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My review for Usska Naam Sahana Hai
Casi bro what do I say? You have left me speechless with this wonderful story named Usska Naam Sahana hai. your last English entry was an intense story and this one also is a very intense story based on love, deep love from the part of the main protagonist who was used by her man who was a pervert in fact.
You are so good at writing tragedy also Casi bro. that's wonderful indeed. both contest entries are tragedies from you but still, they are love tragedies.
As usual, your narrative descriptions are excellent and equal to none.
The beginning of the story itself shows your capacity as a writer. The way you introduced the sound of the shoes echoing in the corridor of the jail is astounding description wise.
And the way you described the strength of the journalist, and the way Sahana is described sitting like a tired, worn out woman bending her head and neck on another side, all that shows how far you care for descriptive narrations.
Each and every paragraph has the utmost importance in your story and you have so perfectly managed all of that.
You prove to be a very qualified writer my friend. It looks like a tale written by a professional writer.
You did not forget to mention the character of the lady guard who had to only stand there still you cared to show her in the lights by giving her a few lines to mark her presence as well.
The place you mentioned how Sahana walked till the bars and placed her face in between to feel the cold air coming from outside through the corridor which she filled her lungs with is adorable. not needed at all but you prove yourself by mentioning such lines in a story.
Coming to what Sahana started relating to the journalist those were the punching parts of this story. A woman deeply in love, who loved from her soul, being betrayed by her man. How Sahana got to take deep breaths every time to tell each part of her tale is mindblowing.
I almost cried when Sahana shouted speaking out her heart the night she committed the crimes.... she exploded and took all she had kept inside all these days... she had to burst out and she did it.... that was excellent......
when I started reaching the last lines, reading that she was free and got back her job, I thought that was to be a happy ending but was shocked to read the real end.... bro, you are just awesome, you know how to really end a tragedy. Who else would have expected such an end of this story? I am sure no one. And it is very realistic. Two brothers were killed by Sahana so a small brother came to take revenge. When everything was fine for her someone was waiting to make her pay for what she did. and thus ends her story with herself. Pareeniti Agarwaal thought she did a great job by saving her but the fact is that this time the great journalist failed, as she took her out of there to get killed!!
Hats off Casi bro. and thank you very very much for this wonderful story. I find this to be to the top of all, it even beats your own English entry. I vote this number one and your English entry number two.
P.S. I have noticed you have a great preference for girls names starting with an "S" is it so bro? for example in your threads, Sanjana, Shanaya etc.. here Sahana
Casi bro what do I say? You have left me speechless with this wonderful story named Usska Naam Sahana hai. your last English entry was an intense story and this one also is a very intense story based on love, deep love from the part of the main protagonist who was used by her man who was a pervert in fact.
You are so good at writing tragedy also Casi bro. that's wonderful indeed. both contest entries are tragedies from you but still, they are love tragedies.
As usual, your narrative descriptions are excellent and equal to none.
The beginning of the story itself shows your capacity as a writer. The way you introduced the sound of the shoes echoing in the corridor of the jail is astounding description wise.
And the way you described the strength of the journalist, and the way Sahana is described sitting like a tired, worn out woman bending her head and neck on another side, all that shows how far you care for descriptive narrations.
Each and every paragraph has the utmost importance in your story and you have so perfectly managed all of that.
You prove to be a very qualified writer my friend. It looks like a tale written by a professional writer.
You did not forget to mention the character of the lady guard who had to only stand there still you cared to show her in the lights by giving her a few lines to mark her presence as well.
The place you mentioned how Sahana walked till the bars and placed her face in between to feel the cold air coming from outside through the corridor which she filled her lungs with is adorable. not needed at all but you prove yourself by mentioning such lines in a story.
Coming to what Sahana started relating to the journalist those were the punching parts of this story. A woman deeply in love, who loved from her soul, being betrayed by her man. How Sahana got to take deep breaths every time to tell each part of her tale is mindblowing.
I almost cried when Sahana shouted speaking out her heart the night she committed the crimes.... she exploded and took all she had kept inside all these days... she had to burst out and she did it.... that was excellent......
when I started reaching the last lines, reading that she was free and got back her job, I thought that was to be a happy ending but was shocked to read the real end.... bro, you are just awesome, you know how to really end a tragedy. Who else would have expected such an end of this story? I am sure no one. And it is very realistic. Two brothers were killed by Sahana so a small brother came to take revenge. When everything was fine for her someone was waiting to make her pay for what she did. and thus ends her story with herself. Pareeniti Agarwaal thought she did a great job by saving her but the fact is that this time the great journalist failed, as she took her out of there to get killed!!
Hats off Casi bro. and thank you very very much for this wonderful story. I find this to be to the top of all, it even beats your own English entry. I vote this number one and your English entry number two.
P.S. I have noticed you have a great preference for girls names starting with an "S" is it so bro? for example in your threads, Sanjana, Shanaya etc.. here Sahana
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