Bohat bohat shukriya itna khubsoorat review dene ke liye read my next story the lunch box story
TITLE - LOVE WITH FIXERR
WRITER - Damha
Bhai bohat he achi story hai bohat kuch naya Daikhne ko mila bohat new style tha ap ka
Ap ne bohat achi story Sochi hai ye kuch he log ker pate hai jo kam lafzo main zada dikha dete hai
Action bhi acha Daikhne ko mila romance bhi acha likha Aur erotic bhi sahi thi jitna ap likh sakte the us se bohat zada acha likh diya hai ap ne
End main yehi kahu ga speechless story my Rating for you 10/10
Bohat bohat shukriya review dene ke liye really heart touching review me Ap ko start se daikh raha tha ap sab stories per review de rahe the mujh per nahi aya mujhe laga shayad ap ko story pasand nahi but now I see your review its really impressive and read my next story THE LUNCH BOX STORYLOVE WITH FIXERR
The story is about a girl named Ruhi and falls in love with a boy named Hasan, But Hassan betrays Ruhi and tries to mistreat him, But at the same time, Aryan arrives and saves Ruhi.
Aryan's character in the story is tremendous, he first helps Ruhi and later saves Noor from Hassan. Aryan had to suffer a lot in his past. Ruhi's love saved Aryan. The truth is that love has a lot of power. It is very difficult to say where life begins and where it ends.
In today's time, it is very difficult to find true love. Just as Roohi found a true partner in his life, I pray that everyone gets his love in life.
Damha Ji, I liked your story very much. You have written every word of the story very beautifully. Enjoyed reading the story. I hope you win this story competition. Thank You...
Thanks for complimentEnki kahaniya dile ko chu late hai es leyi
And wesi aapni bhi acchi kahani likhe hai
Pde kar rogte khade ho gae thi
Really good review mujhe pehle reply dene ka time nahi mil raha tha to sorry for late bus aise he meri next story ko Pyar dena THE LUNCH BOX STORYDamha bhai mere paas alfaz ni hy yeh btana ka liya ka apne kitni achi story likhi hy yeh meri aj tak ki short stories main se bestest story thi
Hamari society yeh apna Kam samjhte han ka gareeb ko itna zaleel karo ka woh bechara mar jae ya ghut ghut kar jeeta rahe aur agar koi Mehanat kar ka ameer ban jata hy usko kehta hy yeh sala rishwat leta hy 2no kam karta hy main yeh ni kehta 5 ungliya barabar hoti han magar yeh society kisi ko jeena ni deti sakoon saTITLE - THE LUNCH BOX STORY
LANGUAGE - HINGLISH
“sir ap jaldi se 8 lakh jama karwa de jis se ap ki Mom ka operation shuro kar de”
Nurse half ghante me teesri bar ye keh ker gayi per wo teeno kuch nahi kar pa rahe the
Apni sab savings aur rishte daro ki madad ke baad bhi sirf 3 lakh he tha in ke paas
Lekin operation shuro karne ke liya abhi bhi 5 lakh ki zarorat thi tabhi 2 ward boy aye aur un ki mama ko le ker Jane lage
“in ko ap kaha le ja rahe ho?”
Teeno bhai behno ko kuch samjh nahi aa rahi thi
Ward boy1: 30 minutes main in KA operation hai in ko operation theater le ja rahe hai
Salman(pehla beta): magar hum ne abhi fees jama nahi karwai operation kesay shuro ho sakta hai?
Wardboy2: in ki fees jama ho gayi hai
3no bhai Behan ek dusre KA muh dekhne lag gye tabhi Behan(Hareem) aage ayi
Hareem: Daikhiye in KA naam Raheela amjad hai in ki fees Abhi jama nahi huwi ap ko koi galti huwi hai
Wardboy1: daikhye in KA naam rahela amjad hai ye kal admit huwi hai...... 30 minute main in KA bypass KA operation hai..... Ab please side per ho jaye doctor sahib gussa kare gye
Phir ward boys in 3no ko side per ker ke Mrs.Raheela ke bed ko operation theater le Jane lage
Mrs.Raheela iss sab se bekhabar bed per behoosh thi
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“sister ap ke ward boys ko galti huwi hai hum ab tak apni mother ki fees jama nahi karwa sake hai........ To operation kesay ho sakta hai?”
Sharukh(teesra beta) ne us nurse se kaha jo in ko 3 bar fees KA keh gayi thi
Nurse: paper theek karte huwe) g in ki fees kuch dair pehle jama ho chuki hai....... Ap pareshan na ho
Salman: herani se) per kis ne karwai?
Nurse ne un ko ignore kia aur operation theater ki taraf Jane lagi lekin beech main Hareem aa gayi
Hareem: please bataye kis ne diye paise?
Nurse: daikhye hum sab ko sakhti se mana kia gaya hai....... Ab ap mera raasta chor de
Nurse ne Hareem ko side per kia aur aage barh gayi piche 3no bhai Behan ek dusre ko Daikhne lag gye
Lekin iss waqt ye janne se zada important in ki mother KA operation tha
Fees kis ne di ye to baad main bhi poch sakte the iss LIYE wo operation theater ke bahir khare ho gaye
2 ghante baad ek surgeon muh per mask charha ker bahir aya aur bola
Surgeon: ap ki mother KA operation successful raha aj un ko under observation rakha jaye ga kal un ko private ward main shift kar dia jaye ga
Ye keh ker surgeon aage barh gaya...... Sab ne shukar ada kia kitne din in ki maa ko hospital main rakha gaya inho ne apni puri koshis ker di fees jama karwane wale ka pata lagwane ki
Magar in ko Kuch pata na chala inho ne Mrs.Raheela ko bhi bata diya wo bhi heran thi
Itna bara ehsaan kon ker gaya? Aur saamne bhi nahi aya? Aakhir kon ho sakta hai?
Aj Mrs.Raheela ko discharge ker diya gaya salman hospital ke during jama karwane gaya to pata chala WO bhi pehle de diye gye hai jawab pehle wala
“nahi bata sakte kis ne kiye hai”
Iss ne ja ker Mrs.Raheela ko bataya to sab heran ho gye aakhir kon ker sakta hai
Lekin unho ne apna saman ikhata kia kiu ke unhe pata tha itne dino se pochne per nahi bataya to ab kia bataye gye
Unho ne ja ker saman car main rakha aur Mrs.Raheela ko hospital ke bahir laye Mrs.Raheela ne ek bar hospital ki taraf daikha
Tabhi un ki nazar hospital ke board per gayi jis ko daikh ker wo chonk gayi aur wanhi baith ker Rone lagi Aur apni purani yado main kho gayi
FLASHBACK
Mrs.raheela Amjad shuro se ek ache dil ki malik rahi un ka dil seeshe ki tarha saaf tha
In ke husband ki death ho gayi hai in ke 3 bache the 2 bare bete aur 1 choti beti
Miss raheela ki age iss waqt 38 ke kareeb thi wo ek bohat bare private school main job karti thi
In ki salary bhi achi thi aur in ke pas in ke husband ka banaya ghar tha
Mrs.raheela bohat dino se ek baat note ker rahi thi ke in ki class ka ek Larka (Arman zubair) kuch dino se lunch nahi ker raha tha to brake ke time Mrs.Raheela Arman ke paas gayi
Raheela: Arman ap lunch kiu nahi ker rahe?
Arman: madam mujhe bhook nahi hai
Mrs.raheela Arman ki baat per satisfy to nahi thi but unho ne aage kuch poucha nahi Aur aage chal pari
Mrs.Raheela ne 1 month tak Arman ko note kia aur us kai bar pocha bhi lekin har bar us ka ek he jawab hota
“Madam mujhe bhook nahi hai”
Mrs.Raheela ka us bache ko itni importance dene ki ek aur wajha thi ke us bache ne nursery se le ker ab tak top kia tha
Iss liye Mrs.Raheela ne Faisla kia ke aj wo brake ke waqt Arman se poch ker he rahe gi ke wo lunch kiu nahi karta?
Aur us ke parents ko bhi bula ker poche gi ke kia wo apne bache ko lunch de ker nahi bhejte?
Mrs.Raheela ko lag raha tha ke galti Maa baap ki hai wo apne bache ko lunch de ker he nahi bhejte..... Aur na he paise ke bacha canteen se he Kuch kha le
Ye sab baat Karne ke liye Mrs.Raheela ne brake ki bell ke baad Arman ko kaha
“Meri baat sun ker jana”
Puri class ke bahir Jane ke baad Arman Mrs.Raheela ke paas aa gya Mrs.Raheela ne ek bar Arman ko dhayan se daikha aur phir boli
Mrs.Raheela: Arman beta main ap ko 1.5 month se daikh rahi hu ap lunch nahi karte kiu?
