Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

Spoiler: INDEX

~~INDEX~~​

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

Update - 1​

Update - 2​

Update - 3​

Update - 4​

Update - 5​

Update - 6​

Update - 7​

Update - 8​

Update - 9​

Update - 10​

Update - 11​

Update - 12​

Update - 13​

Update - 14​

Update - 15​

Update - 16​

Update - 17​

Update - 18​

Update - 19​

Update - 20​

Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

Update - 21​

Update - 22​

Update - 23​

Update - 24​

Update - 25​

Update - 26​

Update - 27​

Update - 28​

Update - 29​

Update - 30​

Update - 31​

Update - 32​

Update - 33​

Update - 34​

Update - 35​

Update - 36​

Update - 37​

Update - 38​

Update - 39​

Update - 40​

Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

Update - 41​

Update - 42​

Update - 43​

Update - 44​

Update - 45​

Update - 46​

Update - 47​

Update - 48​

Update - 49​

Update - 50​

Update - 51​

Update - 52​

Update - 53​

Update - 54​

Update - 55​

Update - 56​

Update - 57​

Update - 58​

Update - 59​

Update - 60​

Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

Update - 61​

Update - 62​

Update - 63​

Update - 64​

Update - 65​

Update - 66​

Update - 67​

Update - 68​

Update - 69​

Update - 70​

Update - 71​

Update - 72​

Update - 73​

Update - 74​

Update - 75​

Update - 76​

Update - 77​

Update - 78​

Update - 79​

Update - 80​

Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

Update - 81​

Update - 82​

Update - 83​

Update - 84​

Update - 85​

Update - 86​

Update - 87​

Update - 88​

Update - 89​

Update - 90​

Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

Update - 91​

Update - 92​

Update - 93​

Update - 94​

Update - 95​

Update - 96​

Update - 97​

Update - 98​

Update - 99​

Update - 100​

Update - 101​

Update - 102​

Update - 103​

Update - 104​

Update - 105​

Update - 106​

Update - 107​

Update - 108​

Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

Update - 109 ​

Update - 110 ​

Update - 111 ​

Update - 112 ​

Update - 113 ​

Update - 114​

Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

Kal party ne bulaya hai ..payment dene ke liye. Business me 2 Oct. Ka kya kaam !

Acha maal mil raha hai fir to jao jao... warna aaj ke jamane mein to 100 phone kro tab payment na ati

 

[harshit1890]

Update ~~ 113​

" Ab iska kya karein... " shruti talab mein jhakne lagi. " andar kuch hai ya nahi.. clear dikhai nahi de raha.. itna saaf pani hai fir bhi... " shruti ne nazar us pole par dali jo bahar nikla hua tha, taraju ka pole aur ek taraf chaukar akar ka palhad jispar tolne ke liye saman rakhe jana tha.

" iska kya matlab ho sakta hai.. "

" Lag to adhura hi raha hai.. itni asani se hume samajh nahi ane wala hai.. "

" to fir kya karein? "

" Tarazoo ka matlab .. samajh nahi aa raha ... aise talab mein hone ka arth nahi samajh aa raha.. vo bhi adha.. kya hume kuch tolna hai? lekin tol kar kya karein? "

" Wahi samajhna hai.. aur agar is taraf rakh diya kuch to kya ye pani ke niche nahi chala jayega? "

" vo sab to theek hai.. lekin tolna kya hai.......kidney? " teeno apas mein baatcheet kar rahe the aur aaurhi dusre kone mein deewaron ki likhai aur chitarkari dekh rahi thi.

" Ye kya kar rahi hai? " shruti ne aaruhi ki taraf ek dafa dekha.

" Sochne wali baat to ye bhi hai ki aise pani ke andar tarazo ko kaun rakhta hai? mujhe to wajah hi samajh nahi aa rahi " vishal bola

" Wajah puchne ki jarurat hi kya hai.. waise bhi bin wajah hum yahan mandra hi rahe hai. Aur agar bahar jane ka rasta nahi mila to jane ki jarurat bhi kya hai... " shruti ne tanna kaste hue kaha.

" shruti tum bhi na.. "

" main samajh gaya... " meghnath ne dono ki baat ko andekha karte hue kaha.

" kya? " dono ek sath bole.

" Tarazoo ke ek side kuch rakh do to kya hota hai? " meghnath ki baat par shruti ne apne honth aise banaye jaise man hi man use chutiya bol rahi ho.

" dusri side uppar aa jayegi " vishal ne jab jawab diya to man ki nikli gali vishal ke liye badal gayi.

" lekin agar dusre hisse par saman jada bhari ho to usko uppar lane ke liye kya karna chahie? "

" is side use bhi jada bhari saman rakhna padega... ek minute tum kya kehna chahte ho? "

" bas yahi ki jo bhi dusre hisse par hai vo jada bhari hai aur hume shayad use jada bhari saman ise hisse mein dalna padega aur tabhi vo uppar ayega "

" Acha theek hai to main bhari pathar dhundu? " bich mein shruti boli to dono use dekhne lage " tum dono kabse kya chutiyun wali batein kr rahe ho? Tarazoo kaise kaam karta hai hum kya ye janne aye hai? "

" Nahi.. bas kaise karna hai vo samjha raha tha " meghnath ki awaz shant thi.

" kaise karna hai matlab? "

" matlab yahi ki is hisse par khada hona padega "

" tum pagal ho gaye ho, kurbani dene ka shauk hai kya? "

" shruti sahi keh rahi hai... hume is jagah ke bare mein nahi pata aur pata nahi kya hoga agar tum yahan is par khade hue to... ye bahut risky hai "

" jeevan hi risk hai dost aur sachai to waise bhi asani se nahi milti "

" wah wah taliya ... is admi ke to dialouge bazi khatam nahi hoti... ja re bhai tu jaa.. khada ho jaa... " shruti tali bajate hue boli to aaruhi ka dhayan un sab ki taraf aya.

" kuch nahi hoga.. " meghnath ruka nahi aur aage badhte hue jakar tarazoo ke us hisse par jaa khada hua. Usne ye kaam itni jaldi kiya ki kisi ko sochne ka samay nahi diya yahan tak ki usne bhi samay nahi liya. Aaruhi ye dekhte hi un sabke pass aa pahuchi.

" ye kya kar rahe ho tum? "

" hum bhi wahi puch rahe hai.. Meghnath keh raha hai tarazoo ke uss hisse ko uppar lane ke liye kuch bhari saman ispar rakhna hoga taki vo uppar aa jaye lekin meghnath ke chadne se koi farak nahi pada aur waise bhi agar hum sab bhi chadh jaye aur maan lo wajan jada bhi ho jaye to tarazo ka vo hissa uppar ayega to ye hissa niche bhi to jayega. Hum sab dub jayenge. Ye baat bina soche meghnath tarazoo par chadh gaya.. aisa bevkuf admi hai ye .. khud ke sath hume bhi marwayega... " shruti ki baat sun meghnath ko gussa aa gaya.

" hun main bevkuf... sach janne ke liye bevkuf ho chuka hu.. Marna bhi pade to kya farak padta hai.. tumhari tarah to nahi hun na.. " meghnath aage kuch kehta use pehle aaruhi ne use shant kiya.

" shant meghnath... shruti theek keh rahi hai.. hume soch kar hi kuch karna hoga.. Aise jaisa tum kar rahe ho use tumhe sach nahi milega ... shant raho... aur wapis aa jao.. " aaruhi ne bade aram se kaha to meghnath ek pal wahan khada niche talab ki taraf dekhta raha aur wapis utar aya.

Kuch der apas mein koi nahi bola, sab ek taraf jaa baithe. Sharir aur dimagi thakan bol rahi thi lekin ab vo ek aise maze mein fanse the jahan se bahar nikalne ke liye unhe ladna to tha hi. Shruti kuch der baad uth khadi hui aur bahar jane ka rasta khojne lagi. Vishal thodi der use dekhta raha aur fir vo bhi uske sath jud gaya shayad vo bhi ab himmat haar raha tha. Meghnath ne aaruhi ki taraf dekha jiske chehre par koi shikan, koi pareshni nahi thi bas ek gehri soch mein dubi hui thi.

" tumhare pas jada waqt nahi hai.. " meghnath ne jo baat kabhi use sidhe taur par nahi kahi thi vo bol di. Aaruhi ne uski baat par koi reaction nahi dia. Meghnath ko bolne ke baad apne uppar gussa aaya par tabhi shruti ke cheekhne ki awaz ne dono ka dhayan us taraf khinch diya. Dono uth kar talab ke us taraf bane corridor ki taraf bhage jahan se vo aye the.

" shruti tum theek to ho... " vishal ne shruti ke peron ko dekhte hue kaha.

" han... main theek hun.. "

" kya hua? " meghnath ne pucha. Vishal ne ishare se jameen ki taraf hath kiya. Aaruhi aur meghnath ne jab us taraf dekha to ek ajeeb prakar ki chiz thi nukili chain ki tarah.

" Kya hai ye? " meghnath uski taraf badha.

" nahi hath mat lagana " vishal ne turant roka " Ye chiz shayad koi zehrila plant hai.. tum ye kali kai dekh rahe ho jo is corridor ke dono taraf hai.. ye inhi se bhari hui hai shayad.. vo to acha hua usne shruti ka sirf jutta pakda agar per atta to pata nahi kya karta... "

" mujhe ye jagah nahi pasand hai.. bas mujhe ab jana hai bahar.. " shruti ka man aur jada kharab ho chuka tha.

" shruti tum akele kahin nahi jaogi.. mere sath hi raho... " vishal ne hath pakad liya.

" mujhse ab aur nahi hoga.. hume na bahar jane ka rasta mil raha hai na hi koi chiz hath lag rahi hai. Adha saman hamara girne se tut gaya hai aur adha gufa ke bahar hi chhod aye the. Ab yahan kya karenge yahin mar jayenge aur is kalle talab mein in bhuke ped ya koi janwar ka khana ban jayenge.. kuch bacha hai hamare pas? Keh rahi thi na saman le lo lekin nahi tumhe to in kitabon ki jada jarurat thi. Libraray kholni thi tum dono ko idhar.. khol lo library ab.. hamari prem kahani likhna. College se nikle kalle pani main atke... " shruti bil-bilati hue boli.

