universe me failta najar aa raha tha... Aur ussi ke sath Arhcemia sabhi planet ke kone-kone me lagi screen par dikh rahi thi...


Split screen par ek ore jahan sabhi log poore Middle Universe par 2000 carore ke khatre ko, sabhi jivan wale planet ke ore badhte dekh rahe the, wahin unki surakha ki jimmedari liye commanding viman, Viggo viman ko iss kadar ghera gaya tha ki wo nikal na sake...


Ek split screen par inke lagbhag 200 carore viman jo Dark Universe pahunche the, unhe ghera ja chuka tha aur Astak ke vimano se Middle Universe ke vimano ki jung shuru ho chuki thi... Bus in vimano ke liye York ka vayumandaliya kshetr bhadi par gaya...


Wahin ek kinare Jivisha ko dikhaya ja raha tha, jo hawa me thi... Aise lag raha tha poore badan me anginat chhed kar diye hon, khun se lahu luhan poora badan aur paun se niche tap-tap karte khun chu raha tha…


Nischal bhi ye najara dekha... Khud kitne dard me tha wo yaad nahi, lekin Jivisha ka dard dekh'kar wo chhatpata gaya... Jabki 2 khanjar, dayen aur bayen kinare se, na jane ander kis-kis organ ko chidte huye kamar tak pahuncha tha...


Khanjar ke niche se lagatar khun ki dhar bah rahi thi. Jivisha ki aankhen khuli thi. Dimag bhi poore hosh me tha aur screen ka najara usse Nischal ki toot'ti shwans ka aabash karwa raha tha... Uske aanshu chhalakne lage...


Aur 4 split screen ke bich Arhcemia ki wo paglon wali hansi... Apne heros ko marte dekh aur har grah par badhte khatre ko bhhanp'kar, aam log apne pariwar ko samete... Anjaane bhay ko apne ore badhte dekh rahe the…


"Abhi to yudhh ka pahla ghanta bhi nahi bita hai aur tum sab ghutno par ho. Kya socha rakha tha Astak aur uski vansaj sena ke bare me... Koi aam sena nahi thi ye badjaton, jo tum sab ne kabhi humara mazak bante dekha tha... Mera wada hai aaj ka din khatm hote-hote tumhe apni hansi ka poora pachtava ho jayega"...

"Abhi to bus badhti maut ko dekh'kar aanshu aa rahe honge... Abhi to in 2 nakaaron ko dekh'kar ye ehsas hua hoga ki kamjor ko kabhi bhi lalkarna nahi chahiye... Bus kuchh der ruko, fir inke jaisa haal tumhara bhi hoga... Kaat do in dono ka gala"….


"Abhi itni jaldi bhi kya hai, Arhcemia… jo log mujhe nahi jante unhe main apna parichay deti hun... Mera naam Luna hai, aur main uss bekhuff Sahjade ki sagird hun jo agni ki shwans apne jism me bhar raha hoga"…

"Meri kabiliyat ko dekh'kar mere master ne apne post se retirement le liya, aur mujh par poore middle universe ki sena ke kaman ka bhar daal diya... Arhcemia tu Dark Universe ko sambhal, kyonki aaj ka din khatm hone se pahle, tujhe bhi samjh me aa jayega ki apni maand se dobara apne jahaji bede ko bahar bhej'kar kitni badi galti ki hai... Aur mai Luna, Aizem ki ek jungi sipahi aur OMU ki sena-nayak, wada karti hun, aaj hum koi raham nahi katenge"…

"Soldiers inke 4000 carore viman humari seema ke kafi ander ghus aaye hain… rasta seal karo aur sabko maza chakhao... Ek bhi viman aur uska sawar jinda na jane paye... Screen par bhaukne wali iss joker ko iski aukaad dikhao"…


Antriksh ko ghere arbon mile vimano ka beda... 2000 carore dushman ke viman gol-gol ghera banaye, Viggo viman ke sath 1 carore viman ko ghere khade... Luna ne jaisi hi apni awaj buland ki, middle Universe ke nirjan plnets se jahajon ke bede udd chale...


199 carore Middle universe ke viman kone-kone se ek sath nikle. Kul 199 tukdiyon ki formation me thi... Jisme 2.5 lakh Hayber metel ke viman ke bich me, circle formation ke sath aage 1 carore viman aage badh rahe the... Jo apne sath bich me 5 lakh earth ke fighter jet samete the...


Yun to Astak ke vimano ka humla alag-alag planet par hota, lekin Dark Universe ke vimano ki sankhya itni vishal thi ki universe ke uss hisse me, hawai kshetr me pichhe hone ki jagah hi nahi bachi thi...


Asatk ke sabhi viman phaile huye the aur kayi sare jhundon me alag-alag direction me the... Jin tukdiyon ko planet par utarna tha, wo apne viman ka direction planet ke ore kiye the, aur jinhe Viggo viman aur uske 1 caror ki tukdi par humla karna tha wo sab ke sab viggo viman ke ore mude the...


Viggo viman aur uske 1 carore bede ke pass to arbon miles ka, dushman ke vimano ki ghumavdar sidhiyan bani thi... Humla karne ke liye ek bade circle ke thik kuchh fasle pichhe, pahle circle ke thik upar dusra circle... Aur aise hi fasla bana'kar ek ke thik upar dusra circle banaye 2000 carore viman apni formation bana rahi thi…


Luna ki command ka pahla order ke sath hi 199 tukdiyan apne formation me, 199 alag alag hisson se bahar aayi. Sabhi vimano ke bede apne round circle me aage badh rahe the... Sabhi viman apne aage ke viman se auto coonnect ho'kar, auto pilot mode par chal rahe the...


Sabhi jet viman Luna ke dusre order ke sath hi apne jahaji bedon ko chhod'kar nikal gaye... 8 carore earth ke, makhhi ke saman bhin-bhinate huye aircrafts, un pichhle vimano ke thik pichhe aa chuke the jo apni direction badal sakte the


Bilkul satika ran'niti thi ye Luna ki... Caroron viman ek direction ko face kar rahe the… humla ki soorat me yadi pichhe wala viman, apne aage ke viman ko jabtak space na de, tab tak wo sahi dhang se round laga'kar mudne me asmarth hote... Fir unhe upar ya niche hokar mudne ke liye wah jagah leni padti.. Aur iss vajah se unki katar ki band baj jani thi.


Astak ke viman ke bedon ki itni sankhya thi ki Middle Universe ke vimano ko samne se face karne ke liye unhe mudne ke liye katar todne hi padti aur ek baar katar tootne ke baad bhi inki padesani khatm nahi honi thi, iss baat ka poora calculation Luna kar chuki thi. Kyonki yah koi 100 viman ki katar to thi nahi, jo katar todne ke baad bhi aage-pichhe, upar-niche hokar, sabko apna target dikh jaye


Jaise hi viman mudne ke liye katar todti... Arbon viman chos ki pistion me hote… upar-niche, dayen-bayen... Iss paristhiti me pichhe ke arbon vimano ka target lock kar ke humla kar pana sambhav nahi tha... Jabki Luna ke commanding 1 carore ki tukdi ke pass poora aakash khula tha, aur dushman ke mahaj aage ke kuch lakh viman hi un tukdiyon par nishana laga paate...


Luna apni poori niti laga chuki thi.. 1 carore vimano ki 1 tukdi, 199 alag-alag position par pahunchi aur sidha humla... Missile artilleries ek sath load hona shuru... Jaise hi humla hona shuru hua Central command se, 199 alag-alag positions se humla shuru tha...


Arhcemia sabhi vansaj ke dimag control ki hui thi. Pratham commanding de raha tha... Lekin kaise de wo commanding... 199 position ke liye uske pass 199 alag-alag team ki tukdi kahan thi.. Ab jab commanding aisi ho... "Team Alfa, 5 lakh jahaj pichhe, 5 lakh jahaj 30⁰ north, 5 lakh jahaj west 90⁰, north 120⁰"… Fir to command sunn'ne wala team Alfa ko jaise pahli awaj aayi command ki, to picche mud gaya... Ab Alfa me kaun se 5 lakh jahaj... Arbon jahaj aur sab ke sab Alfa... Ab jab itne confusion me viman ke crew ho to humla kya kare aur kaise kare...


Itne sare position par commanding dena, Surpmarich ke baap ke bus ki baat nahi thi... Uska dimag fuse isliye bhi ho chuka tha kyonki Middle Universe ki pahli kahani ke sath-sath, dark universe me dusri aur teesri kahani chal rahi thi aur anth me yahi faisla hua ki unko bhagya me bharose chhod diya jaye...


4000 carore viman ka commanding head, pahle ghante me hi ghutne tek chuka tha... Kisi ko kuchh samjh me aane se raha ki unite counter attack kaise kare.. Pichhe se aage, 1 carore ki tukdi ko dekh pana muskil tha usme bhi 199 alag alag position me... 1 carore vimano ki formation aisi, ki kisi bhi hawai tukdi aur unke sena naykon ke pasine chhut jaye...


Astak ke lakhon viman ek sath humla karte.. Bilkul hawa me gol deewar sa bana, 2.5 lakh Hyber metal ke viman ka circle aur pichhe poore 1 carore viman ki shrknkhla. Hyber viman ek sath hawa me khade ho'kar apne dushmano ke bade-bade missile humle ko bina anti blastic missile ke sidha jhel rahe the.


Aur jab missile unke ore aa rahi hoti, tabhi Hyber metel ke 1 viman se, pichhe ke 4 viman ko command chala jata... Pichhe ke 4 viman kis angel me target karenge. Sab direction pahle se set hota… 2 second ke liye Hyber metal ki viman, apne pichhe ke vimano ke liye window open karti, 10 carore missile ek sath apne sadhe huye target ke ore aur vimano ka malwa space me...


Rahi sahi kasar earth ke figter jet plane poori kar rahe the... Sab apni tej uddan aur vimano ke bich se gujarte huye, bilkul safe passage lete, dushman vimano ke bich me pahunch chuke the... 199 alag-alag postion se 8 caror earth aurcraft arbon vimano ke jhund ke bich me the... Aage se 1 carore ka beda, Astak ke viman ko dhuan dhuan kar rahe the… bich se ye fighter plane apne single comand ke sath, 32 caror missile ek sath daagne ke turant baad, apne vimano ko dushmano ke viman ke bich se nikal'kar, dusri positin le lete...


Ab to aalam ye tha ki ye log sikudna shuru ho chuke the... 199 alag-alag position se viman jab aage badhne lage, tab unke 199 carore viman0 ke aapas ke bich ki duriyan kam ho rahi thi, aur kinaro se caroron dushman ke viman, jo jabarn unka air space ghere huye the, badi teji se sath saaf hote ja rahe the...


