Fantasy shivam.. the warrior..

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Update.. 14.. rohan..​

Nidhi dar ke mare bed ke ek kinare bethi hui thi.. esa lag raha tha ki maut uske samne hi baithi ho.. pasine se nahai hui nidhi poori rat so nahi paai, subeh me jab woh der tak soti rahi and nashta karne ke lie niche nahi aai tab surya ne maid ko upar bheja nidhi ko jagane ke lie.. maid jese hi upar aai usne dekha ki nidhi bed ke ek kinare sikud kar soi hui hai usne kambal odh rakha hai fir bhi kaanp rahi thi.. esa lag raha tha ki jese woh kisi dar ke kaaran ese kaanp rahi hai.. maid ne jese hi usko chhua woh chaunk gai uska badan angaro jese dehak rha tha and woh bekhayali mein badbada rahi thi, ‘’ woh laut aaya hai.. woh hame maar dega.. woh sab tabah kar dega koi nahi bachega.. ‘’​

Maid ne use jhakjhor kar jagaya par jese hi use hosh aaya woh rohan naam le kar behosh ho gai.. woh maid singhaniyas ke family me last 15saal se thi woh bhale hi singhaniyas ke sare raaz na janti ho par use un sab ka bharosa prapt tha.. usne singhaniya brothers ko jaldi se upar bulaya jese hi surya ne nidhi ke sar ko chhua woh bhi chaunk gaya and jese hi usne nidhi ke muh se rohan ka naam suna woh bhi thoda dar gaya.. (that’s why rebel have said everyone will have to pay for what they have done) ..​

Surya ne apni feelings par control kia and usne jaldi se doctor ko call kar ke bula lia.. thodi der me hi doctor aa gaya and usne nidhi ka check up kia and usko dawai and injection de kar room se bahar aa gaya and singhaniyas se puchha, “yeh rohan kaun hai.. usne nidhi ke man par esa dar banaya hua hai ki woh nind me bhi usse dar gai thi shayad.. do something jisse apki sister ka dar khatam ho ya fir uska mind is matter se divert ho jaye..” itna keh kar doctor chala gaya..​

Surya gusse me chillate hue, “ rohan.. rohan rohan.. kab pichha chhutega is naam and us rohan ke khauf se.. hamari life par yeh grehan ban kar beth gaya hai.. usne pehle hi hame bahot nuxan kia tha uski maut ke baad bhi ham usne jo nuxan hame kia hai woh recover nahi kar paaye hain.. chalo maan lia ki hamne use us din maar dia tha par usne marte hue bhi hamare dar ko khatam nahi hone dia tha.. “​

Shamsher : tum us waqt yahan nahi the warna tum yeh nahi bolte.. is kahani ki shuruat bhi nidhi ki wajah se hui thi and us kahani ka ant bhi nidhi ke haatho hi hua tha.. par uske naam ka khauf aaj bhi hamari nind uda deti hai and uske hone ka soch kar bhi maut ka dar hamare dil dimaag ko hila deta hai..

(ab is story mein rohan ka flashback chalega jo ki is story ka main base hai.. enjoy it..)​

Flashback..​

Year 2015, month june ..​

Location shah company..​

Yeh company rohan ne apni swargiya bua shanti shyamsundar shah ke naam par banaya tha.. shanti bua ne rohan ko apne bade bhai raghav ki maut ke baad apni santaan ki tarha paala tha.. shanti bua ki 2 betiya thi jinki unke bachpan me hi kisi bimari ke chalte maut ho gai thi.. shanty bua and fufa ji ne rohan ko apne beta maan kar use har jagah par support kia tha and unhone uski shaadi uski pasand ki ladki gulshan se karwai thi.. kismet ki bat thi ke jis din rohan and gulshan ki pehli santaan sanjana peda hui usi din usko ashirwaad dete hue chal base..​

Waqt bitta gaya rohan ki company world ki top ten companies me shumar ho chuki thi par woh apne maa papa ( bua and fufa ji) ki legacy ko bhula nahi tha usne un dono ke naam par kai sare hospitals schools animal shelters animals ke lie hospitals etc sab banwaya tha.. usne crime ko mitaane ke lie sarkar and police ki madad karne ke lie kai sare gadgets and weapons bana kar unhe die hue the.. woh khud bhi ek achha ninja warrior tha par who jab tak zaruri na ho hathiyar nahi uthata tha..​

Khair kehte hain na ki waqt har baar same nahi rehta.. ab tak gulshan ne apni ek aur beti urvi ko janam de dia tha.. ek din jab rohan gulshan and apni dono betiyo ke sath movie dekh kar ghar jaa rha tha usne dekha ki kuchh log 2 policewalo ko maar rahe hain and policewalo ki haalat bahot jyada kharab thi.. rohan niche utra and jaldi se un gundo ke pas pahocha and isse pehle ki woh log police waalo par aur hamla karte rohan ne apni ninja skills ka use karte hue ek gunde ki gardan ko ek punch maar kar tod dia.. jese hi us gunde ki gardan todi baki ke gunde rohan ki taraf lapke par kuchh hi der mein sab rohan ke haatho maar kha kar beth gaye.. rohan jaldi se unsab ke paas gaya usne gulshan ko ishara kar kar back up bulane ke lie kaha.. thodi hi der mein riyaaz (rohan ka dr.friend ) and rohan ki team 2 ambulance ke saath pahoch chuke the..​

Unhone dono policewaalo ko ambulance me letaya and unki shuruati treatment shuru kar di.. rohan ne un sab gundo ko apni team ke haatho apne secret base bhijwa dia tha.. yahi pal tha jab rohan ka samna singhaniyas se pehli baar hone wala tha.. rohan ne gulshan and apni betiyo ko ghar chhoda and fir hospital aa gaya.. riyaaz use bataya ki policewalo ki halat stable hai bas ek do fractures hai.. rohan riyaz ke sath ward me gaya jahan policewaale rest kar rahe the..​