" books... " aaruhi ki nazar un books par gayi jo vo log lekar aye the. " mil gaya ... " aaruhi ke muh se nikle do shabd ne teeno ke kaan khade kar diye.

" Tarazoo par saman us chiz se bhari nahi chahie balki uski hi jaisi chiz, utni hi kimti chahie.. aur vo hai Ved sharma ki vo books jo hum laye hai.. " aaruhi ki baat sunte hi ek aisa josh bhara mano jung jeet li ho.

Vishal aur meghnath dono un books ko ek ek kar wahan le aye. Ab sidha sa kaam tha bas books ko utha kar tarazoo par rakhna tha.

" tumhe lagta hai ye kaam karega? " shruti ke sawalon mein ek aur sawal jud gaya.

" abhi pata chal jayega " aaruhi ne jawab diya aur dono vishal aur meghnath ko dekhne lage. Dono ne mil kar pehli book ko utha kar ache se tarazoo ke us hisse par rakh diya. Dono ki ankhein achambe mein khuli jab unhone paya ki book ka size uspar ek dum sahi aya hai. Unhone ek pal intezar kiya par jab kuch nahi hua to unhone duri kitab ko uspar rakh diya lekin us dafa bhi kuch nahi hua. Ab bas vo akhri kitab bachi thi. Un dono ne ek dusre ko dekha aur kitab utha kar tarazoo ke pas le gaye. Ab thodi takat jada lagani padh rahi thi kyun ki dono do kitab rakhne se uski height unchi ho gayi thi. Unhone zor lagaya kitab uppar ki taraf uthai aur dono kitab ke uppar rakh di aur rakhte sath hi thoda piche ho gaye.

Jada der koi soch pata use pehle talab ke pani mein halchal hui aur usi ke sath tarazoo mein bhi. Jis hisse mein teeno kitab rakhi thi vo dhire-dhire niche jane laga. Ye dekhne ke liye charon ek sath talab ki taraf jhuke aur us adhbhut nazare ko dekhne lage. Dusra hissa dhire-dhire uppar ki taraf aa raha tha aur jaise jaise vo bahar aa raha tha, talab ka pani bhi tezzi se bahar nikalne laga tha jise dekh charon ko piche hona pada aur fir dekhte hi dekhte vo hissa uppar aa gaya aur jaise us talab ke uppar fit ho gaya mano vo hissa banaya hi aisa gaya ho ki uppar atte hi talab se jud jayega.

Ek pal sab us drishye mein khoye hue the, fir aaruhi ke kadam sabse pehle aage bade aur vo talab ke kareeb ayi, do badi-badi paidyan thi, uspar vo chadi aur samne ek podium jiski unchai lagbhag sadhe teen foot ki rahi hogi aur uspar rakhi thi ek kitab, jaise hi aaruhi uske najdeek ayi, roshni ne uski ankhon ko chaundia diya. Ek pal ke liye usne apni ankhein chupa li. Us roshni se aaruhi ka chehra jaise pani ki bund par padti suraj ki roshni jaisa chamak aa raha tha. Uski khubsurti jaise nikhar kar sahi mayine mein ab bahar aa rahi thi. Usne apni hatheli ko ankhon par se dhire-dhire hataya aur fir jab us roshni mein uski ankhein puri tarah se jud gayi tab usne us kitab ko dekha jispar swan akshron mein likha hua tha.

' Book Of Hoax '

 

[harshit1890]

SANJU ( V. R. ) Aakash. Death Kiñg GuptAbhishek Naina And all other readers

SANJU ( V. R. ) Aakash. Death Kiñg GuptAbhishek Naina

And all other readers

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Update ~~ 111

​

Andar na hi koi roshni dikhai de rahi thi aur na hi koi awaz aa rahi thi. Ek lambi si gufa aur gufa mein chupe rehasye. Charon darwaje ke is paar aa khade hue the. Pani ka halka shor sun aaruhi ne nazre niche ki to paya ki pani gufa ke kone mein ek jagah se ghuste hue niche ki taraf jaa raha tha jise use gufa ka kuch andaza ho chala tha.

" Ye kya hai... " shruti dusre chhor par khadi thi, usne abhi-abhi hath mein kisi thos chiz ko chuha tha aur chhute hue usne us chiz ko majbuti se pakad kar niche ki taraf sarka dia jaise vo sarakne ki liye hi bana ho jiske sath hi achanak se ek awaz hui aur sab kuch ek hi pal ke andar ho gaya. Awaz sunte hi aaruhi ne bhi nazar samne ki taraf uthai.

" Ahh... " vishal ke muh se dard bhari karhane ki awaz nikal ayi.

" Kya hua... " aaruhi ne vishal ki taraf dekha, usne apni naak ke uppar hath rakha hua tha. Meghnath ne uska kandha pakad kar use halka piche kiya hua tha. Vishal ne naak par se hath hataya to naak ke uppar se khoon nikalte hue tapak kar niche aa gira tha.

" Ye kaise hua.. " aaruhi ne fauran pucha.

" Koi... chiz.. lagi... meghnath ne piche khinch liya warna.. " vishal ko dard ho raha tha.

" Koi chiz bahut tezi se nikli hai.. " rumal gila karke vishal ko pakdaya.

" Par kya.. ? "

" shayad meri wajah se.. " abhi tak chup khadi shruti boli.

" tumhari wajah se? "

" ha.... yahan kuch hai.. " shruti ladkhadate hue boli, kyun ki uski wajah se vishal ki ye halat hui thi. Meghnath ne fauran apne mathe par light lagai aur uski belt piche bandhte hue light on ki. Roshni jaise hi shruti ki taraf gayi to sabhi ki ankhein chaudi ho gayi. Andhere mein hone ki wajah se gufa ke us chor par kisi ko kuch dikhai hi nahi diya ki wahan kya maujud hai. Wahan takreeban aat se naau foot ki murti bani thi, badi hi vishal roop mein thi. Sabhi ki nazre uske roop par jam gayi thi kyun ki vo murti kisi dev, devta ya fir shaitan ki nahi thi balki ek aise chehre ki thi jise pehchan pana kafi mushkil ho raha tha. Chehre se nazar hatte hue nazar thodi niche uske hath ki taraf ayi to paya ki uske hath mein ek bada sa bhala tha jiska nishana samne ki taraf hi tha. Jise dekhte sath hi sabki nazar dusri taraf ghumi jis taraf aaruhi khadi thi jahan dekh ek baar fir sabhi wahin dekhe rahe. Us taraf bhi yani us murti ke theek samne wali taraf ek utni hi unchi murti bani hui thi lekin uska chehra ab dikhai nahi de raha tha kyun ki uska chehra mit chuka tha. Samne wali murti se jo bhala nikla tha vo is murti ke chehre ke andar jaa dhansa tha. Dekhne matr hi vo bhala itna vishal aur khatarnak tha ki abhi kuch pal pehle agar vishal ki naak se takra jata to uski naak ko fad kar le gaya hota.

" Bal-bal bache ho tum.. " meghnath ka ishara vishal ki taraf tha. " Koi bhi bina puche kisi chiz ko nahi chuhega.. Ye gufa koi sadharan gufa nahi lagti. Ho sakta hai har taraf kisi na kisi prakar ka koi jaal bunha hua ho " is baar ishara shruti ki taraf tha.

" mujhe kya malum tha.. main to bas... aise hi... " shruti jhenp kar reh gayi.

" par agar ye bhala samne ghusa hua hai to is murti ke hath mein kaise ? " sawal sahi tha lekin jawab janna kathin isliye koi kuch nahi bola.

" ye lo.. pehen lo.. " meghnath ne torch sabhi ko di aur vishal ki naak par bandaid laga di gayi. Charon ne torch jala li thi. Andhra kuch dur tak ab khatam ho gaya tha. Aur jab charon ne ye dekha ki vo murti jo unke kareeb thi vo ek matr murti nahi hai to sabhi ke halak sukh gaye. Kyun ki wahan gufa main har thodi dur par dayein aur bayein murtiyan thi. Jis murti ka chehra us bhalle se nasht ho gaya tha vo ab dusri murti mein saaf dikhai de raha tha. Jahan ek taraf murti ka chehra pehchan mein nahi aa raha tha wahin dusri murti ki adhi shakal ek shaitan ko darsha rahi thi aur adhi shakal kisi devta ya insan ko darsha rahi thi.

" koi bhi is jagah par kisi bhi chiz ko hath nahi lagayega... na jane kya kya chupa hai idhar... aaruhi aur tum.. aage chalo.. main aur vishal books lekar piche rahenge.. "

" Har baar ye log mujhe aage kar dete hai. Kahin iska mujhe marne ka plan to nahi? Maa kasam agar is gufa main mari to meri atma inhi kisi murti mein ghus kar is meghnath ka vadh karegi.. " shruti khud se baat karne mein lagi thi.

" Kya hua? " aaruhi ne sath main akar pucha.

" k.. kuch nahi.. "

" chalein? "

" han chalo.. waise bhi kab tak chal payenge kya malum.. "

Shruti aur aaruhi aage dhire dhire badh rahe the aur piche vishal ki madad lete hue meghnath books ko lekar aage badh raha tha. Jaise jaise vo log aage badh rahe the waise waise unke piche andhera hota jaa raha tha. Gufa ka darwaja unki ankhon se ojhal ho chuka tha. Har ek kadam har pal aisa lag raha tha ki koi halchal hogi aur kuch hoga. Bich bich mein chalte hue nazre un murtiyun par jaa rahi thi jo dikhne mein sab ek hi jaisi thi, banane walle ke pas adbhut kala thi. Halka pani ka shor aaruhi ko sunai de raha tha, vo janti thi ki baki sab bhi sun sakte hai lekin shayad koi dhayan nahi de raha hai. Eka eka use lagne laga ki pani ki awaz jis gatti se aa rahi thi usme tezi ayi hai. Jise sunte hi uske per ruk gaye.

" tum logon ne pani par dhayan diya? "

Bahar jis box ki madad se unhone us pathar ko rok rakha tha vo ab un hooks ke andar daste hue niche ki taraf ane laga tha. Uspar dabav padne ke karran chatakne laga aur eka-ek box ki darar badi aur vo chatak kar tut gaya, jiski wajah se pathar bahut tezi se niche ki taraf box par padha jise box ke to chidte udh gaye udhar gufa ka darwaja behad tezi se band ho gaa jiski wajah se itni zor se halchal hui ki uska asar puri gufa mein hua.

