Fantasy shivam.. the warrior..

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Update 16.. meeting inhumans..​

Shivam and shilpi riya ko uday ki khtarnak chaal se kese bachaya jaye yeh sab sochte hue so gaye the par nind unki ud chuki thi.. dar ki wajha se nahi par gusse and frustration ki wajha se.. unhone pari ke sath mil kar kuchh plan kia and use instructions de kar dono fir se so gaye.. khair yeh to tai tha ki aane wala kuchh waqt koi naya toofan lane wala hai yeh to tai tha..​

Other side, singhaniyas house..​

Nidhi ab bhi dar se kaanp rahi thi.. kabhi who chillati toh kabhi darte hue badbadati and fir behosh ho jati.. sahi kaha tha kisi ne ki jab karma aapka pichha shuru karte hain tab aap khud ko bachane ke lie kuchh bhi nahi kar sakte hain.. khair subeh hui singhaniya brothers bhi dimaag se thak chuke the, unki aakhen puri raat na sone ki wajah se laal ho chuki thi.. singhaniya brothers ne nidhi ko ghar par chhodne ka tai kia and who sab kahi jaane ke lie nikal gaye.. kal raat ko unhe aaye call ne un sab ko subeh sawere yaha par aane ke lie majbur kar dia tha..​

Thodi der baad surya shamsher and shashikant do ghante ki drive ke baad ek building ke samne aa pahoche.. gate ke bahar hi unhe car se utarna pada and who chalte hue building ke andar aa gaye and thoda aur andar jaane ke baad unhone ek room ka door khola and andar chale gaye.. jaha par sirf ek Bahot bada table tha jiske ek taraf 4 log bethe hue the .. singhaniyas ne unsab ko good morning wish kia par unhe koi reply nahi mila.. unhe ehsas ho gya tha ki aaj unki life ka shayad aakhri din bhi ho sakta hai.. khair singhaniyas unke samne chair par darte hue baith gaye..​

Boss 1 : bahot bada nuxan pahochaya hai kisi ne humare business ko.. hamne tumhe yeh soch kar hamare business ki is branch ko sambhalne ka kaam sonpa tha, kyu ki hame yakin tha ki tum is branch ko sambhal loge.. ham yeh nahi puchhenge ki yeh sab kese hua kisne kia.. ham bas yeh puchh rahe hain ki kya kya actions lie hain aap sabne is case ko solve karne ke lie..​

Simghaniyas apne boss ki gusse wali awaz sun kar kaanp uthe.. unhe pata tha ki unka boss ko naaraz karna unki jaan ke lie bahot bada khatra sabit ho sakta tha.. who kuchh kehte usse pehle hi un tin anjaan chehre me se ek ne us boss ko kuchh kaha uske bad us boss ne apne laptop me kuxhh kia and who smile karne laga.. singhaniyas ne use smile karte hue dekha to who dar gaye par unka dar ab aur bhi badhne wala tha.. thodi hi der hui thi ke unke laptop ki screen par ek photo aa gai us photo ko dekh kar singhnaiyas ke phhat kar hath mein aa gai..​

Unki screen par ek 40 45 saal ki umr ke ek ganje sir wale aadmi ka photo show ho raha tha.. us photo ke niche us insaan ka naam likha hua tha DAVID.. david singhaniyas ke boss ka sabse khatarnak aadmi tha.. sach kahe to khatarnak shabd uske lie bahot kam tha.. singhaniyas ke according who jinda maut tha uske samne agar 1000 bhi aa jaye tab bhi use harra pana namumkin se bhi jyada mushhkil tha.. ( yeh wohi banda tha jisne rohan ko pichhe se war kar ke ghayal kar dia tha.. ) david kaafi waqt se underground tha par agar who wapis aaya to city ki har gali mein maut ka nanga naach hona tai tha..​

Surya : boss kya david ko wapus bulana sahi hoga? Us raat ke bad sirf ham hi hain jo underground nahi hue hain and sabke samne reh rahe hain.. mana ki us rohan ko ham is david ke sath hone ke karan hi maar paye the par yeh ek darinda hai.. iska bas chale toh yeh apne aas pas kisi ko bhi zinda na rehne de apne khud ke aadmio ko bhi nahi.. yu hi nahi isko RULER OF DEATH kaha jata hai.. main maafi chahunga par aap ek bar fir soch lijiye apne is faisle par..​

Boss 1 : ham jo bhi faisla lete hain who soch samajh kar hi lete hain aur tumhari is nakamyabi and pehle ki sari galtiyo ne hi hame david ko wapis bulane ke lie majbur kia hai and you deserve this punishment.. ab bhugto tum sab.. david do din me tumhare pas aa jayega.. ab tum sab uske orders follow karoge par who jab tak bahot jyada badi emergency na aaye tab tak samne nahi aayega..​

Singhaniyas shocked and dare hue the boss ki baat sun kar.. ab unki power 0 (ZERO) ho chuki thi .. Unhe bas is baat ki khushi thi ke devid thoda control me rahega zarur par unhe nahi malum tha ki who kab tak shant rahega.. sahi kaha tha kisi ne ki devil ko control karna sach mein next to impossible hai.. khair aur kuchh der tak boss ne unhe david ke bare mein bataya and uske bad singhaniyas wapis ghar aane ke lie nikal gaye.. thoda tension jhalak raha tha..​

tension jhalak raha tha..​

Unke waha se nikalne ke baad boss ne us table par bana ek button banaya.. jese hi boss ne who button banaya who charo table samet ek underground tunnel mein jane lage.. thodi der bad charo ek computer lab mein ja pahoche.. jese hi charo ne lab mein kadam rakha ek awaz gunj uthi “welcome back masters.. jo apne kaha tha maine who kar dia hai ab shivam and family ki sacchai hamare samne aa kar hi rahegi..”​

Boss 1 : shukria kaal.. par shivam ko ikam samajhne ka risk ham nahi le sakte.. who rohan ka beta hai ya nahi yeh abhi tak confirm nahi hai par who rohan se kam bhi nahi hai.. agar use pata chala ki koi uski sacchai janne ki koshish kar raha hai to who tumhe bhi khatam karne se nahi hichkichayega..​

Singhaniyas mension,​

Thodi der bad singhaniyas apne ghar pahoche jaha par nidhi drawing room me beth kar apne laptop mein kuchh kam kar rahi thi and uske face par thoda tension jhalak raha tha.. tino bhai dare hue the and dimag se thak bhi chuke the. Shayad ab aur himmat nahi thi ke aur koi dimagi stress le sake.. who bina kuchh kahe nidhi ke samne hi sofe par baith jate hain who jitna ho sake utna khud ke dimag ko shant karne ka try kar rahe the par jese hi who bethte hain nidhi apne laptp ki screen un sab ke samne kar deti hai jisme ek company ka business proposal dikhai de raha tha..​

In mail,​

Respected singhaniyas..​

We have found out that you are making your first steps in robotics business world.. we are looking for freshers who are new in this business.. we can offer you every financial support whenever you need.. if you accept this proposal you can contact us on this address and mobile numbers.. uske bad address and contact number likha hua tha..​

singhaniya brothers samajh chuke the ki yeh mail / business proposal bhejne wala aur koi nahi devid hi tha.. iska matlab saaf tha ki david shuru se hi unsab par nazar rakhe hue tha.. tino singhaniyas ab nidhi se bhi jyada dar jate hain kyu ki ab un sab ka nightmare wapas laut raha tha.. THE DEATH IS ON HIS WAY STAY ALERT YOU CAN ALSO BE PRAY OF IT..​

surya : yeh koi business proposal nahi hai yeh david ka coded message hai ki who wapas laut raha hai and is bar koi aur nahi ham sab uske ghulamo ki fauj honge.. ham uske ghulam honge par uske hatho sabse pehli mout hamari hi hogi..​

nidhi bhi david ke bare mein sun kar dar gai thi.. who achhhe se samajhti thi ke david kesa darinda hai.. uski darindagi ka koi bhi kabhi bhi kahi bhi mukabla nahi kar paya tha.. khair singhaniyas ki subeh ki shuruat ese hi dar ke double dose ke sath hui thi..​

shah mension,​

roz ki tarha shivam and family haste muskurate hue nashta kar rahe the aane wale khatre se anjaan ho kar.. pari and Jarvis dono underwater city ko khojne mein lage hue the par who bhi puri tarha se kamyab nahi ho rahe the.. khair thodi der baad shvam ke phone me Krishna ka message aya , “ our king wants to meet you.. agar tumhari permission ho toh main kal hi ap sab se hamare king ki meeting fix karna chahungi..’’ shivam ne shilpi and riya ko message dikhaya dono ne ishare se haa me sar hilaya jiske bad shivam ne Krishna ko reply de kar meeting ke lie permission de di..​

