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Thanks Arjun Singh 72 bhai...Awesome update
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HAPPY HOLI
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Update - 13
Aaj Paridhi ka dil sach me chikh raha tha... Usne khud bhi iss nayab chijo ko mahesoos kiya tha... aur jab aapke pass se ye chije door chali jaye kitna dard hota hai vo bhi mahsoos kiya tha... Dev ke 10 saal pahele wali yaad.... Aur Pavan ka yu pyaar ke liye bhukha hona.... Paridhi ke Dil ko aaj aur komal bana diya... Paridhi ki aankhe kafi der tak bighi rahi.... Paridhi ne apne mobile me apne pariwar ki photo nikali aur usse dekh ne lagi..... Apne pariwar yu hasti khilati huyi photo dekh Paridhi ke chahere pe smile aa gayi...
Aur ab Paridhi ne uss Dyari ko apne hatho me thama aur aage padhne lagi..
Ab aage....
Date - 13/07/2003
Kal ka din kuch khas gujara nahi tha.... kal raat ko Paheli baar Dyari likh kar subah subah achha mahesoos ho raha tha....
Ham sabhi bachhe yaha aapas me aek riste se jud gaye the.... ham sabhi aek hi jese the... bina pariwar ke... har roj iss nark ke dard ko jel rahe the.... aur shyad isine ham sab ko achhe dost ki tarah jod diya tha...
Aaj subah har roj ki tarah aaj subah 5 baje hi yaha ka chokidar kam gunda jyada Hariya ham sab ko utha ne aaya tha... Hariya ko Munna ne yaha hamare upper watch rakhane ke liye rakha tha.... Vo bahut hi ganda aur beraham hai... muje usse dekh chid hi chadti hai.... ham sab ko subah subah bahut maar maar ke jagata hai... subah subah hi itna julm kya yahi likha tha ham sab ke nasib me... Hariya muje aur Aadi ko nahi marta tha kyu ki Munna ne mana kiya tha muje kuch kar ne se....
Lekin me bhi aakhir aek bachha hi hu na... mere samne vo doosre bachho ko marta hai... vo bhi kabhi joote se kabhi belt se aur kabhi koi chij uthake bhi fek deta hai....
Jab me chota tha tab muje samaj nahi aa raha tha ki kese sab ki madad karu lekin aaj me un bachho ke sath khada ho jata hu jise Hariya bahut jyada marne lagata hai... aur muje samne dekh vo muje gandi gandi gali bol vaha se chala jata tha....
Aaj subah bhi usne mere samne ke bed pe so rahe Kamal ko bhi buri tarah pit raha tha... mera kaleja hi sunn pad gaya... Mai kamal ko apne samne ese maar khata kese dekh sakata tha.. me fauran daud ke kamal ke aage aa gaya... esa karne se muje bhi aek belt lag gayi.... lekin muje uski koi fikr nahi thi... muje sirf apne dosto ko bachana tha...
Lekin aaj Hariya ko pata nahi kya huva tha... shayad pike aaya tha ya kisi aur ka gussa yaha nikalane aaya tha... vo muje gandi bahut gandi galiya bolne laga... mujr rona aa raha tha... lekin agar me kamal ke samne se hat gaya to ye ganda aadmi aaj use maar hi dalta.....
Aur jab me samne se nahi hata to usne muje marna shuru kar diya lekin me samne se phir bhi nahi hata...
Phir pata nahi muje kya huva mene uski belt ko pakad li aur bade tej aawaj me use kahene laga..
Mai chillate huva - "Hariya... dekh ab bahut ho gaya..... agar aek baar aur kisi bachhe ko tune mara na to mujse bura koi na hoga... samaj lena."
Hariya ese hasa jese me koi machhar hu jise vo abhi masal dega - "Kya be... bahut shanpatti kar ta hai... sale do kaudi ke chore..... tu kya muje dara raha hai..."
Mai - "Dara nahi raha hu... sach bata raha hu... agar tune aek baar aur haath uthaya to me jaakar Munna malik ko sab sach sach bata dunga ki tu yaha kya karta hai.... tu hamare sath vo ganda vala kaam karata hai vo sab bata dunga.."
Hariya ko jese khoon khaul utha ho shyad usne aaj jyada hi pike rakhi thi - "Sale kutte... kamine.... mad***.... bahut charbhi chadi hai tuje jo tu itna uchal raha hai... sale yahi thok dunga..... ****od..... Aur me kisi Munna Bunna se darta nahi samaj lena... Uski maa ki....."
Aur jese hi vo muje pakad ne aage badha pichhe se kisi ki tej aawaj aayi... mera aur uska dhyaan darwaje pe gaya... jaha pe Munna khada tha.. uski aankho me bhi shole chamak rahe the... Munna ke sath aur 2 aadmi the...
Munna - "Kyu be... sale Hariya mujse nahi darta tu.... kya be tere ko kya chad gayi hai... ma****.... Aur uske aage kya bol raha tha bol varana yahi thok dunga tuje..."
Hariya ke chahere pe jese kisine acid phenk diya ho esa safed pad gaya tha... Aur Munna ne bhi vo Hariya ki Munna se naa darne vali hi baat suni thi.... uske aage ka kuch nahi pata tha....
