Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

Spoiler: INDEX

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Aakash.]

It is understood that you have taken some characters of the story from earlier stories and because of Meghnath's box which has the power of Egyptian gods Shreyas has been able to move from present to past and from one dimension to another, his story was very interesting and Shreyas said is this Sabharwal Mansion and Aarohi said no maybe this haveli is Sabharwal Mansion I think so.

What was happening with Aarohi till now is also well understood, Aarohi can see past and future in present or she is trapped in illusion of time, I have seen many such movies. Story is connected from one generation to another, from one dimension to another, from one time loop to another and with it the supernatural. Wow.

What is the relation of this story with the story of Shreyas I did not understand anything, now you have told so deeply, so there must have been some relation and he died in another dimension, so he was in the realm of the devil? and how does he know Aarohi maybe he came from the multiverse where everything is the same here. Lastly, the book that is mentioned is mentioned earlier in the story but where i can't remember it right now.

I was very excited to read today's update as there was an expectation that the mystery will be solved, if not much then just a little so that we can understand something but again my mind got confused. harshit1890 why are you trying to complicate the story so much, write a simple story with my sweet and innocent Aarohi and me and just love. ​

 

[harshit1890]

Girls Hostel​

By harshit1890 aka hariya kaka ​

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Review on Chapter 1 ~ " Supriya " and Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "

Trying to give review after a long time if there is any mistake then ignore it. At first I didn't understand then later I understood that the story is going on in two different time frames. Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 are related to each other, when we understand both the chapters together everything makes sense, your method is a bit complicated but it is necessary to understand carefully and I liked your style.

Story started in a simple way it was interesting to know what girls talk about in private, especially for those who were in the boys' school from beginning to end, Not much difference. The fun of hostel is different those who have lived they know. You have created the atmosphere of the story very well, I liked it.

Main character Supriya or Aarohi both are weird but her innocent actions and loveliness touch my heart, Hariya kaka make my entry in the story I will fall in love with her. There is a tharki in all groups and Megha or Shruti is playing this role in this group. Some scenes were very scary like the night of the ruins and the scene of Shruti and Aarohi in the hostel was scary and I read the story at night so there is some problem. Along with all this, there is a confluence of comedy in the story that you have shown it very well, it seems that everything is happening before our eyes. maybe that's why I have not got bored till now and read 2 chapters in a single day.

The past and present are the same only the names and faces have changed, not much information was found in Supriya's time but everything is understandable in Aarohi, if it all happened with Aarohi the matter was different but when the incident happened that night also with Shruti So now I feel that everything is true. Jokes are good only to an extent otherwise the results are very wrong perhaps that's why Tanu and Lavanya died. There is a lot of suspense in the story, mind wanders.

Initially when Lavanya was taking ragging, Aarohi talked about periods and was scared, now understand what she wanted to say, river of blood flowing. In all this I am not able to connect Raveena's link with the story, how can she be Supriya's friend, she was already dead and everything became strange only after knowing in the ruins, one thing I also found strange Aarohi's parents have not come to college even once and there is hardly any talk on the phone, it seems that Aarohi is lying and Shruti also lied in front of everyone, the idea of the bathroom was hers and Raveena's death also happened there.

I still don't understand one thing, many times it happens or I have heard that person remembers about his past birth or is it reincarnation or whether Supriya's soul inside Shruti or Shruti is a psychic The patient who creates his own stories. After all, why is all this happening, why repeating itself





Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story. I will try to get to the current update soon.​

Sabse pehle to bhai ne jaisa kaha vaisa kiya.. i mean kaha tha ki thde din mein aunga aur aa hi gaye Uske baad itni jaldi ek saath mein puri kahani padh bhi dali this will require huge amount of time
Jisne kahani ke pehle do chapter bhanp liye uske liye aage bhi kahani samjhne mein asani hogi.. Apko thoda sa correct kr dun taki apko clear rahe.. Supriya is Aaruhi and Aaruhi is Supriya as per first 2 chapters.. As shruti told ... jo usne kahani Nandini ke samne batai... Baki aage apko clear ho hi jayegi...

Funda Girls Hostel likhne ka yahi hai hamesha se ki main ya fir hum sab .. kahani ke us hisse ko pade jahan ladkiyan chugliyan karti hai... ya fir mze leti hai.. maybe its 50% reality in it but 50% bhi bht hta hai..

