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UPDATE 3
Ye ishq ek tarfa tha ya vo bhi mujhe chahta tha is baat ka jawab mujhe kabhi mil nahi paya.
Par bina is sawal ke maine dil hi dil mein ek ajeeb duniya kaayam kar li thi. Mere khyaaon mein main apni poori zindagi uske saath hi bitane wali thi.
"It was destined to happen. Uske papa ka mere papa ke saath transfer, hamare ghar saath saath hona, ek hi school aur ek hi class, class mein sirf ham dono naye, itni gehri dosti, it was all destiny. He was mine from always."
Air aise hi na jaane kitne logic mein apne aapko diya karti thi. Ham ab bhi saath saath hi rehte the, saath school aate jaate, ek doosre ke ghar aate jaate aur raat ko sone se pehle ghar ke landline par chhupkar baaten par in sab mein ab ek nafasat aa gayi thi. "Tu" ki jagah "Tum" ne le li thi. Khud kuchh khaya ho ya na ho par doosre ke khaane ka khaas khyaal rehta tha aur agar na khaya ho toh zabardasti khilaya jaata tha.
Aur in sab chhoti chhoti baaton mein waqt kahan ud gaya pata hi nahi chala. Ham kabhi ek doosre se dil ki baat nahi keh paaye aur vo waqt aa gaya jab mere papa ka transfer ek doosre shehar mein ho gaya tha aur main jaanti thi ke ab mujhe usse door jana hai.
Transfer uske papa ka bhi hua tha par ek doosre shehar mein. Garmi ki chhuttiyan shuru hone wali thi aur ham dono hi ye shehar chhodkar 2 alag alag sheharon mein ja rahe the.
E-mail aur mobile phones un dino nahi hua karte the. Us waqt ek doosre ke touch mein rehne ka zariya letters aur landline phones par STD calls hi thi.
"Dekho main jaate hi apna address Sunil ko bhej doongi aur tum usko letter likh lena. Vo ham dono ke address ek naye phone numbers ek doosre ko de dega, samjhe?"
Sunil hamara class mate tha jo usi shehar ka tha aur hamesha vahin rehne wala tha.
Mujhe yaad ke us din meri 12 baje ki train thi aur main sirf usse milne ke liye apne ghar walo se ladkar us aakhri din bhi school gayi thi. Aakhri kuchh ghante uske saath guzarna chahti thi isliye use saath hi school gayi. Papa mujhe school se pick karte jahab se ham sidha railway station hi jaane wale the.
Ham dono school ke bahar hi bethe the. Vo us din periods bunk karke mere saath waqt guzaar raha tha.
"Ye kya hai?" Usne mere god mein ek rang birangi si kitaab rakhi toh maine hairan nazar se uski taraf dekhte hue puchha.
"Slam book" Usne jawab diya.
"Vo kya hota hai?" Maine sawal kiya
"Its like a journal you know, like a book that contains information on all my friends. Mere jitne bhi dost honge uki information aur vo mere baare mein kya feel karte hain vo sab. Kal hi kharidi hai. Pehle tum se hi bharva raha hoon"
Western culture ka thoda thoda prabhav un dino hamare yahan ke schools mein bhi aa raha tha aur slam book usi culture ka ek hissa thi. Aajkal toh shayad school ka bachcha bachcha slam book ke baare mein jaanta ho par un dino ye ek nayi cheez thi. Baharhal, maine apni information jaise ke naam, date of birth, favourite color, hobbies vagerah vagerah bhar di par aakhir mein ek column tha jismein mujhe ye bharna tha ke main uske baare mein kya sochti hoon. Mujhe yaad hai ke us column par maine khaas tavajjoh di thi.
AUr uske baad Papa ne railway station jaate hue mujhe school ke bahar se pick kiya aur ham sidha railway station hi chale gaye.
Par bad-kismati se meri ye prem kahani sirf itni hi rahi. Naye shehar mein pahunchte hi maine Sunil ko apna address aur phone number bhej diya par usne aisa nahi kiya. Usne Sunil ko kabhi apna naya address ya phone number nahi bheja. Bahut intezaar kiya maine ye soch kar ke shayad uske paas Sunil ki information kho gayi ho aur vo zaroor pata laga kar mujhe contact karega par aisa hua nahi.
Aur waqt ke saath dheere dheere mere uske saath dekhe saare khwab dhundhle pad gaye. Vo mera pehla pyaar tha, meri pehli aur shayad sabse gehri mohabbat.....
4. ISHQ
UPDATE 3
Ye ishq ek tarfa tha ya vo bhi mujhe chahta tha is baat ka jawab mujhe kabhi mil nahi paya.
Par bina is sawal ke maine dil hi dil mein ek ajeeb duniya kaayam kar li thi. Mere khyaaon mein main apni poori zindagi uske saath hi bitane wali thi.
"It was destined to happen. Uske papa ka mere papa ke saath transfer, hamare ghar saath saath hona, ek hi school aur ek hi class, class mein sirf ham dono naye, itni gehri dosti, it was all destiny. He was mine from always."
Air aise hi na jaane kitne logic mein apne aapko diya karti thi. Ham ab bhi saath saath hi rehte the, saath school aate jaate, ek doosre ke ghar aate jaate aur raat ko sone se pehle ghar ke landline par chhupkar baaten par in sab mein ab ek nafasat aa gayi thi. "Tu" ki jagah "Tum" ne le li thi. Khud kuchh khaya ho ya na ho par doosre ke khaane ka khaas khyaal rehta tha aur agar na khaya ho toh zabardasti khilaya jaata tha.
Aur in sab chhoti chhoti baaton mein waqt kahan ud gaya pata hi nahi chala. Ham kabhi ek doosre se dil ki baat nahi keh paaye aur vo waqt aa gaya jab mere papa ka transfer ek doosre shehar mein ho gaya tha aur main jaanti thi ke ab mujhe usse door jana hai.
Transfer uske papa ka bhi hua tha par ek doosre shehar mein. Garmi ki chhuttiyan shuru hone wali thi aur ham dono hi ye shehar chhodkar 2 alag alag sheharon mein ja rahe the.
E-mail aur mobile phones un dino nahi hua karte the. Us waqt ek doosre ke touch mein rehne ka zariya letters aur landline phones par STD calls hi thi.
"Dekho main jaate hi apna address Sunil ko bhej doongi aur tum usko letter likh lena. Vo ham dono ke address ek naye phone numbers ek doosre ko de dega, samjhe?"
Sunil hamara class mate tha jo usi shehar ka tha aur hamesha vahin rehne wala tha.
Mujhe yaad ke us din meri 12 baje ki train thi aur main sirf usse milne ke liye apne ghar walo se ladkar us aakhri din bhi school gayi thi. Aakhri kuchh ghante uske saath guzarna chahti thi isliye use saath hi school gayi. Papa mujhe school se pick karte jahab se ham sidha railway station hi jaane wale the.
Ham dono school ke bahar hi bethe the. Vo us din periods bunk karke mere saath waqt guzaar raha tha.
"Ye kya hai?" Usne mere god mein ek rang birangi si kitaab rakhi toh maine hairan nazar se uski taraf dekhte hue puchha.
"Slam book" Usne jawab diya.
"Vo kya hota hai?" Maine sawal kiya
"Its like a journal you know, like a book that contains information on all my friends. Mere jitne bhi dost honge uki information aur vo mere baare mein kya feel karte hain vo sab. Kal hi kharidi hai. Pehle tum se hi bharva raha hoon"
Western culture ka thoda thoda prabhav un dino hamare yahan ke schools mein bhi aa raha tha aur slam book usi culture ka ek hissa thi. Aajkal toh shayad school ka bachcha bachcha slam book ke baare mein jaanta ho par un dino ye ek nayi cheez thi. Baharhal, maine apni information jaise ke naam, date of birth, favourite color, hobbies vagerah vagerah bhar di par aakhir mein ek column tha jismein mujhe ye bharna tha ke main uske baare mein kya sochti hoon. Mujhe yaad hai ke us column par maine khaas tavajjoh di thi.