Arman ne phir wohi jawab kaha jo wo 1.5 month se keh raha tha
“Wo madam mujhe bhook nahi hoti”
Mrs.Raheela: beta ye kaise ho sakta hai ap subha 7:00 baje nashta ker ke ate ho 12:30 tak yahan school main parhai kar ke bhi bhook nahi lage? Aur phir ap Academy bhi jaate ho jaha se ap 4:30 Ghar jate ho phir bhi ap ko bhook nahi lagti?.....Jao ja ker apna lunch box lao
Mrs.Raheela ne apna shak door Karne ke liye kaha.......unhe yaqeen tha ke Arman ke paas lunch nahi hai
Arman apni jagha se hila bhi nahi Mrs.Raheela ne kuch dair intezaar kia...... Phir ek thandi aah bhari aur Arman ko ek bar phir daikha
Mrs.Raheela: iss ka MATLAB mera shak sahi tha bulati hu tumhare parents ko itne la-parwah ke apne bache ko lunch de ker bhi nahi bhejte
Mrs.Raheela Arman ki parents ki la-parwahi ki wajha se bohat gussa ho gayi thi........Mrs.Raheela ki baat sun ker Arman ke pairo ke niche se zameen nikal gayi thi
Arman: pareshani se) madam mere paas lunch hai kasam se mere paas lunch hai
Arman jaise Rone lag gya tha aur bohat pareshan ho gya tha.....us ko itna pareshan daikh ker Mrs.Raheela bhi pareshan aur heran ho gayi
Mrs.Raheela: pyar se) acha dikhao Zara lunch box
Mrs.Raheela ke kehte he Arman bhag ker gaya aur apne bag main se lunch box nikal ker le aya
Mrs.Raheela ne lunch box khola to andar Paratha aur achar tha.........Mrs.Raheela ko samjh nahi aa rahi thi agar us ke paas lunch tha to wo karta kiu nahi tha
Mrs.Raheela: bohat pyar se) beta agar ap ke paas lunch hai to ap karte kiu nahi ho?........zada nahi to thora sa kha liya karo
Mrs.Raheela ne bohat pyar se Arman ko samjhaya
Arman: g madam main ab ker lia karo ga........bus ap mere Maa baba ko mat batana
Arman ab roansa sa ho gya tha........Mrs.Raheela ko laga koi baat zaroor hai iss liye unho ne dobara pocha,
Mrs.Raheela: acha beta nahi batao gi.......lekin ap Mujhe batao asal baat kia hai?......ap lunch karte kiu nahi ho?
Arman ne apna sir jhuka liya phir kuch dair ki khamoosi ke baad bola
Arman: madam wo sab larke mera mazak urate hai.......main sirf paratha aur Achar lata hu baki sab nuggets sandwich aur burger jaisi cheeze late hai.....iss liye nahi khata
Arman ne ab asal baat batai aur iss ke saath us ne apni aankho main aane wale ansoo saaf kiye
Mrs.Raheela ko Arman per bohat pyar aya un ka dil kia ke Wo Arman ko gale laga le.....phir wo Arman ke sir per haath pher ker pyar se boli
Mrs.Raheela: beta ap apni mama se kaho wo ap ko kuch aur bana ker diya kare
Mrs.Raheela ne bohat pyar se Arman ko suggestion diya
Arman: main ne 2 saal pehle kaha tha......mujhe nahi paratha le ker Jana sab mazak urate hai
Arman ne bohat masoomiyat se kaha
Mrs.Raheela: phir
Mrs.Raheela ko bhi ab interesting lag rahi thi baat iss LIYE wo aage pochna chahti thi
Arman ne ek nazar apni teacher ko daikha....... phir dobara sir jhuka liya
Arman: phir kuch dino baad meri api ne mujh se kaha......wo 11th class me jati hai jab 12th class clear ker le gi to wo colony ke bacho ko tuition parhaya kare gi..... phir jaisa lunch main kaho ga waisa API bana diya kare gi........ Per tab tak main Ami ko keh du bread kabab, nuggets, roll, khane se mera pait kharab hota hai........
Arman abhi baat ker he raha tha ke Mrs.Raheela ne us ki baat beech main kat ker pocha
Mrs.Raheela: per ap ki Behan ne aisa kia kaha.......
Arman: kiu ki jab se mama ne mujhe bread, nuggets wagaira lunch me dene shuro kiye tab se baba 2 ki bajaye raat ko 3 baje ghar aane lag gye...... madam mere baba ek Clark hai.....wo din main office jate hai aur raat ko taxi chalate hai...... Iss LIYE ke mujhe private school main parha sake aur fees ke saath book uniform aur Academy ke kharche utha sake...... Mere ek lunch ki wajha se wo 1 ghanta late aane lag gye........ Jab ke unhe subha 7:00 baje jagna parta tha office Jane ke liye...... Iss LIYE api ne kaha ke iss tarha baba ki tabiyat kharab ho jaye gi.... Iss LIYE main mama se keh du mujhe ye lunch na de..... Aur jab wo 12th clear ker Le gi to mere lunch ke liya paise bana liya kare gi...... To main ne mama se wohi KEH diya ..... Pehle bhi main he sirf private school se parha hu Aur Academy gaya hu meri behne to government school main parhti hai....... Mere lunch ke liya baba ko neend Ki qurbani deni per rahi thi jo Mujhe acha nahi lag raha tha..... To main ne mama se keh diya ke mujhe ye sab nahi khana
Arman ne aj apne andar ki sab baate bahir nikal di
Mrs.Raheela: to kia ab tak ap ki api ki 12th clear nahi huwi?
Mrs.Raheela ko Arman ki baato main interest barhta ja raha tha....wo aur janna chah rahi thi iss LIYE unho ne agla sawal kia
Arman: 12th to unho ne last year clear ker diya tha...... Aur pata hai unho ne pure board main top kia tha....... Iss ne baba se kaha ke iss ko canent college main admission karwa de jo bohat mehnga college hai........ Kuch fees wo scholar ship se de gi kuch wo tuition parha de gi baba per bojh nahi bane gi.....phir aakhir baba us ke bhi to baba hai na......aur iss ne kia bhi top tha to baba ne Api ka admission canent college main karwa diya....... Aur jab un ko pehli tuition fees mili to unho ne mujh se kaha........ Chalo Arman ab jo tum kaho gye wo hum le ker aye gye phir wohi tum lunch main le ker Jana ab mera bhai paratha achar nahi khaye ga api bohat khush lag rahi thi........ Lekin main ne unhe mana ker dia aur kaha api kasam se wo bazar ki cheezo se mera pait dard karta hai...... Waise bhi ab main bari class main aa gya hu ab mera koi mazak nahi urata ab main paratha kha ker ata hu........ Madam ap ko pata hai main ne aisa kiu kaha
Mrs.Raheela: dilchaspi se) kiu kaha
Arman: kiu ke ek din main ne Api ko choti api se kehte suna un ke college main bohat ameer larkiya parhti hai un ke paas bohat mehnagi cheeze hoti hai....... Api bhi tuition ke paiso se kuch le sakti thi waise bhi lunch itna zaroori to nahi tha to main ne Api ko bhi mana ker dia....... Waise bhi last year tak usman mera dost tha wo mere LIYE aksar lunch le ata tha........ Iss ki mama mere LIYE bohat maze ka lunch bana ker deti thi......iss ke baba ki posting dusri city ho gayi hai iss LIYE wo chala gya..... Phir mujhe naya dost mila he nahi...... Waise madam acha huwa wo chala gya......
Arman kuch udasi se bola...... Lekin Mrs.Raheela ko us ki akhri baat ki samjh nahi ayi ke dost ka Jana acha kiu huwa
Mrs.Raheela: acha kiu huwa.....AP ka dost ap ke saath rehta to zada acha nahi tha
Mrs.Raheela ne Detail me pocha......Arman ne ek thandi aah bhari aur bola
Arman: iss tarha se to bohat acha tha wo mera best friend tha...... Lekin jab bhi wo mere LIYE lunch lata tab bhi kuch larke tang karte the....... Ohhh aj phir usman Arman ke liya lunch laya hai....... Khao khao..... Maa baap gareeb hai to kia huwa dost to ameer hai...... Mera dil dukhta tha bohat bar main khana chor deta tha...... Lekin usman ke kehne per phir kha leta........ Madam mere mama baba gareeb nahi hai bus un ke paas paise thore kam hai..... Mere baba kehte hai ek din mere Arman doctor bane ga aur mujhe yaqeen hai main un ka khawaab pura karo ga.... Is LIYE mera dil karta tha usman kahi chala jaye phir koi mere mama baba ko gareeb nahi bole ga.......
Wo Larka apne har rishte ko le ker itna hassas tha itni Ahmiyat thi us ko Rishto ki ye daikh ker Mrs.Raheela ki Ankho main bhi ansoo aa gye
Mrs.Raheela: lekin beta ap lunch to karte nahi ap ki api ya mama ap ka lunch box check nahi karti?...... Aur pochti nahi ke lunch kiu nahi kia?
Arman: muskara ker) madam main apni van main lunch ker leta hu..... Iss van main sab paratha he le ker jate hai iss LIYE koi mera mazak nahi urata iss tarha Ami ko pata bhi nahi chalta ke main ne school main lunch nahi kia.....
