Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

अपडेट पोस्टेड - एक मेगा अपडेट, जोरू का गुलाम - भाग २३९ -बंबई -बुधवार - वॉर -२ पृष्ठ १४५६

कृपया पढ़ें, आनंद लें, लाइक करें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[motaalund]

Doctor Sahiba is not only a great writer but also a great human being a person with golden heart, a rarity.

True... She has a great personality..

 

[motaalund]

Ye to aapka baddpan he

 

[motaalund]

 

[Rajizexy]

Raji ji btane dijiye na.. thoda hmara bhi fayda ho jaega.. aur yakin maniye aap ki roji roti pr koi aanch nhi aaegi.. kyoki doctor agr itni khoobsurat ho to hr mard marij bnna chahega.. me khud bhi

kyon jhuth kehte ho Nick sir.
Agar Me itni hi khubsurat lagti aapko to ek baar to jarur meri story par Darshan dete aap.
Sirf battein hi karte ho aap to sir ,ek baar bhi marij nahin bane sir aap to Raji ke.
Aur xforum par mujhe milne ki to koi fees bhi nahin hai. ha ha mazak jese aap ne kiya hai dear Nick.

Incest - Rishton Me Haseen Badlav

Thank you Dear Madam. Main bhi aapke reply kaa wait karta hoon..kyun ki: It makes me very happy.. Replies are very instructive and makes my day. U r welcome dear Mass ❤️❤️❤️

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[Rajizexy]

You always supported Komaal with choicest superlative and with nice pictures.

Dear bahut pehle jab Komal mam kisi aur site par thi tab se me inki bahut badi fan hu.
Mene tab inki story "Nanad ki training" aur" jkg" bahut baar padhi thi.
Tab mene kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ke mujhe itni badi gr8 writer se aise conversation karne ka mauka milega.
Me to jo bhi ab likhti hu inki guidance aur inki stories se clue lekar likhti hu.
Me specialist doc hu to dimag to bhagwan ne diya hi hai .
To jo bhi likhti hu apni taraf se achha hi likhti hu.
To apni mentor/pillar ki to writing mujhe achhi lagni hi hai.
Chhota muh badi baat ,me bhi Komal mam ko inbox mein kuchh suggestions deti rehti hu.

Incest - Rishton Me Haseen Badlav

Thank you Dear Madam. Main bhi aapke reply kaa wait karta hoon..kyun ki: It makes me very happy.. Replies are very instructive and makes my day. U r welcome dear Mass ❤️❤️❤️

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[Innocent- heart]

pahale to aap ka bahoot bahoot dhanyvaad ki aapne apna pahla messsege meri is story pe post kiya . Aur aap ne kahani agar 52 page tak padh li hai to iskaa matalab kahani aapko acchi lg rahi hai aur aap manju aur geeta ka prsasang padh rahe hain jo is kahanai ka hottest prsngon me se ek hai .

main to yahi kahungi ko aap padhna jaari rakhen par aap ke savaal ka javaab bhi dena sahi hoga

pahle to heroine ke pati ka aapne page 52 pe dekha hi Manju aur Geeta se deh ka smbhdh aur uske saath saas se bhi , pati ke smbndh aage chal ke pati ke bhabhi aur unki mameri behan, mrs moitra ki do betiyon ityaadi kayi se hoga, lekin isame koyi bhi adultrous relations nahi hain kyonki vo Heroine ki shamati se uske uksaane pe aur jaankaari men hai . aur ye sab casual one night stand ki tarh hain dil poori tarh Heroine ke kabje men hai,

isi paralaar Jija saali ka rishta un rishton men chhedkhaani thodi liberty jag jaahir hai . aur ye story upanyyas ke saaize ki hai 600-700 page se kam nahi to ismen Heroine ka ek prsang uske Jija ke saath aayegaa , lekin vah koyi adultry ya affair nahi hai balki kuch sharton ki aur again one night stand type hi hai , us Jija Saali Parsang ke alava Heroine ka kisi aur se samndh nahi hai

Heroine man se aur tan se pati ke saath hai aur vo prsang bhi pati ke saamne lekin Pati Cuckold nahi hai aap chaahe to un prsanago ko chhod ke bhi aage nadh sakte hain kyonki vo story ka 1% bhi nahi hai aur unke bina bhi story ki dhaara men koyi farak nahi padegaa



haan agara aap Pati -Patni ke bich pure romance aur erotic story dhoondh rahe hain to main meri story Mohe rang de suggest karungi

Erotica - मोहे रंग दे

मोहे रंग दे ,मोहे रंग दे ,रंग की यह कहानी साजन के रंग में सजनी के रंगने की है ,सजनी के रंग में साजन के रंगने की है ,और होली की है , ...और होली की नहीं भी है ,...मन और तन दोनों रंगने की है ,नेह के रंग की , देह के रंग की ,... एक ऐसी कहानी जो सिर्फ इस देस में हो...

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Shukriya mujhe karna chahiye komaalrani ji . aise erotica likhne ke liye maine 140 page tak padha aur jiju wala part bhi isliye late reply de raha hu . mujhe aapki bhauth acchi lagi mai waise toh sirf incest based story padhta hu pr pehli bar erotica try aur saach aapne bhauth sundar kahani likhi hain .