tino ne nashta khatam kia hi tha ki pari ne singhaniyas ki aaj subeh sawere ki meeting ke bare mein bata dia and sath mein un 4ro boss ke dwara banaye gaye a.i. kaal ke bare mein bhi bataya jo badkismati se shayad pari and Jarvis se 4times jyada powerful tha.. koi aur hota to pari ki a.i wali baat sun kar confused ho jata and haar maan leta par shivam sabse alag tha uske pas back up plan taiyar tha.. usne pari ko plan b ready karne ko kaha jiske bad pari ke system me jaan funk di thi.. agar pari ke andar insani features hote toh koi bhi samajh jata ki pari ke face par devil wali smile fail chuki thi..​

pari ne apni intelligence ka use karte hue ek sath kai sare logo ko mail bheja and uske bad puri family ke face par ek na samajh mein aane wali smile aa gai who ek sath bole NO ONE MESSES WITH THE FORCES OF DEVIL BECAUSE DEATH IS SLAVE OF DEVIL HIMSELF..​

office, uday’s table​

uday office mein betha hua kaam kar hi raha tha ki uske system mein ek mail aaya uday ne normal office mail samajh kar who mail open kia and jese hi WHO MAIL KHULA us mail ka content dekh kar who chaunk gaya.. usme uske ab tak ke sare kaand ka sabut tha and uska drugs ke nashe me kia hua confession and hosh mein kia hua confession tha.. usne hadbadate hue computer bandh kar dia and who washroom ki ore jane laga par raste me hi use gusse mein jal rahi riya dikhai di.. who riya se kuchh kehta uske pehle hi usne martial arts ki techniques ka use karte hue ek zordar mukka uske face par jad dia.. riya wahi par nahi ruki usne uday ka hath puri tarha se tod dia tha.. riya ruki hi thi ke company ke entrance se bhagti hui ek old lady enter hui and usne uday ke sine par ek laat mari and uske baal pakad kar use khada kia and uske face par de thappad de thappad marne lagi..​

aurat : mujhe dekh kar kuchh yad aya kamine ? main who bebas maa hu jiski beti ka rape tune uski hi aakho ke samne kia tha fir tune khud ko bachane ke lie mmujhe room me barso tak kaid karke rakha.. bhala ho us anjaan beti ka jisne mujhe tere changul se azad karwaya..​

short flash back..​

shilpi and riya ek bandh pade bunglow ke samne khade the.. shilpi dono ke waha jane ka reason nahi janti thi who bas shilpi ka sath dene ke lie aai hui thi.. dono ne waha ke sare gundo ko khatam kia and bunglow mein kuchh dhundane lagi.. thodi der bad un dono ko who aurat ek room me bahot hi deyniy halat mein dikhi.. riya ne sawalia nazro se shilpi ki taraf dekha shilpi ne use haa ka ishara kia dono ne us aurat ko thik se uthaya and use le kar apne ghar aa gai jaha tak do din tak uska ilaaj hua.. par jese hi us aurat ne riya ke phone me uday ki pic dekhi who gusse and dard se jal uthi tab ja kar riya ko uday ki asliyat pata chali thi and ab yahi reason tha ki who ab uday se nafrat karne lagi thi..​

flashback ends..​

shivam and shilpi ne us aurat ko thodi der tak uday ki pitai karne di taki uske dil ka dard kam ho sake.. jese hi who aurat thak gai who ghutno ke bal beth kar rone lagi.. yeh aasu na khushi ke the na hi ghum ke aaj uske dil me saalo se daba hua dard and gussa thoda bahot hi sahi bahar nikal kar aa gaya tha.. riya and family se unka dard dekha nahi gaya who tino bhaag kar us lady ke pas gaye and ek sath use gale laga lia.. ab yeh un tino ka pyar kaho ya kuchh aur jese hi who tino ek sath us aurat ke gale lage us aurat ke dil ko maano ek sukoon sa milne laga tha.. thodi der bad us aurat ka gussa thoda (0.1%) kam hua and unhone khud ke aasu pochhe..​

riya : aunty ap bataiye ap kya saza dena chahte ho is haiwaan ko.. mana ki isne kai sari ladkiyo ka jivan tabah kia hai and un sab ko dhundana shayad impossible hai.. mai chahungi ke aap un sabhi badnasib betiyo ke behalf mein unka insaaf kijiye.. aap jo saza mukarrar karengi who saza ise har pal har second milti rahegi..​

us aurat ne apne aasu pochhe and who khadi ho gai aur kaha, .. “ iski saza esi honi chahie ki yeh saans lene se bhi darne lage.. iski life ke bache hue har pal mein ise nark ki anubhuti ho tabhi un sabhi ladkio ko insaaf milega.. “ itna kehne ke baad who shivam and family ki taraf palti and un tino ke samne hath jod lie..​

aurat : shukria baccho.. main shayad kabhi bhi us din jo hua us sadme se ubhar nahi paati thoda sa bhi par tum logo ne mujhe azad karwaya.. aaj sirf meri beti ko hi nahi bahot sari ladkio ko insaaf milega.. ek maa ki dua hai tum sab hamesha tarakki karo khush raho.. unke andar bahot josh tha par abhi unka sharir unka josh jhelne ke lie ready nahi tha.. jese hi unhone apni baat khatam ki who kamzori ke karan behosh ho gai.. shivam ne unko uthaya and company building mein bani mini hospital mein le gaya.. jaha dr. ne unka ilaaj shuru kar dia par unko kal morning tak hosh aane wala nahi tha..​

riya shilpi and shivam ko unke pas chhod kar work floor par wapas aa gai.. usne wapas aa kar inspector sonali ko call kar ke bula lia, thodi der mein hi sonali apni coullege shivani ke sath waha aa pahochi.. sonali ko malum tha ki riya kabhi bhi use bina kisi big reason ke itni jaldi nahi bulayegi.. riya ne bhi der nahi ki and un dono ko toote fute uday ke pas le aai.. uday ki halat esi thi ke koi bhi usko dekh kar hasne lage.​

Sonali : yeh chimpanzi ki aulad kaun hai and tum ise hame kyu milva rahe ho.. kya yeh koi criminal hai jise tum tino ne pakda hai.​

ho.. kya yeh koi criminal hai jise tum tino ne pakda hai.​

Riya : sahi samjha bhabhi aapne sorry madam aapne.. yeh sirf ek criminal hi nahi bahot bada haiwan bhi hai.. yeh keh kar usne us aurat ki sari kahani bata di and yeh bhi ke usne and shilpi ne kese us aurat ko rescue kia tha.. riya ki baat sun kar shivani and sonali khud par kabu nahi rakh paa rahi thi par fir bhi khud par control kie hue thi..​

Sonali : don’t worry chhoti is mc ka hisab khud nirwana apne style me karega.. agar aunty chahe toh jab ise saza di ja rahi hogi tab who waha par maujud reh sakti hain.. usne shivani ko ishara kia and shivani uday ko pair pakad kar ghasitte hue le gai..​

Shivani ke jane ke baad sonali ne uske kaan me kaha, ‘’wese messanger of death kafi achha kam kar raha hai agar use koi bhi help ki zarurat pade to we are ready to help.. ham use hamare mission me sath kam karne ke lie bhi invite karne ke bare mein sochenge..’’ keh kar sonali riya ke reply ka wait kie bina hi chali gai.. khair office ka working hours khatam hue and riya mini hospital me aa gai.. jaha par usne dekha ki who lady aram kar rahi hai and shivam and shilpi bed ke dono taraf bethe hue uska ek ek hath pakde hue so rahe hai.. riya ke face par ek smile aa gai raat hone ko thi is lie usne dono ko jagaya.. fir tino ne dinner kia and wapas room me aa gaye .. room me do bade sofa and ek extra bed rakha hua tha.. shilpi and shivam ne alag alag sofa par sona tai kia and riya aunty ke nazdik ke bed par so gai taki agar zarrurat pade to uth sake..​

Morning .. 9am..​

Subeh hui aunty ko hosh aa chukka tha and doctors ki dawaio and shivam and family ki care ke karan unki health me thoda bahot sudhar/ improvement dekha ja sakta tha.. doctor ne aa kar unka check up kia and bataya ki shivam jab chahe tab ghar le ja sakta tha.. riya and shilpi ne canteen se unke lie healthy nashta lia and room me wapas aa gaye.. unhone aunty ko nashta karwaya and unko bed par sahi se leta dia..​

Riya : ab aap kesa mehsus kar rahe ho aunty ? doctors ke report ke mutabik aap ab thik ho ap chaho to apne ghar jaa sakti ho. Ap apne family member ka pata contact number bataiye ham unhe yhan bula lete hain taki aap unke sath ghar ja sako..​