Kis position par humla kare, iss baat ne sabke hosh udda diye... Ab tak bina 1 bhi viman gawaye, Luna lagatar apne viggo viman me baith'kar command de rahi thi... 2000 carore viman jo Viggo viman ke charo ore sidhinuma round circle lagaye the... Ab tak in 2000 caror bedon ko bhi samjh me aa gaya tha ki tadat se kuchh nahi hota, jung aunsasan aur sahi ran'niti se hi jiti jati hai...


Haan lekin arbon missile ka nishana jaroor Viggo viman aur uske sath 1 carore viman the.. 2000 carore vimano se Ghirne ke sath hi, jitne non Hyber Matel viman the wo apne protection formation me pahunch chuke the, jahan kartab hi kartab chal raha tha...


Missile ka jawabi humla, Bitti, Gopal aur uske 10 logon ke team ke hath me thi.. Luna ko bus 1 baar un 10 dragon babies ko samjhana para tha... Kewal 1 baar us dragon babies ne key press accurecy test diya tha. Bitti aur Gopal ki team ke pass Viggo viman se le'kar wahan ke 1 carore, plus 2.5 lakh Hayber metal viman ki missile commanding sab Swatantra roop se thi...


The commanding station, Viggo viman, apne shashakt team leader Luna ki poori dekh rekh me, har bit'te pal ke sath Dark Universe walon ko air strike kise karte hain, wo samjha rahi thi…


Hyber metal vimano ko humle se fark to padne se raha, lekin arbon misslie kisi ek viman ko lage, to body bhale damage na ho, lekin wo apne position se disposition to jaroor hogi...


Sabhi accurate calculation ke sath anti blastic missile ka beda bitti aur uske 4 sahayak dragon babies ke hath me tha... Unki commanding itni tej thi ki kin aati missile ko hawa me blast karna hai aur kise takrane rikna hai, yah sab calculate kar ke poore bede ka accurate balance banayi hui thi...


Wahin 4 sahayak ke sath Gopal poore marak misslile ko oprate kar raha tha... Screen par najar banaye, kis ore se humla kitna tej ho raha hai, aur uske poori team ka nishana 5 alag alag direction...


Situation ye thi ki ek hi waqt me anti blastic missile ke sath, 5 alag-alag positions par, Viggo viman ke sath 1 carore viman ki missiles target kar rahi thi... Itni confusion create hoti ki caroron anti blastic missile ke sath aa rahi caroron distroyer missile aise ulajte ki... Dushman viman anti blastic missile ko bhi nishana bana rahe the, jo pahle se unhi ke kisi ek missile ko rokne ja rahi hoti...


Haan Astak ke vimano ki sankhya itni thi ki viggo viman ko hara pana koi muskil kaam nahi hota, lekin koi command na hone ke karan sab indipendent command me the... Yahan bhi unke round circle dhwast hote ja rahe the... Bitti aur Gopal ki team unki charity me koi kasar nahi chhod rahi thi...


Luna ne ab apne pass ke 5 lakh makkhiyon ko khula chhoda... Earth ke aircrafts madmast apni chal me bilkul vimano ke bich se ghuste huye humla karte upar ke ore badhna shuru kar chuke the…


Inke circle aise dahna shuru ho gaye mano kisi building ki sidhiyan dhwast ho'kar girna shuru ho chuki ho.. Charo ore se hawa me kewal missile hi missle the... Charo ore dhuvan aur malva... Un dhuyen aur malwe ke bich se, hawa me klaa dikhate 5 lakh earth aircrafts. Kab wo apni 40 lakh missles, ek poore circle par girate, kisi ko bhanak tak nahi lagti. Itne close range se ye log missiles gira rahe the ki inke anti blastic missile tak ke pass koi jawab nahi...


Charo ore ke lagatar humle ko dekh'kar Luna ne ek video conferencing OMU mukhyalay ke sath ki... Aur mukhyalay ne Luna ko OMU me sabhi planet par live kiya.


"Aap ki surakha ki jimmedari OMU ke hathon me hain aur aap sab surakhsit hain. Humare war heros ko laut aane dijiye, fir ek jaam jit ke naam toast karenge"….


Chal rahe ladai ke bich Luna apne logon ko poorn aaswashn de'kar, ek baar fir charo ore najar dene lagi... Vimano ki ghamashan aur missile ki ladai me ek ore jahan 199 tukdiyan aage badhti hui apne dushman vimano ko charo ore se samete ja rahi thi, wahin lagbhag 8 carore earth ke aircrafts unhe bich se aisa dard de rahe the, ki jawabi humle me dushman ke viman bus charo ore apne arbon missile ka beda kahin bhi daag rahe the, jo poora beasar...


Wahin Viggo viman ko ghere khade 2000 caror viman ke bedon par to shurwati kahar naa ke barabar hi tha... Lekin jab se earth ke fighter jets ko bahar chhoda gaya.. fir Viggo viman ke artilleries commanding officer, Bitti aur Gopal baith'kar, missile dagne ki series par aise kaam karte gaye, ki inki poori circle teji se dhwast hona shuru ho chuki thi…


Jis circle ko Earth ke fighter plane dha rahe the uss circle ke upar bahut se viman tabah hone ke liye mare ja rahe the, aur dragons team unhi par dhyan kendrit kiye thi...


Umda ran'niti ke sath ab to in 2000 carore vimano bede me bhi teji sendh lagna shuru ho chuka tha… ladte huye takriban 10 se 12 ghante ho gaye jab Luna ke pass command mila aur cease fire ke order mile...


Sabhi viman apni poretection ghere me laut chuke the… Dushman ke bache huye takriban 300 carore viman se bhi firing band ho chuki thi. Issi ke sath Luna apne sabhi viman ko wapas apne base par laut'kar sabhi causlties report karne bol di...


Middle Universe me yudhh samapti ke sath hi adhikarik ghoshna jari karte huye Luna sabko suchit kar dee... "Hum apna kshetr surakhit karte huye, jit hasil kar chuke hain... Dark Universe ke ander se ab tak koi suchna nahi pahunchi hai... Jald hi hum poore yudhh ke bare ek adhikarik ghoshna jari karenge"…

super se bhi uper

 

[mashish]

Update:-112 (A) ​

Khel-khel me har khiladi apna best dene ke liye hi utra tha. Kaun kis par bhadi padta iska aaklan to nahi kiya ja sakta tha, kyonki dono hi paksh ek dusre ko maarne ki kshmta rakhte the. Bus kaun apne pitare me, kaun sa chaukane wala dav bacha'kar rakhta hai, aur kitni kusalta se usse aajmata hai hai, poora khel ussi par depend tha. Yahan kamjor kaun hai...


Arhcemia ka jaise hi ishara hua "kato gala dono ka"... Ek bhuchal sa jaise utha ho uss mashtishk mahal me... Chham-chham ki ek sath lakhon awaj ki khuff to uss dhun ko sun'kar paida ho jaye... Aur jab mahal se bahar nikal'kar sabhi ne dekha to hosh gum the…


Sanbse aage Jivisha khadi thi, uske thik pichhe anginat ujle Shaye, kuchh masthisk mahal ke seema ke ander to kuchh seema ke bahar... Jivisha apni payal ki chham-chham ke sath 2 kadam aage badhayi, aur ussi ke sath lakhon paun chham-chham ke sath aage badhe...


Payal ka wo ek sath chham-chham ki awaj, wahan base bhooton ke dil me bhi khuff pida kar de. Ek pal ke liye sabka kaleja kaanp gaya. Khuffnak awaj aur hairan kar dene wala manjar tha, kyonki abhi bhi to Jivisha upar mahal me hi tangi thi. Lahuluhan aur lagbhag mari si haalat me.... Arhcemia kuchh bolne ko hui, tabhi Surpmarich usse rokte.... "To tumhe mashtishk mahal ka raaj pata chal gaya"…


Jivisha:- "Bhag lo abhi yahan se Surpmarich mukhaute, kyonki iss shakti khand me jo striyon ke sath anyay hua hai, uska hisab chukane main apne sath lakho maa ko le'kar aayi hun. Ek istri aur uske navjaat par huye anyay ki kahani sun'kar inke dilon me itni aag lagi hai ki kuchh pal me yahan sabko barbad karke niklegi"...

"Jaan bacha sakte ho to aaj tum sab apni jaan bacha lo, bhagne ke liye sara brahmand khula hai.. Lekin wada hai tum sab se, aaj bhagte waqt tumhe yah ehsas ho jayega ki ye brahmand kitni chhoti hai".…


Jivisha hunkar bharti apni dono bahen failayi aur dekhte hi dekhte wahan Nilbhut samuday ki lakhon istriyon ki kalpnik sarir, uss mashtishk mahal me praves kar chuki thi...


Surpmarich ka ek Ansh Pratham mantr jaap se wahan ki sabhi kaali aatmon ko jagana shuru kiya, jo iss mashtishk mahal ki rakshak thi... Jivisha ki atthas bhadi hansi thi aur ussi ke sath kahar ka manjar shuru ho chuka tha...


Dono hath Jivisha ne jaise hi failaye, sabhi Nilbhut striyan uss mahal me charo ore failti chali gayi... Samne fir sankhya kitni hi uss jagah ke rakshak aatmaon ki... Nilbhut samuday ki striya saanp ka fanda itni teji se sabke gale me dalti ja rahi thi, ki sabki aatma dhuan ban'kar hawa ho rahi thi...


Atma khinchne wali Rani Bhakshnee, judi arbon aatmaon ke sath aur har kisi ke hath me tha aatma khinchne ka fanda…. Humla ke mukhya kendr, Jivisha par ek sath arbon aatmaon ka fanda ek sath hawa me uchhalta aaya…


Hawa me charo ore se fande hi fande. Jivisha apni jagah khadi, na hili aur na hi gayab hui... Apni jagah khadi rahi... Uski atthas se paripoorn hansi, jaise Lalkaar thi... Gulamon ki basti me ek azad panchhi ne apne bhay ka chhota sa parichay pahle karwaya tha… Ab to sabke jinda rahne ki aajmaish kar rahi thi Jivisha…


Aatma khinchne wale fande ke upar fanda chadha tha. Itne sare fande ki Jivisha kahin gayab si ho gayi… Aisa laga kisi ped par itne fande lage ki fande ki motai 100 pipal ke vriksh ke saman ho gayi...