AUr uske baad Papa ne railway station jaate hue mujhe school ke bahar se pick kiya aur ham sidha railway station hi chale gaye.
Par bad-kismati se meri ye prem kahani sirf itni hi rahi. Naye shehar mein pahunchte hi maine Sunil ko apna address aur phone number bhej diya par usne aisa nahi kiya. Usne Sunil ko kabhi apna naya address ya phone number nahi bheja. Bahut intezaar kiya maine ye soch kar ke shayad uske paas Sunil ki information kho gayi ho aur vo zaroor pata laga kar mujhe contact karega par aisa hua nahi.
Aur waqt ke saath dheere dheere mere uske saath dekhe saare khwab dhundhle pad gaye. Vo mera pehla pyaar tha, meri pehli aur shayad sabse gehri mohabbat.....
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UPDATE 4
Aur aaj 15 saal baad mujhe kismat sirf usi shehar nahi balki usi school mein ek teacher banakar le aayi thi.
Uske baad maine college poora kiya, B.ED kiya, teacher bani aur is sabke beech mere kai boyfriends bane, pyaar bhi hua par na jaane kyun main kabhi use bhool hi nahi paayi.
Shayad isi liye kehte hain ke pehla pyaar kabhi bhulaye nahi bhoolta.
Taxi se utar kar main ek baar phir usi school ke gate ki taraf badhi jahan 15 saal pehle main roz jaati thi.
Kabhi aisa waqt tha ke main is gate se uske saath rozana guzarti thi. Us waqt kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ke main ek din teacher ban kar isi gate ko phir se cross karungi.
School mein jakar maine principal ko report kiya. Jo principal mere time par yahan the vo koi aur the. Unka kya hua ye main nahi jaanti thi par jo ab kursi par maujood the vo kaafi khushnuma aur hasmukh kism ke insaan the. Unhone khud mujhe apne saath le jakar staff room dikhaya aur school ka chakkar lagvaya. Agle din se join karne ki hidayat lekar jab main vaapis gate ki taraf chali toh mere paon jaise vahin ke vahin jam gaye.
Lohe ke gate se laga vo vahan par khada tha. Aaj 15 saal baad main use dekh rahi thi.
Nahi. Ye vo nahi hai. Maine haskar apna dimag jhatka aur gate ki taraf chali. Jo mere saamne khada tha vo 14-15 saal ka ladka tha jabki vo is waqt jahan bhi hoga, 30-31 saaal ka jawab aadmi hoga aur shayad shaadi shuda bhi hoga.
Jaise jaise main gate ke nazdeek aayi, meri aankhen hairat se phelti chali gayi. Gate par khade ladke ko main hairat se dekhti reh gayi. Meri yaad 15 saal purani thi aur uske saath saath mere dimag mein uska chehra bhi dhundhla sa pad gaya tha par mere saamne khade ladkne ne jaisa har yaad ko taza kar diya tha.
Uski shakal 100% meri 15 saal purani yaad se mel khaati thi. Vahi baalon ka style, vahi kad kaathi, vahi rangat, vahi nain naksh, vahi halki ugti hui daadhi, vahi uniform pehenne ka style aur kandhe par bilkul vaisa hi laal rang ka bag. Vo ladka uski 100% copy tha.
Main uski taraf dekhti hui gate ki taraf badhti rahi. Vo bhi aaram se khada mujhe hi dekhta raha. Ham dono ki nazren ek doosre se mili aur lock hokar reh gayi. Vo aaram se khada mujhe dekhta raha aur main uske chehre par nazar jamaye school se bahar nikal gayi.
Ham shakal hote hain ye main suna tha par kya kisi ki shakal is hadh tak kisi se mel kha sakti hai? Kaun tha ye ladka? Uska koi rishtedaar? Uska beta? Nahi uska beta itna bada nahi ho sakta?
Mujhe yaad tha ke Sunil ka ghar school ke paas hi tha. Jaane kya sochkar main taxi mein bethne ke bajaay kadam uthakar Sunil ke ghar ki taraf chal padi.
Sunil kuchh waqt tak mere letters ka jawab deta tha aur mera haal chaal puchhta rehta tha par dheere dhere mera usse bhi contact toot gaya tha. Vo isi shehar ka tha par main nahi jaanti thi ke vo ab bhi isi ghar mein rehta hai ya nahi phir bhi kuchh sochti hui main uske ghar tak ja pahunchi.
Aur kismet ki baat hi thi ke vo ab bhi isi shehar aur isi ghar mein hi rehta tha. Aur to aur vo mujhe ghar ke bahar hi mil gaya aur mujhe dekhte hi pehchan bhi gaya.
"Oh my god, you still dont know?"
Andar le jakar usne meri khaasi mehmaan nawazi ki. Chaai ka daur guzar jaane ke baad jab maine uske baare mein puchha toh Sunil ke chehre ka rang badal gaya.
"I am sorry but i thot you knew. Kaafi waqt tak toh mujhe bhi nahi pata tha aur jab pata chala toh hamare letters ka silsila khatam ho gaya tha. Vo mar chuka hai, he is no more. Un dino ek kaafi bada train haadsa hua tha, remember? He was on that train. Jahan uske Daddy ka transfer hua tha vahan jaate hue us accident mein uski poori family guzar gayi thi. Mujhe bhi kaafi waqt ke baad pata chala tha"....
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UPDATE 4
Aur aaj 15 saal baad mujhe kismat sirf usi shehar nahi balki usi school mein ek teacher banakar le aayi thi.
Uske baad maine college poora kiya, B.ED kiya, teacher bani aur is sabke beech mere kai boyfriends bane, pyaar bhi hua par na jaane kyun main kabhi use bhool hi nahi paayi.
Shayad isi liye kehte hain ke pehla pyaar kabhi bhulaye nahi bhoolta.
Taxi se utar kar main ek baar phir usi school ke gate ki taraf badhi jahan 15 saal pehle main roz jaati thi.
Kabhi aisa waqt tha ke main is gate se uske saath rozana guzarti thi. Us waqt kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ke main ek din teacher ban kar isi gate ko phir se cross karungi.
School mein jakar maine principal ko report kiya. Jo principal mere time par yahan the vo koi aur the. Unka kya hua ye main nahi jaanti thi par jo ab kursi par maujood the vo kaafi khushnuma aur hasmukh kism ke insaan the. Unhone khud mujhe apne saath le jakar staff room dikhaya aur school ka chakkar lagvaya. Agle din se join karne ki hidayat lekar jab main vaapis gate ki taraf chali toh mere paon jaise vahin ke vahin jam gaye.
Lohe ke gate se laga vo vahan par khada tha. Aaj 15 saal baad main use dekh rahi thi.
Nahi. Ye vo nahi hai. Maine haskar apna dimag jhatka aur gate ki taraf chali. Jo mere saamne khada tha vo 14-15 saal ka ladka tha jabki vo is waqt jahan bhi hoga, 30-31 saaal ka jawab aadmi hoga aur shayad shaadi shuda bhi hoga.
Jaise jaise main gate ke nazdeek aayi, meri aankhen hairat se phelti chali gayi. Gate par khade ladke ko main hairat se dekhti reh gayi. Meri yaad 15 saal purani thi aur uske saath saath mere dimag mein uska chehra bhi dhundhla sa pad gaya tha par mere saamne khade ladkne ne jaisa har yaad ko taza kar diya tha.
