Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Bhai or kitna wait krna hoga ek keemat jindagi ki or lust kimat love dubara padh li inn dino ab meko iss story ka next update padhna hai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "

Andhere mein ek matr roshni tab hui jab phone vibrate hua aur uski screen se roshni ane lagi. Vo kuch der tak vibrate hota raha jiske baad uski ankh khuli. Usne takiye ke pas pada phone uthaya aur adhi nind mein hi screen par dekhti hui sochne lagi ki uska phone kharab ho gaya hai. Phone lagatar vibrate ho raha tha aur screen bhi usi tarah khuli hui thi jaise kisi ka phone to aya hai par uspar koi number maujud nahi tha. Usne phone par answer swipe kiya aur utne mei hi vo cut ho gaya. Katte hi phone lock ho gaya jise usne unlock kiya aur call log dekhne lagi. Wahan par sabse akhri aya phone abhi ka hi tha, 3 baj kar 3 minute lekin number likha nahi aa raha tha. Usne ubasi bhari aur phone lock karke wapis so gayi. Paki nind mein thi isliye ankh band karte hi nind aa gayi.

" uth ja kamini kab tak soyegi, sapne mein koi le raha hai kya teri " kamre ki khidki se ati suraj ki roshni uske chehre par padh rahi thi lekin vo uthne ka naam nahi le rahi thi. " dekh supriya tu ab nahi uthi to main maan lungi ki tu kisi ladke ko de rahi hai sapne mein " usne uska kandha hilaya aur phir uski chatiyun ke nipple ko khinch diye.

" haramzadi " nind mein chillate hue usne uska hath jhatak diya.

" he he he check kar rahi thi ki chudte hue sapno mein tere khade hue ki nahi " vo apne bistar par aa laiti aur phone utha liya. Supriya apna sina sehlati hui khadi hui aur jamai lete hue uth baithi. " tu badi kutiya hai megha "

" mera kutiya hone ka pata nahi lekin kutiya hokar chudna jarur pasand karungi " megha ne apne dimag mein kuch waisa hi pose bana liya.

" tujhe iske alawa kuch sujta hi nahi hai kabhi " baal banate hue supriya boli. Usne dono palang ke bich mein rakhe stool par se apna rubber band uthaya aur use balon mein bandhne lagi. " 8:30 baj gaye hain " baal bante waqt usne ghadi mein time dekha " aaj phir class miss ho jayegi " vo bed se khadi ho gayi.

" class chhod ye jo tu jhadne lagi hai na iska kuch kar " megha ne uske uthte hi ishara kiya. Supriya ne bistar par dekha to vo bhi hairan reh gayi, balon ke guche- guche pade the jaise uske baal raat utare gaye ho. " par tu ek baat bata mujhe, tere sar par ye kaisi jadh hai jo itna jhadne ke baad bhi khile hue hai? sala mujhe kabhi kabhi samajh nahi ata ki tere mein kami hai ya mere mein. Itne baal tutne ke baad bhi itne khile hue hai "

" teri nazar ki wajah se hi tut rahe hain, sara time nazar lagati rehti hai haramzadi kahin ki " muskurate hue usne jawab diya aur palang jhadte hue usne almari kholi. Jo kamre ke ek kone mein rakhi ek matr almari thi. Usi mein dono ke kapde rakhe hue the, kuch jarurat ka saman aur kitabein jo almari ke uppar rakhi thi. Supriya ne apne kapde nikale ek bra aur penty ke baad pajami nikala aur towel kandhe par daal kar bathroom ke andar ghus gayi.

" megha sahi keh rahi hai bahut baal jhadne lage hain, pata nahi kya hai, sab kuch try kar liya. Maa se puchna padega vahi koi desi ilaz batayegi " brush karte waqt khud ko aine mein dekhte hue supriya soch mein dubi hui thi. Bina nahaye bhi vo behad sundar lagti thi, use apni ankhein badi pyari lagti thi aur vo har dum bas usi ke bare mein sochti rehti thi, halki brown-black eyes use apni ankhon ke multi-color hone par naaz tha jo uske sundar chehre par nikhar kar ata tha. Brush karke usne apne sare kapde utare aur shower on kar diya. Aaj sar dhone ka din nahi tha lekin itne baal-tute the ki usne pani se sar dhona behtar samjha. Pani jaise-jaise uske balon ko bhigo raha tha waise waise uske baal tute hue niche gir rahe the aur behte hue nali mein jaa rahe the. Kuch der vo waisi hi nahati rahi aur baal usi tarah tute rahe. Fir usne shower band kiya aur apne sharir par sabun ache se ragda aur fir naha dho kar bahar nikli.

Sar par towel bandh kar vo bra aur pajami pehen kar bahar ayi " jaa naha le, na jane tab se kya kar rahi hai phone par "

" nahati hun yaar kya jaldi hai "

" class nahi leni tujhe? "

" leni to hai par class nahi kuch aur "

" hehehe sali haramzadi " supriya ne almari se ek kurta nikala, light blue color ka aur use pehen liya. Towel sar se utara aur baal pochne lagi.

" aaj tune sar gila kar liya? " megha ne phone se nazar hata kar use dekhte hi toka.

" han bahut baal jhade kal raat to socha dho lun aaj "

" tera dimag kharab hai, aaj amavas hai, aaj nahi dhote baal "

" are wah tu manti hai in sab mein " supriya ne uska mazak banate hue kaha.