Rohan unke pas gaya and unko respect dete hue salute kia.. dono ke haath me fractures the is lie woh return me salute nahi kar paaye.. rohan ne un dono ke bed ke bich bani jagah me stool le kar beth gaya and baat shuru kari..​

Rohan : I am sorry main apko puri tarha se protect nahi kar paaya.. mera naam rohan hai.. mai jaha par aap par hamla hua tha us jagah se thodi hi dur ek colony me rehta hu.. mai apni family ke sath movie dekhne gaya hua tha and lautte waqt apke upar hue hamle ko dekha and apki madad karne se khud ko rok nahi paya.. kya main jaan sakta hu ki un logo ne ap par hamla kyu kia tha..​

Dono policewale pehle toh chup rahe.. unke facial expressions se lag raha tha ki who rohan ko apne bare mein batana nahi chahte the.. thodi der baad unme se ek ne bolna shuru kia.. tab tak riyaaz ward me se bahar chala gaya tha..​

Policemen 1.. hum normal policewale nahi hai.. hame central gov. ne raw ke head ki madad se yaha par plant kia tha singhaniyas naam ke criminal ko pakadne ya fir usko khatam karne ke lie.. par hame nahi maalum tha ki hamara mission singhaniyas ke samne disclose ho gaya hai.. fir bhi ham apne desh ki khatir apna mission pura karne me lage rahe.. aaj hame lead mili thi ke yaha par singhaniyas koi deal karne ke lie aane wale hain.. par it was a trap.. um logo ne ham par dhokhe se hamla kar dia fir bhi hamne unke aadhe drugs ko tabah kar dia tha..​

Policeman 2.. jese tese kar ke ham road tak pahoche par unke gunde waha par bhi hamara wait kar rahe the unhone firse ham par hamla kar dia and kismet se tumne hame bacha lia..​

Rohan : to kya karenge ab aap dono ? shayad ab aap dono wapis raw me bhi nahi jaa sakte kyu ki aapki identity and mission dono disclose ho chuke hain..​

Policeman 1.. : sahi kaha tumne par ab tension yeh hai ki hamari family ka kya hoga.. agar singhaniyas ka luck sahi rha toh woh hamari family tak bhi pahoch sakte hain.. hame hamari parwaah nahi hai bas hamari family ko kisi tarha safe kar lein..​

Intro time..​

Tushar and ashish.. yeh dono sage bhai hai and sath me dono raw ke secret agents bhi hain.. par ab inka ek mission and unki secret identity disclose ho jane ki wajha se wo raw me abhi thode waqt ke lie nahi ja sakte..​

Karuna.. tushar ki wife and shivam ki yashoda maiya.. inko ek bimari hai jiske wajha se wo kabhi maa nahi ban sakti..​

Rohan kaafi der tak kuchh sochta raha fir usne apni team k ek member ko call kar ke hospital bula liya.. thodi der baad woh banda rohan ke samne tha..​

Rohan : isse milo yeh mera dost agent 0 (ADYAANT ) hai.. wese toh iska real name kuchh aur hi hai yeh bhi tumhari tarha hi ek secret agent hai par ek mission ke lie abhi hamari city mein aaye hue hain.. yeh mera bachpan ka dost hai is lie hamari help ke lie haazir ho gaye.. tum dono chaaho toh inko join kar sakte ho.. and rahi baat tumhari family ki toh uski protection ki resposnsibility main leta hu..​

Khair tushar and ashish ne agent 0 ki team ko join kar lia apni identity change karne ke bad.. ab unka face bhi change ho gaya tha is lie unko koi bhi pehchan nahi payega.. karuna ab rohan ki family mein ghul mil gait hi uski and gulshan ki dosti kaafi strong ho gai thi jese ki woh dono ek dusre ko bachpan se janti ho.. waqt guzar gaya and shivam ka janam hone me bas thhoda hi waqt baki tha ki tabi ek din rohan ka phone baj utha…​

On call : kese ho mr.rohan.. suna hai tumhe logo ko bachane ka kuchh jyada hi chaska chadha hua hai.. who sab jaane do jin dono ko tumne bachaya hai who hamare hatho se marenge hi par agar tum hamare raste mein aaye toh tumhe tabah karne ke bare mein ham sochenge bhi nahi.. wese main batana bhul hi gaya main hu surya singhaniya..​

Rohan kuchh kehta usse pehle hi call cut ho chuka tha and usne gabhrate hue tushar ko call kia… who tushar se kuchh kehta usse pehle hi use call par blast hone ki awaz aai.. rohan jaldi se ek hotel pahocha jaha pr bahot bhayanak aag lagi hui thi and aag usi area me lagi thi jaha par tushar and ashish ka room tha.. rohan kaise bhi kar ke dono ki taraf badha.. ashish mar chukka tha par tushar ki sanse abhi bhi baaki thi.. jese hi rohan ne usko chhua usne apni aakhe kholi and rohan ka haath pakad lia..​

Tushar : rohan bhai yeh blast singhaniyas ne hi karvaya hai.. ham apna ek mission pura hone ke baad ghar hi aane wale the par kisi wajh se yha is hotel room me rukna pda.. hamne apni identity change kar di thi par ham hamare passport ka number change karna bhul gaye the and usi wajah se ham pakde gaye.. singhaniyas ke bich ek hi insaan hai jiske pas itna dimaag hai nidhi .. usse thoda savdhaan rahiega.. itna kehte hi uski bhi saase tham chuki thi..​

Rohan dukhi ho gaya tha.. bhale hi tushar and uski family ke sath uska koi blood relation nahi tha par dosti ka rishta bhi kuchh jyaada kamzor nahi tha.. usne dono ki body ka handover le lia and woh ambulance me daal kar ghar le aaya.. sab ki aakhe nam thi .. gulshan ne ashish and tushar ke roop me apne bade bhaio ko khoya tha.. rohan ne un dono ka bada bhai ban kar khud apne hatho se un dono ka antim sanskar kia .. jab un dono ki chita jal rahi thi tab rohan ki aakho me badle ka jwalamukhi jal raha tha jo shayad singhaniyas ke khilaaf jung ka elaan hi tha..​