Uski shakal 100% meri 15 saal purani yaad se mel khaati thi. Vahi baalon ka style, vahi kad kaathi, vahi rangat, vahi nain naksh, vahi halki ugti hui daadhi, vahi uniform pehenne ka style aur kandhe par bilkul vaisa hi laal rang ka bag. Vo ladka uski 100% copy tha.
Main uski taraf dekhti hui gate ki taraf badhti rahi. Vo bhi aaram se khada mujhe hi dekhta raha. Ham dono ki nazren ek doosre se mili aur lock hokar reh gayi. Vo aaram se khada mujhe dekhta raha aur main uske chehre par nazar jamaye school se bahar nikal gayi.
Ham shakal hote hain ye main suna tha par kya kisi ki shakal is hadh tak kisi se mel kha sakti hai? Kaun tha ye ladka? Uska koi rishtedaar? Uska beta? Nahi uska beta itna bada nahi ho sakta?
Mujhe yaad tha ke Sunil ka ghar school ke paas hi tha. Jaane kya sochkar main taxi mein bethne ke bajaay kadam uthakar Sunil ke ghar ki taraf chal padi.
Sunil kuchh waqt tak mere letters ka jawab deta tha aur mera haal chaal puchhta rehta tha par dheere dhere mera usse bhi contact toot gaya tha. Vo isi shehar ka tha par main nahi jaanti thi ke vo ab bhi isi ghar mein rehta hai ya nahi phir bhi kuchh sochti hui main uske ghar tak ja pahunchi.
Aur kismet ki baat hi thi ke vo ab bhi isi shehar aur isi ghar mein hi rehta tha. Aur to aur vo mujhe ghar ke bahar hi mil gaya aur mujhe dekhte hi pehchan bhi gaya.
"Oh my god, you still dont know?"
Andar le jakar usne meri khaasi mehmaan nawazi ki. Chaai ka daur guzar jaane ke baad jab maine uske baare mein puchha toh Sunil ke chehre ka rang badal gaya.
"I am sorry but i thot you knew. Kaafi waqt tak toh mujhe bhi nahi pata tha aur jab pata chala toh hamare letters ka silsila khatam ho gaya tha. Vo mar chuka hai, he is no more. Un dino ek kaafi bada train haadsa hua tha, remember? He was on that train. Jahan uske Daddy ka transfer hua tha vahan jaate hue us accident mein uski poori family guzar gayi thi. Mujhe bhi kaafi waqt ke baad pata chala tha"....
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UPDATE 5
Mere aansoon roke nahi ruk rahe the. Sunil ke ghar se nikal kar apne ghar tak ka raasta maine paidal hi poora kiya. Mujhe hosh tak nahi tha ke mere aas paas kya ho raha hai. Bas bad-hawas si apne ghar ki taraf chalti rahi. Dimag mein hazaron baaten chal rahi thi aur kai purani baaton ke jawab ab mil rahe the.
"Isliye usne kabhi mujhe contact nahi kiya. Vo toh mere jaane ke ek hafte baad hi mar gaya tha. oH God !!!"
Meri aankhen bheegi hui thi aur mere side se guzarne wale kai log mujhe hairat se dekh rahe the ke main ro kyun rahi hoon.
Par un sabse bekhabar badhawas main apne ghar ki taraf badhti ja rahi thi.
"Toh vo ladka kaun tha?" Achanak mujhe gate par khade us ladke ka khyaal aaya. Jis tarah se vo mujhe dekh raha tha aur jis tarah se uski shakal milti hai, maine decide kar liya tha ke kal school jakar sabse pehle us ladke ka pata karungi.
Mujhe pata nahi ke main kitni der chali par aakhir main apne ghar pahunchi. Lawn se hoti hui main apne ghar ke darwaze ke paas pahunchi hi thi ke zameen par padi ek cheez ne mera dhyaan apni taraf khincha.
Mere darwaze ke theek saamne ek laal rang ki kitaab rakhi hui thi. Maine use uthakar khola toh aisa laga jaise mere pairon ke neeche se zameen khisak gayi ho.
Ye uski slam book thi jo usne mujhse tab bharvayi thi jab ham aakhri baar mile the. Pehli page par meri likhi hui baaten hi aur poori slam book mein ek sirf meri hi entry thi.
"Ye yahan kaise aayi?"
Sochte hue main hairat se uske pages hi palat rahi thi ke apne pichhe hui aahat se main palti aur vo theek mere pichhe khada tha. School uniform pehne jaise vo mujhe gate ke paas dikha tha, ab bhi usi uniform mein tha.
Vo aaj bhi bilkul nahi badla tha. Bilkul vaisa hi tha.
Balki jab maine gaur se use dekha to vo bilkul vaisa tha jaisa ke main aakhri baar use chhod kar gayi thi. Jab vo aakhri baar mujhse mila tha. Aaj usko yun dekh rahi thi toh ek ek karke saari baaten yaad aa rahi thi.
Us din uski ek anguli par band-aid thi jo aaj bhi vahin maujood thi. Uske maathe ke uper right side mein ek kharonch thi jo aaj bhi thi. Uski shirt ka ek button toota hua tha jisko lekar maine use daanta bhi tha, vo button aaj bhi toota hua tha. Usne pehli baar shave karne ki koshish ki thi aur bade hi bedhange tarike se ki thi, vahi shave aaj bhi uske chehre par thi. Us din jaldi mein vo school shoes ki jagah ghar wale brown joote pehen aaya tha aur vo aaj bhi uske pairon mein the. Vahi shirt, vahi trouser, sab kuchh vahi.
Hairat se maine use uper se neeche tak dekha aur phir slam book ki taraf dekha. Usmein meri likhi hui line aaj bhi maujood thi,
"Main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon. You are my first love and i will always love you. Tum duniya ke sabse cute ladke ho, you are the best in the world. Main nahi jaanti ke tum mujhse pyaar karte ho ya nahi, par agar karte ho toh mere liye 2 kaam karoge?
DONT EVER CHANGE AND WAIT FOR ME"
THE END
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UPDATE 5
Mere aansoon roke nahi ruk rahe the. Sunil ke ghar se nikal kar apne ghar tak ka raasta maine paidal hi poora kiya. Mujhe hosh tak nahi tha ke mere aas paas kya ho raha hai. Bas bad-hawas si apne ghar ki taraf chalti rahi. Dimag mein hazaron baaten chal rahi thi aur kai purani baaton ke jawab ab mil rahe the.
"Isliye usne kabhi mujhe contact nahi kiya. Vo toh mere jaane ke ek hafte baad hi mar gaya tha. oH God !!!"
Meri aankhen bheegi hui thi aur mere side se guzarne wale kai log mujhe hairat se dekh rahe the ke main ro kyun rahi hoon.
Par un sabse bekhabar badhawas main apne ghar ki taraf badhti ja rahi thi.
"Toh vo ladka kaun tha?" Achanak mujhe gate par khade us ladke ka khyaal aaya. Jis tarah se vo mujhe dekh raha tha aur jis tarah se uski shakal milti hai, maine decide kar liya tha ke kal school jakar sabse pehle us ladke ka pata karungi.
Mujhe pata nahi ke main kitni der chali par aakhir main apne ghar pahunchi. Lawn se hoti hui main apne ghar ke darwaze ke paas pahunchi hi thi ke zameen par padi ek cheez ne mera dhyaan apni taraf khincha.
Mere darwaze ke theek saamne ek laal rang ki kitaab rakhi hui thi. Maine use uthakar khola toh aisa laga jaise mere pairon ke neeche se zameen khisak gayi ho.
Ye uski slam book thi jo usne mujhse tab bharvayi thi jab ham aakhri baar mile the. Pehli page par meri likhi hui baaten hi aur poori slam book mein ek sirf meri hi entry thi.
