Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

romanchak update ..shruti ko phone aana aur saamne se kisika baat nahi karna ,uske baad aaruhi ki tabiyat kharab hona aur teeno ka bahar aana kamal ka hai .
kya teeno ka marna nahi likha tha waha pe kisine ..
nimisha aur baaki sab mehman maare gaye us haadse me .
aur wo ghatna bhi kamal ki thi pehle chhat giri aur jab kuch jinda logo ko bachane ka time aaya to sab jameen me dhans gaya .
koi supernatural power jaise tha wo sab .

vandana ke baare me kuch jaan nahi payi shruti aaj raat ko aur na ki wo link open ho rahi hai jo kal ho rahi thi steel factory ki .

ab aaruhi ko college jaana hai aur shruti bhi usi favour me hai jabki maa usko london leke jana chahti hai .

Supernatural.. power.... bhi hai aur nahi bhi... Vandana ka bhi gehra rishta hai Thanks bhai

 

[harshit1890]

Update 96 & 97...

Aaruhi ke Pita Kapil ke saath jo hua, wo satya mein dil dehla dene waala... Us ghatna ko padh, uski kalpna maatra se hi kisi bhi insaan ki haalat kharab ho jaaye, to sochne waali baat hai ki Aaruhi, jisne wo sab apni aankhon se dekha, uspar kya asar hua hoga? Jo kuchh bhi Urvashi ne bataya, us se spasht hai ki Aaruhi ek dohra jeevan jee rahi hai... Ek taraf apni Maa ke saamne wo Kapil ko zinda maanti hai, uske lautne ka intezar karti hai to doosri taraf apni diary mein wo satya likh chuki hai! Aaruhi ne diary likhna kyon band kar diya ye bhi sochne waali baat hai? Kya wo abhi bhi likhti hai diary, jiski khabar Urvashi ko naa ho?

Aisa hona bilkul possible hai kyonki jo diary Urvashi ne chhupayi thi, wo apni jagah se gaayab ho chuki hai (yadi usne Shruti se jhooth na kaha ho)... Aise mein saaf hai ki kewal Aaruhi hi aisi hai jisne wo diary wahaan se uthayi hogi... Yadi wo diary hi Shruti ke haath lag jaaye, to bhi bohot kuchh ujagar ho sakta hai... Jaise, Vandana ki maut ke kuchh tathya, uspar Aaruhi ki kya manodasha rahi thi, wo & obviously, how's Aaruhi so much connected to antique things & archaeology!

Vandana Girls School aur us factory ki poori kahani Shruti nahi jaan payi hai, Error 503, ke chalte... Aaruhi kya jaanti hogi us sabke baare mein, ye ek bada sawaal hai! Yadi Aaruhi ko sab kuchh maaloom hua, to at least possibilities to hain ki Shruti kuchh na kuchh to uske zariye jaan hi jaayegi, lekin abhi ke liye sochne waali baat ye hai ki Vandana ka naam lete hi Aaruhi ka past kaise trigger ho gaya, wo us kamre mein kaise pahunch gayi? Kya connection tha Aaruhi ka Vandana ki maut se...

Pehle Lavanya, fir wo bakwas karne waala launda (Suraj ka mitra), aur ab Vandana & Kapil, sabki maut mein do similarities hain... Pehli, behad hi dardnak aur kroorta se bhari maut naseeb huyi sabhi ko aur doosri, Aaruhi! Sabhi ke saath kahin na kahin judi huyi thi wo... Nimisha ki shaadi mein jo haadsa hua, wahaan bhi Nimisha se seedha connection tha Aaruhi ka... Vandana ke baare mein ek raat pehle hi to baatcheet huyi thi, jahaan Nimisha ne kuchh kehne ka prayas kiya tha apne aur Aaruhi ke baare mein... Kaun hai in sab mauton ke pichhe? Aaruhi khud ya us se judi koyi shakti..?

Kapil ki maut insaani taakat ki pahunch se poori tarah baahar hai... Mujhe nahi lagta ki kisi bhi tarah ki beemari ya tanaav ya maansik haalat ke chalte insaan apni aisi haalat kar sakta hai... Do hi situations ho sakti hain, pehli, Kapil ko hypnotize kiya gaya ho, wo bhi bohot strong hypnosis, itna strong ki ataah dard ke baad bhi wo naa toote... Doosra, koyi adrishya shakti, jiski umeed mujhe kam hi hai, I don't think anything supernatural could be responsible for Kapil's death... Aaruhi ke saath bhi wahi nahi ho raha hai? Hypnosis – Catatonic Schizophrenia!?