Charo ore se arbon aatmaon ki jor aajmaish shuru. Fanda dhire-dhire simat'ta chala ja raha tha, lekin kis ore… Arbon aatmayen ek sath poore jod laga'kar wah fanda khinch'kar poore ke poore Jivisha ko nichod lena chah rahi thi, isliye poori takat laga'kar ek sath wo apne sire ko khinch rahi thi...


Pahle 10 minute ki kosis aur sab mil'kar apne fande ko ek inch na khinch payi… Yah najara dekhne ke sath hi Surpmarich wahan se Arhcemia aur 8 Raniyon ko le'kar bahar nikal aaya... Aur idhar Jivisha apne raudra roop me tandav karna shuru kar chuki thi...


Arbon hath jo fande ko thame the poore jor laga'kar apne sire ko khinchne lage... Ek inch bhi fande ko khinch to nahi paye, lekin Jivisha gol ghumna shuru kar chuki thi.. Arbon aatmayen jor laga'kar fande ka sira khinch'kar khud ko aage badhne se rokne ki, ji tod kosis karne lagi par jaise-jaise Jivisha gol ghum rahi thi, Jivisha ke badan se fanda lipat'ta chala ja raha tha..


Bhakshnee ki khud ki apaar shakti, jiske ander kayi carore aatmaon ki shakti thi. Aur uske sath madadgar arbon aatmayen jo na jane kitne hazar varshon se uss mashtishk mahal me thi. Sabhi poori takat lagaye dono hath se fande ka sira poori takat se pakdee hui thi. Khud ko khinchen se rokne ke liye, aiediyon ko uss bhumi me lagbhag gaad dee thi, ye caroro aatmayen… lekin aediyon ke jod par bhi khud ko khinchne se nahi rok pa rahi thi... Arbon aatmayen aediyon ke support par viprit takat laga'kar bachna to chah rahe the, lekin inch dar inch arbon khisssssss khissssss ki aawaj ke sath, khinchti hui ja rahi thi...


Jivisha gol-gol ghunti rahi fanda simata gaya, ek circle me hazaron aatma aakar Jivisha ke upar poora lipti, uske upar dusre circle ki aatmayen, fir teesre... Jivisha gol-gol ghumti rahi, aatma ke upar aatma poora lipat'ti chali ja rahi thi... Sabse niche wali aatma unhi ke aatma khinchne wale fande ka davab jhel nahi payi…


Ab to har ek round circle par, niche ki aatma poori tarah se dhuan ban'kar uddna shuru ho gayi. Jivisha ghumti rahi aur aatmaon ko mukti milti gayi... Wahin Nilbhut samuday ki striyan, jo ek maa bhi thi... Har uss maa ke dard ka badla le rahi thi jo iss shakti khand ka shikar hokar apne bacche tak ko kha gayi...


Haiwaniyat ke iss shakti khand par beraham thi Nilbhut stri... Prakop aisa ki bharm jaal rani samne aayi apne caroron aatmaon ke sath bharm dikhana shuru kiya... Aur tabhi un sabhi aatmaon ne uss fijaon me hi zahar ghol diya...


Zahar naag phans sammohan ka. Bacche paida karne wali iss factory me jaise hi Nilbhut striyon ne naag phans sammohan istamal kiya, sabhi machine jaise pagal ho gayi... Iss kshetr ki sabse kamjor nabj, jiske chapet me to ab wo bhi the jo aatma ko khinchne wale fande ko jakde huye the...


Astak ki 8 raniyan yahan mahal me thi... Jisme se 4 mahal ke bahar lad rahi thi… 4 apne guton ke sath mahal ke ander intzar kar rahi thi... Ek ore kahar Nilbhut striyon ka.. Mantr mugadh hokar nachti hui 3 raniyan bhi wahin par thi... Sharp fanda gale me lagta aur dhuyen ki tarah kaali aatma udti rahi...


Wahin Jivisha lagatar gol ghum kar apne upar aatmaon ka ambar sa laga di... Apne sarir ke upar lipte aatmaon par rassi ka khinchav itna tej rakhi thi ki mano ulta ab wo fande se aatmaon ko jakad kar uss ki leela samapt karne me juti hui thi...


Thik uss waqt jab Surpmarich 8 Raniyon ko le'kar mashtisk mahal se hawa hua, ek sochi samjhi ran'niti ke tahat wahan se nikla tha... Surpmarich ek sunischit ran'niti ke tahat mashtisk mahal me pahuncha tha. Jahan 18 Raniyon me se 10 rani poorn roop se mashtisk mahal me thi, wahin 8 Raniyon ke sath Surpmarich kisi anya sthan se anterdhyan ho'kar unke kalpnik sharir ke sath mashtishk mahal me pahuncha tha.


Thik waise hi jaise Jivisha Nilbhut ki striyon ke sath pahunchi thi, kalpnik sharir ke sath. Haan lekin iss baar Jivisha ka kalpnik sharir chaukane wala tha, kyonki wo kalpnik sharir na ho'kar jaise apne vastavik sharir ke sath praves ki ho.


Surpmarich ne yah tay to kiya tha ki Jivisha apne kalpnik sharir ke sath Mashtishk mahal pahunchegi... Lekin iss prakar chaunka'kar pahunchegi uski ummid na thi. Akshand mantr ke prayog se apne aatma ke chhote se hisse ko, apna sampoorn roop de'kar Jivisha pahle akeli aayi...


Surpmarich bhi chhal niti ka bahut purana khiladi tha. Jaldbaji nahi kiya aur Jivisha ke maarne ki dusri niti jo usne pahle se soch'kar rakhi thi, uspar kaam karne se pahle uske yun akele aane ka karan samajhne ki kosis karne laga...


Jahan ek ore Surpmarich apne siddhi ke jor par matr 8 aatmaon ko apne sath jod'kar, 8 kalpnik sharir ke sath mashtishk mahal me ghusa tha... Wahin Surpmarich ne jo aage anubhav kiya usme Jivisha apni aadhi shakti ke sath, Nilbhut samuday ki lakhon striyon ke kalpnik sharir ke sath jud'kar tandav karne mashtisk mahal me ghus chuki thi.


Surpmarich ko Jivisha ki shaktiyon ka aabhash ho chuka tha. Wah samajh chuka tha ki Jivisha na sirf mashtishk mahal ke bare me janti hai, balki koi to hai jisne Jivisha ka gyan iss had tak badha diya hai ki wo mashtishk mahal ke ranbhumi me jit rahi hai.


Surpmarich jab sunischit hua ki Jivisha apne aatma ko 2 bhag me vibhajit kar'ke, ab wo poori tarah se yahan pahunch gayi hai... Waqt tha asli dav khelna ka... 1000 carore vansaj fauj iss core planet par bhi the... Aur unke bich thi 8 rani aur Surpmarich ka sharir... Apne sath 8 Raniyon ko le'kar wo sharir me praves kiya aur turant hi poori fauj ke sath nikal gaya Jivisha aur baki Nilbhut striyon ke achet sharir par humla karne...


Jivisha ka kalpnik sarir iss waqt mashtisk mahal me asankhya aatmaon ko mukti dene me vyast thi. Viman me ginti ke log, kyonki Nilbhut sabhi ladakon ki aatma bhi Jivisha ke sath, iss se achha mauka kya tha, Jivisha aur uske shathiyon ke sharir ko nasht kar'ke apni jit sunischit karne...


Mahal se 200 km ki duri par tha 1000 carore vansaj fauj ka jamavda... Aur wo dhire-dhire aage badh chale.… Ek bahut badi bhul aur Surpmarich ke poore galat aakaln ke sath.…


Iss core planet par ek smuday aur basta tha, jispar Astak ke julm ki kahani kuchh aisi thi ki, unke samuday ke 20-30 ghar aur takriban 150 se 200 logon ki chhoti-chhoti bastiyan, pichhle hazaron salon se, pidhi dar pidhi pratarit hoti aa rahi thi…


Yah mul roop se Arhcemia ka hi samuday tha, lekin ek lamha wo unhe khushi ka na de saki thi... Wo samuday aur koi nahi balki Viggo ka sabse pratarit samuday tha… Shayad wo yahan se vilupt ho bhi jate... Apni gulaam bhare nasib se khud ko aazadi bhi dilva dete...


Lekin atmhatya jaisi kayarta ko na apna'kar, har pal ye khud ko taiyar karte rahe... Bhale ek chhoti si Viggo basti par lakhon giddhon ki najar thi... Bhale Arhcemia apne samuday ka dimag me ghus'kar uski mansa ko parakh leti aur utna hi kurur ho jati... 100 julm ek baar me sahte the, baagi hai iss baat ko jatate rahe aur baar-baar mana karne ke baad bhi apni taiyari karte rahe...


Surpmarich aur Arhcemia, apne pichhe 7 Astak rani aur 1000 carore ki fauj liye aage badhte rahe... Iss se pahle ki wo bade se maidan ko paar kar'ke kuchh fit chaude rajsahi sadak par, poori fauj viman ke samne la khada karte… Wahan unka rasta roke khade the wo 12 lakh Viggo samuday ke sabhi log... Aur un sab ka netritv karti sabse aage khadi thi Shwetna...


Sadiyon se atyachar ki aag me tadapte log, sadiyon se apman me ghut'te jhulaste log. Sadiyon se jise badjaat kaha gaya aur jiske khun ko gaali de'kar dhudhkarte rahe... Uske samuday ke har ladaka jo samrthya rakhta tha ladne ka, apne hathon me talvar liye wahan apni bhujayen chaudi kar rahe the...

awesome update

 

[mashish]

Update:-112 (B) ​

"Tummmmmmmm"… Arhcemia un samuday ke logon ko "tum badjaat gandi khun"… kahne hi wali thi ki uske honth sil gaye... Arhcemia telepathy karne wali thi, tabhi uski sari mansik tarange uske dimag me ek baar fir waise hi ghusne lagi jaisa kabhi Orja ne uske tarangon ko uske dimag me sametna shuru kar diya tha...


Arhcemia ne turant hi apna teleportation band kiya aur thik ussi waqt bich se rasta khula... Chhammmm... Chhammmm... Chhammmm... Chhammmm... Wahi khatarnaak payal ke chham-chham ki awaj... Iss baar poore lahra'kar aur echo ke sath aa rahi thi... Har chham ki uth'ti dhun aisi thi ki kaleja na chahte huye bhi baith jata...


Aur tabhi samne se wah alokik swaroop bhi najar aane lagi jo bilkul chamak rahi thi... Jivisha ko dekh'kar hi Arhcemia ke sath sabhi rani aur Surpmarich sabhi khauff me aa gaye. Kisi gauravsali rani ki tarah bilkul gurur ke sath aa'kar wo sabse aage khadi hui.