The war has just about to start.. evil will be terminated by the devil himself.. be prepared to be vitness of devil’s wrath..​

 

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Update 15.. rise and fall of devil..​

Flashback continues.. ( real action begins)​

Ashish and tushar ki maut ko ek mahina guzar chukka tha and isi waqt ke dauraan gulshan ki pregnancy ko 8month ho chuke the and ab kabhi bhi delivery hone waali thi.. rohan ne apne badle ki aag ko thode waqt ke lie control me kia hua tha par fir bhi usne apne badle ki taiyari shuru kar di thi.. usne apni team ki madad se singhaniyas ke bare me sari information har jagah se ikattha kar li thi.. bas ab intezar tha to bas sahi waqt ka par rohan apne aane wale bure waqt se anjaan tha..​

Oct 2015..​

Gulshan ko labour pain shuru ho gaya tha and rohan karuna ki madad se use le kar hospital aa gaya tha.. kabhi bhi delivery hone waali thi.. par kismet ko kuchh aur hi manzur tha jese hi delivery ke lie gulshan ko ot me le jaya gaya dr. andar ghuste usse pehle hi compounders ne door bandh kar dia and unhone gulshan par chaku se hamla kar dia..woh khud ko bachane ke lie ot mein idhar se udhar bhaag rahi thi.. rohan and uske sare dost ot ka door todne ka poora try kar rahe the par khul ya toot nahi raha tha.. andar shayad gulshan ki kismet thodi achhi thi uske hath mein do surgical knives aa gai thi usne ek gunde ke tango ke bich knife ghusa di and dusre ke hath ki 3 4 nabz kaat di thi par fir bhi who bahot ghayal ho chuki thi.. usne ladkhadate hue door khola..​

Rohan ne jese hi use dekha uski aakhe dar and gusse se jal uthi.. usne dr. ko chillate hue order dia ki who gulshan ki treatment shuru kar de dusre ot mein.. kismet se rohan ki team waha aa chuki thi.. rohan ne un darindo ko bina kuchh soche maarna shuru kar dia jaha par gulshan ne ghaav die the un ghavo ko rohan ne naasur bana dia tha.. who darinde maut ki bhikh maang rahe the par aaj unka samna real devil se hone wala tha.. rohan ne dono ke kapde faad die underwear bhi nahi rehne dia unki body par..​

Rohan : bas ek sawal kisne bheja tha tum dono ko.. agr bata dia toh asaan mout milegi warna devil jo saza hell me mare hue logo ko deta hai wohi saza mein tum dono ko jinda rakh kr dunga.. yeh baat usne bade hi cruel expressions ke sath boli thi like puri dunia ki darindagi uski aakho me samai ho..​

Rohan ne 10minutes tak wait kia par unhone kuchh nahi bola.. bas yahi pal tha jis pal se rohan ne apne andar ke devil ko khula chhod dia tha.. usne pehle toh un dono ke haath ko ot table par rakh kar surgical scissores ko undono ke dono hath me is tarha ghusa dia ki who scixors table ko chirte hue table ke aar par nikal gai.. usne fir se apna sawal dohraya par jab response nahi aaya toh rohan ne waha par pada lohe ka table tod dia and unke pichhe pura ghusa dia.. and who dono ke samne surgery mein use hone waala sara saman le kar khada ho gaya.. dono ki aakho me dard saaf dikh raha tha rohan ne unko warning dete hue puchha…​

Unhone ishare se apni haar man li and rohan ko pta tha ki who kuchh bolne ki halat mein nahi the is lie who un dono ke nazdik chala gaya.. use undono ke muh se bas ek hi naam nikla : RAGHAV SINGHANIYA.. rohan ne jo information nikalwai thi usme yeh nam bhi shamil tha.. rohan ne bari bari dono ki aakhe nikaal li and unki jibh kaat di.. uske baad usne un dono ka jabda kaat kar bahar nikala and unke samne fek dia.. pura hospital unki chikho se gunj raha tha sab ko pata chal chukka tha jaha par jindagi bachai jaati thi aaj ki raat waha pr maut nanga naach karne wali thi.. rohan kahi se bahot sare bade bade kil aur hathoda le aaya..​

“yeh meri gulshan ko nazar utha kar dekhne ke lie” keh kar usne un dono ki aakh mein kil thok di.. dono hath jod kar apni maut maang rahe the par rohan aaj jese paagal ho chukka tha.. usne sare kil unki har body parts ko kil se jad dia tha and last me usne ek 2inch badi kil dono ki khopdi mein ghusa dia.. jisse dono ko itna dard hua ki dono bahot buri tarha se chillane lage rohan ne un dono ko tadapta chhod dia and bahar nikal gaya.. jab chikho ka shor shant hua toh riyaz ne darte hue ot ka door khola usne jo dekha usse who khauf kha gaya.. usne rohan ka beast mode kai baar dekha tha par aaj jo hua who kuchh aur hi hai.. rohan naha kar khud ko clean kar ke wapis aa gaya..​

Par aaj rohan ke andar ka jaanwar jese hamesha ke lie aazad hone wala tha.. jese hi who dusre ot ke pas pahocha usne dekha ki karuna aakho me aasu lie bethi thi.. doctors ki aakho mein bhi aasu the.. gulshan thi bhi esi shakhsiyat.. rohan ko laga jese kuchh bahot bura hua hai.. who bhaag kar ot ke andar gaya jaha gulshan aakhri saas le rahi thi and uske baju mein un dono ka beta (shivam) soya hua tha.. rohan ki aakho se aasu behne lage and who daud kar uski jaan ke paas chala gaya..​

gulshan ab dunia chhod kar jaa chuki thi rohan us din khud ko kho chuka tha..usne uska antim sanskar kia and nikal pada apne safar par..usne pehle raghav ki taqat ko khatam kia and baad me use janwar se bhi battar maut marne ke baad woh thoda shaant ho chuka tha.. par usne nahi socha tha ki jung abhi baaki hai..​

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3months later of that day..​

