Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

अपडेट पोस्टेड - एक मेगा अपडेट, जोरू का गुलाम - भाग २३९ -बंबई -बुधवार - वॉर -२ पृष्ठ १४५६

कृपया पढ़ें, आनंद लें, लाइक करें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[komaalrani]

Are ram itti english

JKG ke pahale aur English Version ke baare men post thi, isliye aangl bhasha ka paryog kiya , varana main to BHOJPURI vaali hun, angreji se koyi rshta nahi hai

 

[komaalrani]

JKG ke raste men mushkile hamesha padti hai aaj ek do din se jaise main forum pe koyi naya tab kholti hun

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ye kuch khul jaata hai


dosoara kuch change hua hoga ya shayad adds ke chakkar men mera ani-virus kaspeksky maidan men aa jaata hai aur tab kholne nahi deta.


main shikyat vaale thread men likha, LOUNGE men ek shikayat Peti tangi thi vahan bhi dal diya ki moderator log vahin chaakar kaatte najar aate hain to vahin kuch nidaan baatye, it is testing my patience, like karo to poochata hai kya aap vastava men like karte ho jaise Cpatcha bharne me ek bot poochata hai kya aap admi ho ? Mushkil hai

 

[komaalrani]

Aaap computer ke Gunijan gyaani aur forum ke jimmedar log kuch samjahayen kaise bachen in sab se

 

[pprsprs0]

Thanks so much, at least somebody remembered monologue, i really liked that part and it was a sort of finale, but in Hindi version i had deleted monologue as it was more of feminist orientation of this story and was providing a sort of rationale for the story. English version was only in 200 pages ( in MS word) but H Hindi has gone beyond a 1000 and more.

JKG was inspired by number of factors and the first trigger was a story of incestbi, which i read first in BDSM library, the perverted Indian wife . Of course story was published by somebody else without attributing it to original writer. In one of the forum a friend of mine directed me towards original story and writer. I exchanged a few mails with the author of that story ( Incestbi) but the story was incomplete. And first time i had seen a femdom story in Indian Social milieu. so that triggered this story with light femdom and sisifciation and for that i not only red a lot of about bdsm and femdom ( kajira and other things) but also visited alt and other such sites , looked into chat rooms ( it features in this story) .

I think there will be only a handful readers who will recall JKG in the original format. But i am thinking of resposting it in English part of this forum ( no pics , just Jas ka tas and in 20 parts, two parts a week type)

please do share your opinion.

and for special dinner, yes it was in the Hindi version and very elaborate recipe . I am planning to share a glimpse after a few episodes.

Kasam se ye to aisa lag raha hai independence ke pehle ki baat ho gayi

 

[pprsprs0]

Aaap computer ke Gunijan gyaani aur forum ke jimmedar log kuch samjahayen kaise bachen in sab se

Phone ke liye brave ya duck duck go browser is enough but not sure for PC

 

[anvesharonny]

Thanks so much, at least somebody remembered monologue, i really liked that part and it was a sort of finale, but in Hindi version i had deleted monologue as it was more of feminist orientation of this story and was providing a sort of rationale for the story. English version was only in 200 pages ( in MS word) but H Hindi has gone beyond a 1000 and more.

JKG was inspired by number of factors and the first trigger was a story of incestbi, which i read first in BDSM library, the perverted Indian wife . Of course story was published by somebody else without attributing it to original writer. In one of the forum a friend of mine directed me towards original story and writer. I exchanged a few mails with the author of that story ( Incestbi) but the story was incomplete. And first time i had seen a femdom story in Indian Social milieu. so that triggered this story with light femdom and sisifciation and for that i not only red a lot of about bdsm and femdom ( kajira and other things) but also visited alt and other such sites , looked into chat rooms ( it features in this story) .

I think there will be only a handful readers who will recall JKG in the original format. But i am thinking of resposting it in English part of this forum ( no pics , just Jas ka tas and in 20 parts, two parts a week type)

please do share your opinion.

and for special dinner, yes it was in the Hindi version and very elaborate recipe . I am planning to share a glimpse after a few episodes.

I have no problem if you post original jkg in this forum but you will not receive much appreciation.The taste of this forum is very different they prefer incest stories more and hardly visits any other forums.and I think the original story is available on other forum so i don't think most people would interested in reading it.
I think you should add such monologue in Hindi version it was the best part of the story. Eagerly waiting for guddi's journey update.

 

[Luckyloda]

JKG ke pahale aur English Version ke baare men post thi, isliye aangl bhasha ka paryog kiya , varana main to BHOJPURI vaali hun, angreji se koyi rshta nahi hai

Chal jhuthi

 

[komaalrani]

Chal jhuthi

Sacchi, ham to bhojpuri vaali angreji ekdam nahi.....tohar kiriya,

 

[komaalrani]

I have no problem if you post original jkg in this forum but you will not receive much appreciation.The taste of this forum is very different they prefer incest stories more and hardly visits any other forums.and I think the original story is available on other forum so i don't think most people would interested in reading it.
I think you should add such monologue in Hindi version it was the best part of the story. Eagerly waiting for guddi's journey update.

I fully agree but i am aware about this issue, anything with INCEST tag in the story is likely to garner million eyeballs just because of the tag,... and erotica is shunned, in the erotica category there are only three stories which have more than 1 million views ( two of them are mine , this one and mohe rang de) but in the incest tag there are dozens and dozens.

I am not aware about any forum where they had published my original version. You need not give the link but may be can share the name if moderators permit and they dont permit they will certainly delete it . So i have a handful of readers but they are my friends and lovers of this genre. I have nothing against incest as a genre but preference of most of the readers as you mentioned is clear. Now, after your suggestion, may be as i am reaching here the place where monologue happened and i too like that, so may be i will share it in this story itself, ( not as a part of story but with a footnote and history and i am sure my readers will appreciate it. ) Thanks again. But meanwhile my story is being threatened by some problem in this forum which i had mentioned before and i use a lappy with a very convoluted way of writing. I type in google internet tools in Hindi save in MS word, check it and then from there after opening this forum transfer it from MS word and if their are some suggestions and i want to incorporate again i make changes. I have created a library of jpg,png and gif ( mostly non-erotic) and from there pic pictures to add.


and i am not very smart in typing on smart phones so please have a look

 

[komaalrani]

Phone ke liye brave ya duck duck go browser is enough but not sure for PC

main lappy use karti hun aur bina anti-virus ke nahin operate karti