Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[nain11ster]

tera baap teri chinta to karta hai, par mera baap to meri hi lene ki taak mein rehta hai. Jab mauka mile use kamre mein ghus ata hai, kabhi-kabhi to naha kar bahar ati hun to bathroom ke bahar hi khada rehta hai. Meri bra aur penty ko pakad kar kahega ' kalyani tumhari choice to bahut achi hai, mujhe bhi batao taki mein tumhari mom ke liye bhi khaird sakun' " kalyani kamre ki panchvi ladki jo nasha karne ke baad gardan latkaye bol rahi thi. Supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo khud se baat kar rahi hai ya fir use suna rahi hai. Isi duvidha ke chalte usne kuch nahi pucha aur chup hi rehna behtar samjha.

Incest reader practical karta spotted... Harshit bhai iska naam aur pata bhi likh dena tha... Aise baap Ko saaf karke... Mati ko Pavitra kar denge...

 

[nain11ster]

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" tera baap teri chinta to karta hai, par mera baap to meri hi lene ki taak mein rehta hai. Jab mauka mile use kamre mein ghus ata hai, kabhi-kabhi to naha kar bahar ati hun to bathroom ke bahar hi khada rehta hai. Meri bra aur penty ko pakad kar kahega ' kalyani tumhari choice to bahut achi hai, mujhe bhi batao taki mein tumhari mom ke liye bhi khaird sakun' " kalyani kamre ki panchvi ladki jo nasha karne ke baad gardan latkaye bol rahi thi. Supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo khud se baat kar rahi hai ya fir use suna rahi hai. Isi duvidha ke chalte usne kuch nahi pucha aur chup hi rehna behtar samjha. " ab to apne hi ghar mein lagta hai ki mera hi baap meri tangon ke bich apna budhape ka ashyana banayega kyun ki meri chutiya maa use samajh hi nahi ata. Na jane kya hua hai use jabse is betichod se shadi kari hai tabse uski har baat manti hai aur meri ek bhi nahi. Pata nahi vo admi meri chutiya maa ko kya deta hai, kai baar to lagta hai tangon ke bich dene ki jagah vo uske dimag mein koi dawai bhar raha hai. Darti hun ghar jane se, us admi se isliye kho jana chahti hun is nashe mein jahan koi dar hai na hi vo admi sala sirf khali hai idhar koi nahi hai.. " kalyani fir chup hui. Supriya ko maa baap ke bare mein aisi gali galoz sun kar ajeeb sa mehsus ho raha tha. Usne na to kabhi aisa kuch suna tha nahi ki uski aisi koi saheli parvirish hui thi. Jo vo bata rahi thi uske liye dukh to hua lekin uska apni maa ko gali dena vo bilkul acha nahi laga.

" apko apni maa ko gali nahi dena chahie " use raha nahi gaya aur muh se nikal gaya. Kalyani bilkul uske samne thi, gardan dayein aur jhuki hui thi supriya ki baat sunte hi usne apni nazre uski taraf uthai jo uske balon ke piche chup to rahi thi lekin fir bhi supriya ko dikhai de rahi thi. Supriya ko tabhi apni galti ka ehsas hua aur usne nazar ghuma li. Vo wahan kyun baithi hai kya kar rahi hai ye abhi tak uske liye ek sawal bana hua tha. Sabhi nashe ki halat mein is kadar pade the ki unme jaise sharir hilane ki takat na ho. Supriya ko ye to amajh aa gaya ki ye sab usi ki wajah se hua jo komal ne us din banaya tha aur aaj bhi bana rahi thi. Na jane kaisi gandi lat hai inhe ye sab lene ki, kahin kisi ko kuch ho gaya to? Supriya ko bas isi baat ka dar tha aur vo wahan se jana chahti thi. Mujhe yahan se chale jana chahie ise acha chance nahi mil sakta, ye log itne nashe mein rahenge ki inhe yaad bhi nahi rahega ki main yahan inke sath ayi thi, Par use pehle mujhe mera phone chahie aur vo tanu ke pas hi hai, kahan rakha hai usne. Supriya nazar tanu ke uppar dalne lagi jo palang par felhi padi thi. Ankhein khuli hui thi lekin jaise is dunia mein nahi balki kisi aur dunia mein padi ho. Supriya ne usne palang ke bache hue hisse par dekha lekin use uska phone nahi mila. " kahan gaya phone abhi to yahin par rakh kar dikha rahi thi, iske niche to nahi dab gaya, shit.. ab kya karun " supriya soch vichar karti rahi, ant mein faisla yahi liya ki tanu ke nashe ka fayda utha kar uske niche se phone nikal kar yahan se jaldi se jaldi chali jaye. Soch to usne liya tha lekin uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki vo aisa kare, ek dar dimagi taur par tanu ka uske bhetar basa hua tha jise vo chah kar bhi nahi nikal paa rahi thi. " kya dar dur karne ke liye mai bhi? " supriya ki nazar beer ki taraf thi. " nahi nahi kya soch rahi hun main bhi.. do minute lagenge tanu ko thoda uthaungi aur nikal lungi.. han ye sahi hai.. " supriya ne faisla kiya aur apni jagah se uthte hue tanu ke uppar ayi ye dekhne ke liye ki tanu ko vakai kuch nahi malum ya vo khuli ankhon se dekh sab rahi hai par kuch bol nahi rahi. Supriya tanu ke theek uppar thi bas sharir ke bich mein thoda fasla bana hua tha. Supriya ne tanu ka chehra dekha, man hi man uski khubsurti ki tarif kiye bina na reh payi. Chehre se judge karne par to kabhi nahi keh sakta ki ye ladki aisi hai. Fir wahi baat hui chehre se kisi ke sach ke bare mein kabhi malum nahi chal sakta. Kaamini ki ukhadti sanson ke shor ko sun supriya soch se bahar ayi. Usne ek baar kaamini ki taraf dekha jo zor-zor se sans le rahi thi jise dekh supriya ko laga ki jaise use sans nahi aa rahi aur vo marne wali ho. Vo kaamini mein itna kho gayi ki usne dhayan nahi diya aur kab kalyani jo usme samne hi thi aage ki taarf jhuk kar niche giri jiske sath do kaam hue, uska sar palang ke kone se takraya aur hath supriya ke ubharo par jiske chalte supriya ka balance bigad gaya aur vo tanu ke uppar hi jaa giri. Giri bhi aise ki uska sar usme baja aur sath hi honth uske honton se ja jude. Honton ka chumban matr kuch hi second ka tha lekin usne supriya ke sharir mein ek ajeeb si sansnahat la di jaise hazron kile ek sath chub rahi ho. Sar lagte hi tanu vapis apni dunia mein aa gayi aur jaise hi usne supriya ko apne uppar dekha to usko bahon mein kas liya.