Rohan apni office me bethe hue kuchh kaam kar raha tha and abhi uski kisi ke saath meeting thi.. who apna kaam kar hi raha tha ki intercom baja and receptionist ne use inform kia ki koi girl usse milne aai hai .. rohan ne use cabin me bhejne ko kaha psr use nahi pata tha ki uske past ki jhalak use dekhne ko mil jayegi..​

Door knock hua and rohan ne upcoming stranger ko andar aane ki permission grant ki.. thodi hi der bad uske samne ek 30saal ki ladki khadi thi.. shakal se who kafi sundar and attractive lag rahi thi.. rohan ne usko bethne ko kaha and uske aane ka reason puchha..​

Girl.. : I am nidhi.. nidhi singhaniya daughter of raghav singhaniya.. and mujhe maalum hai ki tumne hi mere pita ka khun kia hai par tumhe nahi maalum ki tumne kisse panga lia hai.. wese toh mujhe tumse nafrat karni chahie par pata nahi kyu par tum par pyaar aa raha hai.. mere ghulaam ban jao mujhse shadi kr lo mai tumhe bhikh me jindagi de dungi.. warna mujhe kisi se uska sab kuchh chin lene mein bahot maza aata hai.. kahi mai tumse tumhara sab kuchh chhin na lu..​

Rohan with devil smiile : tumhare papa ne bhi mujhse mere bhai jese dosto ko mujhse chhin lia tha.. toh meine uski esi halat kar di thi ke uski bachi hui jindagi bhi maut se battar ho gait hi.. usne ek devil ko aazad kar dia tha to saza to milni hi thi.. main janta hu ki singhaniyas ki family me tumhare alawa tumhare do bhai and 2nd number ke bhai ka beta hi hai.. agar mujhse panga logi toh tumhari bachi kuchi family ko bhi khatam kar dunga..​

Rohan ko malum tha ki kisi na kisi din yeh hoga hi is lie usne apne bachcho ke sath karuna ko dehradun me bane apne ek secret jagah par bhej dia tha is lie use jung ko fir se shuru karne me koi mushkil na ho.. rohan ne us din ke baad singhaniyas ke kale dhandho ke bases ko khatam karne ka kaam shuru kar dia tha.. usne almost singhaniyas ko tabah kar hi dia tha tabhi who manhoos raat aa gai jab shivam se sab chin gaya tha..​

Us din karuna sanjana and urvi ke saath rohan ko milne aai hui thi.. sabhi hasi khushi dinner kar hi rahe the ki ghar ki lights chali gai and kisi ne window se ek smoke bomb fek dia jis wajah se sab ki saas atak rahi thi.. thodi der baad ghar ka darwazza toota and singhaniyas apne aadmiyo ke sath andar aa gaye.. rohan ko awaz se pata chal gaya tha ki koi ghusa hai par dhue and ghutti hui saans ke karan kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha tha.. thodi der baad un sab ko mehsus hua ki kuchh log unhe ghere khade hain.. rohan ne mushkil se apne kandhe par bandhi katana swards nikali.. par ttab tak kafi der ho chuki thi singhaniyas ne karuna sanju and urvi par hamla kar dia tha.. karuna unko bachate hue bahot ghayal ho gait hi.. rohan bhi singhaniyas ke aadmiyo ko kaatte hue aage badh raha tha.. par jese hi who unke pas pahocha use apne hathiyar daaal dene pde.. uske samne karuna bahot hi jyada ghayal avastha me nidhi ke kabze me thi and sanju and urvi bhi ghayal avastha mein un sab ke kabze mein thi..​

Nidhi : meine tumhe ek mauka dia tha ki mere ghulaam ban jao par tum nahi mane ab bhugto.. keh kar usne apne bhaio ko ishara kia uske bhaio ne rohan ke samne hi uski family ko maar dia.. rohan ne jese hi yeh dekha uske andar ka devil fir se jag utha and usne firse apni katana uthai and unki taraf badhne laga.. around 250aadmi the singhaniyas ke fir bhi who unhe marte hue aage badh raha tha.. chaku talvar goli sav ke ghaav uske body par lage hue the.. aakhir who surya ke samne ja pahocha and jese hi usne surya par pehla waar kia uski pith me kisi ne chaku se war kar dia tha yeh aur koi nahi nidhi hi thi.. rohan ne fir bhi haar nahi maani and ghum kar nidhi ke haath par vaar karte hue uska hath kaat dia.. tab tak singhaniya bhaio ne us par aakhri war kar dia..​

Rohan ab ghutno par aa chukka tha fir bhi uski aakho mein maut ka khauf nahi tha.. usne sab ki aakho me dekhte hue kaha, “ ab bhi waqt hai maar do mujhe warna agar main bach gaya toh tumhe har pal har lamha 1000 maut maarunga.. roz mere naam ke khauf se daroge par mera kuchh nahi kar paoge..”​

Nidhi ko rohan ki yeh baat sun kar bahot gussa aya par uski aakho me basi cruelty and rage ko dekh kar who bahot dar gai thi.. usne surya ke haatho se gun li and bachi hui sari bullets rohan ke sine mein utaar di.. par fir bhi rohan ke chehre par se devil smile gayab nahi hui thi..​

Rohan : tum sab ne aaj mujhe toh maar dia par tum ko pata nahi ki ab tumse badla lene kaun aayega.. mera beta aayega tumse badla lene ke lie.. and jab who aayega tab tum uska ghantaa kuchh nahi ukhaad paoge.. in final words ke sath rohan ki life ka safar khatam ho jaata hai..​

End of flashback..​

Ek pita ka badla.. unki legacy jiske sath is jung ki shuruat hui thi and ab ise shivam ko hi aage badhana hai..​

End of update 15..​

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karuna maa.. shivam and uski behno ki yashoda maiya.. inhone shivam ko kabhi maa ki kami mehsus nahi hone di


tushar.. rohan ka ek lauta dost kam bhai and karuna ka pati..


rohan.. shivam ke pita and shah company ke founder..


gulshan.. shivam ki biological Mother..