" tum logon ne pani par dhayan diya? " aaruhi ki baat pr koi jawab deta usi pal gufa mein bahut zor se halchal hui.

" Ye kya tha? " vishal turant bola. Koi ek pal tak kuch nahi bola, sabhi piche mudh kar dekhne lage jabki vo log gufa ke us chor ko dekhne mein asamart the lekin vo hota hai na ki jab dil ko malum hota hai ki kuch hone wala hai bas ankhon se dekhne ka intezar rehta hai. Is samay charon ke sath bas wahi ho raha tha. Unhe lag raha tha ki kuch hone wala hai lekin kya aur kaise vo sabke liye anjan tha. Achanak sabhi ke sharir mein ek sirhan daudhi kyun ki koi bhari si chiz giri aur usi ke sath awaz ane lagi lekin ankhon mein chaya dar to aur tab badha jab vo band nahi hui aur dhire-dhire unki taraf ane lagi. Mano ek musibat ne unki taraf dastak de di ho.

Gufa ke uppar hisse se pathar ka tukda gira aur gira bhi theek murti ke hath par jise usne bhala pakda hua tha. Hath par pathar ka tukda girte hi hath niche hua jiskie niche hote hi hath se bhala nikla aur samne ki murti par jaa dhansa. Itna hua use pehle hi dusra bhala us murti ke hathon mein piche se aa gaya. Usi pal ek pathar aur murti ke hath par gira jiske sath fir vo hath niche khiska aur bhala sidhe samne walli murti ke galle mein jaaa dhansa aur usi pal ek aur bhala piche se murti ke hath mein aa gaya. Ye prakriya chalti gayi aur jab tak che bhale samne walli murti main nahi ghus gaye yani ki muh, galla, chatti, pet , jhangein aur ghutne ke niche.

Awaz bahut tez thi aur dhire-dhire unki taraf badhti jaa rahi thi, unhe malum tha ki unhe bhagna hai lekin peron ko jaise kisi ne niche se pakad liya tha. Ankhein jab tak us khaufnak chiz ko nahi dekh leti vo wahan se unhe hatane nahi de rahi thi. Jab awaz ek dum kareeb aa gayi aur roshni mein jab unhone vo dekha jo abhi tak sirf sun rahe the, ek-ke baad ek bhale murti se nikal kar samne walli murti mein ghuse tab chaaron ke muh se sirf cheekh hi nikli.

" bhaggoo.... " shruti bina pal gawaye ghumi aur bhagi, aaruhi, vishal aur meghnath bhi bhaage. Piche se ek ke baad ek murti mein bhalle ghus rahe the, fasla kam hota jaa raha tha. Charon ke muh se bhagte sath bhi cheekh nikal rahi thi. Shruti sabse aage thi, uske piche aaruhi par vo bich bich mein piche dekh rahi thi kyun ki meghnath aur vishal un books wali trolly ko lekar bhi bhag rahe the.

" vishal, meghnath jaldi... " aaruhi un dono ke piche ho rahi ghatna ko saaf dekh sakti thi isliye khauf uski ankhon mein jada sama gaya tha. Par dono ko books ke sath bhagne mein samay jada lag raha tha. Shruti kojab ehsas hua ki piche koi nahi aa raha to vo ruki aur usne piche dekha.

" are ab to chhod do in books ko... sala chatti par lekar maroge kya... " shruti chillai.

" nahi chhod sakte isko.. " meghnath hanfte hue bola.

" to marooo fir... aaruhi chal... " shruti thoda aage ayi aur aaruhi ko khinch kar apne sath le gayi.

Gufa lagatar hille jaa rahi thi, mano kisi bhi pal bikhar jayegi lekin ye shor aur kampan us prahar ki thi jo ek murti se dusri murti par kiya jaa raha tha. Ek bhi bhale ki chapet mein koi aa jata to vo unhe fadta hua unki zindagi ko chinn leta. Aaruhi bhag rahi thi lekin uska dimag do jagah chal raha tha pehla vishal aur meghnath ki taraf aur dusra pani ke badhte hue shor ke uppar. Vo sochte hue bich-bich mein piche dekh rahi thi, murtiyun aur un dono ke bich ke fasle mein sirf ek murti ka fasla bacha tha ab ek murti ka... Achanak aaruhi ko vo samajh aya jo vo kafi der se soch rahi thi, pani ki awaz matlab.. vo bas itna hi soch payi kyun ki shruti jo use khinchte hue bhaga rahi thi vo uske force ko rok nahi payi aur hua wahi jiska use dar tha. Achanak se gufa ka dhalan badh gaya aur shruti ka per fisal gaya jiske sath aaruhi bhi fisal gayi. Dono fisalte hue cheekhe jiski cheekh vishal aur meghnath ne bhi suni lekin koi unko agah kar pata unke per bhi fisal gaye aur books ki trolley unke hath se chhut gayi jiske sath vo aur trolly dono hi fisalti hui gusa mein ghisattne lagi. Charon cheekh rahe the, fisalte hue niche jaa rhe the kisi ko nahi pata tha ki unke sath ab kya hone wala hai, bas vo cha rahe the ki jo bhi ho bas jaldi se ho jaye aur fir ek-ek kar charon ko gufa ne apne bahar de fainka.

Vo itni force se bahar akar gire ki sabhi ke sharir par andhruni chot aa lagi. Dard mein karhati awaz aur vo bhilakte chehre bakhan tha ki vo abhi kaisi trasadi se bahar aa nikle hai. Badi himmat karke meghnath ne apna kandha pakda aur apni jagah se khada hua. Usne teeno ka haalh dekha, shruti apna per pakad kar dard mein karha rahi thi, aaruhi apna sar aur vishal apni koni. Uska halak sukha hua tha, muh se halka khoon nikal aya tha. Usne apni nazar us gufa ki taraf dali jis raste hue abhi aye the vo bhallon ki chapet se band ho chuka tha. Mano bhalon ne us jagah ko aise ghera ki gufa hone ka namo-nishan hi mita diya ho. Gufa ki taraf dekhte hue uski nazar wahan us kone par padi jahan ek taraf trolly tuti hui padi thi aur uske aage vo books bikhri hui thi.

Dard main karhate hue usne apne kandhe ko dabaya aur apni jagah se palta tab uski nazar us jagah par ghumi jahan vo khade the, jise dekh vo dekhta hi reh gaya. Kandhe ka dard, takleef mano sab khatam.

romanchak update ..gufa me to danger trap laga hua tha .vishal baal baal bacha us bhale se jo murti ke haath me tha .
maut se saamna kara diya gufa ne par aakhir bachke bahar aa hi gaye .
ab dekhte hai bahar aisa kya dikha .

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Update ~~ 112​

Koi sadharan jagah par vo nahi khade the na hi kisi sadharan insan ne aisi jagah ka nirman kiya tha. Itna bhavye, itna bada, itna adbhut. Charon taraf deewar par chitrkari, bhavye bade-bade stamb jo charon aaur lage hue the aur sabse sundar vo jispar nazre tiki thi vo tha us jagah ke bich ka hissa jahan uppar chatt par bhi pani tha aur niche bhi pani. Uppar ki chatt jahan dekha jaa raha tha ki pani hi maujud hai lekin vo kis chiz se roka gaya hai ye kisi ki bhi samajh se bahar tha par pani bilkul saaf tha aur utna hi saaf niche ka bhi pani tha. Jagah itni badi thi ki jahan vo charon the vo unse takreeban do sau meter ki duri par stith thi, jahan pahuchne ke liye bich mein ek corridor rasta bana hua tha lekin uske dono side mein kya pada tha uska andaza dur se lagaya nahi jaa sakta tha.

" Ye karigari... in deewaron par kya bana hai... " vishal deewaron par bane chitron ko chhuu raha tha. Jo kambhe lage the unka akar aur jis tarah unhe banaya gaya tha use dekh kar yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki ye sab bina kisi adhunik takniki ke banaya gaya tha.

" Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai ki ye roshni.. kaise aa rahi hai.. bahar to raat ho rahi hai " Shruti ke sath meghnath bhi yahi maan raha tha ki us jagah par andhera nahi tha. Vo roshni uppar jahan pani dikh raha tha usi ki wajah se aa rahi thi, shayad ek matr wahi jagah thi jo is puri jagah ko roshni se bhar rahi thi.

" Aaruhi tujhe kya hua? " achanak se dhayan aaruhi par gaya tab baki dono ne bhi aaruhi ki taraf dekha. Aaruhi apni jagah par hi baithi hui thi.

" Aaruhi? " shruti uske pas akar boli.

" Pata nahi.. kuch ajeeb si energy feel ho rahi hai.. tum logon ko nahi ho rahi? "

" nahi.. mujhe to kuch nahi ho rahi... tum logon ko bhi lag raha hai kya? " shruti turant boli.

" nahi.. bas sharir main dard hai .. " vishal bola.

" aaruhi ke sar main chot lagi hai.. isliye lag raha hai use... shayad... " shruti ne aaruhi ke mathe par dekha jahan cut pada tha.

" Nahi.. main theek hun.. " aaruhi ne is mudde ko wahin khatam karna behtar samjha aur vo apni jagah se khadi ho gayi.

" Ye jagah hai kya... " vishal khud se aur sabse bola.

" Jagah ko chhodo..hamare bahar jane ka ek matr rasta band ho gaya hai.. ab hum kya karenge? kaise jayenge bahar.. " shruti ne gufa walle raste ki taraf dekha jo ab rasta bacha hi nahi tha, ab vo bas bhalle ka ek janjal ban chuka tha. Vo unki kismat thi jo shayad wahan se bach kar bahar aaye the.

" Kisi tarah ki prachin dharovar lagti hai.. jo shayad sadiyun purani hai.. bahut purani.. " meghnath ne jawab dia.

" mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lag raha hai.. is tarah ke pathar aur uspar kalakari.. uppar dekh rahe ho pani ko kis tarah rok rakha hai.. adbhut jagah hai.. haina shruti? " vishal ne uski taraf dekha.