" dekho to aag iske jism mein, mere uppar chade jaa rahi hai " tanu ki is harkat par supriya sakpaka gayi.

" nahi tanu.. vo main.. galti se.. giri... " khud ko chhudane ki kosish krne lagi lekin tanu use nahi chhod rahi thi.

" ek baat bataun darling, jitna hilegi utni gili hogi meri... " tanu ke shabd sunte hi supriya ne hilna band kar diya. Use samajh aa gaya tha ki tanu kya bolna cha rahi hai. Uski chatiyan vaise hi uski chatiyun se mil chuki thi aur hilne par apas mein ragad kha rahi thi.

" vo main galti se ..... vo kaamini ko kuch ho raha hai... " supriya ne jaise hi baat boli tanu ne fauran kaamini ki taraf dekha aur uski pakad supriya se dhilli ho gayi jiska faiyda uthate hue supriya uske uppar se hatt gayi. Kaamini abhi bhi usi tarah sans le rahi thi aur tanu use ghure jaa rahi thi.

" iske muh par koi peshab kar do tab jagegi ye... " uske sharir mein takat nahi thi isliye vo khadi nahi hui aur yun hi laiti rahi. Supriye ne kuch nahi kiya vo kabhi kaamini ko dekhti to kabhi kalyani ko jo farsh par padi thi aur use hosh hi nahi tha. Supriya ne socha ki phone baad mein le legi abhi yahan se jana behtar hai par aisa vo soch hi payi ki tabhi tanu ek dum se khadi ho gayi aur bistar se utar kar kaamini ki taraf badhi. Supriya ko laga ki tanu uske sath wahi karegi jo usne abhi kaha lekin aisa kuch nahi hua. Supriya ki nazar usi par jami thi isliye jab usne tanu ko kaamini ke uppar jhukte hue dekha to us taraf se usne yahi dekha ki tanu kaamini ke honton ko chum rahi hai. Kuch pal tak tanu nahi hatti to supriya ko laga ki ab vo uske sath bhi aise hi karegi, " nahi nahi.. " supriya man ki jagah zor se bol uthi par shukar tha sabke nashe mein hone ka jo kisi ne nahi suna. Usne chain ki sans li aur tanu ko dekha jo kaamini ko chhod chuki thi aur ab vo bhi sans aram se le rahi thi. Kiss karne se theek ho jatte hain. Supriya ne man mein socha.

" isko har bar sans deni padti hai sali chinnal tere andar tere se jada meri sansein hongi, bhadvi salli... suhagraat par bhi bistar mein apni jagah mujhe laitne dio tere pati ko bhi saans de dungi.. jaisi tu vaise tera bhadva ... kya naam hai uska... aeee kutiyaa.. uth... " tanu ne kaamini ko ek chamat rasida jiske padte hi vo achanak se uth baithi aur fir laat se usne komal ki chatiyun par mara jo deewar ke sahare baithi thi. Ek-do baar marne par use bhi hosh aa gaya. Tanu khud ladhkhda rahi thi lekin usne bari-bari sabko jagaya. Akhri mein bachi kalyan jo karwat ke bal zameen par padi thi, use dekh kar tanu ek pal use waise hi dekhti rahi fir ukhdu hokar baith gayi. " is marau ko bahut jada marwane ka shauk hai, aaj iski maar hi lete hain " tanu ne kalyani ka pajama khinch kar niche kar diya " kaisi patli si kachi pehni hai isne lagta hai iske baap ne lakar di hogi ise aur fir sala vo ise imagine karke budhape ka muth marta hoga... sala hone wala betichodd... L ... O .... L " muh ko gol banate hue tanu boli aur hans padi.

" aee marau jawab de... bata tera baap laya kya " tanu spanking karte hue puch rahi thi aur bich-bich mein hans rahi thi. Baki teeno bhi ye dekh khush the, supriya ko unke chehre dekh yahi laga sirf wahi thi jo wahan dari sehmi thi. " batati kyun nahi... bata naa... " tanu ne spank kar-karke uske gori chutad ko lal kar diya tha.

" ye sali tabhi uthegi jab iske andar iske baap ka lawda jayega... " sonam ne cigratte sulgate hue kaha.

" gori aur badi mulayam hai iski to " tanu ne spanking band karke uski chutdon ko sehlane lagi. " uth marau uth.. bata kaise itni chikni ki tune.. kya lagati hai tu.. " tanu ne uski thong wali penty jo uske chutdon ke bich mein fansi thi use niche khinch diya aur uske uppar chadh gayi. " lekar hi manegi kya tu... hahahahha.. " hanste hue tanu boli fir use kuch jaise yaad aya aur vo achanak se khadi hui.

" chalo randiyun apne apne kapde utar kar fenko aur mujhe dikhao ki tumhari gand marau se jada chikni hai ya nahi... jo jeeta use inam milega aur jo hara use punishment... khadi ho be kya naam hai tera "

" payal "

" to kya pehen kar bajaun? suna nahi uth behen ki loddi... uth aur utar apna pajama aur dikha apni chutdon ko " tanu ke kehte hi payal khadi hui aur usne bina koi sawal kiye pajama niche gira diya. " tum dono ko kya alag se bolun... khadi ho be... girao apna pajama.. " tanu ne kaamini aur komal ki taraf dekh kar kaha. " aaj sabhi ladkiyun ko nanga kiya jayega... " tanu ke elan karte hi supriya ka halak sukh gaya. Use samajh hi nahi aya ki ye kya ho raha hai aur kya chha rahe hain ye log. Tanu ki baat sun kaamini aur komal payal ke bagal mein aa khade hue aur dono ne apna pajama niche kar diya. Kaamini ne komal ke muh se cigratte nikali aur khud muh mein thuste hue dhuain udane lagi. Itni der mein tanu ne kamre mein music chala diya aur kamre mein ganne ka shor gunj utha.

" maine honton se lagai to... hungama ho gaya... " ganne ke sath gatti hui tanu teeno ki taraf palti jinhone pajama utar diya tha " is marau ko tera baap uthayega.. uthaao bee isee " payal ne tanu ki baat sun use uthaya aur vo nasheli halat mein sar malte hue khadi hui use abhi tak nahi pata tha vo niche se nangi hai. Vo bhi sabhi ke sath aa khadi hui. " nanga hone ke liye kaha tha tum sab ko betichodon... nanga nachenge aaj... " bachi hui beer ki kane se beer niptate hue tanu boli aur sabne wahi kiya, pajame ke sath top utar teeno bra aur penty mein aa khadi hui. Payal ne kalyani ki madad ki aur uska top utar diya. Vo abhi bhi hosh mein nahi thi, uski penty tanu ne khinchi thi vo abhi bhi adhi tangon mein fansi hui thi. Supriya ne aisa kabhi kuch socha tak nahi tha jo vo aaj dekh rahi thi.

