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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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“To Apini samjh lo aaj main bhi shikar par nikla huṅ. Wahan uss Nischal se baat ho to bol dena bach gaya wo. Do shikar mere aakhon ke samne hai. Milta huṅ aḍḍe par he, dono shikar ke sath. Mil kar shikar ka maze lenge”.


Nischal disco me mast ho kar nach raha tha, aur tabhi nachte-nachte wo achanak he wahan se padesan ho kar bahar nikla. Usse bahar nikalte dekh Tanisha bhi Nischal ke pichhe chupke se bahar nikli. Nischal bahar nikalte he Nandni ko call lagate….


Nandni…. Bol Nischal, kya baat hai.


Nischal….. Bina kuch soche iss waqt apne kamre me bhago.


Nandni…. Par hua kya.


Nischal…. Koi ghusa hai wahan, jo tumhe marne aaya hai. Ab sawal baad me pahle jo kaha wo karo.


Nandni turant Ansh ka hath pakḍi aur sidha usse bedroom me le kar chali gayi. Ansh hairani se usse dekhte huye puchne laga…. “Aisa kya kah diya Nischal ne jo tum ghabrakar bedroom me bhagi”


Nandni, Ansh ke hoton pe ungli rakhti…… “Shiiiiiiiii, uss ne kaha wo aaj raat nahi aayega. So my dear hone wale pati ji, ab ek laḍki, apne hone wale ke sath akeli ho, wo bhi ek he kamre me, aur koi aane wala nahi, to wo ghabrakar he apne arman batayegi na”.


Nandni apni baten bolte waqt, apni najren ko charo ore daura bhi rahi thi, kahin koi hai to nahi. Itni me Ansh ne Nandni ke kamar me hath dal kar khud se chipka liya aur uss ke hoton se hont laga kar chumne laga. Jaise he Ansh ne chuma, Nandni ki aakhen aschrya se puri khul gayi. Usse samjh me nahi aa raha tha wo kya react kare.


Nischal bhi Nandni ko inform kiya aur flat ki ore bhaga. Nischal ki baten sun’ne tatha usse bhagte dekh, Tanisha ne bhi Josefer se contact kiya…. “Haaṅ Tanisha kya baat hai”


Tanisha…. Usse pata hai ki tu uss ke ghar me ghusa hai.


Josefer…. Achha tabhi, laḍki jaldi se apne kamre me bhagi. Abhi kahaṅ hai wo….


Tanisha…. Kuch he der me wahan pahunch raha hoga.


Josefer… “Thik hai aane de usse, tab tak main inhe saf karta huṅ” … Josefer ki baten khatam hui, aur wo darwaja kholne laga…. Ek kosis, do kosis aur darwaja nahi khula. Josefer ne apne aadmiyon ke ore dekha, jo apne leader ki nakam kosis dekh rahe the aur fir ek baar aur joṛ lagaya, darwaja ab bhi na khula….


Ansh, kiss ko toḍte…. “Koi darwaja khaṭ-khaṭa raha hai”…. Nandni, jaldi se usse bahon me leti… “Nischal aaya hoga, chhodo usse dhyan mat do uss par, aur yahaṅ concentrate karo” .. kahte huye Nandni ne Ansh ke sir ko pakḍa aur khud ke hoton se chipka li. Ansh ek baar fir bare josh se Nandni ko kiss karne laga, aur Nandni ki fati aakhen ab bhi darwaje ko he dekh rahi thi.


Idhar gate ke bahar Josefer, 2-3 baar ki kosison ke baad bhi jab darwaja nahi khula. Anth me wo darwaje se hat gaya aur apne sath laye uss janwar ko ishara kiya. Janwar char kadam piche leta, gate ki ore daur gaya…. “Dhaaraaaammmmm”


Ander Ansh aur Nandni kiss me ḍube the. Itna tej gate se ṭakrane ki awaz aayi ki dono chaunk kar alag ho gaye. Idhar Nandni ki chhati dar se … “dhakkkk… dhakkkkk” kar rahi thi, aur udhar “Nischal ka kiya dhara hai ye sab”.. ye baat sochte Ansh ka khun jal raha tha.


Ansh badi teji se gate ki ore bad’te…. “Nandni, main iss Nischal ka khun pi jauṅga, Kamina, kutta haramjada. Sala, suar… ruk tujhe dikhata huṅ abhi”.


“Nahi, Ansh jane do… mat darwaja kholo… nahi… nahi… nahiiiiiiii”..… Nandni jab tak usse mana karti, tab tak wo gate tak pahunch chuka tha. “Ab kya hoga” soch kar, Nandni ka dil joṛoṅ se dhaḍakne laga aur dar se usne apni aakhen muṅd li.


Jaise he Ansh ne darwaja khola he…. “Uffff, lagta hai maine hot romantic moment ko bigaṛ diya”… Nischal gate ke pichhe chhip kar, kewal apna sir nikal kar bola.


Idhar gate par Nischal ko dekh kar Nandni ne rahat ki sans li, aur Dr apne romance me khalal ḍalne ka uss se badla lene laga. Dr ke man me jo aaya wo bolta chala ja raha tha, aur Dr ki bhaḍas sun kar Nischal bas ṭhahake maar kar hans raha tha. Ab kisi ke romance shuru hone se pahle he ek to usse distrub kiya upar se Nischal ki haṅsi, Ansh ke ġusse ko aur bhaḍka rahi thi.