" Main sirf bahar jane ka rasta khoj rahi hun, har taraf diwar aur pani hai bas.. baki kuch nahi dikhai de raha. Hum bahar kaise jayenge is baat ka jawab kisi ne nahi dia "

" Hume yahan tak laya gaya hai isliye nahi ki hum bahar ka rasta khoje.. hume pehle vo khojna hai ... "

" Han han khojo... jabse sab khoj hi to rahe hai, ek ke baad ek khoj.. har khoj main ek nayi paheli... ab ye jagah jo khud ek paheliyun ki tarah hai.. Kya milega idhar.. Ek nayi khoj aur kuch nahi.. Tumne hume us janjaal mein fansaya hai jahan ek jagah se niklo to naya rasta aur us naye raste ko paar karne ke liye fir ek janjaal. "

" Main tumhe nahi laya, tum apni marzi se yahan aye... maine tumhe pehle hi chetaya tha.. aur jis khoj ko tum keh rahi ho ki vo sab bekar thi to tum shayad bhul gayi ho ki pichle kuch mahino mein tumne kya-kya dekha hai. Ek aise shaks ko dekha hai jo aane walle samay se piche aya, jo shayad kaun si dunia main hai vo khud nahi janta. Us insan ne tumhari dost ke bare mein jo bataya kya vo bhul gayi? Usne bataya tha ki aaruhi ek samay mein do jagah ek sath thi aur vo khud se hi dar rahi thi. Kya tumne kabhi aisa suna tha? Kya aisa ho sakta hai... Bhulo mat ki usi khoj ke chalte us insan ne hume ek rasta diya jisme us kitab ke bare mein bataya gaya. Har khoj ke piche tum, main sab jude hue hai. Agar aaj hum yahan aye hai to hume jarur kuch na kuch milega... " meghnath ne abhi itna hi kaha tha ki teeno ko aaruhi ki awaz sunai di aur tab pata chala ki aaruhi wahan unke sath thi hi nahi.

" Ye ladki wahan kab pahunchi ? " shruti ne aarui ko us taraf dekha jahan par gol si badi jagah par pani pada tha.


Vo teeno corridor se guzarte hue aaruhi ke pass jaa pahunche. Meghnath ladhkhate hue pahunchna tha, usko apna ek per jabardasti khinchna padh raha tha. Vishal ne dekh kar puchna cha par nahi pucha.
Koi kuch kehta use pehle teeno ki nazar pani ki taraf gayi. Kuch tha uske andar.. jise vo dekh paa rahe the lekin abhi samajh nahi .. Pani itna saaf tha ki andar sab kuch ek hadh tak dikhai de raha tha lekin gehrai nahi napi jaa rahi thi.

" Kya hai ye... samajh nahi aa raha.. "

" udhar kuch hai " aaruhi ne samne ki taraf ishara kiya to samne us paar kuch tha par andhere ki wajah se utna wahan dekha nahi jaa raha tha. Gufa mein ludakte hue girne ki wajah se mathe ki torch tut gayi thi isliye wahan khade rehkar dekh paana asambhav tha.

" Ye jagah kitni badi hai.. shayad dur se hume anuman hi nahi hua hai " meghnath us taraf chal pada to baki sab bhi uske sath chal diye. Pani wali jagah se thodi dur, andar ki taraf jab vo pahunche to unhone paya ki wahan par kuch paidyun ki sidiyan bani hui hai. Meghnath ne bag tatola, tab use torch kaam karti hui mil gayi. Usne torch nikali aur samne roshni dali. Roshni dalte hi charon bahuchake reh gaye. Kalle vishal patharon jaisi jagah par ek zameen se lekar chatt ko chutti hui ek vishal kaya wali kursi rakhi hui thi. Uski lambai dekh kar hi charon ka sar chakra gaya. Us kursi tak pahuchne ke liye kuch sidiyan banai gayi thi, vo kafi andar ki taraf thi isliye dur se dikhai nahi de rahi thi. Charon jaise jaise sidiyan chadte gaye vaise vaise ek ajeeb si thandak ka ehsas unhe hone laga mano vo kisi dusri jagah par hi aa khade hue ho. Jab vo kursi ke najdeek aye to unhe samajh aya ki uski chaudai jitni dikh rahi thi use kahi jada thi mano un jaise to pandrah-bees log akar ek sath baith jaye. Jab unhone wahan khade reh kar niche se uppar tak kurrsi ki unchai dekho to sar hi chakra gaya.

" Itni unchi ... kya hai ye... " hairani pareshan shruti boli.

" Wahi khoj .. jo shayad tumne kalpana bhi nahi ki thi... Sahi kehte the Ved Sharma.. koi aisi jagah hai jiske bare mein koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta tha.. Ye wahi jagah hai.. hum ek dum theek jagah par aaye hai.. "

" Lekin ab hum yahan kare kya? Ye jagah itni badi aur rehasmye hai.. yahan hume Boak of Hoax ke bare mein kaise kuch milega? Hume to ye bhi nahi malum ki jis jagah par hum khade hai vo sahi bhi hai ya fir kisi aur jagah par jana hai? "

" Wahi main bhi keh rahi hun.. ye jagah ek maze hai.. aur hum usme pin dhundnta chahte hai... tum khud dekho yahan koi books hai? jahan hum use khoj sake "

" Vo itni asani se kaise mil jayegi ? "

" Asani se... yahan main apni haddi pasli tudwate hue ayi hun aur agar do minute aur khadi rehti to un murtiyun ke sath chipak jati aur tum keh rahe ho ki asani se aye hai.. tumhari dictonary main samjdhari jaise shabad nahi the kya? " shruti thodi unchi awaz mein boli.

" ye samay ladne ya behes karne ka nahi hai.. " aaruhi ke bolte hi dono chup ho gaye. Aaruhi bina kuch kahe aage badhi, us kursi ke najdeek jahan abhi tak koi nahi gaya tha.

" aaruhi mat jaa.. kya pata is kursi se current nikal aye.. " shruti piche se boli lekin aaruhi ne uski baat ko andekha kar diya tha. Vo us kursi ke pas gayi aur ek pal wahan khadi rahi aur fir usne apna hath aage badha kar us kursi ko chuha jiske chhute sath hi uski body main mano kuch hua aur uski ankhein bhi chattan ki tarah kali aur badi ho gayi. Usne bina pal gawaye ek dum hath piche jhatka aur piche ki taraf ho gayi.

" laga laga current laga... kaha tha na current lagega.. bola tha mat jao... " shruti chillai.

" Aaaruhi... kya hua... " meghnath ek dum uske pass pahuncha aur use piche se pakad liya.

" Nahi kuch nahi.. bas.. vo... aisa laga per mein kuch chuba hai.... "

" per main? "

" han niche.. kuch hai.. " aaruhi ne turant niche ki taraf ishara kiya. Meghnath ne niche ki taraf roshni dali to wahan use kuch dikha. Usne hath se chuha to use kuch bhari majbut chiz mehsus hui.

" Ye to chain lagti hai... par bahut bhari hai... " zameen par padi chain jo ki bahut badi aur bhari thi uska thoda sa hissa uthane mein hi meghnath ki takat lag gayi. Ek taraf kandhe ka dard dusri taraf vo itni bhari chain.

" Vishal madad karni padegi.. "

" Par tum utha kyun rahe ho? "

" Shayad kisi raste ke liye ho... "

" matlab? "

" Matlab ye jagah dekho.. ye kursi banai kisi ke bathne ke liye gayi hogi aur uske sath main chain ka hona.. kuch to ajeeb nahi lagta.. kya pata ye chain hume kahin le jaye.. " meghnath ke kehne par vishal ne meghnath ki madad karte hue chain ko uthaya aur vo chain ko pakde pakde aage ki taraf badhne lage jaise vo unhe kisi naye raste par le jayega. Par jab vo dhire-dhire usi taraf ane lagge jahan par us pani ka talab bana hua tha tab unhe laga ki unki mehnat bekar ho rahi hai lekin usi pal vo ek jagah akar ruk gaye. Us talab se thodi hi duri par the. Ab unhe torch ki roshni ki jarurat nahi thi isliye jo dikh raha tha vo ek dum saaf dikhai de raha tha.

" Ye chain to zameen ke andar jaa rahi hai.... ab kya karein... " vishal ne bola.

" Khudai karo.. chain ke piche jao.. wahan se rasta milega ane jane ka.. " shruti ne jab kaha to teeno uski taraf dekhne lage. " Meri taraf kya dekh rahe ho tum sab.. bevkufi kar rahe ho... hume yahan se bahar jane ka pehle rasta khojna chahie fir kuch aur karna chahie.. "

" Mujhe ab lagta hai shruti sahi keh rahi hai.. kuch khojna padega.. kya pata vo rasta hi hume sahi jagah le jaye.. " vishal ne shruti ki baat manni.

" Mujhe aisa nahi lagta.. " aaruhi ke kehte hi shruti ko apni baat par pani firta dikha.

" kyun tujhe kya kuch aur lagta hai? aur tu kabse bolne lagi... " shruti ko pasand nahi aa raha tha ki koi uski baat nahi sun raha.

" Maire hissab se hum jis raste se bhi atte.. yahin atte.. mujhe nahi lagta iske alawa yahan koi aur jagah hai.. "

" acha to tujhe banwane wale ne sapne mein akar bataya tha ya tu bhi thi jab ye ban raha tha? engineering to tune hi ki hogi yahan ki? "

" tumhe ab chup hone ki jarurat hai.. " meghnath ko shruti par hadh se jada gussa aa raha tha.

" tum mujhe nahi bata sakte samjhe.. " abki shruti ne gusse bhari ankhon se meghnath ko kaha.

" tum log behas mat karo.. aur shruti tu theek bhi ho sakti hai.. lekin mujhe yakeen hai ki jo main keh rahi hun vo sahi hai.. tum log is chain ko khincho.. main bhi madad karti hun.. " aaruhi ne kaha aur vo meghnath ke piche jaa khadi hui, chain ko hath main pakad kar.

Ek pal vishal shruti ko dekhta raha, jaise shruti use mana kar rahi ho lekin jab meghnath aur aaruhi ne bhi chain ko khinchne ki thani to vo mana nahi kar paya, teeno ne mil kar chain ko halka sa piche ki tarah khincha lekin vo nahi khinchi.

" tum log bekar main apni energy laga rahe ho " shruti fir boli.