There is 2 Raveena as per story, FIrst is made up by supriya jo ki uski friend thi.. dusri raveena vo jisne hostel ke bathroom mein Suicide kiya tha... Mix up hai.. dont be confused.. iska funda mostly kahani mein clear hai.. aage bhi ho jayega...

Repeating in the manner is necessary... kahani wahan lambi ho gayi.. par agar repeat nahi hti to end justify nahi krta kahani ka... fir readers ke mind mein aata ki writer ne made up end diya aur kahani ko starting mein uljha kar rakha...

Thanks aakash bhai.. its a treat to see ur review...

 

[harshit1890]

Review on Chapter ~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia and "Chapter ~ 4 " A True Face "


In the first two chapters Aarohi was playing the lead role and in the latter two chapters it would not be wrong to say that Shruti is playing the lead role. Everyone is trying to solve this mystery together one side wants to help Aarohi and other side wants to know what is the reason behind the happenings in college but the more we try to solve it the more complicated it becomes.

Everything is normal in some updates but some updates like update number 60 are full of such visuals and intensity and thrill which I get completely engrossed while reading. Movie was mentioned in the story "The Exorcism of Emily Rose, I love watching horror stories and movies from the beginning and this movie was also very good, almost I have seen many movies of this genre till now.

Some questions are yet to be answered like in Chapter 3, Meghnath wanted to tell something about Aarohi but don't we know it yet, Aarohi lies in many things, why, there is a new one named soul in the story, We don't know much about him and Aarohi used to talk with him. Debu stole and there he worked for many years it never happened and his last meeting was with Aarohi, it seems a bit strange and that new guy who has come to work instead of Debu saw Aarohi in the bathroom because her hair is very long and she has an old relation with blood and after a day the same thing happened, I don't understand what was happening and why was this happening and it is not right to directly refute Gagan's words. On that day when Aarohi did not have mobile, who had called on Shruti's mobile and who was Shruti's place in the bathroom or Aarohi had put her mobile on speaker and kept it in the bathroom. Nothing is even known about the secret library, who is behind that wall?

There were two scenes in the story which I found very difficult to read, the first scene in which Ruby is forced by the father-son and the second scene in which forcibly done wrong with Manpreet, I do not want to tell whose fault it is or not but Whatever happened was very wrong, any such event in life has a very deep effect on the mind and people start praising what they see whether it is true or false it doesn't matter to them.

Everyone is thinking Aarohi is crazy but I don't think so and she is sweet Aarohi herself is such a mystery that till date no one has understood and my favorite character I love her changed behavior nowadays but I still think we are misunderstood, Is there a double role of Aarohi in this story I mean there are two Aarohi in the story and we don't even know There was also a scene in which Aarohi got angry what to say now seeing her angry, I love him even more but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

Shruti has taken full responsibility as a friend and cares only that matters, at present Shruti is feeling more upset than Aarohi or she has changed with time her desperation for director meeting proves this, this detective character is suiting her otherwise she just talks dirty throughout the day.

Sometimes it seems that there are so many secrets in the story but no one cares, the people in the meeting mean more than death about college prestige and money and maybe that's why they are denying the camera. People's are dying for so many years, something terribly wrong is going on there. Vandana's name came up in that meeting and I have already heard this name from Aarohi's mouth.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. ​

That Soul maybe eberyone missed it.. apne pakad liya.. Let c uska kya funda hai... Ya sirf Aaruhi khel rahi hai... ya sirf uljhane ke liye kahani hai uski... Bhai debu ki kahani ka kya hua agar ek hiint dun to uska link up first chapter se hai filal itna hi bata sakta hun... Secondly jo bathroom wala scene tha vo same day par hua tha.. jab bihari peon ne bataya tha same night ko aaruhi ke sath aisa hua tha jiska khulasa humne update - 90 mein kiya hai aisa kyun... ho raha hai

Aarohi did not have mobile, who had called on Shruti's mobile and who was Shruti's place in the bathroom or Aarohi had put her mobile on speaker and kept it in the bathroom

I hope iska jawab mein kuch clearance hua hoga.. agar nahi hua to kahani aage abhi aur bhi tarah se samjhaye jayegi to clear ho jayega

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

Aaruhi ne jo naam Vandana bataya vo kyun... kya wajah thi.. iska jawab to ab apko aage hi milega.. many things in story is not being unfolded.. let c...

