Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

लियोन भाई खुद तो गुमराह हुए ही , मुझे भी भ्रमित कर दिया । साइंटिस्ट शर्मा को वेद शर्मा समझने की भूल कर बैठा ।
अब हमारे जैसे नौसिखिए क्या ही इस कहानी की समीक्षा करे ! ऐसा गोल गोल घुमाया कि अब तक चक्कर आ रहा है । ठीक वैसे ही जैसे एक बार एक मेले मे गोल गोल घुमने वाले चक्की ( पता नही इसका वास्तविक नाम क्या है ) पर बैठकर हुआ था । उसके बाद दोबारा कभी उस चक्की पर बैठना तो दूर देखने की हिम्मत तक भी नही हुई ।

वैसे क्या ही लाजवाब तरीके से इस कहानी को गढ़ा है आपने हर्षित भाई ! शुरुआत से ही सब कुछ , हर घटना , हर एक छोटी से छोटी चीज को ध्यान मे रखकर लिखा है । यहां तक कि जिस सुप्रिया और मेघा को हम अंत तक आरूही का इलूशन मान रहे थे वह वास्तव मे रियल किरदार थे , भले ही किसी और यूनिवर्स के पात्र रहे हैं वो ।
सवाल जवाब फिर कभी बाद मे करेंगे , फिलहाल इस कहानी पर अपनी राय जाहिर करते है ।
मृत्यु कुदरत की सबसे बड़ी सच्चाई है । पहले भी कहा जब सतयुग , त्रेतायुग और द्वापर युग का अंत हो गया तब इस कलयुग की क्या बिसात है ! इस धरा पर हर सजीव प्राणी या फिर पदार्थ की क्या बिसात है !
कुछ व्यापारी वर्ग और मैडम महाजन से इस धरा पर पाप ने अपना सर फैलाना शुरू किया जो श्रुति के खात्मे के साथ इस पाप, इस अधर्म का समापन हुआ ।
श्रुति के साथ शैशवकाल मे निस्संदेह गलत हुआ था पर शायद उर्वशी भी अपनी जगह सही थी । नाजायज औलाद और उस पर भी हरामी औलाद ( जिसके बाप का नाम तक नही हो) का पालन-पोषण करना हर युग मे औरत के लिए कठिन काम रहा और वही उर्वशी ने भी किया । फिर भी उर्वशी द्वारा संतान के त्याग करने को न्यायोचित भी नही माना जा सकता ।
पता नही कैसे श्रुति के शरीर और आत्मा मे महाजन मैडम का जिन्न कैसे सवार हो गया ! और जब शुरू हुआ तब फिर खेल शुरू हो गया कलि रूप्यकम को वापस अस्तित्व मे लाने का ।

आरूही के पिता वेद शर्मा और मां नन्दिनी मैडम थी , यह वास्तव मे एक बड़ा खुलासा था । आरूही का पालन-पोषण नंदिनी के जीवित रहते हुए भी उर्वशी ने क्यों किया यह पता नही ! लेकिन आरूही का अपने पिता के प्रति पितृ प्रेम बिल्कुल ही स्वभाविक था ।
मुझे याद है बचपन मे मैने एक सपना देखा था और उस सपने मे मेरे मां-बाप जो थे वो कोई दूसरे लोग थे , मेरे अपने मां-बाप नही थे । सिर्फ मां-बाप ही नही एक अलग फैमिली भी था उस सपने मे ।
अगर साइंस की इस मल्टीवर्ष , मल्टी यूनिवर्स थ्योरी को सच माने तो उस वक्त पर मेरा अवचेतन मन अवश्य इस मल्टी यूनिवर्स से कनेक्टेड रहा होगा ।
इसी अवचेतन मन ने आरूही की कायापलट कर दी । उसने न सिर्फ चेतन बल्कि अचेतन और अवचेतन पर भी ध्यान केंद्रित किया और एक तीव्र , मिस्ट्रीयस उर्जा का संचार प्रारंभ होने लगा । इस उर्जा का इस्तेमाल कर वह कई सारे यूनिवर्स की ट्रेवल करी , अपने पिता को ढूंढने का प्रयास किया , अथर्व को इस धरा पर लाई ।