Hariya hadbadate huve - "Kuch bhi to nahi bola tha bhai.... aur me to sirf iss chore ko darane ke liye bola tha...."
Muje samaj aa gaya ki ab muje kya karna hai... mai phauran daud ke Munna ke pair pad gaya...
Mai - "Malik... ye muje maar raha tha... bahut buri tarah se mara hai muje..."
Munna ne aek kha jane vali najar se Hariya ki aur dekha aur phir muje apne pair se jatakte huve door phek diya... mai thodi door ja gira.. girne se mera sir sidhe undhe muh jamnin pe pataka iss se mere sir se thoda khoon bahene laga tha...
Mera khoon dekh Aadi hadbadi me utha lekin vo uth na saka aur vahi niche gir gaya...
Munna - "Kyu be.. tuje kyu maar raha tha ye..."
Hariya - "Bhai vo...."
Munna - "To chup beth kamine.... chore tu bol..."
Mai - "Malik ye Hariya na roj raat ko yaha ke aek bachhe ke sath vo galat wala ganda kaam karta hai...... aur har raat ko use marta bhi hai... aur esi dhmakiya bhi deta hai ki agar kisi se kuch kaha to maar dalega.."
Hariya aek dam se baukhalaye huve aawaj me - "Oyyy... sale.... mad****.... kya bak raha hai..." aur phir munna ki aur dekhta huva - "Bhai ye launda jooth bol raha hai... mene esa kuch nahi kiya... aap iss launda ko aap yahi thok do... ya mai thok deta hu...."
Hariya ne apni gun nikalte huve muj pe tan di lekin vo kuch karta uss se pahele Munna ke hath se goli hawa me chuti
Munna - "Mad***... sale garmi kya dikha raha hai... pahele isse pura bol lene de...." aur phir meri aur dekhte huve bola - "Bol aage.."
Mai - "Malik vo... kal raat jab me so raha tha to ye aaya muje sidha uth hi liya aur... muje khinch ke mere sath vo ganda kaam karne le jane laga.. me jese tese uss ke hatho se chutkar yaha wapas aa gaya.. aur bed ke niche chip gaya... aur isiliye aaj subah muje maar raha tha ki mai aap ko kuch bata na du...."
Munna ki aankho me ab khoon sawar tha usne aek tej najar Hariya pe dali uske liye ham sab paisa kamane ka jariya the so vo iss harakat ko kese ese hi jane de sakata tha - "Kya be... ba***.... ye sab karta hai tu.... bh****...."
Munna ki aankho me aangare dekh Hariya ke to hosh hi udd gaye the - "Bhai.... ye....ye... joo... jooth bol raha hai..."
Mai - "Malik... mai jooth nahi bol raha... aap chahe to iss Kamal aur Aadi se puch lijiye... yaa phir baki bachho se bhi puch sakate hai"
Munna aek najar Aadi pe aur Kamal pe dali jo apna sir haa me hila rahe the...
Hariya ka ab lagne laga tha ki kya hone wala tha.. usne bhi khoon karne wali najar se muje dekha aur
Hariya - "Sale... jooth bolta hai.... teri maa ki..."
Aur hariya ne muj pe apni gal taan di... lekin vo trigger dabata uss se pahele hi Munna ne apni gun ka trigger daba diya tha...
Hariya ki lash fersh pe padi huyi thi aur charo taraf sirf sannata... mera dil dhadkana band ho gaya tha... Aaj paheli baar kisi ka khoon hote dekha tha... kisi ko marte huve dekha tha..
Munna ne apne dono Aadmio ko Hariya ki lash ko bahar le jane ko bola aur khud bahar nikal gaya...
Ham sabhi bachhe bas fati fati aankho se Hariya ki lash ko bahar le jate huve dekh hi rahe the... ham sab ke dil sunn pad gaye the.... shyad me jesa anubhav kar raha tha sab log vesa hi anubhav kar rahe the...
Unn dono aasmio ke jaane ke baad bhi kamare me purra sannata chaya huva tha aur iss sannate ko sabse pahele mene toda... sabse pahele mene harakat ki aur apni jagah se uth ke apne bed ke pass aya aur Aadi jo niche gir gaya tha use wapas bed pe litaya... aur me bhi uske pass beth gaya...
Pura din dimag sunn pada huva tha... baar baar Hariya ka khoon se sana huva chahera samane aa raha tha aur uske sath dar bhi lag raha tha.. raat ko bhi subah jesa hi sannata chaya huva tha.... sab ka dil ghabara gaya tha... Aur me Aadi ko uske bed pe litake phir se apni Dyari likhane beth gaya...
Aaj ka pura din ka ye hadasa likhane ke baad muje ahesaas huva ki mera dil abhi bhi dar se bhara huva tha... akela mahesoos ho raha tha... esa lag raha tha ki iss char diwari ke bich ham ese kaid the jese bahar koi shaitaan khada pahera de raha hai aur vo kabhi bhi kisi ka khoon karane se katarayega nahi... chhar diwari ke bich band me ghor andere me ji raha tha... iss andhere me muje aaj bahut hi akela mahesoos ho raha tha jiss se dar bhi kafi haavi ho chu ka tha....