 

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Shivam apana badla le singhania se

 

[Xabhi]

bhai mene update me ek scend edit kar ke daala hai.. ap padh lio

Ha Maine padha Vo, aapne idhar nidhi ka dream dikhaya jo Sayad uske past me hua koi incident me se ek hoga...

Rohan : The Punisher, Dekhte hai or kya kya janne milta hai hame rohan ke bare me...

Superb bhai sandar Jabardast

 

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Update.. 14.. rohan..​

Nidhi dar ke mare bed ke ek kinare bethi hui thi.. esa lag raha tha ki maut uske samne hi baithi ho.. pasine se nahai hui nidhi poori rat so nahi paai, subeh me jab woh der tak soti rahi and nashta karne ke lie niche nahi aai tab surya ne maid ko upar bheja nidhi ko jagane ke lie.. maid jese hi upar aai usne dekha ki nidhi bed ke ek kinare sikud kar soi hui hai usne kambal odh rakha hai fir bhi kaanp rahi thi.. esa lag raha tha ki jese woh kisi dar ke kaaran ese kaanp rahi hai.. maid ne jese hi usko chhua woh chaunk gai uska badan angaro jese dehak rha tha and woh bekhayali mein badbada rahi thi, ‘’ woh laut aaya hai.. woh hame maar dega.. woh sab tabah kar dega koi nahi bachega.. ‘’​

Maid ne use jhakjhor kar jagaya par jese hi use hosh aaya woh rohan naam le kar behosh ho gai.. woh maid singhaniyas ke family me last 15saal se thi woh bhale hi singhaniyas ke sare raaz na janti ho par use un sab ka bharosa prapt tha.. usne singhaniya brothers ko jaldi se upar bulaya jese hi surya ne nidhi ke sar ko chhua woh bhi chaunk gaya and jese hi usne nidhi ke muh se rohan ka naam suna woh bhi thoda dar gaya.. (that’s why rebel have said everyone will have to pay for what they have done) ..​

Surya ne apni feelings par control kia and usne jaldi se doctor ko call kar ke bula lia.. thodi der me hi doctor aa gaya and usne nidhi ka check up kia and usko dawai and injection de kar room se bahar aa gaya and singhaniyas se puchha, “yeh rohan kaun hai.. usne nidhi ke man par esa dar banaya hua hai ki woh nind me bhi usse dar gai thi shayad.. do something jisse apki sister ka dar khatam ho ya fir uska mind is matter se divert ho jaye..” itna keh kar doctor chala gaya..​

Surya gusse me chillate hue, “ rohan.. rohan rohan.. kab pichha chhutega is naam and us rohan ke khauf se.. hamari life par yeh grehan ban kar beth gaya hai.. usne pehle hi hame bahot nuxan kia tha uski maut ke baad bhi ham usne jo nuxan hame kia hai woh recover nahi kar paaye hain.. chalo maan lia ki hamne use us din maar dia tha par usne marte hue bhi hamare dar ko khatam nahi hone dia tha.. “​

Shamsher : tum us waqt yahan nahi the warna tum yeh nahi bolte.. is kahani ki shuruat bhi nidhi ki wajah se hui thi and us kahani ka ant bhi nidhi ke haatho hi hua tha.. par uske naam ka khauf aaj bhi hamari nind uda deti hai and uske hone ka soch kar bhi maut ka dar hamare dil dimaag ko hila deta hai..

(ab is story mein rohan ka flashback chalega jo ki is story ka main base hai.. enjoy it..)​

Flashback..​

Year 2015, month june ..​

Location shah company..​

Yeh company rohan ne apni swargiya bua shanti shyamsundar shah ke naam par banaya tha.. shanti bua ne rohan ko apne bade bhai raghav ki maut ke baad apni santaan ki tarha paala tha.. shanti bua ki 2 betiya thi jinki unke bachpan me hi kisi bimari ke chalte maut ho gai thi.. shanty bua and fufa ji ne rohan ko apne beta maan kar use har jagah par support kia tha and unhone uski shaadi uski pasand ki ladki gulshan se karwai thi.. kismet ki bat thi ke jis din rohan and gulshan ki pehli santaan sanjana peda hui usi din usko ashirwaad dete hue chal base..​

Waqt bitta gaya rohan ki company world ki top ten companies me shumar ho chuki thi par woh apne maa papa ( bua and fufa ji) ki legacy ko bhula nahi tha usne un dono ke naam par kai sare hospitals schools animal shelters animals ke lie hospitals etc sab banwaya tha.. usne crime ko mitaane ke lie sarkar and police ki madad karne ke lie kai sare gadgets and weapons bana kar unhe die hue the.. woh khud bhi ek achha ninja warrior tha par who jab tak zaruri na ho hathiyar nahi uthata tha..​

Khair kehte hain na ki waqt har baar same nahi rehta.. ab tak gulshan ne apni ek aur beti urvi ko janam de dia tha.. ek din jab rohan gulshan and apni dono betiyo ke sath movie dekh kar ghar jaa rha tha usne dekha ki kuchh log 2 policewalo ko maar rahe hain and policewalo ki haalat bahot jyada kharab thi.. rohan niche utra and jaldi se un gundo ke pas pahocha and isse pehle ki woh log police waalo par aur hamla karte rohan ne apni ninja skills ka use karte hue ek gunde ki gardan ko ek punch maar kar tod dia.. jese hi us gunde ki gardan todi baki ke gunde rohan ki taraf lapke par kuchh hi der mein sab rohan ke haatho maar kha kar beth gaye.. rohan jaldi se unsab ke paas gaya usne gulshan ko ishara kar kar back up bulane ke lie kaha.. thodi hi der mein riyaaz (rohan ka dr.friend ) and rohan ki team 2 ambulance ke saath pahoch chuke the..​

Unhone dono policewaalo ko ambulance me letaya and unki shuruati treatment shuru kar di.. rohan ne un sab gundo ko apni team ke haatho apne secret base bhijwa dia tha.. yahi pal tha jab rohan ka samna singhaniyas se pehli baar hone wala tha.. rohan ne gulshan and apni betiyo ko ghar chhoda and fir hospital aa gaya.. riyaaz use bataya ki policewalo ki halat stable hai bas ek do fractures hai.. rohan riyaz ke sath ward me gaya jahan policewaale rest kar rahe the..​

