Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

Waiting for next update harshit1890 sahab. ​

GIF dekh kar man karta hai sari kahani abhi likh dalu par aaj kal kaam kuch jada hi ho gaya hai Varna to ab tak mein sabko suspense mein chhod jata

 

[Naina]

GIF dekh kar man karta hai sari kahani abhi likh dalu par aaj kal kaam kuch jada hi ho gaya hai Varna to ab tak mein sabko suspense mein chhod jata

edit kar du gif achhi nahi hai?

 

[Naina]

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For new update
Ab to had ho gayi Intezaar ki

 

[MAYA Pari]

Kahan rah gaya Harshit, aa jao

 

[Naina]

Happy holi

 

[Naina]

intezaar agle update ke liye..

 

[harshit1890]

Update ~~ 17​

" sahi kaha tha tune, kalyani to mess mein nahi hai par ye baat tujhe kaise malum hui " megha supriya ke bagal mein aram se felh kar baithte hue boli.

" kyun ki police wale use bhi puch tach kar rahe hain "

" hmm.. yani sare doston ko lapeta jaa raha hai " megha soch kar boli.

" nahi.. kyun ki vo kal raat ek sath the isliye "

" tu fir.. " megha itna hi bol payi ki use fir supriya ne bich mein rok liya.

" tujhe nahi manna mat man lekin sach wahi hai jo main bata rahi hun, kal main tanu ke room mein thi aur wahan vo sab uuunghh... " supriya kuch kehti use pehle megha ne uska muh band kar diya.

" tu kya behenchod hai... bol? hai tu? " megha ne uske kaan mein kaha. " kitni baar bol chuki hun ki ye baat mat bol mat bol.. tujhe samajh nahi aa raha.. bata bolegi ab.. bol agar bolegi to tere nipple khinchu bol... bolegi... bolti kyun nahi ... "

" unghhh.. unghhhh... " supriya ne uske hath par hath marna shuru kiya tab megha ko apni galti ka abhas hua, usne supriya ke muh se hath hata liya. Supriya ne ek pal gehri sans li.

" main sach keh rahi hun megha, kal raat bahut kuch ajeeb hua. Kya sach tha vo main tujhe samjha nahi sakti lekin tanu ki maut ke piche koi ho na ho lekin main jarur hun " supriya ne megha ko ghurte hue kaha par megha ise pehle jawab deti use pehle constable ne sabhi ko mess se wapis apne-apne kamre mein jane ke liye keh diya. Sabhi ladkiyan mess se nikalne lagi " dekh tujhe main bahut aram se samjha rahi hun jaisa tu soch rahi hai ye chizen vaisi nahi hai. Ye kanun ke lafde hai, tera pura carier teri puri life iske chapet mein aa sakti hai. Aur agar galti se bhi aa gayi to tu zindagi bhar kost rahegi khud ko lekin bahar fir bhi nahi nikal payegi. Isliye keh rahi hun ki in sab baton ko chhod de. Police ka kaam hai vo khud pata laga legi lekin tu is fatte-chade mein na fans " megha itna hi bol payi kyun ki hawaldar ne un dono ko bahar nikalne ke liye to majburan supriya ko uth kar jana pada. Dono mess se nikalte hue uppar chadne ko hui hi thi ki sidiyun ke ek hisse mein khade do constable ki batein un dono ke kaan mein padi jise sun vo wahin ruk gaye.