( मुझे याद है आरूही , मेघनाथ , विशाल और श्रुति , यह चारों नागपुर से ट्रेन सफर कर के एक शहर ( भंडारा )
गए थे जहां पर वेद शर्मा साहब ने अपना आशियाना बना रखा था । इसी जगह पर कई सारी किताबों के साथ बुक्स ऑफ होक्स भी पाई गई थी । और यह वही जगह थी जहां पर कुछ बिजनेस मैन ने , फिर महाजन मैडम ने अनेकों गुनाह किए थे ।
इस अपडेट मे आपने इस शहर को नागपुर के कालेज और होस्टल के करीब दिखाया है लेकिन यह कैसे संभव है ? )
खैर , कड़ियां तो जुड़ी पर एक सूत्र मे नही , थोड़ा-बहुत बिखर बिखर कर जुड़ी ।
श्रुति का मकसद क्लियर हुआ । आरूही का इस कालेज मे एडमिशन लेने का रीजन मालूम हुआ । जैसा कि पिछले रिव्यू मे कहा कि श्रुति जिस खेत की मूली लग रही है वैसे ही आरूही भी उसी खेत की मूली है , सच साबित हुआ ।
फर्क यह था कि आरूही का मकसद नेक और पाक था और श्रुति का मकसद गलत और नापाक था ।

इस अंतिम अपडेट मे आपने बहुत सारे शंकाओं का निराकरण किया पर फिर भी कुछ सवाल अब भी अधूरे हैं ।
डॉक्टर के अनुसार आरूही का ब्रेन कई सालों से डेड पड़ा है । मुझे लगता है यह तब से हुआ होगा जब उसने अवचेतन मन के थ्रू एनर्जी हासिल की होगी । और इस एनर्जी के थ्रू मल्टी यूनिवर्स ट्रेवल की होगी । यह कोई सामान्य प्रकिया नही है । लेकिन डाॅक्टर ने यह भी नही कहा कि आरूही की मृत्यु हो चुकी है । जरूर यह आपने रीडर्स के भावनाओं का सम्मान रखकर किया होगा !
वैसे और भी बढ़िया होता , अंत मे आरूही पुरी तरह स्वस्थ्य और अपने मां के साथ सुखी सम्पन्न पाई गई होती ।
खैर सच्चे का बोलबाला और झूठे का मुंह काला वाली कहावत तो चरितार्थ हुई । ऐसा टिपीकल स्टोरी , ऐसा कठिन विषय पर सिर्फ आप ही लिख सकते है और लिख ही नही क्या खूब लिख सकते है !

अद्भुत अपडेट और अद्भुत राइटिंग स्किल ।
जगमग जगमग स्टोरी हर्षित भाई ।
एक और स्टोरी पुरी करने के लिए आपका हार्दिक अभिनन्दन और साधुवाद ।

Mai to tabhi samajh gaya jab unhone gumrah kiya aur aap sab bhi ho hi gaye
Wo bahut main point tha.. Aaruhi ki batein agar dhayan se padi to usne kaha sirf ek hi world tha jisme vo khud se connect kar payi jo ki supriya ka tha .. hubahu world tha ek dum aaruhi ke world ka.. wahan bhi wahi sab ghatna ho rahi thi jo uske world mein ho rahi thi thats why ek link tha dono ke bich aur usi ki wajah se aaruhi is ladai ko jeet pai..