Uske kamarband ke dono kinare se 2 latakte mayan ki talvaar, iss baat kee gawah thi ki aaj Jivisha ki talvar chalegi... Saree ka faada bich se 2 bhagon me vibhajit ho chuka tha, ye chetavni thi ki rani swyam iss yudhh ko aage rahkar ladne wali hai...


2 kalpnik hissa shakti swaroop Jivisha ka Mahal aur Viman me tha aur apne ek tihai shakti ke sath Jivisha khud ladai ke maidan me, apne poorn goroor aur abhimaan ke sath khadi thi... Uss mashush si jagah me Jivisha ka hona hi un sabke dil me khauff paida kar rahi thi, jo yahan ki bhumi, jal aur aakash ko apne shaktyon se badhe huye the.…


"Tum ne to aaj wakai mujhe sochne par majboor kar diya ki ek jivan kaal me aakhir itni siddhiyan kaise le sakta hai koi. Ya fir Vish-Kritima shuru se chhalava karti aa rahi hai aur wo bhi meri tarah sanjoye rahi apni skatiyan"… Surpmarich jab apni kah raha tha, uski jhujhlahat saaf jhalak rahi thi.


Jivisha uski aawaj me uska chid'chidapan saaf mehsus kar sakti thi... Lekin aaj shayad wo bilkul bhi baat karne ya kisi ke ke prashn ka uttar dene ki ikkchhuk thi…


"Meenaaaa... Beta apni kasam nibha... Aur jab iss Arhcemia ke badan ko noch'kar, har ek ang ko alag karna to fir koi raham mat dikhana, bina dare aage badho"…


Jivisha ne Meena ko bina dare aage badhne ke sanket diye aur hawa me bade-bade dragons 50 ki sankhya me the.. Complete mettalic suit ke Kamal ki desine, kamal ki dur darshita aur kisi chij ke nirman me Decca technology ka koi jabav nahi. Apne lambe meteallic pankh failaye, rang-birange rang ke complete mettelic suit pahne 50 dragon wahan ke aakash ko dhake the...


Shwetna apni hath hawa me utha'kar sabhi dragon babies ko apni postion hold karne boli.… Ek kadam wo aage badhti...


"Humne suna hai yahan ki aakash aur jamin sab tumhari hai... Isliye dono kshetr ko parakhne ke liye hum chale aaye aur dekho sath me kuchh dost bhi laye hain... Jyada chaukne ki jaroorat nahi hai kyonki jis Vardali ko tumne kaam par lagaya tha usne apna kaam bahut khubsurti se kiya hai... Aaj hume bhi dikhao ki ye jamin aur aakash kitni tumhari hai aur apne iss kide makodon ki fauj se hume kitna nuksan pahuncha sakti ho"


"Sathiyon na raham karo na ruko... Bus badhte raho aur khauff ka manjar dikhate raho"…


Jivisha apne dono hath me talvaar thame hawa me ki... Arhcemia ne bhi humle ki hunkaar bhadi aur daur chale dono ore se...


12 lakh Viggo apne pratisodh ki aag ka badla lene badh chale... 1000 carore ki vishal sena samne se dauri chali aa rahi thi aur ye 12 lakh Viggo dono kinaron se line bana'kar tej daur'kar unhe kinaron se poora gher rahe the... 50 bekauff dragon babies aakash me uddte aage badh chale...


Sabhi vansaj fauj aakash me apne hath upar kiye apne charo ore phaile dushman par bijli, acid aur toofan ki barshat kiye. Wahin Jivisha apne aatma ke 2 tukde uss mahal me tandav kar chhod aayi aur ek tihai shkatiyon ke sath khud ran bhumi me khadi… apne dono hathon me talvar liye...

Talvar bhi aisi ki jo dikhne me to matr kuchh fit ki thi, lekin jis ore talvar ka ishara ho jaye, fir wo maidan ke aakhri tak talvar apna kahar dikhati. Aakhir me khade narbhakshiyon aur in sade se badan ke malikon ko ek sath Jivisha ke talvar ka aabash ho jata, kyonki jab talvar chalti tab dikhta hawa ka wo adrishya talvar jo chalne ke sath hi apna aakaar (shape) dikhata…


Hawa hi jaise aaj Jivisha ki saarthi bani ho... Lahrati wo teji ke sath ja khadi thi dushmano ke bich me... Vansaj sena ke har hath jo vayumandal se energy khinch rahe the... Jivisha ke bayen hath ki lahrati talvar uss energy ko kaat rahi thi… aur aaj to jaisi unka abhedi sharir makkhan bana hua tha... Jivisha pahle aage badhi aur apne dayen hath ke talvaar ko lahra'kar ek sath bhumi par lakhon sar ek sath gira'kar bhumi ko rakhtranjit kar, yudhh ka aagaj poore khuffnaak aur berahmi ke sath karti.….


"Mukti ko taras rahe logon ko aaj mukti de do Viggo... Kahar ban'kar barso aur dikha do kitni aag dahak rahi hai tumhare sine me. Aaj tumhe inki shakti nahi rok shkti... Kahar bankar toot paroo... Na ruko aur na raham karoooo"..


Lakhon sar kat'kar jamin par gide. Khun ke fawaade chhodta dhar tadapte huye niche bhumi par gir raha tha. Jivisha kurta ka parichay deti jaise hi Viggo ke lambe tadap ko bhadkayi fir to... apne tej daud ke liye mashoor Viggo, poore vansaj fauj ko kinaron se gherte huye... jab unki talvaron ne vansaj fauj ka imtihaan lena shuru kiya, fir to hawa me hath uthana bhool gaye. Vayumandaliya urja istamal kaise karni hai bhool gaye. Hath poora upar utne se pahle Viggo apni poori raftaar ke sath apne hone ka parichay dete aage badh jate.… Hath upar ko ja rahe hote aur gala kat'kar niche jamin par.


1000 carore bhid ko charo ore kinaron se Viggo ne ghera.. khun ke chhinte uddte, maans haddiyan sahit kat'kar jamin par bikharti aur charo ore se Viggo ne kaatna shuru kar diya tha... Bebas aur lachhar Astak Vansaj 12 lakh Viggo se aise ghire ki baukhlahat me bus apne sathiyon ka kata sar hawa me dekh rahe the. Bhagna chah to rahe the lekin inhe poora gherkar marna shuru kar chuke the Viggo ladake...


Arhcemia, Surpmarich aur uske sath 8 raniyan dhire-dhire kadam pichhe le rahi thi… "Surpmarich tumhari siddhiyan kahan gayi, istamal karo na"…


Surpmarich:- Usne sampurn mantr ka jaap sikh liya hai... Meri aatma ko bandh di hai sharir se...


Arhcemia:- Matlab..…


Surpmarich:- Matlab tumhare mahal se khud ko jodna mujhe nakara bana diya hai... Tumhara mahal hi kamjor par gaya hai aur uske sath meri shabhi shkatiyan bhi uss mahal ke adhin ho'kar ghut gayi hai... Hathon se bijli nikal raha hun to 12 volt ka current aa raha hai... Ab kya gudgudi kar dun...


Arhcemia:- Matlab…


Surpmarich:- Matlab ya to bhag lo ya maro.… Mera kya hai main mar bhi gaya to fir sharir badal lunga...


"Hahahaha... Tu shaktiyon ki talash me murkh ban gaya Surpmarich…. Teri siddhi aur skatiyan to adhin ho gayi iss mahal ki... Aur jo teri aatma bandhi thi Zoren ke mahal se, usse humne bandh diya hai... Tumhari aatma ko naya sharir dene wala koi shakti uss mahal se bahar nahi aayega lekin aaj tere charo ansh ka vinash tay hai".….


Jivisha apni baat samapt karne ke baad kaal ban'kar lahrayi... Lahrate talvaron me jaise rakt pyas jagi ho. Hawa ke sath uski lahrati dono talvaren, ek ke baad ek chalana shuru kar chuki thi. Dhar se gardan alag karna shuru kar chuki thi... Ek sath lakhon Kate sar bhumi par. Gardan se rakt ka favada nikal raha aur kannpta hua khun me bhinga badan niche jamin par...


Kinaron se Viggo ki beraham talvaren bhumi ko rakhranjit kiye aage badh rahi thi... Charo ore maut ki chikhen… kati fati lash ranbhumi me bikharte ja rahi thi…. Bich se Jivisha hawa ke rath par sawar, apne talvar ko lahrati bhumi ko rakhtranjit kar rahi thi…. 5 minute viram ke baad Meena bhid se apna target dhund chuki thi... Arhcemia ke milte hi, wo humla karne aage badhi...


Meena ke sath hi uske sabhi sathi aakash se humla shuru kar chuke the. "Sunnnnnn.… Shiiiiiii... Bhommmmm'... Kuchh aise hi hawa se tej dhwani, niche jamin par aati aur agle hi pal... Kisi ki nili wave jamin se takra'kar visphot ke sath-sath, aisi tej bijli ki aandhi sath me le aati ki maans chhod haddiyan kadak jati aur bikhre huye lothre charo ore hote...


Meena aage badhi apni shikar ke ore. Bacchi galti kar gayi 8 Raniyon ke bich ja'kar… aayi thi to Arhcemia ko pakadne lekin bharm jaal ke chapet me fans'kar rah gayi... Aur agle hi pal ek Rani ka panja aur paun itne chaude ho gaye ki Meena ko jamin se patak kar, uske metal lage gardan ko apne paun niche daba'kar kuchalne lagi.. Meena ka 1 pankh body ke niche fansa aur dusre pankh ko wo rani apne bade se panje me jaise hi jakdi... Ek toofan sa utha tha fir...


Jivisha tej hawa ke veg se lahrati hui bich se sabko kaat'ti hui aage badhi... Yudhh ki kaman ab usne diya Shwetna ke hath me, aur khud pahunchi uss madhya me jahan ab tak wo 8 raniyan khud ko mehfuj ki hui thi...


Ek bada sa bharm jaal banane ki kosis aur agle hi pal Jivisha ne apni talawar ko hawa me ghuma'kar, itni tej pichhe jhatka ki dono talvar adrishya gati se pichhe ke ore gayi... Ek Rani jo khud pichhe rakh'kar, aage bharm paida karne ki kosis kar rahi thi aur dusri raani ussi ke samanantar khadi ho'kar Jivisha par khatarnak rashayan ki barish karne wali thi... Jivisha ke hath ki dono talvar tej gati se hawa me lahrati, pichhe khadi dono Raniyon ke gardan ko faadte huye sida jakar viman me ghus gayi... Un dono rani ke sar talwar ki nok par viman se latak raha tha...