" kya lagta hai tujhe kisne mara hoga itni behrami se.. "

" sarfira ashiq hoga koi, aise katal asal mein wahi karte hain. Pehle ladki ki lene ke piche bhagte hain aur jab vo nahi deti to use tang dete hain "

" baat to theek hai teri, un laundiyun ne bataya kuch jise puch tach chal rahi hai "

" abhi tak to kuch nahi mila unse "

" aur us ladki se jisko sikander saheb ne bulaya tha us moti warden ke kamre mein. Mere ko to vo kuch gadbad lag rahi thi "

" lag to rahi thi bhai, lekin cctv footage mein vo takreeban 1 baje uppar walle common bathroom mein gayi thi aur uske baad bahar hi nahi ayi " constable ne uppar ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha to uski nazar megha aur supriya par padi jo wahan khadi baat sun rahi thi. Apni taraf dekhta dekh megha ne supriya ka hath pakda aur use uppar khinchti hui le gayi aur tab ruki jab dono kamre mein nahi pahunch gayi. Megha ne kundi lagai aur supriya ki taraf aise mudi jaise abhi jeet hassil ki ho.

" kaha tha na mene.. kaha tha na... " chekhte hue megha boli. Supriya uski khushi dekh jada hairan thi.

" tu hans rahi hai? "

" kyun na hansu? mene tujhe kaha tha ki main sahi hun aur tu galat.. abhi abhi un dono kal-muhon ke muh se nahi suna. Ye sale police walle bhi lugaion se kam nahi hote. Hum ladkyan aurtein yun hi badnam hai asal mein to ye log jada chugliyan karte hain... case ke bahane ladkiyun ke sharir ko shabdon se nochenge aur fir hasenege.. salle... chugaliachodd... LOL " megha ne phone uthaya, aakash ka message aya hua tha. " got to know the horrible news, is it true? " megha uska reply karti use pehle supriya ne uska phone cheen liya.

" par aisa kaise ho sakta hai megha... vo sab jo mere dimag mein vo kya hai fir? Vo....vo..... tanu ka yun palang par hona, bich mein unka hukka rakha hona... ek taraf sonam ka apna drugs banna.. kaamini, kalyani ki kahani.... vo sab mujhe kaise pata hoga khud bata... kalyani ka sautela baap uske piche pada hai ye baat to mujhe nahi malum ho sakti na? bol.. bol.. ab tu kyun nahi bol rahi... " supriya ne megha ko chup khada dekh use ghura. Uski ankhon mein pareshani aur hairani thi wahin megha ek tak use dekh rahi thi. Mahol kamre mein kuch aisa bana tha mano matam cha gaya ho aur tanu ki lash ke pas khade uski shok shaba mein baithe ho. Supriya ka dil tezzi se dhadak raha tha aur megha ki is chupi ke baad uski ghabrahat aur jada badh gayi thi. Supriya ko umeed thi ki megha ko uski baat par ab yakeen ho raha hai isliye vo soch rahi hain lekin megha ne uske hath se phone khincha aur palang par lait gayi.

" chill... aisi kahani kaun si nayi hai. Sautela baap hai saga thodi.. aur vaise bhi sautela baap ek mard hi kehlata hai.. ger mard aur vo ye sab soch sakta hai.. tu bevajah bhavuk ho rahi hai " megha ne whtsapp khol aakash ko message bheja.

" yeah.. its true " aur sad wala empji bhej dia.

" lekin mujhe kaise pata hoga... tu is baat ko kyun nahi samajh rahi " supriya jhallati hui apne palang par baith gayi " main jo keh rahi hun vo jhooth hai? to kya main pagal ho gayi hun? jo apne aap se kahani banaungi? " supriya chillai jise chillata dekh megha ne phone rakha aur uth baithi.

" nahi tu pagal nahi hai aur na hi tu jo keh rahi hai vo jhooth hai, par jaisa tu soch rahi hai vo sach nahi hai bas.. "

" kya matlab? "