Urvashi ke sath kuch galat nah ihua tha.. Use ek ladki bache ke roop mein nahi chahie thi isloye usne use nahi apnaya. Jo kahani urvashi ne shruti ko aaruhi ke illusion mein sunai vo sirf shruti ke liye thi.. Asal mein ye kahani to nandini ki thi.. Aaruhi ne urvashi ko isliye rakha taki nandini kabhi kahani mein na aye taki use kuch na ho sake kabhi. Urvashi shruti ki maa thi bina kisi kalle ku kuram ke

Nahi bhai urvashi ne nahi ki koi bhi uska bachpan ki palan poshan... vo to aaruhi ko janti tak nahi thi isliye to vo bar bar chilla rahi thi ki uska muh kholo to vo sach bataye ki kaun ho tum log aur use kyun laye ho... Palan poshan sab nandini ne hi kiya tha.. Urvashi to bekar mein hi dharri gayi ... aaruhi janti thi ki vo maregi lekin fir bi usne aisa chuna just like ki aaruhi do jano se create hui hai.. Creator ki meharbani aur Kali jaisi entity ki soch mein banaye gaye us drug ki wajah se...

Nahi bhai.. Train se vo log bhandara nahi gaye the.. vo to shruti aur aaruhi apne ghar gaye the jo ek illusion ka part tha aur kuch nahi.. Bhandara to bus se jane wala rasta tha..

Iska jawab maine leon bhai ko diya hai.. aap use padna.. theek ise pehle review mein tab aapko mere us likhne ki wajah milegi.. waise maine aaruhi ko mara nahi ab to aapko kush hona chahie pehli baar kaahni ka main character mara nahi

Thank u sanju bhai... for being with me in the story.. have a great life ahead

 

[harshit1890]

The story is presented in a very complex way for you it will surely be simple but for us it is complicated. So you have to understand what we understood and what we did not. I don't know why the last part of the story was such that I did not feel like reading it. It felt like if I read this part story would end the fun would end and then there would be nothing left to keep the mind engaged well what has started will definitely end.

Now coming to the story some of Aarohi's childhood memories happy life with her mother and growing distance with her father as well as growing love amidst all this, Ved Sharma who was trying to find the truth in mythological stories probably knew that the path he was moving on he might never be able to come back from there or he would get lost there that is why he was showing his search and path to his family through his letters which Aarohi understood at the right time.

Atharva aka Meghnath was some other world and Aarohi can also travel in the multiverse and her way is better than Shruti in which she doesn't need gravity and space and she achieved all this because of her subconscious mind and energy. In the spiritual world we can do many things with the help of subconscious mind one of them is astral travel which is also called out of body experience, in this the soul leaves the body in sleep and roams in the universe and maybe this is what Aarohi was experiencing. Even today science has not been able to understand this, some believe it to be true and some don't and we understood why Aarohi had heavy bleeding.

Aarohi was learning and through her experience we are understanding how all the incidents that happened with her till now are connected to Aarohi and as I said Aarohi along with Atharv and his mother started searching for her father and in all this Urvashi lost both her children Vandana and Shaurya but she got what even the creator himself didn’t have, that was the book and Shruti took advantage of this and through her illusion she got all the information of Aarohi’s mind and even killed Aarohi’s father which is very disappointing.

Look I don't know much but if a timeline is tampered with in any way then a new timeline starts from that moment and taking advantage of this Aarohi was successful in bringing Atharv from his timeline to this timeline. Supriya Megha, all these characters were from the multiverse and everyone had their own story. I understood everything and I also understood that Aarohi's mother was Nandini madam and Urvashi was Shruti's mother.

Aarohi bravely confronts Shruti and defeats her and has also destroyed that evil book doctors say that Aarohi was brain dead since childhood but we know what the truth is. Little Arohi had decided from the beginning Shruti has made a mistake and she has been punished. I am not able to understand many things, please answer them.​

Ab apko malum hua na vo itna bleed kyun karti thi aur uske baal kyun jhadte the
Urvashi ke bache nahi the shaurya aur vandana.. urvashi ki beti to shruti thi i guess apne yahan mis spell kar diya...