" char randiyan mere samne khadi hai, charon ki chikni gand mere samne hai.. kaun dega apni gand.. tanu ko bolo.. kaun... tu degi kamini ... " tanu ne uske naam ki jagah gali di aur uski chutadon par baja dala, fir ek ek karke charon ke bajaya.

" tera ho gaya to maal funkne de... " komal palati

" maal funk, chut funk.. ya apne mamme mere muh mein daal de.. tu kya sach mein meri randi hai jo puchti hai? Kabhi to khud bhi kuch kar liya kar... ya lawda chusne ke liye bhi mujhe bulayegi aur puchegi ki chusun ya nahi... " tanu ne komal ki gardan mein bahein dali aur uske honton ko chum liya aur chumte hue dono ek pal ke liye usme kho gayi. Tanu ke hath komal ki pith se fisalte hue uski chutadon tak aa gaye aur vo unhe dabane lagi. Udhar ganna baj raha tha, " kundi mat khadkao raja... sidha andar aao raja.... " chumma chatti samne chal rahi thi lekin sansein supriya ki tezz thi. Usne ankhein band ki aur use raveena aur uske bich hue chumban ki jhalak dikhai de gayi jise dekhte hi usne apni ankhein kholi aur tabhi uski nazar apne phone par gayi jo udhar palang par hi padi thi. Uske ankhon mein chamak aa uthi, ek pal ko usne tanu ki taraf dekha jo apne chumban mein vyast thi aur agle hi pal usne phone utha kar apni chutdon ke niche chupa liya.

Uffff ye inki dark fantaisy ... Itna ander ki baat kaun se source se pata laga lete ho harsi bhai.... Mujhe bhi batao main bhi research kar'ke aaunga...

Kya hi kamal ka convo tha ... Ati uttam ... Dekhte hain girls hostel ka silsila kya kya toofan machata hai... Lekin jo bhi ho... Apun ko maza utna hi aa raha hai

 

[nain11ster]

Update ~~ 15​

" aaahh.. maza aa gaya sala... tu bhi tanch maal hai.. ajay ko kab diya tha akhri baar "

" kal hi di thi salle ko apne doston se pelwana tha mujhe, lund par aisa katta ki abhi tak dard mein bilbila raha hoga madaharchod randi hi samajh liya hai mujhe " komal ne kaamini se cigratte chini aur bachi hui khinch kar use wahin kone mein fenk kar dhuain chhodne lagi.

" ye salle tatton ko bas ek baar chut mil jaye fir sochte hain us chut se vo kuch bhi kara le "

" tabhi mujhe ladkon se nafrat hai... ajay to majburi hai warna to... "

" aisi batein karke mahol ki maa mat chod varna mein tujhe chod dungi.. abhi to party hogi... behen ki lodiyun daruu laaoa darruu... aur is marau ko koi jagao " tanu ne kalyani ki chutadon par chapet lagate hue boli.

" iska muh baraf ke andar daal de abhi uchakegi ye... " komal ne payal ko idea diya aur payal use le gayi. Kaamini maal banane mein lagi thi aur tanu nachne mein. Nashe mein kisi ka dhayan hi nahi tha ki wahan unke alawa supriya bhi baithi hai aur unki harkat dekh rahi hai. Dusri taraf supriya bahar bhagna chahti thi lekin tanu, komal dono wahin gate ke samne nachne mein vyast thi. Dono kabhi ek dusre ke sharir ko bahon mein bhar kar dance karte to tanu kabhi uski chatiyun ko dabati hui horn bajati aur kabhi uski chutadon par thapad laga deti. Komal bich bich mein beer pii rahi thi aur fir kuch der baad payal kalyani ko lekar aa gayi jo use galiyan de rahi thi shayad payal ne wahi kiya tha jaisa use komal ne kaha tha.

" marau gand to matka kar dikha zara... " tanu ne uski gand par chapet lagate hue kaha aur payal ne beer uske muh mein thus di taki vo bak-bak band kar de.

" nangi hona hai to khul kar hoo.. fir dikhaungi matka kar " kalyani ko na jane kaun sa josh chada char ghunt beer ke bharne ke baad aur usne apni penty utari aur fir bra utar kar fenk di jo sidhe supriya ke samne giri aur is tarah marau yani kalyani nangi nachne lagi. Tangein khol kabhi apne mame dabati kabhi chutadon par hath rakh kar kamar idhar udhar ghumati. Baki ladkiyan hooting karti hui uske is nach ka anand utha rahi thi aur tanu bich bich mein sitti baja deti. Kaamini ne apna maal banaya aur sabse pehle tanu ki taraf badhaya. Tanu ne ek kasht liya aur kalyani ki taraf badhaya. Kalyani ne jhat se use pakda aur ek sath do-do kasht khinch gayi.

" chut mein se dhuain nikla lawdi.. chut mein se... hahaha.. " tanu uspar hanste hue cheekhi lekin kalyani ko farak na padh raha tha. Use is nashe ke aage sab bekar lag raha tha. Uske baad payal, komal aur fir kaamini ne ek ek kasht liya aur sabne usi ke uppar beer pii li. Ab nasha ek baar fir chadh gaya tha aur is tafri mein vo apna asli asar chhod raha tha. Achanak se nachte hue na jane kalyani ko kya hua vo tanu ki taraf lapki aur uske honton ko chumne lagi. Sabhi uski harkat par hooting karne lagee...aur vo aise paglon ki tarah tanu ke honth chusne lagi jaise vo uski sans hi rok legi.

" le madharchod... le... salle... mera baap hai na tu... de apna lund... mita le apni garmi.. yahi chahie tha na tujhe.... " kalyani ne honth chhode aur fir chusne lagi aur fir alag hui, " le dabba meri chatiyun ko kute ke pille yahi dekhta hai sara din.. ankhein behenke lode teri niche hi hoti hai ab daba inhe.. " usne tanu ka hath pakad kar apni chatiyun par rakh diya aur khud hi dabane lagi.

" is bitiyachod ko koi hatao ye mere ko kha rahi hai....hahaha... sali mein tera baap nahi hun... " tanu hanste hue boli.

" le lode.. lund de apna.. daal is chut mein... de naa.. kya hua bhosdiwalle... meri maa mein daal diya hai kya.. deta kyun nahi... " kalyani tanu ke pajame ke uppar se uski chut ko pakad kar bolne lagi.

" main tera baap nahi hun.. maaf kar.. maaf kar.. hahahahaha... " tanu pet pakad kar hans rahi thi. Payal ne use tanu se dur kiya aur kamar se pakad liya jiske baad dono ke bich hi chumma chatti shuru ho gayi. Jaise payal isi ka intezar kar rahi thi, dono ke honth jude hue the. Payal uski chatiyun ko dabate hue apna hath chut par le gayi aur use sehlane lagi.

