Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Aakash.]

Budhe to sirf shabdon se hote hai... asal budhapa to lund hi batata hai

Ashleel ​

 

[Aakash.]

Lekhak mahodya ka Nagpur se kuch khaas rishta hai aisa lagta hai ​

 

[harshit1890]

Ashleel ​

Sach hamesha asheel hota hai paaji.

Lekhak mahodya ka Nagpur se kuch khaas rishta hai aisa lagta hai ​

Theme ke hissab se jagah sahi lagi... Warna apun kabhi nagpur gayela hi nahi hai... vaise bole to Arman ko bhi le aaun kahani mein.. vo bhi isi saal ki thi

 

[Aakash.]

Sach hamesha asheel hota hai paaji.

Dhalti umra me ab or kya kah sakte ho aap ​

Theme ke hissab se jagah sahi lagi... Warna apun kabhi nagpur gayela hi nahi hai... vaise bole to Arman ko bhi le aaun kahani mein.. vo bhi isi saal ki thi

Jaada dur nahi hai wo bhi bhandara aa jaao pickup kar lenge ​

 

[harshit1890]

Dhalti umra me ab or kya kah sakte ho aap

Jaada dur nahi hai wo bhi bhandara aa jaao pickup kar lenge ​

Umar tumhri ho gyi hgi be

Apun abhi har jagah se jawan hai

Dur kch nai hta bas ek parah likhna hta hai

 

[Aakash.]

Umar tumhri ho gyi hgi be

Abhi to aapne kaha fark nahi padta or ab aapka yahi reply kaafi hai dekhne ke liye ​

Apun abhi har jagah se jawan hai

Ye Har jagah se kya hota hai pahle up fir down ​

Dur kch nai hta bas ek parah likhna hta hai

Update do, baate Kara lo bas aapse aajkal ki pidi mehnat nahi kar paati ​

 

[harshit1890]

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" Jo jo ladkiyan jaa rahi hai unke kamre par tala laga hai ya nahi ye dekh ana warna baad mein kahegi ki unke kamre se saman chori hua hai, samajh aa rahi hai na.. " shailja ne bihari ko samjhaya jiski nazar ladkiyun par thi jo apna-apna saman lekar utar rahi thi, kuch bahar khadi thi. " Idhar dekh kar jawab de harami.. "

" Ji ji.. warden ho jayega.. " bihari ne turant jawab dia.

" ho jayega.. chal jaa.. ye sab kaam bhi karo.. warden kam aur nachaniya jada bana rakha hai... " shailja wapis apne office ki tarf chali gayi.

Shruti bhi wahin corridor mein khade hokar udhar hi dekh rahi thi. Warden ke jane par bihar ne nazar shruti ki taraf modi aur use ghurne laga. Shruti bhi usko dekhne lagi, vo ache se mehsus kar paa rahi hai ki bihari ki nazar chehre par se hote hue uske jism ke kin-kin hisson ko dekh rahi hai. Man hi man tangon ke bich ki chut ke bare mein soch raha hai, bolta kuch nahi hai par man hi man mein sab chahta hai harami kahin ka. Shruti man hi man gusse mein ubal rahi thi. Vaise bhi aaj kal uska mood kuch theek nahi rehta tha. Vo bihari ki harkat par kuch na bolne ka faisla lekar bahar nikal gayi, warna trip start hone se pehle hi stayanash ho jata. Bahar kafi ladkiyan khadi thi.