Kaun si baatein nahi samjhe bhai

Shruti ne timeline tabhi badal diya tha jab vo past mein travel karke pahunchi 1975 ke as pas jab us drug ka nirmaan chal raha tha, she gave the idea to Dr sharma jisne is drug ko puri tarah banaya and then she killed him.. Ye usne past mein jakar kiya tabhi to timeline change ho gayi. Ved ko maar kar to usne ek time hole create kar diya jiski wajah se aaruhi ko shruti ke bare mein jaan payi bec of that hi use apni shaktiyun ka abahas ho paya warna kabhi nahi ho pata.

Aapke jo sawal hai vo please likh kar dena tabhi samajha paunga

 

[harshit1890]

Pahli baat kabhi alvida nahi kehte jo tumne last review me kaha rahi baat aarohi ki to tumne jinda chod diya bhi to kis haalat me choda apan iske next part me yahi se story continue karega or romance se bhar denga

Anyway hum aapke shukragujaar hai dear aapke wajah se ek behtarin kahani hum read kar paaye maan lete hai ju ab married ho like those uncles fir bhi abhi retirement nahi lena hai ek khubsurat kahani or hona or ek romance likh dena thoda ​

Aaplogon ne kaha tha aaruhi ko nahi marna to maine kaha tha nah imarunga.. kahan mara
Continue nahi hogi yahan se kyun ki kahani ka end bhale hi maine cliffhanger mein chhoda hai lekin aage ki kabhi sochi nahi to kabhi likh bhi nahi paunga.. Jo soch li ho wahi likhna chahie jabardasti to kuch bhi ban jayegi
Nahi bhai apun ab retirement ki taraf hi badh raha hai.. kyun ki mai kuch bhi shuru karunga to kahatam karne mein salon lagenge isliye fayda hi kya hai likhne ka...

Baki apne sawal puchna .. jawab jarur dunga..

 

[harshit1890]

Mai sabhi loogn ko ye kahunga ki maine sabhi replies mein kuch na kuch jawab diye hai. Jaise sawal the us hissab se to aap logon ke jawab usi main hoonge aur jo confuse hokar apne galat socha hai usko bhi maine corrent kar diya hai to apse request hai ki aap sabhi ke replies ko pade SANJU ( V. R. ) KEKIUS MAXIMUS Aakash. taki clear rahe aur baki apne sawal post kar dena mai jawab de dunga...

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Mai sabhi loogn ko ye kahunga ki maine sabhi replies mein kuch na kuch jawab diye hai. Jaise sawal the us hissab se to aap logon ke jawab usi main hoonge aur jo confuse hokar apne galat socha hai usko bhi maine corrent kar diya hai to apse request hai ki aap sabhi ke replies ko pade SANJU ( V. R. ) KEKIUS MAXIMUS Aakash. taki clear rahe aur baki apne sawal post kar dena mai jawab de dunga...

इस कहानी मे साइंस फिक्शन होता , समझने मे कोई प्रोब्लम नही होती , इस कहानी मे साइंस फिक्शन के साथ थ्रिलर और सस्पेंस भी होता तब भी समझने मे कोई खास प्रोब्लम नही होती , लेकिन प्रोब्लम तब हुई जब इन सभी एलिमेंट के साथ इलूशन जुड़ गया ।
कौन घटना रियल है और कौन घटना इलूशन है , इसी ने हमे भ्रमित कर दिया । जब कि साइंस फिक्शन खुद मे बहुत ही मिस्ट्रीयस सब्जेक्ट है । थ्रिलर और सस्पेंस भी दिमाग पर जोर डालने को मजबूर कर देता है ।
अब इतने कठिन विषय के साथ एक और कठिन विषय , इलूशन जैसा जुड़ जाए तब रीडर्स का क्या हाल होगा , आप अच्छी तरह समझ सकते है ।

खैर , यह कहानी समाप्त हुई । इस कहानी की जितनी भी प्रशंसा की जाए वह कम ही होगी । एक यूनिक एवं अद्भुत विषय पर आधारित थी यह कहानी जिसे लिखना हर किसी के वश का नही । ऊँगली पर गिने चुने जाने हुए राइटर ही ऐसी कहानी लिख सकते हैं ।

