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UPDATE 4
Dinner ke baad hamne kuch der tak bate ki......
Isi vich mam ne mujhe dava bhi dedi......
Fir mujhe ground floor pe hi babe guest room me leja ke lita diya......
Fir mam light of karke chali gayi......
Bakki sabhi bhi uth ke apne apne room mein chale gaye........
Me raat pata nahi kitni der tak jagta raha....
Aur sochta raha ki akhir mam aur unka parivar mujh se itna pyar kyu karte hai.......
Par fir me aari bate jhatak ke so gya........
# Nayi Subha hui......
Pata nahi yeh subha kiske liye kya lati hai.....
Preet aaj sabh se pehle uthi......
Is din ka intezar najane usne kab se kiya tha.......
Uska har waqt yahi khab tha ki.....
Uska bhi koi bhai ho aur woh use pyar se uthaye.....
Aur woh sapna bhi aaj pura hone wala tha.......
Woh jaldi se uthi aur apne room ka darwaza khol ke niche ki floor ki aur bhagi.......
Par shayad abhi uska sapna pura hone ka waqt nahi aya tha.......
Woh jese hi seediyon ke pass pohanchi ki uska pair fisal gya......
Uski muh se cheekh nikal gayi......
Preet - mummmmmyyyyyy........
Aur woh seediyon pe girne lagi......
Woh ludakti hui seediyon se niche ki aur jaa rahi thi.....
Idhar sabhi ne uski cheekh sun li.....
Sabhi jaldi se bed se uthke bhage......
Main bhi bhaga......
Jab ham bhar pohanche to Preet seediyon se gir rahi thi......
Jab woh last seedi pe pohanchi to uska sar seedi ki nok se takra geya......
Uske sar se khoon nikalne laga.......
Aur woh behosh ho gayi........
Sabhi log bhag ke uske pass pohnche......
Sabhi ki ankhon mein asun aa gaye......
Kavita mam - (rote hue) gudiya beta uth ja......
Beta dekh teri mama tere pass hai......
(Uncle se) Deepak dekho hamari gudiya uth kyu nahi rahi hai.....
Us uthao plz.....
Deepak uncle ne jaldi se Preet ko goad mein uthaya.......
Aur bahar ki aur bhage.......
Bahar aake unho ne gudiya ko back seat pe litaya......
Gudiya ke sath piche mam bhi baith gayi......
Main uncle ke sath again baith gya......
Main aur aunti apni puri koshish kar rahe the.....
Jaldi hi ham log hospital pohanch gaye.......
Preet ko OT me lijaya gya......
3 ghante tak operation chalta raha.....
Fir doctor bahar aa gaye......
kavita mam - doctor neri bachi kesi hai......
Doctor - dekhiye abhi ham kuch nahi keh sakte......
Unke sar pe kafi chot lagi hai......
Aur khoon bhi kafi beh gya hai....
Is liye abhi patient ko observation me rakhna hoga......
Agar unhe kal tak hosh nahi aya to woh koma mein bhi ja sakti hai.......
Yeh sun ke hi ham sabh ki ankhon se jhar jhar ansun behne lage......
Jaldi hi Preet ko room mein shift kar diya......
Mam aur uncle uske pass chale gaye........
Main bahar hi baith gya......
Mere mann mein luch chal raha tha.......
Kuch der baad main uth ke chal diya........
Kahan pata nahi......
Bas chalne laga......
Me kuch kadam hi chala tha ki.....
Mujhe hospital mein ek mandir dikha.......
Main ja ke mandir sahmne hath jod ke ghutno ke bal baith gya.......
Main - hey bhagwan kyu likha hai yeh sab meri kismat mein.......
Jo bhi mere kareeb ata hai.....
Uske sath hamesa bura hota hai.....
Badi mushkil se koi mujhe pyar karne laga tha......
Par woh bhi jayada waqt nahi chala.....
Kyu bhagwan akhir kyu......
Meri us pyari si gudiya Preet ki kya galti hai.....
Woh to fool yesi bachi hai......
Uske sath itna bura kyu kiya......
Jo kuch karna hai mere sath karo.....
Us bachi ko bacha ko bhagwan.....
Meri gudiya ko bacha lo bhagwan......
Main vadda karta hun ki main usse hamesha ke liye door ho jaunga......
Bas meri gudiya ko theak kardi......
Meri manhoosiat ka saya uske upar na pade bhagwan plz.......