"Ye yahan kaise aayi?"
Sochte hue main hairat se uske pages hi palat rahi thi ke apne pichhe hui aahat se main palti aur vo theek mere pichhe khada tha. School uniform pehne jaise vo mujhe gate ke paas dikha tha, ab bhi usi uniform mein tha.
Vo aaj bhi bilkul nahi badla tha. Bilkul vaisa hi tha.
Balki jab maine gaur se use dekha to vo bilkul vaisa tha jaisa ke main aakhri baar use chhod kar gayi thi. Jab vo aakhri baar mujhse mila tha. Aaj usko yun dekh rahi thi toh ek ek karke saari baaten yaad aa rahi thi.
Us din uski ek anguli par band-aid thi jo aaj bhi vahin maujood thi. Uske maathe ke uper right side mein ek kharonch thi jo aaj bhi thi. Uski shirt ka ek button toota hua tha jisko lekar maine use daanta bhi tha, vo button aaj bhi toota hua tha. Usne pehli baar shave karne ki koshish ki thi aur bade hi bedhange tarike se ki thi, vahi shave aaj bhi uske chehre par thi. Us din jaldi mein vo school shoes ki jagah ghar wale brown joote pehen aaya tha aur vo aaj bhi uske pairon mein the. Vahi shirt, vahi trouser, sab kuchh vahi.
Hairat se maine use uper se neeche tak dekha aur phir slam book ki taraf dekha. Usmein meri likhi hui line aaj bhi maujood thi,
"Main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon. You are my first love and i will always love you. Tum duniya ke sabse cute ladke ho, you are the best in the world. Main nahi jaanti ke tum mujhse pyaar karte ho ya nahi, par agar karte ho toh mere liye 2 kaam karoge?
DONT EVER CHANGE AND WAIT FOR ME"
THE END
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UPDATE 1
Off Season ki vajah se us chhote si jagah par tourist ke naam par shayad ek ham hi the.
"Season ke time par yahan tourist vagerah kaise rehte hain?" Maine chaai rakhne aaye hotel ke caretaker se puchha.
"Us waqt toh ye poora bhara hota hai Sahib" Vo chaai ki tray table par rakhta hua bola "Aap log abhi off season mein aaye hain isliye koi khaali pada hai"
"Aap rehne dijiye, main bana loongi" Vo chaai cups mein daalne laga toh aage badhkar meri biwi ne use rok diya.
"Kahan se aaye hain aap log?"
"Delhi se" Mere se pehle Mukesh ne jawab diya
"Season ke time par aana chahiye the aapko Sahib. Dil lagta hai yahan par" Caretaker ne jawab diya "Mela sa lag jata hai"
"Garmiyon mein?" Meri biwi Sandhya ne chaai ka ek cup meri taraf badhate hue puchha.
"Nahi Sardiyon mein" Ham baaten kar hi rahe the toh vo buddha vahin ek chair par hamare saath hi beth gaya "Vaise toh garmiyon mein bhi log aate hain yahan par, garmi se bachne ke liye, par zyada bheed December aur January ke mahine mein hoti hai"
"Us waqt toh kaafi sardi hoti hogi yahan?" Maine puchha.
"Haan full sardi hoti hai. Jamke baraf padti hai. 0 se neeche hi rehta hai temperature" Caretaker ne jawab diya.
"Phir bhi log aate hain?" Sandhya boli.
"Skii karne aate honge?" Maine guess kiya.
"Ji haan" Caretaker bola "2 mahine jamke skii hoti hai. Sab hotels bhare rehte hain. Aane se pehle advance mein booking karani padti hai varna rukne ko jagah nahi milti."
"Aur garmiyon mein? Mukesh ne puchha
"Garmi mein bhi khaasi bheed rehti hai par aap log abhi barsaat ke mausam mein aaye hain toh khaali pada hai. Abhi yahan baarish hi itni hoti hai. Roz pani barasta hai toh aise mein kahin ghoom phir bhi nahi sakte"
"Sahi baat hai" Maine haami bhari
"Vaise aap log TV wale hain kya?" Caretaker ne sawal kiya. Main samajh gaya ke usne hamara bada sa camera dekh liya hoga isliye puchh raha tha.
Main aur Mukesh dono hi National Geographic ke liye kaam karte the. Main hindustan mein paaye jaane wale alag alag kism ke insects aur bugs par ek documentary bana raha tha aur Mukesh mera camera man tha.
"Toh aap log yahan keede makode dhoondhne aaye hain?" Buddhe ne puchha toh Sandhya has padi.
"Ji haan" Maine jawab diya "Idhar Barish zyada padne ki vajah se jungle kaafi hara bhara rehta hai jiski vajah se insects ki kai prajatiyan is ilaake mein paayi jaati hain. Aur abhi barsaat ke mausam mein sab keede makode zameen se bahar aa jaate hain toh isliye dhoondhne mein bhi aasani rehti hai" Maine use samjhate hue kaha.
"Chaliye achha hai" Vo khada hote hue bola "Mere layak koi sewa ho toh zaroor bataiyega"
Main ye documentary pichhle 1 saal se bana raha tha aur ab ye final stage mein thi. Mera kaam aisa tha ke zyadatar waqt main camera uthaye yahan vahan Ghoomta rehta tha. Ab aise mein agar Sandhya ko ghar chhod kar jaya
karta toh saal ke 10 mahine vo ghar par akeli guzarti isliye main usko jahan jata apne saath hi le jata. Is tarah se mera kaam ho jata tha aur uska ghoomna phirna.
Is ilaake ke pahadi jungles mein reptiles aur insects ki kai aisi prajatiyan milti thi duniya bhar mein kahin aur nahi milti thi aur ye sab sirf barsaat ke mausam mein zameen se bahar nikalte the. Main pichhle 6 mahine se intezaar kar raha tha ke baarish shuru ho aur main yahan aakar apni documentary poori kar sakun.
Jahan ham ruke hue the vo ek bahut chhota sa gaon tha. Gharon se zyada hotels bane hue the jiski vajah yahan ke skii slopes the. 20-30 gharon ke is gaon mein is waqt hamare siwa tourits ke naam par aur koi nahi tha jo mere kaam karne ke liye bahut munasib tha. Akele mein shanti se aaram kar sakte the varna agar zyada log bhare hon toh janwar chhupe rehte hain, bahar nahi aate.
Us waqt ham hotel ke saamne aag jalaye bethe chaai pi rahe he. Saara din halki halki baarish hoti rahi thi jiski vajah se mausam mein thandak , i. Caretaker ne hamen bataya tha ke season ke time par hotel mein poora staff hota hai par off season mein vo akela hi dekh bhaal karta hai.....
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Off Season ki vajah se us chhote si jagah par tourist ke naam par shayad ek ham hi the.
"Season ke time par yahan tourist vagerah kaise rehte hain?" Maine chaai rakhne aaye hotel ke caretaker se puchha.
"Us waqt toh ye poora bhara hota hai Sahib" Vo chaai ki tray table par rakhta hua bola "Aap log abhi off season mein aaye hain isliye koi khaali pada hai"
"Aap rehne dijiye, main bana loongi" Vo chaai cups mein daalne laga toh aage badhkar meri biwi ne use rok diya.
"Kahan se aaye hain aap log?"
"Delhi se" Mere se pehle Mukesh ne jawab diya
"Season ke time par aana chahiye the aapko Sahib. Dil lagta hai yahan par" Caretaker ne jawab diya "Mela sa lag jata hai"
"Garmiyon mein?" Meri biwi Sandhya ne chaai ka ek cup meri taraf badhate hue puchha.