Jivisha hawa ki rath par sawar jaise hi pahunchi, apni berahmi se awgat karwati 2 rani ke sar sidha viman se taang di aur samne chal rahe najare ko dekh Jivisha tej chillati.… "Mere bacchon se dur raho"…


Jivisha ke tej gusse se wahan ke charo ore ka vayumandal hi laal sa dikh raha tha aur hawa me bana Jivisha ka vishalkay laal chehra jo kayi varg kilometer tak poore aakash ko dhake tha. Jivisha apne hathon se hawa ka panja banayi aur uss giant rani ke upar aur niche ke jabde ko pakadti hui faadna shuru kar dee...


"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa" … ki bhayanak chinkh se poora maidan hi ek pal ke liye saham gaya…. Jivisha apne hawa ke dono panje se uske vishal hote jabde ko faarna shuru kar di... Itne me Shwetna ne ek dur ka daud liya... Teji se daudte huye wo aayi aur hawa me uncha chhalang lagati jabde ke bich ke gape me, poora talvar chala'kar bich muh ko ho kaat girayi...


Shwetna ne fir maut ki hunkaar bhadi.... "Sathiyon na rukooo... Na raham karooo".


Maidan ke charo ore se Viggo ki tej chinkh ke sath, vansajon ke kaatne ka khel bhi tej ho gaya... Dragon babies hawa se tabahi ka manjar dikhane lage..... "Na ruko, na raham karo"… "na ruko, na raham karo"… "na ruko na raham karo"… Maidan ke charo ore gunj rahi thi...

super action update

 

[mashish]

Update:-113 (C) ​

Nischal naag Dansh ka prayog nahi kar sakta tha, kyonki koi bhi uska sathi pass nahi tha. Aisi shoorat me uska prabhav sab par barabar padta... Hawa me udd rahe dragons babies kisi tarah unchai par to gaye, lekin agle hi pal jo Nischal ne apne aankhon ke aage ka najara deka... Khatrnaak aur utna hi dahla dene wala tha…


Daudte huye wo giants hawa me chhalang laga'kar dragons ko pakad'kar bhumi par patak'kar unhe raund shuru kar diye... Aur unhe kuchalte huye nikal rahe the Chhote-chhote fighter plan ko pakad kar patak rahe the... Nischal wapas daudne ke liye nikla hi tha tabhi Surpmarich ne uske paun me wahi lep se humla kar chuka tha jis lep ka prayog wahan Jivisha par Pratham karta ya kar chuka hota...


Yahan bhi maut ka sikanja kas chuka tha aur sath me khada tha Astak jisne Nischal ke sar jama diya. Nischal ka sharir thand ko pacha nahi pata tha, iss baat ka fayda utha'kar Astak ne uske brain ko minus temprature par le ja raha tha...


Idhar Serin ko kisi football ki tarah khel rahe the ye log... Dragon babies lagatar paun ke niche raunde ja rahe the…. HuYu aur uski poori team tin ke dabbe bane huye the. Ye log giants ko apne metallic suit se, chhote bade jhatke dena to chahte the, lekin inki gati aisi thi ki kab maar'kar nikal ja rahe the, pata hi nahi chal raha tha...


Sabse budi sthiti to un Nilbhut sainikon ki hui. Jo bahar nikale huye the.… Takriban 12 lakh Nilbhut samuday ke log kuchle ja rahe the. In giants ke paun me wahi chain bandhi thi, jis wajah se ye bhumigat nahi ho pate, lekin apne bade se panje ko bhumi par patakar wahan se bhumigat Nilbhut sainikon ko nikal'kar sidha muh me rakh kar chaba rahe the…


Nischal ke sarir par mitti ki lep chadh raha tha. Giants iss size ke the, Nischal ranbhumi ke mahol ko nahi dekh pa raha tha. Uska dimag jam gaya tha aankhen band si hone lagi, bus wo mehsus kar raha tha ki uske logon ki jaan khatre me hai... Bus usse mehsus ho raha tha ki uske bacche mar jayenge... Bus usse mehsus ho raha tha ki usse yahan nahi pahle apne logon ke sath hona chahiye tha...


Dimag garam na jane kitne digree tak hua ho... Sar ke upar ka barf bhaap ban'kar uddne sa laga... Surpmarich aur Astak uske bilkul karib the aur hans rahe the... Nischal apni nidra se jaagne ki kosis kar raha tha. Matr ek lep se uske paun hi to bandhe the, lekin sarir se mano jaan nikal gayi ho..


Wah hath uthana chahta tha, lekin hath utha nahi pa raha tha... Nischal ke kaan me kahin dur se dard bhari chinkh aa rahi thi... Uske sabhi logon ki chinkh... Nandni aur doctor Ansh ki chinkh. Sharirik urja uski shunya ho rahi thi kintu dimag garam, poora garam ho raha tha.


Sar par jama barf chhan-chhan kar'ke bhaap ban'kar udd raha tha… Apne logon ki pira usse mehsus ho rahi thi... Ek pal me, Nandni ke sath bitaya har dirishya dimag me naach gaya aur jo aanshu kabhi apni maa ke khone par chhalke the, wo aanshu aankhon se bahne lage.…


Ek yodhha ranbhumi ke sabse bade niyam ko tod chuka tha. Chal rahi ladai me wo apne aanshu baha raha tha... Ragon me khun ki raftaar bilkul madyam thi. Hath me kanjar tha aur inch bhar ke fasle par Nischal ka shikar... Lekin hath uthana to dur wah hila bhi nahi pa raha tha... Kintu dimag vichlit tha... Aankhon me gussa.. aur jahan me ek hi khyal... "Mere log musibat me hain, main nahi pahuncha to wo maare jayenge"


Nischal aankh munda, poora dhyan kendrit kiya. Dhyan lagaane ke kuchh pal baad hi Nischal ka kalpnik sharir sidha ghus gaya Surpmarich ke dimag me.… Achambhit aur akalpniya tha. Itihaas me aaj tak jo kabhi nahi hua, wah sambhav ho chuka tha... Nischit mirtyu ki jakad se Nischal apne kalpnik sharir ko bahar nikal chuka tha...


Jaise hi Nischal Surpmarich ke dimag ke ander ghusa, bahar uske muh se dard bhadi chinkhon ke sath sirf itna hi nikalta raha.… "Nahiii, nahiii, nahiii, aaaaaaaaa... Nahiiiii.… Aaaaaaaaaa.. Nahiii… yeee sambahavvvv nahiiii"


Surpmarich ki sari siddhiyan to uss mitti ke lep me uljhi thi, aur nischit Mirtyu ke liye japa gaya mantr ab usse hi uljha chuka tha. Dard se bibilata hua Surpmarich ne lakh kosis kar lee lekin lep me uski siddhiyan uljhi thi aur apne kalpnik sarir ko apne hi dimag me nahi bhej pa raha tha.


Ek second me 10 tarah ke kaat mantr ke jaap se kosis kar liya.. kuchh der me 1000 mantr phoonk diye... Aur anth me dard se bil-bila'kar apne sar ko dono hath se pakad'kar baith gaya... Naak se uske khun nikal dhar nikal raha tha. Shwans tootne laga tha. Ladkhadakar Surpmarich ka wo ansh bhumi par gir gaya... Apne hath Nischal ke ore kar'ke Astak ko kuchh dikhana chah raha tha, lekin Astak kuchh samjh nahi pa raha tha...


Itne me hi Nischal ki aankehn khul gayi... Mahaj 2 minute me wah, Surpmarich ke dimag ke ander ghus'kar, uske dimag ko tahas-Nahas kar chuka tha. Surpmarich ka wo ansh lagatar Astak ko apne hath se ishare karke Nischal ko marne ke liye kahna chah raha tha, lekin Astak ko kuchh samjh me nahi aaya.…


Idhar Nischal ka kalpnik sharir jaise hi uske sarir me lauta… jhatke me Nischal ne apni aankhen khol lee aur marta hua Surpmarich ke ansh Joy ko dekhne laga... Dard se wo karrah raha tha, uski aankhen badi ho'kar nikli ja rahi thi.… Kisi tarah shwans bachate…. "Aaaaaaaa, Nischal, kaiseeeee, kaiseeee mirtyuuu lipt sharpp se tumhara kalpnikkk sharirer bahar nikalll saktaaa haiiiii"…..


Apni baat kahte huye Joy ke pran nikal gaye.… Ghinuna sa dikhne wala Astak, wahan kya hua jab'tak samajh pata, Nischal ek laat Astak ke sine par aisa jamaya, wo kahin dur ja'kar gira. Nischal ran'bhumi ke ore hawa hote, Surpmarich ke mrit sharir se kahta chala.… "Dobara jab tum kisi ke sharir me ghus'kar wapas jinda hona, tab iska jawab dhundhna aur mujhe bhi bata dena"….


Nischal hawa sa tha... Daur chuka tha ranbhumi ke ore.… Astak ke sine par laat jamane ke sath hi giants ka bada varg ab Nischal ko nishane par liya. Caroron giants uske ore, utni hi tej gati se daure chale aa rahe the… Nischal daurte huye apni chain ek giants ke sine me fasaya... Ek to Nischal apni poorn raftar me, upar se wo chain ka chumbakiya khinchav.… Nischal ki gati ko char guna jyada badha gayi.… Udhar un giants ki raftar bhi Nischal ke barabar...


Jaise hi Nischal ne chain ek giants ke sine me fasaya, 100 kilometer ki lambi katar ke sabse aakhri wale giants ko faadte huye uske pith ke ore se bahar nikla... Kisi bhi giants ko pata hi nahi chala ki mahaj ek second me kya ho gaya… wo teji se daur rahe the aur duarte rahe... Daurte-duarte kab maut aayi pata hi nahi chala aur Nischal, us 1 second me.… Apne ore daur rahe giants ki ek lambi katar ka sina faad'kar, khun se sarobar hokar, pith se nikal chuka tha….


Lambe giants ki katar. Unche, lambe, dekhne me vishal aur dil me kampan paida karne wale. Utna vishal danav jis gati se daur raha tha, usse dekha nahi ja sakta tha. Lekin uske daur ki kampan vyabaah thi… Nischal bekhuff sa, jungle ke sher ki tarah sina tane, poorn dahar ke sath maidan ke kisi bhi hisse me, vishal se vishal aur majboot se majboot partidvandi ko chunauti de raha tha aur unki chunaiti swikaar bhi kar raha tha….