" thoda aur zor... " aaruhi ne khinchte hue apni puri takat lagai aur jiske sath un dono ne bhi to chain halki hi sahi par khiski. JIse dekh teeno ke man mein hausala badha to unhone apna pichla per thoda piche kiya aur apna sara zor piche ki taraf dalte hue puri takat se chain khinchi. Is baar chain jada khinchi aur ek awaz ne sabhi ke kan khade the, aisi awaz mano koi chiz uppar aa rahi ho.

" aur thoda zor se.. " meghnath ke per mein aseem dard tha lekin usne kisi ko abhas hone nahi diya aur josh dalte hue khincha. Chain khinchti jaa rahi thi aur koi chiz us chain ke khinchne se unke pass aa rahi thi. Ye dekh shruti bhi ab bechaini mein rum gayi thi. Kisi ko abhi ye andaza nahi tha ki kya ho raha hai, vo bhi idhar udhar dekh rahi thi is bhram ki shayad koi darwaja khule ya kuch ho aur usi main uski nazar talab ki taraf gayi jahan pani ke andar jo chiz thi usme halchal thi. Use laga uska bhram hai isliye vo talab ke najdeek gayi aur thoda jhuk kar dekhne lagi. Vo chiz bahut hi jada gehrai main thi isliye andaza lagana mushkil tha, bechaini dhire dhire badhti jaa rahi thi, use lag nahi raha tha ki vo chiz bahar aa rahi hai par tabhi uski nazar talab par padi jiska pani sateh se thoda niche tha, jisme abhi tak shanti thi usme halki halki bhav sa ane laga tha aur fir jhatke mein pani chatak kar kuch bahar aya jise dekh vo ek dum se piche hat gayi.

" tum log jo bhi khinch rahe ho.. vo pani ke andar hai... " shruti ki baat sunte hi teeno ke andar josh bhar gaya aur fir shruti vishal ke samne jaa khadi hui aur vo bhi chain khinchne mein teeno ki madad karne lagi. Ab to uski bhi bechaini sabhi ki tarah badh gayi thi. Charon chain ko apni puri takat se khinch rahi thi aur talab main halchal badhti jaa rahi thi, uske andar uth rahe bhav bhi badne lage the aur dhire-dhire pani chatak kar bahut jada bahar ane laga tha.

" thoda aaur.... " vishal chillaya aur usi ke sath ek baari mein sabhi ne chain ko takat se khincha aur vo ek jagah jakar atak gayi aur usi ke sath talab ka kafi hisse ka pani chatak kar bahar un logon ke takhno tak aa gaya jiske sath hi talab se aisi chiz bahar aa nikli jiski shayad kalpana bhi unhone nahi ki thi.

Sabhi ki nazre samne thi aur sabhi dekh kar is baat se pareshan the ki is chiz ka yahan kya matlab, samne taraju tha jo kafi badha tha bas farak itna tha ki taraju ka sirf ek hi hissa wahan maujud tha dusra hissa tha hi nahi.

lovely update ..sab thake huye hone ke baawjud khojbin kar rahe hai ..kyunki wo pahuch hi aisi jagah par gaye hai ,ab ye kisne banaya hai ye to pata nahi par waha ki khubsurti dekhkar sab achraj me pad gaye .
badi kursi chain khichna kisi film dekhne jaisa scene lag raha tha padhte waqt .jaise koi movie aankho ke saamne chal rahi ho .
ab ye chain khichne se taraju nikla book of hoax ki jagah. iska kya kaam hoga .

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Update ~~ 113​

" Ab iska kya karein... " shruti talab mein jhakne lagi. " andar kuch hai ya nahi.. clear dikhai nahi de raha.. itna saaf pani hai fir bhi... " shruti ne nazar us pole par dali jo bahar nikla hua tha, taraju ka pole aur ek taraf chaukar akar ka palhad jispar tolne ke liye saman rakhe jana tha.

" iska kya matlab ho sakta hai.. "

" Lag to adhura hi raha hai.. itni asani se hume samajh nahi ane wala hai.. "

" to fir kya karein? "

" Tarazoo ka matlab .. samajh nahi aa raha ... aise talab mein hone ka arth nahi samajh aa raha.. vo bhi adha.. kya hume kuch tolna hai? lekin tol kar kya karein? "

" Wahi samajhna hai.. aur agar is taraf rakh diya kuch to kya ye pani ke niche nahi chala jayega? "

" vo sab to theek hai.. lekin tolna kya hai.......kidney? " teeno apas mein baatcheet kar rahe the aur aaurhi dusre kone mein deewaron ki likhai aur chitarkari dekh rahi thi.

" Ye kya kar rahi hai? " shruti ne aaruhi ki taraf ek dafa dekha.

" Sochne wali baat to ye bhi hai ki aise pani ke andar tarazo ko kaun rakhta hai? mujhe to wajah hi samajh nahi aa rahi " vishal bola

" Wajah puchne ki jarurat hi kya hai.. waise bhi bin wajah hum yahan mandra hi rahe hai. Aur agar bahar jane ka rasta nahi mila to jane ki jarurat bhi kya hai... " shruti ne tanna kaste hue kaha.

" shruti tum bhi na.. "

" main samajh gaya... " meghnath ne dono ki baat ko andekha karte hue kaha.

" kya? " dono ek sath bole.

" Tarazoo ke ek side kuch rakh do to kya hota hai? " meghnath ki baat par shruti ne apne honth aise banaye jaise man hi man use chutiya bol rahi ho.

" dusri side uppar aa jayegi " vishal ne jab jawab diya to man ki nikli gali vishal ke liye badal gayi.

" lekin agar dusre hisse par saman jada bhari ho to usko uppar lane ke liye kya karna chahie? "

" is side use bhi jada bhari saman rakhna padega... ek minute tum kya kehna chahte ho? "

" bas yahi ki jo bhi dusre hisse par hai vo jada bhari hai aur hume shayad use jada bhari saman ise hisse mein dalna padega aur tabhi vo uppar ayega "

" Acha theek hai to main bhari pathar dhundu? " bich mein shruti boli to dono use dekhne lage " tum dono kabse kya chutiyun wali batein kr rahe ho? Tarazoo kaise kaam karta hai hum kya ye janne aye hai? "

" Nahi.. bas kaise karna hai vo samjha raha tha " meghnath ki awaz shant thi.

" kaise karna hai matlab? "

" matlab yahi ki is hisse par khada hona padega "

" tum pagal ho gaye ho, kurbani dene ka shauk hai kya? "

" shruti sahi keh rahi hai... hume is jagah ke bare mein nahi pata aur pata nahi kya hoga agar tum yahan is par khade hue to... ye bahut risky hai "

" jeevan hi risk hai dost aur sachai to waise bhi asani se nahi milti "

" wah wah taliya ... is admi ke to dialouge bazi khatam nahi hoti... ja re bhai tu jaa.. khada ho jaa... " shruti tali bajate hue boli to aaruhi ka dhayan un sab ki taraf aya.

" kuch nahi hoga.. " meghnath ruka nahi aur aage badhte hue jakar tarazoo ke us hisse par jaa khada hua. Usne ye kaam itni jaldi kiya ki kisi ko sochne ka samay nahi diya yahan tak ki usne bhi samay nahi liya. Aaruhi ye dekhte hi un sabke pass aa pahuchi.

" ye kya kar rahe ho tum? "

" hum bhi wahi puch rahe hai.. Meghnath keh raha hai tarazoo ke uss hisse ko uppar lane ke liye kuch bhari saman ispar rakhna hoga taki vo uppar aa jaye lekin meghnath ke chadne se koi farak nahi pada aur waise bhi agar hum sab bhi chadh jaye aur maan lo wajan jada bhi ho jaye to tarazo ka vo hissa uppar ayega to ye hissa niche bhi to jayega. Hum sab dub jayenge. Ye baat bina soche meghnath tarazoo par chadh gaya.. aisa bevkuf admi hai ye .. khud ke sath hume bhi marwayega... " shruti ki baat sun meghnath ko gussa aa gaya.

" hun main bevkuf... sach janne ke liye bevkuf ho chuka hu.. Marna bhi pade to kya farak padta hai.. tumhari tarah to nahi hun na.. " meghnath aage kuch kehta use pehle aaruhi ne use shant kiya.

" shant meghnath... shruti theek keh rahi hai.. hume soch kar hi kuch karna hoga.. Aise jaisa tum kar rahe ho use tumhe sach nahi milega ... shant raho... aur wapis aa jao.. " aaruhi ne bade aram se kaha to meghnath ek pal wahan khada niche talab ki taraf dekhta raha aur wapis utar aya.

Kuch der apas mein koi nahi bola, sab ek taraf jaa baithe. Sharir aur dimagi thakan bol rahi thi lekin ab vo ek aise maze mein fanse the jahan se bahar nikalne ke liye unhe ladna to tha hi. Shruti kuch der baad uth khadi hui aur bahar jane ka rasta khojne lagi. Vishal thodi der use dekhta raha aur fir vo bhi uske sath jud gaya shayad vo bhi ab himmat haar raha tha. Meghnath ne aaruhi ki taraf dekha jiske chehre par koi shikan, koi pareshni nahi thi bas ek gehri soch mein dubi hui thi.

" tumhare pas jada waqt nahi hai.. " meghnath ne jo baat kabhi use sidhe taur par nahi kahi thi vo bol di. Aaruhi ne uski baat par koi reaction nahi dia. Meghnath ko bolne ke baad apne uppar gussa aaya par tabhi shruti ke cheekhne ki awaz ne dono ka dhayan us taraf khinch diya. Dono uth kar talab ke us taraf bane corridor ki taraf bhage jahan se vo aye the.

" shruti tum theek to ho... " vishal ne shruti ke peron ko dekhte hue kaha.

" han... main theek hun.. "

" kya hua? " meghnath ne pucha. Vishal ne ishare se jameen ki taraf hath kiya. Aaruhi aur meghnath ne jab us taraf dekha to ek ajeeb prakar ki chiz thi nukili chain ki tarah.

" Kya hai ye? " meghnath uski taraf badha.

" nahi hath mat lagana " vishal ne turant roka " Ye chiz shayad koi zehrila plant hai.. tum ye kali kai dekh rahe ho jo is corridor ke dono taraf hai.. ye inhi se bhari hui hai shayad.. vo to acha hua usne shruti ka sirf jutta pakda agar per atta to pata nahi kya karta... "

" mujhe ye jagah nahi pasand hai.. bas mujhe ab jana hai bahar.. " shruti ka man aur jada kharab ho chuka tha.