Arman ne fakhar se kaha Mrs.Raheela ko Arman ki iss ada per bohat pyar aya...... Saath he break khatam hone ki bell baj gayi
Mrs.Raheela: chalo baki baate phir kabhi ker le gye
Arman bhi wapis ja ker apni chair per baith gaya....... Baki din normal guzra
Mrs.Raheela Arman ki soch se bohat attract huwi wo iss ke liya kuch karna chahti thi
Mrs.Raheela apne ghar aa gyi lekin Arman ki baate in ke dil se nikal he nahi rahi thi wo iss ke liya kuch karna chahti thi
Mrs.Raheela: in her mind) agar main Arman ke liya lunch bana diya karo..... Magar iss se to usman ka lunch nahi nahi ye theek nahi hoga
Wo bohat se kayal apne man main LA rahi thi phir un ke dimagh main ek idea aya
NEXT DAY
Brake se kuch dair pehle gate keeper ne class ke door per knock kia
Gate keeper: Arman zubair ke liya lunch aya hai
Arman herani se apni bench se utha aur ja ker lunch box le liya lunch bohat maze ka tha Arman pura kha gya
Phir ye roz ki baat ho gayi roz brake se pehle gate keeper Arman ko lunch de jata
Arman pura lunch kha leta yahan tak Arman ne 12th ke bhi paper de diye...... Is ne apni Behan Ki tarha board me top kia
12th tak wo lunch box Ata raha wo band nahi huwa Mrs.Raheela retire ho gayi
Mrs.Raheela andar he andar sochti ke kabhi Arman ne gate keeper se pocha kiu nahi wo lunch kis ne diya....... Jab ke Mrs.Raheela ka khayal tha Arman usi din ja ker ghar poche ga lunch kis ne bheja jab us ko pata chale ga ghar se KISI ne lunch nahi bheja to wo agle din Gate keeper se pocha ga nahi to lunch he nahi le ga....... Mrs.Raheela ne socha tha jab aisa hoga tab daikha jaye ga
Lekin Arman ne aisa Kuch nahi kia iss se ulta wo lunch ker ke chuti time lunch box gate keeper ko de jata
Mrs.Raheela sochti thi ke wo kia sochta hoga ke ye lunch kon de ker jata hai?.......
Magar ab WO ye kis se pochti ye sab...... 12th clear Karne ke baad USS ka medical college main Admission ho gya hai ye WO he sab ko bata ker gaya phir wo kabhi school nahi aya Mrs.Raheela Arman ko yad karti aur bus Us ke liya dua kar deti
PRESENT
Aj Mrs.Raheela ki Rone ki wajha ye thi kiu ke board per likha huwa tha (HEART SPECIALIST ARMAN ZUBAIR) Ye parhte he Mrs.Raheela ke saamne itne saalo ki baate aa gayi
Hareem: kia huwa mama?
Mrs.Raheela: mujhe doctor Arman se milna hai
Hareem: kiu?
Mrs.Raheela: gusse se) jo kaha hai wo karo
Phir 3no Mrs.Raheela ko andar le ker gye aur reception per ja ker doctor Arman KA pocha
Receptionist: muskara ker) wait a moment sir
3no ko receptionist ki muskrahat ki wajha samjh nahi ayi
Receptionist ne Doctor Arman se phone per baat ki Doctor Arman ne unhe kamre main baithne ko kaha
Nurse unhe doctor Arman ke cabin main le gayi wo 4ro wahan baith gaye
5 minute baad Doctor Arman kamre main aya ek Handsome sa doctor the doctor Arman
Arman aage aya aur Mrs.Raheela ke pairo main baith gaye ye daikh ker un ke 3no bache heran ho gaye
Mrs.Raheela ne Doctor Arman ke sir per haath rakha
Mrs.Raheela: ye mera student tha....... Lekin beta mujh per itna bar ehsaan kiu?
3no Behan Bhai ab bhi heran thi
Arman: muskara ker) pehle to ap ne mera introduction adhoora karwaya hai....... Main in ki class KA student nahi main in ki class KA wo student hu jin ko ye class 12th tak lunch bana ker deti rahi hai
Mrs.Raheela Arman ki iss baat se chonk gayi iss KA MATLAB wo janta tha
Mrs.Raheela: per tumhe kaise pata?
Arman: madam class two me main ne lunch karna chora tha us ke baad ap ki class tak kisi teacher ne nahi pocha ke AP lunch kiu nahi karte........ Us din ap ne pocha agle din lunch aa gya madam baat ye hai hum kis class Ki family se belong karte hai hamari class ke bacho ko halat bohat jald samjh aa jate hai........ Main bhi samjh gaya tha pehle din lunch aya to bohat bhook lagi thi iss LIYE Aram se kha gaya phir ghar ja ker puri raat socha ap ko kaise roku....... Phir socha bara ho ker sab paise wapis ker du ga jo ap ne lunch per lagaye....... Pata hai madam 1st day se le ker last day tak ke lunch ka hisaab aj bhi mere paas hai...... Aur wo paise the 62 thousand 4 hundred and 75 rupees
Arman paise bata ker ek bar muskaraya aur phir bola
Arman: jab bhi ap lunch deti to us din bakery se ja ker us khane ke paise poch ker ghar jaye ker dairy main date ke saath note ker leta...... Lekin jaise jaise waqt guzra samjh aa gayi puri duniya ki dolat bhi LA ker ap ko de di to lunch ke paise nahi chuka pao ga......... Kiu ki us lunch ki keemat 62 thousand 4 hundred 75 rupees nahi the us ki keemat wo mohabat thi jis se ap khana banati thi jis ki keemat puri duniya ki dolat se zada thi........ Bus iss ke baad main ne us lunch ki keemat dene ka sochna band ker dia...... Bus dua karta tha kabhi mujh ko aisa moka mile ke main ap ki madad ker saku.......... Us din ap ko daikha to foran pehchaan liya nurse ne bataya ke AP ki fees jama nahi huwi to mujhe laga mujhe wo moka mil gaya hai...... Aur jaha tak baat hai saamne na aane ki to ap ne bhi to gatekeeper ko mana kia tha ap ka naam na batane ke liye
Ye keh ker Arman ne ek baar Mrs.Raheela ki taraf daikha aur phir apna sir un ki goad main rakh liya
Mrs.Raheela ki Ankho main ansoo aa gye unho ne Arman ko apne gale se laga liya
Arman bhi ab bohat sakoon mehsoos ker raha tha
Hareem: muskara ker) acha to ap hai wo jin ke liye mama lunch le ker jati thi main bhi Socho mama itna kab se khane lagi
Hareem ki iss baat pee sab hans diye Aur Arman ne ek aisi baat kahi ke sab ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya
Arman: Hareem will you marry me
Arman ki iss baat per sab herani se Arman ko Daikhne lag gye
Arman: Aise kia daikh rahe hai sab kabhi to main ne shadi karni hai aur mujhe Hareem pasand bhi hai aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai Hareem ki shadi bhi nahi huwi aur iss tarha mujhe saas ke roop main ek maa mil jaye gi to kia main apne parents ko bhejo ap ke Ghar
Mrs.Raheela ne kuch pal socha phir Arman ke sir per haath pher kar han main sir hila diya
Hareem sharma ker bahir chali gayi aur mahool bohat acha ho gya
Phir 1 month baad engagement ho gayi aur 2 month baad shadi
♠ THE END ♠
YE EK NON-EROTIC STORY HAI YE STORY KE SAATH SAATH EK LESSON BHI HAI JO HUM SAB KO SHIKATA HAI (KAR BHALA SOO HO BHALA) HUM KISI KE SAATH ACHA KARE TO HAMARE SAATH BHI ACHA HOGA WAQT ZAROOR LAGE GA PER HOGA ACHA HE
Aansu Baha Baha Ke Bhi Hote Nahi kam Sahab,
Kitni Amer Hoti Hai Aankhe Gareeb ki
Hum ko apne bacho ko sikhana chahiye kisi ka bhi mazak na banaye ulta un ki aisi madad kare ke ek haath se kam kia to dusre ko pata bhi na chale
Bacho ko kia sikhana aj kal to bare bhi yehi karte hai to ye ek lesson hai puri duniya ke liye Ap ke pyare Dost Ahmad ki taraf se
SHUKRIYA
Very nice review .... dr..sbREVIEW
STORY - Adrishya bandhan....
WRITER – Mr.raj1100
LINK - https://xforum.live/threads/★☆★-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2019-entry-thread-★☆★.6804/page-2#post-696984
PLOT – ha ha ha
Majedar plot hai ,pahle to lagta hai ki ye ek tragedy hogi lekin fir ek nayi tradedy ho jaati hai ,
Anshika aur suraj ki shadi,fir suraj ka namard nikalana ,aisa lag rha tha ki ab shayd anshika ko koi dusara khus ya molest karga lekin writer ne ek badhiya turn diya jisse story thodi comic bhi ho gayi ,
MERITS-
1.ek unique plot tha ,shayd short story me likhne ke liye word limit hota hai ,lekin is ek long story ke rup me likha jaaye to majedar story banegi
DEMERITS-
1.mujhe laga ki thoda jaldi khatm kar diya thoda aur badhana tha ,khaskar last scene ko thoda detail kiya ja sakta tha
NOTE FOR WRITER- badiya story hai mr raj ji ,ise contest ke bad ek long story me tabdil jarur karna
Best of luck for contest….