Rohan unke pas gaya and unko respect dete hue salute kia.. dono ke haath me fractures the is lie woh return me salute nahi kar paaye.. rohan ne un dono ke bed ke bich bani jagah me stool le kar beth gaya and baat shuru kari..​

Rohan : I am sorry main apko puri tarha se protect nahi kar paaya.. mera naam rohan hai.. mai jaha par aap par hamla hua tha us jagah se thodi hi dur ek colony me rehta hu.. mai apni family ke sath movie dekhne gaya hua tha and lautte waqt apke upar hue hamle ko dekha and apki madad karne se khud ko rok nahi paya.. kya main jaan sakta hu ki un logo ne ap par hamla kyu kia tha..​

Dono policewale pehle toh chup rahe.. unke facial expressions se lag raha tha ki who rohan ko apne bare mein batana nahi chahte the.. thodi der baad unme se ek ne bolna shuru kia.. tab tak riyaaz ward me se bahar chala gaya tha..​

Policemen 1.. hum normal policewale nahi hai.. hame central gov. ne raw ke head ki madad se yaha par plant kia tha singhaniyas naam ke criminal ko pakadne ya fir usko khatam karne ke lie.. par hame nahi maalum tha ki hamara mission singhaniyas ke samne disclose ho gaya hai.. fir bhi ham apne desh ki khatir apna mission pura karne me lage rahe.. aaj hame lead mili thi ke yaha par singhaniyas koi deal karne ke lie aane wale hain.. par it was a trap.. um logo ne ham par dhokhe se hamla kar dia fir bhi hamne unke aadhe drugs ko tabah kar dia tha..​

Policeman 2.. jese tese kar ke ham road tak pahoche par unke gunde waha par bhi hamara wait kar rahe the unhone firse ham par hamla kar dia and kismet se tumne hame bacha lia..​

Rohan : to kya karenge ab aap dono ? shayad ab aap dono wapis raw me bhi nahi jaa sakte kyu ki aapki identity and mission dono disclose ho chuke hain..​

Policeman 1.. : sahi kaha tumne par ab tension yeh hai ki hamari family ka kya hoga.. agar singhaniyas ka luck sahi rha toh woh hamari family tak bhi pahoch sakte hain.. hame hamari parwaah nahi hai bas hamari family ko kisi tarha safe kar lein..​

Intro time..​

Tushar and ashish.. yeh dono sage bhai hai and sath me dono raw ke secret agents bhi hain.. par ab inka ek mission and unki secret identity disclose ho jane ki wajha se wo raw me abhi thode waqt ke lie nahi ja sakte..​

Karuna.. tushar ki wife and shivam ki yashoda maiya.. inko ek bimari hai jiske wajha se wo kabhi maa nahi ban sakti..​

Rohan kaafi der tak kuchh sochta raha fir usne apni team k ek member ko call kar ke hospital bula liya.. thodi der baad woh banda rohan ke samne tha..​

Rohan : isse milo yeh mera dost agent 0 (ADYAANT ) hai.. wese toh iska real name kuchh aur hi hai yeh bhi tumhari tarha hi ek secret agent hai par ek mission ke lie abhi hamari city mein aaye hue hain.. yeh mera bachpan ka dost hai is lie hamari help ke lie haazir ho gaye.. tum dono chaaho toh inko join kar sakte ho.. and rahi baat tumhari family ki toh uski protection ki resposnsibility main leta hu..​

Khair tushar and ashish ne agent 0 ki team ko join kar lia apni identity change karne ke bad.. ab unka face bhi change ho gaya tha is lie unko koi bhi pehchan nahi payega.. karuna ab rohan ki family mein ghul mil gait hi uski and gulshan ki dosti kaafi strong ho gai thi jese ki woh dono ek dusre ko bachpan se janti ho.. waqt guzar gaya and shivam ka janam hone me bas thhoda hi waqt baki tha ki tabi ek din rohan ka phone baj utha…​

On call : kese ho mr.rohan.. suna hai tumhe logo ko bachane ka kuchh jyada hi chaska chadha hua hai.. who sab jaane do jin dono ko tumne bachaya hai who hamare hatho se marenge hi par agar tum hamare raste mein aaye toh tumhe tabah karne ke bare mein ham sochenge bhi nahi.. wese main batana bhul hi gaya main hu surya singhaniya..​

Rohan kuchh kehta usse pehle hi call cut ho chuka tha and usne gabhrate hue tushar ko call kia… who tushar se kuchh kehta usse pehle hi use call par blast hone ki awaz aai.. rohan jaldi se ek hotel pahocha jaha pr bahot bhayanak aag lagi hui thi and aag usi area me lagi thi jaha par tushar and ashish ka room tha.. rohan kaise bhi kar ke dono ki taraf badha.. ashish mar chukka tha par tushar ki sanse abhi bhi baaki thi.. jese hi rohan ne usko chhua usne apni aakhe kholi and rohan ka haath pakad lia..​

Tushar : rohan bhai yeh blast singhaniyas ne hi karvaya hai.. ham apna ek mission pura hone ke baad ghar hi aane wale the par kisi wajh se yha is hotel room me rukna pda.. hamne apni identity change kar di thi par ham hamare passport ka number change karna bhul gaye the and usi wajah se ham pakde gaye.. singhaniyas ke bich ek hi insaan hai jiske pas itna dimaag hai nidhi .. usse thoda savdhaan rahiega.. itna kehte hi uski bhi saase tham chuki thi..​