Ek baar use hosh aa jaye bas fir main us se door ho haunga.......
Plz bhagwan......
Plz.......
Idhar main bhagwan ke age prathna kar raha tha......
Aur koi tha jo meri bate sun raha tha........
Yeh koi aur nahi mam thi........
Darasal baat yeh hai ki.......
Jab mam ander Preer ke pas baithi to ek dam se unke dimag me mere bare mein aya.......
Fir mam ne mujhe idhar udhar dekha.......
Par main room mein nahi tha......
Fir woh bahar aa gayi......
Jab woh bahar ayi main unko besud sa kahin jata hua dikhayi diya......
Unho ne mujhe awaz lagai par mene nahi suna.......
Fir mam bhi mere piche aa gayi.....
Fir main mandir main chalte chalte baith gya.....
Mam bhi mere piche hi thi.....
Mam ke mujh tak pohancne tak mene apni prathna shuru kar di thi jo ki mam ne bhi sun li.......
Aur mere sath sath unke bhi akhon mein asun the......
Fir mam palat ke vahan se chali gayi......
Main bhi vahan se uth ke vapis room ke pass aake baith gya.......
Man bhi Preet ke pass hi baithi thi.......
Par unke dimag main Meri bate hi ghum rahi thi.......
Ese hi pura din beet gya......
Aur raat bhi......
Par Preet ko hosh nahi aya tha......
# Next day....
Dopehar ka waqt tha par abhi bhi Preet ko hosh nahi aya tha......
Ab sabhi ke dil ka dar badhne laga tha......
Kyu ki agar Preet ko hosh nahi ata to.......
Preet koma mai chali jati......
Dopehar ke 01:30 ka time tha......
Mam Preet ke pass hi baithi thi......
Kavita mam - beta uth ja na.....
Kyu apni maa ko tadpa rahi hai......
Beta uth ja na nahi teri mumma ki jaan nikal jayegi plz beta......
Idhar main bhi mann hi mann Preet ke theak hone ki dua mang raha tha......
Par kehte hai na bhagwan ke ghar der hai andher nahi......
Shayad yeh kahawat kisi ne sach hi banai hai.......
Mam Preet ke hath pe sar rakh ke ro rahi thi.....
Ki tabhi achanak........
CONTINUED...........
Dinner ke baad hamne kuch der tak bate ki......
Isi vich mam ne mujhe dava bhi dedi......
Fir mujhe ground floor pe hi babe guest room me leja ke lita diya......
Fir mam light of karke chali gayi......
Bakki sabhi bhi uth ke apne apne room mein chale gaye........
Me raat pata nahi kitni der tak jagta raha....
Aur sochta raha ki akhir mam aur unka parivar mujh se itna pyar kyu karte hai.......
Par fir me aari bate jhatak ke so gya........
# Nayi Subha hui......
Pata nahi yeh subha kiske liye kya lati hai.....
Preet aaj sabh se pehle uthi......
Is din ka intezar najane usne kab se kiya tha.......
Uska har waqt yahi khab tha ki.....
Uska bhi koi bhai ho aur woh use pyar se uthaye.....
Aur woh sapna bhi aaj pura hone wala tha.......
Woh jaldi se uthi aur apne room ka darwaza khol ke niche ki floor ki aur bhagi.......
Par shayad abhi uska sapna pura hone ka waqt nahi aya tha.......
Woh jese hi seediyon ke pass pohanchi ki uska pair fisal gya......
Uski muh se cheekh nikal gayi......
Preet - mummmmmyyyyyy........
Aur woh seediyon pe girne lagi......
Woh ludakti hui seediyon se niche ki aur jaa rahi thi.....
Idhar sabhi ne uski cheekh sun li.....
Sabhi jaldi se bed se uthke bhage......
Main bhi bhaga......
Jab ham bhar pohanche to Preet seediyon se gir rahi thi......
Jab woh last seedi pe pohanchi to uska sar seedi ki nok se takra geya......
Uske sar se khoon nikalne laga.......
Aur woh behosh ho gayi........
Sabhi log bhag ke uske pass pohnche......
Sabhi ki ankhon mein asun aa gaye......
Kavita mam - (rote hue) gudiya beta uth ja......
Beta dekh teri mama tere pass hai......
(Uncle se) Deepak dekho hamari gudiya uth kyu nahi rahi hai.....
Us uthao plz.....
Deepak uncle ne jaldi se Preet ko goad mein uthaya.......
Aur bahar ki aur bhage.......