Ansh jab bhaḍka hua tha, aur anap-snap bake ja raha tha. Tabhi Nischal ne Nandni ko ishara kar ke usse ander le jane ko kaha. Nandni ne bhi isharoṅ ko samjha aur Ansh ka shirt khinch kar usse ander leti…. “Ab isse saza he dete hain Ansh. Tum ander aao, aur karne do isse jo kar raha hai”. Apni baat kahi, Ansh ko khich kar pichhe kiya aur darwaja band. Darwaja band kar ke Nandni ne Ansh ke shirt ko dobara khincha, aur usse apne kiss me uljha di.


Iss ke purv, jab wo janwar gate ki ore teji se baḍhne ke liye pichhe step le raha tha, tabhi Nischal hawa ki tarah uss jagah par pahuncha aur syannn se sab ke pass se ho kar gujra. Janwar ne gate me ṭakkar marne ke liye daur lagaya…. Wooooooooo…. Aur aage jo hua usse dekh kar Josefer aur uske sathi datoṅ tale ungliyan chaba gaye.


Janwar puri raftar se badha, Nischal jis raftar se aaya tha, apni daur par kabu karta paun se slide kiya. Idhar janwar ka aanshik sir darwaje se ṭakraya, udhar Nischal teji se slide karta niche baiṭha aur punch ko pakaḍ kar, janwar ko hawa me urrate apne piche paṭak diya. Josefer aur uss ke sathiyoṅ ne dekha… kaise wo vishal sa janwar Nischal ke sir ke upar se hawa me tairta, dhamnn se uss ke pichhe ja gira.


Janwar itni joṛ se gira tha ki wo girte he behosh ho gaya. Agle he pal Nischal raftar pakaḍte ek-ek kar ke dono ke pass pahuncha aur un dono ko, dauṛte huye kandhe ki itni joṛ ki ṭakkar diya ki wo dono bhi behosh. Itne me gate khula, aur Josefer gate ki ore lapka.


Nischal bhi uss ke pichhe jate, Josefer ka gardan pakaḍ kar usse roll karta hua apne piche le liya. Ansh se puri baton ke dauran wo Josefer ka gardan pakdey usse roke rakha tha. Jaise he darwaja band hua, Nischal piche muḍa aur Josefer ko gardan se pakaḍ kar hawa me utha liya, aur uss ke sine par ek lat itni joṛ ka mara ki wo sidha ja kar diwal se ṭakraya aur behosh.


Ansh fir kiss toḍta….. “Iss ka main khun kar duṅga, ye bahar kya kar raha hai. Jaanbujh kar itna shor kar raha hai, taki hum distrub ho”.


Nandni, fir se Ansh ka shirt khinchti khud se chipakti…. “Wo kahaṅ bhagne wala hai, kya ye hisab baad me nahi karoge. Abhi mera mood horney hua ja raha hai” … Itna kah kar Nandni ne fir se kiss karna shuru kar diya…. “Nischal kamine, jis daur se main abhi gujar rahi huṅ uss ka badla jab main lungi, to tu bhi yaad rahega”


Bahar, char behosh, Josefer aur uss ke 2 sathi aur sath me wo janwar. Charoṅ ko lapeṭa, flat se bahar nikla. Hawa si aisi raftar, ki Nischal ko dekh pana namumakin. Nischal sab ko le kar sidha wo Sawalker ke encounter spot par pahunch gaya.


Sir par hath ḍale jab Josefer aur uss ke sathi hosh me aaye to samne ka najara dekh kar unki aankhen fat gayi. Nischal khanjar liye uss janwar ko aaḍha chir chuka tha, aur uss ka khanjar uss janwar ko chirte upar ki taraf baḍh raha tha.


Kururta ka aisa najara dekh kar sabhi ke muh me praṇ aa gaye. Josefer ka ek sathi dar ke mare wahan se bhagne laga. Saynnnnnnnn… Josefer ko aisa laga jaise tej hawa jhonka saynnn se uss ke kaan ke pass se gujri ho. Aur jab najar ghuma kar apne sathi ko dekha, to wo bhi Nischal ke khanjar ka shikar ban chuka tha, aur uss ka sarir do hissoṅ me bata para tha….


Nischal ki tej dahaṛ….. “Apni jagah sab baithe raho, bilkul shant. Mujhe shor pasand nahi”.


Nischal ki dahaṛ sun kar Josefer aur uss ka sathi wahiṅ baiṭha rah gaya, aur Nischal apna adhura kaam pura karne pahunch gaya. Dekhte he dekhte uss ne janwar ko bhi chir kar do hissoṅ me baṅṭ diya... Bante huye hisse me se uss janwar ma kaleja chir kar nikalte huye kahne laga…. "Tum logon ko to maza aata hoga na ye khun aur aise kate fate sharir dekhne me… bolte kyon nahi ab"… tej garaj ke sath uske awaz me pure gusse ki jhalak dikh rahi thi.


Kisi bhi tarah ke jawab na milne ki stithi me Nischal ab pahuncha un dono ke pass, dono ko upar se le kar niche tak dekhte huye….. “Kise marne gaya tha wahan”


Dono me se kisi ke juban se awaz nahi nikli. Nischal ne apna sawal doharaya, aur Josefer ka sathi ḍarte huye kahne laga….. “Uss laḍki, aur uss ladke ka shikar”……


Wo apni baat pura bhi nahi kiya tha ki agle he pal uss ki do hissoṅ me bati hui lash, jamin par pari thi. Nischal uss ke sir ke bich me khanjar dal kar niche tak chir chuka tha. Ab sirf wahan eklauta Josefer bacha tha, jo na bhag sakta tha, aur na ruk sakta tha.