" tu bahut sahi pakad kar layi hai is baar " tanu ne ishare se maal wala cigratte manga uski nazar abhi bhi dono par hi thi. Komal ne use cigratte apne kasht ke baad pakda di. Aur fir kaamini ne komal ko apni taraf ghuma kar apna muh uski chut ke uppar rakh diya aur uski penty ke uppar se hi use chumne lagi. " ise lund chusne ka shauk hai isliye mera lund samajh kar chusne mein lagi hai... " komal ne kaamini ke baal uske chehre se hatate hue kaha.

" tum sab ki sab randiyan ho, tumhare maa baap ko dikhaun ye sab to tatte gurdon mein fans jayenge sabke... " tanu ne hanste hue ek kasht khincha aur khinchte hue vo ruk gayi, jaise use kuch yaad aya. Vo turant piche mudi aur usne dhuain chhoda. Supriya kab se dekh rahi thi, sirf dekh rahi thi shant atma ban kar dekh rahi thi taki abhas tak na ho lekin shayad ab ho chala tha.

" fuck... ab gayi.. " usne man mein socha aur apne sharir ko aise kas liya mano uthegi nahi. Tanu uske pas ayi aur samne aa khadi hui. Suspriya ki ankhein uske chehre se takra rahi thi, Maal jal raha tha, supriya ko laga ki tanu abhi khinch kar use nanga karegi lekin aisa nahi hua, usne maal se bhari cigratte supriya ki taraf badhai. Supriya hairan pareshan kabhi us cigrate ko dekht kabhi tanu ko.

" lee.. " ishare se tanu ne kaha lekin supriya ne nah mein sar hila diya. Use laga vo maan jayegi lekin aisa nahi hua, tanu jhuki aur us cigrate ko uske muh mein thus diya. " mene kaha le to le.. jada buchati bani to tere ashiq ko bata dungi ki tu ladkiyun ki chut mein ungli karti hai, tujhe lund mein interest nahi hai. Fir aashiq kya pure hostel ki ladkiyan tujhse apni bur wali chut chatwayegi.. jitni senior hai jo lund nahi le sakti vo teri jeebh ka istemal karegi.. tu hostel ki kothe wali ban jayegi... har raat alag-alag kamre mein tera sej sajega jahan tu burchatti banegi.. samjhi... chal piii " tanu ne supriya ke baal khinchte hue kaha. Jo ladki kuch pal pehle hans rahi thi uske chehre par aseem gussa tha. Supriya dar ki wajah se mimiya kar hi reh gayi.

" piti hai ya fir meri chut se hi udghatan karegi... " tanu ke baal khinchne par supriya ko dard utha uppar se uski dhamki jo vo sach kar sakti thi us dar ki wajah se usne na chahte hue bhi kasht khincha aur halka sa khinchne par hi use khansi aa gayi lekin na to tanu ne cigratte hatai aur na khud hatti. Supriya ki ankhon se pani nikal aya aur usne fir kosish ki is baar jada ki aur kasht lete hi vo zor zor se khasne lagi jiske baad tanu ko hatna pada aur cigratte wahin gir kar palang ke niche chali gayi.

" madharchodd.. " tanu jhuk kar palang ke niche se cigratte khojne lagi. Par jo tanu chahti thi vo ho chuka tha, supriya ke dimag tak us nashe ka asar pahunch chuka tha. Khanste khanste uska sar ghumne laga aur sab kuch gol-gol ghumta hua dikhai dene laga. Usne apna sar pakda aur jab uthne ki kosish ki to whin dham se baith gayi. Samne ka nazara ghumta hua aur jitne bhi insan khade the vo sab use do-do dikhai de rahe the. Speaker se ati madhur awaz ek bhari awaz mein tabdeel ho gayi jaise koi uske sar ke andar dhol peet raha ho. Ek pal ke baad sari images badal gayi, speaker se atti ganne ki awaz band ho gayi, samne nangi khadi ladkiyan hath gayi, kamre ke andhera hath gaya. Image badal kar ayi jahan vo raveena ke sath kiss kar rahi thi itna hi nahi balki uske sath bistar par nangi laiti uski bahon mein lipti hui madhoshi ke alam mein khoi hui. Agle hi pal image badal gayi, bistar par sirf vo thi aur ankhein band kiye laite hue apne hath se apni chut masal rahi thi jaise pehli baar masal rahi ho, dhire-dhire bich bich mein tez sansein hoti aur hath khinch leti. Iske baad sab kuch badal gaya, palang, maa baap ke sath hanse wala manjar jo ek pal ke liye aya tha vo kho gaya aur sab kuch andhkar mein badal gaya, itna andhera ki use khud ke hath per tak nahi dikhai de rahe the. Vo kahan thi ye use malum nahi tha aur jor-jor se apne maa baap ko awaz laga rahi thi. Itni shanti thi us jagah ki uske rone ke sath tez chalti sans bhi jo bich-bich mein ukhad rahi thi, usi bich ek awaz ayi... " Aaruhi... " awaz ke baad kuch sunai nahi diya aur supriya ki ankhein khuli thi aur vo chatt ki taraf dekh rahi thi, sab kuch shant ho chuka tha.

" supriya... supriya.... supriyaa... uth.. supriyaa..... " gaal par pandrah bees thap-thapahat padne ke baad supriya ki ankh khuli, jisme abhi bhi dhundla pan tha. Supriya aise uth rahi thi mano gehri nind se bich mein jaga diya ho. Usne apni ankhon ko aur khola fir band kiya ki galon par padh rahi thap-thapahat ki wajah se fir khul gayi aur dhundla pan dhire-dhire hatne laga.

" megha.. " samne khadi megha ko dekhte hue vo boli aur fir ankhein saaf karne lagi. " tu yahan kaise.. kab " ubasi lete hue supriya boli.

" yahan sab kaise chhod tu bata tu yahan kya kar rahi hai tujhe mene.. "

" vo ... tera sara plan chopat ho gaya.. kal raat ko tanu ne mujhe dhund hi liya aur main uske kamre mein jaa pahunchi.. "

" kamre mein? tu kal raat uske kamre mein thi? " megha ne uska chehra uppar ki taraf uthaya jo nind ki wajah se jhukta jaa raha tha. " bolti kyun nahi.. kya kar rahi thi tanu ke kamre mein " is baar megha chikhi.

" thi thi kya kar rahi hai wahin to hun, tu subah subah kya bol rahi hai " is baar choti hi sahi puri tarah se ankh kholte hue supriya boli.