Aunty with no feelings wala smile, ‘’ kash koi hota par meri beti ke jane ke baad mera apna koi nahi bacha. Mai ek anath paida hui thi and mere husband bhi anath the.. unki death blood cancer ki wajah se ho gai uske baad maine apni beti kritika ko mehnat se apne tarha ek architeck banaya.. mera naam pallavi hai.. meri beti yaha samundar kinare ghumne aai thi akele hamare gaanv se.. tabhi us haiwan ki nazar us par pad gai who kriti ko usi din kidnap kar leta par who bach gai.. who train me beth kar hamare gaanv aa gai main us din usko receive karne aai thi ham auto ka wait kar hi rahe the ki kisi ne kahi se ham dono ko injection de dia and ham dono behosh ho gaye.. jab aankh khuli toh ham dono us bangle me the meri beti ko us haiwan ne bed par bandh rakha tha and mujhe bed ke samne chair par.. usne pure 4din tak apni hawas mitai meri beti par meri hi aakho ke samne darindagi karta raha.. 5th din main kamzori ke karan behosh thi chair par tabhi main eek awaz suni maine dekha to meri beti ne window se kud kar suicide kar lia tha.. uski maut ke bad main na to uski lash dekh paai na kabhi koi ummmid rakh paai.. us darinde ne mujhe chair se azad kia and mujhe marne ke lie chhhod kar chala gya.. main azad thi par main dil dimag se itna hil chuki thi ke kabhi us manhoos jagah se bahar nahi nikal paai.. bhala ho tum tino ka ki tumne is abhagan maa ko insaaf dilwaya.. shukria beta.. ‘’ apni kahani sunate hue aunty ke aakho mein aasu aa gaye the and shivam and family ke bhi..​

Shilpi : kamal karti ho aap bhi.. beta bhi kehti ho and thank you bhi yeh nahi chalega.. kisne kaha apka koi nahi hai ham hai na apki family.. aap hamare sath hamare ghar hi rahogi.. pallavi pehle toh mana karti rahi fir use riya ki pyar bhari zid kea age jhukna hi pada..​

Khair pallavi ko discharge mil gaya and who ab shivam and family ke sath mension me aa gai thi.. like un tino ko bhi ek naya family member mil gaya tha.. dinner ka time ho gaya tha.. shilpi ne sab ke lie khana banaya and unhone dinner kia.. ab baat sone ki thi toh is bar shilpi aunty ke sath sone wali thi and riya shivam ke baju wale room me..​

Morning.. the meeting day..​

Aaj shivam and family ki inhuman prince namor ke sath meeting hone wali thi par Krishna ne koi timing nahi di thi.. tino pallavi ke sath beth kar nashta kar rahe the and aaj tino hi chhuttti par the.. pallavi nashta karne ke bad mension me ghum rahi thi ke tabhi who ek room me ja pahochi jaha shivam and family ne apni yaade pics ke zarie walls pr sajai hui thi.. pallavi ke pichhe pichhe shilpi bhi us room me aa gai thi.. ghumte hue pallavi ki nzar ek pic par tik gai and uski aakho se aasu behne lage who tasvir kisi aur ki nahi karuna maa ki thi..​

Pallavi us tasvir ke taraf ishara karte hue, “yeh tasvir kiski hai ? kaun hai yeh aurat ? kya rishta hai iska tum logo ke sath.. ”​

Shilpi : yeh karuna maa hai hamari yashoda maiya.. unhone ham tino ko maa ka pyar dia itna ki jitna koi sagi maa bhi nahi de sakti.. she died for saving shivam.. kehta hue shilpi ki aakho me aasu and gussa dono ubhar aaye the.. par ap karuna maa ko kese janti hain..​

Pallavi with tears in eyes : who meri best friend and meri badi behan dono thi.. usne jab bhi hamari mulakat hoti tum tino ka jikra kia karti thi par mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum meri karuna di ki santaan ho.. kehte hue usne shilpi ko apne gale laga lia.. riya and shivam bhi door par khade ho kar unki baate sun rahe the who dono bhi daud kr is lamhe me shamil ho gaye.. aaj unki family fir se complete ho gai thi..​

Shivam : aaj karuna maa hoti toh apko dekh kar bahot khush hoti.. abse ham apki family hai and apki santaan bhi.. ap kriti di ke hisse ka pyar hame dete rahio.. thik hai na chhoti maa ?​

Jese hi shivam ne pallavi ko chhoti maa kaha usne shivam ko alag kia and kaha , ´kya tum fir se who labz dohraoge ?”​

Shivam ne kaha CHHOTI MAA..​

Pallavi ko jese sari khushia mil gai thi usne tino ko fir se hug kar lia.. “ haan mai tum tino ki chhoti maa hu and abse tum sab mere bacche ho..” par maine tum sab ka naam toh puchha hi nahi..​

Riya : aap shivam bhaiya se to mil hi chuki hain.. mai hu riya shivam bhaiya ki cousin and unki princess.. and who hai shivam bhaiya ki best friend + gf + wife to be shilpi bhabhi.. yeh dono mere bhai bhabhi hi nahi maa papa bhi hai, mera bhi ab is dunia me in dono ke alawa sirf aap hi hain.. ab mere paas do maa and ek papa hai.. I am the luckiest person in this world.. yippee..​

Khair din ka thoda aur waqt bhi hasi khushi nikal gya near to evening shilpi ko Krishna ka message mila MEET ME ON MIDDLE OF SEA.. it was time for meeting.. message milte hi tino palllavi se business meeting ka bahana bana kar apna apna armour pahan kar nikal gaye..​

Intro time..​

Black bolt.. king of inhumans.. kaha jata hai ki inki awaz hi inki main power hai, inki halki si voice bhi tabahi lane ke lie kafi hai is lie yeh kuchh bhi bolna ya koi bhi word whisper karna bhi ignore karte hain…​

Medusa .. queen of inhumans and wife of black bolt.. inki power inki hair me hai jinme superstrength ki shkti hai..​

Crystal/krishna : yeh queen medusa ki sister hai jo earth air and water ko manipulate karne ki power rakhti hai.. namor ne ise krishna bana kar shivam ko convince karne ke lie bheja tha..​

Gorgon : yeh medusa ka cousin and black bolt ka bharosemand hai.. iski power iske bull jese banawat ke pair ( legs ) hai jo shockwaves create kar sake hai like earthquake..​

The unspoken : yeh black bolt ka cousin hai jo ki blackbolt se pehle inhumans ka king reh chukka hai jab tak uski hi family ne iske cruelty se bhare power hungry nature ke khilaf awaz nahi uthai.. iska khauf itna jyada faila hua tha ki us khauf ko khatam karne ke lie blackbolt ko uska nam kabhi lia na ja sake is lie inhumans ke har books har kahani har jagah se hatva dia is lie isko THE UNSPOKEN kehna best rahega. Yeh mahashay apne sharir ko manchahe form me alter karne ki power rakhte hain.. ( readers inko aap inhumans ki dunia ka thanos ya fir darksied bhi maan sakte hain..)​

END OF UPDATE 16..
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[Arvind Sharma]

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[Xabhi]

Update 16.. meeting inhumans..​

Shivam and shilpi riya ko uday ki khtarnak chaal se kese bachaya jaye yeh sab sochte hue so gaye the par nind unki ud chuki thi.. dar ki wajha se nahi par gusse and frustration ki wajha se.. unhone pari ke sath mil kar kuchh plan kia and use instructions de kar dono fir se so gaye.. khair yeh to tai tha ki aane wala kuchh waqt koi naya toofan lane wala hai yeh to tai tha..​

Other side, singhaniyas house..​

Nidhi ab bhi dar se kaanp rahi thi.. kabhi who chillati toh kabhi darte hue badbadati and fir behosh ho jati.. sahi kaha tha kisi ne ki jab karma aapka pichha shuru karte hain tab aap khud ko bachane ke lie kuchh bhi nahi kar sakte hain.. khair subeh hui singhaniya brothers bhi dimaag se thak chuke the, unki aakhen puri raat na sone ki wajah se laal ho chuki thi.. singhaniya brothers ne nidhi ko ghar par chhodne ka tai kia and who sab kahi jaane ke lie nikal gaye.. kal raat ko unhe aaye call ne un sab ko subeh sawere yaha par aane ke lie majbur kar dia tha..​

Thodi der baad surya shamsher and shashikant do ghante ki drive ke baad ek building ke samne aa pahoche.. gate ke bahar hi unhe car se utarna pada and who chalte hue building ke andar aa gaye and thoda aur andar jaane ke baad unhone ek room ka door khola and andar chale gaye.. jaha par sirf ek Bahot bada table tha jiske ek taraf 4 log bethe hue the .. singhaniyas ne unsab ko good morning wish kia par unhe koi reply nahi mila.. unhe ehsas ho gya tha ki aaj unki life ka shayad aakhri din bhi ho sakta hai.. khair singhaniyas unke samne chair par darte hue baith gaye..​

Boss 1 : bahot bada nuxan pahochaya hai kisi ne humare business ko.. hamne tumhe yeh soch kar hamare business ki is branch ko sambhalne ka kaam sonpa tha, kyu ki hame yakin tha ki tum is branch ko sambhal loge.. ham yeh nahi puchhenge ki yeh sab kese hua kisne kia.. ham bas yeh puchh rahe hain ki kya kya actions lie hain aap sabne is case ko solve karne ke lie..​

Simghaniyas apne boss ki gusse wali awaz sun kar kaanp uthe.. unhe pata tha ki unka boss ko naaraz karna unki jaan ke lie bahot bada khatra sabit ho sakta tha.. who kuchh kehte usse pehle hi un tin anjaan chehre me se ek ne us boss ko kuchh kaha uske bad us boss ne apne laptop me kuxhh kia and who smile karne laga.. singhaniyas ne use smile karte hue dekha to who dar gaye par unka dar ab aur bhi badhne wala tha.. thodi hi der hui thi ke unke laptop ki screen par ek photo aa gai us photo ko dekh kar singhnaiyas ke phhat kar hath mein aa gai..​