Iss Waqt muje apni Maa ki jaroorat thi
Maa.... Maa... aap kaha hai... Maa aaj muje aapki bahut yaad aa rahi hai... aap kaha ho Maa.... muje le jao na yaha se maa.....
Maa... aaj mere karan kisika khoon huva hai maa... aap sun rahi hai.... aaj me kisi ke maut ki vajah bana hu me Maa.... Maa bahut dar lag raha hai... muje bahut dar lag raha hai Maa...
Maa... lekin muje khushi hai ki aaj mene yaha ke bachho ko aek shaitan se bachha liya.... aaj ke baad vo ganda aadmo unke sath vo ganda kaam kabhi nahi kar payega... aur kabhi kisiko maar bhi nahi payega...
Maa... kya mai kisi ke maut ki bajah ban ke khud shaitan nahi ban gaya na maa?....
Me kya karu Maa... muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha... Muje apki madad chahiye maa... aapke bete ko aapki madad chahiye....
Pappa aapko pata hai aaj mere Dil ko lagata hai ki maine sahi kiya aur meri sabse achhi dost kitabo me bhi yahi likha hai ki sabki madad karni chahiye... mene sahi kiya na papa?... kya aap muje nahi bataoge ki me galat hu ya sahi?.... kya kisi ke madad ke liye kisi ki jaan lena galat hai?...
Aur agar galat hai to phir mai bhi aaj vo kitabo vala shaitan ban gaya na papa.... muje shaitan nahi banana papa muje to apni chutki ka hero banana hai... agar mai shaitan ban gaya to kya muje chutki pahechan payegi?... Papa muje shaitan nahi banana papa.... muje aap jesa banana hai...
Aap ko pata hai papa maine kitabo me padha hai ki shaitan kese hote hai abhi bhi me unn sab ko apne aaspass mahesoos kar sakata hu papa... Kya inn sab ke bich rah ke me bhi unn jese hi ban jaunga?... Kya mai bhi esa hi ban jaunga papa?..
Chutki dekh na koi sun hi nahi raha... dekh na maa aur papa bhi koi jawab nahi de rahe... tu darna mat chutki tera bhaiya shaitan nahi banega... tera bhaiya hero banega.. ha... bata raha hu.... aur na jab me tum sab ko dundh lunga na mai hero banke hi aaunga...
Tu nahi daregi na Chutki mujse... bata na... nahi daregi na... Mai vesa bhai banuga jesa kitabo me mene padha tha...
Koi baat nahi aap sab muje chahe bhul gaye ya phir mujse abhi roothe hai... mai na aap sab ko mana lunga... aur phir kabhi door na jaunga aap sabse...
Mai nahi bhulunga Maa ki aap sab muje kitna pyaar karte hai....
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Aaj Paridhi ka dil sach me chikh raha tha... Usne khud bhi iss nayab chijo ko mahesoos kiya tha... aur jab aapke pass se ye chije door chali jaye kitna dard hota hai vo bhi mahsoos kiya tha... Dev ke 10 saal pahele wali yaad.... Aur Pavan ka yu pyaar ke liye bhukha hona.... Paridhi ke Dil ko aaj aur komal bana diya... Paridhi ki aankhe kafi der tak bighi rahi.... Paridhi ne apne mobile me apne pariwar ki photo nikali aur usse dekh ne lagi..... Apne pariwar yu hasti khilati huyi photo dekh Paridhi ke chahere pe smile aa gayi...
Aur ab Paridhi ne uss Dyari ko apne hatho me thama aur aage padhne lagi..
Ab aage....
Date - 13/07/2003
Kal ka din kuch khas gujara nahi tha.... kal raat ko Paheli baar Dyari likh kar subah subah achha mahesoos ho raha tha....
Ham sabhi bachhe yaha aapas me aek riste se jud gaye the.... ham sabhi aek hi jese the... bina pariwar ke... har roj iss nark ke dard ko jel rahe the.... aur shyad isine ham sab ko achhe dost ki tarah jod diya tha...
Aaj subah har roj ki tarah aaj subah 5 baje hi yaha ka chokidar kam gunda jyada Hariya ham sab ko utha ne aaya tha... Hariya ko Munna ne yaha hamare upper watch rakhane ke liye rakha tha.... Vo bahut hi ganda aur beraham hai... muje usse dekh chid hi chadti hai.... ham sab ko subah subah bahut maar maar ke jagata hai... subah subah hi itna julm kya yahi likha tha ham sab ke nasib me... Hariya muje aur Aadi ko nahi marta tha kyu ki Munna ne mana kiya tha muje kuch kar ne se....
Lekin me bhi aakhir aek bachha hi hu na... mere samne vo doosre bachho ko marta hai... vo bhi kabhi joote se kabhi belt se aur kabhi koi chij uthake bhi fek deta hai....
Jab me chota tha tab muje samaj nahi aa raha tha ki kese sab ki madad karu lekin aaj me un bachho ke sath khada ho jata hu jise Hariya bahut jyada marne lagata hai... aur muje samne dekh vo muje gandi gandi gali bol vaha se chala jata tha....