" tanu ke kamre mein? tu kya pagal ho gayi hai.. tu is waqt wahan hai jahan mene tujhe bheja tha kal raat par puri raat yahin pade rehne ke liye nahi.. "

" kya pagalon wali baat kar rahi hai main.. " supriya bas itna hi boli kyun ki uski nazar jab bagal ke pot par gayi aur khud ko usne deewar ke sahare baithe paya to uski sari nind tut gayi. Vo ek dum se khadi hui jisme use dikat hui par megha ki madad se vo khadi ho gayi.

" main yahan ..... " bathroom ke usi cucible mein khud ko pakar supriya hairani mein megha ki taraf dekhne lagi " main yahan kaise ayi megha.. main to tanu ke room mein thi kal raat ko "

" tu ye kya bol rahi hai supriya.. "

" main sach keh rahi hun, mere sath kal kuch ajeeb hua, yaad nahi aa raha kya hua tha lekin kuch ajeeb hua tha tabhi main tanu ke kamre mein jaa pahunchi thi ... par mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki main yahan kaise ayi wapis.. "

" tu tanu ke room mein kaise jaa sakti hai, tujhe to yahan ana tha "

" han han ana tha lekin uske baad main tanu ke room mein hi thi "

" ssshhhhhhh muh band kar " megha ne supriya ka muh band kar diya aur tabhi piche se do ladkiyan apas mein baat karte hue bathroom se nikli jisme se ek abhi-abhi ayi thi dusri ke pas aur dono bahut jaldi mein wahan se nikal gaye the.

" muh band kar.. kal tu tanu ke kamre mein nahi thi samjhi " megha ne uske muh se hath hataya.

" tu pagal ho gayi hai kya.. main jab wahin thi to "

" kal raat tanu ka khoon ho gaya hai supriya.. " megha ke bolte hi supriya apna sentence complete kiye bina use ghurne lagi.

Pahle lesbo fir waps se bathroom.... Yahan to alag hievel ka hallucination hai... Shayad 4th ha 5th stage me hai... Ishare to split personality Kongo dikha rahe hain... Baki abhi to pata na Harshit bhai kitne teer apne kaman me dale ho...

Tanu mar gai bura hua ladki ke sath... Kisne khoon kar dala...

 

[nain11ster]

Update ~~ 16​

" tu kal tanu se nahi mili aur na hi tune kal raat tanu ko dekha hai " megha supriya ko bata rahi thi lekin supriya ki taarf se jawab na ane par usne piche dekha " supriya tu sun rahi hai na mene kya kaha? "

" h.a...n... " supriya ni nazre jhuki hui thi. Megha uska hath pakad kar use le jaa rahi thi. " tujhse koi puche to sirf nah kehna hai iske alawa tujhe kuch nahi malum " megha ne fir kaha " surpiya " palat kar usne supriya ki taraf dekha. " han... " supriya ne itna hi jawab diya. Dono sidiyan utarte hue niche ayi aur hostel ke bahar jane lagi. Bahar nikalte hi baarish ki halki bundein supriya ko apne uppar mehsus hui. Hawa mein thodi sardi thi aur asman mein kalle badan chaye hue the. Megha hostel se piche jane wali corridor ki taraf jane lagi. Supriya ni nazar abhi bhi jhuki hui thi vo sirf itna samajh rahi thi ki megha use kahin le ja rahi hai, kahan ye puchna uski soch mein hi nahi aya tha. Uske dimag mein bas ek hi baat hi ' tanu ka kal raat khoon ho gaya hai '

" supriya.. supriya.. " megha ne supriya ka kandha hila kar use hosh mein kiya aur supriya ne nazar utha kar uski taraf dekha. " bas chup rahio.. " supriya ko megha ne ek baar aur samjhaya aur uske aage se hath gayi. Supriya jahan khadi thi uske aage hostel ki sari ladkiyan khadi thi itna hi nahi wahan police ke kuch log maujud the aur unhone ek jagah se aage jane ka rasta band kar diya tha. Supriya ne nazar sabhi ladkiyun se hata kar police ko dekhte hue jab samne dekha to uske chehre ka fika pan hairani mein tabdeel ho gaya. Uski palkon ne jhapkna band kar diya. Samne kuch duri par jahan hostel ki jagah khatam hoti thi wahin par ek lohe ka gate laga hua tha jispar hamesha hi tala laga rehta tha kyun ki uske dusri taraf Lal Apartments the.

Jis gate par hamesha tala hota hai aaj wahan uske sath kuch aur bhi tha. Tanu ... jo us gate par tangi hui thi, uski ankh aur kaan se khoon nikal kar jam chuka tha lekin khaufnak baat uska wahan tanga hua nahi tha balki vo wajah thi jise uski maut hui thi. Tanu ka muh khula tha aur ek danda uske muh se bahar nikal raha tha. Supriya ki nazar tanu par aise jam gayi thi jaise vo ye drishye pehle dekh chuki hai. Ye sirf uska bhram tha kyun ki aisa usne dekha nahi tha balki usne aisa socha tha ' mera bas chalta na to isko hostel ke gate ke aage nanga karke tangti aur ek danda iske niche se dal kar muh se nikal deti ' vo bar-bar apni baat ko dhaurani lagi aur dhuarte hue usne fir tanu ko dekha aur ghabarahat ke mare uski sans ukhad jati kyun ki jaisa usne kaha tha tanu ki maut bilkul usi tarah hui thi. Dande ko uske niche se daal kar hi muh se nikala gaya tha.

" nahi.. nahi.. aisa nahi ho sakta... " supriya ki badbadane ki awaz kisi ne to nahi suni par megha ne sun li. Megha ko laga ki vo ghabra gayi hai aur kal ki raat ke bare mein na bol de ki koi sun le isliye vo chup karane ke liye uske karib ayi " supriya " megha ne bas itna hi kaha ki supriya use dekhte hue hi chillai.

" aisa nahi ho sakta... mene sirf socha tha tanu ke bare mein lekin vo aise hi jayegi .... aisa kaise ho sakta haiiiii " supriya itni zor se cheekhi ki jo do hawaldar tanu ke sharir ko gate se utarne ki kosish kar rahe the vo bhi ghabra kar piche hat gayi. Sabhi ladkiyun ki nazar to supriya par gayi hi lekin warden ke sath khade inspector ki nazar bhi supriya ki aaur khinchi chali ayi. " aisa kaise ho sakta hai tanu aise kaise mar sakti hai... aisa kaise ho sakta hai.... shit... " supriya ne apna sar pakad kar zor-zor se cheekhne ke baad sabki nigahein uski taraf akarshit kar di thi.