Thank you so much akash bhai... I am trying .. Ki kahani padte time hamesha ye sawal rahe dimag mein ki aage kya hoga? Thanks a lot

 

[harshit1890]

Chapter ~ 5 " The Antiquarian "

Update ~ 81 to Update ~~ 88


If my guess is correct then the story is in its final stages and I thought maybe this story will end by reaching my current update but it didn't happen I am so glad it is much more than that, That because of you I was able to read such a beautiful story.

Now coming to the story, I told from the beginning that what you see is not what you see and I used to consider Aarohi innocent from the beginning and still think that even if there is any mistake of her, I will call her innocent because she is very sweet and she is innocent, just seeing her makes me fall in love, Not a single character in the story has understood her except me, she is like a rose flower. Meghnath said that Aarohi does not have much time, I am very worried because of her it is not known when the journey of this story has passed. I am warning you that if anything happens to her...

Shruti and her friends are unable to understand what is the meaning of Aarohi's profile photo symbol, we will try to understand if at least share the photo with us in the update. Rachna said to Shruti, you have to go after four years that means let whatever is happening happen and you sit with your blindfold on, I didn't like her answer and I will break her head. Chutiya

Now coming to Meghnath, maybe this is the same boy who does black magic, Ruby said, Well through this the secret of the library came out for which I was curious, I understand why Meghnath is involved in this story, but I can't believe it, I still have to believe because there is no other option, his Egyptian box story was very interesting, Whatever is happening now is supernatural, so what will happen next cannot be predicted. harshit1890 Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank you...​

Bhai socha to mene bhi yahi tha ki kahani jaldi nipat jayegi but it takes a huge time now.. and i don't understand when it will be.. Kosish hai ki ab jald se jald kahani puri ho jaye par aap logon ko samajh aa jaye usme.. kyun ki bahut se bhayanak logics aur complex ka istemal hone wala hai

Akhir ye pyar kya se kya bulwa deta hai insan se.. vo apke roop mein dikhai de raha hai.... Bhai kya hoga kya nahi uski gurantee nahi le sakta mein

Thanks Aakash bhai... Its a Fantasy Story many more things will added... nd soon...

There is an addiction in your story which we have become used to and it is very difficult to get rid of it. your writing is commendable, Every single line, every single word touches the heart and makes you think, from the beginning your writing is such that every moment the mind is restless about what is going to happen next, you have written the story in such a way that serious scene has a combination of comedy as well as thrill and suspense such that for a moment the right mind wanders, While reading the story, I did not even feel for a moment that I am bored, I enjoyed reading it a lot, now just waiting.
I don't get it, it's such a good story but why are the readers here so few, Never mind, we'll recommend it to everyone.



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Thanks aakash bhai... Padne walon ki chahat unhe kahani se jodti hai.. Kahani itni powerful ho ki padne wala khud apne aap aajaye jaise aap aye... Abhi nahi to after next 5 yrs people will read these kind of stories here also.. .. Keep reading bro

 

[harshit1890]

जैसा कि पहले भी मैंने कहा यह कहानी आने वाले हर अपडेट के बाद उलझती ही जाती है। वही सब इन अपडेट्स में भी देखने को मिला ।‌‌ सबसे बड़ा कन्फ्यूजन तो कहानी का फैंटेसी में होना है जहां कुछ भी हो सकता है। भूत प्रेत... मैजिक.... थ्रीलर... सस्पेंस... सोशल एक्टिविटिज... कुछ भी हो सकता है। फैंटेसी शब्द ही बहुत ज्यादा कन्फ्यूज कर देती है।

इस अपडेट्स में जो हमने देखा वो भी कम हैरान करने वाला नहीं था। सातों लड़कों एवं लड़कियों को एक काली अदृश्य शक्ति ने अपने गिरफ्त में ले लिया और फिर करिश्माई ढंग से एक अद्भुत युवक सबके सामने उजागर हो गया। और यह सब उसी डिब्बे की वजह से हुआ। क्या है यह डब्बा? यह कैसी अनहोनी है ?