Nischal….. Tum iss ke team leader ho.


Josefer, Nischal se char kadam piche hat’te…. “Haan”


Wo dhire se 4 kadam piche hua aur Nischal bilkul uss ke samne khada tha…… “Aaj thoḍa kamjor feel kar raha, ṭhik se bhag nahi pa raha. Iss ka matlab ye nahi ki tum mujhe daurao. Haaṅ to mr ailan tum ne kya socha, mujhe ye ehsas nahi hoga ki tum humla bhi kar sakte ho”.


Josefer….. Suno, hum dono iss duniya ke nahi, fir tum kyoṅ dusri taraf khadey ho.


Nischal…. Ek chhoti si baat tumhe samjhata huṅ, samjh gaye to ṭhik warna agli bar main baat nahi karuṅga. Dur raho mere doston se, warna main kewal yahin se tumhe nahi saaf karuṅga balki tumhare grah par ja kar tumhari samast prajati ko khatam karne ke baad ek kitab likhuṅga, jiska naam hoga…. Ek tha grah… ab bhag yahaṅ se….


Josefer chala gaya, Nischal khada ho kar upar aasman ko takne laga. Zindgi me shayd usse pahli bar dar laga tha aur aakhen nam hui thi. Dimag me bus Nandni ka khila sa chehra dikh raha tha, aur apne upar wale ko wo dil se bas sukriya kah raha tha. Jaise he Nischal ka kaam khatam hua, usne bas ek chhoti si smily Nandni ke mobile par post kar diya. Jab wo msg kar raha tha, utne me Sawalker ka bhi call aa gaya aur wo disco chala gaya….


Jhuma, nacha gaya, aur usse sharab itni pasand aayi ki bewron ki tarah pi kar wo nashe me dhutt ho gaya. Sawalker bechara, Nischal ko lad kar apne ghar le gaya. Darwaje par khada Sawalker, Nischal ko kandhe se pakdey, bell bajane laga…..


Pahle to aadhe ghantey gate nahi khula, fir jhaṭke se gate khula, aur chiḍhi hui grihiṇi, tamtati gate par….. “Kitni baar boli huṅ, bewron ki tarah aise pi kar mere darwaje par mat aaya karo. Bhago, thane me he sona aaj. Ek tum kam the jo dusre piyakkaṛ ko bhi lade aaye ho. Kaun hai ye”?


Sawalker, apni biwi ki dahaṛ sun kar jaise sab bhul he gaya ho…. “Ye wo, wooo, bataya tha na wo hai”


Sawalker ki patni, Jyoti…. “Haaṅ to apne wo ko le kar bhago yahaṅ se warna jhaḍu se maruṅgi”


Wahan ki gahmagahami sun kar Nischal ki aakhen thodi khuli. Samne ek lady ko dekh kar…. “Baḍe bhaiya ye hot item kaun hai”


“Hot item”… Sawalker ki aaṅkheṅ fati ki fati rah gayi. Aur wo fati aakhon se apni biwi ko dekhne laga. Aur Jyoti raat ke 1.30 baje itna pyara compliment sun kar sidha ander gayi aur jhaḍu ke sath he bahar aayi. Bechara Sawalker, usse raat jeep me he bitani pari.


Subah-subah Jyoti Sawalker ko uṭha kar…. “Ander aao”


Sawalker uṭha aur sath me Nischal ko bhi ander le kar chala aaya. Dono jald he ready ho kar naste ke table par aaye…. “Utar gayi ho raat ki to, 2 peg aur bana kar dun”


Sawalker…. Sorry na Jyoti, wo sab iss ka kiya dhara hai. Mujh se jid karne laga ki chalo disco chalo, aur mujhe khinch kar le gaya.


Jyoti… Haaṅ aur aap to dudh pite bache ho na. Sharm nahi aati aap ko aise bahane banate. Aur tum, badtamij ladke, main tumhe hot item dikh rahi huṅ”


Nischal, isharoṅ me puchta “ye kaun hai”….. Sawalker uss ke kan me bola… “gadhe tumhari bhabhi hai, jise rat me tumne kaha tha ye hot item kaun hai”


Nischal kursi ko aise piche kar ke uṭha ki Sawalker aur Jyoti dono chaunk gaye. Nischal apni jagah se haṭa, aur ja kar daṇḍawat Jyoti ke kadmoṅ me gir kar…..


“Bhabhi, main bahut he sarif type ka ladka huṅ. Main to bas wahan dance kar raha tha. Baḍe bhaiya he wahan disco me chhote-chhote kapdey pahne laḍkiyoṅ ko tar rahe the aur kah rahe the ki kya mast hot mal hai. Maine in se pucha ki iska matlab kya hota hai. To inhine he mujhe uss waqt sikhaya… “Isse kisi laḍki ko compliment dena kahte hain”


Jyoti, uss ka para to jaise asamaṅ chhu raha ho. Sawalker ḍarte huye… “Jhuṭh bol raha hai ye Jyoti”.


“Khao meri kasam ye jhuṭh bol raha hai. Tumhari aakhon me likha hai tharki ki tum iss sarif se bache ko kya sab sikhaye ho”…. Fir kya tha dono dampatti ḍaining table ke round and round chakkar lagate rahe. Tom & Jerry ki pakḍa pakḍi chalu thi.


