Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

अपडेट पोस्टेड - एक मेगा अपडेट, जोरू का गुलाम - भाग २३९ -बंबई -बुधवार - वॉर -२ पृष्ठ १४५६

कृपया पढ़ें, आनंद लें, लाइक करें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[komaalrani]

There are many discerning readers of your story.
You have a born writing skill and presentation in local dialect.
However why those readers are commenting on your story is beyond my comprehension.
I request at least all the viewers of the story to post a line or two about your perception on the story.
Ms Komal will reply (as she always clarify on many queries raised) on your opinion too.

thanks so much

 

[komaalrani]

Those who are good reader will be good writer.
Without reading you can not write even a paragraph..
I think Komal Rani is a greedy reader of many text on so many languages, that is why she has command over such language.
Apart from that she must be nice person, that is why she is able to feel the emotion of others and the same are expressed in her story telling.

thanks for nice words

 

[komaalrani]

Small screen of mobile also deters me.
I also prefer either laptop or desktop.
I suggest you to install Google IME and then type in your favorite text/word editor.
Then copy/paste here.
This will give you liberty to post later on or as and when you wish.

i do almost similar thing, i save it i ms word, edit it and then post it from there.

 

[komaalrani]

गुड्डी की तयारी तो आपने पूरी करवा दी...
लेकिन गुड्डी की रात की तैयारी....

गुड्डी की सील टूटने का वर्णन एकदम उग्र और एकदम हटके होना चाहिए.....

aisa hi hoga khoob chhekh pukaar, khoon khacchar aur jabardsti

 

[komaalrani]

पहले तो आपकी सास जेठानी को छोड़कर जाने को तैयार न थीं....

लेकिन अब अकेले (नहीं-नहीं कोठे पे) रहने को तैयार है.....

vahan paisa bhi aur variety bhi hai ,Phir champaa baai ne bolaa hai sab Gadaha Ghoda brand vaale milenge

 

[komaalrani]

You may try Opera browser which has free VPN.

my AV does offer me VPN ( Ksparsky total security) but i am not using it. will it prevent realsrv?

 

[komaalrani]

May try as suggested in previous post.

Realserv comes only when i open exforum so it had something do with this i have requested Night Warrior in lounge to look into it ( Thread Shikayat Peti) as it is a serious malware. I hope admin do something . Hope, eternal hope

 

[komaalrani]

Again syndication.realsrv is interrupting reading and posting, i am running a total scan on laptop.

 

[komaalrani]

मजा आ गया

thanks sooooooooooooo much

 

[komaalrani]

ये दोनों समधनों की छेड़-छाड़ भी जबरदस्त है....
और दोनों हाजिरजवाब भी हैं......

लेकिन प्रोग्राम फेल न होने पाए... जेठानी जी कोई लंगड़ी न लगाने पाएं...

एकदम नहीं, जेठानी जी की दोनों टाँगे तो हरदम फैली रहेंगी,... तीसरी टांग की सेवा के लिए, लंगड़ी कैसे लगा पायेंगी। अबकी सास जी की टांगो के बीच उनका छोटा बेटा सेंध लगा के रहेगा।