Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Aapko main kewal samajhta tha par aap to us se bhi pahunchi huyi cheez nikle..

50+ hu bhai. Lekin Sallu Mia bhi mere samne fika pakwan hai. Cigarette Gutkha Tobacco aapke chehre hi nhi, figure ka bhi bantadhar kar dete hai lekin limited way me wine....as a medicine ka kaam karte hai. It's my openion

 

[Death Kiñg]

50+ hu bhai. Lekin Sallu Mia bhi mere samne fika pakwan hai. Cigarette Gutkha Tobacco aapke chehre hi nhi, figure ka bhi bantadhar kar dete hai lekin limited way me wine....as a medicine ka kaam karte hai. It's my openion

Aap to kehte the aap Shahid Kapoor se bhi chhote hain.. kya samjhe ab hum jaise masoom log?

figure ka bhi bantadhar

Legend..

(Btw. I agree with your point. Kayi logon ko suna hai maine ye kehte huye, even kuchh doctors bhi. But apan sadhu aadmi hain, moh maaya se door )..

 

[Aakash.]

Since 30 years... but limited pag.
Cigarette , Gutkha , Tobacco... kuchh bhi nahi, one and only wine....अपना फंडा.. नेपाल अस्त मैं मस्त ।

Hum bhole Bhale masum hai ​

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Aap to kehte the aap Shahid Kapoor se bhi chhote hain.. kya samjhe ab hum jaise masoom log?

Legend..

(Btw. I agree with your point. Kayi logon ko suna hai maine ye kehte huye, even kuchh doctors bhi. But apan sadhu aadmi hain, moh maaya se door )..

Kabhi bhi nhi kaha . kamdev99008 bhai aur maine kabhi bhi apna age nahi chupaya... Yaha kaun sa koi chokri patne wali hai... Waise to abhi bhi ham naujawan hi hai...
वो कहते है न कि " मोहब्बत बच्चों का खेल नहीं है और न ही जवानों की जागीर "

 

[Aakash.]

Kabhi bhi nhi kaha . kamdev99008 bhai aur maine kabhi bhi apna age nahi chupaya... Yaha kaun sa koi chokri patne wali hai... Waise to abhi bhi ham naujawan hi hai...
वो कहते है न कि " मोहब्बत बच्चों का खेल नहीं है और न ही जवानों की जागीर "

Humse compare karo uncle kehlate ho aap ​

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Hum bhole Bhale masum hai ​

Duniya badi beraham hai... bhole bhale logon ke liye aaj ke samay me survive karna mushkil hi nahi balki bahut bahut jyada mushkil hai.

 

[Aakash.]

Duniya badi beraham hai... bhole bhale logon ke liye aaj ke samay me survive karna mushkil hi nahi balki bahut bahut jyada mushkil hai.

Lounge me continue karege ss me jaada cc allowed nahi ​

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Humse compare karo uncle kehlate ho aap ​

Haa haa..wo to main already hu.

 

[harshit1890]

इंजेक्शन से ठीक न हो तो साढ़े तीन पैग दारू पी लीजिएगा । वैसे भी जिम उसके लिए सही है जो एवरी डे करता है । उम्र बढ़ने के बाद अगर दो चार दिन भी छुट जाए तो नस ही नहीं बहुत कुछ खिसक जाता है ।
बेहतर है कि आप हल्का फुल्का एक्सरसाइज और प्राणायाम करें । और सबसे बढ़कर रोज चार पांच किलोमीटर पैदल चलना ।

Daru apun nahi peeta hai bhai... Daily hi karte hai hum GYM Iti bhi umar nahi hui hai meri Abhi to shadi bhi nahi hui Bhaiya ji paidal chalne se muscle nahi banti na Ab stamina with muscle ho to kamal alag hi hota hai aap to samajh hi gaye hoge

Ju ko private training ki jarurat hai
Hum help kare aapki ​

Trainer mahila pradhan ho to jarur bheje

gym join karne ke liye hum kyu pray kare jab aap kahani nahi likh rahe .
update jaldi milnewala ho to pray karenge ki aap jaldi theek ho jao .

Batao kaisi dunia hai Jab tak gym nahi tab tak no update

 

[harshit1890]

SANJU ( V. R. ) DARK WOLFKING Death Kiñg Aakash. Btw... Feeling good now... recovery ho rahi hai... I hope ek aur do din main fully recover ho jaunga

Will be back with the New Chapter soon...