Bahar aake unho ne gudiya ko back seat pe litaya......
Gudiya ke sath piche mam bhi baith gayi......
Main uncle ke sath again baith gya......
Main aur aunti apni puri koshish kar rahe the.....
Jaldi hi ham log hospital pohanch gaye.......
Preet ko OT me lijaya gya......
3 ghante tak operation chalta raha.....
Fir doctor bahar aa gaye......
kavita mam - doctor neri bachi kesi hai......
Doctor - dekhiye abhi ham kuch nahi keh sakte......
Unke sar pe kafi chot lagi hai......
Aur khoon bhi kafi beh gya hai....
Is liye abhi patient ko observation me rakhna hoga......
Agar unhe kal tak hosh nahi aya to woh koma mein bhi ja sakti hai.......
Yeh sun ke hi ham sabh ki ankhon se jhar jhar ansun behne lage......
Jaldi hi Preet ko room mein shift kar diya......
Mam aur uncle uske pass chale gaye........
Main bahar hi baith gya......
Mere mann mein luch chal raha tha.......
Kuch der baad main uth ke chal diya........
Kahan pata nahi......
Bas chalne laga......
Me kuch kadam hi chala tha ki.....
Mujhe hospital mein ek mandir dikha.......
Main ja ke mandir sahmne hath jod ke ghutno ke bal baith gya.......
Main - hey bhagwan kyu likha hai yeh sab meri kismat mein.......
Jo bhi mere kareeb ata hai.....
Uske sath hamesa bura hota hai.....
Badi mushkil se koi mujhe pyar karne laga tha......
Par woh bhi jayada waqt nahi chala.....
Kyu bhagwan akhir kyu......
Meri us pyari si gudiya Preet ki kya galti hai.....
Woh to fool yesi bachi hai......
Uske sath itna bura kyu kiya......
Jo kuch karna hai mere sath karo.....
Us bachi ko bacha ko bhagwan.....
Meri gudiya ko bacha lo bhagwan......
Main vadda karta hun ki main usse hamesha ke liye door ho jaunga......
Bas meri gudiya ko theak kardi......
Meri manhoosiat ka saya uske upar na pade bhagwan plz.......
Ek baar use hosh aa jaye bas fir main us se door ho haunga.......
Plz bhagwan......
Plz.......
Idhar main bhagwan ke age prathna kar raha tha......
Aur koi tha jo meri bate sun raha tha........
Yeh koi aur nahi mam thi........
Darasal baat yeh hai ki.......
Jab mam ander Preer ke pas baithi to ek dam se unke dimag me mere bare mein aya.......
Fir mam ne mujhe idhar udhar dekha.......
Par main room mein nahi tha......
Fir woh bahar aa gayi......
Jab woh bahar ayi main unko besud sa kahin jata hua dikhayi diya......
Unho ne mujhe awaz lagai par mene nahi suna.......
Fir mam bhi mere piche aa gayi.....
Fir main mandir main chalte chalte baith gya.....
Mam bhi mere piche hi thi.....
Mam ke mujh tak pohancne tak mene apni prathna shuru kar di thi jo ki mam ne bhi sun li.......
Aur mere sath sath unke bhi akhon mein asun the......
Fir mam palat ke vahan se chali gayi......
Main bhi vahan se uth ke vapis room ke pass aake baith gya.......
Man bhi Preet ke pass hi baithi thi.......
Par unke dimag main Meri bate hi ghum rahi thi.......
Ese hi pura din beet gya......
Aur raat bhi......
Par Preet ko hosh nahi aya tha......
# Next day....
Dopehar ka waqt tha par abhi bhi Preet ko hosh nahi aya tha......
Ab sabhi ke dil ka dar badhne laga tha......
Kyu ki agar Preet ko hosh nahi ata to.......
Preet koma mai chali jati......
Dopehar ke 01:30 ka time tha......
Mam Preet ke pass hi baithi thi......
Kavita mam - beta uth ja na.....
Kyu apni maa ko tadpa rahi hai......
Beta uth ja na nahi teri mumma ki jaan nikal jayegi plz beta......
Idhar main bhi mann hi mann Preet ke theak hone ki dua mang raha tha......
Par kehte hai na bhagwan ke ghar der hai andher nahi......
Shayad yeh kahawat kisi ne sach hi banai hai.......
Mam Preet ke hath pe sar rakh ke ro rahi thi.....
Ki tabhi achanak........
CONTINUED...........
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