" Kahan reh gayi aaruhi, do minute mein ati hun ka bol kar.. idhar khade hokar in chutiya ladkiyun ki batein aur shakale bardasht se bahar hai.. aur jada nahi khadi ho sakti... bahar chalti hun.. aaruhi ka phone ayega to bahar hi bula lungi " shruti itna bol kar hostel ke main gate ki taraf chal di. Aaj koi bhi college ke raste se hote hue jane ke liye allowed nahi tha. Jo-Jo ghar jaa rahe the unko bahar gate par sign krna tha, vaise ek sign to hostel ki warden ne pehle hi le liya tha. Shruti corridor se hote hue bahar gate par ayi aur wahan akar usne register par sign kiya aur gate se bahar aa nikli. Kuch ladkiyun ki bheed yahan bhi maujud thi lekin vo sab auto/rickshaw pakadne mein busy thi, usi ke shor mein ek shor wahan aur bhi gunj raha tha jispar shruti ki nazar chali gayi. Shruti ne hostel ki chatt ki taraf nazar ki to paya wahan par kuch ladkiyan khadi hai aur unme se ek thi jaggu jise dekh shruti ke man mein bas itna aya ki ye ghar nahi gayi, baki ladkiyan kuch to usi ki classmate thi par majorly wahan khadi third year ki ladkiya thi jinme se ek jo sabki leader bani hui thi vo thi 'Vamika' jisne hallah machaya hua tha aur hallah bhi wahi purana aur famous kaan, niche atte-jatte logon ko chedna.

" Oo uncle... cycle chalate hue agar lund khada ho jaye to seat par gand ki jagah lund aa jata hoga haina.. hahaha... " vamika ne niche gujarte cycle walle ko dekhte hue kaha aur usi ke sath sabhi hasne lage. Cycle wala ek pal ke liye ruka aur usne uppar dekh kar apne honth hilaye jaise man hi man kuch keh raha ho par muh se puri tarah nikla na ho.

" Kya hua uncle? lund mein dard ho gaya jo khada hona pada.. hahaha.. " ek baar fir hans pade.

" Thodi sharam karo.. maa baap padne bhejte hai.. ye sab karne nahi " vo uncle bol hi pade.

" Sharam kis baat ki uncle.. tumhare pas lund hai aur hamare pas chut.. ye to aaj kal ki kitabon mein bhi likha hota hai.. aapne nahi padi kya.. " vamika ke bolne par un uncle ne jada behas karni sahi nahi samjhi aur vo wahan se bad-badate hue nikal liye.

" sambhal kar jana uncle kahin lund chain mein na fans jaye... " vamika ne hath hilate hue kaha.

" Vamika vo dekh.. ek joda aa raha hai... iske maze le.. " vamika ki khas dost 'Divyanshi' bol padi.

" patni solid hai.. pati dekh kaisa mariyal hai.. in salon ko aisa maal mil kaisa jata hai.. " in teeno mein shamil tisri 'Kajal' boli.

" abhi puch lete hai.. " vamika ne muskurate hue kaha aur niche jaa rhe jodo ki taraf dekhne lagi. Shruti ne uski nazron ka picha kiya to paya ki samne se jo do log aa rhe the vo koi majdur dikhai padh rahe the jo shayad wahan kisi construction ke kaam mein lage honge aur dophar ke waqt khane ke liye nikale honge.

" areee oo bhaiya... sunoo to... " vamika ne uppar se awaz di to ek pal ko vo admi piche dekhne laga jaise use laga ki piche se koi use bula raha ho " piche nahi uppar... " vamika ki awaz sunne par us admi ne nazar uppar ki aur vo ruk gaya, uske sath uski patni bhi ruk gayi.

" ek baat puchni thi bhaiya.. " vamika ke bolne par vo admi bas uppar ki taraf niharta raha use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole " Ek baat batao.. tum aise mariyal se par tumhari biwi ki chatiyan aur uski gand itni badi.. aise kaise daba lete ho.. tanik hume bhi to batlao.. " bihari swar mein bolte hue vamika hans di aur uske sath baki ladkiyan bhi. Vo mard aur aurat ye sun bhauchake ek dusre ko dekhne lage aur agle hi pal unhone wala se chalne ka irada kar liya par vamika ne apni baton ka teer chhodh dia.