Thanks dr bhai for appreciation,REVIEW
STORY - एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा
WRITER- SANSKARI LARKA
LINK – https://xforum.live/threads/★☆★-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2019-entry-thread-★☆★.6804/page-2#post-697012
PLOT – Ise kahate hai short and sweet love story ,naa chikchik na jhikjhik …
Pahle paragraph ki 3ri line
वास्तव में प्रेम किसी को प्राप्त करने का नाम नही,अपितु त्याग का नाम ही सच्चे प्रेम की परिभाषा है
Is ek line me hi pure story ki definition chhupi hui hai ,
Aasha se prem aur us prem ke liye kiya gaya samarpan
Is story ke liye merits aur demerits nhi likhunga kyoki uski koi jarurt hi nhi hai ,ye ke chhoti si love story hai jo ki bahut hi gahre arth rakhti hai
NOTE FOR WRITER- sanskari bhai apki story bahut hi achhi thi ,lekin likhne me bahut kanjusi kar di thoda aur lamba kar dena tha,main manta hu ki ye story apne aap me jitani bhi hai mukamml hai lekin reders ko achank end thoda shock me daal deta ahi……
Baki emotions ke lahje se puri tarh se paripurn hai kyoki jo chij aap likh rhe ho use shabdo me bayan bhi to nhi kiya ja sakta
Best of luck for contest….
amazing update Dr Ji ,TITLE - MITTI KI KHUSHBU
LANGUAGE- HINDI
Savan ke mahine me barish ki rimjhim ke bich, aaj raam sing apne kheto ko nihaar raha tha,fasle lahraa rahi thi aur usko dekh dekh kar raam sing ka man bhi ……….
Mitti ki soundhi soundhi khushbu charo or fail rhi thi,jise raam sing gahri sanse le le kar apne naak me aur bhi gahre bhar rha tha ,isi mitti ne use janm diya hai,wo isi mitti ka beta hai ,ye uske purvajo ki mitti hai aur samne uske mehnat ki kaamai khadi thi ,uske kheto ki fasal……
Raam sing bade hi pyar se kheto ko dekh rha tha jise usne apne pasine se sincha tha ,fasal achchi aayi thi to is saal uske liye diwali bhi achchi hone wali thi …shayd isi garmi me use apne bete ke bete ko dekhne ka soubhagy bhi mil jaayega ,uski bahu garbhwati thi jiski dekhrekh raam sing apne ghr me hi kar rha tha ,shayad garmi ke dino me hi bchcha aayega ,apne bete ko yaad karke raam sing ke chahre me aayi muskan aur bhi gahraa gayi ,wo bhi to ek fasal hi tha jise usne bade hi laad pyar se bada kiya tha ..lekin uska beta akhir uska hi beta tha wo bhi uski ki hi tarh apne mitti se behad hi pyar kata tha,aur usi ki tarh usne bhi fouj join kar liya,raam sing apne ikloute bete ko indian army me nahi bejnaa chahtata tha wo to use apne hi paas rakhna chahta tha lekin kya kare akhir uska hi to khoon tha….
Raam sing is sunhare mousam ke sammohan me kho gaya tha aur use is bheeni bheeni si khusabu me apne aatit ki yaad aane lagi ,wo san 1988 tha jab usne apne pita ke manaa karne ke bawjud indian army join kar liya tha ,noukari ke ek sal bad hi san 1989 me uski sadi ho gayi aur ek sal baad hi 1990 me uske ghar ek ladka hua ,naam rkha gaya mohit ,naam ke anusar hi uska beta sabko mohit karne wala hi tha,bahut hi pyara ,sab kuch thik hi chal rha tha lekin fir may 1999 me kargil war shuru ho gaya,raam sing ko aise to chhutti mil chuki thi wo apne ghr me hi tha lekin jab usne ye khaber suni to wo apne ko rok hi nhi paaya,usne apne mitti ke hifajt ki sougandh khaai thi wo kaise ye bardsast karta ki koi uske matribhumi ki aan ko chunouti de rha hai ,wo apne pure jivan me kabhi yudhdh nhi lada tha ,apne janmbhumi par kurban hone ka ye sunhara aousar wo kaise chhod sakta tha,jab use uske adhikaari ka call aaya to wo douda douda simaa par phucha,ab wo sipahi raam sing se subedar raam sing ban chuka tha,usne apne sathiyo ke sath kamaan samhaal li ……
November ke thand me yuddh ki gahma gahmi bad rhi thi ,haddiyo ko gala dene wali thand me goliyo ke bouchchar ke bich wo daate hue the ,wo shaniwar ka din tha jab achank hi raat me goliya chalni shuru ho gai ,unhone bhi apni kmaan samhaal li aur wo sikhar fatah karne ko nikal pade ,major ranjit rana unke mukhiya the ,25 saal ke noujwan the jo desh ke liye mar mitane ko taiyar the,ranjit, raam sing ke bade hi priya the, wo uska bada hi samman karta tha ,is umra me itani kabiliyat usne abhi tak nhi dekhi thi ,25 saal ki umra me bhi wo josh aur jasba tha ki dekhte hi banata tha,jab kabhi wo akele hote to ranjit ,raam ko apne beti ki tasvir dikhata tha wo abhi abhi to janmi thi aur major ko ladai me aana pad gaya tha,lekin desh ke samne khud ke pariwar ki koi ahmiyat nhi hoti isliye to ye log sipaahi the…
Goliyo tej hone lagi to major ne raam se kha ..
“raam sing aaj to lagta hai ki hamara raat ka khana nark me hone wala hai sale dushaman to pagal ho gaye hai ..”
Is bhisan sankat ki awastha me bhi ranjit ke hotho me muskan thi jise baju me leta raam sing saaf saaf dekh sakta tha ,wo major ki bat se hans pada …
“Major sahab nark jaaye hamare dushaman ,maati ke liye marenge maati me hi mil jayenge aur fir se fasal bankar is desh ke logo ke kaam aayenge ,hamare liye to ye swarg hi hoga ..”
“Achcha yar raam sing tum bat bat par mitti mitti kyo bolte ho ..”
“Are major sahab aap engineer hai,aur ham kisaan ,hamae to mitti ki khusbu hi pasand hai ,isi mitti se to hamara pet bharta hai,naa ki aapki banaayi mashino se ..”
Raam sing ki bat sunakr rana hans pada raam sing 12vi pas tha jabki rana ne engineering ki thi uske bad exam dilakar army me aaya tha ……..
“Raam sing mai civil engineer hu ,main masine nhi banata aur aise bhi masine bhi to vikas ke liye jaruri hai na ..”
“Hongi sahab lekin bina kheto ke vikas ka kya karoge ,jab khane ke liye khana nhi rah jaayega to masino ka kya achaar daloge ,jab hawa hi dusit ho jaayegi to sans kha se loge ...sabhi karkhane milkar puri hawa hi khrab kar rhe ho pedo ko kaat rhe ho ,jangal barbad kar rhe ho aur fir ise vikas bolte ho ,major sahab kabhi dilli se hamare ganw aaiye,ham batayenge ki akhir suddh hawa kya hoti hai ..”
Raam sing aur rana ki aisi batchit aksar hua karti thi wo dono hi ek dusare ke bahut hi close the ,raam sing, ranaa se koi 6-7 saal ka bada tha lekin fir bhi dono dosto ke hi tarh rha karte the ..
Tabhi ek visphot hua wo usne kuch 5-6 miter ki duri par hi tha …
Dhadaam ………
Dono ke kaan thode der ke liye suny ho gaye the ...
“Iske maa ki ……”
Major chilaaya aur lagatar dushamn ke tarf goliya chlaa diya ..
“Shant ho jaao major shahab shanti se sochiye ,hamare jawan fanse hue hai aur madad aane me abhi samy hai,in kayaro ne andhere me,chhipakar waar kiya hai warna salo ko unki nani yad dila dete “
“Raam sing agar mujhe kuch ho jaaye to ek bat yad rakhna ,mera samaan tumhe hi mere ghar pahuchane honge,aur meri maa se kahana ki uska beta apne desh ke kaam aaya hai,unhe mere uapr garv hoga ,aur meri patni se khana ke wo roye nahi meri beti ko acchi siksha de aur use army me bharti karwaye ,ye mera sapna hai raam sing ki is desh ki ladkiya ko bhi desh ke liye ladane ka soubhagy mile... “
Major ke bato ko sunkar raam sing hastprad ho gaya tha……uski awaj tahndi ho gayi
“Major sahab ye kaisi bat kar rhe ho aap ,marenge apke dushaman aap sahi sahlamat wapas jaaoge aur apni beti ko apne god me khilaoge “
Major hans pda
“Hamare dushamn hi marenge raam sing ,main mar kha rha hu mai to shahid ho rha hu “
Major ki bat raam sing ke samjh aati usse pahle hi ek aur bamb unke pas aakar giraa aur dhadaam ..