Kamjor yojna to Astak ki bhi nahi thi. Aaj yadi complete mettalic suit nahi hota, ya fir Saras aur Canon ke aircrafts "Hayber metal" se mask nahi hote, to rundne wali ye daur Nischal ke har ajij ko nigal chuki hoti. Apne aakrosh aur dridh sahas ka parichay jab Nischal ne diya, adrishya hokar daudrne wale giants ek sath dikhne lage. Kaleja faad kar Nischal nikal chuka tha. Bhayanak aur lahar wali chinkh ek sath uthi. Ek ke upar ek gir kar marte huye giants lashon ka uncha dher laga diye...


Jo jahan tha apni jagah ruk'kar wo najara bhi apne aankhon se dekhe, jab daurte huye vishal se danav ek dard bhari lambi chinkh ke bad dhamn se gir rahe the. Uske pichhe wale bhi waise hi chinkh'kar ussi ke upar girte. Wo bhi kya najara tha jab lakhon giants ke chinkh se maidan gunj uthi aur shreni kram me dhamn se poori katar hi laybadhh girti hui najar aane lgi.


Sabka dhyan aakarshit hua. Issi bich Nischal ko mahaj 10 second ka window mila tha, utne der me Nischal apne sabhi bacche Serin, Nandu, Anash HuYu aur uski poori team ko ek kinare samet'kar, Nischal Naag Dansh bhumi me gaad chukha tha…. Jaise hi naah dansh bhumi me gada, ek baar fir poora maidan khali ho chuka tha…. Nischal ne turant Nilbhut sainikon ko upar naag-dansh ke ghere me aane ko kaha.…


Uske sabhi log pahunch chuke the… Nischal Aerobok ke kandhe par hath rakhta... "Humara kitna nusksan hua hai Aerobok"..


Aerobok:- Sahjada takriban 26 laakh log... Jinme se kaiyon ko ye chaba gaye... Aur...


Nischal:- Aur kya???


Aerobok:- 4 bacche gambir hai...


Nischal, ka dil dard se kaanp utha tha... Khud ko poorn shanti dete... "Aerobok main aur Serin yahan se in logon ko saaf karte niklenge... Hum apne ek bhi log pichhe nahi chhodenge... Jaise hi maidan saaf ho bhumigat ho'kar har kuchle sainik ko surakha ghere ke ander lao... Astak vansaj ko naag-dansh ke bare me shayad bata diya gaya hai. Wo maidan ke iss hisse me nahi aayenge. Dekho kisi me jaan baki hai to jivan do...


Aerobok:- Uske baad...


Nischal:- Mujhse puchh rahe ho uske baad... Upar aasman me dekho wo 2 carore chhote viman, 1000 carore viman se lad rahe... Aur un chhote viman ki apeksha kshmta me dushman ke sabhi viman advance hai... Lekin wo chhote viman wale jit rahe hain... Jante ho kyon…


Aerobok:- Kyonki chhota ya bada hona... Adhik ya kam takat hona mayne nahi rakhta, bus khud par bharosa aur hum me kya khas hai...


Nischal:- Aaj pani nahi to kya hua uske naak to bade hain... Unhe tej daurte huye dekh nahi sakte to kya hua... Bhumigat hone par usse upar mehsus to kar sakte ho...


Aerobok:- Hum samjh gaye Sahjade... Sabhi Nilbhut sainik... Taiyar rahenge unka chara ban'ne ke liye... Apne sathiyon ke jane ka jitna dard hai, uss se bhi jyada khatarnak dard bhari maut unhe denge...


Nischal:- Haan lekin khud ki jaan bacha'kar. Pahle inki ran'niti samjhne do. Yadi inki ran'niti ka gyan na ho to yudhh me kudna mat. Ladne jao aur fans'kar mar jao fir wo vyarth ka marna hoga aur aage kahin hume tumhari jaroorat hogi fir madad ke liye tum na rahoge... Ye yudhh ka maidan hai aur yahan marne walon ke liye aanshu nahi bahate... Dhairya rakho aur apne mauke ke liye thoda intzar karo...


Aerobok:- Ji Sahjade…


Nischal:- Nandni tu thik hai...


Nandni:- Haan thik hun...


Nischal, Nandni ke chehre se khun saaf karte…. "Doctor sahab aap thik hai"…


Ansh:- Haan main thik hun... Lekin HuYu..


Nischal:- Gaya kya???


HuYu:- Haan maar dalo mujhe hi... Main viman me hi thik hun... Yahan to sab paglon ki tarah daur rahe.. Koi dikhta hi nahi...


Serin:- HuYu sabko lekar viman me jao... Aur dekho ki wahan se kya kar sakte ho... Chale bhai...


Serin ke aankhon me Angaar the aur ab uske dono hathon me thi uski sabse kahar barsane wala hathiyar... Nischal apne hath se khanjar nikalte haan chalo.…

nice update

 

[mashish]

Update:-113 (D) ​

Naag-dansh ka takriban 100 kilometer ka dayra ban raha tha... Serin aur Nischal uss khali se maidan me dhime-dhime chale... Dayre me jitne sainik kuchle gaye the wahan tak ke sabhi Nilbhut sainikon ko Aerobok samet chuka tha aur aage koi najar hi nahi aa raha tha…


Aerobok chillaya… "Jo jamin me ghuse hain wo jamin ki gahrai unki nahi... Chalo unhe dikha de"...


Bache huye sainikon ke sath Aerobok ek baar fir bhimigat hua... Nischal aur Serin uss khali se maidan me aaram se chal rahe the.… "Kyon re vishes aur sharv'shresth samuday... Kis bil me ghus gaye… ya apne paida hone par afsos sa ho raha hai"


Koi jawab na aaya tab Serin jor se hansti hui.… "Kyon be badjaat... Itni hi teri aukaad thi… dar se kaanp raha hai kya kisi bil me chhip'kar"…


Serin abhi itna hi boli thi ki tabhi ek ke baad ek lakhon chhatpatate huye giants bhutal par aaye... Uski dard bhadi chinkh kafi dur se aa rahi thi, lekin itni unchi thi ki kaan faad rahi thi….


Nischal:- Tu kya sochta hai bill me chhipa rahega to maut nahi aayegi.… Tere baap tujhe bil se nikalne ghus chuke hain aur vishwas maan, mere diye maut me awaj nahi aati lekin unke diye maut ka dard itna hoga ki sab yahi soch rahe honge ki kaash maut Nischal ke hathon hoti to jyada achha hota...


Serin:- Wo dekh Astak…


Nischal:- Fir sochna kya hai... Daur laga... Raste me koi mile ki naa mile, usse jab dhar dabochenge tab sab apne aap bil bila'kar bahar aayenge...


Serin:- Naah iss fauj ka commander Surpmarich to maara gaya, bina command ki fauj abhi bahar aayegi jab Aerobok dobara kahar barsayega... Ruk ja ab to sab ko saaf karte huye chalenge... Abhi inki manmauji fauj, shadi ke baarat ki tarah niklegi... Jinhe bus haath utha'kar hawa se kuchh khinchna hai… bus itna hi...


Serin kahna bilkul sahi tha, lekin wahan se kewal giants hi nahi nikle balki nayi nikli fauj uss se bhi vishal thi... Arbon maar chuke the lekin jab fauj nikalna shuru hui to iss baar ki sankhya aur bhi jyada thi. Sabhi ke sabhi Nischal ki tarah tej dhavak aur sath hi sath inki apni kshmta aur iss baar ki ran'niti to bilkul alag...


Unke formation ko dur se hi dekh'kar… "Tune kya kaha tha manmauji fauj, bina commander ka... Suchna de pahle Nilbhut sabhi sanik bahar aaye aur surkaha gehre me jaye, warna inki taiyari dekhkar lagta hai uhne jamin me hi gaad denge"...


Serin ne turant suchna bheji, Nilbhut sainik, sabhi unke piche katar laga'kar khade ho gaye... Nischal unhe samjha'kar wapas Naag-dansh ke ghere me bheja...


Yahan aa'kar Nischal aur Serin dono wakai kafi surprise the. Ek anumanit tha ki jo inki shaktiyan hai, jaise ki bijli, acid rain ya fir anya vayumandaliya urja, in sab ke sath ladenge... Nischal aur Serin ne mil'kar taiyari bhi ussi hisab se ki thi...


Lakin jaise-jaise yudhh aage badh raha tha, inke ladne ke tarike bhi badal rahe the... Pahle vayumandaliya energy se lad rahe the, tab to Nischal and team ke liye mano bewakoof se sainik bhid lagaye khade the jo ek hi tarah ke yudhh karte aa rahe hain aur iss vajah se Nischal kahar ban'kar toota...


Fir pahle veg parivartak ne chaunkaya. Uske baad jaise hi Nischal ki poori team maindan me aayi, fir inki ran'niti ka pahla hissa dikha, jisme wakai Nischal ki team ko bahut bada nukshan ho jata yadi Hyber metal na hota…


400-500 fit wale giants Nischal ki gati se daud rahe the aur daudte huye humla kar rahe the... Yah itni gati se daur rahe the ki Nischal aur Serin ko chhod'kar koi bhi inhe dekh nahi sakta tha... Naubat yahan tak aa gayi ki yuddh ke maidan se sabki jaan bachani pari...


Nischal ne jaise hi naag-dansh ka prayog kiya ek baar fir sabhi sipahi bhumigat ho gaye... Haan iss baar thode surprise moves Nilbhut ne diye the jamin ke ander. Nilbhut ki bhumigat humla ka inke lakhon ki tadat par ek sath asar para... Par jab iss baar bahar aaye...


Poori fauj ladai ke formation me thi... 3 ke tikone formation ki poori katar bani thi. Gajab ki ye formation thi, jise Nischal aur Serin pahli baar dekh rahe the. Iss formation me 1 sipahi ke dayen aur bayen 2 sipahi khade the… Jo bich wala sipahi tha wah bilkul sidha khada tha... Uske dayen aur bayen khade sipahi, uske ek kadam aage khade the, jiska angel halka apne sidhe khade sipahi ke ore tha... Mano teeno mil'kar ek dusre ko support denge... Aur aise hi trikon ran'niti ki poori line thi, aur iss prakar ki 1000 line lagi thi...


Har kisi ke paun me wo ring bandhi thi, jinse inhe bhumigat nahi kiya ja sakta tha... Sabhi ke hath me dhal thi jo humla hone ki soorat me ek left se angel deta dhal ko, dusra right se aur bich wala samne se dhal laga'kar aage ke humle ko sealed kar deta, jiske pichhe in teeno ka poora sarir cover rahta...