Unki screen par ek 40 45 saal ki umr ke ek ganje sir wale aadmi ka photo show ho raha tha.. us photo ke niche us insaan ka naam likha hua tha DAVID.. david singhaniyas ke boss ka sabse khatarnak aadmi tha.. sach kahe to khatarnak shabd uske lie bahot kam tha.. singhaniyas ke according who jinda maut tha uske samne agar 1000 bhi aa jaye tab bhi use harra pana namumkin se bhi jyada mushhkil tha.. ( yeh wohi banda tha jisne rohan ko pichhe se war kar ke ghayal kar dia tha.. ) david kaafi waqt se underground tha par agar who wapis aaya to city ki har gali mein maut ka nanga naach hona tai tha..​

Surya : boss kya david ko wapus bulana sahi hoga? Us raat ke bad sirf ham hi hain jo underground nahi hue hain and sabke samne reh rahe hain.. mana ki us rohan ko ham is david ke sath hone ke karan hi maar paye the par yeh ek darinda hai.. iska bas chale toh yeh apne aas pas kisi ko bhi zinda na rehne de apne khud ke aadmio ko bhi nahi.. yu hi nahi isko RULER OF DEATH kaha jata hai.. main maafi chahunga par aap ek bar fir soch lijiye apne is faisle par..​

Boss 1 : ham jo bhi faisla lete hain who soch samajh kar hi lete hain aur tumhari is nakamyabi and pehle ki sari galtiyo ne hi hame david ko wapis bulane ke lie majbur kia hai and you deserve this punishment.. ab bhugto tum sab.. david do din me tumhare pas aa jayega.. ab tum sab uske orders follow karoge par who jab tak bahot jyada badi emergency na aaye tab tak samne nahi aayega..​

Singhaniyas shocked and dare hue the boss ki baat sun kar.. ab unki power 0 (ZERO) ho chuki thi .. Unhe bas is baat ki khushi thi ke devid thoda control me rahega zarur par unhe nahi malum tha ki who kab tak shant rahega.. sahi kaha tha kisi ne ki devil ko control karna sach mein next to impossible hai.. khair aur kuchh der tak boss ne unhe david ke bare mein bataya and uske bad singhaniyas wapis ghar aane ke lie nikal gaye.. thoda tension jhalak raha tha..​

tension jhalak raha tha..​

Unke waha se nikalne ke baad boss ne us table par bana ek button banaya.. jese hi boss ne who button banaya who charo table samet ek underground tunnel mein jane lage.. thodi der bad charo ek computer lab mein ja pahoche.. jese hi charo ne lab mein kadam rakha ek awaz gunj uthi “welcome back masters.. jo apne kaha tha maine who kar dia hai ab shivam and family ki sacchai hamare samne aa kar hi rahegi..”​

Boss 1 : shukria kaal.. par shivam ko ikam samajhne ka risk ham nahi le sakte.. who rohan ka beta hai ya nahi yeh abhi tak confirm nahi hai par who rohan se kam bhi nahi hai.. agar use pata chala ki koi uski sacchai janne ki koshish kar raha hai to who tumhe bhi khatam karne se nahi hichkichayega..​

Singhaniyas mension,​

Thodi der bad singhaniyas apne ghar pahoche jaha par nidhi drawing room me beth kar apne laptop mein kuchh kam kar rahi thi and uske face par thoda tension jhalak raha tha.. tino bhai dare hue the and dimag se thak bhi chuke the. Shayad ab aur himmat nahi thi ke aur koi dimagi stress le sake.. who bina kuchh kahe nidhi ke samne hi sofe par baith jate hain who jitna ho sake utna khud ke dimag ko shant karne ka try kar rahe the par jese hi who bethte hain nidhi apne laptp ki screen un sab ke samne kar deti hai jisme ek company ka business proposal dikhai de raha tha..​

In mail,​

Respected singhaniyas..​

We have found out that you are making your first steps in robotics business world.. we are looking for freshers who are new in this business.. we can offer you every financial support whenever you need.. if you accept this proposal you can contact us on this address and mobile numbers.. uske bad address and contact number likha hua tha..​

singhaniya brothers samajh chuke the ki yeh mail / business proposal bhejne wala aur koi nahi devid hi tha.. iska matlab saaf tha ki david shuru se hi unsab par nazar rakhe hue tha.. tino singhaniyas ab nidhi se bhi jyada dar jate hain kyu ki ab un sab ka nightmare wapas laut raha tha.. THE DEATH IS ON HIS WAY STAY ALERT YOU CAN ALSO BE PRAY OF IT..​

surya : yeh koi business proposal nahi hai yeh david ka coded message hai ki who wapas laut raha hai and is bar koi aur nahi ham sab uske ghulamo ki fauj honge.. ham uske ghulam honge par uske hatho sabse pehli mout hamari hi hogi..​

nidhi bhi david ke bare mein sun kar dar gai thi.. who achhhe se samajhti thi ke david kesa darinda hai.. uski darindagi ka koi bhi kabhi bhi kahi bhi mukabla nahi kar paya tha.. khair singhaniyas ki subeh ki shuruat ese hi dar ke double dose ke sath hui thi..​

shah mension,​

roz ki tarha shivam and family haste muskurate hue nashta kar rahe the aane wale khatre se anjaan ho kar.. pari and Jarvis dono underwater city ko khojne mein lage hue the par who bhi puri tarha se kamyab nahi ho rahe the.. khair thodi der baad shvam ke phone me Krishna ka message aya , “ our king wants to meet you.. agar tumhari permission ho toh main kal hi ap sab se hamare king ki meeting fix karna chahungi..’’ shivam ne shilpi and riya ko message dikhaya dono ne ishare se haa me sar hilaya jiske bad shivam ne Krishna ko reply de kar meeting ke lie permission de di..​

tino ne nashta khatam kia hi tha ki pari ne singhaniyas ki aaj subeh sawere ki meeting ke bare mein bata dia and sath mein un 4ro boss ke dwara banaye gaye a.i. kaal ke bare mein bhi bataya jo badkismati se shayad pari and Jarvis se 4times jyada powerful tha.. koi aur hota to pari ki a.i wali baat sun kar confused ho jata and haar maan leta par shivam sabse alag tha uske pas back up plan taiyar tha.. usne pari ko plan b ready karne ko kaha jiske bad pari ke system me jaan funk di thi.. agar pari ke andar insani features hote toh koi bhi samajh jata ki pari ke face par devil wali smile fail chuki thi..​

pari ne apni intelligence ka use karte hue ek sath kai sare logo ko mail bheja and uske bad puri family ke face par ek na samajh mein aane wali smile aa gai who ek sath bole NO ONE MESSES WITH THE FORCES OF DEVIL BECAUSE DEATH IS SLAVE OF DEVIL HIMSELF..​

office, uday’s table​

uday office mein betha hua kaam kar hi raha tha ki uske system mein ek mail aaya uday ne normal office mail samajh kar who mail open kia and jese hi WHO MAIL KHULA us mail ka content dekh kar who chaunk gaya.. usme uske ab tak ke sare kaand ka sabut tha and uska drugs ke nashe me kia hua confession and hosh mein kia hua confession tha.. usne hadbadate hue computer bandh kar dia and who washroom ki ore jane laga par raste me hi use gusse mein jal rahi riya dikhai di.. who riya se kuchh kehta uske pehle hi usne martial arts ki techniques ka use karte hue ek zordar mukka uske face par jad dia.. riya wahi par nahi ruki usne uday ka hath puri tarha se tod dia tha.. riya ruki hi thi ke company ke entrance se bhagti hui ek old lady enter hui and usne uday ke sine par ek laat mari and uske baal pakad kar use khada kia and uske face par de thappad de thappad marne lagi..​

aurat : mujhe dekh kar kuchh yad aya kamine ? main who bebas maa hu jiski beti ka rape tune uski hi aakho ke samne kia tha fir tune khud ko bachane ke lie mmujhe room me barso tak kaid karke rakha.. bhala ho us anjaan beti ka jisne mujhe tere changul se azad karwaya..​

short flash back..​

shilpi and riya ek bandh pade bunglow ke samne khade the.. shilpi dono ke waha jane ka reason nahi janti thi who bas shilpi ka sath dene ke lie aai hui thi.. dono ne waha ke sare gundo ko khatam kia and bunglow mein kuchh dhundane lagi.. thodi der bad un dono ko who aurat ek room me bahot hi deyniy halat mein dikhi.. riya ne sawalia nazro se shilpi ki taraf dekha shilpi ne use haa ka ishara kia dono ne us aurat ko thik se uthaya and use le kar apne ghar aa gai jaha tak do din tak uska ilaaj hua.. par jese hi us aurat ne riya ke phone me uday ki pic dekhi who gusse and dard se jal uthi tab ja kar riya ko uday ki asliyat pata chali thi and ab yahi reason tha ki who ab uday se nafrat karne lagi thi..​