"Nahi Sardiyon mein" Ham baaten kar hi rahe the toh vo buddha vahin ek chair par hamare saath hi beth gaya "Vaise toh garmiyon mein bhi log aate hain yahan par, garmi se bachne ke liye, par zyada bheed December aur January ke mahine mein hoti hai"
"Us waqt toh kaafi sardi hoti hogi yahan?" Maine puchha.
"Haan full sardi hoti hai. Jamke baraf padti hai. 0 se neeche hi rehta hai temperature" Caretaker ne jawab diya.
"Phir bhi log aate hain?" Sandhya boli.
"Skii karne aate honge?" Maine guess kiya.
"Ji haan" Caretaker bola "2 mahine jamke skii hoti hai. Sab hotels bhare rehte hain. Aane se pehle advance mein booking karani padti hai varna rukne ko jagah nahi milti."
"Aur garmiyon mein? Mukesh ne puchha
"Garmi mein bhi khaasi bheed rehti hai par aap log abhi barsaat ke mausam mein aaye hain toh khaali pada hai. Abhi yahan baarish hi itni hoti hai. Roz pani barasta hai toh aise mein kahin ghoom phir bhi nahi sakte"
"Sahi baat hai" Maine haami bhari
"Vaise aap log TV wale hain kya?" Caretaker ne sawal kiya. Main samajh gaya ke usne hamara bada sa camera dekh liya hoga isliye puchh raha tha.
Main aur Mukesh dono hi National Geographic ke liye kaam karte the. Main hindustan mein paaye jaane wale alag alag kism ke insects aur bugs par ek documentary bana raha tha aur Mukesh mera camera man tha.
"Toh aap log yahan keede makode dhoondhne aaye hain?" Buddhe ne puchha toh Sandhya has padi.
"Ji haan" Maine jawab diya "Idhar Barish zyada padne ki vajah se jungle kaafi hara bhara rehta hai jiski vajah se insects ki kai prajatiyan is ilaake mein paayi jaati hain. Aur abhi barsaat ke mausam mein sab keede makode zameen se bahar aa jaate hain toh isliye dhoondhne mein bhi aasani rehti hai" Maine use samjhate hue kaha.
"Chaliye achha hai" Vo khada hote hue bola "Mere layak koi sewa ho toh zaroor bataiyega"
Main ye documentary pichhle 1 saal se bana raha tha aur ab ye final stage mein thi. Mera kaam aisa tha ke zyadatar waqt main camera uthaye yahan vahan Ghoomta rehta tha. Ab aise mein agar Sandhya ko ghar chhod kar jaya
karta toh saal ke 10 mahine vo ghar par akeli guzarti isliye main usko jahan jata apne saath hi le jata. Is tarah se mera kaam ho jata tha aur uska ghoomna phirna.
Is ilaake ke pahadi jungles mein reptiles aur insects ki kai aisi prajatiyan milti thi duniya bhar mein kahin aur nahi milti thi aur ye sab sirf barsaat ke mausam mein zameen se bahar nikalte the. Main pichhle 6 mahine se intezaar kar raha tha ke baarish shuru ho aur main yahan aakar apni documentary poori kar sakun.
Jahan ham ruke hue the vo ek bahut chhota sa gaon tha. Gharon se zyada hotels bane hue the jiski vajah yahan ke skii slopes the. 20-30 gharon ke is gaon mein is waqt hamare siwa tourits ke naam par aur koi nahi tha jo mere kaam karne ke liye bahut munasib tha. Akele mein shanti se aaram kar sakte the varna agar zyada log bhare hon toh janwar chhupe rehte hain, bahar nahi aate.
Us waqt ham hotel ke saamne aag jalaye bethe chaai pi rahe he. Saara din halki halki baarish hoti rahi thi jiski vajah se mausam mein thandak , i. Caretaker ne hamen bataya tha ke season ke time par hotel mein poora staff hota hai par off season mein vo akela hi dekh bhaal karta hai.....
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wow Bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab Brilliant update bhai ekdum jhakaas dhamakedaar mind blowing,Aapne sari baton ko bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya hai.
Aap ki mehnat aur imagination ne is Kahani Mein Char Chand laga diye hai,
Keep going
We will wait for next update
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UPDATE 2
"Ek baat bataiye Baba" Caretaker ja hi raha tha ke Sandhya bol padi "Vo udhar pahadi ke uper chhota sa mandir type jo bana hua hai, vo kya hai?"
Uske sawal karte hi Buddhe ke chehre ke bhaav badal gaye.
"Aap logon se meri vinti hai ke us taraf na jaayen" Usne rukte hue kaha.
"Kyun aisa kya hai" Maine puchha
"Dera hai vo, bhooton ka. Buri aatmayen basti hain vahan"
Main ummeed kar raha tha ke vo kisi Junglee janwar ke khatre ke baare mein kahega par uski baat sunkar meri hasi chhut padi.
"Kya?" Maine haste hue puchha
"Ji haan. Jaan ka khatra hai udhar jaane mein" Uska chehra dekhne se lag raha tha ke jo keh raha tha, us baare mein bahut serious tha.
"Kisse khatra hai? Bhoot se?" Mukesh bhi hasi mein mera saath deta hua bola.
"Hasiye Sahab" Buddha hamen dekh kar muskurata hua bola "Par aapke maanne na jhutlane se sach toh badal nahi jaayega"
"Aur sach ye hai ke vahan bhoot baste hain?" Is baar Sandhya ne puchha
"Aaj se nahi bahut pehle se. Gaon wale jaate tak nahi us taraf aur isi vajah se us pahadi par chadhne ke saare raaste bhi band hain" Vo phir se kursi lekar beth gaya.
"Sounds like an interesting story. Aur kyun nahi jaate log us taraf?" Maine puchha
"Bataya toh, Ek buri aatma ka dera hai vo"
"Abhi toh aapne kaha tha ke bhooton aur aatmaon aur ab aap keh rahe hain sirf Ek aatma basti hai vahan?" Mukesh ne baat pakdi.
"Chhodiye na sahab. Buddhe na kaha "Main kuchh bataoonga, aap log hasenge aur meri hasi udayenge"
"Arre bataiye na. Hasenge nahi wada hai" Sandhya ne kaha.
"Par aap manenge bhi toh nahi" Buddhe ne kaha
"Hamare maan lene ya inkaar karne se kya hota hai Baba. 4 din ke mehmaan hain ham yahan. Ek kahani samajh kar suna dijiye. Bethe bethe waqt hi guzar jaayega"
"Acchi baat hai" Jis tarah se buddha betha hamse baat kar raha tha usse zahir tha ke uske paas bhi karne ko kuchh aur nahi tha aur hamse baat karke uska bhi time pass ho raha tha "Bahut purani baat hai. Kai sau saal pehle"
"Kai sau saal pehle? Itna purana hai vo mandir?" Maine puchha
"Mandir nahi hai vo Sahab" Buddne ne batana shuru kiya "Ab toh khaur kuchh bhi nahi hai par pehle ghar tha"
"Kiska?"
"Koi jadugarni thi kehte hain ya chudail keh lijiye. Vahan us pahadi par us ghar mein rehti thi, gaon se alag"
"Khud se alag rehti thi ya gaon walon ne alag kar diya tha?"
"Ab kaun jaane sahib. Purani baaten hain, haqeeat mein kaisa tha kaun jaane" Buddhe ne jawab diya "Par jo bhi tha, gaon wale idhar in pahadiyon mein rehte the aur vo udhar us parli pahadi par akeli rehti thi"
"Hmmm" Maine kaha "Phir?"