Surakha intazamat ke baad inke hathiyar bhi kuchh alag dikh rahe the... Badan par bomb ki tarah kayi gole latke the, lekin ye bomb nahi ho sakta tha, kyonki yahan ka atmosphere bomb ke rashayan ko hawa me ghol dega...


Bich wale sainik ke hath me bhala tha aur dono kinare wale sainik ke hath me talvar, pichhe pith par ek bag tanga tha jiske ander na jane kaun sa rahasya chhipa hua tha...


Koi bhi unka sainik aage nahi badh raha tha aur apne jagah par hi khade ho'kar dhal par talwar patak rahe the, mano Nischal ko hi aage badhne ke liye kah rahe ho... Aur kahna chah rahe ho, "hume Naag-dansh ke prabhavit ilake ka gyan hai, ladai to uske bahar hi hogi"...


Nischal iss formation ka aaklan kar hi raha tha tabhi uski najar upar hawa me gayi... Serin apne chain me lohe ka pahad arthat hathoda dur se chala chuki thi... Wah hathoda kafi uncha udta hua unke upar gir raha tha, tabhi jaise Serin aur Nischal ne apni aankhen mij lee ho...


Lohe ke uss 100 tan vajni hathode par anginat hawa ke jhonke, ek sath aur itne laybadh tarike se takra rahe the, mano wo log air soccer khel rahe ho... Jisme ball ko goal tak nahi balki out of the stadium pahunchana tha...


Serin lagatar 8-10 kosis ki. Nischal poora observation karta raha... Lakh Milo lambi line me, bich se yah hawai hamla ho raha tha fir chahe wo hathoda sabse aage ke line par hi kyon na par raha ho...


Hathoda fail hua, tab Nischal ke ishare par chain try kiya gaya... Nischal ke muh se nikal gaya... "Kamina Surpmarich ka mukhauta, sab sikha gaya"… Ye chain Astak ke vansajon me se ek ki thi, jise Nischal ne Desert Planet par jita tha aur wahan Astak vansaj Dreda ke marte hi yah chain Nischal ke pass khud aayi thi, jiska ek hissa Serin ke pass bhi gaya tha... Ab jiski uttapti pata ho, uska tod kyon nahi bana sakte.…


Nischal aur Serin jis niti ke sath yudhh ke maidan me utre the.… "Dushman ke humla karne ki har badi takat ke tod ke sath"…. thik waise hi inke sath hua tha. Nischal aur Serin ke istamal karne wale har hathiyar ke sath, humla karne ke har jaani hui niti ka tod tha. Serin, Nischal ke kandhe par hath rakhti.… "Ye inki taiyari"…


Nischal:- "Ye Hella ke sardaron ki vansaj tukdi hai. Inhi ke sath Hella aur Messa tarah-tarah ke formation me ladte the... Jahan Messa ke yudhh niti ko Hella se kargar mani gayi thi aur Messa ko kamjor sena (vansajon ke mukable, gulaam sena) ka sena-nayak bana'kar bheja gaya tha"...

"Hella aur uske sardar jab bore hote the tab Messa ke pass ja'kar uski yudhh niti ko dekhte the.… Messa yahan se jane se pahle apne ek sardar ko har sambhavna par kaam karne ke liye deput kiya hoga"...


Serin:- Hmmm !!! Ab kya karen humare pass force hi nahi hai yudhh ke liye... Ye to dono front se ladne ko taiyar hain... Bich me ghuse to poori line hi chipak jayegi.. aur hum bus inke dhal ke upar taal banayenge…. Inke dimag me ghus'kar yadi lado to...


Nischal:- Mere khyal se ye teeno baton ke liye taiyar honge... Humari daur, shayad ussi ke liye koi jaivik hathiyar ya kisi natural source ko uss bomb me bandhe hai... Yahan se daur lagate hi wo bina soche bomb se humla karenge aur samne ke raste par bomb hi bomb hoga...


Serin:- Pahle isse hi try karte hain. Yadi teri baat sach hui ki ye humare daur ke liye taiyari kar'ke aaye hain, fir aage baat karenge un dono par... Tu daur aur main chain se tujhe khinch lungi...


Nischal haami bharte huye daura. Wah na dikhne wali hi gati thi, aur Nischal ke daur shuru hote hi, bina der kiye poori line aise chipki, jaise ek bartan ke pichhe dusra bartan ghusa dete hai aur charo ore se dhaal ka cover bana liya...


Matr fraction second me Nischal unse aadhe km ki doori par tha aur utni hi ekagrta se Serin apna dhyan lagaye hui thi. Nischal ke gati me chhanik parivartan hua aur agle hi pal Nischal chain se khincha hua Serin ke pass...


Serin:- Un logon ne apna bomb istamal nahi kiya...


Nischal:- Charo ore jarvattam buti ki bu aa rahi hai…


Serin, hairani se.… "Jarvattam buti"…


Nischal:- Haan Jarvattam buti... Dard to deti hai lekin nuksan nahi... Shayad hume dard de'kar dhyan bhatkane ki kosis kar rahe ho...


Serin:- Aur uske bomb ka kya, jiski aasanka jatayi thi...


Nischal:- Jarvattam buti se kisi ko maar nahi sakte, kisi ko kharoch nahi de sakte... Siway dard ke wo kuchh nahi de sakta... Matlab saaf tha ki wo chal rahe yuddh me hume dard de taki dhyan bhatke.... Tange huye bomb ko hath nahi lagaye, matlab hathiyaro ke prayog ko bhi sikhaya gaya hai... Koi ghabraya nahi, balki apne tej gati se kewal wo poori line sealed kiye the. Poori katar apne upar, tej daur ke sath dhakka lene ko taiyar thi....


Serin:- Iska matlab yadi tu inke dimag me ghusta hai to ho sakta hai kosika me tootne wala koi vansaj tumhare achet sharir ke ander ghus jaye...


Nischal:- Nah ye log taiyari naag-dansh ko dhyan me rakh'kar kiye hain... Yadi naag dansh ke prabhavi kshetr se main apne kalpnik sharir ko bahar nikala, aisi soorat me kya karenge, ye uski taiyari kar'ke aaye honge...


Serin:- Kaisi taiyari...


Nischal:- Mere achet hote hi shayad naag-dansh ke prabhav ko khatm kar dena...


Serin:- Hahaha... Ye hui na baat... Aise bekar ke sainikon se lad'kar kuchh bore si ho gayi thi... Chunauti ye hoti hai... iss poori tukdi par hum "sanyukt niti (joint attack plan)" se humla karenge...


Nischal:- Soch le copy master dikhti hai ye sena. Inke pass mere jaisi gati bhi hai... Formation change karte der na lagegi.… Sharir par tanga bomb dekh, ho na ho kuchh to khatarnak natural chij uske ander pack hogi... Gati copy, regular ladne wale hathiyar aur taknik ki jaankari, vayumandaliya aavran ka bhi tod nischit taur par hoga hi...


Serin:- Kewal iss talvar ko chhod'kar, humare hathiyar ke bare me kise nahi pata... Aur kisi ke pass talvar hai, to
uss hathiyar ke bare me pata kya karna mera bhai, katenge hi uss se.. kaun sa jamin khod'kar kheti karenge??… Haan humare regular moves unhe pata hai jo humare hathiyar ko khatarnak banate hain... To kya wakai hume unhi chand moves se ladna aata hai kya???

"Kitni formation copy karenge… hum random formation lenge... Pahle 1 se 8 ke koi bhi. Dobara samjha rahi hun, kewal 1 se 8 formation hi istamal hoga. Bich me koi aur istamal kiya to main uske liye taiyar na rahungi.. 1 se 8 formation, straight aur reverse, dono policy... Speed, accurecy aur body language, jo bachpan se sikhte aur karte aa rahe hain..

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"Kitni formation copy karenge… hum random formation lenge... Pahle 1 se 8 ke koi bhi. Dobara samjha rahi hun, kewal 1 se 8 formation hi istamal hoga. Bich me koi aur istamal kiya to main uske liye taiyar na rahungi.. 1 se 8 formation, straight aur reverse, dono policy... Speed, accurecy aur body language, jo bachpan se sikhte aur karte aa rahe hain..


Ye dono abhi baat kar hi rahe the ki issi bich ek sath kayi bade dhamakon ne wahan ke mahol ko dahla diya... Aur dekhte hi dekhte hawa me jet fighters par humle shuru tha...


Upar unke 1000 carore viman the jise khatm karne ka bida Canon aur Saras ki team ne uthaya tha, unpar bade-bade missile launcher se humle shuru ho chuka tha... Upar se niche aane wali missiles, chemical me ghul jayegi... Lekin niche se upar jane wale missiles...


Serin:- Yah ek complete army hai... Aur hum dono khade hain ek complete army ke against...


Serin aur Nischal ek dusre ko dekh rahe the, tabhi uss army ka commander samne aaya.…


"Apni sena ke backup ke intzar me hai kya re chuhe. Tu to nirbhik sahjada hua karta tha na, fir apni half blood ke pichhe kahe ghus raha... Kahin humare vansh badane ke bare me soch-soch kar, tum dono itne utsahit to nahi ho gaye, ki aapas me ghus'kar vansh badha rahe... Waise Sahjade teri dono (Jivisha aur Serin) whore hai to kafi dilkash… abhi apni half blood ke kapde utar kar bhej de, hum ye bombari rok denge"…


Serin:- Ye hume hi uksa raha hai…


Nischal:- Ye pridict hua na... Ja aage badh... Aur bhulna mat, Speed se jyada jaroori hai, accurecy aur complete concentration... Hum zig-zag policy se humla karenge… jaldi ja aur uske jaal me fans ja...


Serin, apne hath ka ek talvar Nischal ko badha dee. Kinare latka, Nischal ke khanjar ki copy khanjar ko Serin ne chain ke ek sire me lock kar diya. Serin aur Nischal ko dushman commander ne uksaya tha. Jaisa uss commander ne pridiction banaya tha, ye dono uske prediction ko sach karne ja rahe the, taaki Serin ke gusse ka fayda uthane ka soch'kar, ye log apne formation se loop de... Haan lekin unki peridiction to tej daur aur bhid ko kaat'ne wali hi thi… Kyonki dono yahi to karte aaye the..