Khair Nischal aaj fir Sawalker ke sathi he college pahuncha. College parking ke gate se takriban 100 meter ki duri par Nischal hathoṅ me ful liye wahan Jivisha ka intzar karne laga. Aaj apne naye safar ki surwat karne wala th, isliye dil me hajar arman umaṛ se rahe the. Emotions jo ab control me nahi the.


Tabhi usse ehsas hua Jivisha uss ke pass se gujri hai. Ab wo uss ke parking se lauṭne ka intzarrrr… intzarrrrr… aur ufffff… dikh gayi uss ke dil ki dhaḍkan…. Jaise-jaise wo pass aa rahi thi, Nischal ander se gudaguda raha tha aur uss ke dil me kuch-kuch ho raha tha…..


Jivisha, karib aur karib usse aati najar aane lagi. Nischal se char kadam ki duri par, aur Nischal baith gaya apne ghuṭne par…..


O re piya haye.. O re piya haye.. O re piya haye..

Udne laga kyon man baawla re
Aaya kahan se yeh hosla re

O re piya haye.., O re piya haye..

Tanabana tanabana bunti hawaa haaye bunti hawa
Boondein bhi to aaye nahi baaz yahan

Sagish mein shaamil sara jahan hai
Har zare zare ki yeh iltiza hai

O re Piya, O re Piya haye..
O re piya haye.. O re Piya

ni re ,re re ga
ga ga ma
ma ma pa
pa ma ga re sa
sa re re sa
ga ga re
ma ma ga
pa pa ma
dha dha pa
ni ni sa sa pa
pa sa ma pa dha ni sa ni
re ni sa sa sa.. . . . ..



“What the fuckkk … ye enternet ka rattu… gadha… ye to “sa sa pa” bhi paglon ki tarah ga raha hai… bhagwan iss me thoḍa akal ṭo dal dete gane ka. Kaise sir hila-hila kar ga raha hai. Kachra kar diya mera. Ab to main iss ke sath college me na ghumuṅgi”… Nischal ko dekh Nandni ki roni soorat ho gayi.
Jabardast update hai bhai....... Maja aageya hai padhke.......josefor ne. Nischal ko marne geya or khud ke sathi ko sahid jar diya bechara.....josefor to bach geya itna kehne ke baat ki wo nandini or ansh ko marne geya tha ager nischal ko pata chalta ki josefor usko marne geya tha to josefor ka ram nam hona pakka tha......o
Or kasak ne kiran ko nischal ke pash bhejh diya...or jab nischal bola ki uske life me jabardasti me kisi ko kyu dakhil kar rahi ho to nandini bola ki wo bhi to jivisha ke life aisa ghusa hai....or bechara muh banake dsp ke sath bar me chala geya....or jab dsp ke ghar poucha to dsp ka to Kalyan ho geha hai....
Or ab Nischal jaise gaa raha hai hath me buke leke dekhte hai jivisha ke reaction kaisi hoti hai....
Waiting for next update
 

mahadev31

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maja aa gaya.... nandini ab nishchal ko samajh rahi hai ,,phone pe batate hi kaam shuru kar diya aur bedroom me chali gayi....ansh ko to gussa aana hi tha ?...bichare ko pyar bhi nahi karne de raha tha nandini se ...

josepher ko achcha sabak sikhaya ....unko sidha encounter spot pe le gaya ? aur bandook ki jagah chaaku se kaat daala ?...ruki suki sahi kehte hai use taaqat se nahi chhal se hara sakte hai ..
 
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Kasak and Nandani are teasing Nischal, :laugh: understand one thing that our hero likes Jivisha but you remove the sadness of Jivisha first. :angryno: Those who want to kill Nischal are making a big mistake. Everyone is plotting together, monitoring everywhere, I am worried about how Nishchal will handle it, there is danger at every step. You always show romance as well as fear in this story and innocent Ansh gets angry. :lol1:Nischal eventually won and also realized the friendship.:hug: Can not improve, there was a fight between husband and wife.:lol:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

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Khoji ne "thik hai" kaha..... aur Nischal ko marne ke irade se aage badhne lage. Idhar Nischal in sab se be khabar Jivisha ko wapas le jane ki taiyari kar raha tha.....


Josefer ka hukum milte he fir to humle ki taiyari shuru ho chuki thi. Lekin Nischal ke bare me bhi un khojiyon ko jarra bhi ilm nahi tha.... unhone viman ko niche la kar humle ki taiyari me niche utre. Par Nischal to Jivisha ko gode me liye hawa ki raftar se daur laga chuka tha....


Nischal bilkul pass se nikla un khojiyon ke aur wo log chhu tak nahi paye. Dono khoji achambhit the. Dono khoji sath me unka janwar sab uske piche daure par second bhar ka samay nahi laga hoga Nischal ko, aur wo un sab ki najron se ojhal ho chuka tha.


Sabhi turant viman me sawar ho gaye aur viman apne pure raftar se badh chali. Nischal apne har khatre se bekhabar, apne raste ja raha tha. Tabhi achanak Nischal ke sarir ke dahine hisse me jordar prahar hua.


Nischal khatre ko jarra bhi bhanp nahi paya. Unka wo vishalkay janwar apne nukile punch teji ke sath Nischal ke sarir ke dahine hisse me piche pith se ghusaya aur aage pet se bahar nikal diya. Aur pet se lekar kandhe tak, un khojiyon ka janwar Nischal ko chirte huye aage badh gaya. Nischal wahin sadak par gir gaya, par girte-girte bhi usne Jivisha ko apne upar le liya taki usse koi chot na lage.