"Gaon ka koi usse baat nahi karta tha, sab darte the usse. Itna darte the ke us pahadi ke aas paas koi bhi koi nahi jata tha"
"Aisa kyun? Itna darr kisliye?" Sandha boli
"Ab ye toh nahi pata ke usne aisa kya kiya tha ke log darne lage par kehte hain ke koi din ki roshni mein bhi us taraf nahi jata tha. Log maante the ke vo koi kala jadu kar degi jisse unke maveshi mar jaayenge, ya unki fasal sookh jaayegi vagerah vagerah"
"Hmmmmm. Phir?" Maine puchha
"Aur phir ek baar aisa hua ke gaon se ladkiyan gayab honi shuri ho gayi. Jawan ladkiyan, zyadatar kam umar ki bachchiyan" Buddha kehta raha....
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UPDATE 2
"Ek baat bataiye Baba" Caretaker ja hi raha tha ke Sandhya bol padi "Vo udhar pahadi ke uper chhota sa mandir type jo bana hua hai, vo kya hai?"
Uske sawal karte hi Buddhe ke chehre ke bhaav badal gaye.
"Aap logon se meri vinti hai ke us taraf na jaayen" Usne rukte hue kaha.
"Kyun aisa kya hai" Maine puchha
"Dera hai vo, bhooton ka. Buri aatmayen basti hain vahan"
Main ummeed kar raha tha ke vo kisi Junglee janwar ke khatre ke baare mein kahega par uski baat sunkar meri hasi chhut padi.
"Kya?" Maine haste hue puchha
"Ji haan. Jaan ka khatra hai udhar jaane mein" Uska chehra dekhne se lag raha tha ke jo keh raha tha, us baare mein bahut serious tha.
"Kisse khatra hai? Bhoot se?" Mukesh bhi hasi mein mera saath deta hua bola.
"Hasiye Sahab" Buddha hamen dekh kar muskurata hua bola "Par aapke maanne na jhutlane se sach toh badal nahi jaayega"
"Aur sach ye hai ke vahan bhoot baste hain?" Is baar Sandhya ne puchha
"Aaj se nahi bahut pehle se. Gaon wale jaate tak nahi us taraf aur isi vajah se us pahadi par chadhne ke saare raaste bhi band hain" Vo phir se kursi lekar beth gaya.
"Sounds like an interesting story. Aur kyun nahi jaate log us taraf?" Maine puchha
"Bataya toh, Ek buri aatma ka dera hai vo"
"Abhi toh aapne kaha tha ke bhooton aur aatmaon aur ab aap keh rahe hain sirf Ek aatma basti hai vahan?" Mukesh ne baat pakdi.
"Chhodiye na sahab. Buddhe na kaha "Main kuchh bataoonga, aap log hasenge aur meri hasi udayenge"
"Arre bataiye na. Hasenge nahi wada hai" Sandhya ne kaha.
"Par aap manenge bhi toh nahi" Buddhe ne kaha
"Hamare maan lene ya inkaar karne se kya hota hai Baba. 4 din ke mehmaan hain ham yahan. Ek kahani samajh kar suna dijiye. Bethe bethe waqt hi guzar jaayega"
"Acchi baat hai" Jis tarah se buddha betha hamse baat kar raha tha usse zahir tha ke uske paas bhi karne ko kuchh aur nahi tha aur hamse baat karke uska bhi time pass ho raha tha "Bahut purani baat hai. Kai sau saal pehle"
"Kai sau saal pehle? Itna purana hai vo mandir?" Maine puchha
"Mandir nahi hai vo Sahab" Buddne ne batana shuru kiya "Ab toh khaur kuchh bhi nahi hai par pehle ghar tha"
"Kiska?"
"Koi jadugarni thi kehte hain ya chudail keh lijiye. Vahan us pahadi par us ghar mein rehti thi, gaon se alag"
"Khud se alag rehti thi ya gaon walon ne alag kar diya tha?"
"Ab kaun jaane sahib. Purani baaten hain, haqeeat mein kaisa tha kaun jaane" Buddhe ne jawab diya "Par jo bhi tha, gaon wale idhar in pahadiyon mein rehte the aur vo udhar us parli pahadi par akeli rehti thi"
"Hmmm" Maine kaha "Phir?"
"Gaon ka koi usse baat nahi karta tha, sab darte the usse. Itna darte the ke us pahadi ke aas paas koi bhi koi nahi jata tha"
"Aisa kyun? Itna darr kisliye?" Sandha boli
"Ab ye toh nahi pata ke usne aisa kya kiya tha ke log darne lage par kehte hain ke koi din ki roshni mein bhi us taraf nahi jata tha. Log maante the ke vo koi kala jadu kar degi jisse unke maveshi mar jaayenge, ya unki fasal sookh jaayegi vagerah vagerah"
"Hmmmmm. Phir?" Maine puchha
"Aur phir ek baar aisa hua ke gaon se ladkiyan gayab honi shuri ho gayi. Jawan ladkiyan, zyadatar kam umar ki bachchiyan" Buddha kehta raha....
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"Gayab bole toh?" Mukesh ne sawal kiya
"Gayab matlab subah ghar se nikli toh phir aayi hi nahi. Ya raat ko ghar mein sabke saath soyi par subah gayab mili. Aise ek ek karke kai ladkiyan gaon se gayab hui. Poore gaon mein halla mach gaya. Bahut talash hui par kisi bachchi ka koi naam nishan nahi mila"
"Interesting. Phir?"
"Phir jaisa ke hota hai, jaan par bane toh cheeti bhi palat kar kaatne ko aati hai. Aisa hi gaon walo ke saath hua. Jab bachchiyon ka koi pata nahi chala toh zahir tha ke sabka shak kis taraf jata"
"Us jadugarni ki taraf" sandhya ne kaha.
"Bilkul" Caretaker ne haami bhari "Poore gaon mein baaten phelne lagi ke in sabke pichhe uska hi haath hai. Ab vo toh gaon mein aati nahi thi isliye gaon ke sab log himmat karke ek din uske dere pe gaye, puchhne ke liye"
"Phir?
"Vahan pahunche toh nazar kuchh aur hi dekhne ko mila jisse sab hairan reh gaye.
"Kya dekha?" Maine puchha
"Poore gaon ko pata tha ke vo dikhne mein bahut badsurat thi aur kaafi buddhi bhi thi. Jis kisi ne use dekha tha, use dekh kar darr hi gaya tha. Par us din jab gaon wale vahan pahunche, toh jo saamne aayi vo ek haseen aurat thi"
"Thats interesting. Phir kya hua?"
"Gaon wale hairan reh gaye. Khair, jo puchne vahan gaye the vo puchha par usne kisi bhi ladki ki koi bhi jaankari hone se inkaar kar diya. Ab uske munh par use lalkarne ki kisi ki himmat toh thi nahi isliye uska jawab sunkar vaapis aa gaye par dil mein shak beth gaye the. Gaon se jawab bachchiyan gayab ho rahi thi aur dere wali
jadugarni buddhi badsurat se jawan khoobsurat ho rahi thi. Gaon walo ne 2 aur 2 mila kar 4 banaya aur yahan ke Raja ke yahan shikayat kar di"
"Phir Raja aaya?" Maine puchha
"Nahi vo toh nahi aaya par usne apne kuchh sipahi bheje. Vo log us jadugarni ke dere pe gaye par kuchh bhi nahi mila. Khaali haath vaapis aa gaye"
"Vo bach gayi?"
"Haan us waqt toh kuchh mila nahi isliye bach hi gayi par gaon walon ka shak sahi nikla aur ek din use range haath pakad liya"
"Vo kaise?" Ham teeno bade dhyaaan se bethe uski kahani ko kaan laga kar sun rahe the.
"Ab hua yoon ke us chudail ka sidhe paon ka angutha nahi tha" Buddhe na kaha.
"Matlab?"
"Matlab uske daayen paon mein sirf 4 anguliyan thi, angutha nahi tha" Caretaker ne jawab diya.
