Adultery ☆ प्यार का सबूत ☆ (Completed)

[12bara]

Roopa,vaibhav aur Ragini..ka bhi ab sath chuth gaya. Bahot dukh ho Raha hai kahani khatam ho gai ye soch ke. Roj update ka intezar karta tha ab kuch bacha hi nhi intezar ke liye is xforum me... bahot hi sandar kahni jisne itne time Tak jode rakha sabko ... intezar rahega fir se aapki koi behtreen kahani ka .... dhanyawad

 

[The_InnoCent]

Bahut khub. Kahani ke liye dhanyavaad. Jivan ki safaltao ki shubhkamnao ke sath...............................
SADHUVAAD...................

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[The_InnoCent]

The_InnoCent भाई, अति सुन्दर!
बहुत अच्छा किया, और ऐसा ही अंत चाहिए था। मार-काट, छल-प्रपञ्च भरी कहानी का ऐसा ही अंत चाहिए।
कुछ कमेंट करने को नहीं है - अंत हम सभी जानते थे/हैं! सुखान्त होना अच्छा लगता है।
रागिनी, रूपा को जीवन का हर सुख मिलना ही चाहिए। और समाज में भी सामान्यता आनी चाहिए।
और वही हुआ। बहुत अच्छी कहानी का अंत हुआ।
बढ़िया!

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[The_InnoCent]

Bahut jabardast start hai bhai

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Bahut jabardast story hai bhai

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Very very nice and happy ending

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Mesmerizing update bhai

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Outstanding Bhai it's fantastic story in this forum.........Jo ab khatam ho Gaya Dil se tumhara shukriya is story ke liye

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Marvelous update Bhai
Shingar raas ka asli maza Sharm aur haya ke chadar mein rahega toh uska aik alag hi maaza hai

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बहुत रोचक कहानी थी भाई

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[The_InnoCent]

रागिनी कि हल्दी रस्म
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https://twitter.com/i/web/status/1726730575132643802

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Bilkul aise hi hua tha

 

[The_InnoCent]

बहुत सुंदर अंतिम अपडेट

Waah! Kya review diya hai story end hone ke baad

 

[The_InnoCent]

Kitna sunder end kiya he aapne is amar prem kahani ka The_InnoCent Shubham Bhai,

Halanki suhagraat wala scene ko aap thoda vistarpurvak likh sakte the................lekin koi baat nahi ye part bhi atyant khubsurat tha...........

Suhagrat ko bhi ghapaghap hi hota hai. Kya yahi padhna chhate the...

Important ye dikhana tha ki vaibhav aur ragini kaise ek dusre ke kareeb aate hain. Jab wo kareeb aa jayenge to aage ghapaghap dikhana zaruri nahi hota kyoki sabko pata hai chudai kaise hoti hai

Na jane kitne utaar chadhav dekhe he is kahani ne..............aapki personal life bhi disturb rahi in dino...........lekin is sabke bavjood ye prem gatha purn huyi...........

Khushi to bahut hi jayada ho rahi he.............lekin sath hi sath is baat ka bhi bahut dukh he ki ab aap forum par nahi aayenge..............

21 March 2021 ko ye story start hui thi. Matlab teen saal lage bhai....Well aap logo ka support na hota to main ise kabhi pura nahi karta kyoki jis tarah ka thanda response mil raha tha usse man kharaab ho gaya tha...

Ek request he aapse............chahe to thoda lamba break le lo aap...........lekin likhna band na karna...............vinti he aapse.........

Once again.............thank you so much Bhai.............for this amazing love story...............

Break to lena hi hai bhai, ab ye kitna lamba hoga ye to samay hi batayega...

Thanks for your love and support bro

 

[The_InnoCent]

Outstanding story
One of the best story I have ever read .
Thank you so much for this wonderful story bhai

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[The_InnoCent]

Nice
Ragini or Vaibhav k bich jaisi suhagraat hum chahte thy waise apne nhi di wajah Jo bhi apki story hai apne kuch soch k he aisa kiya hoga

Bhai suhagrat ko bahut se log vaibhav aur ragini ki chudaai scenes padhna chhate the but afsos mutth maarna is story me allow nahi tha

1 adhbhut kahani ka sukhad anth ho Gaya apke sath is kahani mein jud k hame bhi bahut maza aaya

Umeed hai aage bhi naya jarur likhega app

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[The_InnoCent]

Ye wali kahani bhi bahut badhiya thi . Aapki almost sari kahaniya badhiya hai . Apki writing ka fan ho gaya hun . Aise hi aur kahani likhiye

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