पहले तो लगा था कि आरूहि और मेघनाथ ने किसी कारणवश कोई षडयंत्र रच रखा है पर यहां तो वो दोनों भी भौंचक्के स्टैच्यू की तरह बूत बने अपनी आंखें फाड़े फाड़े देखे जा रहे थे।

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

मुझे तो यह जग्गू नाम की लड़की भी बहुत ज्यादा रहस्यमई लगती है । शायद उसका नाम जोगेश्वर है। भला अपनी लड़की का ऐसा नाम कौन मां बाप रखता है ?
इस कहानी में इस युवती का जिक्र बहुत बार हो चुका है और मुझे लगता है वो यूं ही नहीं हुआ होगा । इसी तरह किम, रचना , गगन जैसे सहायक किरदारों को भी अनेकों बार इम्पोर्टेंट जगहों पर देख चुके हैं। मुझे तो लगता है इनका भी जरूर कोई न कोई रहस्यमई एक्टिविटी इस पुरे घटना में हो सकता है। कहने का मतलब है इस कहानी के सभी पात्र संदेह के दायरे में है। सिर्फ श्रुति को छोड़कर।

आकाश भाई की टिप्पणी भी कभी कभी मुझे सच लगता है जैसे उन्होंने कहा कि कहीं आरूहि का डबल रोल तो नहीं ।

आप कहते हो कि जो भी इस कहानी में घटित हो रहा है वो सिर्फ चुतियापा है मगर मुझे ऐसा बिल्कुल ही नहीं लगता। क्योंकि मैंने आप की कई कहानियों को पढ़ा है और मुझे विश्वास भी है। बे सिर पैर की कहानी आप लिखते ही नहीं।
जो भी हो, ऐसा अद्भुत सस्पेंस मैंने तो कभी नहीं पढ़ा।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट अपडेट हर्षित भाई।

Ye anhoni nahi hai bhai sab ke sab ghinone hai Yahi to baat hai fantasy ki.. jo hai vo hai ya nahi malum nahi.. Fantasy sirf kahani hai apko pata hai mein suspense pelta jada hun
Bhai humne nahi hilaya hai dimag.. aap logon par kahani ka jadu chadh gaya hai isliye lag raha hai...
Ye ladki sirf maoranjan purpose se kahani mein judi hai iska kahani mein koi bhi mel nahi hai.. abhi kuch jalve bhikregi ye maybe
Aap itne sahi sahi guess karoge to hum bechare kahan jayenge

Khol denge suspense.. almost khol dia hai.. Ab ye sab bhi bas khul hi jayega... Thanks sanju bhai.. pleasure reading ur review..

 

[harshit1890]

Meghnath, shakh ke ghere mein to tha hi wo aur in do updates ko padhne ke baad uspar shakh aur bhi gehra jaata hai... Harshit bhai kya likh rahe ho ye? Itna suspense, itna rahasya, lagta hai Sanju bhaiya ki tarah ab mujhe apne baalon ki ginti rakhni padegi ... Shruti ki baaton ko padho to lagta hai Meghnath se bada zaalim insaan is sansaar mein nahi aur koyi nahi, aur jab Meghnath ki baaton ko padho to lage ki kitna nirdosh praani hai ki bina kisi swaarth ke Aruhi ki sahayta karna chahta hai... Btw. In do updates ko padhne ke baad ek baat to saaf ho gayi hai ki jab kahani ki parten khulna start hongi, to paathkon ke hairaani se munh khule reh jaayenge...

Fantasy genre mein likhe hone kaaran kayi baar lagta hai ki kahani mein supernatural cheezon ki bhi bhaagidari hai... Parantu, fir lagta hai ki kahani poori tarah se real world mein based hai jismein kewal tark aur tathya hain, kuchh bhi mithya nahi... Khair, ek baat aur bhi dhyan mein aayi ki kahani 2012 ke aas paas chal rahi hai, yaani ye khud bhi flashback ho sakta hai..? Arthat, ye sab jo bhi ho raha hai, ho sakta hai ki koyi is sabki tahkeekat kar raha ho, jaise Shruti puraani mauton ki kar rahi hai... Beharhal, it's just an outlandish assumption, baaki dekhte hain asal satya kya hai...