" mana kiya tha mene tujhe kuch bhi bolne se lekin tune meri ek nahi suni " megha corridor mein idhar udhar ghumte hue boli " bola tha mene ki kuch mat bolio bas chup rahio... lekin tu na jane kya-kya bak gayi wahan, bhavnao mein behene se jada hai apna ras baha leti... usme main bhi support karti tujhe lekin tere muh ko chain hi nahi hai.. kya jarurat thi kuch bhi bolne ki.. " megha ruki aur supriya ki taraf dekhte hue boli " ab kyun chup hai.. ab kyun nahi bol rahi ... " megha ka gussa badhta jaa raha tha. " bolegi ya dun ek raipta tere ko.. gussa dila rahi hai bevajah... kya bol rahi thi tu.. kya bol rahi thi.. vo.. " megha yaad karne ki kosish karne lagi " han... mene sirf socha tha lekin vo waise hi mar gayi... matlab seriously? tune un panchayat aurton ko bhi maat de di jinke pet ke andar bache ke sath baat bhi nahi pachti.. aur vo bhi chhodo tujhe kuch bhi bolne ki kya jarurat thi, tujhe mene kal ke liye mana kiya tha ye tu naya kab bana kar le ayi... " megha ne uske karib akar dhime se kaha lekin supriya tab bhi kuch nahi boli. Megha ek pal wahi khadi use ghurti rahi fir piche hat gayi. Use kuch samajh nahi aa raha, pichle do ghante se use warden ke room ke bahar baitha rakha tha aur andar police aur warden maujud the. Police pure hostel mein chakar lagate hue kai baar warden ke kamre ke andar-bahar kar chuke the. Sabhi ladkiyun ko mess mein rehne ka sakht adesh tha sirf ek ko chhod kar vo thi Supriya. Megha ko isliye rakha tha taki supriya par nazar bani rahi kyun ki Warden ke mutabik vo dari hui hai aur uski tabiyat kharab hai varna to police walle akela hi baithaye rakhte aur akele mein vo kya kar leti ye to megha ko bhi malum nahi tha. Vo soch rahi thi ki ab kya hone wala hai. Supriya kuch bata nahi rahi hai aur abhi tak kisi ne bhi andar se supriya ko bulaya nahi? Na jane kya baat chal rahi hogi. Megha ke dimag mein yahi chal raha tha.

" mene sach mein aisa socha tha megha... " supriya ki awaz sun megha apni soch se bahar ayi aur uski taraf dekhne lagi " mujhe tanu par bahut gussa aya tha. Vo meri hi tarah un ladkiyun ki bhi ragging le rahi thi isliye mene gusse mein bas muh se kaha ki.. " supriya ek pal chup hui " mera bas chalta to isko hostel ke gate par latka kar danda uski.... " supriya itna hi keh payi ki warden ke kamre ka darwaja khula.

" apko andar bulaya hai " constable ne kaha to supriya ko chup hokar apni jagah se khada hona pada. " kuch mat bolio " megha ne dabe lehaz mein surpiya ko samjhaya. Supriya ne ek pal use dekha aur fir warden ke kamre mein dakhil ho gayi. Andar ghuste hi constable ne darawaje ko band karke uspar kundi laga di. Supriya ne jaise hi andar kadam rakha uski ghabrahat bhagte ghode jitni tez ho chali thi. Kamre mein baithi warden aur inspector ke sath do constable wahan maujud the jisme se ek mahila constable thi. Inspector aur warden usi ko ek tak dekhe jaa rahe the jiski wajah se vo aur bhi jada ghabra rahi thi.

" supriya idhka akar baitho " warden ne apni samne rakhi kursi ki taraf baithne ka ishara kiya. Supriya sehmi hui wahan kursi par jaa baithi. Uske liye bahut mushkil ho raha tha ek taraf tanu ka latkta sharir aur dusri taraf use puche jane sawal jawab, vo dono hi chizon ko alag nahi kar paa rahi thi jis wajah se uska dimag confusion ke bhanvar mein fans chuka tha.

" supriya " , " supriya " warden ne dusri dafa thodi unchi awaz lagai to supriya hosh mein ayi.

" ji.. "

" inspector sahab kuch sawal puchna chahte hain to tumhe jo bhi malum ho use sach sach bata dena " warden ki baat par supriya ne hami bhar di aur bagal mein baithe inspector ki taraf apni nazar modh li.

" supriya, supriya khandelwal, Nagpur rehti ho. Mumy Urvashi Khandelwal jo Neurosurgen hai, papa Kapil Khandelwal jo Army mein hai, information correct hai? " inspector ne file pade hue kaha.

" ji.. "

" hmm to supriya main jo sawal karunga uska apko bilkul sach aur sahi jawab dena hai. Main nahi chahta ki aap kisi bhi tarah ka koi stress lein kyun ki stress lene ki jarurat gunah karne wale ko hoti hai, right? "

" yes sir.. " supriya ne sab kuch chhoda aur bas ek hi chiz yaad rakhi jo megha ne kahi thi, 'kuch nahi batana'

" Tanu ko kab se janti ho "

" college ke first day se sir "

" hmm, kaise? "

" vo mera college ka first day tha aur mene unse hostel ka rasta pucha tha usi samay se "

" yani vo aur apa dono dost the basharte vo apki senior thi right? "

" nahi sir, dost nahi the.. "

" to fir? "

" first day ko unhone meri ragging kari thi.. bas usi wajah se janti hun " ragging sunte hi inspector ek pal chup raha aur fir warden ko ghurne laga. Warden ek pal ke liye sakpaka gayi " supriya are you sure tanu ne tumhari ragging kari thi? " wardan turant boli.

" yes mam.. " supriya ne nazar nahi uthai.

" lekin tumne uske liye mujhse complain kyun nahi ki? "

" vo.. vo... " supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo kaise bataye ki agar usne bataya hota to tanu use us jagah par band kar deti jaise us din kiya tha aur ye bhi kaha tha ki kisi ko bataya to din ki jagah raat ko band karegi.

" batao kyun nahi ki complain " warden thodi unchi awaz mein bol padi. Usko laga ki kahin baat uspar na aa jaye isliye usne strict banna sahi samjha.

" Miss Shailja " inspector ke bolne par warden chup ho gayi. " dekho supriya, agar tumhare sath kuch aisa hua tha to tumhe college ko inform karna chahie tha. Par jo hua main uspar na sawal karte hue ab tumse fir wahi sawal karunga jiska jawab tumhe sambhal kar dena hai, Kya tum tanu ko janti thi? " Inspector ne jab dubara wahi sawal kiya to supriya kuch soch mein padh gayi. Jawab to dena tha lekin kya vo use soch samajh kar dena tha.

" nahi.. "

" hmm.. to kya tum mujhe ye bata sakti ho ki tumhara phone uske kamre mein kaise gaya? " inspector ne evidence wale pack ko supriya ki taraf utha kar dikhaya jise dekh supriya ki ankhein hairani mein badi ho gayi. Usne ye mobile tanu ke pas se liya tha use ye yaad tha lekin uske baad use kuch yaad nahi tha ki vo use kamre mein chhod kar ayi thi ya fir megha sahi keh rahi thi ki vo kabhi tanu ke kamre mein gayi nahi aur usi bathroom mein raat bhar rahi thi aur jo bhi use ab yaad aa raha hai vo sirf uska ek sapna tha hakikat nahi. Vo hakikat aur sapne ke bich mein fans rahi thi..