flashback ends..​

shivam and shilpi ne us aurat ko thodi der tak uday ki pitai karne di taki uske dil ka dard kam ho sake.. jese hi who aurat thak gai who ghutno ke bal beth kar rone lagi.. yeh aasu na khushi ke the na hi ghum ke aaj uske dil me saalo se daba hua dard and gussa thoda bahot hi sahi bahar nikal kar aa gaya tha.. riya and family se unka dard dekha nahi gaya who tino bhaag kar us lady ke pas gaye and ek sath use gale laga lia.. ab yeh un tino ka pyar kaho ya kuchh aur jese hi who tino ek sath us aurat ke gale lage us aurat ke dil ko maano ek sukoon sa milne laga tha.. thodi der bad us aurat ka gussa thoda (0.1%) kam hua and unhone khud ke aasu pochhe..​

riya : aunty ap bataiye ap kya saza dena chahte ho is haiwaan ko.. mana ki isne kai sari ladkiyo ka jivan tabah kia hai and un sab ko dhundana shayad impossible hai.. mai chahungi ke aap un sabhi badnasib betiyo ke behalf mein unka insaaf kijiye.. aap jo saza mukarrar karengi who saza ise har pal har second milti rahegi..​

us aurat ne apne aasu pochhe and who khadi ho gai aur kaha, .. “ iski saza esi honi chahie ki yeh saans lene se bhi darne lage.. iski life ke bache hue har pal mein ise nark ki anubhuti ho tabhi un sabhi ladkio ko insaaf milega.. “ itna kehne ke baad who shivam and family ki taraf palti and un tino ke samne hath jod lie..​

aurat : shukria baccho.. main shayad kabhi bhi us din jo hua us sadme se ubhar nahi paati thoda sa bhi par tum logo ne mujhe azad karwaya.. aaj sirf meri beti ko hi nahi bahot sari ladkio ko insaaf milega.. ek maa ki dua hai tum sab hamesha tarakki karo khush raho.. unke andar bahot josh tha par abhi unka sharir unka josh jhelne ke lie ready nahi tha.. jese hi unhone apni baat khatam ki who kamzori ke karan behosh ho gai.. shivam ne unko uthaya and company building mein bani mini hospital mein le gaya.. jaha dr. ne unka ilaaj shuru kar dia par unko kal morning tak hosh aane wala nahi tha..​

riya shilpi and shivam ko unke pas chhod kar work floor par wapas aa gai.. usne wapas aa kar inspector sonali ko call kar ke bula lia, thodi der mein hi sonali apni coullege shivani ke sath waha aa pahochi.. sonali ko malum tha ki riya kabhi bhi use bina kisi big reason ke itni jaldi nahi bulayegi.. riya ne bhi der nahi ki and un dono ko toote fute uday ke pas le aai.. uday ki halat esi thi ke koi bhi usko dekh kar hasne lage.​

Sonali : yeh chimpanzi ki aulad kaun hai and tum ise hame kyu milva rahe ho.. kya yeh koi criminal hai jise tum tino ne pakda hai.​

ho.. kya yeh koi criminal hai jise tum tino ne pakda hai.​

Riya : sahi samjha bhabhi aapne sorry madam aapne.. yeh sirf ek criminal hi nahi bahot bada haiwan bhi hai.. yeh keh kar usne us aurat ki sari kahani bata di and yeh bhi ke usne and shilpi ne kese us aurat ko rescue kia tha.. riya ki baat sun kar shivani and sonali khud par kabu nahi rakh paa rahi thi par fir bhi khud par control kie hue thi..​

Sonali : don’t worry chhoti is mc ka hisab khud nirwana apne style me karega.. agar aunty chahe toh jab ise saza di ja rahi hogi tab who waha par maujud reh sakti hain.. usne shivani ko ishara kia and shivani uday ko pair pakad kar ghasitte hue le gai..​

Shivani ke jane ke baad sonali ne uske kaan me kaha, ‘’wese messanger of death kafi achha kam kar raha hai agar use koi bhi help ki zarurat pade to we are ready to help.. ham use hamare mission me sath kam karne ke lie bhi invite karne ke bare mein sochenge..’’ keh kar sonali riya ke reply ka wait kie bina hi chali gai.. khair office ka working hours khatam hue and riya mini hospital me aa gai.. jaha par usne dekha ki who lady aram kar rahi hai and shivam and shilpi bed ke dono taraf bethe hue uska ek ek hath pakde hue so rahe hai.. riya ke face par ek smile aa gai raat hone ko thi is lie usne dono ko jagaya.. fir tino ne dinner kia and wapas room me aa gaye .. room me do bade sofa and ek extra bed rakha hua tha.. shilpi and shivam ne alag alag sofa par sona tai kia and riya aunty ke nazdik ke bed par so gai taki agar zarrurat pade to uth sake..​

Morning .. 9am..​

Subeh hui aunty ko hosh aa chukka tha and doctors ki dawaio and shivam and family ki care ke karan unki health me thoda bahot sudhar/ improvement dekha ja sakta tha.. doctor ne aa kar unka check up kia and bataya ki shivam jab chahe tab ghar le ja sakta tha.. riya and shilpi ne canteen se unke lie healthy nashta lia and room me wapas aa gaye.. unhone aunty ko nashta karwaya and unko bed par sahi se leta dia..​

Riya : ab aap kesa mehsus kar rahe ho aunty ? doctors ke report ke mutabik aap ab thik ho ap chaho to apne ghar jaa sakti ho. Ap apne family member ka pata contact number bataiye ham unhe yhan bula lete hain taki aap unke sath ghar ja sako..​

Aunty with no feelings wala smile, ‘’ kash koi hota par meri beti ke jane ke baad mera apna koi nahi bacha. Mai ek anath paida hui thi and mere husband bhi anath the.. unki death blood cancer ki wajah se ho gai uske baad maine apni beti kritika ko mehnat se apne tarha ek architeck banaya.. mera naam pallavi hai.. meri beti yaha samundar kinare ghumne aai thi akele hamare gaanv se.. tabhi us haiwan ki nazar us par pad gai who kriti ko usi din kidnap kar leta par who bach gai.. who train me beth kar hamare gaanv aa gai main us din usko receive karne aai thi ham auto ka wait kar hi rahe the ki kisi ne kahi se ham dono ko injection de dia and ham dono behosh ho gaye.. jab aankh khuli toh ham dono us bangle me the meri beti ko us haiwan ne bed par bandh rakha tha and mujhe bed ke samne chair par.. usne pure 4din tak apni hawas mitai meri beti par meri hi aakho ke samne darindagi karta raha.. 5th din main kamzori ke karan behosh thi chair par tabhi main eek awaz suni maine dekha to meri beti ne window se kud kar suicide kar lia tha.. uski maut ke bad main na to uski lash dekh paai na kabhi koi ummmid rakh paai.. us darinde ne mujhe chair se azad kia and mujhe marne ke lie chhhod kar chala gya.. main azad thi par main dil dimag se itna hil chuki thi ke kabhi us manhoos jagah se bahar nahi nikal paai.. bhala ho tum tino ka ki tumne is abhagan maa ko insaaf dilwaya.. shukria beta.. ‘’ apni kahani sunate hue aunty ke aakho mein aasu aa gaye the and shivam and family ke bhi..​

Shilpi : kamal karti ho aap bhi.. beta bhi kehti ho and thank you bhi yeh nahi chalega.. kisne kaha apka koi nahi hai ham hai na apki family.. aap hamare sath hamare ghar hi rahogi.. pallavi pehle toh mana karti rahi fir use riya ki pyar bhari zid kea age jhukna hi pada..​

Khair pallavi ko discharge mil gaya and who ab shivam and family ke sath mension me aa gai thi.. like un tino ko bhi ek naya family member mil gaya tha.. dinner ka time ho gaya tha.. shilpi ne sab ke lie khana banaya and unhone dinner kia.. ab baat sone ki thi toh is bar shilpi aunty ke sath sone wali thi and riya shivam ke baju wale room me..​

Morning.. the meeting day..​

Aaj shivam and family ki inhuman prince namor ke sath meeting hone wali thi par Krishna ne koi timing nahi di thi.. tino pallavi ke sath beth kar nashta kar rahe the and aaj tino hi chhuttti par the.. pallavi nashta karne ke bad mension me ghum rahi thi ke tabhi who ek room me ja pahochi jaha shivam and family ne apni yaade pics ke zarie walls pr sajai hui thi.. pallavi ke pichhe pichhe shilpi bhi us room me aa gai thi.. ghumte hue pallavi ki nzar ek pic par tik gai and uski aakho se aasu behne lage who tasvir kisi aur ki nahi karuna maa ki thi..​

Pallavi us tasvir ke taraf ishara karte hue, “yeh tasvir kiski hai ? kaun hai yeh aurat ? kya rishta hai iska tum logo ke sath.. ”​