Dono ke sharir ek sath hawa me ud gaye aur dur ja gire ,unke sath ke sabhi jawan goliya aur bamb barshane lge unhone dono ko cover kiya ,raam sing ki ankhe dhundhla si gayi thi usne ankhe kholne ki koshis ki to use thodi dur par major rana gire hue dikhe ..wo jaise taise unki or doudane ko hua lekin ye kya bamb ke dhmaake se uska ek pair buri tarh se jkhmi ho gaya tha,wo apne sharir ko ranaa ke tarf ghasitne lga ,
“Major sahb …” ek noujwan sipahi rana tak phuch chuka tha ,barf me lal rang ki chhite faili thi raam sing dur se unhe dekh raha ,
“Sir ko goliya lagi hai ..”wo noujwan sipahi chillaya
Goliya ???
Raam sing ne yaad kiya jab pahla bamb futa tha usi samay major position chhodkar khade ho gaye the aur joro ki goliyo ki barish dushamn par ki thi ,wo jab fir se raam sing ke baju me letkar apni position me aaye to unhone raam sing se aapna samaan apne ghr le jaane ki bat ki thi ..
Raam sing ko yaad aaya jo major ne kha tha ,ki main marunga nhi main to shahid hounga …
Raam sing kisi buri asanka se bhar gaya tha …
“Major sahab ………….”
Raam sing puri takt se chilaaya ,rana ne apna chahra ghmaaya uske hotho me abhi bhi mukaan hi tha ……..
2 mahine bad raam sing army ke hospital me tha,uska ek pair kaat diya gaya tha kyoki bamb ke dhmaake se wo buri tarah se jakhmi ho chuka tha, usne apni retirement ki arji bhi de di thi wo ab apne ganw me jaakr kheti karna chahta tha ….
Ek din hi hue the raam sing ko hospital se chhute hue aur wo major sahab se milne weelchair me pahuch gaya …
Rana use dekhkar muskuarne lga ..
‘Yaar raam sing lagta hai hamare nshib me shahid hona likha hi nhi hai,5 goli lagne ke bad bhi dekho jinda hu “
Patini ke jaate hi major bol pda jise sunkar raam sing ke hotho me muskan fail gai ……..
Ranjit rana ko 5 goliya lgi thi aur bamb ke karn uske sharir me kai chhote bhi aayi thi ,wo pure 15 din coma me tha ,aur abhi bhi ICU me bhi bharti tha ….major fir se bol utha
“Ye sale mujhe jaane hi nhi de rhe hai tumhe kya lagta hai ki mai fild me jaane ke layak nhi hua hu ,abhi bhi hame puri safalta nhi mili hai ,kargil hamara tha aur rahega ,main betab ho rha hu fir se waar me jaane ke liye ..”
Major ki betabi raam sing samjh sakta tha desh par sankat aaye to ek deshbhakt fouji kaise chain se baith sakta tha …
“Aap thik ho jaayenge aur mujhe ykin hai ki aap desh ki salo tak seva karenge ,maine retirement file ki hai …….”
Rana bade hi ashchary se raam sing ko dekhne laga ,raam sing ne ungali se apne pairo ki or ishara kiya aur apne pairo par dhaka hua kapda hata diya ,raana use dekhkar bilkul hi awak tha ……
“Sir mai is halt me army me nhi rah sakta lekin apne desh ki seva mai ab bhi karunga meri mitti ke garbha se fasale ugaa kar ,ek kisan ki tarh “
Raam sing ke hotho me muskaan thi ,aur uski bat sunkar ab major ranjit rana ke hotho me bhi ……..
Vartmaan me
Purani yado ko yad kar ram sing ke hotho me ek muskan aa gai thi ,use apni baisakhi uthai aur ghar ki or nikal pada ………
Usne ghar phuchte hi apna tv on kiya ,sharhad me aaj bhi goli bari ki ghabre aate rahti ti isliye wo apni bahu ko tv aur news se dur hi rakhta tha,wo nhi chahta tha ki wo chinta kare aur uska asar uske pet me pal rhe bchche par pade ,isliye usne news ki jagah music chenal laga diya ,jo gana abhi aa rha tha use sunkar raam sing aur bhi mast ho gaya tha ……
‘Ae meri zameen afsos nahi
Jo tere liye sau dard sahe
Mehfooz rahe teri aan sada
Chahe jaan meri yeh rahe na rahe
Ae meri zameen mehboob meri
Meri nas nas mein tera ishq bahe
Feeka na pade kabhi rang tera
Jismon se nikal ke khoon kahe
Teri mitti mein mil jawaan
Gull banke main khil jawaan
Itni si hai dil ki aarzu
Teri nadiyon mein beh jawaan
Teri kheton mein lehrawaan
Itni si hai dil ki aarzu’
Raam sing pure dil se gaane ko sun rha tha ki uska phon ghanghnaaya ,usne number dekha to uske chahre par ek nur bars gaya ,screen me naam tha rana sir ,unke major ranjit rana jo ab Brigadier rana ho chuke the …
“Hello sir “
Usne puri masti me kha ,aur dheere dheere uske hatho se uska mobile girta chla gaya …..
‘Ho watna ve, mere watna ve
Tera mera pyar nirala tha
Kurban hua teri asmat pe
Main kitna naseebon wala tha’
Gana ab bhi chal raha tha
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Ek din bad raam sing ke ghar ke bahar logo aur media ki bheed thi army ki do gadiya bahar khadi thi pure ghar se rone ki awaj aa rhi thi ,mohit ki biwi sadme me thi .gaanw ke log ki chhatiya garv se phuli hui thi ,wahi raam sing apne ikoute bete ki arthi ke pas baitha hua tha...uske ankho me koi bhi ansu nhi the ,lekin uski jagah kudrat ne ansu barsana shuru kar diya tha ,baris musladhaar ho gayi thi ,army ke log bhi wanha moujud the kisi ki ankho se ansu bah rhe the to kisi ke chhati garv se phule jaa rhi thi ,log baris me bheeg chuke the lekin koi wanha se nhi hatna chahta tha sabhi ganw ke is bahaddur bete ke akhri darsan ko betab the ….
Is shahid ki akhri yatra me logo ka hujum chal pada tha,sabhi tarf uski bahdduri ke kisse the ,jab mukhagni dene ke liye raam sing ko bulaya gaya to jaise wo achank hi hosh me aaya ho uske kandhe par ek hath tha wo palta samne ranjit rana khda tha ,wo naa jane kitane der se wanha moujud tha lekin raam sing ne use abhi dekha ,ya shayd abhi dekh paaya tha …….
Uske ankho se dariya bahne lge ,rana ka shakt chahra bhi aur sine me dhdkata ptthar jaisa dil bhi maano pighal gaya ho ,uski gahri ankho me nami aane lgi thi ,lekin uske samne uske sipahi khade the ,aur ek shahid ki kurbani par roya nhi jata balki garv kiya jaata hai,usne khud ko bdi hi muskil me samhala tha,lekin raam sing to ek baap tha ,wo fut pda aur rana ke gale se lag gaya …….
“Rana sir akhir mere bete ne mitti ka karj chuka diya ,jo ham aap naa kar sake wo mere bete ne kar diya ..”
Rana is baap ke bahduri par mano itra sa gaya uske sine me raam ke liye ijjat aur bhi bad gayi thi ..
“Raam sing samhalo khud ko ,tum bhi ek sipahi ho aur tumhara beta ek shahid hai ,ek shahid ki akhri bidaai aise nhi ki jaati apne ankho ko garv se bharo ,ye pratistha ki ghadi hai jo ham dono ke nasib me nhi thi ……..”
Rana ki baat sunkar raam sing unse alag hua uske hatho me jalti hui lakdi de di gai thi ,sipahi bandukh upar kar chuke the sabhi ke man me us suory ki ijjat thi jo mohit ne sima par dikhaya tha ..
Raam sing ne ke apne jigar ke tukade ko gagni di,mohit ke samman me goliya chalai gai ,raam sing fut pada tha uske ankho se maano nadiya bahne lgi thi ,maana ki wo ek sipahi tha lekin abhi wo ek baap bhi tha,ek baap jisne baishakhi par khade hokar apne bete ki chita ko gagni di thi,uski najr dur khadi apni garbhwati bahu ke upar gai jo kisi murti ki tarf bas kisi aur hi duniya me khoi hui thi …………..aur us maa ke upar najr gai jo apne bete ki chita koi dur se badhwaso ki tarh dekh rahi thi ,dur kahi se ek awaj usi gaane ki sunai di
‘Ho Heer meri tu hasti rahe
Teri ankh ghadi bhar nam na ho
Main marta tha jis mukhde pe
Kabhi uska ujala kam na ho
Ho maayi meri kya fikar tujhe
Kyun ankh se dariya behta hai
Tu kehti thi tera chaand hoon main
Aur chand hamesha rehta hai…………’
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Kuchh salo bad
Raam sing apne kheto ko nihaar rha tha ,uske majdur kheto me kaam kar rhe the ,wo subah se shaam tak kheto me hi rahta tha,use is mitti ki khusabu pasand thi, use apne kheto me lahlhate hue faslo ko dekhna pasand tha, ye use apne bete ki yad dilaate the ,uska beta ek fouji tha jisne apne khoon se is mitti ko sincha tha ,wahi raam sing ek kisaan tha wo apne psine se is mitti ko sinch rha tha ………
Dur se use kisi bchche ke hasane ki awaj aai ,uske alawa wanha moujud sabhi majduro ke chahre me ek roshani si khil gayi, uski bahu uske liye khana le kar aa rhi thi uske sath uska pota bhi tha,wo uchhal khud karte hue unki or bad rha tha ,
“Dada ji dadaji …….”