Khair, Meghnath aur Aruhi ki baaton ke hi anusaar sabhi mitra pahunch gaye hain us mansion mein jo ab band pade Girl's Hostel se bhi bada rahasya lagne laga hai... Jo kuchh bhi us Mansion mein hua uska kaaran, aur uske pichhe ka tark jaan ne ke liye behad utsuk hun kyonki aisa kuchh shayad pehle kabhi nahin padha... Meghnath ka wo God Of Box, usne hi anginat paheliyan khadi kar di hain jinka jawaab kisi ke paas nahi... Sabse pehle to ye ek sawaal hai ki us box mein us spherical cheez ko dobara lagane par uska kaalapan kaise door hua aur usne ek ghadi ki shakal kaise le li... Secondly, usmein se nikalne waali roshni ka colour change hua to hua kaise? Kya ye us spherical cheez ke hi kaaran tha ya fir Mansion iski wajah tha...

Aur sabse bada sawaal, wo shakhs kaun hai jo khudko nahi jaanta... Kya wo Mansion ke kisi kone mein kaid tha, ya chhupa baitha tha..? Uske appearance se yahi bataya gaya ki shayad wo kaafi samay se bhookha tha, arthat ho sakta hai wo kisi kaid mein ho... Secondly, jis andhere mein wo sabhi khudko bhi nahi dekh paa rahe the, aise mein us shakhs ko dekh paana kaise sambhav hua..? Uske ird gird, shuruaat mein jo light thi, uska kya source tha..? And most importantly, uska us God of Box ke saath kya sambandh hai... Ye to saaf hai ki us box ka rahasya is kahani ka ek mehtavpoorn pehlu hai jiska jawaab milte hi kayi kadiyan jud jaayengi... Shayad us Alok, joki Meghnath ka boss tha, uski entry par ye raaz khule... Meanwhile, ye unknown kahin Alok hi to nahi...

Idhar Shruti ke sandeh ki sui Meghnath par bani huyi hai aur uski kahi baaton se ye sahi bhi lagta hai... Aruhi,uska kisi se bhi baat na karna, ek hadh tak wo samajh aata hai, kyonki jo kuchh bhi Aruhi ko haal mein pata chala hai, uske kaaran Aruhi un sabse khafa to hogi hi... Par Meghnath se baat karna, aur fir Mansion mein bhi pahunch jaana... Aruhi ka interest Archaeology aur History mein hai, yadi ye maan liya jaaye, to hi uska Meghnath aur us box ko lekar jigyasu hona samajh aata hai... Maybe wo bhi us box ke baare mein sab jaan ne ko utsuk ho..?

Par fir bhi filhaal ke liye Meghnath hi sabse adhik sandehpoorn hai... Use jo kuchh pata hai, jin jin baaton ki use jaankari hai, us se saaf hai ki abhi bhi wo kuchh na kuchh chhupa raha hai, story ke anya kirdaaron ki tarah... Idhar Jaggu ko ek dafa fir apne lapete mein le liya Shruti ne par Jaggu ne use block kar diya... Kya Shruti use kewal pareshaan karna chahti hai ya koyi aur lakshya hai uska..? Doosra, Jaggu abhi tak baaki kirdaron ke mukable thoda kam hi picture mein rahi hai par lagta hai ki uska bhi koyi bada role ho sakta hai is saare khel mein...

Meghnath ne us shirt ko bhi dispose kar diya hai (kya sachmein)? Aur ab Shruti ko us file ko us peon ko waapis lautana hai... Beharhal, wo peon bhi gaayab hai, kya wo sirf dar ki wajah se gaayab ho gaya hai ya mritkon ki list mein usne bhi apna naam darj karwa liya hai... Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ki wo adbhut shakhs kaun hai aur wo dhundh/dhuaan, jo chaaron aur faila hua tha, uska asal kaaran kya tha... Kya wo box se hi nikla tha ya fir koyi in sab par nazar gadaye baitha hai..?

Both the updates were superb bro! The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story... Amazing Work!

