Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[motaalund]

Maza aa gaya. Ye masti bhari feelings koi aur nahi de sakta. Aap great ho. Amezing.

और ऐसे दिलकश नज़ारे... आपके सिवा...

 

[motaalund]

Kawari kanya ke sar agar bhouji ka hath ho to kahena hi kya. Vo solva sawan vali zalak mahesus hui. Bahot maza aaya.

उम्र हीं कुछ ऐसी है...

 

[motaalund]

Sikh gai he pyari chhinariya Komalji. Ganne ka ras nikal kar pina. Ye chhed chhad. Ye masti bhara pyara mazak maza aa gaya. Amezing.

गन्ना पेरने का मशीन सारे रस निचोड़ लेगी...

 

[motaalund]

Thanks so much for the nice words and encouragement. Phagun ke din chaar was a novel in more ways than one, it included many Ras, apart from being erotic it was a thriller, there were sad scenes, who made people's eyes teary, and it covered not only the four cities of India but also moved beyond borders of India, looked into economics and sociology of terror.

Your appreciation helps me a lot. JKG will certainly cross that number. Thanks again aur aate jate raiye apki best wishes and comments bahoot support karte hain.

लेकिन अंत में काशी के कोतवाल ने सब ठीक कर दिया...

 

[paarth milf lover]

Wow Madam..phagun ke din exceeding 7 Lac words...awesome!! You truly are brilliant. The one I was talking about was about JKG..which I thought would have easily crossed 4 Lac words since it is also a very long running story. Phagun..7 L words is an eye opener for me though..
Shows the power of your story and writing ability. Great and Hearty Congratulations once again!!
May you keep flying high and reach for the stars..
komaalrani

ऐसी शुद्ध हिंदी में जबरदस्त कहानी लिखने के लिए सेक्स स्टोरी का लेडी बुकर पुरस्कार तो कोमल जी को ही मिलना चाहिए।।

 

[komaalrani]

Thanks a lot dear statistically helpful favorite frnd. Ye sach hai ki me apni mentor Komal didi ki prerna se likhti hu.
Lekin mujh nimani Raji ko gyanwan Komal mam ki shreni mein rakhna "diye ko surya ke sath compare karne wali baat hai".

main aapki baat se thodi sahmat hun thodi asahamt.

I agree that we can't be in the same group, your story in a year is crossing 2.5 million views while this one is still well short of 2 million even in three years. but it is not only my story i feel no story can match fantabulousness of your story. and let me share i feel more happiness in the success of your story, than you may be feeling as i feel that your story is also my story. so be warned. at least 5 million views for your story, that is my goal. and you must cross it.

but ek shreni men ham dono hain, pakki saheli vaali

 

[motaalund]

Ekdam aur ye posts non-erotic hain, coaching ke issues ko discuss karti isliye physics ki do popular lekin tough books ka jikra hai, online coaching aur uski intensity ka jikra hai,... aapko pasand aaya so many thanks

This depth looks realistic and your caliber to craft a scene with such a nostalgic depiction.

 

[motaalund]

thanks so much for nice words and appreciation

कुंवारी ननद के सिर नहीं चूत पर भौजाई का हाथ...

 

[motaalund]

सारे k सारे अपडेट बहुत ही शानदार है।।।

K की प्रधानता...
जैसे कोमल के कर कमलों का कमाल.. कुछ करामात और कुछ करिश्मा...

 

[motaalund]

Aakhir kar guddi Rani ne sunehari sharbat pi hi Li wah wah,ab to roz morning tea piyegi.

अरमान पूरे हुए...