Wo bhut hi khus tha
“Are kya hai mera beta aaj itana khus hai “
Raam sing ne use god me lete hue kha
“Babuji wo rana sahab ka phon aaya tha jab se unse bat kiya hai tab se khusi se jhum rha hai .”
“Achcha ye bat hai ,batao to bhai ki akhir rana dada ne kya bola hamare bete ho .”
Wo apne pote ko dekhne lga
“Wo ………..”
Bchche ke kuch bolne se phale hi bahu bol uthi lekin fir ruk gai ..
“Kya bat hai bahu…???”
“Ji wo rana sahab apne naati randhir ko army school me dakhila dilawa rhe hai,wo chahte hai ki abhisek bhi uske sath …aapko phon karne ke liye kha hai ,lekin wo pahle abhisek se bat karna chahte the ……..”
Wo chup ho gayi ,raam sing ne apne pote abhisek ki or dekha ….randhir,ranjit rana ki beti ka ladka tha jo ki khud bhi ek army officer thi ,randhir aur abhisek dono hi lagbhag ek hi umra ke the……….
Tabhi raam sing ka mobeil ghanghnaya ,screen par rana sir likha tha ..
“Hello raam sing ,bahut ne bataya jo maine usse kha tha …??”
“Ji sir bataya lekin ………..”
Raam sing itana hi bolkar chup ho gaya tha ,rana uski khamoshi ko bhi samjh sakta tha…
“Raam sing tum jante ho ki abhisek tumhara aur mohit ka khoon hai ,tum kab tak use samjha paoge ,akhir khoon me basi hui desbhakti aaj nhi to kal bolegi hi ,’’
Raam sing kuch na kha paaya wo apni bahu ki or dekh rha tha ,wo bhi kuch kahane ki halt me nhi thi …
“Raam sing ...tumhe is mitti ki khusabu se bahut pyar hai na,jante ho ye khusabu kha se paida hoti hai ..?? ye khusabu kisano ke pasine aur jawano ke khoon se aati hai ……”
Rana ne phon kaata aur raam sing abhisek ko dekhne lga ..
“Mai bhi randhir ke sath army school jaunga ,aur apne pita ji ki tarh desh ki seva karunga ,is mitti ki seva karunga ……….”
Is bchche ki baat se wanha moujud sabhi hastprad the ,abhisek itana bolkar apne dada ji se dur hokak nachta hua kheto me chala gaya ,uske chahre me apar khusi baras rhi thi ,wo apne kheto me lahrate fasalo ke bich naach rha tha …….
Use dekhkar raam sing aur uske bahu ke ankho me paani tha aur dil me ek garv …….
Pas rkhe radio me gana baj rha tha …..
“Sarson se bhare khalihan mere
Jahaan jhoom ke bhagda paa na saka
Aabad rahe woh gaanv mera
Jahaan laut ke wapas ja na saka”
Raam sing ne abhisek ke roop me mohit ko apne kheto me nachte hue paaya tha ………….
THE END
behtareen story damaha Bhai really no words to describe
TITLE - THE LUNCH BOX STORY
LANGUAGE - HINGLISH
“sir ap jaldi se 8 lakh jama karwa de jis se ap ki Mom ka operation shuro kar de”
Nurse half ghante me teesri bar ye keh ker gayi per wo teeno kuch nahi kar pa rahe the
Apni sab savings aur rishte daro ki madad ke baad bhi sirf 3 lakh he tha in ke paas
Lekin operation shuro karne ke liya abhi bhi 5 lakh ki zarorat thi tabhi 2 ward boy aye aur un ki mama ko le ker Jane lage
“in ko ap kaha le ja rahe ho?”
Teeno bhai behno ko kuch samjh nahi aa rahi thi
Ward boy1: 30 minutes main in KA operation hai in ko operation theater le ja rahe hai
Salman(pehla beta): magar hum ne abhi fees jama nahi karwai operation kesay shuro ho sakta hai?
Wardboy2: in ki fees jama ho gayi hai
3no bhai Behan ek dusre KA muh dekhne lag gye tabhi Behan(Hareem) aage ayi
Hareem: Daikhiye in KA naam Raheela amjad hai in ki fees Abhi jama nahi huwi ap ko koi galti huwi hai
Wardboy1: daikhye in KA naam rahela amjad hai ye kal admit huwi hai...... 30 minute main in KA bypass KA operation hai..... Ab please side per ho jaye doctor sahib gussa kare gye
Phir ward boys in 3no ko side per ker ke Mrs.Raheela ke bed ko operation theater le Jane lage
Mrs.Raheela iss sab se bekhabar bed per behoosh thi
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“sister ap ke ward boys ko galti huwi hai hum ab tak apni mother ki fees jama nahi karwa sake hai........ To operation kesay ho sakta hai?”
Sharukh(teesra beta) ne us nurse se kaha jo in ko 3 bar fees KA keh gayi thi
Nurse: paper theek karte huwe) g in ki fees kuch dair pehle jama ho chuki hai....... Ap pareshan na ho
Salman: herani se) per kis ne karwai?
Nurse ne un ko ignore kia aur operation theater ki taraf Jane lagi lekin beech main Hareem aa gayi
Hareem: please bataye kis ne diye paise?
Nurse: daikhye hum sab ko sakhti se mana kia gaya hai....... Ab ap mera raasta chor de
Nurse ne Hareem ko side per kia aur aage barh gayi piche 3no bhai Behan ek dusre ko Daikhne lag gye
Lekin iss waqt ye janne se zada important in ki mother KA operation tha
Fees kis ne di ye to baad main bhi poch sakte the iss LIYE wo operation theater ke bahir khare ho gaye
2 ghante baad ek surgeon muh per mask charha ker bahir aya aur bola
Surgeon: ap ki mother KA operation successful raha aj un ko under observation rakha jaye ga kal un ko private ward main shift kar dia jaye ga
Ye keh ker surgeon aage barh gaya...... Sab ne shukar ada kia kitne din in ki maa ko hospital main rakha gaya inho ne apni puri koshis ker di fees jama karwane wale ka pata lagwane ki
Magar in ko Kuch pata na chala inho ne Mrs.Raheela ko bhi bata diya wo bhi heran thi
Itna bara ehsaan kon ker gaya? Aur saamne bhi nahi aya? Aakhir kon ho sakta hai?
Aj Mrs.Raheela ko discharge ker diya gaya salman hospital ke during jama karwane gaya to pata chala WO bhi pehle de diye gye hai jawab pehle wala
“nahi bata sakte kis ne kiye hai”
Iss ne ja ker Mrs.Raheela ko bataya to sab heran ho gye aakhir kon ker sakta hai
Lekin unho ne apna saman ikhata kia kiu ke unhe pata tha itne dino se pochne per nahi bataya to ab kia bataye gye
Unho ne ja ker saman car main rakha aur Mrs.Raheela ko hospital ke bahir laye Mrs.Raheela ne ek bar hospital ki taraf daikha
Tabhi un ki nazar hospital ke board per gayi jis ko daikh ker wo chonk gayi aur wanhi baith ker Rone lagi Aur apni purani yado main kho gayi
FLASHBACK
Mrs.raheela Amjad shuro se ek ache dil ki malik rahi un ka dil seeshe ki tarha saaf tha
In ke husband ki death ho gayi hai in ke 3 bache the 2 bare bete aur 1 choti beti
Miss raheela ki age iss waqt 38 ke kareeb thi wo ek bohat bare private school main job karti thi
In ki salary bhi achi thi aur in ke pas in ke husband ka banaya ghar tha
Mrs.raheela bohat dino se ek baat note ker rahi thi ke in ki class ka ek Larka (Arman zubair) kuch dino se lunch nahi ker raha tha to brake ke time Mrs.Raheela Arman ke paas gayi
Raheela: Arman ap lunch kiu nahi ker rahe?
Arman: madam mujhe bhook nahi hai
Mrs.raheela Arman ki baat per satisfy to nahi thi but unho ne aage kuch poucha nahi Aur aage chal pari
Mrs.Raheela ne 1 month tak Arman ko note kia aur us kai bar pocha bhi lekin har bar us ka ek he jawab hota
“Madam mujhe bhook nahi hai”
Mrs.Raheela ka us bache ko itni importance dene ki ek aur wajha thi ke us bache ne nursery se le ker ab tak top kia tha
Iss liye Mrs.Raheela ne Faisla kia ke aj wo brake ke waqt Arman se poch ker he rahe gi ke wo lunch kiu nahi karta?
Aur us ke parents ko bhi bula ker poche gi ke kia wo apne bache ko lunch de ker nahi bhejte?