Mam meri ek suggestion hain agar aapko bura na lage . Mujhe aisa lgta hain ki jija wala scene over hyped laga . Waise agar aapke unke(gulam) ka hatiyaar baaki (jija included) bada ho toh isse aapka bhi kaad badhega baaki mahilao ke saame badega ki aapke pati ke pass sabse taqatwar hatiyar aapke gulam ke pass ho

 

[Nick107]

kyon jhuth kehte ho Nick sir.
Agar Me itni hi khubsurat lagti aapko to ek baar to jarur meri story par Darshan dete aap.
Sirf battein hi karte ho aap to sir ,ek baar bhi marij nahin bane sir aap to Raji ke.
Aur xforum par mujhe milne ki to koi fees bhi nahin hai. ha ha mazak jese aap ne kiya hai dear Nick.

Incest - Rishton Me Haseen Badlav

Thank you Dear Madam. Main bhi aapke reply kaa wait karta hoon..kyun ki: It makes me very happy.. Replies are very instructive and makes my day. U r welcome dear Mass ❤️❤️❤️

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Are gussa mt hoeiye raji ji... kaan pakad kr aapse mafi chahata hu me.. is gustakhi ke liye..
Aur marij to hum aapke hmesha rhenge
Iss rog ka ilaj bss aapki khubsurati ka jaam hi he.. subah ... dopahar... sham.. jra jra..
Baki sorry... please bura mt maniye .. aap hi to he ..
❤

 

[Nick107]

kyon jhuth kehte ho Nick sir.
Agar Me itni hi khubsurat lagti aapko to ek baar to jarur meri story par Darshan dete aap.
Sirf battein hi karte ho aap to sir ,ek baar bhi marij nahin bane sir aap to Raji ke.
Aur xforum par mujhe milne ki to koi fees bhi nahin hai. ha ha mazak jese aap ne kiya hai dear Nick.

Incest - Rishton Me Haseen Badlav

Thank you Dear Madam. Main bhi aapke reply kaa wait karta hoon..kyun ki: It makes me very happy.. Replies are very instructive and makes my day. U r welcome dear Mass ❤️❤️❤️

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Aur kisne kha ji aapse milne ki hum fees nhi dete ... apna dil haar baithe he..aap pr..... isse jyada kya fees dega koi

 

[komaalrani]

Shukriya mujhe karna chahiye komaalrani ji . aise erotica likhne ke liye maine 140 page tak padha aur jiju wala part bhi isliye late reply de raha hu . mujhe aapki bhauth acchi lagi mai waise toh sirf incest based story padhta hu pr pehli bar erotica try aur saach aapne bhauth sundar kahani likhi hain .

Mam meri ek suggestion hain agar aapko bura na lage . Mujhe aisa lgta hain ki jija wala scene over hyped laga . Waise agar aapke unke(gulam) ka hatiyaar baaki (jija included) bada ho toh isse aapka bhi kaad badhega baaki mahilao ke saame badega ki aapke pati ke pass sabse taqatwar hatiyar aapke gulam ke pass ho

Thanks aapke suggestion ka dhyaan rakhungi aur aage story men isi tarh ka kuch change kar ke , aur vaise to main incest nahi likhti lekin meri dosari runiing story Chhutki men maine incest ka thdoa sa put diya hai aap chaahe to padh sakate hain

छुटकी - होली दीदी की ससुराल में

Adultery - छुटकी - होली दीदी की ससुराल में

छुटकी - होली दीदी की ससुराल मेंयह कहानी सीक्वेल है, मेरी एक छोटी सी लेकिन खूब मज़ेदार और गरमागरम होली की कहानी, मज़ा पहली होली का ससुराल में, जी अभी उसकी लिंक भी दूंगी , उसके पहले पेज को रिपोस्ट भी करुँगी, लेकिन उसके पहले इस कहानी की हलकी सी रूपरेखा, जिस कहानी से जुडी है ये कहानी दो चार...

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[Black horse]

That is how, the original JKG ended, with a strong feminist note,... as i had said umpteen times, story was partly a tribute to incesbi, for his unfinished story,... Perverted Indian wife' but it was also an eulogy or compliment to femdom approach, not of the leather and chain variety, which is more a fantasy created by men or shades of gray ( I feel little grey cells are more important ) but femdom, closer to Greek play of Arisophanes, lysistrata, where women fight against war using denial of sex as a weapon.

It had a strong philosophical basis, which reverberates in my many stories, strong female characters, which finds a true represenattive in Reet a friend and character in Phagun ke din chaar, a novel i still love and will never rewrite,

Hindi version of story, the latest in many editions, have reached exactly at the same sport where the English version ended, ... so i thought let us take a peek into past .

Normally, i have moved to writing in Hindi but at that time as Google tool was not there i used to write in Hindi using Barhaha ( reminds of HILMS and Sheen Devin, the founder ) or in English with dialogues in Hinglish, with some funny censorship by xo...p. ( like in Hindi in roman font,... if i wll write ' SIKHAANA" it will mark it, ' religious' as the first four letters are a religion and I was forced to stop in mid-way. later on their moderation improved and full story in English came there.

When i tried posting in Hindi, the forum came to a halt and again i started it here this incomplete story, hoping this time i will complete it here,


aur aage ke parts HINDI Men.

Your English version of story is more erotic. Sorry for late reply.