Erotica मोहे रंग दे

[klauacami]

Just Posted a few posts in my story, HOLI Ke rang, posts with a different tone and mood


and an opinion, should i post anuj and kammo stories here or separately with a link

post kamo story here and anuj in new one

 

[Jannat1972]

aapki post ki reply maine ki thi aur apase kuch aur posts ko bhi refer kiya tha, kabhi idhar ayen to jara ek najar us par bhi

Mane ye puri story padhi h jee.. aur pure interest k saath padhi h....m jada interested komal k kirdaar m tha uske encounters m tha jo sirf apne husband k saath hi dikhaya gaya h ....usco toh na k Barabar kar diya aapne aur characters m puri story kheech di ....last m wo bhi adhuri chod di.....har kisi ka apna apna interest h .....jo mera tha mane bata diya ..aap 4-4 story ek saath na chala kr 2 story pr focus kar le toh jada behter tarike se apne readers k saath insaaf kar lengi aur story beech m band b na karni padegi...agr aap apna keemti time nikal kar readers ko story deti h toh readers bhi apna keemti time nikal kar usko padhte h ....baki aapko meri baato ka bura laga ho toh maafi chahta hu..

 

[komaalrani]

post kamo story here and anuj in new one

Thanks as you said, I will post Anuj story in a separate thread, but will provide a link here, mood of that story will be totally different from story here, first a few posts will be taken from this story for continuity and after that story will flow, moving around Anuj, Guddo and her mother and many more characters, story will be based at Banaras. some excerpt from that story i will be sharing here, as curtain raiser,... more than that i had put a lot of restrictions in this part of story, like no kinks, no incest, a pure husband wife romance,... so those barriers will not be there,... wait for curtain raiser , a few excerpts soon,...

 

[komaalrani]

Mane ye puri story padhi h jee.. aur pure interest k saath padhi h....m jada interested komal k kirdaar m tha uske encounters m tha jo sirf apne husband k saath hi dikhaya gaya h ....usco toh na k Barabar kar diya aapne aur characters m puri story kheech di ....last m wo bhi adhuri chod di.....har kisi ka apna apna interest h .....jo mera tha mane bata diya ..aap 4-4 story ek saath na chala kr 2 story pr focus kar le toh jada behter tarike se apne readers k saath insaaf kar lengi aur story beech m band b na karni padegi...agr aap apna keemti time nikal kar readers ko story deti h toh readers bhi apna keemti time nikal kar usko padhte h ....baki aapko meri baato ka bura laga ho toh maafi chahta hu..

Thnks so much, but please never say sorry, we all have right to have a different and divergent view, just because i am a writer i dont have a right to put me on a high pedestal and preach. i have a certain way of telling a particular story and your expectation from story is different. so fine. it does not mean that i am right or you are wrong, you have taken pains to articulate your views and express it here and i am thankful to you.

I can suggest two of my stories and if you have not read them, please do try, it may suit your specs,....

Erotica - सोलवां सावन

सोलहवां सावन - भाभी के गाँव में एक किशोरी ननद , सावन का महीना ,... आगे हर फुहार तन मन सब भिगो देगी।

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Erotica - मजा पहली होली का ससुराल में

मजा पहली होली का, ससुराल में ( इस कहानी के सभी पात्र वयस्क हैं और सभी चित्र इंटरनेट से लिए गए हैं यदि किसी को कोई आपत्ति हो तो टिप्पणी कर सकता है। अंडर एज सेक्स न सिर्फ इस फोरम के नियमों के खिलाफ है बल्कि वैधानिक रूप से भी निषिद्ध है , और मैं वयक्तिगत रूप से भी इसे नहीं पसंद करती।) मुझे...

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i will always welcome your frank and forthright views, thanks again

 

[jhonmilton]

Waiting for No Holes barred...Story

 

[klauacami]

Thanks as you said, I will post Anuj story in a separate thread, but will provide a link here, mood of that story will be totally different from story here, first a few posts will be taken from this story for continuity and after that story will flow, moving around Anuj, Guddo and her mother and many more characters, story will be based at Banaras. some excerpt from that story i will be sharing here, as curtain raiser,... more than that i had put a lot of restrictions in this part of story, like no kinks, no incest, a pure husband wife romance,... so those barriers will not be there,... wait for curtain raiser , a few excerpts soon,...

intezar rhega aapka hame aapke chate ko

 

[komaalrani]

Waiting for No Holes barred...Story

jald hi wait khatam hoga and yes no holes will be spared, every hole will be speared,

 

[komaalrani]

intezar rhega aapka hame aapke chate ko

Bahoot Jald, lekin uske pahle uske kuch ansh main yahan share karungi, aap sabki raai janugi aur uske baad hi alag se,...

 

[komaalrani]

आज ही अनुज बनारस में , कुछ अंश यहाँ

और जैसा रिस्पॉन्स होगा सुझाव होगा , उस तरह से अलग से थ्रेड में

हो सकता है इन्सेस्ट के भी एकाध प्रसंग आ जाएँ , जो मैंने पहले कभी ट्राई नहीं किये

 

[komaalrani]

किस्सा बनारस का, ( अनुज की जुबानी )

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