" tanik humko dekho... sala hamari to chatiyan itni badii hui hi na pawat hai.. dekho dekho.. " vamika ne kaha to vo admi apna sar uppar uthaye bina na reh paya aur usne apni nazar uppar kar li jahan vamika ne apni chatiyan pakad kar zor-zor se use uppar-niche karte hue dabana shuru kar diya. " tanik hamara bhi daba kar kuch apni biwi jaisa kar do na.. " vamika ke bolte hi us admi ka thuk galle mein atak gaya par tabhi use yaad aya ki vo akela wahan nahi hai, abhi jo maze usne liye hai uska anjam use is tarah milega use malum nahi tha. Uski sath khadi patni ne de dana-dan use thapad bajane shuru kar diye jise vo admi ek pal ko piche girne laga par uski aurat ne pakad kar use pelna chalu kar diya.

" karamjali... mardon ko rijhati hai... aur tum.. chalo aaj ghar tumhe bada maza aa raha hai dusron ki chuchiyun mein aaj main garam tel mein bhigoa kar chimte ko tumhare lund par lagati hun.. salle tharki harami... " marti hui vo aurat apne marad ko wahan se le jane lagi aur sab uski is harkat ko dekhte hue hasne lage.

" Ye aunty uncle ko kyun peete hue lee jaa rahi hai? " aaruhi jab wahan ayi tab tak tamasha khatam ho chuka tha.

" Kahan reh gayi thi tu? do minute ka bol kar " shruti ne aaruhi ko dekhte hi kaha.

" Time lagta hai saman pack karne mein.. waise tune apne jada kapde to rakhe nahi fir is bag mein kya bhara hai " aaruhi ne shruti ke pakde bag ki taraf idhara kiya jise sun shruti samajh gayi ki almirah mein se usne kapde jada nahi bhare the balki vo kitab rakhi thi jise vo hostel mein chhod kar nahi ana chahti thi.

" kapde hi hai.. tujhe ab ek ek kapda bataun apna.. chal der ho rahi hai ... auto... " shurti ne ek fat-fat seva walle auto ko awaz di.

" par vo aunty maar kyun rahi thi "

" baith batati hun... bhaiya railway station " shruti bol kar baithi aur fir aaruhi bhi uske sath mein aa baithi jisi ke sath kuch aur ladkiyan bhi baithi aur auto station ki aaur chal dia.

" Kaun se platform par hai? " aaruhi ne shruti ko apne pass ate hi pucha.

" Platform to pata chal gaya par apni train to 5 ghante late hai... "

" 5 ghante? "

" Han.. "

" to ab? "

" ab kya.. ab chalo platform par.. wahan baith kar time katenge.. "

" ticket bhi confirm nahi hui aur train bhi late.. ufff... " aaruhi ne chehre par aye pasine ko pocha aur shruti ke sath platform krmank 13 par chal padi. Dono platform par se guzar rahe the ki aaruhi ki nazar cross-over bridge se niche platform par padi.

" oye shruti ruk to... " aaruhi ne piche se awaz di to shruti ruk par piche mud gayi.

" dekh aaruhi main tera saman nahi uthaungi.. khud utha.. aur anne wala hai platform apna.. "

" meri sun le.. apni bolti jayegi.. vo dekh udhar niche... "

" kidhar? "

" are udhar platform par.. " aaruhi ke bolne par shruti ne bhi nazar us taraf kar li. " Ye apni class ki Raashi hai na.. ye bhi to raipur ki hi rehne wali hai. ye kaun si train se jaa rahi hai? "

" tujhe galat dikh raha hai ye apni class wali nahi hai... apni class wali ki to chuchiyan ek uppar ek niche hai... " shruti ne ankhein michte hue gaur se dekhne ki kosish kari.

" tu kya ladkiyun ki chuchiyan dekhti hai? ... " aaruhi ne kisi tarah muh mein ati gali honton ke bich dabai " to vo chhod.. usko dekh vo bhi to jaa rahi hai.. to hamari train late kaise? " aaruhi ki baat sun shruti ne use aise ghura mano vo abhi roo hi degi. Vo aaruhi ke najdeek ayi.

