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Index
Chapter 1 :Ulajhte Raaste
Chapter 1 :Ulajhte Raaste
Chapter 2: Wo Ladki Kaun Hai?
Chapter 3: Shayad
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Romance Zaroori To Nahi...
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Baat bas itni hai Rahul ke hum sab kahani me unhi kirdaron se mil chuke hai jo kisi na kisi tarah Smriti se juda hua hai... Isiliye unki nazron me aur khud apni nazron me Kabir gunehgaar hai... Jo aksar rishta tootne par hota hai...
Kabhi Kair ke kisi kareebi se milna hua to unhe bhi zeher ugalne ka poora mauka diya jayega
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na na yeh wala toh hamara chomu hain... baakio ka pata nahin.... agar aap aisa bol rahi hain toh hoga...To fir kya apke hisab se afsaron ki list me bhare pade sabhi IIT wale bhi chomu hai? Kya yahi ray hai apki un sab ke baare me?
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readers se hi panga
Naina
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Be it smriti , kabir, or anyone else….whoever it is… your writings reveal their mood through their words.
Every update, whether of a thousand words or two thousand words, seems to be left short. The mind does not fill itself. Think! Had it been bigger it would have been more fun.
La_Mujer ma'am has no answer in creating an atmosphere and then tying the knot through dialogues.
Realistic emotion which is a very difficult subject - whether in writing or acting in a movie - But you're expert in this matter.. Keeping every aspect in mind, you are advancing the story. Along with romance, thrill and suspense also have a unique confluence in story. Which is absolutely original.
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
Every update, whether of a thousand words or two thousand words, seems to be left short. The mind does not fill itself. Think! Had it been bigger it would have been more fun.
La_Mujer ma'am has no answer in creating an atmosphere and then tying the knot through dialogues.
Realistic emotion which is a very difficult subject - whether in writing or acting in a movie - But you're expert in this matter.. Keeping every aspect in mind, you are advancing the story. Along with romance, thrill and suspense also have a unique confluence in story. Which is absolutely original.
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
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Kya app bhi subhe subhe ye plastic ke hathiyar leke aa gai ladai karne ... Subhe subhe surya namaskar kijiye kuch yoga vagerha kijiye Pooja path kijiye ...readers se hi panga
Ye adat galat hai mari mari ladai jhagade ki kya milega isse ..kuch nhi jitna nuksan hamara hoga confirm utna apka bhi hoga
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Jaiye check kar lijiye . revo posted ju ki story pe
Janbuj kar agg me pani ki jagah petrol na daliye
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It is the law of nature that the person who is more happy has to be more unhappy in the future.
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