"Kyun?" Sandhya ne bevakoofana sa sawal kiya.
"Ab kyun kise pata. Kat kata gayi hogi" Buddhe ne haath hilate hue kaha.
"Phir?"
"Yaad hai purane zamane mein ghar ki deewaron par ya toh geeli mitti phirate the ya gobar lep diya karte the?"
"Haan purane zamane mein kyun ab bhi dehaat mein bahut gaon hain jahan aisa karte hain" Mukesh beech mein bol pada.
"Haan toh hua yoon ke ek ghar se phir ek bachchi ek raat gayab ho gayi. Raat soyi apne bistar par par subah nahi mili. Gaon mein halla mach gaya. Poora gaon jiski bachchi khoyi thi uske yahan ikattha ho gaya. Kismet se usne sone se pehle raat ko apne ghar ki deewaron aur zameen par gobar ya mitti kisi ek cheez ka lep lagaya tha."
"Ok" Maine kaha "Usse kya hua?"
"Hua ye ke lep karne ne baad ghar ke log apne apne bistar mein ghus gaye taaki jab subah tak uthen toh lep sookh jaaye. Chala phir koi nahi. Par subah neeche geeli mittin mein kisi ke pairon ke nishan the" Buddhe ne samjhaya.
"Let me guess" Mukesh beech mein bola "Un pairon ke nishan mein daayen paon ke anguthe ka nishan nahi tha?"....
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UPDATE 3
"Gayab bole toh?" Mukesh ne sawal kiya
"Gayab matlab subah ghar se nikli toh phir aayi hi nahi. Ya raat ko ghar mein sabke saath soyi par subah gayab mili. Aise ek ek karke kai ladkiyan gaon se gayab hui. Poore gaon mein halla mach gaya. Bahut talash hui par kisi bachchi ka koi naam nishan nahi mila"
"Interesting. Phir?"
"Phir jaisa ke hota hai, jaan par bane toh cheeti bhi palat kar kaatne ko aati hai. Aisa hi gaon walo ke saath hua. Jab bachchiyon ka koi pata nahi chala toh zahir tha ke sabka shak kis taraf jata"
"Us jadugarni ki taraf" sandhya ne kaha.
"Bilkul" Caretaker ne haami bhari "Poore gaon mein baaten phelne lagi ke in sabke pichhe uska hi haath hai. Ab vo toh gaon mein aati nahi thi isliye gaon ke sab log himmat karke ek din uske dere pe gaye, puchhne ke liye"
"Phir?
"Vahan pahunche toh nazar kuchh aur hi dekhne ko mila jisse sab hairan reh gaye.
"Kya dekha?" Maine puchha
"Poore gaon ko pata tha ke vo dikhne mein bahut badsurat thi aur kaafi buddhi bhi thi. Jis kisi ne use dekha tha, use dekh kar darr hi gaya tha. Par us din jab gaon wale vahan pahunche, toh jo saamne aayi vo ek haseen aurat thi"
"Thats interesting. Phir kya hua?"
"Gaon wale hairan reh gaye. Khair, jo puchne vahan gaye the vo puchha par usne kisi bhi ladki ki koi bhi jaankari hone se inkaar kar diya. Ab uske munh par use lalkarne ki kisi ki himmat toh thi nahi isliye uska jawab sunkar vaapis aa gaye par dil mein shak beth gaye the. Gaon se jawab bachchiyan gayab ho rahi thi aur dere wali
jadugarni buddhi badsurat se jawan khoobsurat ho rahi thi. Gaon walo ne 2 aur 2 mila kar 4 banaya aur yahan ke Raja ke yahan shikayat kar di"
"Phir Raja aaya?" Maine puchha
"Nahi vo toh nahi aaya par usne apne kuchh sipahi bheje. Vo log us jadugarni ke dere pe gaye par kuchh bhi nahi mila. Khaali haath vaapis aa gaye"
"Vo bach gayi?"
"Haan us waqt toh kuchh mila nahi isliye bach hi gayi par gaon walon ka shak sahi nikla aur ek din use range haath pakad liya"
"Vo kaise?" Ham teeno bade dhyaaan se bethe uski kahani ko kaan laga kar sun rahe the.
"Ab hua yoon ke us chudail ka sidhe paon ka angutha nahi tha" Buddhe na kaha.
"Matlab?"
"Matlab uske daayen paon mein sirf 4 anguliyan thi, angutha nahi tha" Caretaker ne jawab diya.
"Kyun?" Sandhya ne bevakoofana sa sawal kiya.
"Ab kyun kise pata. Kat kata gayi hogi" Buddhe ne haath hilate hue kaha.
"Phir?"
"Yaad hai purane zamane mein ghar ki deewaron par ya toh geeli mitti phirate the ya gobar lep diya karte the?"
"Haan purane zamane mein kyun ab bhi dehaat mein bahut gaon hain jahan aisa karte hain" Mukesh beech mein bol pada.
"Haan toh hua yoon ke ek ghar se phir ek bachchi ek raat gayab ho gayi. Raat soyi apne bistar par par subah nahi mili. Gaon mein halla mach gaya. Poora gaon jiski bachchi khoyi thi uske yahan ikattha ho gaya. Kismet se usne sone se pehle raat ko apne ghar ki deewaron aur zameen par gobar ya mitti kisi ek cheez ka lep lagaya tha."
"Ok" Maine kaha "Usse kya hua?"
"Hua ye ke lep karne ne baad ghar ke log apne apne bistar mein ghus gaye taaki jab subah tak uthen toh lep sookh jaaye. Chala phir koi nahi. Par subah neeche geeli mittin mein kisi ke pairon ke nishan the" Buddhe ne samjhaya.
"Let me guess" Mukesh beech mein bola "Un pairon ke nishan mein daayen paon ke anguthe ka nishan nahi tha?"....
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5. DERA
UPDATE 4
"Bilkul" Buddhe ne kaha "Gaon wale samajh gaye ke raat mein aakar Dere wali Chudail bachchi ko le gayi"
"Interesting. Phir?"
"Phir kya tha. Jahan pehle log dare sehme rehte the, vahin jab apne ghar ki bachchiyon par baat aayi toh sab bhadak gaye. Laathiyan aur talwaren uthakar chadh gaye pahadi par"
"Mili vo?" Sandhya ne puchha
"Kaun bachchi?" Buddhe ne puchha
"Haan. Aur vo jaadugarni"
"Haan dono hi mile. Ek zinda aur ek murda. Vo Dere wali jaadugarni zinda mili aur bachchi murda"
"Jaadugarni ko gaon walo ne maar diya hoga" Maine kaha
"Haan gaon mein lakar jala diya zinda. Baad mein jab ek baar phir uske dere par jakar talashi li gayi toh baaki ki ladkiyan bhi uske ghar ke picche neeche zameen mein dafan mili. Aur jaante hain sabse hairat wali baat kya thi?"
"Kya?" Sandhya ne puchha
"Har bachchi ke shareer se koi na koi ang gayab tha. Kisi ki aankh, kisi ke daant toh kisi ka kuchh" Buddhe ne bataya.
"Hmmm. Toh budhiya bachchiyon ko markar khud jawan hoti ja rahi thi?" Maine puchha
"Haan kehte hain ke vo har ladki ke shareer se koi ang nikal kar apne shareer mein laga leti thi ya us ang ko aag mein jala kar kala jaadu karti thi jisse uske apne shareer ka vahi ang jawan ho jata tha. Jo kuchh bhi tha, gaon walon ne us raat usko zinda jala kar maar diya"
"Toh ab logon ka maanna hai ke uska bhoot basta hai vahan?"
