Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Aakash.]

Now the time changed earlier girls only liked traditional dress and as of today it's old and heavy it's not right to speak on this issue more important than who got the call and why are these girls so irresponsible Then didn't even try to call.

Don't know what happens to my Aarohi again and again at first I thought there was a spider coming out of her mouth like in the mommy movie Well what do we understand about this mishap, whether Aarohi saved his family or killed all the people sitting in the marriage hall, wherever Aarohi there is chaos. Aarohi loved her father very much he died mysteriously exactly the same happened with her friend that is who is dear dies after all what's the reason or who is behind all this that unable to see my Aarohi happy.

It felt very strange, I understood the shaking of an old building but how can it happen that the ground itself is moving in the middle of the city. Vandana heard this name for the first time in that haveli, how many times after that but till now this mystery has not been solved. I said in my review at the beginning of the journey that this journey has not started well and my fears have come true. ​

 

[Aakash.]

Aap sabhi ka gussa aur intezar jayaz hai.. par meri majburi aisi hai ki abhi bata nahi sakta.. fir bhi kosish kar raha hun..

Na na hum to nasamjh hai hume na samjhta ​

Kal mera birthday tha

Happy Birthday Ritu Ji ​

kal new mobile se review post karunga.

Which one ​

 

[David Goodman]

Nice One

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Na na hum to nasamjh hai hume na samjhta

Happy Birthday Ritu Ji

Which one ​

Thank you Aakash bhai
Samsung mila birthday gift me

 

[Death Kiñg]

Mera mobile change ho gaya hai aur Hindi me likhna bahut hi jyada complicated. Pahle aasan tha likhna lekin abb bahut tough.

English to Hindi waala keyboard use kar lijiye..

 

[Aakash.]

Thank you Aakash bhai
Samsung mila birthday gift me

Badiya hai ​

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

English to Hindi waala keyboard use kar lijiye..

Hindi bhi hai lekin type karne me bahut jyada complicated hai.
Kal avsji bhai ke story par review likhne me bahut time lag gaya...ek ek shabd type karna pad raha hai.

 

[Death Kiñg]

Hindi bhi hai lekin type karne me bahut jyada complicated hai.
Kal avsji bhai ke story par review likhne me bahut time lag gaya...ek ek shabd type karna pad raha hai.

English To Hindi keh raha tha main. Matlab Hinglish (Roman Font) mein hi type kijiye, wo apne aap Devanagari mein convert ho jaayega.

 

[harshit1890]

Hindi bhi hai lekin type karne me bahut jyada complicated hai.
Kal avsji bhai ke story par review likhne me bahut time lag gaya...ek ek shabd type karna pad raha hai.

Apka review padh kr laga nai ki apne likha hai pehli baar hinglish font mei dekha

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

romanchak update ..shruti ko phone aana aur saamne se kisika baat nahi karna ,uske baad aaruhi ki tabiyat kharab hona aur teeno ka bahar aana kamal ka hai .
kya teeno ka marna nahi likha tha waha pe kisine ..
nimisha aur baaki sab mehman maare gaye us haadse me .
aur wo ghatna bhi kamal ki thi pehle chhat giri aur jab kuch jinda logo ko bachane ka time aaya to sab jameen me dhans gaya .
koi supernatural power jaise tha wo sab .

vandana ke baare me kuch jaan nahi payi shruti aaj raat ko aur na ki wo link open ho rahi hai jo kal ho rahi thi steel factory ki .

ab aaruhi ko college jaana hai aur shruti bhi usi favour me hai jabki maa usko london leke jana chahti hai .