Catatonia Genetic bhi hota hai, aas – paas ke vatavaran se bhi insaan ke bheetar ye pareshani janm le leti hai & the most important thing is, Catatonic Schizophrenia mein insaan ka shareer ek dum ajeeb movements karne lagta hai, aisi positions banata hai shareer joki normal aadmi ya normal conditions mein hona possible hi nahi... Kapil ki maut ke dauraan banayi gayi position, isi aur ishara karti hai, Hypnosis aur Catatonia dono ek – doosre ko justify karne mein samarth hain, especially tab jab Aaruhi mein ye problem, DNA ke kaaran hone ko sambhavna bhi ho sakti hai...

Nimisha ki shaadi mein hua haadsa bhi kaafi dardnaak tha... Wo line dil ko jhatka de gayi, ki un laashon ka sanskaar karne waala bhi koyi nahi bacha parivar mein! Sach hi to hai, ek jhatke mein poora khandan hi maut ke munh mein sama gaya unka... Par Aaruhi, Shruti aur Urvashi ka bachna, aur saath hi us Dharamshala ke worker ka, sandehaspad hai! Shruti ko ek blank call aana, us call se ajeeb sounds utpann hona, uska baahar ki taraf jaakar, us worker ki baatein sunna ki usne chhat par paani chhoda hua hai, aur usi waqt Aaruhi ke gale mein Mt. Everest atakna, sab kuchh ek saath hua, parantu sabse hairani ki baat yahi thi, ki teenon ke baahar nikalte hi imaarat deh gayi...

Hadh to ye hai ki wo malba tak, wo laashein tak nahi bach paayi, zameen ke neeche paani hona, satya mein behad hairaani bhari baat hai... Water Body ke oopar, kitni bhi mitti daali ho, uspar building athva construction ki permission kaise mil sakti hai? Worker ne kaha tha ki Dharmashala behad puraani thi, chalo ek reason ho sakta hai ye, parantu ye bhi spasht hai ki is accident ka seedha connection Aaruhi athva Shruti se hi hai...

Alok par se bharosa uth gaya hai Urvashi ka, joki laazmi bhi hai isiliye videshon ki aur rukh karna chahti hai wo, parantu kya wo kaamyab ho paayegi? Kya Aaruhi maanegi treatment ke liye? Kya Aaruhi appointment tak zinda bhi bach paayegi? Shruti kuchh jaan paayegi Aaruhi se, Vandana ke baare mein? Aur Shruti ka ye swaarth, Vandana aur factory ke baare mein jaan ne ka, jiske chalte usne Urvashi ko convince kiya, Aaruhi ko hostel bhejne ke liye, kahin Aaruhi ki jaan ne le le...

Jaggu to bas fans hi gayi hai! Uske sang dekhe kya karti hai Shruti...

Both the updates were fantastic man! Dono hi bhaag, darker side par the, Kapil ki maut ka kaala sach, aur fir Nimisha ki shaadi ka haadsa, jaisa maine Update – 96 ke baad hi kaha tha, the way you present these dark scenes is outstanding! Padhte waqt seedhe dil par asar hota hai in shabdon ka, so, hats off for that man!

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Jo bhi hua, ya fir jaise bhi hua, uska koi na koi concept hai jo kahani mein. aage chal kar aa hi jayega... Khabar to bahut kuch nahi hai aur bahuton ko nahi hai
Bahut kuch missing hai.. pieces and hint to diye gaye hai lekin kahani mein har jagah rehasmye hi hai... Mauton ke piche ki kai vajah hai... ab bas... unko dikhana hai ki vo ho kyun rahi hai ya fir koi aur hi locha hai..
Apka idea kapil ki maut ka ek dum.. kareeb hai par fir bhi thoda dur hai..
Baat apne DNA ki kari hai... baat to sahi kari hai...
Co-incidence ki kahani ise to hi kehte hai bhai... kisi ka bachna aur kisi ka marna uski kismat se hi juda hota hai
Bas bhai aap logon ko pasand aa jata hai use jada aur kya hi kahein.. thank you so much bhai

 

[harshit1890]