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Main apke aur SANJU ( V. R. ) BHai ke balon ki gurantee bilkul nahi lunga Par jhadne bhi nahi dunga Han ye sahi kaha apne muh khule reh jayenge gali dene ke liye

Kahani aaj se 10 saal pehle ki hi likhi jaa rahi hai..uske piche ek khas wajah hai jo apko Update kramank 90 mein padne ko milegi agar main kahani ko aaj ke time mein likhta to is kahani ka concept fail ho jata jabki ye virtual world hai koi year specific itna dhayan nahi dega kahani mein lekin agar kahani ko as a Story pada jayega to samajh ayega ki why i choose 2012 specifically... aur main us chiz ko dhayan mein rekhte hue ek concept create kiya ki bhale hi ye chudai dunia hai jahan sirf thukam thukai par dhayan dete hai but i can't miss the whole point. Mera manna yahi hai ki jo time main invest kar raha hun use kahin jada ek reader invest karta hai to jab vo invest kre to ek proper result mile. Bhale hi meri story mein jaan na ho.. lekin concept wise sahi honi chahie.. isliye 2012 Uff thoda lamba likh dia

Sabse pehle to ye ek sawaal hai ki us box mein us spherical cheez ko dobara lagane par uska kaalapan kaise door hua aur usne ek ghadi ki shakal kaise le li... Secondly, usmein se nikalne waali roshni ka colour change hua to hua kaise? Kya ye us spherical cheez ke hi kaaran tha ya fir Mansion iski wajah tha...

Jab usne us spherical ko ghumaya kyun ki uspar jo chitrkari thi vo box ki chitkari ki tarah thi lekin jab koi chiz tut kar alag hoti hai to kaise uske design bigad jate hain kuch waise hi vo bigda hua tha par jaise hi vo ghumaya to us box ki khubi ki wajah se vo set ho gaya jo ki uska kaam karne ka tarika tha. Aur rahi vo blue roshni to mystical box hai apni sahi jagah pahunch kar jo power source use chahie tha maybe something black and buri energy uski wajah se rang badal gaya.

Aur sabse bada sawaal, wo shakhs kaun hai jo khudko nahi jaanta... Kya wo Mansion ke kisi kone mein kaid tha, ya chhupa baitha tha..? Uske appearance se yahi bataya gaya ki shayad wo kaafi samay se bhookha tha, arthat ho sakta hai wo kisi kaid mein ho... Secondly, jis andhere mein wo sabhi khudko bhi nahi dekh paa rahe the, aise mein us shakhs ko dekh paana kaise sambhav hua..? Uske ird gird, shuruaat mein jo light thi, uska kya source tha..? And most importantly, uska us God of Box ke saath kya sambandh hai... Ye to saaf hai ki us box ka rahasya is kahani ka ek mehtavpoorn pehlu hai jiska jawaab milte hi kayi kadiyan jud jaayengi... Shayad us Alok, joki Meghnath ka boss tha, uski entry par ye raaz khule... Meanwhile, ye unknown kahin Alok hi to nahi...

Iska jawab bhai aage walle update mein hai. Well vo andhere se nikal kar aya isliye uske pas roshni thi aur baki sab andhere mein kaid the... aisa kyun ye to apko aage hi pata chalega

Thank you so much bro... its a treat to read to ur reviws... thanks

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

SANJU ( V. R. ) DARK WOLFKING Naina prakash2piyush GuptAbhishek Death Kiñg Aakash. And Every Other reader

पहले आप यह बताइए कि इस पोस्ट का नोटिफिकेशन क्यों नहीं आता ? कहीं ऐसा तो नहीं कि आप रेड और ब्लू कलर से लिखकर इसे पोस्ट करते हैं ?
आज तक इसका नोटिफिकेशन नहीं आया ।
वैसे चार पांच दिनों से बहुत ज्यादा बिजी सेडयुल था लेकिन कल और परसों फुल हालीडे है । कल पढ़ता हूं हर्षित भाई !

 

[Death Kiñg]

पहले आप यह बताइए कि इस पोस्ट का नोटिफिकेशन क्यों नहीं आता ? कहीं ऐसा तो नहीं कि आप रेड और ब्लू कलर से लिखकर इसे पोस्ट करते हैं ?
आज तक इसका नोटिफिकेशन नहीं आया ।
वैसे चार पांच दिनों से बहुत ज्यादा बिजी सेडयुल था लेकिन कल और परसों फुल हालीडे है । कल पढ़ता हूं हर्षित भाई !

Mention karne ka to mujhe bhi nahi aata bhaiya ji.. jab harshit bhai review par reply karte hain bas tabich maloom padta hai ki story pe update aaya hai..