Aaj subah bhi usne mere samne ke bed pe so rahe Kamal ko bhi buri tarah pit raha tha... mera kaleja hi sunn pad gaya... Mai kamal ko apne samne ese maar khata kese dekh sakata tha.. me fauran daud ke kamal ke aage aa gaya... esa karne se muje bhi aek belt lag gayi.... lekin muje uski koi fikr nahi thi... muje sirf apne dosto ko bachana tha...
Lekin aaj Hariya ko pata nahi kya huva tha... shayad pike aaya tha ya kisi aur ka gussa yaha nikalane aaya tha... vo muje gandi bahut gandi galiya bolne laga... mujr rona aa raha tha... lekin agar me kamal ke samne se hat gaya to ye ganda aadmi aaj use maar hi dalta.....
Aur jab me samne se nahi hata to usne muje marna shuru kar diya lekin me samne se phir bhi nahi hata...
Phir pata nahi muje kya huva mene uski belt ko pakad li aur bade tej aawaj me use kahene laga..
Mai chillate huva - "Hariya... dekh ab bahut ho gaya..... agar aek baar aur kisi bachhe ko tune mara na to mujse bura koi na hoga... samaj lena."
Hariya ese hasa jese me koi machhar hu jise vo abhi masal dega - "Kya be... bahut shanpatti kar ta hai... sale do kaudi ke chore..... tu kya muje dara raha hai..."
Mai - "Dara nahi raha hu... sach bata raha hu... agar tune aek baar aur haath uthaya to me jaakar Munna malik ko sab sach sach bata dunga ki tu yaha kya karta hai.... tu hamare sath vo ganda vala kaam karata hai vo sab bata dunga.."
Hariya ko jese khoon khaul utha ho shyad usne aaj jyada hi pike rakhi thi - "Sale kutte... kamine.... mad***.... bahut charbhi chadi hai tuje jo tu itna uchal raha hai... sale yahi thok dunga..... ****od..... Aur me kisi Munna Bunna se darta nahi samaj lena... Uski maa ki....."
Aur jese hi vo muje pakad ne aage badha pichhe se kisi ki tej aawaj aayi... mera aur uska dhyaan darwaje pe gaya... jaha pe Munna khada tha.. uski aankho me bhi shole chamak rahe the... Munna ke sath aur 2 aadmi the...
Munna - "Kyu be... sale Hariya mujse nahi darta tu.... kya be tere ko kya chad gayi hai... ma****.... Aur uske aage kya bol raha tha bol varana yahi thok dunga tuje..."
Hariya ke chahere pe jese kisine acid phenk diya ho esa safed pad gaya tha... Aur Munna ne bhi vo Hariya ki Munna se naa darne vali hi baat suni thi.... uske aage ka kuch nahi pata tha....
Hariya hadbadate huve - "Kuch bhi to nahi bola tha bhai.... aur me to sirf iss chore ko darane ke liye bola tha...."
Muje samaj aa gaya ki ab muje kya karna hai... mai phauran daud ke Munna ke pair pad gaya...
Mai - "Malik... ye muje maar raha tha... bahut buri tarah se mara hai muje..."
Munna ne aek kha jane vali najar se Hariya ki aur dekha aur phir muje apne pair se jatakte huve door phek diya... mai thodi door ja gira.. girne se mera sir sidhe undhe muh jamnin pe pataka iss se mere sir se thoda khoon bahene laga tha...
Mera khoon dekh Aadi hadbadi me utha lekin vo uth na saka aur vahi niche gir gaya...
Munna - "Kyu be.. tuje kyu maar raha tha ye..."
Hariya - "Bhai vo...."
Munna - "To chup beth kamine.... chore tu bol..."
Mai - "Malik ye Hariya na roj raat ko yaha ke aek bachhe ke sath vo galat wala ganda kaam karta hai...... aur har raat ko use marta bhi hai... aur esi dhmakiya bhi deta hai ki agar kisi se kuch kaha to maar dalega.."
Hariya aek dam se baukhalaye huve aawaj me - "Oyyy... sale.... mad****.... kya bak raha hai..." aur phir munna ki aur dekhta huva - "Bhai ye launda jooth bol raha hai... mene esa kuch nahi kiya... aap iss launda ko aap yahi thok do... ya mai thok deta hu...."
Hariya ne apni gun nikalte huve muj pe tan di lekin vo kuch karta uss se pahele Munna ke hath se goli hawa me chuti
Munna - "Mad***... sale garmi kya dikha raha hai... pahele isse pura bol lene de...." aur phir meri aur dekhte huve bola - "Bol aage.."
Mai - "Malik vo... kal raat jab me so raha tha to ye aaya muje sidha uth hi liya aur... muje khinch ke mere sath vo ganda kaam karne le jane laga.. me jese tese uss ke hatho se chutkar yaha wapas aa gaya.. aur bed ke niche chip gaya... aur isiliye aaj subah muje maar raha tha ki mai aap ko kuch bata na du...."