हर्षित भाई , आप ने इस कहानी के अधिकांशतः अपडेट मे इतने सवाल छोड़ दिए है कि अब गिनना भी मुश्किल हो गया है और सबसे इम्पोरटेंट कि एक भी सवाल का जवाब हम अब तक ढूंढ नही पाए। शुक्र था जो इस अपडेट मे कोई सवाल जैसा नही लगा हमे।
शुरुआत आरोही के लेडी माराडना बनने से हुई। एक और विलक्षण टैलेंट की युवती निकली वो। लेकिन गगन से ऐसा कौन सा काम आ पड़ा था जो सिर्फ उसी से मिलने की इच्छा व्यक्त की।
भंडारा जाकर वेद शर्मा से मिलना इस अपडेट का दूसरा प्रमुख विषय था। और वह भी आरोही के जानकारी मे आए बगैर। लेकिन मुझे लगता है आरोही को ना सिर्फ यह सिर्फ जानकारी मे ही आना चाहिए बल्कि उसे साथ ले जाना भी चाहिए। आखिर सारा भ्रम तो उसी को लेकर पैदा हुआ है।
मुझे तो अभी तक मेघनाथ की महिमा मायाजाल जैसा ही प्रतीत हो रहा है।
नन्दिनी मिस के बारे मे अभी तक क्लियर नही हुआ कि उनके साथ उस रात क्या हुआ था। जैसा हमने पहले पढ़ा था उससे तो ऐसा लगा था हमे कि उनके नाम के साथ स्वर्गीय जुड़ चुका है।

और ये श्रुति काहें बेचारी जग्गु को तंग किए जा रही है ? एक भोली भाली लड़की को भ्रष्ट करने पर तुली है। अब क्या ही कहें इस बावली को ! नंगे बदन टैरेस पर हस्त मैथुन करने पर उतारू हो गई बेचारी !

बहुत ही लाजवाब अपडेट हर्षित भाई।
Outstanding & Amazing & brilliant.

Isliye chhod diye taki yaad hi na rahe aur end mein ghapla kar dun main
Bhai kahani kahin na kahin banan padti hai aur usko banane ke liye sawl chhodne padte hai taki next update mein aur confuse kar du
Hahaha itni asani se kahan se maar denge bhai.. aise kaise... Thanks sanju bhai

 

[harshit1890]

nice update ..aaruhi ka akele goal karna aur coach ki baat na sunna kisiko bhi atpata nahi laga ,vishal bhi yahi keh raha hai ki aaruhi bahut had tak sahi ho rahi hai par aisa lagta nahi .
gaggan to baawla ho gaya aaruhi ki taange dekhkar .
meghnath ke saath milke plan ban gaya ved sharma se milne ka par aaruhi ko in sabse dur hi rakhne ka socha hai .
jaggu ne to daring dikha hi di jo terrace par chut me ungali kar rahi thi . ab shruti bhi garam ho gayi aur kamre me aakar lag gayi chut ko maje dene me .

Khiladi ban rahi hai vo apne aap mein... Apko to maza aya hoga na jaggu ka scene padhh kar apki to fav hai vo
Thanks bhai keep reading

 

[harshit1890]

Now the holidays are over almost all students are back as Aarohi said she was in the sports team at the time of school and today the way you have described her action it is clear that Aarohi is good player in sports. we can play kabaddi together We are also confused this has happened not once but many times and reason behind this changing nature of Aarohi would be interesting I think and what to say about friends they are looking at Aarohi Look at me seeing girls i bow my eyes.

In the story all the characters whom Aarohi loves are dying mysteriously, it doesn't seem to me instinctively there is something we don't understand I have said before, Well I am even ready to die for Aarohi. We innocent readers are still not able to understand whether this story is supernatural or something else which we are writing just by guessing well now we will be able to reach any conclusion only after meeting Ved Sharma.

Shruti will ruin the whole hostel girls with her well Jaggu is so plumpy Lesbo doesn't give a chance to Vishal

There are many questions in mind like why Meghnath said that Aarohi has less time and how the man who came from the magic box also knew Aarohi and he also wanted to say something but could not say and Vandana, this name itself seems cursed.​

Aap uske ath kabadi khelne gye to lapata ho jaoge... sahi tarah ki demands karo.. aise hi mat karo.. kahin kuch ho jayega apko Ek divine kam ho jayega XF se
Bhai ye story fantasy hai.. shuru se keh raha hun.. aap log kahe confuse ho rahe ho Han hai fantasy lekin reality touch ke sath
Curse to sab kuch hai.. even.... Thanks bhai keep reading

 

[harshit1890]

majedar update ..to aaruhi ke dost ki shadi me haadsa kaise hua ye pata chal gaya par sach hai ya nahi isme confuse hai shruti .sarkar ne muawaje ka elaan kiya par aaruhi ke dost ka koi bacha hu nahi .
aaruhi gagan ko le gayi apne saath ye to shocking baat hai .

bus me jo hua usko padhkar alag level ka maja hi aa gaya .
rachna ke to maje ho gaye .. chut ka pani nikal diya us adhed ne ungali karke .

Han koi bachana bhi nahi tha na... Han gaggan is trube lobe
Bus wala scene socho mene tabse socha hua tha jab girls hostel ko likhne baitha tha tab se is update ko likhna tha, adjust karne ke liye itna time lag gyaa..
Thanks bhai keep reading

 

[harshit1890]

Completed..jarur aapne jaldibazi me sameta hoga. Lekin aise saste me jane nahi denge ham.
Kal padhta hu Hariya bhai.