" supriya.. " inspector ke awaz lagane par use hosh aya.

" malum nahi sir, mera din se phone kahin gum ho gaya tha. Ho sakta hai tanu ko mila ho aur unhone apne pass rakh liya ho "

" to apne kisi ko bataya nahi ki aapka phone ghum hai? "

" bataya tha sir, meri room-mate ko.. aur meri mom ko bhi malum tha.. kyun ki mene sham ko mom se baat ki thi room-mate ke phone se "

" theek hai.. maan lete hain.. " inspector ne evidence wala pouch whain rakh dia " to supriya apki aur tanu ki akhri mulakat kab hui thi? " inspector ke is sawal ne supriya ko bechaini se bhar diya. Vo apne per ke anguthe se apni ungliyan nochne lagi.

" kal.. "

" kab? " inspector ke puchte hi vo fir soch mein padh gayi. Raat ki baat jaise ek dum tazi uske dimag mein ghum rahi thi, drugs, nasha.. sharab.. yahi sab.... par ek chiz jo use sata rahi thi vo sochne ke baad usne apna jawab diya.

" din mein.. jab main warden ko complain karke vapis room ki taraf jaa rahi thi tab " supriya ke jawab dete hi inspector ne nazar warden ki taraf ghuma di jaise warden se is baat par puchti lena chahte ho. Warden thodi soch mein dub gayi, yaad na rehne ki adat use kahin dubo na de vo wahi soch rahi thi par dimag mein zor dalte hi use yaad aa gaya.

" yes sir.. supriya kal ayi thi koi problem thi.. uski wajah se "

" kya main problem jaan sakta hun ? "

" vo room ke bathroom mein pani ki dikkat thi sir... " jawab supriya ne diya to warden ne chain ki sans li kyun ki use ye baat yaad nahi ayi thi ki vo kyun ayi thi. Vaise bhi kal sham ke program ke chakar mein use kuch yaad hi nahi tha.

" hmm.. yani tumhari uske baad koi mulakat nahi hui " supriya ne inspector ke kehne par nah mein sar hila diya " to fir tumne thodi der pehle bahar aisa kyun kaha ki tumne aisa nahi socha tha.. mujhe aur yaknin warden sahab ko bhi samajh nahi aya hoga... " inspector ne wo baat pakdi jiski wajah se vo wahan baithi thi.

" vo.. vo.. sir.. jis din se tanu ne meri ragging kari hai.. mujhe darwane sapne ate hai... to bas kal raat bhi ek sapna dekha tha.. aur fir subah vo tanu ko us halat mein dekh dar gayi thi.. kyun ki sapne mein .. mein.. main unki ragging le rahi thi isliye.. keh diya ki mene aisa nahi socha tha... " supriya ne nazar uppar uthai " i am sorry sir.. lekin vo sirf sapna tha ... mam main bahut dar gayi thi.. bahut jada " supriya ki ankhon se ansu nikalne lage. Usko achanak se jazbati aur rota dekh inspector ne pani ki bottle khol kar uski taraf bottle badha di.

" supriya relax.. humne tumhe yahan pareshan karne ke liye nahi bulaya hai.. hume laga ki tum hamari madad kar sakti ho tanu ke khoon ko lekar isliye bulaya tha. Par ab mujhe nahi lagta ki mujhe tumhari jarurat hai, isliye tum jaa sakti ho.. " inspector se pani lekar do ghunt pikar usne bottle wahin rakh di.

" madam mein jaun " supriya ne warden se pucha aur warden ne inspector ki taraf dekha aur ishara patte hi warden ne supriya ko jane ke liye keh diya.

" thank you mam, sir... " supriya ne apne ansu saaf kiye aur wahan se chal di. Uski sans abhi bhi bahut tez chal rahi thi ki abhi use rok kar koi sawal kar liya jayega par aisa nahi hua aur jatte-jatte wahan hui thodi bahut baat-cheet ko sun liya.

" to apko kya lagta hai sir, tanu ko kisne mara hoga "

" keh nahi sakte abhi.. ek team uske room ki talashi le rahi hai unhe abhi tak kuch mila nahi hai aur dusri team college se mili information ke mutabik un ladkiyun se puch-tach kar rahi hai jo uske close thi. Kuch milega to hum apko jaldi hi batayenge "

" lekin sir koi itni behrami se aisa bhi kar sakta hai, mera matlab hai kya sach mein kisi ne tanu ke piche se danda daal kar muh se nikala hai..... " warden ke is akhri sawal par inspector ne kya jawab diya supriya sun nahi payi kyun ki vo jab tak bahar nikal chuki thi. Bahar nikalte hi megha ne uska hath pakda aur chup-chap use wahan se le jane lagi jab tak vo dono sabse dur nahi ho gayi.

" kya hua... kya pucha... tune kuch bataya to nahi.. kal raat wali baat to nahi batai na? " megha ne chutte hi apni jigasya dikhai.

" unhe tanu ke kamre se kuch nahi mila " supriya ne jawab kuch aur hi diya.

" kya matlab? "

" kal raat megha.. kal raat unke kamre mein maujud drugs... sharab nasheli chizen kuch nahi mili.. "

" tu abhi tak us baat mein atki hai. Mene kaha na tu bathroom mein thi tu.. " supriya ne megha ko bich mein rokte hue apni baat kahi.

" main bathroom gayi thi megha vo sach hai.. lekin tujhe agar yakeen nahi hai ki main sach keh rahi hun to third year wali kalyani mess mein nahi milegi... " supriya ne itne confdence se kaha ki megha ne iske baad kuch nahi kaha. Usne supriya ka hath pakda aur dono mess ki taraf badh gayi. Mess mein pehle se hi sari hostel ki ladkiyan jama thi aaj kisi ko bhi college jane ki anumati nahi thi aur na hi college se hostel mein ani ki anumati thi. Mess mein ek shor tha jo supriya ke atte hi band ho gaya. Sabhi ladkiyan usi ko dekhne lagi jaise use kuch kehna chahti ho lekin koi kuch nahi bola. Sabhi ko dekhte hue megha ke sath vo ek kone mein jaa baithi aur ek baar fir mess mein ladkiyun ke khus-fusane ka shor gunjne laga.

Parche lahra diye tanu ke .... Kisne kiya uss se to koi matlab nahi wo to writer mohaday me paale me hai... Kise khuni bana de... Lekin kam se kam mask laga'kar ya andhera kamra dikha'kar ek khauffnak aur dardnaak maut ki poori kahani hi dikha dete... Aise kaise sidha taang diya...