" meri priye saheli.. raipur ki sirf ek train nahi jati.. aur bhi jati hai... "

" to tune ye wali kyun nahi karai.. " aaruhi ne thakhte hue ehsas ke sath kaha.

" agli baar yahi karaungi.. abhi chalein meri behen "

" behen hogi teri raashi.. mujhe mat bana.. aur ab chal.. panchayat karwa lo tujhse sirf " aaruhi ne apna bag uthaya aur chal padi.

" Ajeeb ladki hai... waise tujhe itni dur ka itna sahi kaise dikh gaya... ki ye wahi apni raashi hai jiski chuchiyan uppar niche hai... " shruti use sawal karte hue uske sath chal di aur dono thodi hi der mein platform kramank 13 par jaa pahunche.

" lagta hai sabko pehle se pata tha ki train late ayegi isliye pura platform khali pada hai... " aaruhi ne platform par pahunchte hi kaha.

" han.. ye sala chai bechne wala bhi nahi aya abhi tak iska khoka banda pada hai.. chal aja seat par jakar baithte hai... " shruti ke sath aaruhi bhi wahan padi bench par jaa baithe.

" Mom ko bata deti hun ki hume ab late ho jayega.. late night hi pahuchenge.. " aaruhi ne itna kaha aur phone mila diya. " Helo mom.. hamari train late hai.. " shruti kuch kehti use pehle aaruhi phone mila chuki thi.

" Awaz aa rahi hai apko meri.. ruko .. " aaruhi uthi aur thoda aage jatte hue baat karne lagi.

" Kya kar rahe ho tum? " shruti ne vishal ko message kiya par message send hi nahi hua. " Signal hi nahi aa rahe behenchod, ab bina network ke porn dekh kar bhi time pass nahi kar sakti.. hatt sala.. " shruti ne phone rakha aur ankh band kar bench par piche sar rakh kar baith gayi.

Train ke horn se achanak shruti ki ankh khuli aur ankhon ke aage ujale se andhere mein tabdeel hue mahol ko bhanpte hue vo apni jagah se ek jhatke mein khadi hui. Khade hote hi sabse pehle usne aaruhi ke liye bench par nazar daudai lekin aaruhi wahan maujud hi nahi thi.

" Aaruhi.. aaruhi... " pure platform par andhera tha aur dur-dur tak platform par koi nahi tha. " Aaruhi kahan chali gayi.. " shruti ki awaz ladhkhada rahi thi, usne fauran apna phone nikala, usne aaruhi ko phone lagaya lekin aaruhi ko phone nahi laga. " behenchodd... main so kaise gayi.. aaruhi agar yahan se gayab hui to kya karungi main... uppar se ye madarchod signal bhi nahi aa rahe hai... kahan dhundu main aaruhi ko... " shruti soch mein thi tabhi use apne kandhe par kisi ke hath pade jise mehsus karte hi vo piche mud gayi aur piche mudte hi roshni se uski ankhein chaundia gayi.

" Kaun ho tum.. " ankhon ko roshni mein adjust karte hue vo fauran boli. Samne ek ladka laltain liye khada tha. Height ke mutabik uski umar kam hi lag rahi thi. Chehra sanwla tha aur us sanwle pan par chadi mitti use aur sanwla bana rahi thi. Uske kapde uske chehre se mel kha rahe the, gande kuchaili shirt aur usi prakar ki nikkar bhi.

" Kya hua didi.. aap kisi ko khoj rahi hai " ladke ke chehre par kisi bhi tarah ke bhav nahi the bas shabdo se hi bata sakte the ki vo kuch puch raha hai par uske piche koi chinta ya emotion samajh nahi aa rahe the.

" Han... meri dost ko.. tumne dekha hai.. " shruti ne kuch sochte hue jawab diya.