Oh ! 100 update ka kaha tha aapne .

Koi nahi hota hai bhai kabhi kabhi ankhon ka dhoka

Khatam nahi huyi bhaiya. 100 updates poore huye hain. Abhi to Shruti ko param sukh tak praapt naa hua, aise kaise kahani khatam ho jayegi..

100 update complete hone ke liye .

Baad me samgha na..esliye kahta hu daru bahut kharab cheez hai.

Nasha kharab nahi hai bhai.. aise nashe ko badnam nahi karo

 

[harshit1890]

romanchak update ..bhandara gaon ajeeb ho gaya hai jaha pani ki wajah se bahut saari jaane gayi aur uski wajah se gaon se bhag gaye sab log .
ved sharma ek sarkari officer hai jo ye pata karne aaya hai ki waha aisa kyu hua .us gaon me sirf 14 log rehte hai jo ye jaanne aaye hai ki waha ka rahasya kya hai par jab ye charo waha pahuche to waha par koi maujud nahi hai .

shruti ne sab jaanch karne ki sochi aur ek naya rahasya saamne aaya grandfather paradox ...
vishal ke paas to bahut si jaankari hai is paradox theory ke baare me jo usne sabko bata di .
ab is pani ka rahasya aur kya wo 14 log jinda bhi hai ya nahi .

har ek haadsa alag alag dikh raha hai ,kya ye saare haadse jude huye hai ya nahi ye bhi sochnewali baat hai ..

Han bhai.. pani kya kya nahi karwa deta hai.. ajeeb hi baat hai... Wahi to maza hai bhaya..
Sab chhodo ye batao grandfather paradox samajh aa gaya na kya hota hai
Thanks bhai keep reading

 

[harshit1890]

I also found incident of that day very strange but after reading what is written in the newspaper everything seemed ordinary which felt extraordinary and shocking that day, well once again through Shruti you made us to think again

Nandini was pushed by that shadow and since then she has been in such a condition it's also strange, Now I understand why Aarohi had called Gagan to her in the last update.

Sometimes it's like we're reading someone else's story, sweat pouring from young bodies clinging to each other, Uff The village-like atmosphere has become it will not be wrong to say that Rachna and Shruti also had a lot of fun, it's a different thing that you show innocent in front of us, whether it is the characters of the story or the readers you woke up all dreams were exciting scenes.

Look, it is wrong from one point of view sometimes it happens and sometimes it is intentional if girls agree then the matter is different otherwise it is wrong and then everyone has their own thinking.

Both the updates were very good, will wait for the next part.​

Bhai wahi to rakhna hai.. Sab kuch extraordinary rakh kar ordinary dikha dena.. abhi tak ye trick samjhe nahi.. End padhne ke baad aap sab sar pitogee dekh lena
Agar jabardsti ho to galat hai..bus wala scene shayad bahut logon ne use experience kiya hoga.. bhale hi man mein rakha hga kuch ko acha lagta hai kuch ko nahi mera maksad yahan par ek entertainment tha ki is umar mein galat chizen bhi kabhi kabhi achi lagne lagti hai jaise rachna ke liye thi...
Thanks aakash bhai

 

[harshit1890]

Bhai sahab 3 update padhkar mja aa gya Kasam se itna wait Kiya tha wo worth it Raha update or story k bare me baad me comment krunga but story sach me bahut mjedar ho chuki hai kuch kuch haunted se connection ka sa feel ho ra hai jese Khan ki ruh ne socha tha time travel k bare me may be it's not but now meko to isi soch se khusi mil ri hai ek shreyas ka Cameo or ab ye time travel. Mja tb aayega jb ye story psychological hi na reh kr supernatural horror ho

Baki keep writing keep rocking

Bhai time milta hai to likh deta hun.... us din tym mila to likh dia ab nahi mil raha to nahi likh paa raha wahi baat hai... jis din mila us din khallas ek hi time mein
Bhai haunted ke concept ki ye story dhajiiya udayegi dekhte jao bas ab... Mene hint to shreyas walle update se de diya tha clear ab ho jayega because its a prequel ... Agar mere pas kabhi samay hota life mein in future.. no hope.. To Haunted 4 lekar jarur ata... choti hi sahi.. par atti jarur.. us kahani ka ye theme base bana rahi thi. Sapna tha mera apni mostly kayi kahaniyun ko jod dene ka.. aur shayad ab vo sapna pura ho jayega... Waise to Haweli 3 ka bhi theme kuch jordar sochela tha apun.. lekin baat nahi ban payi kyun ki ab likhne ka waqt khatam ho chuka hai..

This is more of both.... Thanks bhai