Munna ki aankho me ab khoon sawar tha usne aek tej najar Hariya pe dali uske liye ham sab paisa kamane ka jariya the so vo iss harakat ko kese ese hi jane de sakata tha - "Kya be... ba***.... ye sab karta hai tu.... bh****...."
Munna ki aankho me aangare dekh Hariya ke to hosh hi udd gaye the - "Bhai.... ye....ye... joo... jooth bol raha hai..."
Mai - "Malik... mai jooth nahi bol raha... aap chahe to iss Kamal aur Aadi se puch lijiye... yaa phir baki bachho se bhi puch sakate hai"
Munna aek najar Aadi pe aur Kamal pe dali jo apna sir haa me hila rahe the...
Hariya ka ab lagne laga tha ki kya hone wala tha.. usne bhi khoon karne wali najar se muje dekha aur
Hariya - "Sale... jooth bolta hai.... teri maa ki..."
Aur hariya ne muj pe apni gal taan di... lekin vo trigger dabata uss se pahele hi Munna ne apni gun ka trigger daba diya tha...
Hariya ki lash fersh pe padi huyi thi aur charo taraf sirf sannata... mera dil dhadkana band ho gaya tha... Aaj paheli baar kisi ka khoon hote dekha tha... kisi ko marte huve dekha tha..
Munna ne apne dono Aadmio ko Hariya ki lash ko bahar le jane ko bola aur khud bahar nikal gaya...
Ham sabhi bachhe bas fati fati aankho se Hariya ki lash ko bahar le jate huve dekh hi rahe the... ham sab ke dil sunn pad gaye the.... shyad me jesa anubhav kar raha tha sab log vesa hi anubhav kar rahe the...
Unn dono aasmio ke jaane ke baad bhi kamare me purra sannata chaya huva tha aur iss sannate ko sabse pahele mene toda... sabse pahele mene harakat ki aur apni jagah se uth ke apne bed ke pass aya aur Aadi jo niche gir gaya tha use wapas bed pe litaya... aur me bhi uske pass beth gaya...
Pura din dimag sunn pada huva tha... baar baar Hariya ka khoon se sana huva chahera samane aa raha tha aur uske sath dar bhi lag raha tha.. raat ko bhi subah jesa hi sannata chaya huva tha.... sab ka dil ghabara gaya tha... Aur me Aadi ko uske bed pe litake phir se apni Dyari likhane beth gaya...
Aaj ka pura din ka ye hadasa likhane ke baad muje ahesaas huva ki mera dil abhi bhi dar se bhara huva tha... akela mahesoos ho raha tha... esa lag raha tha ki iss char diwari ke bich ham ese kaid the jese bahar koi shaitaan khada pahera de raha hai aur vo kabhi bhi kisi ka khoon karane se katarayega nahi... chhar diwari ke bich band me ghor andere me ji raha tha... iss andhere me muje aaj bahut hi akela mahesoos ho raha tha jiss se dar bhi kafi haavi ho chu ka tha....
Iss Waqt muje apni Maa ki jaroorat thi
Maa.... Maa... aap kaha hai... Maa aaj muje aapki bahut yaad aa rahi hai... aap kaha ho Maa.... muje le jao na yaha se maa.....
Maa... aaj mere karan kisika khoon huva hai maa... aap sun rahi hai.... aaj me kisi ke maut ki vajah bana hu me Maa.... Maa bahut dar lag raha hai... muje bahut dar lag raha hai Maa...
Maa... lekin muje khushi hai ki aaj mene yaha ke bachho ko aek shaitan se bachha liya.... aaj ke baad vo ganda aadmo unke sath vo ganda kaam kabhi nahi kar payega... aur kabhi kisiko maar bhi nahi payega...
Maa... kya mai kisi ke maut ki bajah ban ke khud shaitan nahi ban gaya na maa?....
Me kya karu Maa... muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha... Muje apki madad chahiye maa... aapke bete ko aapki madad chahiye....
Pappa aapko pata hai aaj mere Dil ko lagata hai ki maine sahi kiya aur meri sabse achhi dost kitabo me bhi yahi likha hai ki sabki madad karni chahiye... mene sahi kiya na papa?... kya aap muje nahi bataoge ki me galat hu ya sahi?.... kya kisi ke madad ke liye kisi ki jaan lena galat hai?...
Aur agar galat hai to phir mai bhi aaj vo kitabo vala shaitan ban gaya na papa.... muje shaitan nahi banana papa muje to apni chutki ka hero banana hai... agar mai shaitan ban gaya to kya muje chutki pahechan payegi?... Papa muje shaitan nahi banana papa.... muje aap jesa banana hai...
Aap ko pata hai papa maine kitabo me padha hai ki shaitan kese hote hai abhi bhi me unn sab ko apne aaspass mahesoos kar sakata hu papa... Kya inn sab ke bich rah ke me bhi unn jese hi ban jaunga?... Kya mai bhi esa hi ban jaunga papa?..
Chutki dekh na koi sun hi nahi raha... dekh na maa aur papa bhi koi jawab nahi de rahe... tu darna mat chutki tera bhaiya shaitan nahi banega... tera bhaiya hero banega.. ha... bata raha hu.... aur na jab me tum sab ko dundh lunga na mai hero banke hi aaunga...