Shilpi : yeh karuna maa hai hamari yashoda maiya.. unhone ham tino ko maa ka pyar dia itna ki jitna koi sagi maa bhi nahi de sakti.. she died for saving shivam.. kehta hue shilpi ki aakho me aasu and gussa dono ubhar aaye the.. par ap karuna maa ko kese janti hain..​

Pallavi with tears in eyes : who meri best friend and meri badi behan dono thi.. usne jab bhi hamari mulakat hoti tum tino ka jikra kia karti thi par mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum meri karuna di ki santaan ho.. kehte hue usne shilpi ko apne gale laga lia.. riya and shivam bhi door par khade ho kar unki baate sun rahe the who dono bhi daud kr is lamhe me shamil ho gaye.. aaj unki family fir se complete ho gai thi..​

Shivam : aaj karuna maa hoti toh apko dekh kar bahot khush hoti.. abse ham apki family hai and apki santaan bhi.. ap kriti di ke hisse ka pyar hame dete rahio.. thik hai na chhoti maa ?​

Jese hi shivam ne pallavi ko chhoti maa kaha usne shivam ko alag kia and kaha , ´kya tum fir se who labz dohraoge ?”​

Shivam ne kaha CHHOTI MAA..​

Pallavi ko jese sari khushia mil gai thi usne tino ko fir se hug kar lia.. “ haan mai tum tino ki chhoti maa hu and abse tum sab mere bacche ho..” par maine tum sab ka naam toh puchha hi nahi..​

Riya : aap shivam bhaiya se to mil hi chuki hain.. mai hu riya shivam bhaiya ki cousin and unki princess.. and who hai shivam bhaiya ki best friend + gf + wife to be shilpi bhabhi.. yeh dono mere bhai bhabhi hi nahi maa papa bhi hai, mera bhi ab is dunia me in dono ke alawa sirf aap hi hain.. ab mere paas do maa and ek papa hai.. I am the luckiest person in this world.. yippee..​

Khair din ka thoda aur waqt bhi hasi khushi nikal gya near to evening shilpi ko Krishna ka message mila MEET ME ON MIDDLE OF SEA.. it was time for meeting.. message milte hi tino palllavi se business meeting ka bahana bana kar apna apna armour pahan kar nikal gaye..​

Intro time..​

Black bolt.. king of inhumans.. kaha jata hai ki inki awaz hi inki main power hai, inki halki si voice bhi tabahi lane ke lie kafi hai is lie yeh kuchh bhi bolna ya koi bhi word whisper karna bhi ignore karte hain…​

Medusa .. queen of inhumans and wife of black bolt.. inki power inki hair me hai jinme superstrength ki shkti hai..​

Crystal/krishna : yeh queen medusa ki sister hai jo earth air and water ko manipulate karne ki power rakhti hai.. namor ne ise krishna bana kar shivam ko convince karne ke lie bheja tha..​

Gorgon : yeh medusa ka cousin and black bolt ka bharosemand hai.. iski power iske bull jese banawat ke pair ( legs ) hai jo shockwaves create kar sake hai like earthquake..​

The unspoken : yeh black bolt ka cousin hai jo ki blackbolt se pehle inhumans ka king reh chukka hai jab tak uski hi family ne iske cruelty se bhare power hungry nature ke khilaf awaz nahi uthai.. iska khauf itna jyada faila hua tha ki us khauf ko khatam karne ke lie blackbolt ko uska nam kabhi lia na ja sake is lie inhumans ke har books har kahani har jagah se hatva dia is lie isko THE UNSPOKEN kehna best rahega. Yeh mahashay apne sharir ko manchahe form me alter karne ki power rakhte hain.. ( readers inko aap inhumans ki dunia ka thanos ya fir darksied bhi maan sakte hain..)​

END OF UPDATE 16..
(BHAI LOG MAINE STORY KE MAIN TRACK AND SHIVAM KE BADLE WAALE TRACK KO EK SATH CHALAYA HAI AB TAK.. AGAR APKO UPDATE ME KOI CHIZ PASAND AAYE YA KUCHH BHI GALTI LAGE TO PLEASE BATA DIO..)

Wao! Shivam shilpi or riya ko ek or MA ka pyar milega ab, chhoti ma ke dard ko bhi bahut had tk aapne khatm kr diya hai...

Shinghaniyas ko unke boss ne bulaya tha or boss ne unhe David se order lene ka bola hai, David ne hi shivam ke pita ke pith pichhe war kiya tha or ab vo aa rha hai shivam ko harane or apne nukshan ko pura karne ke liya...

nidhi ko to mail ke rup me David ka msg bhi mil gya hai, or sare singhaniyas dare huye hai Vahi inke 4ro boss ne to sala kaal naam ka ek AI Pahle se bna rakha hai jo pari or jarvesh se Kai guna jyada takatvar hai or boss logo ne use command de diya hai shivam ke liye...

Shivam ko bhi pta Chal gya hai ki shinghaniyas ke boss ne meetings bulvai thi or pari va jarvesh ko bhi plan B lagu kr diya hai, dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...

Yha Uday ke computer me uske sare kiye gye gunaho ka Kala chittha mail ke rup me bhej diya pari ne or usko sabak sikhane ke liye riya ne khub mara or Pallavi ji se bhi maar khilvai or uske baad hmari pyari Nirwana ki Jaan-e-bahar Sonali madam ko bulvaya gya, shivani bhi aayi thi sath me, riya ke kaan me Sonali shivam ke karnamo ke liye badhai or madad ke liye offer bhi de gyi hai or is uday ka anjam Pallavi ji ke samne karne ke liye vo bhi nirwana ke hatho se invitation bhi de gyi...

Mujhe Bahut Accha lga Sonali nirvana or shivani ka idhar ka yah involment, hope Apne Sandeep Singh Nairwana bhaya ko bhi pasand aaye...

Inhuman ka intro bhi hua or meating ki jagah bhi fix ho gyi hai, shivam bhi nikal gya hai shilpi or riya ke sath apne apne suit pahan kar...

Superb update bhai amazing fantastic sandar lajvab with awesome writing skills bhai

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

update 8.. darr.. is good for health..

nidhi nind ki tablets le kar sone ki koshish kar rahi thi par kehte hain na ki bure karm kabhi pichha nahi chhodte.. yahi same uske sath bhi ho raha tha..

in her dream..
wo and uske dono bhai aur surya kisi ko gher kar khade the.. wo banda bahot buri tarha se ghayal tha and uske pichhe 5 6 lashe padi thi jo shayd usi ki family ki thi..

wo banda : tumne bahot galat kia apne ego and ahenkar ke chalte tum apne khokhle pyar ko pura karna chahti thi par jab nahi pa saki toh tumne meri dunia hi khatam kar di.. ab bhi mouka hai mar do mujhe warna agar mai bach gaya toh tum sab ki esi halat karunga ki tum khud ki mout ki bhikh magogi par mout tumhe nahi milegi kahi bhi kisi bhi tarha se..

nidhi aage badhti hai and us bande ke sharir pe pehle chaku se kai waar karti hai and last me jab woh goli chalane wali hoti hai tab woh bolta hai aj agar mai mar bhi gaya toh bhi koi ghum nahi.. mera beta zarur ayega aur tum sab ka hisab karega.. and tajjub ki bat hai ki us insan ne bhi shivam ke jesi hi watch pehni thi..

nidhi hadbada kar chikh mar kar uth jati hai.. uske muh se bas ek hi word nikalta hai ROHAN SHARMA.. uski chikh sun kar sab uske room me aa jate hain..

surya : kya hua bua? ap chillai kyu? kabhi kisi se naa darne wali aaj dar ke mare chikh kar uth gai.. strange.. esa hua hai matlab baat bahot serious hai.. and apne us rohan ka nam kyu le rahi thi.. wo bhi itne saal ke bad..

nidhi : mene aaj wohi manzar dekha jo hamne saalo pehle create kia tha.. us rohan ke last words aj bhi dara dete hain.. bhale hi woh is dunia me nahi hai par uska track record tha ki woh jo bhi kehta tha wo kar dikhata tha.. mujhe dar hai ki kahi wo wapis na laute ya fir uska beta kahi se na tapak pade.. agar baap esa tha toh socho beta kesa hoga ya ho sakta tha?

nidhi ki baat sun kar un tino ki bhi sitti pitti ghum ho jati hai and unki akho ke samne bhi saalo pehle ki ek raat ka manzar daud jata hai.. and woh tino dar jate hain..

few years ago..
un chaaro ne rohan and uski family par dhokhe se hamla bol dia tha and sab ko ghayal kar dia tha.. rohan ke pith me chaku ghusa hua tha and uske hath me bhi cut laga hua tha fir bhi usne apni pith me se chaku nikal kar ladte hue singhaniyas ke 90 aadmio ko mar dia tha.. and surya and shamsher ka hath lagbhag kaat hi dia tha..

woh singhniyas ko usi din khatam kar hi deta agar nidhi ne dhokhe se usko goli na mari hoti.. itna yaad aate hi sab ki aakho me maut ka khauf beth gaya tha.. aaj bhi rohan ke nam se woh dar se kaanp jate the.. ..