" Yahan koi dost nahi ata didi.. aap kyun ayi ho idhar? "

" train ka intezar karne.. "

" train aur idhar... " vo bacha shruti ke thoda najdeek aya. Shruti is andhere mein ek matr jalti laltain aur uspar vo ladka, uska dil dhad-dhad karke roo raha tha aur kisi tarah zinda tha. " ye palatfaram kramank terah hai didi.. idhar koi nahi ataa.. "

" k...kyun.. " shruti ek pal ke liye dari par fir se nidar ho gayi kyun ki vo kisi chiz se nahi darti thi.

" vo us dukan ko dekh rahi ho didi.. jo apke piche hai.. band hai.. uski wajah se.. "

" aisa kya hai us ... " shruti ne thuk andar nigla " us dukan mein "

" us chai ke khoke walle ne... ek baar chaai mein zeher mila kar yahan baithe sabhi yatriyun ko maar diya tha didi.. bache budhe aurat sab maare gaye the.. "

" to...too... " shruti ne apne hath par aye rongte ko hathon se chupate hue kaha.

" to... " vo ladka aur najdeek aya " to un sabhi ki atmayein is platform par chai lekar ghumti hai... wahi zeher waali.... " itni khamoshi ne us ladke ne shruti se ye baat kahi ki laltain mein shruti ka dar chamakne laga tha.

" aur... tum unme se ek wahi bache ho.... " shruti ne bhooton ki kahaniyun ko bhanpte hue aisa kaha. Jise sun kar us bache ne apna sar piche khinch liya aur shruti ko ghurta raha. Shruti jaise uski masoom si ankhon mein kho si gayi thi.

" uth gayi tu.. " achanak se ayi awaz ko sun shruti hadbadati hui mudh gayi aur chaunkte hue zor-zor se saans lene lagi. " tujhe kya hua? " matha sikodte hue aaruhi ne uski halat ko dekhte hue pucha.

" Aaruhi tu... tu idhar.. hai.. main kabse tujhe khoj rahi thi... "

" main kahan jaungi.. main to chai lene gayi thi.. yahan to chai wala band hai to dusre platform par jana pada.. le chai le... " aaruhi ne chai ka cup shruti ki taraf badhaya.

" han laa chai hi pila... " shruti chai ka cup aaruhi se leti usi pal use vo bacha aur chai wala kissa yaad aa gaya aur usne fauran hath piche khinch liya.

" kya hua? "

" kuch nahi.. mujhe chai nahi pini.. ruk pehle us bache se nipat lun zara.. "

" bacha.. kaun bacha? " aaruhi ne chai ki chuski li.

" wahi jo mere... " shruti piche palti par wahan koi nahi tha. " sach main ye wahi bacha tha jo chai pii kar yahan mara.. " shruti ne kasmasate hue dhimi awaz mein kaha.

" chai pii kar kaun marta hai? " aaruhi piche se uske samne aa khadi hui " kya hua tujhe? nind mein hai kya abhi bhi? " aaruhi ke sawal par shruti ek pal waise hi khadi rahi.

" han shayad.. " muh ko hath se pochte hue vo wapis bench par jaa baithi aur bagal mein aaruhi.

" kaisa platform hai.. ek admi nahi hai hamare alawa.. aisi train karni jaruri thi.. kamini kahin ki.. light tak nahi hai idhar.. "

" time kya hua hai? " shruti ne pucha aur khud hi mobile mein time dekh liya " train ati hi hogi.. " abhi shruti itna hi boli ki platform par train ke horn ki awaz ayi aur dur se ati ek choti si roshni bhi. Train dhire-dhire platform ki taraf ayi aur akar ruk gayi. Train akar ruki lekin kamal baat ye thi ki itni shanti train ke baad aksar kabhi hoti nahi hai.

" koi utarega nahi kya? " aaruhi ne chadne se pehle apna sawal rakha aur apne coach par jaa chadi.

" shayad yahan sirf chadne wale log ho.. " shruti soch mein thi ki tabhi train wapis chal di.

" shruti train chal di.. jaldi chadh... " aaruhi ke awaz dene par shruti ko hosh aya aur usne dekha ki train wapis chal padi hai. Usne fauran apna per uthaya aur chadh gayi train mein.