Tu nahi daregi na Chutki mujse... bata na... nahi daregi na... Mai vesa bhai banuga jesa kitabo me mene padha tha...
Koi baat nahi aap sab muje chahe bhul gaye ya phir mujse abhi roothe hai... mai na aap sab ko mana lunga... aur phir kabhi door na jaunga aap sabse...
Mai nahi bhulunga Maa ki aap sab muje kitna pyaar karte hai....
~ Gabbar is Back
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Wow,,, amazing update,,, bhai,,,, last me emotional update tha,,,, mja aa gya padkar,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, kya likha h,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wonderful,,,, waiting for next updateUpdate - 13
Aaj Paridhi ka dil sach me chikh raha tha... Usne khud bhi iss nayab chijo ko mahesoos kiya tha... aur jab aapke pass se ye chije door chali jaye kitna dard hota hai vo bhi mahsoos kiya tha... Dev ke 10 saal pahele wali yaad.... Aur Pavan ka yu pyaar ke liye bhukha hona.... Paridhi ke Dil ko aaj aur komal bana diya... Paridhi ki aankhe kafi der tak bighi rahi.... Paridhi ne apne mobile me apne pariwar ki photo nikali aur usse dekh ne lagi..... Apne pariwar yu hasti khilati huyi photo dekh Paridhi ke chahere pe smile aa gayi...
Aur ab Paridhi ne uss Dyari ko apne hatho me thama aur aage padhne lagi..
Ab aage....
Date - 13/07/2003
Kal ka din kuch khas gujara nahi tha.... kal raat ko Paheli baar Dyari likh kar subah subah achha mahesoos ho raha tha....
Ham sabhi bachhe yaha aapas me aek riste se jud gaye the.... ham sabhi aek hi jese the... bina pariwar ke... har roj iss nark ke dard ko jel rahe the.... aur shyad isine ham sab ko achhe dost ki tarah jod diya tha...
Aaj subah har roj ki tarah aaj subah 5 baje hi yaha ka chokidar kam gunda jyada Hariya ham sab ko utha ne aaya tha... Hariya ko Munna ne yaha hamare upper watch rakhane ke liye rakha tha.... Vo bahut hi ganda aur beraham hai... muje usse dekh chid hi chadti hai.... ham sab ko subah subah bahut maar maar ke jagata hai... subah subah hi itna julm kya yahi likha tha ham sab ke nasib me... Hariya muje aur Aadi ko nahi marta tha kyu ki Munna ne mana kiya tha muje kuch kar ne se....
Lekin me bhi aakhir aek bachha hi hu na... mere samne vo doosre bachho ko marta hai... vo bhi kabhi joote se kabhi belt se aur kabhi koi chij uthake bhi fek deta hai....
Jab me chota tha tab muje samaj nahi aa raha tha ki kese sab ki madad karu lekin aaj me un bachho ke sath khada ho jata hu jise Hariya bahut jyada marne lagata hai... aur muje samne dekh vo muje gandi gandi gali bol vaha se chala jata tha....
Aaj subah bhi usne mere samne ke bed pe so rahe Kamal ko bhi buri tarah pit raha tha... mera kaleja hi sunn pad gaya... Mai kamal ko apne samne ese maar khata kese dekh sakata tha.. me fauran daud ke kamal ke aage aa gaya... esa karne se muje bhi aek belt lag gayi.... lekin muje uski koi fikr nahi thi... muje sirf apne dosto ko bachana tha...
Lekin aaj Hariya ko pata nahi kya huva tha... shayad pike aaya tha ya kisi aur ka gussa yaha nikalane aaya tha... vo muje gandi bahut gandi galiya bolne laga... mujr rona aa raha tha... lekin agar me kamal ke samne se hat gaya to ye ganda aadmi aaj use maar hi dalta.....
Aur jab me samne se nahi hata to usne muje marna shuru kar diya lekin me samne se phir bhi nahi hata...
Phir pata nahi muje kya huva mene uski belt ko pakad li aur bade tej aawaj me use kahene laga..
Mai chillate huva - "Hariya... dekh ab bahut ho gaya..... agar aek baar aur kisi bachhe ko tune mara na to mujse bura koi na hoga... samaj lena."
Hariya ese hasa jese me koi machhar hu jise vo abhi masal dega - "Kya be... bahut shanpatti kar ta hai... sale do kaudi ke chore..... tu kya muje dara raha hai..."
Mai - "Dara nahi raha hu... sach bata raha hu... agar tune aek baar aur haath uthaya to me jaakar Munna malik ko sab sach sach bata dunga ki tu yaha kya karta hai.... tu hamare sath vo ganda vala kaam karata hai vo sab bata dunga.."
Hariya ko jese khoon khaul utha ho shyad usne aaj jyada hi pike rakhi thi - "Sale kutte... kamine.... mad***.... bahut charbhi chadi hai tuje jo tu itna uchal raha hai... sale yahi thok dunga..... ****od..... Aur me kisi Munna Bunna se darta nahi samaj lena... Uski maa ki....."