Ek khatarnak yudhh niti jo dono bachpan se karte aa rahe, tum jis humle ki ummid humse karo, hum wahi humla karenge.… Kyonki ye kahani thi bharose ki. Ek dusre par bharosa iss had tak tha ki kahin bhi ghusne se pahle sochte nahi the…. Abhi dushman ne dono ko ladte kahan dekha tha... Ek sangathit arbon fauj ki army VS Nischal aur Serin.…


Serin ko agle 2 minute tak gussa dikhana tha, iss bich Nischal ne Aerobok ke sath telepaithy kar'ke usse yudhh me aane se saaf mana kar diya, kyonki uske log iss tarah ke yudhh ke liye prashikshit nahi the... Aerobok lagbhag 1 carore 70 lakh ki fauj ko naag-dansh ke ghere me agle aadesh ke liye taiyar rakhe tha. Idhar jab'tak


Serin gusse ka sanket deti, apni talvar hawa me upar ki. Jaise hi hawa me talvar upar gayi, kadakti hui tej bijli se talvar ka point jud gaya, jo Serin ke gusse ke sath talvar me bijli ki shakti bhi badhne lagi... Aur uss poori bijli ko Serin ne sena-nayak ke upar chhod diya... Wah senanayak na hila aur na hi bachne ke koi upay kiya...


"Jaise tum humare bijli aur barshat jhelne ke kabil ho, thik waise hi hum bhi hai... Tere ye 2 kaudi ke paintre yahan kaam na aayega... Haan kapde utar le to tujhe hum batayenge ki kaise kayi bij mishrit bacche paida hote hain"….


Wah sena-nayak bole chale ja raha tha aur idhar Serin aur Nischal samjh chuke the ki inke poshak jo hain, wo har vayumandaliya jhatka jhelne ko taiyar hain… speed, dimag me ghusna.. aur tisra hathiyar tha vayumandaliya aavran. Serin bhi samjh chuki thi ye teeno hathiyar pakke se compromised hain... Inke bharose fasenge, jaisa Nischal ne aasanka jatayi thi...


Serin bijli ke jhatke de'kar ek baar gussa dikha chuki thi... Ab fir se uss sena nayak ne gussa dilaya tha... Iss baar Serin daur gayi... Serin ke daur lagate hi sena-nayak bhi Nischal ke gati ke saman hi daurte huye apne sena ke bich chala gaya...


"Bhagta kahan hai badjaat, aa ab dikha na mujhe kaise mishrit bij se bacche paida karte ho harami"… Serin bhi gusse ka izhar karti hui daur laga chuki thi... Serin kafi tej daurti hui chain ko bhumi me ghusayi aur chaugune force ke sath wo hawa me thi... Jaise hi wo hawa me aayi... Poora aakash hi tope ke gole se bhar chuka tha, aur nishana hawa me chhalang lagati Serin. Iss poore sangathit army ki najren ek pal ko hawa me...


Itna waqt kafi tha, Nischal apni raftar se daurte huye apne khanjar lage chain ko hawa me fenk'kar Serin ke paun se lapeta... Serin jamin par thi, thik ussi waqt wo sare tope ke gole uske upar se cross kar chuke the. Thik uske pal bhar baad, Serin niche aur Nischal hawa me tha.. aur iss bich Serin ki talvar chali, kaman ke 3 fauji ko Serin ek sath kaat'ti hui apne chain ko hawa me uchhal dee. Chain Nischal ke paun me lag'kar usse niche khincha aur Serin hawa me. Nischal niche jamin par aane ke sath hi teen sainikon ko sulaya aur chain hawa me uchhal diya...


Ek second me dono aage pichhe 3 baar hawa me hote. Teeno bar tope ke gole sar ke upar se gujar jate aur kuchh lashen niche giri hoti. Sena ka dhyan bus chand pal ke liye bhatka hota aur utne hi loop me dono kaam kar'ke hawa me hote.


Niche aakar 3 logon ko katne ke turant baad chain fekne ki accurecy, kyonki dono ke chain ke ek chhod par khanjar laga hua tha... Jo utni gativan chain ke sath fenke jane par yadi chuk hoti, to jis ang ko khanjar lagta, uske nuksan ki kalpna bhi muskil thi... Aur timing... Tope ke gole hawa me asardar the, isliye ek pal me apne sathi ko niche lana aur uske agle pal me tope ke gole ke upar ya niche se hawa me cross karna... Timing…


Dono hi apne timig aur accurecy ke sath apne dushmano ko chaunka rahe the... Issi bich tope ke humle ko rok diya gaya... Jis katar se log mare the, uss jagah ko turant bhar diya gaya aur sabhi sainik ek dusre se chipak'kar katar ko complete shied kar chuke the… Serin hawa me thi aur Nischal jamin par aur agle hi pal dono bilkul katar ke shurwat me khade the... Aage jo 3 sipahi khade the wo dhal ka tikon banaye bus pahle humle ka intzar kar rahe the...


Nischal aur Serin ko bhi gyan tha ki inki speed Nischal ke barabar hai... Khule hath ka ek humla aur dushman ke bhala ya talvar kab ghusts pata hi nahi... kyonki wahan maujood teeno hi unke hi barabar speed rakhte the.


Ek chhanik najron ka sampark aur agle hi pal Serin tej daudti hui, samne ke dhal ko apne dono hath se pakadti ulti chhalang upar hawa me lagayi… Serin ke paun hawa me, hath upar se dhal ko pakde…. Sealed open tha aur teeno sainikon ke hathiyar Serin ke hath se ek bindu jitne duri par thi. Samne se Nischal utni hi teji dikhate huye, talvar ke ek lahar se teeno ka gala kaat chuka tha. Udhar Serin wo dhal liye hawa me roll karti jaise hi 2 katar ke bich land ki...


Serin hawa me roll kar rahi thi, tabhi bich se 15 logon ka formation kafi teji se toota aur katar utni hi teji se apne pahle ki bhanti formation banati hui jud gayi... Unki bhi timing gajab ki thi, kyonki iss baar jab Nichal ne Serin ko hawa se khinchne chain feka, tab raste me hi repulsive force apply tha. Nischal chain se Serin ko khinch nahi paya.


15 sainik jo katar se alag huye the, Serin ke hawa me hone par hi, apna cirle kafi teji se banate, Serin ke land karne se pahle hi, uspar hawa me bhale se humla kar rahe the. Serin, roll karti dhal ke bich apna poore body ko cover karti, wahan bich circle me land hui. Wo jaise hi land hui, ek complete circle me quid...


Wah circle bahar ke ore se dhal se pack tha aur ander hathiyar ke sath sainik taiyar. Serin humla kare ki na kare ussi duvidha me thi... Ek hath me khanjar aur dusre hath me talvar liye Serin khadi charo ore dekhi.


Serin ke upar humla hone ki soorat me, wo jitni teji se ek ko marti, utni hi teji se kayi sainik uske jism me apni talvar ghusa chuke hote. Chhanik mamla tha jo Serin ke jahan me kudne se le'kar land hone ke bich aaya tha. 15 sainik utni hi teji ke sath apne hathiyar chala chuke the.. kisi ka nishana gala to kisi ka koi aur ang… Hahiyar chale, itni tej ki palak jhatakne ka mauka nahi, lekin taiyar the wo ranbhumi ke har khel ke liye. Serin ke paun bhumi par pade. Hathiyar chale aur wo bhumigat thi...


Nischal aur Serin iss chhote se humle ke baad naag-dansh ki shuraksha me ek yuddh viram lete huye.… "Ye kamal ki Sena hai Nischal…. Yadi inke sath inka commander hota to hum dono akele kabhi jit nahi pate…."


Nischal:- Ab bhi jit gaye hain, tumhe aisa kyon lag raha hai... Pichhle 15 minute me 40 log maare hain aur bhumigat hone ki taknik na hoti to tum poori tarah se ghayal ya mar chuki hoti...


Serin mritak sainik ke paun ki wo chain bandhne lagi, jis se bhumigat nahi kiya ja sakta… Samne taiyar khade sainik bhi Serin ko aisa karte dekh rahe the, aur unke kheme me ye baat phail gayi...


Serin, ek chain Nischal ke ore fenkti... "Bandh lo, inke sena nayak achhe honge... Bahut achhe honge, lekin main bhi master Serin hun..… Junior hum ek formation me ladenge... Ek ke piche ek... Around the circle, 360⁰… Mujhe ye poori jagah jaldi khali chahiye…. Koi sawal"…


Nischal:- No senior...


Serin:- Ek sath.. ek gati se... Poore anusasan, ekagrata ke sath.. abhi...


Dono kadam se kadam mila'kar daud rahe the... Serin, kataar ke aage ke Dhal ko pakad'kar hawa me thi. Iss bar 2 sainik samne Nischal ko aur ek sainik Serin par hathiyar chalane ki poori taak me...


Bus aankhon ke ishare the, chain wo sainik repulsive kar sakta tha jo Serin par humla karne ki tak me tha. Serin apne chain me lage khanjar ko hawa me chalayi aur 2 jo samne Nischal ka intzar me the, unhe Serin saaf kar chuki thi, jabki bich wala jabtak apna bhala chalata Nischal ki chain lagi khanjar dur se chali aur Nischal daur'kar wahan tha jahan Serin land karne wali thi...


15 log upar dhyan kiye Serin par humle ko utsuk the. Nischal ko ek chhoti si window mili aur Nischal ek round apni khanjar ko ghuma chuka tha... Serin jabtak land karti, tab'tak Nischal khanjar lahra'kar 15 logon ka gala kaat chuka tha aur pass baithe sinik, jo apne kinare se dhal lagaye, kataar ko kinare se protect kar rahe the, uske dhaal ke tip ko pakad'kar iss baar Serin ki tarah Nischal hawa me tha...


Nischal jaise hi hawa me hua, Serin apni talvar ka war uss sainik par karti hui, usse kinare se chidh'kar talvar ko bhumi me ghusayi aur uske handel ke support leti ek baar fir wo hawa me thi.. Bich ke sainik jo thik Serin ke niche the, jaise hi dhal hata'kar Serin par humla karte, Nischal land hote-hote, apni chain me lagi khanjar ek baar poora lahrate huye niche land kar raha tha... Serin ke niche wale sainikon ka dhyan Serin par aur Nischal ka khanjar kahin dur se lahrate huye aati aur uska gala kaat chuki hoti...


Wahi Nischal jahan land ho raha hota, uske pass ke sainik, Nischal par humla karne wale hote, Serin hawa me hi apne khanjar ki lahra deti un sainikon ke ore... Aur natija wahi, jabtak dhyan Nischal par humla karne me lagaye, tab'tak galaa kat chuka tha…

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