" shruti tum akele kahin nahi jaogi.. mere sath hi raho... " vishal ne hath pakad liya.

" mujhse ab aur nahi hoga.. hume na bahar jane ka rasta mil raha hai na hi koi chiz hath lag rahi hai. Adha saman hamara girne se tut gaya hai aur adha gufa ke bahar hi chhod aye the. Ab yahan kya karenge yahin mar jayenge aur is kalle talab mein in bhuke ped ya koi janwar ka khana ban jayenge.. kuch bacha hai hamare pas? Keh rahi thi na saman le lo lekin nahi tumhe to in kitabon ki jada jarurat thi. Libraray kholni thi tum dono ko idhar.. khol lo library ab.. hamari prem kahani likhna. College se nikle kalle pani main atke... " shruti bil-bilati hue boli.

" books... " aaruhi ki nazar un books par gayi jo vo log lekar aye the. " mil gaya ... " aaruhi ke muh se nikle do shabd ne teeno ke kaan khade kar diye.

" Tarazoo par saman us chiz se bhari nahi chahie balki uski hi jaisi chiz, utni hi kimti chahie.. aur vo hai Ved sharma ki vo books jo hum laye hai.. " aaruhi ki baat sunte hi ek aisa josh bhara mano jung jeet li ho.

Vishal aur meghnath dono un books ko ek ek kar wahan le aye. Ab sidha sa kaam tha bas books ko utha kar tarazoo par rakhna tha.

" tumhe lagta hai ye kaam karega? " shruti ke sawalon mein ek aur sawal jud gaya.

" abhi pata chal jayega " aaruhi ne jawab diya aur dono vishal aur meghnath ko dekhne lage. Dono ne mil kar pehli book ko utha kar ache se tarazoo ke us hisse par rakh diya. Dono ki ankhein achambe mein khuli jab unhone paya ki book ka size uspar ek dum sahi aya hai. Unhone ek pal intezar kiya par jab kuch nahi hua to unhone duri kitab ko uspar rakh diya lekin us dafa bhi kuch nahi hua. Ab bas vo akhri kitab bachi thi. Un dono ne ek dusre ko dekha aur kitab utha kar tarazoo ke pas le gaye. Ab thodi takat jada lagani padh rahi thi kyun ki dono do kitab rakhne se uski height unchi ho gayi thi. Unhone zor lagaya kitab uppar ki taraf uthai aur dono kitab ke uppar rakh di aur rakhte sath hi thoda piche ho gaye.

Jada der koi soch pata use pehle talab ke pani mein halchal hui aur usi ke sath tarazoo mein bhi. Jis hisse mein teeno kitab rakhi thi vo dhire-dhire niche jane laga. Ye dekhne ke liye charon ek sath talab ki taraf jhuke aur us adhbhut nazare ko dekhne lage. Dusra hissa dhire-dhire uppar ki taraf aa raha tha aur jaise jaise vo bahar aa raha tha, talab ka pani bhi tezzi se bahar nikalne laga tha jise dekh charon ko piche hona pada aur fir dekhte hi dekhte vo hissa uppar aa gaya aur jaise us talab ke uppar fit ho gaya mano vo hissa banaya hi aisa gaya ho ki uppar atte hi talab se jud jayega.

Ek pal sab us drishye mein khoye hue the, fir aaruhi ke kadam sabse pehle aage bade aur vo talab ke kareeb ayi, do badi-badi paidyan thi, uspar vo chadi aur samne ek podium jiski unchai lagbhag sadhe teen foot ki rahi hogi aur uspar rakhi thi ek kitab, jaise hi aaruhi uske najdeek ayi, roshni ne uski ankhon ko chaundia diya. Ek pal ke liye usne apni ankhein chupa li. Us roshni se aaruhi ka chehra jaise pani ki bund par padti suraj ki roshni jaisa chamak aa raha tha. Uski khubsurti jaise nikhar kar sahi mayine mein ab bahar aa rahi thi. Usne apni hatheli ko ankhon par se dhire-dhire hataya aur fir jab us roshni mein uski ankhein puri tarah se jud gayi tab usne us kitab ko dekha jispar swan akshron mein likha hua tha.

' Book Of Hoax '

nice update ..shruti ka pareshan hona jayaj hai ,itne mushkil se waha pahuche hai aur kuch haath nahi laga aur na bahar jaane ka rasta ..
meghnath ko shanti se samjhaya aaruhi ne ki wo kaisa bhi faisla naa le jab wo taraju par chadha tha .
aaruhi ka dimaag kamal ka hai aise situation me bhi .
ved sharma ki 3 books taraju par rakhi aur ab sabke saamne hai wo kitab jiski khoj kar rahe hai book of hoax .
par is book me kya milega inko ye bhi dekhna hai .

 

[harshit1890]

Update ~~ 114​

" Ye kaisi language main likha hai? "

" aur tujhe kaise pata ye book of hoax hai? kya tu ye language bhi padh sakti hai? Kab sikhi tune ? "

" Nahi malum lekin dekhte hi apne aap dimag mein aa gaya " aaruhi ne ascharya dikhate hue kaha. Sabhi book ko dhayan se dekhne lage, shabdon ko book ke cover par piroya gaya hua tha.

" Lekin ek book ko pani ke andar rakhna? "

" Rakhna... na jane kitne salon ya sadiyun se hogi.. aur fir bhi ek dum sahi salamat rehna. Behad adbhut hai.. " meghnath ne book ke uppar hath firaya.

" Ab kya karein? " vishal ne pucha.

" jo khojne aye the khoj liya, ab le chalo ise.. bahar jane ka rasta bhi dhundna hai "

" baat to sahi hai " vishal ne shruti ki baat par sehmati dikhai.

" nahi.. hum ise aise nahi le jaa sakte " aaruhi ki baat par shruti fauran bol padi.

" kyun? tujhe ye jagah itni pasand aa gayi hai jo idhar hi rehna hai "

" Nahi.. par hume ek baar ise yahin khol kar padna chahie, kya pata jo khoj rahe ho vo yahi mil jaye aur koi jankari aisi mil jaye jo kisi chiz se judi ho aur vo yahin maujud ho "

" Aaruhi sahi keh rahi hai.. hume ek dafa padna chahie kya pata yahan se bahar jane ka rasta bhi isme hi likha ho " meghnath ne aaruhi ki baaton mein ek aur baat jodh di jise koi mana nahi paya.

" theek hai to kholo aur pado ise, intezar kis baat ka hai " Shruti ne badi asani se is baat ko keh dia tha lekin itni prachin kitab ko khol kar padne ki himmat abhi aaruhi nahi juta payi thi. Kisi ko bhi andaza nahi tha ki iske andar kya chupa hai, kaun sa raaz chupa hai jo aaj tak kisi ko nahi mili, jiske bare mein kisi ko koi khabar nahi thi. Aur use itni mehfus tarike se rakha gaya tha.

Aaruhi ne gehri saans bhari aur kitab ka cover uthaya jo ki apne akar ki hi tarah utna hi bhari tha shayad banaya hi aisa gaya tha tabhi itne lambe samay se pani ke andar rehne ke bavajud kuch nahi hua tha. Cover ke uthate hi uska pehla panna ujagar hua. Jiski banawat ek aam panne ki tarah nahi balki kisi dusre padarat se banaya hua tha aur uspar gadde the kuch shabad.

" ispar bhi wahi language likhi hai shayad.. " shruti ne gaur se dekha par use samajh nahi aa raha tha.

" wahi hai.. " aaruhi padne wali thi ki shruti ne use rok dia.

" padne ki kya jarurat, aage dekh.. kya pata koi picture bani ho yahan ki aur wahan se dikh jaye bahar jane ka rasta. Jaise ki kahaniyun mein hota hai "

" shruti sahi hai, ek baar bahar jane ka rasta khoj lein, uske baad hum ise padh lenge " vishal ne bhi shruti ka sath diya. Jab do log wahi chahte the to aaruhi ne bina pade hi kitab ke us panne ko palatne ka faisla kar liya lekin jab vo use uthane ke liye hui to vo utha hi nahi.

" Tu man hi man padne lagi hai na? " shruti ko laga ki vo padh rahi hai isliye samay laga rahi hai.

" Ye mujhse palat hi nahi raha hai.. " aaruhi ne takat lagai lekin vo panna utha hi nahi.

" lagta hai bhari jada hai.. main kosish karta hun.. " vishal jo shruti ke bagal mein khada tha usne uske aage se hath lakar panna uthane ki kosish ki lekin vo panna tas se mas na hua. Meghnath jo aaruhi bayein aaur khada tha usne bhi dekh vishal ki madad ki lekin dono ki puri takat lagane ke baad bhi vo utha nahi.

" Ye kya lock hai? " shruti dono ko dekhte hi boli.

" Ho sakta hai.. koi itni asai se kisi ko kitab kyun padne dega.. iski chabi hogi.. " meghnath ko bhi yahi laga.

" chabi mil bhi jayegi to lagaoge kahan? mujhe to koi bhi key hole nahi dikh raha isme.. " vishal ne kitab ke panne ko ache se idhar udhar dekha.

" ek aur musibat "

" mujhe nahi lagta iski koi chabi hogi... " aaruhi ne itna kaha aur fir kitab ke uppar likhi pehli line ko padne lagi jise padne ke liye vo bechain thi. Uspar likhe shabad jo shayad hi us bhasha ko padh paye vo aaruhi ke dimag mein ghumne lage aur akhir vo bol hi padi aur jaise hi usne bolna shuru kiya panne mein gadde shabd nikhar kar swan roshni mein tabdeel hone lage jisne sabhi ki ankhon mein apni chamak chhod di.

' Is kitab mein likhi har baat koi kahani nahi balki ek satya hai, ek aisa satya jisse har jeev anjan hai sivai uske jise sarjak ne khud bataya hai aur kitab mein likhi har baat ko khud sarjak ne likha hai '

" Sarjak ? " shruti ne fauran pucha.

" Creator " aaruhi ne shruti ke chehre ki taraf dekhte hue jawab diya. Sabhi ke zehan mein ek sirhan si daud gayi.

Meghnath ne dusri taraf se jab us panne ko thoda uthaya to vo aram se uth gaya, sabhi ki nazre uspar chali gayi.