Mrs.Raheela ko lag raha tha ke galti Maa baap ki hai wo apne bache ko lunch de ker he nahi bhejte..... Aur na he paise ke bacha canteen se he Kuch kha le
Ye sab baat Karne ke liye Mrs.Raheela ne brake ki bell ke baad Arman ko kaha
“Meri baat sun ker jana”
Puri class ke bahir Jane ke baad Arman Mrs.Raheela ke paas aa gya Mrs.Raheela ne ek bar Arman ko dhayan se daikha aur phir boli
Mrs.Raheela: Arman beta main ap ko 1.5 month se daikh rahi hu ap lunch nahi karte kiu?
Arman ne phir wohi jawab kaha jo wo 1.5 month se keh raha tha
“Wo madam mujhe bhook nahi hoti”
Mrs.Raheela: beta ye kaise ho sakta hai ap subha 7:00 baje nashta ker ke ate ho 12:30 tak yahan school main parhai kar ke bhi bhook nahi lage? Aur phir ap Academy bhi jaate ho jaha se ap 4:30 Ghar jate ho phir bhi ap ko bhook nahi lagti?.....Jao ja ker apna lunch box lao
Mrs.Raheela ne apna shak door Karne ke liye kaha.......unhe yaqeen tha ke Arman ke paas lunch nahi hai
Arman apni jagha se hila bhi nahi Mrs.Raheela ne kuch dair intezaar kia...... Phir ek thandi aah bhari aur Arman ko ek bar phir daikha
Mrs.Raheela: iss ka MATLAB mera shak sahi tha bulati hu tumhare parents ko itne la-parwah ke apne bache ko lunch de ker bhi nahi bhejte
Mrs.Raheela Arman ki parents ki la-parwahi ki wajha se bohat gussa ho gayi thi........Mrs.Raheela ki baat sun ker Arman ke pairo ke niche se zameen nikal gayi thi
Arman: pareshani se) madam mere paas lunch hai kasam se mere paas lunch hai
Arman jaise Rone lag gya tha aur bohat pareshan ho gya tha.....us ko itna pareshan daikh ker Mrs.Raheela bhi pareshan aur heran ho gayi
Mrs.Raheela: pyar se) acha dikhao Zara lunch box
Mrs.Raheela ke kehte he Arman bhag ker gaya aur apne bag main se lunch box nikal ker le aya
Mrs.Raheela ne lunch box khola to andar Paratha aur achar tha.........Mrs.Raheela ko samjh nahi aa rahi thi agar us ke paas lunch tha to wo karta kiu nahi tha
Mrs.Raheela: bohat pyar se) beta agar ap ke paas lunch hai to ap karte kiu nahi ho?........zada nahi to thora sa kha liya karo
Mrs.Raheela ne bohat pyar se Arman ko samjhaya
Arman: g madam main ab ker lia karo ga........bus ap mere Maa baba ko mat batana
Arman ab roansa sa ho gya tha........Mrs.Raheela ko laga koi baat zaroor hai iss liye unho ne dobara pocha,
Mrs.Raheela: acha beta nahi batao gi.......lekin ap Mujhe batao asal baat kia hai?......ap lunch karte kiu nahi ho?
Arman ne apna sir jhuka liya phir kuch dair ki khamoosi ke baad bola
Arman: madam wo sab larke mera mazak urate hai.......main sirf paratha aur Achar lata hu baki sab nuggets sandwich aur burger jaisi cheeze late hai.....iss liye nahi khata
Arman ne ab asal baat batai aur iss ke saath us ne apni aankho main aane wale ansoo saaf kiye
Mrs.Raheela ko Arman per bohat pyar aya un ka dil kia ke Wo Arman ko gale laga le.....phir wo Arman ke sir per haath pher ker pyar se boli
Mrs.Raheela: beta ap apni mama se kaho wo ap ko kuch aur bana ker diya kare
Mrs.Raheela ne bohat pyar se Arman ko suggestion diya
Arman: main ne 2 saal pehle kaha tha......mujhe nahi paratha le ker Jana sab mazak urate hai
Arman ne bohat masoomiyat se kaha
Mrs.Raheela: phir
Mrs.Raheela ko bhi ab interesting lag rahi thi baat iss LIYE wo aage pochna chahti thi
Arman ne ek nazar apni teacher ko daikha....... phir dobara sir jhuka liya
Arman: phir kuch dino baad meri api ne mujh se kaha......wo 11th class me jati hai jab 12th class clear ker le gi to wo colony ke bacho ko tuition parhaya kare gi..... phir jaisa lunch main kaho ga waisa API bana diya kare gi........ Per tab tak main Ami ko keh du bread kabab, nuggets, roll, khane se mera pait kharab hota hai........
Arman abhi baat ker he raha tha ke Mrs.Raheela ne us ki baat beech main kat ker pocha
Mrs.Raheela: per ap ki Behan ne aisa kia kaha.......
Arman: kiu ki jab se mama ne mujhe bread, nuggets wagaira lunch me dene shuro kiye tab se baba 2 ki bajaye raat ko 3 baje ghar aane lag gye...... madam mere baba ek Clark hai.....wo din main office jate hai aur raat ko taxi chalate hai...... Iss LIYE ke mujhe private school main parha sake aur fees ke saath book uniform aur Academy ke kharche utha sake...... Mere ek lunch ki wajha se wo 1 ghanta late aane lag gye........ Jab ke unhe subha 7:00 baje jagna parta tha office Jane ke liye...... Iss LIYE api ne kaha ke iss tarha baba ki tabiyat kharab ho jaye gi.... Iss LIYE main mama se keh du mujhe ye lunch na de..... Aur jab wo 12th clear ker Le gi to mere lunch ke liya paise bana liya kare gi...... To main ne mama se wohi KEH diya ..... Pehle bhi main he sirf private school se parha hu Aur Academy gaya hu meri behne to government school main parhti hai....... Mere lunch ke liya baba ko neend Ki qurbani deni per rahi thi jo Mujhe acha nahi lag raha tha..... To main ne mama se keh diya ke mujhe ye sab nahi khana
Arman ne aj apne andar ki sab baate bahir nikal di
Mrs.Raheela: to kia ab tak ap ki api ki 12th clear nahi huwi?
Mrs.Raheela ko Arman ki baato main interest barhta ja raha tha....wo aur janna chah rahi thi iss LIYE unho ne agla sawal kia
Arman: 12th to unho ne last year clear ker diya tha...... Aur pata hai unho ne pure board main top kia tha....... Iss ne baba se kaha ke iss ko canent college main admission karwa de jo bohat mehnga college hai........ Kuch fees wo scholar ship se de gi kuch wo tuition parha de gi baba per bojh nahi bane gi.....phir aakhir baba us ke bhi to baba hai na......aur iss ne kia bhi top tha to baba ne Api ka admission canent college main karwa diya....... Aur jab un ko pehli tuition fees mili to unho ne mujh se kaha........ Chalo Arman ab jo tum kaho gye wo hum le ker aye gye phir wohi tum lunch main le ker Jana ab mera bhai paratha achar nahi khaye ga api bohat khush lag rahi thi........ Lekin main ne unhe mana ker dia aur kaha api kasam se wo bazar ki cheezo se mera pait dard karta hai...... Waise bhi ab main bari class main aa gya hu ab mera koi mazak nahi urata ab main paratha kha ker ata hu........ Madam ap ko pata hai main ne aisa kiu kaha
Mrs.Raheela: dilchaspi se) kiu kaha
Arman: kiu ke ek din main ne Api ko choti api se kehte suna un ke college main bohat ameer larkiya parhti hai un ke paas bohat mehnagi cheeze hoti hai....... Api bhi tuition ke paiso se kuch le sakti thi waise bhi lunch itna zaroori to nahi tha to main ne Api ko bhi mana ker dia....... Waise bhi last year tak usman mera dost tha wo mere LIYE aksar lunch le ata tha........ Iss ki mama mere LIYE bohat maze ka lunch bana ker deti thi......iss ke baba ki posting dusri city ho gayi hai iss LIYE wo chala gya..... Phir mujhe naya dost mila he nahi...... Waise madam acha huwa wo chala gya......
Arman kuch udasi se bola...... Lekin Mrs.Raheela ko us ki akhri baat ki samjh nahi ayi ke dost ka Jana acha kiu huwa
Mrs.Raheela: acha kiu huwa.....AP ka dost ap ke saath rehta to zada acha nahi tha
Mrs.Raheela ne Detail me pocha......Arman ne ek thandi aah bhari aur bola
Arman: iss tarha se to bohat acha tha wo mera best friend tha...... Lekin jab bhi wo mere LIYE lunch lata tab bhi kuch larke tang karte the....... Ohhh aj phir usman Arman ke liya lunch laya hai....... Khao khao..... Maa baap gareeb hai to kia huwa dost to ameer hai...... Mera dil dukhta tha bohat bar main khana chor deta tha...... Lekin usman ke kehne per phir kha leta........ Madam mere mama baba gareeb nahi hai bus un ke paas paise thore kam hai..... Mere baba kehte hai ek din mere Arman doctor bane ga aur mujhe yaqeen hai main un ka khawaab pura karo ga.... Is LIYE mera dil karta tha usman kahi chala jaye phir koi mere mama baba ko gareeb nahi bole ga.......