Nichal gambhir roop se ghayal hokar niche dharasayi ho gaya. Wo janwara wapas palta aur dobara humle karne ki firak me tha. Iss baar Nischal ka sir nishane par tha. Lekin humle se pahle he Jivisha pure hosh me thi.


Nischal ki haalat dekh kar wo ghabra si gayi. Khun se lath-path uska pura sarir, Jivisha chillati hui usse jagane ki kosis karne lagi. Wo janwar Nischal par lagbhag dobara humla kar hi chuka tha, lekin Jivisha ke hosh me aana Nischal ke pran bacha gayi.


Jivisha ko hosh me aaye dekh, janwar ko kabu karne wale khoji turant hi bich me pahunchte huye hamle ko rokkar viman me sawar ho gaye aur yah sochkar ki itne bade humle ke baad ye ladka jinda to waise bhi nahi bachne wala, wo log dono ko wahin chhodkar wapas laut gaye.


Idhar Jivisha, Nischal ki haalat dekh kar jaise sun si hui ja rahi thi. Aas pass koi madad karne wala bhi nahi tha.
Tabhi wahan Nandni ki car aakar ruki.... "Kahti thi nafrat hai iss ladkey se, aur tu to sadak par he romance kar rahi"


Jivisha khadi ho kar palti, sarir par khun he khun.... Nandni puri tarah se shocked ....Virane se jagah par do ladkiyan aur dono ko he khun dekh kar chakkar sa aa raha tha....


Nandni.... Jisa ye sab kaise hua... Kya hua tha yahan. Nischal ka itna khun kaise bah raha...


Jivisha.... Mujhe kya pata Nandu, tujhe he pata hoga na. Tu he to car se le kar aayi hai na hume yahan tak....


Nandni.... Sab confusion hai, pahle isse le kar chal hospital fir dekhte hain kya karna hai...


Dono baten kar rahi thi tabhi Nischal ki aakhen bhi khuli. Usse hosh aane laga... wo aakhen khol kar baith gaya........ Idhar Nandni aur Jivisha aapas me discussion he kar rahi thi....


Nischal.... Dono yahan sadak par khadey ho kar kya mere marne ka intzar kar rahi ho.... chot lagi hai, khun bah raha hai aur dono yahan khadi ho kar tamasa dekh rahi ho kya ??....


Nandni..... Tumhara bhi khun ka rang laal hai...


Jivisha.... Nandu tu ye kya bak rahi hai.....


Nischal, sab ka dhyan fir se apni ore khinchte..... "Oye paglon aapas ki discussion baad me karna, pahle mera ilaz to karwao.... Ya picha chhudane ke chakkar me mujhe kahin sahid karne ka irada to nahi.


Teeno car me baithe, Nandni apne Bf yani ki Dr Ansh ke hospital pahunchi aur Jivisha ko wapas ghar lautne ke liye bol di, lekin Jivisha, Nischal ki haalat dekhkar usse chhodkar jana nahi chahti thi. Kisi tarah Nandni ne Jivisha ko samjha bujha kar wahan hospital se bhej di aur Ansh ko call lagane lagi. Nandni, Nichal ko lekar kafi paresan si dikh rahi thi.....


Nischal ke bahte khun ko dekhkar Nandni chinta se Ansh ko baar-baar call laga rahi thi, lekin Ansh ne call pick nahi kiya. Dr Ansh, apne papa ke sath unhi ke hospital me practice kiya karta the, subah ka samay hone ki wajah se wo abhi tak hospital nahi pahuncha tha.


Nandni, call laga hi rahi thi tabhi Ansh usse samne se aate huye najar aaya. Nandni bhagkar uske pass pahunchi aur sabhi staff ko uske pass se hatati hui Ansh par barshna shuru kar di… "Pagal ho kya, tum dr ho ya jallad. Tumhe kya lagta hai, tum mere bf ho to main tumhare hospital ka bill pay nahi karungi . Kaise dr ho patients mar raha hai aur tum cream powder laga kar taiyar ho kar aaye ho"...


Ansh, sir jhukaye chup-chap Nandni ki baten sun raha tha... jab wo bol kar chup ho gayi tab Ansh ne aahiste kaha... "Iska khun bah raha hai... pahle isse check kar lun"


Nischal ke zakham ko dekhte huye Ansh kahne laga..... "Ye kis hathiyar se zakham laga hai... aage se pichhe tak chir dala hai, fir bhi tum aise khadey ho"....


Nichal.... Arre dr babu ye aage se piche ka zakham nahi hai... aage alag hai aur piche alag...


Ansh.... Pagal samjha hai kya.... dono ore ek jaise nishan hain, jarra bhi fark ni. Ruko mujhe police ko bulana hoga....


Nandni..... Chup-chap cotten lagao aur stich karo. Jyada dimag na lagao.... waise bhi hum pahle se bahut musibat me hai... ab jo kaha hai wo chup-chap karo.


Mohabbat wo bhi jab ek tarfa ho. Ansh ke jaise pran baste ho Nandni me .... bina koi sawal kiye wo jakhamon par taken lagane laga..... "Nandni ye galat karwa rahi ho. Tum nahi janti, aise ilaz nahi hota"....


Nandni.... Kya bar-bara rahe ho, chup-chap kaam karo....


Ansh bechara ek staye huye pirit premi ki tarah na chahte huye bhi stich de diya... Stich de kar jab wo hath dhone bahar nikla tabhi..... "Nandni ji ye kaun hai jarra inki bhi tarruf kijiye"


Nandni.... Jivisha ke bhagne ke chakkar me ek baat to rah he gayi. Pahle ye batao tumhari bhasha itni jaldi, itni sudhri hui kaise ho gayi....