surya dar ke mare pasine se naha gaya tha and shayad usne pent bhi gili kar di thi .... woh bol pada, "it's impossible bua.. usdin hamne uski jesi haalat kari thi us hisab se uski maut maximum 30minutes me ho jani thi .. us hisab se dekhe toh hamare lie khatra sirf ek hi insaan hai ya fir tha.. uska beta.. us raat ke baadse mai abhi tak use dhund raha hu par kahi koi clue ya information nahi mil rahi existence ki.. usne kahi bhi kya kahi bhi apne bete ka nam ka jikr nahi kia hai.. i mean uske bank account ke nominies ke list me bhi uske bete ka koi jikra nahi hai.. "

nidhi : chalo maan lete hain ki woh mar gaya hoga and uske bete ka bhi koi existence nahi hai fir bhi mujhe ab dar lag raha hai.. agar boss ko pata chala is bare me toh wo hame chhodege nahi..

khair singhaniyas ki raat ese hi darte hue nikal gai.. unme se koi bhi puri raat ek second ke lie so nahi paya tha..

next morning ..
shilpi shivam pyar bhari bate karte hue nashta kar rahe the and singhaniyas ki haalat par pet pakad kar hans bhi rahe the.. par jese hi shilpi ne nidhi ki last line suni woh confuse ho gai and shivam ki taraf dekhne lagi..

shilpi: mujhe lagta tha ki us hadse ke pichhe sirf yehi log hai par yaha to alag hi story chhipi hui hai.. kon hai inka boss.. may be wo hamara asli dushman hai.. hame uske bare me pata karna padega..

shivam usko side se hug kar leta hai and bolta hai, " don't worry jaan.. pari hai na ham 4ro mil kar use bhi dhund nikalenge and singhaniyas se bhi buri haalat karenge.. "

shivam : pari darling.. (shilpi thode gusse me usko mukka mar deti hai.. she knew ke shivam masti kar raha hai.. par fir bhi use thodi jalan to hui) insab ka data khangal maro and jo bhi doubtful lage usko alag folder me rakh kar uski info. nikalo..inke boss ki info. shayad wahi se milegi hume..

ese hi nashta khatam karne ke baad shilpi office chali jati hai and shivam college ke lie nikal jata hai

at some strange place..
4 log ek table ke aas pas bethe hue hain and kuchh discuss kar rahe hain.. and unke chehro se lag raha hai ki matter kafi serious hai.. (mai yaha par numbers likhunga name ki jagah q ki in 4bando ka bahot imp. role hai aage is lie in sab ka intro thode updates ke bad ayega)

stranger 1 : ab waqt karib hai uske jaagne ka.. last time usko badi mushkil se hara kar sula dia tha i mean uski conciousness chhin li thi par is bar wo ham sab se 100guna takatwar ban ke laut raha hai..

stranger 2 : ha sahi kaha.. and uski ulti khopdi i mean uske pagalpan ka koi ilaj nahi hai.. wo hamari prajati ka sabse bada elder hai.. agar hame rokna hai to hamari sena badhani hogi..

stranger 3 : ha par hamari bat par yakin kon karega.. usse bhi badi bat kon us haiwan ke khilaf jung me shamil hoga..

stranger 4 : and usse badi musibat yeh hai ki uspar kisi bhi weapon ya kisi bhi force ya energy ka asar nahi hota.. usko rokenge kese har bar use ek hi tarike se nahi hara sakte.. woh URANOS THE UNDYING hai and uski powers omega level ki hai...

intro time..

urenos.. iski age ka koi number nahi hai.. AGE IS JUST A NUMBER line isi ke lie bani hai esa krh sakte hai.. yeh ek powetful alien race ka member hai.. kehte hai ki ye amar hai like he have defeated his death.. iske bare me janne ke lie next update ka intezar karo.. ​

stranger 1 : agar puri planing ke sath koshish kare to shayad jit sakte hai.. is bar wo apna purana target yani ki woh earth ko tabah karne ke lie aayega.. is lie hame hamari sena me earth ke bashindo ko bhi shamil karna chahie.. mene dekha hai unke jazbe ko and unki intelligence unki pehchan ka trademark hai..

stranger 2 : mai ek insaan ko janta hu jo hamari jung me shamil hone ki kabiliyat rakhta hai and uske jivan ka laxya uski destinty bhi usko is jung me khich layega hi..

scene shift.. college..
aaj college me first year ki new batch shuru hone wali thi and final year me bhi kai sare new students ne admission lia tha.. wese to yeh college ka owner shivam tha par is chiz ka pata sirf chairman and principal ko tha..

aaj college me shovam ke mostly lectures free the islie woh park me beth kar notes bana raha tha aur sath me next step ki planning bhi kar raha tha.. koi tha jo uspar nazar rakhe hue tha.. pari ne shivam ko is bare me bata dia shivam ne bhi uske sath wohi karne ko kaha jo pari ne singhaniyas ke sath kia tha i mean mobiles and laptop etc ke sath..

thodi der bad ek ladki uske pas aa kar khadi ho gai.. yeh wohi thi jo shivam par nazar rakhe hue thi..

wo ladki : exvuse me.. if you don't mind can i sit here?

shivam ne bina apna kam roke usko ishare se ha keh dia and wo ladki usse thodi duri bana kar beth gai.. shivam abhi bhi notes banane me busy tha..
thodi der hui hi thi ke us ladki ne bat karne ke irade se usne apna hath shivam ki ore hath badhate hue kaha, " hi i am krishna sharma.. first year student.. apka nam? "

shivam wese to sab se bat karta tha par pata nahi kyu use krishna ko jawab dene ka man nahi hua.. usne pari ko command dia ki woh uske cell phone se shilpi ko call lagaye taki woh call ke bahane se krishna se dur ja sake..

i mean kuchh toh tha krishna me.. khair shivam ne car start kari ane office ki taraf jane laga.. tab tak use pari ne msg de dia tha ke usne krishna ke related sara data sab jagah se collect kar lia hai..

shivam cabin me na ja kar sidha apni personal lab me chala jata hai and shilpi ko msg karke bata deta hai ki woh company me bani apni private lab me hai.. thodi der bad shilpi lab me emter hoti hai jaha shivam kuchh banane ki koshish kar raha tha and thoda tensed lag raha tha..

shilpi lab me aa kar usko pichhe se hug karti hai par shivam ke hug me usko esa feel ho raha tha jese woh bahot dara hua tha and aisa tabhi hota tha jab use woh nightmare aata tha.. shivam usse alag hone se bhi dar raha tha..

shilpi : kya hua shivam aaj tum bahot zyada dare hue lag rahe ho.. don't tell ki tumhe woh nightmare fir se aaya tha.. kya kuchh different tha is time? tell me..

shivam : mera nightmare bahot bhyanak tha is bar.. esa lag raha hai ki woh jo koi bhi hai URENOS ya whatever jo bhi uska nam hai.. use kahi pe kaid kar ke behosh kia hua hai and woh shayad abhi apni nind se jaag raha hai.. and mera mind keh raha hai ki mujhe usko rokna chahie.. par kese.. ajib bat yeh hai ki mujhe aaj jab nightmare aaya tab mai jaag raha tha na ki soya hua tha.. (shivam ko nightmare usi time aaya tha jab krishna ne usko uska nam puchha tha..)

shilpi : sach kahu toh mujhe bhi nahi malum is sawal ka jawab.. par agar dhyan se socha jaye toh mere dimag me ek hi answer aata hai agar yeh hamari destiny ya life ke uddeshya ke bare me hai toh hame wohi karna chahie jisme ham expert hai par is bar tagdi 4guni takat ke sath.. and dunia me kuchh sawalo ko chhod kar har sawal ka jawab hai.. agar sawalo ke jawab ham se jude hue ho toh kismat and sahi waqt hame woh jawab de hi deti hai.. wese tum kya banane ki koshish kar rahe the..

shivam : pata nahi kyu par mujhe aaj war armour banane ka man kar raha hai.. ek nahi bahot sare.. jese jung nazdik hai and mujhe un Armours ki zarurat padne wali hai..


shilpi muskurate hue : do whatevrr you want to do.. i am sure ki tumhe esa karne ka man kar raha hai ya esi feeling aa rahi hai toh iske pichhe koi unknown wajah hogi but i will say just make your self prepared for everything..

uske bad shivam kuchh nahi kehta and kuchh banane lag jata hai.. ek do hours ke bad shivam thak jata hai to woh lab se log out kar deta hai and pari ko jo usne trial version banaya tha usko Analise kar ke us chiz ko pura kese banaya ja sakta hai woh tarika dhundane ko keh deta hai..

uske bad shilpi and shivam dono apne cabin me aa jate hai and sham tak dono kam karte hai.. riya chhutti le kar apne papa ko milne gai hui thi is lie undono ka man nahi lag raha tha..

somewhere in darker space..
koi tha jo apni consciousness wapis pane ki koshish kar raha tha par woh bar bar asafal ho raha tha.. uski veins me universe ki sari destructive powers beh rahi thi.. like agar woh jaag gaya to universe ka ek katra bhi nahi bachega..

intro time..
eternals.. yeh ek esi prajati hai jo galaxy ke nearly har planet ya civilization ka part bane hai.. inhone planets ko tabah hote hue bhi dekha hai and bante hue bhi..

builders.. yeh ek esi cosmic entity hai jo har civilization ko banati bhi hai and jo unke raste me aaye unhe tabah bhi kar dete hain.. in short yeh creator bhi hai and destroyer bhi..

baki ke charecters turn by turn zarurat ke hisab se aate jayenge..

