Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Naina]

yeh harsu saheb kahe update nahi de rahe... kahi hawasi tanu aur uski wo bhootniyo ki toli ne to nahi pakad liya harshit saheb ko

 

[Naina]

Vo khud hi behosh thi vo kya kisi ko marti re... Hum nahi fansate na hi bachate yeto sabhi ki kismat hai Horror story nahi hai ye jo har sama bhoot pret ayenge... Thanks naina ji

Bhai bada tagda nasha hota hai, drugs aur cigrate ka masala mila kar maal funko dunayein ud jayenge dimag ke Lesbian sex ka to malum nahi lekin kuch to jarur karenge uske sath mobile hai band ho gaya jaisi uski marzi.. Thanks bhai

Aji writer sahab bhoot aur chudail to haweli mein bhi nahi the... phir bhi maare gaye sabhi

 

[SHADOW KING]

Aji writer sahab bhoot aur chudail to haweli mein bhi nahi the... phir bhi maare gaye sabhi

fantasy me jadoo type hi aata hai yaa kuch aur bhi ?? maine jitni kahaniya padhi fantasy wali un sabme magic tha ..
to is kahani me bhut chudail nahi hai to fantasy kyu hai samajh nahi aaya ..

 

[Naina]

fantasy me jadoo type hi aata hai yaa kuch aur bhi ?? maine jitni kahaniya padhi fantasy wali un sabme magic tha ..
to is kahani me bhut chudail nahi hai to fantasy kyu hai samajh nahi aaya ..

Yeh harshit sahab ki story hai.. idhar magic nahi maut milti hai har story character ko..

 

[SHADOW KING]

Yeh harshit sahab ki story hai.. idhar magic nahi maut milti hai har story character ko..

sorry ..galti ho gayi ..nain sir ki kahani bhi fantasy thi aur shetan ki policewali biwi ...

 

[Strange Love]

Harshit Bro just completed Haveli. Truly amazing masterpiece story. Bas ending happy nahi tha.

Please request hai ki Girls Hostel ko happy ending dena. Waise bhi duniya me bohot negativity hai... Kam se kam aapki kahani ki happy ending hona chahiye.

Regards.

 

[Naina]

kyun kisiko ab psychological thriller story maangne par psychological thriller story nahi milti.. kyun kisiko dark mystery wali story maangne par dark mystery wali story nahi milti..

Yeh un dino ki baat hai..... jab harshit1890 sahab bhi haunted, haweli jaise stories likhte phirte the ....

 

[Naina]

Vo khud hi behosh thi vo kya kisi ko marti re... Hum nahi fansate na hi bachate yeto sabhi ki kismat hai Horror story nahi hai ye jo har sama bhoot pret ayenge... Thanks naina ji

Bhai bada tagda nasha hota hai, drugs aur cigrate ka masala mila kar maal funko dunayein ud jayenge dimag ke Lesbian sex ka to malum nahi lekin kuch to jarur karenge uske sath mobile hai band ho gaya jaisi uski marzi.. Thanks bhai

Bhai bas yahi sun kar acha laga ki sab kuch ankhon ke samne hota nazar aa rha hai aisa hi lage. aise hi sath banaye rakhe aage jakar supriya bahut kuch batayegi.... Thank you so much bhai

kya harshit saheb abhi tak koi story character mara kyun nahi
Bichari lesbo thatki ravina bhi flashback mein tapak gayi..

 

[harshit1890]

yeh harsu saheb kahe update nahi de rahe... kahi hawasi tanu aur uski wo bhootniyo ki toli ne to nahi pakad liya harshit saheb ko

Madam thoda bzy chal riya hu

Aji writer sahab bhoot aur chudail to haweli mein bhi nahi the... phir bhi maare gaye sabhi

woto unki kismat thi

fantasy me jadoo type hi aata hai yaa kuch aur bhi ?? maine jitni kahaniya padhi fantasy wali un sabme magic tha ..
to is kahani me bhut chudail nahi hai to fantasy kyu hai samajh nahi aaya ..

Ayega bhai,samajh bhi aa jayega...

Yeh harshit sahab ki story hai.. idhar magic nahi maut milti hai har story character ko..

sorry ..galti ho gayi ..nain sir ki kahani bhi fantasy thi aur shetan ki policewali biwi ...

Harshit Bro just completed Haveli. Truly amazing masterpiece story. Bas ending happy nahi tha.

Please request hai ki Girls Hostel ko happy ending dena. Waise bhi duniya me bohot negativity hai... Kam se kam aapki kahani ki happy ending hona chahiye.

Regards.

Thanks bhai bhai ending haweli ka happy or sad nahi hota, asal mein story end hoti hai usme... revenge kyun ki puri kahani mein sahi koi nahi hota...

kyun kisiko ab psychological thriller story maangne par psychological thriller story nahi milti.. kyun kisiko dark mystery wali story maangne par dark mystery wali story nahi milti..

Yeh un dino ki baat hai..... jab harshit1890 sahab bhi haunted, haweli jaise stories likhte phirte the ....

Aaj bhi to likhte hi hain... un dino ki baat kahan se ayi har story pschyological mystery chal rahi hai

 

[Naina]

Madam thoda bzy chal riya hu

woto unki kismat thi

Ayega bhai,samajh bhi aa jayega...





Thanks bhai bhai ending haweli ka happy or sad nahi hota, asal mein story end hoti hai usme... revenge kyun ki puri kahani mein sahi koi nahi hota...

Aaj bhi to likhte hi hain... un dino ki baat kahan se ayi har story pschyological mystery chal rahi hai

Achha is kirdaar tharki tanu ka kuch kijiye.. kyun na masoom supriya is tanu ko talwar se kaat ke bich se do hisso mein chid de