Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[motaalund]

एकदम, उनका एच आर मोहकमा वो खुद सम्हालती है, कस्टमर रिलेशनशिप भी।

आखिर कस्टमर को उचित सर्विस मिलेगी तभी तो वो दुबारा आएगा....
और इसके लिए HR का जबरदस्त इंटरव्यू और सही सेलेक्शन बहुत जरुरी है....

 

[motaalund]

बात आपकी भी सही है, क्योंकि पिछली बार कहानी फोरम के बंद होने पर रह गयी थी , और मिसेज मोइत्रा और उनके रसगुल्ले और इस प्रकार की बहुत सी बातें रह गयीं थीं। फायनेंसियल थ्रिलर वाला पार्ट भी जल्दी में ही , तो हो सकता है वो हिस्सा अबकी और लम्बा चले,...

नेकी और पूछ-पूछ, कुछ थीम के साथ कहानी बढ़ती है तो पढने का मजा कई गुना बढ़ जाता है....

 

[motaalund]

चलिए आपने कहा है तो छुटकी ननदिया पे उनके भाई के चढ़ने की तैयारी के प्रसंग की झलक, एक आभास सा , एक दो पोस्ट के बाद पोस्ट कर दूंगी, कुछ अंदाज लग जाएगा।

बेसब्री से इंतजार रहेगा.....

 

[motaalund]

Ye Kaam sahi kiya Diya ne.... beshak jethani kitni bhi buri sahi par hai to Ghar Ki hi randi....


Jab kisi chij ki achi keemat mil sakti hai to free m Q deni wo.... jethani ka kafi bhala karwa diya Diya ne......



Aur aage bhi karati rahegi

अब मोटे-मोटे भाला करवाएगी.....

 

[motaalund]

Akhir Nanad ki bhi to Kuch jimmedari hoti hai naa, aur DIYA bahoot jimmedar nanad hai, Jethani ji ke saath unki chhoti chhoti kunwari bahnon ki bhi jimeedari vo le rahi hai, unhe jethani se bhi do haath aage nikaalne ke liye

हाँ... अभी नगमा और जेठानी जी की बहन वगैरह को भी तो सबक सिखाना है...
और ये काम दिया से अच्छा और कौन कर सकता है....

 

[motaalund]

Bhut achi NAND hai DIYA too

अच्छी भी और कमाल की भी..
उसके पास हर चीज का तोड़ है...
और हरेक तोड़ का जोड़ भी.....

 

[motaalund]

Thanks so much, at least somebody remembered monologue, i really liked that part and it was a sort of finale, but in Hindi version i had deleted monologue as it was more of feminist orientation of this story and was providing a sort of rationale for the story. English version was only in 200 pages ( in MS word) but H Hindi has gone beyond a 1000 and more.

JKG was inspired by number of factors and the first trigger was a story of incestbi, which i read first in BDSM library, the perverted Indian wife . Of course story was published by somebody else without attributing it to original writer. In one of the forum a friend of mine directed me towards original story and writer. I exchanged a few mails with the author of that story ( Incestbi) but the story was incomplete. And first time i had seen a femdom story in Indian Social milieu. so that triggered this story with light femdom and sisifciation and for that i not only red a lot of about bdsm and femdom ( kajira and other things) but also visited alt and other such sites , looked into chat rooms ( it features in this story) .

I think there will be only a handful readers who will recall JKG in the original format. But i am thinking of resposting it in English part of this forum ( no pics , just Jas ka tas and in 20 parts, two parts a week type)

please do share your opinion.

and for special dinner, yes it was in the Hindi version and very elaborate recipe . I am planning to share a glimpse after a few episodes.

There are many discerning readers of your story.
You have a born writing skill and presentation in local dialect.
However why those readers are commenting on your story is beyond my comprehension.
I request at least all the viewers of the story to post a line or two about your perception on the story.
Ms Komal will reply (as she always clarify on many queries raised) on your opinion too.

 

[motaalund]

Are ram itti english

Those who are good reader will be good writer.
Without reading you can not write even a paragraph..
I think Komal Rani is a greedy reader of many text on so many languages, that is why she has command over such language.
Apart from that she must be nice person, that is why she is able to feel the emotion of others and the same are expressed in her story telling.

 

[motaalund]

JKG ke raste men mushkile hamesha padti hai aaj ek do din se jaise main forum pe koyi naya tab kholti hun

https://syndication.realsrv.com/

ye kuch khul jaata hai


dosoara kuch change hua hoga ya shayad adds ke chakkar men mera ani-virus kaspeksky maidan men aa jaata hai aur tab kholne nahi deta.


main shikyat vaale thread men likha, LOUNGE men ek shikayat Peti tangi thi vahan bhi dal diya ki moderator log vahin chaakar kaatte najar aate hain to vahin kuch nidaan baatye, it is testing my patience, like karo to poochata hai kya aap vastava men like karte ho jaise Cpatcha bharne me ek bot poochata hai kya aap admi ho ? Mushkil hai

ये तो हमें भी मिल रहा है.....
मतलब वेब पेज रीडायरेक्ट हो रहा है...
लेकिन इसका हल मैंने ये निकाला है कि... तीन बार रीडायरेक्ट होने के बाद .. ये फिर से नॉर्मल काम करता है.... और अगले पांच मिनट तक काम करता है....
उसके बाद फिर से परेशान करता है... फिर वही क्रिया दोहरा देता हूँ....

 

[motaalund]

Aaap computer ke Gunijan gyaani aur forum ke jimmedar log kuch samjahayen kaise bachen in sab se

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