" Kaisi ajeeb train book ki hai.. do minute mein hi chal di.. "

" tujhe kya.. acha hai log kam honge.. seat par mast sote hue jayenge... seat pakad jaldi chal.. " shruti pehle andar ghusi aur uske piche aaruhi bhi ghus gayi.

Train ke andar ghuste hi mahol badal gaya, kuch log baithe the to kuch so rahe the. Roshni kam thi lekin itni thi ki dono apni seat par pahunch paye. Dono ki hi seat niche wali thi, saman laga kar dono apni-apni seat par baith gayi. Unke uppar aur samne wali seat par koi bhi shaks maujud nahi tha.

" der se ane ka fayda dekha.. lagta hai alag se dabba lagaya hai.. " shruti chekhate hue boli. Aaruhi ne koi jawab nahi diya aur yun hi baithi rahi.

Train apni raftar pakad chuki thi. Raat ke takreeban 11 baj rahe the, pure dabbe mein andhera tha sab soo chuke the. Achanak se shruti ki ankhein khuli to usne paya ki train ek jagah ruki hui hai. Usne apna sar uthaya aur khidki se bahar jhankne ki kosish karne lagi lekin andhere ke chalte bahar ka kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha.

" tu bhi uth gayi " achanak awaz sun shruti thoda ghabra gayi. Samne Aaruhi laiti thi par na jane kaise usne apne chehre ko chipa rakha tha ki vo use dikhai nahi de raha tha.

" tu kab se jagi hui hai "

" jab se train ruki hui hai "

" kab se ruki hai? "

" bahut der hui... "

" acha aisa kya.. " shruti apni jagah se khadi hui. " jakar puch kar ati hun " shruti bol kar coach se bahar nikal gayi. Bahar ka darwaja khula hua tha aur samne platform dikhai de raha tha, jo ki ek dum khali pada tha aur har jagah dur-dur tak andhera hi pasra pada tha. Shruti wapis train mein aa gayi.

" koi nahi hai bahar.. kuch nahi pata chala ki train kyun ruki hai.. " shruti ne apni seat par baithte sath hi boli.

" pehle hi 5 ghante late thi.. kaisi ghatiya train hai ye.. "

" tu bar-bar bol kar ise ghatiya karar hi kar degi, kya pata ye train ki wajah se nahi kisi aur wajah se ruki ho... lagta hai koi aa raha hai .. " shruti ne ahat ki awaz suni aur aaruhi bhi bistar se uth baithi. Kuch hi kadamo ki ahat ke baad TT coach mein sabhi ki seat se guzarta hua inki taraf aa gaya.

" uncle... " awaz sun TT ruk gaya " Ye train kyun ruki hai ? " shruti ne turant sawal kiya.

" Aage track tut gaya hai.. kaam chal raha hai thodi der aur lagegi abhi, aap chinta mat jijeye aram se soiye.. "

" mene kaha tha na tere ko ye train ki galti nahi hai .... " shruti ne aaruhi ki taraf dekhte hue kaha.

" uncle " TT jata use pehle aruhi ne use rok lia " waise hum kahan ruke hue hai ? "

" Bandhara... " TT jawab dekar bahar nikal gaya.

" Abhi to almost adha hi rasta tay hua hai.. "

" han tabhi so jaa.. " shruti khadi hote hue boli.

" tu kahan jaa rahi hai? "

" zara pet khali kar aau.. itna AC chal raha hai ki susu rukega nahi ab.. tu soo main ati hun " shruti ki baat sahi samajhte hue aaruhi ne seat par sar rakha aur chand palon mein use nind hi aa gayi. Shruti bathroom mein gayi aur apni jeans niche karke ukhdu hokar baithte sath hi usne apna karya shuru kar dia.

Train takreeban 2:25 par wahan se rwana hui aur subah 6 baje raipur station jaa pahunchi. Shruti ubasi lete hue utri to aaruhi ne tok dia.