Waise update me bataya gaya ki danda muh se nahar nikla tha, aur Supriya ne jaisa socha tha waisa hi tangi hui thi...

To kya tanu nagn awastha me thi aur niche se danda daalkar upar nikal diya gaya tha...

Waise ek baar fir Megha ne saviour ka kaam kiya... Bilkul Supriya ki parchhayi bani hui hai...

Matr 2 ki update the pichhle kuchh updates... Aur kya hi explain kiya hai un 2 dino ko... Ek ek ghatna... Ek ek emotions aur har ek pahlu... ..

 

[nain11ster]

1) matlab jo kand hua tha us hostel mein matlab us cubicle mein actually wo ek suicide case thi.
2)jisne suicide ki thi wo thi ravina...
ab is mudde pe do points ye ki
hostel wali ravina aur supriya ki friend ravina dono hi lesbian thi.... (similarities)
dusri baat dono mar chuki hai bahot pehle hi...
3) friend ravina ne jo kiya uske sath matlab kiss bagerah aur sath hi uski maut ki khabar ek tarah ek gahri chap chhod gayi thi supriya pe.. ya kahi jaaye, subconscious mind pe ek gehra asar hua tha...
in sabhi baaton pe gaur kare toh yahin conclusion nikle ki.....
Supriya maybe bhool gayi ho hostel wali ravina ki baat lekin uske subconscious mind ne nahi bhooli wo baat... isliye bathroom mein wo sab hallucinations kar baithi...
ab yahin pe dusri ray yeh hai ki uske subconscious mind ne mari huyi friend ravina aur ye hostel wali ravina ko ek hi maan rahi hai.... ravina ko help ki jarurat hai uski nazar mein . ya phir ravina kuch dikhana chahti hai hai supriya ko .. isliye uski nazar mein wo sab ghatanaye ho rahi thi bathroom mein.. jishe wo sach maan baithi . jo ki mahaz ek baham hai uske atirikt aur kuch nahi...

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tanu ki maut ki case...
1) dono ravinao ke sath jo hua us waqt, supriya ke subconscious mind ke liye kisi masoom ke sath ki gayi anyaay hai...
jo aaj bhi ho raha hai.. chaahe ragging ke naam par hi kyun na ho...
2) hostel wali ravina ki maut ke bare jaanke uske subconscious mind ki soch ishi baat pe atak gayi ki uski friend ravina ke sath bhi yahi sab hua tha.. isliye wo aaj is duniya mein na rahi.... ab wohi anyaay supriya ke sath kar rahi hai kuch log matlab tanu and uski team...
to yahi se daba hua gussa jo badle ki bhavna se bahar nikla... aur shikar bani tanu... matlab saaf uske subconscious mind ek tarah se anyaay ke khilaf muheem utha li hai...
ab ya to is baat ehsaas supriya ko hai aur jaan bujh kar anjaan ban rahi hai... ya phir ushe ye baat sach mein yaad nahi mental disorder and criminality ki tahat...
lekin kaatil wohi hai...
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ab dusri taraf yahan kahani ke andar ek aur kahani bhi chupi ho sakti hai....

koi to hai jo supriya jo kehti hai, ushe sach sabit kar deti ya deta hai.... supriya ne bathroom wali ghatanaye dekh kar jo itni pareshan thi shayad yeh ushi insaan ne racha ho wo khel...3 baje baad jo phone kar raha ya rahi thi , cctv pe sirf supriya dikh rahi thi, TV yun on hona.. ye sabhi links ushi insaan se jude hai...

Koun hai wo... ek hai ki kayi saare
1) ya to koi insaan.... (yakin 100%)
Koun hai wo... kyun kar rahi ya raha hai.. Kya nata hai supriya se.....

2) ya phir koi aatma... ( yakin 0%)

Khair.....
are is pagal supriya ko hatao yaar... bahot paka rahi hai... harshit1890 ji ek kaam kijiye........
aur lead heroine Megha ko bana dijiye... usme lead heroine wali gun bhi hai aur kirdaar hai bhi dumdaar ...
To ye final hai ki Ab se lead heroine Megha hi rahegi .
pakau pagal supriya gayi bhaad mein

Khair.... let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit ji

Main jab page scroll kar raha tha ek quote par vichar dene to aisa laga 2 upade aa gaya kya... Fir pata chala ye to update ke upar kisi ka vichar hai... Adbhut dedication

 

[nain11ster]

tu kya behenchod hai... bol? hai tu? " megha ne uske kaan mein kaha. " kitni baar bol chuki hun ki ye baat mat bol mat bol.. tujhe samajh nahi aa raha.. bata bolegi ab.. bol agar bolegi to tere nipple khinchu bol... bolegi... bolti kyun nahi ... "

Ye itna focus ho'kar Megha kai ko aisa bol rahi thi... Koi logic tha kya yahan aisa kahne ka... Aisa lagta hai mujhse taakan na fit ho isliye aise usse illogical baten karwayi ja rahi hai..

Bechari Megha ek to itna help bhi kar rahi... Usse inam me ye na ki nain ko de de.. to ulta usse illogical kuchh bhi bolne wali bana rahe... Main sab samajh raha hun...

Ek dil jala writer jo mera bhala hote na dekh sakta

 

[nain11ster]

" lo ji.. inhe ab ek aur bat batao... tu ruk pehle tu puri baat sun.... warna tu mera dimag khayegi.. Ravina cubicle mein mari is baat ko lekar wahan ki kahani mashur nahi hai balki isliye mashur hai kyun ki log abhi bhi mante hain ki ravina us cubicle mein maujud hai... " megha ne chehre par ghambhirta banai aur aage ki taraf jhuki.

" matlab.. ravina ki at..atma... " supriya ne sochte hue apni baat kahi kyun ki vo dar rahi thi ki kahin megha fir uska mazak na bana de.

Bhale kahani me bhoot ka astitw ho ki na ho..
As harshir saheb declare pahle ki koi bhoot na howe... Fir bhi ye dono ladkiyan hum masoom readers ko soory masoom to SHADOW KING hai... Matlab hum jaise nadaan reader ko bhut ki baat se gumraah kare rahi...

Koi to bacha le

 

[Naina]

Main jab page scroll kar raha tha ek quote par vichar dene to aisa laga 2 upade aa gaya kya... Fir pata chala ye to update ke upar kisi ka vichar hai... Adbhut dedication

 

[nain11ster]

Ji naina ji hain kya... Aaj koi update na aaya hai... Kripya dhol peetne ka programme update aane ke baad kijiye...

 

[Naina]

Ji naina ji hain kya... Aaj koi update na aaya hai... Kripya dhol peetne ka programme update aane ke baad kijiye...