" nahi mein nahi manti lekin tu agar lawda dilwa de to maane lagun " megha ne andaz mein kaha aur fir dono hasne lagi.

" teri aag shant nahi hoti, akash se baat nahi bani kya abhi tak? " apne aap ko savarte hue supriya baat kar rahi thi.

" usi ne to aag laga rakhi hai, sala subah-subah hi puchta hai ki kaisi ho? ab isko kaise bataun ki raat ki gili hun aur abhi tak sukhi nahi hun "

" badi besharam haramzadi hai tu " supriya ne mathe par choti bindi lagai jisne uske mathe ko aur nikhaar diya.

" jab niche se awaz ati hai to besharmi piche se bahar nikal jati hai. "

" chal ab ye batein chhod, mess mein nashta nahi milega aur mr. dutt ki class chutti to vo alag lenge baad mein, jaldi khadi ho ja " supriya ne megha ki taraf dekha jo sidhi laiti hui chatt ki taraf dekh rahi thi bas. " kya hua ab kya deewar par chadh kar akash ko degi? " supriya ki baat ka usne koi jawab nahi diya to chehre par ayi hansi gayab ho gayi. " megha? " vo uske pass ayi. " megha " hilane par bhi usne koi jawab nahi diya bas chatt ki aaur dekhti rahi " kya dekh rahi hai ? " achanak se aye badlav ne supriya ko bhi dara diya. Usne bhi ek pal himmat karke chatt ki taraf dekha lekin wahan kuch nahi tha sivai ek pankhe ke jo band pada tha.

" soch rahi hun ki akash mujhe kitni der tak chhod sakta hai " megha ke bolte hi supriya ne ek chanta uske gaal par laga diya.

" ek number ki haramzadi hai tu, main jaa rahi hun class " supriya ne books li aur bahar nikalne lagi " kitni der mein ayegi? " usne ek baar fir pucha.

" tu chal bas ati hun main " megha ke jawab dete hi supriya bahar nikal gayi. Uske jatte hi megha ne phone uthaya aur akash ka message fir se dekha jahan usne likha tha. ' tumhara yovan aisa hai ki ras niklta rahe aur mei use pita rahun ' kal raat ko aur subah ki hui baton mein kuch isi tarah ki baat thi par akash ke is message ke baad megha likh nahi payi thi kyun ki uska yovan niche se gila hota hi jaa raha tha.

Megha ne apna hath pajame ke andar dala aur penty ke uppar se apne yovan se bhari jawan chut ko chu liya aur fir use sehlane lagi. ' aahh ' bhari siskiyun ne uske badan ki tadap ko badhaya aur hath ki speed badh gayi. Abhi vo penty ke uppar se hi use masal rahi thi.

" main soch rahi thi ki aaj dutt ki class chodh deti hun aur tere liye canteen se kuch order kar deti hun, bata kya legi? " supriya gate khol kar andar ghusi to usne dekha megha apni chut sehlane mein lagi hui thi.

" supriya " megha use dikhte hi chillai aur usne apna hath bahar khinch liya. Bas iske aage vo kuch keh pati use pehle hostel mein ek shor gunj utha. Dono kamre se nikli aur corridor se niche ki taraf daudi.

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[harshit1890]

Bhai or kitna wait krna hoga ek keemat jindagi ki or lust kimat love dubara padh li inn dino ab meko iss story ka next update padhna hai

Yar office mei bsy hu bht jda. Likh rha hu thda thda hopefully jaldi lautaunga...

 

[Aakash.]

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Aarohi ​

 

[GuptAbhishek]

(Bhai ab to haunted 2 me dipzz Marne wali h) iss story ka 1 update hi padhne ko de do

 

[harshit1890]

(Bhai ab to haunted 2 me dipzz Marne wali h) iss story ka 1 update hi padhne ko de do

Bhai tym nai mil rha hai ab to aisa lag rha hai ki kahani Adhuri na reh jaye...

 

[Death Kiñg]

Bhai tym nai mil rha hai ab to aisa lag rha hai ki kahani Adhuri na reh jaye...

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Bhai tym nai mil rha hai ab to aisa lag rha hai ki kahani Adhuri na reh jaye...

Bs yahi mt krna Bhai hmara b soch lo jo baar baar xforum khol rahe hai check krne ko sirf aapki story ka update aaya ki nhi time to bhai aapko nikalna hi hoga hmare liye game of rings padh ra hu kal tak khatam ho jayegi uske baad to fir kuch bachega hi ni padhne ko or ye story meri personal fav ban chuki hai tbse jbse shreyas ka Cameo hua hai isme to iss story ko end to krna hi hoga aapko

 

[Aakash.]

Bhai tym nai mil rha hai ab to aisa lag rha hai ki kahani Adhuri na reh jaye...

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[harshit1890]

Bs yahi mt krna Bhai hmara b soch lo jo baar baar xforum khol rahe hai check krne ko sirf aapki story ka update aaya ki nhi time to bhai aapko nikalna hi hoga hmare liye game of rings padh ra hu kal tak khatam ho jayegi uske baad to fir kuch bachega hi ni padhne ko or ye story meri personal fav ban chuki hai tbse jbse shreyas ka Cameo hua hai isme to iss story ko end to krna hi hoga aapko

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