Nischal..... Internet darling internet... achha ye batao ye tumhara bf hai....


Nandni..... Pata nahi kyon mere dil me kabhi Ansh ke liye pyar wali feeling kyon nahi aayi. Par haan wo mujhse bahut pyar karta hai..... kash tumhe pyar ka matlab samjh me aata....


Jab Nandni "Kash tumhe pyar ka matlab samjh me aata" .... bol rahi thi, tabhi darwaje se Ansh ne sun liya..... "Aahhhhh" jaise sine me uske dard utha ho aur dil par hath rakh kar wo aage ki baat sun'ne laga....


Nischal.... Sayad tum thik kahti ho, mujhe iss sabd ka mol nahi pata. Chalo yahan se ab.... ghar wapas chalte hain....


Nandni.... Suno Mr. Ek baat main clear kar dun abhi..... tum kitna bhi chaho chhipana par main bina sachai jane piche nahi hatungi.


Nischa..... Haan madam ji sab bata dunga.... par ek shart par...


Nandni.... kaisi shart...


Nischal..... Abhi jo boli tum ... "Kash tumhe pyar ka matlab samjh me aata".... to deal ye hai ki aap mujhe pyar ka matlab samjhayengi.... aur main dhire-dhire aap ko sari sachai bataunga.


Nandni jor se hasti hui "haan" kah di aur dono wahan se nikal gaye.... thodi galatfahmi si paida ho gayi aur Ansh ko gussa aur dard dono ek sath ho rahe the.... Dono jab bahar nikle to Ansh darwaje par he khada tha...


Nandni..... Ansh main tum se baad me milti hun.... Abhi jarra jaldi hai...


Dono ko sath jate dekh Ansh bare gusse se..... "Manao raas lila.... bf main hun aur pyar ka matlab usse samjhao.... Mere he hospital me, mere he samne khullam khulla romance ka offer diya ja raha hai. Main injection me zahar bhar kar maar dalunga iss kaminey ko"


Idhar Jivisha car ko wash karwakar, Nandni ke ghar wapas to aa gayi, lekin usse samjh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare. Kuch he der me uske mom-dad aur pura pariwar yahan pahunchne wala tha. Upar se jiss ke bharose wo aayi thi, wo to ghayal hokar hospital me para hua tha.....


Jivisha ko kuch samjh me nahi aa raha tha.... aur chinta me wo idhar se udhar ghum rahi thi, tabhi bahar se he chillane ki awaz .... "Jivisha.... Jivisha"....


Bare bhaiya, chote bhaiya... sab chillate huye darwaje ki ore badh rahe the... ander ka bhi mahol kautuhal jaisa ho gaya .... Ashis, Durga devi uske husband sab kamre se bahar nikal kar hall me pahunche....


Durga devi.... Bahar kaun hai, tumhara naam le kar chilla kyon rahe hain ......


Tabhi gate se ander aate Jivisha ke papa Himanshu Rajput bole .... "Main hun Jivish ka pita aur ye hai humari puri family"......


Darwaje par ek chhote se intro ke baad sabhi baith gaye hall me .... fir kya tha, sabhi log dayen bayen adjust karke baith chuke the aur insan ke madhya me Jivisha kisi mujrim ki tarah khadi thi. Fir shuru hua ek-ek karke sawolon ki bauchhar…...


Pahle he sawal par clean bold thi Jivisha jab ghar walon ko ye pata chala ki shadi se bhag kar Jivisha ne kisi dusre ladkey shadi kar li.... Jabki iss baat par Durga devi, apne husband aur Ashis ka muh dekh rahi thi.... Kyonki Durga devi ko to Jivisha ki shadi ke bare me kuch aur he bataya gaya tha....


Ab bechari Jivisha, uski juban jaise halak me atak si gayi ho.... pani ke ghunt par ghunt pi rahi thi par juban se koi bhi sabd nahi nikal rahe the.... Tabhi entry hui Nischal aur Nandni ki .... ek side se Jivisha ki family aur thik uske pass se Nandni ki family aur bilkul center me Jivisha.... Pura shant mahol.....


Nischal ko dekhte he uss shant mahol me Durga devi ki awaz gunji aur wo kahne lagi ..."Yahi hai".... Mamla un dono ko kuch samjh me aata uss se pahle he Ansh bhi un dono ke pichhe-pichhe pahunch gaya...


Ansh me na to wahan chal rahe mamle ko samjha... aur na he mahol dekha.... bas Nandni ka hath pakar kar rote huye kahne laga.... "Yadi tumhe yahi ladka pasand tha to mujh se pyar ka natak kyon ki. Sidha bol deti main iss ladkey se pyar karti hun"....


Nischal, jiske bare me abhi dono pariwar yahi jante the ki Nischal aur Jivisha ne bhag kar shadi ki .... ab lo ji ek aur nayi baat ek dum se samne aa gayi.... Nandni aur Nischal ek dusre se pyar karte hain...... Shocked ho kar sab khadey ho gaye.....
what a mahol :lol1:
 

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ye wahi story hai na nain11ster bhai jisme aapne mujhe jaanwar bana diya tha :huh:
Aare Adirishi bhai aap ka naam dhyan me nahi tha bus wo adrishya rahta tha isliye waisa naam diya tha ..

