Romance संयोग का सुहाग [Completed]

[piyanuan]

मैं रोना चाहता हूँ ख़ूब रोना चाहता हूँ मैं

फिर उस के बाद गहरी नींद सोना चाहता हूँ मैं

aisa kya ho gaya, story padho khush ho jao

 

[lone_hunterr]

तो भाईयों और बहनों, कैसा लगा आज का अपडेट?
काफी कुछ नया लिखना पड़ा। उम्मीद है अच्छा लगा होगा।
अपने फीडबैक लिख दीजिए। प्लीज़ ?

great update sir ji, Is story ke standout characters sameer nhi uske maa-baap hai
Naye relations ko guidance ki jarurat hoti hai aur vo inn dono new couple ko sameer ke mom dad se milegi___ Sameer samjhdaar hai isiliye usne first night pe bhi koi force nhi kiya ur ek mature decision liya hai

Thoda comedy aur thoda emotional flavor ke sath ye story bhut ache se aage badh rahi hai....

Once again update and waiting for next

 

[Rock~Devir]

So beautiful story I like it

 

[kingkhankar]

aisa kya ho gaya, story padho khush ho jao

Hamari Minakhi ro rahii hey?

 

[piyanuan]

Hamari Minakhi ro rahii hey?

khushi k ansoo hain wo, kisi kisi ko nasib hote hain

 

[Tinkuram]

nayi likhawat, khubsurat parivesh aur yahi karan hai ki one go se ab tak ki kahani pardne ke baad tareef karne ka man hua. Shandar hai. Update regular va jaldi dijiyega.

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Really no meaning of love
Awesome update
Keep posting

 

[avsji]

behtreen updates
umeed nahi thi aaj updt aayega
sameer k mata pita sweet hain, sameer bear pita hain
galat chij hain ye mat piya karo,
? hamari pasand ka kaam , itna pyar pa kar to koi b emotional ho jayega, aaj mene b kheer banayi hai sameer k liye soch kitni milti hain hamari, ? kuch nahi hua dono k bich
kul mila kar shandar lekhan

Thank you!

 

[avsji]

Nice update. Minakhsi has got a great life ahead.

Dhanyavaad!

 

[avsji]

Samir jate jate Minakshi ke face mein smile le aya. Nice writing style

Ladkiyon ka dil jeetna aasan kaam thode hi hai.
Aur wo bhi in haalaton me.