" raat bhar soi nahi kya? "

" subah uthne ki adat nahi hai.. "

" tune hi karani thi ye train.. pta nahi kaisi train thi.. itni der to kabhi nahi lagi mujhe ghar ane mein "

" ab bas bhi kar meri maa.. warna is train ke niche akar hi na mar jau main.. " shruti ne hath jode aur dono ne fat-fat auto leliya aur dono aaruhi ke ghar ke liye rwana ho gaye. Takreeban 45 minute ki duri tay karne ke baad ek ghar ke samne auto ruka. Auto ke paise dekar shruti ne auto walo ko bhaga dia tab tak aaruhi ghar ki door-bell baja chuki thi.

Door bell dusri baar baji thi ki andar ka darwaja khul gaya aur samne urvashi ko khada dekh aaruhi ne bina pal gawaye use apne galle laga liya " mom... " urvashi behad khush thi, aaruhi jitni khush thi use kahi jada khush vo thi. Aaruhi se mil kar urvashi ne shruti ko bhi apne galle lagaya.

" helo aunty.. " shruti ne itna kaha aur urvashi ne dono ko andar ane ki jagah de di.

" tum dono ne itna late kar dia ki puri raat main tumhara hi wait karti rahi " urvashi ne darwaja lagate hue andar atte hi kaha.

" i know mom.. ye sab is ladki ke chakkar mein hua.. pata nahi kaun si train kar di thi isne "

" tu ek kaam kar mujhe saza de de aur wapis usi train mein bhej de " shruti fatak se boli.

" alright...alright.. bas karo tum dono.. hostel mein bhi aise hi ladti ho kya.. "

" hamara aisa hi hai.. mom.. main room mein jaa rahi hun.. bahut jada thakan mehsus ho rahi hai.. " aaruhi itna bol kar sidiyun ki taraf badh chali.

" aaruhi uppar kahan jaa rahi ho " urvashi ne turant toka.

" apne room mein mom aur kahan " aaurhi ne chekhate hue jawab dia.

" lekin beta tum wahan nahi jaa sakti.. tumhare liye andar wala room prepare kiya to hai "

" andar wala.. " achanak se aaruhi ka chekhta hua chehra bhuj gaya " maine apko kaha tha na ki mera wala room prepare karna "

" i know beta.. but tumhe to malum hai na uppar wala room band hai.. " urvashi ne pyar se samjhate hue kaha.

" band hai.. " aaruhi sun kar udas ho gayi, usne sidiyun ka ek kona pakad liya aur wahan khadi ho gayi. Urvashi aur shruti use dekh rahe the, shruti chup thi use abhi ghar ki batein samajh nahi aa rahi thi isliye usne bich mein bolna sahi nahi samjha.

" Aaruhi.. aao.. main tumhe tumhare room tak le jati hun.. bilkul waisa hi hai tumhara room jaisa tumne kaha tha.. " urvashi keh kar aage hi badhi thi ki kuch aisa hua ki shruti ka dil dehak gaya aur wahin urvashi bhi ek pal ke liye wahin jam gayi.

 

[harshit1890]

SANJU ( V. R. ) DARK WOLFKING Death Kiñg Aakash. Naina prakash2piyush And all other readers

 

[harshit1890]

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[DARK WOLFKING]

romanchak update ..vamika aur uski saheliya hostel me hi ruki hai aur ab aane jaanewalo ka maja le rahi hai . bechare ek pati ko uske hi patni se pitwa diya apni hot adaon se .

ab ye platform no 13 pe jo hua wo shruti ka veham tha ,sapna tha ya sach ye pata nahi . par jo bhi us ladke ne bataya jehar wali baat usse rongte khade ho gaye ki kahi sachme shruti waha fans to nahi gayi .

train ne late hi kiya par aakhir pahuch hi gaye dono aaruhi ke ghar par ab aisa kya hua ki shruti ka dil dehak gaya ..