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Erotica मजा पहली होली का ससुराल में

Shetan

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Iska karan hai ki vo shaayd aapki vidha men suit bhi nahi karegaa, aapki story Horror hai Thriiller hain to uska kam thoda Dar, thoda Rahsaya, thoda romanch paida karana hai , darshkon ko baandh ke rakhna hai aur usmen aapko jabrdst safalata mili hai . Horror category men aap ki dono stories top pe hain , ... aur meri stories men keval shringaar ras hai , sex aur pyar hai, isliye grip thodi kam hoti hai aur aap jaise kuch rsiya log jinge shringaar men , pyaar aur erotic dono pasand hai vaise log pasand karte hai

to meri stories ke viewers bhale hi jayda na hon lekin jinhe acchi lagti hai unhe bahoot acchi lagati hai

ab koyi Sania Mirza hai to koyi Sandhu ya Mary kom,..sabke khel alag , field alag bahle hi sab sports vaali hain
Ha bat to aap ki sahi he.vese mene udhar sirf ek main leed hiroin ko audltry sex ke sath berahemi se murder karte dikhaya he.
Par me janti this ki us manch par romance nahi chalega. Is lie mene baki ki 2 hiroin ko Husband ke sath dirty fantasy sex dikhaya he.

Ek or sex dikhaya he jisme thoda love story dikhai jisme ek midget ke sath ek police wali ka love or sex ke sath marriage bhi dikhaya he.

Par jo aap ne crieat kiya vo nahi dikha pai. Na mohe rang de ka love romance bhi nahi dikha pai. Na vo lady co coldness peda kar pai. Halaki kahani meri vo rok rakhi he. Fir bhi 14 lakh views par kar gae. Hast 15 pure hone vale he. Vaha bhi tesre no pe hu. or pura karte hue sayad no 1 ya 2 tak pahoch sakti he.

Par jo aap ki kahani me he vo feelings me peda bhi nahi kar pai. Aap ki bat se sahemat hu. Sayad new story ilaj me kuchh kar pau. Par story to vo bhi romantic nahi he.
 
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Babhoot bahoot shukriya, thanks lekin story kaisi lagi ye to bataaiye na please
Isme bataane ne ki baat he kya bhauth hein sundar kamuk aur aur erotic kahani likhi hain aapne jisse sunke kisi ka bhi maan moh le aap baakiyo ka pata nahi pr mujhe toh aapki saari kahani bhauth bhauth mast lagi aur aapke kahani likhne ka ev pardarshit karne ka style bhauth hee utaam hain aur dialogue toh superhit hain 😍 aur aapki jkg ka dailogue mera pati sirf mera hain was awesome . Baaki yeh puchna toh reh hein gaya agla update jkg ka kab doge aap 😅
 

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Isme bataane ne ki baat he kya bhauth hein sundar kamuk aur aur erotic kahani likhi hain aapne jisse sunke kisi ka bhi maan moh le aap baakiyo ka pata nahi pr mujhe toh aapki saari kahani bhauth bhauth mast lagi aur aapke kahani likhne ka ev pardarshit karne ka style bhauth hee utaam hain aur dialogue toh superhit hain 😍 aur aapki jkg ka dailogue mera pati sirf mera hain was awesome . Baaki yeh puchna toh reh hein gaya agla update jkg ka kab doge aap 😅
bas parson lekin please is upadate ke baad aapke comment ka intezzar rahega
 
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komaalrani

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Aap acche aache update dete jaiyo main kahani pe comment karta jaunga
Pakka aap post karungi aur fir aapke comments ka wait
 

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जोरू का गुलाम भाग १६९

गुड्डी की सुहागरात, भैया के साथ,

मज़ा पलंग तोड़ जोड़ा पान का



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lease read, enjoy, like and share comments
 
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The Immortal

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread

Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread



Prizes
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Winner 3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
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Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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जोरू का गुलाम अपडेट पोस्टेड


नया दिन नया सबेरा
 
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komaalrani

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जोरू का गुलाम भाग १७२

सुहाग दिन या ननदिया चढ़ी अपने भैया के ऊपर

अपडेट पोस्टेड


please do read, like and comment
 
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भाग १७३ -

दिन भर - सासू माँ,....


please do read, enjoy, like and share your comments.
 
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