Rohan dukhi ho gaya tha.. bhale hi tushar and uski family ke sath uska koi blood relation nahi tha par dosti ka rishta bhi kuchh jyaada kamzor nahi tha.. usne dono ki body ka handover le lia and woh ambulance me daal kar ghar le aaya.. sab ki aakhe nam thi .. gulshan ne ashish and tushar ke roop me apne bade bhaio ko khoya tha.. rohan ne un dono ka bada bhai ban kar khud apne hatho se un dono ka antim sanskar kia .. jab un dono ki chita jal rahi thi tab rohan ki aakho me badle ka jwalamukhi jal raha tha jo shayad singhaniyas ke khilaaf jung ka elaan hi tha..​

The war has just about to start.. evil will be terminated by the devil himself.. be prepared to be vitness of devil’s wrath..​

Update 15.. rise and fall of devil..​

Flashback continues.. ( real action begins)​

Ashish and tushar ki maut ko ek mahina guzar chukka tha and isi waqt ke dauraan gulshan ki pregnancy ko 8month ho chuke the and ab kabhi bhi delivery hone waali thi.. rohan ne apne badle ki aag ko thode waqt ke lie control me kia hua tha par fir bhi usne apne badle ki taiyari shuru kar di thi.. usne apni team ki madad se singhaniyas ke bare me sari information har jagah se ikattha kar li thi.. bas ab intezar tha to bas sahi waqt ka par rohan apne aane wale bure waqt se anjaan tha..​

Oct 2015..​

Gulshan ko labour pain shuru ho gaya tha and rohan karuna ki madad se use le kar hospital aa gaya tha.. kabhi bhi delivery hone waali thi.. par kismet ko kuchh aur hi manzur tha jese hi delivery ke lie gulshan ko ot me le jaya gaya dr. andar ghuste usse pehle hi compounders ne door bandh kar dia and unhone gulshan par chaku se hamla kar dia..woh khud ko bachane ke lie ot mein idhar se udhar bhaag rahi thi.. rohan and uske sare dost ot ka door todne ka poora try kar rahe the par khul ya toot nahi raha tha.. andar shayad gulshan ki kismet thodi achhi thi uske hath mein do surgical knives aa gai thi usne ek gunde ke tango ke bich knife ghusa di and dusre ke hath ki 3 4 nabz kaat di thi par fir bhi who bahot ghayal ho chuki thi.. usne ladkhadate hue door khola..​

Rohan ne jese hi use dekha uski aakhe dar and gusse se jal uthi.. usne dr. ko chillate hue order dia ki who gulshan ki treatment shuru kar de dusre ot mein.. kismet se rohan ki team waha aa chuki thi.. rohan ne un darindo ko bina kuchh soche maarna shuru kar dia jaha par gulshan ne ghaav die the un ghavo ko rohan ne naasur bana dia tha.. who darinde maut ki bhikh maang rahe the par aaj unka samna real devil se hone wala tha.. rohan ne dono ke kapde faad die underwear bhi nahi rehne dia unki body par..​

Rohan : bas ek sawal kisne bheja tha tum dono ko.. agr bata dia toh asaan mout milegi warna devil jo saza hell me mare hue logo ko deta hai wohi saza mein tum dono ko jinda rakh kr dunga.. yeh baat usne bade hi cruel expressions ke sath boli thi like puri dunia ki darindagi uski aakho me samai ho..​

Rohan ne 10minutes tak wait kia par unhone kuchh nahi bola.. bas yahi pal tha jis pal se rohan ne apne andar ke devil ko khula chhod dia tha.. usne pehle toh un dono ke haath ko ot table par rakh kar surgical scissores ko undono ke dono hath me is tarha ghusa dia ki who scixors table ko chirte hue table ke aar par nikal gai.. usne fir se apna sawal dohraya par jab response nahi aaya toh rohan ne waha par pada lohe ka table tod dia and unke pichhe pura ghusa dia.. and who dono ke samne surgery mein use hone waala sara saman le kar khada ho gaya.. dono ki aakho me dard saaf dikh raha tha rohan ne unko warning dete hue puchha…​

Unhone ishare se apni haar man li and rohan ko pta tha ki who kuchh bolne ki halat mein nahi the is lie who un dono ke nazdik chala gaya.. use undono ke muh se bas ek hi naam nikla : RAGHAV SINGHANIYA.. rohan ne jo information nikalwai thi usme yeh nam bhi shamil tha.. rohan ne bari bari dono ki aakhe nikaal li and unki jibh kaat di.. uske baad usne un dono ka jabda kaat kar bahar nikala and unke samne fek dia.. pura hospital unki chikho se gunj raha tha sab ko pata chal chukka tha jaha par jindagi bachai jaati thi aaj ki raat waha pr maut nanga naach karne wali thi.. rohan kahi se bahot sare bade bade kil aur hathoda le aaya..​

“yeh meri gulshan ko nazar utha kar dekhne ke lie” keh kar usne un dono ki aakh mein kil thok di.. dono hath jod kar apni maut maang rahe the par rohan aaj jese paagal ho chukka tha.. usne sare kil unki har body parts ko kil se jad dia tha and last me usne ek 2inch badi kil dono ki khopdi mein ghusa dia.. jisse dono ko itna dard hua ki dono bahot buri tarha se chillane lage rohan ne un dono ko tadapta chhod dia and bahar nikal gaya.. jab chikho ka shor shant hua toh riyaz ne darte hue ot ka door khola usne jo dekha usse who khauf kha gaya.. usne rohan ka beast mode kai baar dekha tha par aaj jo hua who kuchh aur hi hai.. rohan naha kar khud ko clean kar ke wapis aa gaya..​

Par aaj rohan ke andar ka jaanwar jese hamesha ke lie aazad hone wala tha.. jese hi who dusre ot ke pas pahocha usne dekha ki karuna aakho me aasu lie bethi thi.. doctors ki aakho mein bhi aasu the.. gulshan thi bhi esi shakhsiyat.. rohan ko laga jese kuchh bahot bura hua hai.. who bhaag kar ot ke andar gaya jaha gulshan aakhri saas le rahi thi and uske baju mein un dono ka beta (shivam) soya hua tha.. rohan ki aakho se aasu behne lage and who daud kar uski jaan ke paas chala gaya..​

gulshan ab dunia chhod kar jaa chuki thi rohan us din khud ko kho chuka tha..usne uska antim sanskar kia and nikal pada apne safar par..usne pehle raghav ki taqat ko khatam kia and baad me use janwar se bhi battar maut marne ke baad woh thoda shaant ho chuka tha.. par usne nahi socha tha ki jung abhi baaki hai..​