" matlab ye hai ki tujhe sirf ek aisa dream hua hai ki tu tanu ke sath thi aur wahan ye sab hua.. jahan ladkiyan nangi hokar ek dusre ko nashe ki halat mein chum rahi thi.. ye sab tera veham hai jo tere dimag ne banaya. Tu khud kehti hai mujhse.. ki nasha kyun karte hain log? Nashe karne ke piche ki wajah ya to sangat hoti hai ya fir unka pariwar jo unke samne hokar bhi nahi hota aur isi soch ke chalte tere dimag ne kalyani ki kahani banai jabki asal mein aisa kuch nahi hai. Dekh supriya tu jis halat mein thi na kal raat mujhe to tabhi lag gaya tha tera mansik santulan kuch bigada hai aur uske baad tu puri raat us bathroom mein kaat ayi vo bhi us cubicle mein jahan koi nahi jata to aisa hona swabhabhi hai.. aur sahi baat step father wali baat to tu ye bhi bhool gayi ki pichle hafte mene tujhe stepfather wali porn dikhai thi jiski wajah se tune mera phone gusse mein fenk diya tha aur mera phone piche se tut gaya tha, dekh yaad aya.. " megha ne phone ke crack hisse ki taraf dikhaya to supriya ko yaad aya ki usne megha ka phone fenka tha jiski wajah se crack aya tha aur iske baad use vo bhi yaad aya ki usne nashe ko lekar college ke class mein apni ray rakhi thi jisme kuch aur ladkiyan bhi uski baat sun rahi thi.

" tu keh rahi hai ye sab mere dimag ki upajh hai? " supriya ne fauran apna sawal badla.

" bilkul ho sakta hai, kai baar dar ki wajah se aise trauma hota hai vaise bhi parso raat jo hua uska dar to tere andar pehle se hi tha aur ek baat bata agar tu wahan hoti to tera phone tere pas hota na ki tanu ke kamre se un thullo ko milta.. tera dar, teri soch aur us cubible ki kahani ki meharbani hai ye sab.. jo tune kal raat dekha aur tujhe laga ki ye sach hai... jabki tu kal raat us bathroom se nikli hi nahi thi. " megha ko lag ki abki supriya samajh gayi hai isliye vo shanti se laitna chahti thi par supriya ne tabhi use pakad kar baitha dia.

" cubicle ki kahani? " supriya ne use sawaliya nazar se dekha to badle mein megha ne bhi use waise hi dekha.

" don't tell me ki ab tujhe ye bhi yaad nahi hai? "

" kya yaad nahi? " supriya boli.

" yahi.. ki 8 saal pehle ek fresher.. jiska naam ravina tha usne apni nas us cubible mein kaat kar apni jaan de di thi.. bahut famous kahani hai ye to? tujhe abhi bhi yaad nahi ayi? " megha supriya ko ghurne lagi. " ab ye mat bolio ki tu ye baat bhi bhool gayi hai... supriya... wt... fucker.... kahan jata hai tera dimag? balon ke sath vo bhi to nahi jhad rahi tu.. first day... remember? tere aur mere bich sabse pehli baat yahi hui thi? tujhe yaad nahi hai.... ? " megha use ek bari mein sab kuch batana chahti thi lekin vo use yaad dilane ke liye bich-bich mein rok kar puch rahi thi. Par supriya isliye nahi soch rahi thi ki use yaad nahi hai balki vo isliye soch rahi thi kyun ki megha ne abhi abhi ravina ka naam liya tha.

" ravina to meri friend thi " man mein sochte hue supriya ke muh se nikal pada.

" friend thi? 8 saal pehle ki ravina teri friend? tu 8 saal pehle bhi is hostel mein rehne ayi thi.. "

" nahi ... vo ravina nahi.. meri wali ravina.. " supriya ke mind mein alag-alag jhalkiyan thi jise vo na to alag kar paa rahi thi aur na hi jodh paa rahi thi.

" teri wali ravina? tu kya bol rahi hai.... uff supriya.. i guess its right time... ab sahi samay aa gaya hai... " megha ek dum se piche hote hue boli jise dekh supriya ghabra gayi.

" matlab? " uski awz mein ghabrahat thi ki kahin megha use pagal bol kar ilaz karane ki salah dete hue ghar walon ko batane ki baat to nahi kar rahi.