 

[harshit1890]

romanchak update .shreyas ki kahani badi hi ajeeb hai jisko samajh pana mushkil hai .
shreyas ke papa ka pyar aur usse pehle kali shaktiyo ka jikr jinhone ek ladki ki aatma ko kaid karke rakha tha .
shreyas to bahar aa gaya kisi andheri duniya se par shruti ki team kaise us andhere se bahar niklegi .
reality ke baare me jo kaha wo samajh hi nahi aaya ki shreyas kaunsi dusri duniya ki baat kar raha hai .
aur ab ye ek aur jhatka laga sabko ki shreyas ki kahani abhi shuru hi nahi huyi wo to future se aaya hai .3 month baad uske papa sabhrwal mansion me jaanewale hai 2012 ke .

Let me clear ur doubts bhai... Koi bhi sawal ho puch lo... Actually mein shreyas jis dunia ki baat kar raha tha vo ek Devil ki dunia hai.. Matlab shaitan ki dunia in simple words to vo wahan use marne gaya tha aur use marne ke baad usne khd ko bhi wahin maar liya. Ye haunted ki kahani ka end tha. But as per him ki vo ek aisi reality mein fansa hai jahan sab koi us andhere ki chapet mein aa jate hain aur dhire-dhire sab kuch kho dete hai apna.. it means rotting in hell... Ye jo usne bataya vo actually mein Haunted ki next koi part ata to usme likha jata but aisa nahi hoga to isliye usne apni vytha batai. Aap isko aisa samjho ki shreyas ne jo bataya vo sirf apko aur readers ko pata hai vo abhi tak kahin nahi likha gaya hai itna samajh lo ki vo ek aisi dunia mein fansa hai jo devil ki dunia hai baki apko kahani aage bata degi.

Han ye jhatka hi reason hai kahani ka 2012 mein likhne ka.. jo is kahani ke concept ko justify karega Thanks leon bhai.. hopefully apki confusion dur ho gayi ho aur agar nahi hui to sawal kar lena

nice update. shreyas ko sab bata diya shruti ne ki kaise wo aaruhi ke matter ko solved karna chahte hai aur search karte karte pehle book aur baadme box tak pahuche .
aaruhi ka matter bahut sa clear kar diya shreyas ne par kya wahi hua hoga.
kabhi future dekha kabhi past dekha aaruhi ne .
par aaruhi ke paas kam waqt hai jinda rehne ke liye aur shreyas ne ek kitab ka naam bhi bataya Book Of Hoax jiski madad se aaruhi ko bachaya jaa sakta hai .

aaruhi us mansion me gayi ye to sahi hai par dusre world ki aaruhi waha kaise aa gayi jab dono ne ek dusre ko bhut pret samjha .
box ka asar khatm hone par dobara sab normal ho gaya aur shreyas ko andhere ne nigal liya ,to kya firse waisa hi karke shreyas se baat kar sakte hai .

aur ye book of Hoax alag kitab hai ya wahi jo shruti padhnewali thi .

shreyas ne kaha dekha hoga aaruhi ko kyunki wo to 35 saal future se aaya hai .

Nah nah nah aaruhi ne kabhi past, kabhi future nahi dekha... Asal mein to alag-alag time aur reality merge ho gaye hai uske sath.. isliye ek hi waqt par do alag-alag reality ke same person hai.. Jaise Supriya aur Aaruhi... hai ek par dono alag alag time aur reality ke hai...

Nahi bhai Ye vo book nahi hai... Kahani to ab shuru hui hai.. Jab mein aap sabhi ko ek fantasy se jod kar kahani ko reality mein khatam karunga.. Keep reading bhai.. Thanks

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Mention karne ka to mujhe bhi nahi aata bhaiya ji.. jab harshit bhai review par reply karte hain bas tabich maloom padta hai ki story pe update aaya hai..

वही तो !
हरिया भाई लाल नीले स्याही से और कोई डीप कलर में तो कोई लाइट कलर में लिखकर पोस्ट करते आए हैं । जरूर एडमिन और मोडरेटर को कन्फ्यूज करने का प्लानिंग सोचा होगा उन्होंने । फोरम के खिलाफ जरूर कोई गहरी साजिश है यह ।
मैं हरिया भाई के साथ खड़ा हूं ।