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3months later of that day..​

Rohan apni office me bethe hue kuchh kaam kar raha tha and abhi uski kisi ke saath meeting thi.. who apna kaam kar hi raha tha ki intercom baja and receptionist ne use inform kia ki koi girl usse milne aai hai .. rohan ne use cabin me bhejne ko kaha psr use nahi pata tha ki uske past ki jhalak use dekhne ko mil jayegi..​

Door knock hua and rohan ne upcoming stranger ko andar aane ki permission grant ki.. thodi hi der bad uske samne ek 30saal ki ladki khadi thi.. shakal se who kafi sundar and attractive lag rahi thi.. rohan ne usko bethne ko kaha and uske aane ka reason puchha..​

Girl.. : I am nidhi.. nidhi singhaniya daughter of raghav singhaniya.. and mujhe maalum hai ki tumne hi mere pita ka khun kia hai par tumhe nahi maalum ki tumne kisse panga lia hai.. wese toh mujhe tumse nafrat karni chahie par pata nahi kyu par tum par pyaar aa raha hai.. mere ghulaam ban jao mujhse shadi kr lo mai tumhe bhikh me jindagi de dungi.. warna mujhe kisi se uska sab kuchh chin lene mein bahot maza aata hai.. kahi mai tumse tumhara sab kuchh chhin na lu..​

Rohan with devil smiile : tumhare papa ne bhi mujhse mere bhai jese dosto ko mujhse chhin lia tha.. toh meine uski esi halat kar di thi ke uski bachi hui jindagi bhi maut se battar ho gait hi.. usne ek devil ko aazad kar dia tha to saza to milni hi thi.. main janta hu ki singhaniyas ki family me tumhare alawa tumhare do bhai and 2nd number ke bhai ka beta hi hai.. agar mujhse panga logi toh tumhari bachi kuchi family ko bhi khatam kar dunga..​

Rohan ko malum tha ki kisi na kisi din yeh hoga hi is lie usne apne bachcho ke sath karuna ko dehradun me bane apne ek secret jagah par bhej dia tha is lie use jung ko fir se shuru karne me koi mushkil na ho.. rohan ne us din ke baad singhaniyas ke kale dhandho ke bases ko khatam karne ka kaam shuru kar dia tha.. usne almost singhaniyas ko tabah kar hi dia tha tabhi who manhoos raat aa gai jab shivam se sab chin gaya tha..​

Us din karuna sanjana and urvi ke saath rohan ko milne aai hui thi.. sabhi hasi khushi dinner kar hi rahe the ki ghar ki lights chali gai and kisi ne window se ek smoke bomb fek dia jis wajah se sab ki saas atak rahi thi.. thodi der baad ghar ka darwazza toota and singhaniyas apne aadmiyo ke sath andar aa gaye.. rohan ko awaz se pata chal gaya tha ki koi ghusa hai par dhue and ghutti hui saans ke karan kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha tha.. thodi der baad un sab ko mehsus hua ki kuchh log unhe ghere khade hain.. rohan ne mushkil se apne kandhe par bandhi katana swards nikali.. par ttab tak kafi der ho chuki thi singhaniyas ne karuna sanju and urvi par hamla kar dia tha.. karuna unko bachate hue bahot ghayal ho gait hi.. rohan bhi singhaniyas ke aadmiyo ko kaatte hue aage badh raha tha.. par jese hi who unke pas pahocha use apne hathiyar daaal dene pde.. uske samne karuna bahot hi jyada ghayal avastha me nidhi ke kabze me thi and sanju and urvi bhi ghayal avastha mein un sab ke kabze mein thi..​

Nidhi : meine tumhe ek mauka dia tha ki mere ghulaam ban jao par tum nahi mane ab bhugto.. keh kar usne apne bhaio ko ishara kia uske bhaio ne rohan ke samne hi uski family ko maar dia.. rohan ne jese hi yeh dekha uske andar ka devil fir se jag utha and usne firse apni katana uthai and unki taraf badhne laga.. around 250aadmi the singhaniyas ke fir bhi who unhe marte hue aage badh raha tha.. chaku talvar goli sav ke ghaav uske body par lage hue the.. aakhir who surya ke samne ja pahocha and jese hi usne surya par pehla waar kia uski pith me kisi ne chaku se war kar dia tha yeh aur koi nahi nidhi hi thi.. rohan ne fir bhi haar nahi maani and ghum kar nidhi ke haath par vaar karte hue uska hath kaat dia.. tab tak singhaniya bhaio ne us par aakhri war kar dia..​

Rohan ab ghutno par aa chukka tha fir bhi uski aakho mein maut ka khauf nahi tha.. usne sab ki aakho me dekhte hue kaha, “ ab bhi waqt hai maar do mujhe warna agar main bach gaya toh tumhe har pal har lamha 1000 maut maarunga.. roz mere naam ke khauf se daroge par mera kuchh nahi kar paoge..”​

Nidhi ko rohan ki yeh baat sun kar bahot gussa aya par uski aakho me basi cruelty and rage ko dekh kar who bahot dar gai thi.. usne surya ke haatho se gun li and bachi hui sari bullets rohan ke sine mein utaar di.. par fir bhi rohan ke chehre par se devil smile gayab nahi hui thi..​

Rohan : tum sab ne aaj mujhe toh maar dia par tum ko pata nahi ki ab tumse badla lene kaun aayega.. mera beta aayega tumse badla lene ke lie.. and jab who aayega tab tum uska ghantaa kuchh nahi ukhaad paoge.. in final words ke sath rohan ki life ka safar khatam ho jaata hai..​

End of flashback..​

Ek pita ka badla.. unki legacy jiske sath is jung ki shuruat hui thi and ab ise shivam ko hi aage badhana hai..​

End of update 15..​

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