Aur jese hi vo muje pakad ne aage badha pichhe se kisi ki tej aawaj aayi... mera aur uska dhyaan darwaje pe gaya... jaha pe Munna khada tha.. uski aankho me bhi shole chamak rahe the... Munna ke sath aur 2 aadmi the...
Munna - "Kyu be... sale Hariya mujse nahi darta tu.... kya be tere ko kya chad gayi hai... ma****.... Aur uske aage kya bol raha tha bol varana yahi thok dunga tuje..."
Hariya ke chahere pe jese kisine acid phenk diya ho esa safed pad gaya tha... Aur Munna ne bhi vo Hariya ki Munna se naa darne vali hi baat suni thi.... uske aage ka kuch nahi pata tha....
Hariya hadbadate huve - "Kuch bhi to nahi bola tha bhai.... aur me to sirf iss chore ko darane ke liye bola tha...."
Muje samaj aa gaya ki ab muje kya karna hai... mai phauran daud ke Munna ke pair pad gaya...
Mai - "Malik... ye muje maar raha tha... bahut buri tarah se mara hai muje..."
Munna ne aek kha jane vali najar se Hariya ki aur dekha aur phir muje apne pair se jatakte huve door phek diya... mai thodi door ja gira.. girne se mera sir sidhe undhe muh jamnin pe pataka iss se mere sir se thoda khoon bahene laga tha...
Mera khoon dekh Aadi hadbadi me utha lekin vo uth na saka aur vahi niche gir gaya...
Munna - "Kyu be.. tuje kyu maar raha tha ye..."
Hariya - "Bhai vo...."
Munna - "To chup beth kamine.... chore tu bol..."
Mai - "Malik ye Hariya na roj raat ko yaha ke aek bachhe ke sath vo galat wala ganda kaam karta hai...... aur har raat ko use marta bhi hai... aur esi dhmakiya bhi deta hai ki agar kisi se kuch kaha to maar dalega.."
Hariya aek dam se baukhalaye huve aawaj me - "Oyyy... sale.... mad****.... kya bak raha hai..." aur phir munna ki aur dekhta huva - "Bhai ye launda jooth bol raha hai... mene esa kuch nahi kiya... aap iss launda ko aap yahi thok do... ya mai thok deta hu...."
Hariya ne apni gun nikalte huve muj pe tan di lekin vo kuch karta uss se pahele Munna ke hath se goli hawa me chuti
Munna - "Mad***... sale garmi kya dikha raha hai... pahele isse pura bol lene de...." aur phir meri aur dekhte huve bola - "Bol aage.."
Mai - "Malik vo... kal raat jab me so raha tha to ye aaya muje sidha uth hi liya aur... muje khinch ke mere sath vo ganda kaam karne le jane laga.. me jese tese uss ke hatho se chutkar yaha wapas aa gaya.. aur bed ke niche chip gaya... aur isiliye aaj subah muje maar raha tha ki mai aap ko kuch bata na du...."
Munna ki aankho me ab khoon sawar tha usne aek tej najar Hariya pe dali uske liye ham sab paisa kamane ka jariya the so vo iss harakat ko kese ese hi jane de sakata tha - "Kya be... ba***.... ye sab karta hai tu.... bh****...."
Munna ki aankho me aangare dekh Hariya ke to hosh hi udd gaye the - "Bhai.... ye....ye... joo... jooth bol raha hai..."
Mai - "Malik... mai jooth nahi bol raha... aap chahe to iss Kamal aur Aadi se puch lijiye... yaa phir baki bachho se bhi puch sakate hai"
Munna aek najar Aadi pe aur Kamal pe dali jo apna sir haa me hila rahe the...
Hariya ka ab lagne laga tha ki kya hone wala tha.. usne bhi khoon karne wali najar se muje dekha aur
Hariya - "Sale... jooth bolta hai.... teri maa ki..."
Aur hariya ne muj pe apni gal taan di... lekin vo trigger dabata uss se pahele hi Munna ne apni gun ka trigger daba diya tha...
Hariya ki lash fersh pe padi huyi thi aur charo taraf sirf sannata... mera dil dhadkana band ho gaya tha... Aaj paheli baar kisi ka khoon hote dekha tha... kisi ko marte huve dekha tha..
Munna ne apne dono Aadmio ko Hariya ki lash ko bahar le jane ko bola aur khud bahar nikal gaya...
Ham sabhi bachhe bas fati fati aankho se Hariya ki lash ko bahar le jate huve dekh hi rahe the... ham sab ke dil sunn pad gaye the.... shyad me jesa anubhav kar raha tha sab log vesa hi anubhav kar rahe the...
Unn dono aasmio ke jaane ke baad bhi kamare me purra sannata chaya huva tha aur iss sannate ko sabse pahele mene toda... sabse pahele mene harakat ki aur apni jagah se uth ke apne bed ke pass aya aur Aadi jo niche gir gaya tha use wapas bed pe litaya... aur me bhi uske pass beth gaya...
Pura din dimag sunn pada huva tha... baar baar Hariya ka khoon se sana huva chahera samane aa raha tha aur uske sath dar bhi lag raha tha.. raat ko bhi subah jesa hi sannata chaya huva tha.... sab ka dil ghabara gaya tha... Aur me Aadi ko uske bed pe litake phir se apni Dyari likhane beth gaya...