" Ab uth gaya yani.. "

" Yani jab tak koi sahi tarike se panno par likhi baat ko nahi padega tab tak agla panna khulega nahi " aaruhi ne baat ko pura kar dia.

" Hum jo bhi padne jaa rahe vo Creator dwara likhi gayi hai, isliye Ved Sharma kehte the ki ye insan ki sabse badi uplapdhi hogi.. " meghnath ne sabhi ko uski ek aur baat yaad dilai. Meghnath ne is umeed mein ki panna palate hi unhe ek aisa satya janne ko milega jisse janne ke baad vo brahman ke sarre rehasyon se parda hata lega lekin jab agla panna samne aya to uske sath sabhi ki umeed hi badal gayi.

" Ye kya hai? " vishal turant bola. Samne panne par hateli ka chitr bana hua tha aur uske alawa uspar kuch nahi likha hua tha. Lekin hateli ka vo print nahi tha balki usme bakyda jagah bani hui thi taki koi usme apni hateli daal sake.

" lagta hai hand print dena padega "

" Creator ka ? " vishal ki baat sun sabhi uski taraf dekhne lage. " Mera matlab tha ki jab creator ne likhi hai to wahi to khol sakte hai, hum kaise? "

" kosish karni padegi " meghnath ne pehle hath badaya.

" Soch samajh kar, na jane kya ho.. " vishal ne chetaya.

Meghnath ek pal ke liye ruka aur fir usne hateli ko uske andar rakh dia, dil to uska bhi tezi se dhadak raha tha lekin karna bhi tha. Uske hath rakhne ke baad kuch nahi hua. To usne apna hath wapis hata liya. Hath hata kar usne panna palatne ki kosish ki lekin vo nahi khula.

" tumhara finger print nahi chahie Creator ko.. " shruti ne tanna kasa.

" main try karun? " vishal ne icha zahir ki.

" tumne apna hath dekha hai, isme fit bhi nahi hoga.. " shruti fauran boli.

" kosish karne do.. " vishal ne kaha to use dubara nahi roka aur usne bhi apna hath uspar jaa rakha. Hairani ki baat tab hui jab vishal ki hateli aram se usme fit ho gayi. Par hua tab bhi kuch nahi isliye usne hath wapis hata lia.

" tumhari hateli sabse badi hai aur fir bhi dum satik baithi .. " meghnath bola.

" Hum dono ke hathon se to kuch nahi hua... shayad aaruhi isko padh sakti hai to kya pata aaruhi ka hath hi kaam kare.. " vishal ne jo baat kahi vo sabko sahi lagi.

Aaruhi ne fir apni hateli uspar rakhi aur uski hateli bhi usme satik baith gayi jabki uska hath un dono ke mukable chota tha. Aaruhi ke hateli rakhne ke baad ek pal tak kuch nahi hua to usne bhi apna hath wapis uthane ki sochi aur bakiyun ke man mein yahi sawal aya ki aage kaise badha jaye? Lekin jab aaruhi ne hath bahar nikalne ki sochi to vo nikla hi nahi.

" Mera hath bahar nahi aa raha.. " aaruhi ke bolte hi ghabrahat ka mahol ban gaya.

" bahar nahi aa raha matlab... " meghnath ne aaruhi ka hath khinchne ki kosish kari lekin vo bahar nahi aa raha tha.

" aram se nikalo kahin chot na lag jaye.. " vishal bhi bola. Man mein bechaini badh gayi thi. Hatheli bahar ane ka hi nahi ho rahi thi, jaise kisi chiz ne andar se jakad li ho. Ki tabhi aaruhi dard mein chilla padi.

" kya hua aaruhi.. " par aaruhi ne koi jawab nahi diya vo dard mein karha rahi thi. Meghnath ne ye dekh aaruhi ka hath aur takat se bahar khinchne ki kosish ki par aaruhi ne use rok diya aur mana kar dia. Jo aaruhi ke sath ho raha tha vo sirf wahi mehsus kar paa rahi thi.

Usko takleef ho rahi thi lekin vo takleef seh rahi thi, sab usse puch rahe the lekin aaruhi kuch bata nahi rahi thi. Sabhi ka dil zoron se dhadak raha tha. Achanak sabhi ne kitab ki taraf dekha to wahan par khoon ki patli patli lakrein kitab mein felne lagi mano koi chitr bana rahi ho.

" Ye kya ho raha hai.. ye khoon... " vishal bola.

" shayad ye khoon aaruhi ke hath se nikal raha hai... " shruti faural boli. Khoon ki vo lakrein kitab ke us panne mein hateli ke charon taraf ek chitr bana rahe the par achanak se vo ruk gaye aur fir jis tarah se banne shuru hue the usi disha main wapis piche ghum gaye aur panne se gayab ho gaye. Uske gayab hote hi aaruhi ki hateli azad ho gayi. Usne jaise hi hateli hatai sabne uske hath ko dekha. Aaruhi ki hateli par jitni bhi lakrein thi uspar khoon jama tha mano unhi hateli ki chaap us panne par padhi ho uske khoon se.

" bandaid..." meghnath ne fauran kaha.

" nahi.. main theek hun.. main theek hun.. " aaruhi ne apni hatheli hata kar muthi bana li. Uski ankhon se dard chalak aya tha.

" Ye to bahut risky hai ... aaruhi ki puri hateli cut hai.. " vishal fusfusaya.

" meri samajh mein nahi aa raha, hamare mein se bas aaruhi hi is kitab ko samajh sakti hai aur vo bhi nahi khol paa rahi? " meghnath bechain aur pareshan tha.

" ab to sirf shruti bachi hai.. " vishal ne kaha.

" main nahi karni wali.. aaruhi ki halat dekhi hai na.. aur waise bhi jab use nahi hua kuch to main kya kar lungi.. " shruti ne saaf mana kiya.

" baat to iski bhi sahi hai.. lekin fir ab kya karein? bahar jane ka rasta kaise milega.. " vishal bola.

" Mujhe bahar jana hai.. main ab is jagah par jada der aur nahi reh sakti.. ajeeb si ghutan ho rahi hai mujhe.. " shruti ne apni vyatha batai.

" Uske liye tumhe kosish karni hi padegi... " meghnath ne kaha.

" lekin jab aaruhi se nahi hua to mera kya matlab.. " shruti ne apni baat dhaurai.

" par kosish karne mein kya harz hai "

" harz hai.. aaruhi ki tarah mera bhi khoon chus liya to? "

" main samajh sakta hun.. aur jor jabardasti nahi kar sakta lekin filal tumhare alawa hamare pas aur koi nahi bacha hai.. " meghnath ne kaha aur fir aaruhi ke pas aa khada hua jo ab podium se niche aa chuki thi.

" tumhari marzi hai shruti.. nahi karna chahti to nahi karo.. koi tumse jabardasti nahi kar sakta. Main khud yahan se ab bahar jana chahta hun lekin is book ke samne bekar hun.. " vishal ne kaha aur thoda piche hath gaya. Faisla shruti ka tha, vo ek pal wahi khadi kitab ko dekhti rahi fir kuch soch kar bina waqt gawaye usne hath rakh dia. Ek pal kuch nahi hua lekin fir uski hatheli bhi nahi nikli.

" mera hath nahi nikal raha hai vishal.. " vishal ko nahi pata tha ki shruti ne hath rakh diya hai, vo fauran shruti ki kareeb aya.

" tumne rakha hi kyun tha "

" mujhe kya pata ... tum log jabardasti nahi bol kar bhi blackmail kar gaye to rakh dia maine.. ab fans gaya ab kya karun.. "

" ba.a..ba... " vishal bolte nahi bol paa raha tha.

" baaab baakya kar rhe ho kuch karo.. " shruti chillai to piche se meghnath aur aaruhi wapis podium par aa gaye.

" tumhara hath fans gaya ? "

" nahi maza aa raha hai mujhe... faltu baat mat karo.. ab mujhe bhi dard hoga.... pakkaa.... " shruti ne kaha aur uski icha puri ho gayi, ek aseem dard uske badan mein daudne laga aur vo dard mien cheekhne lagi.

" dard ho raha hai.... aaaarrghhhhhh " shruti chilla rahi thi vishal use shant karne ki kosish kar raha tha lekin vo shant nhi ho rahi thi. Ek baar fir panne par khoon se lakrein banne lagi aur chitr ka roop lene lagi. Shruti ka dard shayad kam hua tha isliye vo ab chilla nahi rahi thi lekin use takleef ho rahi thi. Vo lakrein badti jaa rahi thi aur chitr banta chala jaa raha tha. Fir vo samay aya jiska sabko intezar tha yahan to lakrein aaruhi ke jaise wapis aane wali thi ya fir aage badhne wali thi. Aur hua wo jiski kisi ko kalpana nahi thi, lakrein aage badh gayi aur ek chitr ke roop mein badal gayi jiske bante hi shruti ka hath kitab se azad ho gaya aur usne fauran use hata liya.

Kitab par ek behad hi ajeeb chitr bana tha jise shayad hi samjha jata. Shruti ne jab book ka panna uthaya to vo uth gaya aur usne use palat diya.

 

[harshit1890]

SANJU ( V. R. ) Aakash. GuptAbhishek Death Kiñg Naina and all other reader

 

[harshit1890]

romanchak update ..darawane mahaul me pahuch gaye aur meghnath nahi mila ,aur mandoza bhi aadhe me chhodke bhag gaya .. aur yaha teeno ki halat kharab ki koi unka kidnap na kar le .
aaruhi ne jyada jawab nahi diya shruti ke sawalo ka par clue de diya ki meghnath ne kuch bataya hoga aur vishal ko yaad aa gaya boat ka naam .
shruti bolna bahut kuch chahti thi meghnath se par nahi bola ..

amazon ka jungle tour ekdam mast tarike se explain kiya hai ..aur unki baate ki jungle sabko kha jata hai .

aaruhi par bahut se iljam laga diye shruti ne par aaruhi kuch nahi boli par ye raat ka matter bahut darawana aur shocking tha ,kya shruti ko bhi aaruhi jaise bimari ho gayi hai jo usne raat me pant gili kar di aur dopahar tak soti rahi .. kya wo sapna tha ya hakikat .

ab pahuch to gaye par kitab ka pitara leke kitna chal pate hai ,koi jaanwar na mil jaaye ,pehle hi halat patli ho rakhi hai ..
aur is boatwale ko lalach to de diya par agar khazana na mila to ..