" you need to get laid... " megha soch vichar karte hue boli.

" megha.. " supriya chillai.

" tujhe jarurat hai... kyun ki tu behak gayi hai... tere andar ab vo tarange uth rahi hai jo jawani mein futti hai.. jo sirf lene ke baad hi jati hai jiske baad ladkiyun ke asset mein sudhar ata hai aur unka dimag sirf ek hi jagah chalta hai aur fir vo dhire-dhire sharp ho jata hai.... ek dum paina... "

" megha... please... stop it.. " supriya ka sar fatt raha tha. Usne apna sar pakad liya tha, pichli do raton mein itna sab ho raha tha jiske bare mein use kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Vo ek pal sochti rahi " ravina ne nas kyun katti thi? " usne ichukta dikhai.

" tu meri sachi dost nahi hai " megha ne muh banate hue kaha.

" megha " supriya chlllai.

" nobody knows... nobody... usne aisa kyun kiya.. par hostel ki ladkiyun mein wo baat felhi hui thi ki uska kisi ladki ke sath affair tha... she was a lesbian.. aur shayad us ladki ne baki ladkiyun ko bata diya tha jiski wajah se uski bahut bullying hui shayad isi ko dekhte hue usne final exam ke ek mahine pehle us cubicle mein baith kar nas kaat li. Subah jab bathroom ke farsh par khoon hi khoon dikha tab malum hua ki ravina ne suicide kar liya hai " megha ke mutabik usne is baat ko dubara bataya tha " ab is baat ko mene record kar diya hai aur tujhe bhej rahi hun, jab bhi bhule to sun lio " megha ne turant voice message whtsapp kar diya.

" isliye wahan us cubicle mein koi nahi jata... " supriya fir soch vichar mein dub gayi.

" lo ji.. inhe ab ek aur bat batao... tu ruk pehle tu puri baat sun.... warna tu mera dimag khayegi.. Ravina cubicle mein mari is baat ko lekar wahan ki kahani mashur nahi hai balki isliye mashur hai kyun ki log abhi bhi mante hain ki ravina us cubicle mein maujud hai... " megha ne chehre par ghambhirta banai aur aage ki taraf jhuki.

" matlab.. ravina ki at..atma... " supriya ne sochte hue apni baat kahi kyun ki vo dar rahi thi ki kahin megha fir uska mazak na bana de.

" exactly "

" tu mujhe fir ched rahi hai "

" tujhe ek to baatai hui baat dubara bata rahin un uppar se tu mujh par ilzam laga rahi hai "

" tere kehne ka matlab hai ki is hostel mein bhoot-pret hai? "

" hostel mein nahi us cubicle mein sirf ... "

" to hum bhootiya hostel mein reh rahe hain tu ye kehna cha rahi hai? "

" nahi.. bata rahi hun.. dubara.... " megha piche hui aur takiya apne palti par rakh kar phone par aakash ke message ka jawab dene lagi jo kafi der se aya hua tha " how did it happen? "

" nobody knows, cops are investigating "

" tu pagal ho gayi hai.. kabse mujhe pagal bana rahi hai... kabse... " supriya achanak se chilla padi to megha ke hath se phone chhut kar bistar par gir gaya aur tabhi unke kamre ke kiwad par zor-zor se dastak hui.