Aaj ka pura din ka ye hadasa likhane ke baad muje ahesaas huva ki mera dil abhi bhi dar se bhara huva tha... akela mahesoos ho raha tha... esa lag raha tha ki iss char diwari ke bich ham ese kaid the jese bahar koi shaitaan khada pahera de raha hai aur vo kabhi bhi kisi ka khoon karane se katarayega nahi... chhar diwari ke bich band me ghor andere me ji raha tha... iss andhere me muje aaj bahut hi akela mahesoos ho raha tha jiss se dar bhi kafi haavi ho chu ka tha....
Iss Waqt muje apni Maa ki jaroorat thi
Maa.... Maa... aap kaha hai... Maa aaj muje aapki bahut yaad aa rahi hai... aap kaha ho Maa.... muje le jao na yaha se maa.....
Maa... aaj mere karan kisika khoon huva hai maa... aap sun rahi hai.... aaj me kisi ke maut ki vajah bana hu me Maa.... Maa bahut dar lag raha hai... muje bahut dar lag raha hai Maa...
Maa... lekin muje khushi hai ki aaj mene yaha ke bachho ko aek shaitan se bachha liya.... aaj ke baad vo ganda aadmo unke sath vo ganda kaam kabhi nahi kar payega... aur kabhi kisiko maar bhi nahi payega...
Maa... kya mai kisi ke maut ki bajah ban ke khud shaitan nahi ban gaya na maa?....
Me kya karu Maa... muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha... Muje apki madad chahiye maa... aapke bete ko aapki madad chahiye....
Pappa aapko pata hai aaj mere Dil ko lagata hai ki maine sahi kiya aur meri sabse achhi dost kitabo me bhi yahi likha hai ki sabki madad karni chahiye... mene sahi kiya na papa?... kya aap muje nahi bataoge ki me galat hu ya sahi?.... kya kisi ke madad ke liye kisi ki jaan lena galat hai?...
Aur agar galat hai to phir mai bhi aaj vo kitabo vala shaitan ban gaya na papa.... muje shaitan nahi banana papa muje to apni chutki ka hero banana hai... agar mai shaitan ban gaya to kya muje chutki pahechan payegi?... Papa muje shaitan nahi banana papa.... muje aap jesa banana hai...
Aap ko pata hai papa maine kitabo me padha hai ki shaitan kese hote hai abhi bhi me unn sab ko apne aaspass mahesoos kar sakata hu papa... Kya inn sab ke bich rah ke me bhi unn jese hi ban jaunga?... Kya mai bhi esa hi ban jaunga papa?..
Chutki dekh na koi sun hi nahi raha... dekh na maa aur papa bhi koi jawab nahi de rahe... tu darna mat chutki tera bhaiya shaitan nahi banega... tera bhaiya hero banega.. ha... bata raha hu.... aur na jab me tum sab ko dundh lunga na mai hero banke hi aaunga...
Tu nahi daregi na Chutki mujse... bata na... nahi daregi na... Mai vesa bhai banuga jesa kitabo me mene padha tha...
Koi baat nahi aap sab muje chahe bhul gaye ya phir mujse abhi roothe hai... mai na aap sab ko mana lunga... aur phir kabhi door na jaunga aap sabse...
Mai nahi bhulunga Maa ki aap sab muje kitna pyaar karte hai....
~ Gabbar is Back
Black water
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Before i start reading....
I want 2 know one thing....
This is the same story...(xossip site)...or u change it....????
I want 2 know one thing....
This is the same story...(xossip site)...or u change it....????
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This story is whole creation of my mind.... So this Story is written by myself only.... Their is no other writer of this story..
So you can't find duplicate or same one at any site or in any forum...
I hope you get your answer.. ye story kahi se bhi uthai gayi nahi hai... nahi kisi ki story ko kisi tarah se change karke likha gaya hai.... ye story meri khudki likhi huyi hai...
This story is firstly written on Xforum only...
"Waqt......" written by GaBBaR is BacK
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Thanks Black water bhai.... Ummid hai aapko ye sare emotions aapki kalpano ke sath aur bhi khilakar bah rahe honge
Ankitshrivastava
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This story is whole creation of my mind.... So this Story is written by myself only.... Their is no other writer of this story..
So you can't find duplicate or same one at any site or in any forum...
I hope you get your answer.. ye story kahi se bhi uthai gayi nahi hai... nahi kisi ki story ko kisi tarah se change karke likha gaya hai.... ye story meri khudki likhi huyi hai...
This story is firstly written on Xforum only...
"Waqt......" written by GaBBaR is BacK
I think u got me wrong....
Actually..i asked it...bcoz of its title only...
Actually i read a story wid d same name ""WAQT"" on xossip...written by sunny...
I remember d whole story....
Dats why i asked u....if, this was d same story...so i dont need to read it bcoz i know things abt it...
If, this is a new 1...then only, i m going to spend time on it....ok
I think u get the actual reason behind my qus...
Y d way......keep rocking....