Wo Larka apne har rishte ko le ker itna hassas tha itni Ahmiyat thi us ko Rishto ki ye daikh ker Mrs.Raheela ki Ankho main bhi ansoo aa gye
Mrs.Raheela: lekin beta ap lunch to karte nahi ap ki api ya mama ap ka lunch box check nahi karti?...... Aur pochti nahi ke lunch kiu nahi kia?
Arman: muskara ker) madam main apni van main lunch ker leta hu..... Iss van main sab paratha he le ker jate hai iss LIYE koi mera mazak nahi urata iss tarha Ami ko pata bhi nahi chalta ke main ne school main lunch nahi kia.....
Arman ne fakhar se kaha Mrs.Raheela ko Arman ki iss ada per bohat pyar aya...... Saath he break khatam hone ki bell baj gayi
Mrs.Raheela: chalo baki baate phir kabhi ker le gye
Arman bhi wapis ja ker apni chair per baith gaya....... Baki din normal guzra
Mrs.Raheela Arman ki soch se bohat attract huwi wo iss ke liya kuch karna chahti thi
Mrs.Raheela apne ghar aa gyi lekin Arman ki baate in ke dil se nikal he nahi rahi thi wo iss ke liya kuch karna chahti thi
Mrs.Raheela: in her mind) agar main Arman ke liya lunch bana diya karo..... Magar iss se to usman ka lunch nahi nahi ye theek nahi hoga
Wo bohat se kayal apne man main LA rahi thi phir un ke dimagh main ek idea aya
NEXT DAY
Brake se kuch dair pehle gate keeper ne class ke door per knock kia
Gate keeper: Arman zubair ke liya lunch aya hai
Arman herani se apni bench se utha aur ja ker lunch box le liya lunch bohat maze ka tha Arman pura kha gya
Phir ye roz ki baat ho gayi roz brake se pehle gate keeper Arman ko lunch de jata
Arman pura lunch kha leta yahan tak Arman ne 12th ke bhi paper de diye...... Is ne apni Behan Ki tarha board me top kia
12th tak wo lunch box Ata raha wo band nahi huwa Mrs.Raheela retire ho gayi
Mrs.Raheela andar he andar sochti ke kabhi Arman ne gate keeper se pocha kiu nahi wo lunch kis ne diya....... Jab ke Mrs.Raheela ka khayal tha Arman usi din ja ker ghar poche ga lunch kis ne bheja jab us ko pata chale ga ghar se KISI ne lunch nahi bheja to wo agle din Gate keeper se pocha ga nahi to lunch he nahi le ga....... Mrs.Raheela ne socha tha jab aisa hoga tab daikha jaye ga
Lekin Arman ne aisa Kuch nahi kia iss se ulta wo lunch ker ke chuti time lunch box gate keeper ko de jata
Mrs.Raheela sochti thi ke wo kia sochta hoga ke ye lunch kon de ker jata hai?.......
Magar ab WO ye kis se pochti ye sab...... 12th clear Karne ke baad USS ka medical college main Admission ho gya hai ye WO he sab ko bata ker gaya phir wo kabhi school nahi aya Mrs.Raheela Arman ko yad karti aur bus Us ke liya dua kar deti
PRESENT
Aj Mrs.Raheela ki Rone ki wajha ye thi kiu ke board per likha huwa tha (HEART SPECIALIST ARMAN ZUBAIR) Ye parhte he Mrs.Raheela ke saamne itne saalo ki baate aa gayi
Hareem: kia huwa mama?
Mrs.Raheela: mujhe doctor Arman se milna hai
Hareem: kiu?
Mrs.Raheela: gusse se) jo kaha hai wo karo
Phir 3no Mrs.Raheela ko andar le ker gye aur reception per ja ker doctor Arman KA pocha
Receptionist: muskara ker) wait a moment sir
3no ko receptionist ki muskrahat ki wajha samjh nahi ayi
Receptionist ne Doctor Arman se phone per baat ki Doctor Arman ne unhe kamre main baithne ko kaha
Nurse unhe doctor Arman ke cabin main le gayi wo 4ro wahan baith gaye
5 minute baad Doctor Arman kamre main aya ek Handsome sa doctor the doctor Arman
Arman aage aya aur Mrs.Raheela ke pairo main baith gaye ye daikh ker un ke 3no bache heran ho gaye
Mrs.Raheela ne Doctor Arman ke sir per haath rakha
Mrs.Raheela: ye mera student tha....... Lekin beta mujh per itna bar ehsaan kiu?
3no Behan Bhai ab bhi heran thi
Arman: muskara ker) pehle to ap ne mera introduction adhoora karwaya hai....... Main in ki class KA student nahi main in ki class KA wo student hu jin ko ye class 12th tak lunch bana ker deti rahi hai
Mrs.Raheela Arman ki iss baat se chonk gayi iss KA MATLAB wo janta tha
Mrs.Raheela: per tumhe kaise pata?
Arman: madam class two me main ne lunch karna chora tha us ke baad ap ki class tak kisi teacher ne nahi pocha ke AP lunch kiu nahi karte........ Us din ap ne pocha agle din lunch aa gya madam baat ye hai hum kis class Ki family se belong karte hai hamari class ke bacho ko halat bohat jald samjh aa jate hai........ Main bhi samjh gaya tha pehle din lunch aya to bohat bhook lagi thi iss LIYE Aram se kha gaya phir ghar ja ker puri raat socha ap ko kaise roku....... Phir socha bara ho ker sab paise wapis ker du ga jo ap ne lunch per lagaye....... Pata hai madam 1st day se le ker last day tak ke lunch ka hisaab aj bhi mere paas hai...... Aur wo paise the 62 thousand 4 hundred and 75 rupees
Arman paise bata ker ek bar muskaraya aur phir bola
Arman: jab bhi ap lunch deti to us din bakery se ja ker us khane ke paise poch ker ghar jaye ker dairy main date ke saath note ker leta...... Lekin jaise jaise waqt guzra samjh aa gayi puri duniya ki dolat bhi LA ker ap ko de di to lunch ke paise nahi chuka pao ga......... Kiu ki us lunch ki keemat 62 thousand 4 hundred 75 rupees nahi the us ki keemat wo mohabat thi jis se ap khana banati thi jis ki keemat puri duniya ki dolat se zada thi........ Bus iss ke baad main ne us lunch ki keemat dene ka sochna band ker dia...... Bus dua karta tha kabhi mujh ko aisa moka mile ke main ap ki madad ker saku.......... Us din ap ko daikha to foran pehchaan liya nurse ne bataya ke AP ki fees jama nahi huwi to mujhe laga mujhe wo moka mil gaya hai...... Aur jaha tak baat hai saamne na aane ki to ap ne bhi to gatekeeper ko mana kia tha ap ka naam na batane ke liye
Ye keh ker Arman ne ek baar Mrs.Raheela ki taraf daikha aur phir apna sir un ki goad main rakh liya
Mrs.Raheela ki Ankho main ansoo aa gye unho ne Arman ko apne gale se laga liya
Arman bhi ab bohat sakoon mehsoos ker raha tha
Hareem: muskara ker) acha to ap hai wo jin ke liye mama lunch le ker jati thi main bhi Socho mama itna kab se khane lagi
Hareem ki iss baat pee sab hans diye Aur Arman ne ek aisi baat kahi ke sab ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya
Arman: Hareem will you marry me
Arman ki iss baat per sab herani se Arman ko Daikhne lag gye
Arman: Aise kia daikh rahe hai sab kabhi to main ne shadi karni hai aur mujhe Hareem pasand bhi hai aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai Hareem ki shadi bhi nahi huwi aur iss tarha mujhe saas ke roop main ek maa mil jaye gi to kia main apne parents ko bhejo ap ke Ghar
Mrs.Raheela ne kuch pal socha phir Arman ke sir per haath pher kar han main sir hila diya
Hareem sharma ker bahir chali gayi aur mahool bohat acha ho gya
Phir 1 month baad engagement ho gayi aur 2 month baad shadi
♠ THE END ♠
YE EK NON-EROTIC STORY HAI YE STORY KE SAATH SAATH EK LESSON BHI HAI JO HUM SAB KO SHIKATA HAI (KAR BHALA SOO HO BHALA) HUM KISI KE SAATH ACHA KARE TO HAMARE SAATH BHI ACHA HOGA WAQT ZAROOR LAGE GA PER HOGA ACHA HE
Aansu Baha Baha Ke Bhi Hote Nahi kam Sahab,
Kitni Amer Hoti Hai Aankhe Gareeb ki
Hum ko apne bacho ko sikhana chahiye kisi ka bhi mazak na banaye ulta un ki aisi madad kare ke ek haath se kam kia to dusre ko pata bhi na chale
Bacho ko kia sikhana aj kal to bare bhi yehi karte hai to ye ek lesson hai puri duniya ke liye Ap ke pyare Dost Ahmad ki taraf se
SHUKRIYA