"Ji haan. Kehte hain ke vo marne se pehle keh gayi thi ke vo hamesha hamesha yahin rahegi aur usko koi nahi maar sakta. Aur log maante hain ke aaj bhi vo pahadi par bana ghar uski aatma ka dera hai. Vo ab bhi rehti hai vahin" Buddhe ne bataya.
"Aur aap maante hain ye sab?" Sandhya ne sawal kiya.
"Bibi ji. Main apne saamne saamne kam se kam 10 logon ko marte dekh chuka hoon aur sabki laash us pahadi ke aas paas hi mili hai" Buddha bola
"Aur aapko lagta hai ke ye us aatma ka kaam hai?"
"Haan bilkul" Budhhe ne haami bhari "Jab vo chudail zinda thi toh logon ke shareer ke ang nikalti thi. Jiske shareer ka jo hissa pasand aa jaaye vo apne mein laga leti thi. Kisi ke baal pasand aaye toh baal le liye, kisi ki aankh pasand aayi toh aankh le li vagerah vagerah. Aur vo ab bhi vaisa hi kar rahi hai. Us pahadi par agar koi
jata hai toh vo ab us insaan ki aatma ko nikal kar apne paas qaid rakhti hai"
"And let me guess" Mukesh ne kaha "Aap jo ye 10 maut apne saamne ki baa rahe hain, inke shareer ka bhi koi hissa gayab tha?"
"Ji haan. Ab vo toh mar chuki hai, isliye doosron ke shareer ke hisso se apne liye shareer bana kar usmein rehti hai manhoos"
Uske baad thodi der ke liye khamoshi chha gayi. Buddha kahani khatam karke shayad hamare agle sawal ka intezaar kar raha tha aur ham intezaar kar rahe the ke vo jaaye aur ham uski hasi uda saken.
"Isliye ab hamne vo pahadi band kar rakhi hai" Thodi der baad buddha bola "Vo khadi pahadi hai isliye kahin aur se toh uspar koi chadh hi nahi sakta. Uper tak jaane ke liye purani si tooti phooti sidhiyan bani hain jispar 12 mahine ham pehra laga kar rakhte hain ke koi chadhe nahi. Season ke time par tourist logon ko udhar jaane se rokte hain. Sidhiyon se thoda door ek aadmi hamesha rehta hai jo kisi ko bhi udhar jaane se rokta hai"
"Par aaj hamen toh koi dikhai nahi diya" Maine kaha.
"Filhal tourish koi hai nahi isliye aadmi nahi hoga aur gaon wale toh vaise hi nahi jaate us taraf" Buddhe ne kaha aur uthkar chal diya.
"Ek baat bataiye sahab, aap us pahadi ki taraf toh nahi gaye na aaj?" jaate jaate usne hamse puchha.
"Nahi" Maine saaf jhooth bol diya. Sach toh ye tha ke ham us pahad kya uske uper bane dere tak chadh kar aaye the.
"Aur meharbani karke jaaiyega bhi mat" Buddhe ne hamse vinti ki aur chala gaya.....
5. DERA
UPDATE 4
"Bilkul" Buddhe ne kaha "Gaon wale samajh gaye ke raat mein aakar Dere wali Chudail bachchi ko le gayi"
"Interesting. Phir?"
"Phir kya tha. Jahan pehle log dare sehme rehte the, vahin jab apne ghar ki bachchiyon par baat aayi toh sab bhadak gaye. Laathiyan aur talwaren uthakar chadh gaye pahadi par"
"Mili vo?" Sandhya ne puchha
"Kaun bachchi?" Buddhe ne puchha
"Haan. Aur vo jaadugarni"
"Haan dono hi mile. Ek zinda aur ek murda. Vo Dere wali jaadugarni zinda mili aur bachchi murda"
"Jaadugarni ko gaon walo ne maar diya hoga" Maine kaha
"Haan gaon mein lakar jala diya zinda. Baad mein jab ek baar phir uske dere par jakar talashi li gayi toh baaki ki ladkiyan bhi uske ghar ke picche neeche zameen mein dafan mili. Aur jaante hain sabse hairat wali baat kya thi?"
"Kya?" Sandhya ne puchha
"Har bachchi ke shareer se koi na koi ang gayab tha. Kisi ki aankh, kisi ke daant toh kisi ka kuchh" Buddhe ne bataya.
"Hmmm. Toh budhiya bachchiyon ko markar khud jawan hoti ja rahi thi?" Maine puchha
"Haan kehte hain ke vo har ladki ke shareer se koi ang nikal kar apne shareer mein laga leti thi ya us ang ko aag mein jala kar kala jaadu karti thi jisse uske apne shareer ka vahi ang jawan ho jata tha. Jo kuchh bhi tha, gaon walon ne us raat usko zinda jala kar maar diya"
"Toh ab logon ka maanna hai ke uska bhoot basta hai vahan?"
"Ji haan. Kehte hain ke vo marne se pehle keh gayi thi ke vo hamesha hamesha yahin rahegi aur usko koi nahi maar sakta. Aur log maante hain ke aaj bhi vo pahadi par bana ghar uski aatma ka dera hai. Vo ab bhi rehti hai vahin" Buddhe ne bataya.
"Aur aap maante hain ye sab?" Sandhya ne sawal kiya.
"Bibi ji. Main apne saamne saamne kam se kam 10 logon ko marte dekh chuka hoon aur sabki laash us pahadi ke aas paas hi mili hai" Buddha bola
"Aur aapko lagta hai ke ye us aatma ka kaam hai?"
"Haan bilkul" Budhhe ne haami bhari "Jab vo chudail zinda thi toh logon ke shareer ke ang nikalti thi. Jiske shareer ka jo hissa pasand aa jaaye vo apne mein laga leti thi. Kisi ke baal pasand aaye toh baal le liye, kisi ki aankh pasand aayi toh aankh le li vagerah vagerah. Aur vo ab bhi vaisa hi kar rahi hai. Us pahadi par agar koi
jata hai toh vo ab us insaan ki aatma ko nikal kar apne paas qaid rakhti hai"
"And let me guess" Mukesh ne kaha "Aap jo ye 10 maut apne saamne ki baa rahe hain, inke shareer ka bhi koi hissa gayab tha?"
"Ji haan. Ab vo toh mar chuki hai, isliye doosron ke shareer ke hisso se apne liye shareer bana kar usmein rehti hai manhoos"
Uske baad thodi der ke liye khamoshi chha gayi. Buddha kahani khatam karke shayad hamare agle sawal ka intezaar kar raha tha aur ham intezaar kar rahe the ke vo jaaye aur ham uski hasi uda saken.
"Isliye ab hamne vo pahadi band kar rakhi hai" Thodi der baad buddha bola "Vo khadi pahadi hai isliye kahin aur se toh uspar koi chadh hi nahi sakta. Uper tak jaane ke liye purani si tooti phooti sidhiyan bani hain jispar 12 mahine ham pehra laga kar rakhte hain ke koi chadhe nahi. Season ke time par tourist logon ko udhar jaane se rokte hain. Sidhiyon se thoda door ek aadmi hamesha rehta hai jo kisi ko bhi udhar jaane se rokta hai"
"Par aaj hamen toh koi dikhai nahi diya" Maine kaha.
"Filhal tourish koi hai nahi isliye aadmi nahi hoga aur gaon wale toh vaise hi nahi jaate us taraf" Buddhe ne kaha aur uthkar chal diya.
"Ek baat bataiye sahab, aap us pahadi ki taraf toh nahi gaye na aaj?" jaate jaate usne hamse puchha.
"Nahi" Maine saaf jhooth bol diya. Sach toh ye tha ke ham us pahad kya uske uper bane dere tak chadh kar aaye the.
"Aur meharbani karke jaaiyega bhi mat" Buddhe ne hamse vinti ki aur chala gaya.....
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