 

[Naina]

1) matlab jo kand hua tha us hostel mein matlab us cubicle mein actually wo ek suicide case thi.
2)jisne suicide ki thi wo thi ravina...
ab is mudde pe do points ye ki
hostel wali ravina aur supriya ki friend ravina dono hi lesbian thi.... (similarities)
dusri baat dono mar chuki hai bahot pehle hi...
3) friend ravina ne jo kiya uske sath matlab kiss bagerah aur sath hi uski maut ki khabar ek tarah ek gahri chap chhod gayi thi supriya pe.. ya kahi jaaye, subconscious mind pe ek gehra asar hua tha...
in sabhi baaton pe gaur kare toh yahin conclusion nikle ki.....
Supriya maybe bhool gayi ho hostel wali ravina ki baat lekin uske subconscious mind ne nahi bhooli wo baat... isliye bathroom mein wo sab hallucinations kar baithi...
ab yahin pe dusri ray yeh hai ki uske subconscious mind ne mari huyi friend ravina aur ye hostel wali ravina ko ek hi maan rahi hai.... ravina ko help ki jarurat hai uski nazar mein . ya phir ravina kuch dikhana chahti hai hai supriya ko .. isliye uski nazar mein wo sab ghatanaye ho rahi thi bathroom mein.. jishe wo sach maan baithi . jo ki mahaz ek baham hai uske atirikt aur kuch nahi...

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tanu ki maut ki case...
1) dono ravinao ke sath jo hua us waqt, supriya ke subconscious mind ke liye kisi masoom ke sath ki gayi anyaay hai...
jo aaj bhi ho raha hai.. chaahe ragging ke naam par hi kyun na ho...
2) hostel wali ravina ki maut ke bare jaanke uske subconscious mind ki soch ishi baat pe atak gayi ki uski friend ravina ke sath bhi yahi sab hua tha.. isliye wo aaj is duniya mein na rahi.... ab wohi anyaay supriya ke sath kar rahi hai kuch log matlab tanu and uski team...
to yahi se daba hua gussa jo badle ki bhavna se bahar nikla... aur shikar bani tanu... matlab saaf uske subconscious mind ek tarah se anyaay ke khilaf muheem utha li hai...
ab ya to is baat ehsaas supriya ko hai aur jaan bujh kar anjaan ban rahi hai... ya phir ushe ye baat sach mein yaad nahi mental disorder and criminality ki tahat...
lekin kaatil wohi hai...
.........
ab dusri taraf yahan kahani ke andar ek aur kahani bhi chupi ho sakti hai....

koi to hai jo supriya jo kehti hai, ushe sach sabit kar deti ya deta hai.... supriya ne bathroom wali ghatanaye dekh kar jo itni pareshan thi shayad yeh ushi insaan ne racha ho wo khel...3 baje baad jo phone kar raha ya rahi thi , cctv pe sirf supriya dikh rahi thi, TV yun on hona.. ye sabhi links ushi insaan se jude hai...

Koun hai wo... ek hai ki kayi saare
1) ya to koi insaan.... (yakin 100%)
Koun hai wo... kyun kar rahi ya raha hai.. Kya nata hai supriya se.....

2) ya phir koi aatma... ( yakin 0%)

Khair.....
are is pagal supriya ko hatao yaar... bahot paka rahi hai... harshit1890 ji ek kaam kijiye........
aur lead heroine Megha ko bana dijiye... usme lead heroine wali gun bhi hai aur kirdaar hai bhi dumdaar ...
To ye final hai ki Ab se lead heroine Megha hi rahegi .
pakau pagal supriya gayi bhaad mein

Khair.... let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit ji

 

[Naina]

tabhi unke kamre ke kiwad par zor-zor se dastak hui.

Darwaza jo story character kisi pagal ki tarah pit raha ya rahi hai.... wo kirdaar no 1 kulta, besharam, behaya, dhokhebaz, dagabaaz, kamina kamini, haramkhor hai aur hawas ki pujaran bhi hai aur tharki bhi aur insects lober bhi
Itni himmat ki The Great Megha ko disturb kare.... koun hai wo kirdaar... uski kya aukat ki megha ke samne tik paaye
Dear Megha, jo kirdaar Darwaza pit raha hai uska kaam tamam kar diyo... Bilkul wrong turn movie series ki tarah
Ab to kaatil ko Megha hi pakdegi aur us kaatil ki aisi ki taisi kar degi

 

[Naina]

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