Thank u bhai

What an amazing story harshit1890
Started following this thread a few days ago. Aur yaha Tak jitne bhi updates padhe hai... mere dimag ke parkhachhe udd chuke hai... Matlb is story me bahut kuchh hai... Horror, comedy, hostel Life (jisko pdhke lga ki Kaash mai bhi hostel Life jee pata), and ab to lg rha hai ki isske peechhe bahut tagdi scheming hai. Ho skta hai... Nhi bhi ho skta... Saala bheja fry horela hai.
After reading so many updates.... I have become a fan of the way jis tarah se aapne itni detailing ke sath plotting ki hai. For eg aarohi ka jis tarah se mansion me kisiko dekhna... Aur fir kuchh dino baad uska uss mansion ki khidki se bahar dekhna, it's mind-boggling.
Pehle Mera shaq ms nandini pe bhi hua tha, lekin fir se alok ka statement ki wo itni bhalai kaise kr rhi hai aarohi ki.... Ye confusion create krta hai.
So many questions man!
A new fan in your fanbase..tc

Welcome to the story bhai Thank you so much bhai for capture detailing... Keep reading... and keep coming... thanks

Bhai Ap Bohat Is Zabardast Ja Rhe Ho . Kasm Se Mei To Ap Ka Fan Ho Ap Ki " Treasure Invisible Hunt " Story Parh Kar Ho Gaya Tha . Mein Xforum Par Naya Aya Hun . Ye Meri 5wi Story Hai Jo Mein Parh Raha Hun . Ap Ke A6i Story Mene Abhi Tk Xforum Par Nhi Parhi . Par Bhai Is Story Mein Ak Masla Hai Jo K Mujhe Samajh Nh A Rha Ye Story LoopHole Hai Ya Ap Jan Bhuj Kar Kar Rahy Hai.

Hahah Welcome bhai ... Thank you so much for reading... Bhai.. masla hai ya loophole ye to apko kahani hi batayegi lekin Treasure ki tarah end na hoga ye bhi confim hai

Aarohi Ka Jo Character Hai Wo Mujhe Shuru Se Hi Sahi Tarha Se Develope Hota Hua Nazar Nhi A Rha . Mtlb Bohot Hi Ziyada Confusing Character Hai . Ap Bohot Hi A6y Writer Hai .Please Meri Bat Ka Bura Mat Manaye Ga . Par Mein Confuse K Jo Character Story Ka Center Point Hai Ap Usi Hi Sahi Se Development Nhi De Rhy. Kuch Chote Mote Lops To Chalte Hai Par Ap Ko Aarohi Ke Character Ko Clear Rakhna Chahie .

Confusing character hona jaruri tha na.. Vo sahi time par hi samajh ayegi bhai.... meaning ki ek dum akhri mein Aaruhi main character hai? Sochne ka kaam readers pr Thank you for reading bhai Aur sorry worry nahi bolne ka.. apni ray rakhne ka hak to sabko hai

 

[harshit1890]

romanchak update ..jungle me aa hi gaye ye log par abhi manjil bahut dur hai .
meghnath ke pair me kaanta lagna aur koi keede jaisa ander hona ek film ki yaad dilata hai . wo hai the mummy .jisme jailor ke sharir ke keede ghus jaate hai .
shruti to achchi doctor nikli jisne meghnath ke sharir se keede nikal diye ..meghnath ko uske upar bharosa tha yahi best hai .
aaruhi ne bhi aage aake cart ko khichne me madad ki .
aakhir bhayanak jagah se gujarte huye unko manjil mil hi gayi ab dekhte hai waha pe aisa kya hai jo sab shocked ho gaye hai .

Han vo kida us peedh ki wajah sse aa gaya hoga bhai.. ab to ye dekhte hi jao kya kya ghusta hai Thanks bhai

हर शब्द कम पड़ेंगे इस अपडेट की तारीफ मे। ऐसा एडवेंचर्स जर्नी लिखना लाखो मे कोई एक राइटर ही कर सकता है। बहुत बहुत सुंदर हर्षित भाई।
आप वास्तव मे राइटिंग फिल्ड के एक रत्न हो।

बहुत साल पहले ऐसा ही एक खौफनाक और एडवेंचर्स जर्नी सुरेंद्र मोहन पाठक साहब के एक उपन्यास मे पढ़ा था। उस पुरे प्रकरण के दौरान मेरी निगाहें इधर से उधर तक नही हुई थी और बिल्कुल वैसा ही अनुभव इस अपडेट मे भी मिला।

एक एक घटना , एक एक बदलता माहौल , एक एक शब्द रोमांच की पराकाष्ठा पार किए हुए था। क्या ही बारीकी से इस पुरे इवेंट का वर्णन किया आपने ! अद्भुत लेखनी।

यह अपडेट इस बात का उदाहरण है कि आप इस क्षेत्र मे कितने परिपक्व और कुशल लेखक है ! कभी गलती से भी लिखने से तौबा मत कीजिएगा।

अपडेट की बात करें तो आखिरकार ये सभी अपने मंजिल तक आ ही पहुंचे। लेकिन इस दौरान मेघनाथ के साथ बहुत बुरा हुआ। यह उसकी अच्छी किस्मत थी जो मरने से बच गया।
श्रुति ने हिम्मत कर उसके जख्मों पर छुरी चला तो दी पर उसकी आंखे और उसका शरीर उसका साथ नही दे रही थी। उसकी आंखे भीगी हुई थी , दिल की धड़कने बुलेट ट्रेन बनी हुई थी लेकिन उसका हाथ कर्म किए जा रहा था।
यह अद्भुत लेखन का एक नमुना था।

लेकिन मै बार-बार यह सोचकर हलकान हो रहा हूं की आखिर मेघनाथ ऐसा क्यों कह रहा है कि अगर इस जंगल मे रात तक रहना पड़ जाए तो उन सभी को अगले सुबह का दर्शन तक नसीब नही होगा।
आखिर क्या हो सकता है इनके साथ ? क्यों ये सभी मारे जाएंगे ?
क्या उसे जंगल के जानवरों से खतरा है ? या कोई अलौकिक ताकतों से भय सता रहा है ?

बहुत बहुत खुबसूरत अपडेट हर्षित भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग अपडेट।

Bhai abhi to kahani fast pace par hai isliye shayad kuch miss ho jaye isliye pehle hi maffi dena
Bhai likhna apne aap chhut jayega kyun ki mujhe lagta hai ab mere pas samay nahi bacha hai aur bina samay ke likh pana is impossible.
ab ye baat to meghnath ki aage jakar hi pata chalegi... Thanks for reading bhai

Bhai ab last phase hai story ka or story bahut hi jyada interesting ho chuki hai aage kya hoga ye janne ki jo craving(iccha) hai bahut jyada badh chuki hai so plzzz request hai aapse abi aapki bs yahi story running hai to thoda sa focus isme de do or end krdo story ko fir aaram se apni married life enjoy krna koi aapko preshan nahi krega but ye jo wait aap hamse krwa re ho ye bahut jyada taklif de ra hai mere jese readers ko everyday 10 se jyada baar me online aake page refresh krta hu ki maybe update aa gya hoga so plzzz update de do bhai

Bhai main is craving ko samajh sakta hun lekin kahani to main usi pace se likh paunga jaise jaise mjhe samay milega.. uski to main already maffi mang chuka hun. Baki dekho jab jab samay milega ata rahunga mai... Thanks bhai

I have shortage of time friend otherwise you have seen that my review comes after every update of yours today I am reading updates after a long time remembering some of the previous things and have forgotten something, for that sorry

Now coming to the story along with Jaggu's dead body someone else's dead body was also found but no one is aware of it. If we look at this matter from Shruti's point of view this is not the first time. The reason is that many things have been kept behind the scenes college only cares about its reputation, it doesn't matter to them that someone's life has been lost

Meghnath, Vishal, Shruti and all friends are trying to solve this mystery which I do not understand at all, till the last update Vishal and Shruti were limited to foreplay, today they are also naked,seeing them, I feel jealous

One thing I didn't understand Meghnath and everyone's plan was not known to Aarohi then how can she come in this there is something we don't know Aarohi was busy in her sports activity then how did she know all this Come on, there is also a fear in the mind that this youth group has come to an unknown city by trusting the words of a stranger but if something goes wrong with them here then who will be responsible for it but the more interesting thing is Amazon forest?

Well the brazil scene was funny and serious too the pick-up guy was looking like a kidnapper what happened to Shruti in the night was just a dream or reality it has become very difficult to understand, to be honest the story at this juncture I was very excited to know what would happen next

The forest is beyond the thinking of humans rules and environment there are not like our city as beautiful as the forest looks from outside it's as dangerous from inside, animals also live there and they do not like Someone comes from outside, getting injured in such an area proves to be even more fatal

At last we are in front of our destination very restless to know what is behind those bushes

At last Aarohi was mentioned how much I was yearning for my Aarohi you are not showing the special role of Aarohi in Shruti's espionage affair She is cute and innocent I love it even if Aarohi abused uff, I'll die :die: The match was very good and you did not elaborate much thanks for this as I am also not much interested in sports but how Tamanna falsely accused Aarohi I would like to warn the writer of the story that Aarohi is only mine so fast My character should be introduced in the story as soon as possible so that an example of an ideal pair can be presented

Till now the story seemed supernatural to me but now it seems that it is not so, I could not understand the story till now, it shows what your writing ability is, you have done all the scenes very minutely and in detail. Specially rendered jungle scenes, looking forward to the next part.


​

BHai samay to sabke pas kam hai isliye maffi kya magna.. insan samay nikal kar kahani padta hai aur uspar review deta hai vo bht jada badi baat hai. hum likhne se jada to padne wallon ki mehnat hai.. kyun ki pehele sar khapao fir uski tarif yaburai bhi karo ... har koi nahi kar sakta... Aaruhi apko chahie rakh lena.. jo hoga baad mein bas mujhe mat kehna aur ise jada to kya hi kahun... Supernatural to hai par vo nahi jaisa sab soch rahe hai.. end abhi baki hai.. Samay jada nahi reehta warna end jada der nahi rehta... Thanks bhai keep reading