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Nice update shivam jo warriors bana raha h wo agai uske behad kaam ane wale h kyoki saaf dikh raha h prithvi ki taraf bahut bada khatra arah jisai koyi nahi bach payega....aur ye nidhi ne goli maari thi shivam ke father ko toh ab muje yakeen h shivam kya karega usai andaja bhi nahi hoga

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

ek bat batu bhai log.. jab mai update likh deta hu and kisi ek point pe aa kar finish kar deta hu and upload karta hu tabhi mere ko improvement ka idea aata hai..

matlab ke har bar update ka climax thoda adhura lagta hai

Ap update dubble baar check karte hoge phir aisa nahi ayega aur best way 2 update lagataar likho bahut bhadiya rahega update ek ek karke post kar dena

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

update 9.. making of new a. i.
shivam and shilpi bore ho rahe the i mean unka man nahi lag raha tha riya ke bina.. shivam and shilpi ki family ke nam par sirf riya and uske papa hi the.. is lie woh dono har sambhav koshish kar rahe the ki unke last stage par pahoch chuke blood cancer ka ilaj kar sake.. par wo ye bat riya ko bata nahi sakte the q ke riya ke papa ne un dono se wada lia tha..

shilpi and shivam dono ayurved ki sari kitabe padh kar unme likhi sari techniques ko azma chuke the par woh perfect anti dote nahi bana paye the .. par aaj jab woh us antidote banane ki koshish kar rahe the tab unko ek ummid dikhi par usse thik hone ka chance sirf 5% tha..

shivam : finally ek chhoti si ummid dikhi.. ab is dawai ka experiment karna hoga jald and lets pray ki positive result hi nikle.. agar yeh dawai uncle ko thik kar paai toh ham iska use garib cancer patients ko thik karne me karenge.. pari tum experiment ki taiyari shuru kar do..

then woh dono lunch karne ke lie apne cabin me aa jate hain.. jaha par shilpi ne banaya hua tiffin rakha hua tha.. shivam ne shilpi ko ek packet dete hue kaha, "please wear this one.. " shilpi cabin me bane bathroom me chali gai and jab usne packet khola toh andar ek beautiful red saree thi.. ​

jab woh saree pahen ke bahar aai tab shivam usko dekh kar alag hi dunia me kho gaya..​

shivam ne khud par control kia and usko ankh mar di.. shilpi uske is action pe chok gai par usne kuchh kaha nahi fir shivam ne diwar par bane switch board ka ek switch off kia toh unke table ki diwar slide karte hue khul gai.. jaha par ek room bana hua tha.. andar jane se pehle shivam ne shilpi ki akho me patti bandh di and shilpi ko thodi der wait karne ko kaha.. and woh andar chala gaya.. thodi der bad woh bahar aya and shilpi ka hath pakad kar andar le gaya un dono ke andar jate hi door bandh ho gaya ..

jab shilpi ki akho se patti utari gai tab woh room ka nazara dekh kar dang reh gai.. woh room kuchh ese sajaya gaya tha.. ​

dining table.. ❤❤❤❤❤..​

bed.. ​

bouquet..

tent..

shillpi sab dekh hi rahi thi ke shivam ne use pichhe se hag kar lia.. and uske gaal pe kiss kar lia.. .. and kaan me fusfusaya, "jo meri rooh me basti hai .. jo meri dunia hai jiske bina mai adhura hu us pyaar ki moorat ko janamdin ki badhai ho.. love you my wife.. shukria mere jine ki wajah banne ke lie❤❤❤.. "

shilpi ne jese hi shivam ke bol sune woh uski orr palat gai.. uski akho me beshumar prem tha aur us akho me pani bhi beh raha tha.. shivam ne use chair pe bitha dia and uske samne zamin par beth gaya and uski god me sir rakh dia.. shivam esi position me ek premi kam chhota bachcha lag raha tha jo apni maa ki god me sar rakhke betha tha..

shilpi ko shivam par bahot pyaar aya woh shivam ke sar pe hath firane lagi.. sach kaha hai kisi ne.. ek stree ke kai sare roop hote hai maa behan premika mitra aur duniya ki raxa karne wali devi.. shivam and woh 9saal se sath the .. un dono ne life ke kai sare pal sath bitaye the.. khushi ke lamhe ho ya ghum ka andhera woh kabhi alag nahi hue.. shilpi jab woh hadsa hua tab bhi uske sath khadi rahi and usne riya ke sath mil kar use sambhala use fir se jina sikhaya..

shilpi : kya hua tiger? mai yahi hun tumhare pas.. shivam ne apna sar upar uthaya and uski akho me dekhne laga.. pyar ki koi bhasha nahi hoti.. jo log ek dusre ke dil me rehte hain woh ek dusre ke man ki bat bina kahe samajh jate hain.. thodi der bad shivam khada hua and usne shilpi ko hath pakad kar dining table ki chair par bitha dia and khana parosne laga.. jab khana paros dia tab woh shilpi ko apne hath se khilane laga..

shilpi bhi kaha pichhe rehne wali thi usne bhi shivam ko apne hatho se khilane lagi.. aj koi kuchh keh nahi raha tha par dono ek dusre ke dil ki bat bina kahe samajh rahe the.. jab lunch khatam hua tab shivam ne waha par rakha projector on kar dia.. jisme unki har yaad ek video ke zarie chal rahi thi..

dono ki pehli mulakat.. pehli ladai.. shilpi ki college life ki tasvire jab wo lady don hua karti thi aur bhi bahot kuchh tha .. last me woh scene bhi aya jab shivam ne use i love you kaha tha and isi ke sath video khatam ho gaya..

shivam : mai tumhe har woh khushi dena chahta hun jo tum deserve karti ho.. ❤❤.. log pyar me marne ki bate karte hai par mai jina chahta hu.. mene kuchh plan kia hai wo mai abhi nahi bataunga next sunday par tumhe wo gift dunga..

shivam and shilpi ne ese hi kai sare lamhe guzar die aaj ke din me.. jab thak gaye toh wo wahi secret room me sone ka decide kia.. ​

best moment on the date..

ese hi bate karte hue dono kab ek dusre ki baho me so gaye pata nahi chala.. sach kehte hain ki kabhi kabhi sab kuchh bhula kar zindagi ke har lamhe ko jite rehna chahie kya pata kab kaha se musibat aan pade..

singhaniyas mansion..
charo singhaniyas mansion ke ek room me bethe hue the.. jaha par projector ke through meeting chal rahi thi jaha par screen par ek banda dikhai de raha tha jo ki ek andhere kamre me ek chair par betha hua tha.. jo shayad singhaniyas ka boss tha.. jiski sirf akhe hi dikhai de rahi thi and songhaniyas ke chehre par dar aur dehshat saf dikhai de rahe the..

boss : tum 4ro bewalufo ke shahenshah ho.. simple si bat hai ki agar woh ladka doubtful lag raha hai .. jis past ko tum sab ne dafna dia tha jise mita dia tha us insaan ki jhalak usme dikhti hai and tum uske bare me jan nahi pa rahe ho toh jis insan ki jhalak tumhe dikhti hai uske past ko check karo jawab mil jayega.. .. dar toh mujhe bhi us rohan se aaj bhi lagta hai us akele ne hamare samrajya hamari power ko khatam hi kar dia tha itni tabahi macha di thi usne ki kabhi kabhi dar ke mare har jagah uske hone ka ehsas hota hai..

nidhi : toh ap hi batao boss ham kya karen kese pata lagaye shivam and team ke bare me.. hamne har jagah check karvaya par koi information nahi mili..

boss : har raaz ke khulne ka ek zariya hota hai.. ek kam karo rohan ke past me fir se ghus jao koi na koi esa banda hoga hi jo uske bete ke bare me kuchh janta hoga.. uske chahne wale aur uske dushman kisi ke pas toh uske bete ka raaz hoga... ek kam karo singhaniya surya ka woh canada wala dost ishan usko bulao.. woh robotics ki field me jana mana chehra hai woh tumhari madad karega shivam and team ke sath business karne me and sharte puri karne me..

khair meeting puri hui and sabhi singhaniyas apne apne kam me lag gaye.. shamsher and surya car le kar kahi jane ke lie nikal gaye..

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Shivam shilpi ka pyar din parti din aur gahra hota ja raha h jisai shivam ki life aur behtar hoti ja rahi i mean uska dard uska dhuk shilpi ke pyar se kam ho jayega .... ..aur ye chutiya log Rohan ke past mai dhund rahe h maut toh inke samne khadi h lol future mai shivam kaise marega inhe samaj he nahi ayega

 

[Smith_15]

 

[Mast fakir]

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