Haa. Ye wahi story hai... Aaj ke hi update me to mara hai wo .. ab aap aaram se padh sakte hai waise kisi ko naam yaad b nahi hoga.. aap bekar me remind karwa rahe hain sabko
 

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Nischal ... jiske bare me abhi dono pariwar yahi jante the ki Nischal aur Jivisha ne bhag kar shadi ki .... ab lo ji ek aur nayi baat ek dum se samne aa gayi.... Nandni aur Nischal ek dusre se pyar karte hain...... Shocked ho kar sab khadey ho gaye....


"Kya.... Kya.... Kya"...... Aschrya me dube sab ke bhaw aur charo ore se bas ek he awaz aa rahi thi...... Nandni ne sab ko apna hath dikhate huye kahne lagi..... "Ek min ruk jao aap sab... issse pahle ki aap sab koi drama shuru karo"..


Nandni ne itna he kaha tha ki Durga devi bich me kud gayi.... chillati hui wo jor se kahne lagi..... "Mar dalungi tujhe... aage jo kuch boli to.... Kya kahna chahti hai, isse pahle ki hum sab koi drama shuru karen usse pahle yahi batana hai na tum bhi iss ladkey ko chahti ho".


Nandni ke papa..... Nandni humare lad pyar ka tum galat fayda utha rahi ho. Jab tumhari shadi pahle se tay ho gayi hai, fir tum ek shadi shuda ladkey ke sath kaise aisa soch bhi sakti ho...


Durga devi.... Upar se wo gunga bahra bhi hai....


Jivisha ki maa Priya.... Kya ye gunga aur bahra bhi hai. Mere to nasib he fute hain.... aakhir tumne iss ladkey me kya dekh liya Jivisha....


Himanshu.... Wahi jo Nandni ne dekha hoga.... Ye aaj kal ki ladkiyan... Kya ho gaya hai tum dono ko....


Nandni..... Enough haan.... tab se aap sab kuch bhi bole ja rahe ho....


Pata nahi Nandni ki baat sun kar Durga devi ko kya hote ja raha tha. Aisa laga jaise uss par bhut sawar ho, wo to kuch sun'na he nahi chahti thi.... Nandni ki baat par ek baar fir Durga devi chillayi.....


Nischal..... Tanik sabhya logon ki tarah pesh aaeye, aur mamle ko shanti se suljhaeye....


Nischal bol bhi sakta hai.... Ek baar fir un sab ke chehre par hairani thi, jo ye samjhte the ki Nischal gunga hai... Hairani bhari aakhen... aur sab ghur rahe the Nischal ko.....


Tabhi Ansh bola..... Achha thik hai main ja raha hun... tum khush rahna Nandni....


Nandni..... Dr agar abhi tum bhage to main tumhara opration kar dungi.... chup-chap idhar khadey raho aur meri baton ka jabaw do.....


Ansh ruk gaya aur Nandni ki ore dekhne laga.... Nandni pure gusse me chillati hui puchhi.... "Jahil kahin ke tumhe kaise pata ki main iss se pyar karti hun"


Ansh.... Tum he to kah rahi thi iss ladke ko, "ki tumhe pyar ka matlab nahi pata"... to isne bhi to kaha ki tum isse pyar ka matlab samjhao to ye samjh jayega... aur tum raji ho gayi....


Nandni gusse me bilbilayi Ansh ka collor pakrti kahne lagi..... "Aadhi baat sun kar koi bhi natija nikaloge... teri to... chalo hospital main tumhara opration wahin karungi... baki ke public dhyan se sun le, mera aur Nischal ke bich kuch bhi pyar mohabbat jaisa nahi hai.... ab agar yadi dobara kisi ne iss bare me kuch kaha to main batati hun"...


Priya..... Thik hai samjh gayi tumhari baat, par iss pagal ka main kya karun... bhag kar shadi kar li.. hume bhi to bata sakti thi... upar se kaise-kaise isne jhut bole...


Nandni.... Uncle aap sab bhi over react kar rahe ho.... Dekho jarra Nischal ko ek dum perfect hai Jivisha ke liye....


Himanshu.... Jivisha hum kya itne gair the ki tum ne shadi se bhagna sahi samjha, par hume ek baar bhi kuch batayi nahi... hum kya 80's ke maa-baap hain...


Sare tamase ki jar Jivisha... jo ab tak bilkul shant chup-chap, iss chidiyaghar type wale mahol ko ander he ander enjoy kar rahi thi, apne papa ke baat par bol pari...


"Papa meri Nandu se baat hui thi.... aap sab chahte the ki main shadi karun, idhar main aur Nandu chahti thi apna Mca complete karna... Mamla yahin fasa tha aur tab maine Nandni se baat ki"....


Jivisha ke muh se apna naam sun kar Nandni ke kaan khadey ho gaye.... ajib si hansi thi... chehre par sikan aur hoton par mukaan..... "Jivisha.. tu chal side me.. mujhe bhi to bata jarra apni kya baat hui".....


Itna bolte-bolte Nandni, Jivisha ke karib aayi aur kano me fus-fusyi.... "Kamini apne problem se nikalne ke liye mujhe mat fasa"....


Durga devi... Nandni tum kya khusar-fusar kar rahi hai... bolne de usse...


Jivisha.... Kuch nahi aunty... Nandni thodi dari hui hai, kyonki hum dono ki ek jaisi haalat hai....


Nandni ke aakhon me aashu nahi the, baki aane wali musibat ko bhapte huye wo ander se thunak rahi thi... aur usse bara man kar raha tha ki wo abhi Jivisha ka gala daba de...


Priya.... Puri baat batao....


Jivisha.... Puri baat ye hai ki Nandni bhi aage padhna chahti thi aur main bhi... Nandni ne bhi ladka pasand kar rakha tha aur maine bhi... Nandni ko bhi abhi shadi nahi karni thi aur mujhe bhi... Par aap sab ne koi rasta nahi chhora.... maine Nandni se baat ki... sara mamla usse bataya.... pahle to boli ki main ghar me sab sach-sach bata dun ....


Himanshu.... Haan sahi he to kah rahi thi... tumne bataya kyon nahi...


Jivisha.... Kyonki aap ko bata deti ki main kisi aur se pyar karti hun to aap tab bhi meri shadi karwate bhale wo ladka Nischal he kyon na hota... isliye Nandni ne finally suggest kiya bhag jao...


Nandni bari si aakhen kiye Jivisha ko dekhne lagi... aur pichhe se ek baar fir Durga devi ke chillane ki awaz aa gayi....


Priya.... Shant ho jaeye Durga ji.... Nandni ka ye naam le rahi hai.... Nandni ne kuch na bhi kaha hota to bhi ye bhagti he. Main iski maa hun aur isse achhe se janti hun.... (fir Jivisha se kahne lagi) Achha, Nandni ne tumhe kaha bhag jao aur tum bhag gayi... par tumhe to shadi se inkaar tha na, fir isse shadi kyon ki ...


Jivisha..... Kya bataun maa... Shadi na karna tha isliye bhagi, par kismat... Nischal lagbhag kud he gaya tha train ke samne, yadi maine haan nahi kaha hota.....


Durga devi.... Tabhi main kahun ye bhag kar sidha yahan kyon aa gayi.... Main aap sab se manfi chahti hun, ki mere bachi ki wajah se ye sab hua...



Priya.... Nandni ne kya kiya wo mujhe pata nahi par aap bilkul na chinta karem Durga ji, kyonki meri jo nautanki beti hai uss ki baton par hume kabhi yakin nahi hota. Waise bhi ye to bache hain nadaniyan karte rahte hain, par ek baat main aap ko bhi kahna chahungi.... jaisa meri beti ne kiya waisa aap ki beti na kare.... inn se puch lijiye aur inhe padhne dijiye... kabhi socha na tha padhne ke liye itna hungama hoga....


Thode dukh ke he sath he sahi par sab ne aakhirkar Nischal aur Jivisha ka rista swikar kar he liya. Durga devi ki jid par Jivisha ki puri family ek din ki mehmaan nawaji ko swikaar kar liya....


Nandni ke kandhe par banduk chala kar Jivisha khud to bach gayi par usse fasa diya. Aur fasaya bhi kaisa.... fir se padhai.... Jab se Jivisha ne ye bomb phoda tha, Nandni uss se akele me milne ke liye betab thi.... Par Jivisha hamesa kisi na kisi ke pichhe chhipi he rahi.....


Bahut mauke talase Nandni ne, par Jivisha hath na aayi.... agle din Jivisha ko le kar uski family wapas Pune rawana ho gayi..... raste bhar Nischal ko Jivisha ki family ke tarah-tarah ke sawalon ko jhelna para....


Bechare ki haalat.... kya jabaw de unke sawalon ka... aur sawal bhi aise ki Nischal unka kya jabaw deta.... Uss ki chuppi, aur dher sara bak-bak Jivisha ka.... Kisi tarah se jabaw bana kar aakhirkar ghar walon ko santust kar he diya Jivisha ne...


Finally sab ghar pahunch chuke the.... Sab log ghar me pahunche.... Nischal sab se pichhe khada tha..... tabhi chahkti hui ek awaz hall me gunji.... "Wowww, Jivisha ne shadi kar liya... Kahan hai mere jiju"...


Sab log side hat gaye aur sab se pichhe Nichal khara tha..... Nischal ki najar jab uss ladki par gayi... wo bas ek tak dekhta he rah gaya.... Wo usse dekhne pura kho sa gaya... waise wo ladki thi he aisi .... jaise har jawan dilon ki dharkan ho... jo bhi ladka usse dekhe bas deewana ho jaye.....


Idhar... Apini aur Josefer..


Dono khoji aur janwar ke wapas laut kar aane ke baad Apini aur Josefer aapas me charcha karte huye..


Josefer.... Apini, Malkia ki shakti humare soch se bhi pare hain .... par ek baat jo samajh me nahi aayi.... Aakhir wo ladka kaun tha jo itni tej daur raha tha.... Uspar humla karne ke liye viman ko 8km dur rokna para aur itni duri hone ke bawjoood bus pal bhar ka samay mila humle ke liye.


Apini.... Koi idea nahi, par hume bahut safai ke sath sari baton ka pata lagana hoga.... aur sath me Malkia par najar bhi deni hogi, unke bare me bina jane, unke karib jana khatarnak hai....


Josefer.... Main uske ghar me uska pet ban kar ghusne ki kosis karta hun, aur sari baton ka pata lagata hun...


Apini.... Haan ye sahi rahega.... Aur main to ye kahta hun... yadi ho sake to uss ladkey ko wahin mar dena....


Josefer.... Chinta mat karo, main ek-ek kar ke Malkia ke pure pariwar ko he tod dunga. Taki jab wo tanha ho jaye fir hum hi unke eklaute sahara ho.
badi khatarnaam planing chal rahi hai yanha to :yikes:
 
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