आप की राइटिंग की जर्नी अभी समाप्त नही होनी चाहिए । आप लाख व्यस्त रहें , हजारों काम आप करते रहें , पर लिखना न छोड़ें । भले ही आप की कहानी सम्पूर्ण होने मे एक दशक तक लग जाए ।
एक कलाकार सब कुछ त्याग सकता है पर अपनी साधना त्याग नही सकता ।
आप के नए शाहकार का हमे बेसब्री से इंतजार रहेगा हर्षित भाई ।

 

[Aakash.]

Shruti ne mara par mil kar jaise jaggu ko shamil kiya theek waise hi... Aur ye usne ek aur aise world mein kiya jo aaruhi ke world ka bilkul milta julta tha jisme supriya thi.
Amazon is just illusion aisa vo kabhi gaye hi nahi the darsal gaya tha ved sharma jo aaruhi ne uski diary mein pada tha tabhi usne illusion mein wahi dikhaya.




Nahi... Reality kuch bhi nahi tha sivai jab vo ek baar girls hostel pahunch gayi thi lekin usko usne apne illusion mein bhi joda rakha... But real se judti ek chiz thi vo ye ki shruti ne meghnath ko khojne ke liye aur usko pakadne ke liye jo bhi kiya vo actually mein ek real part tha chahe vo library mein hona ya fir uske baad use pakdna tabhi vo meghnath ke bare mein pata laga sakti thi kyun ki use lag raha tha ki vo kahin na kahin aaruhi aur meghnath ke bich ka connection bitha paye aur usko apne raste se hata de kyun ki meghnath kafi jada involve ho chuka tha aur use kafi kuch pata chal gaya tha. Bas us raat jab vo meghnath ko pakadne jati hai to us raat vo use pakad leti hai but as per aaruhi illusion uske bilkul opposite hota hai ...


Aaruhi se reality reality sirf ek thi ki vo purane girls hostel mei pahuch gayi thi baki uske around jo bhi hua vo sab ek illusion jo aaruhi ne banaya. But real se judti ek chiz thi vo ye ki shruti ne meghnath ko khojne ke liye aur usko pakadne ke liye jo bhi kiya vo actually mein ek real part tha chahe vo library mein hona ya fir uske baad use pakdna tabhi vo meghnath ke bare mein pata laga sakti thi kyun ki use lag raha tha ki vo kahin na kahin aaruhi aur meghnath ke bich ka connection bitha paye aur usko apne raste se hata de kyun ki meghnath kafi jada involve ho chuka tha aur use kafi kuch pata chal gaya tha. Bas us raat jab vo meghnath ko pakadne jati hai to us raat vo use pakad leti hai but as per aaruhi illusion uske bilkul opposite hota hai ...
Amazon vo kabhi gaye nahi vo sirf aaruhi ki ek illusion story thi vo bhi isliye kyun ki usne ved sharma ki kitab mein likhi chitti meinpada tha jab vo use khojte hue wahan gayi thi. Ved tha jo amazon ke jungle se book of hoax lekar aya tha tabhi usne kaha tha mujhe usko wahin rakh kar ana chahie jahan se vo aya, all around aaruhi ne uske baad sirf illusion create kiya ...


Only a scene is real jab aaruhi us purane girls hostel mein chali gayi thi.. But real se judti ek chiz thi vo ye ki shruti ne meghnath ko khojne ke liye aur usko pakadne ke liye jo bhi kiya vo actually mein ek real part tha chahe vo library mein hona ya fir uske baad use pakdna tabhi vo meghnath ke bare mein pata laga sakti thi kyun ki use lag raha tha ki vo kahin na kahin aaruhi aur meghnath ke bich ka connection bitha paye aur usko apne raste se hata de kyun ki meghnath kafi jada involve ho chuka tha aur use kafi kuch pata chal gaya tha. Bas us raat jab vo meghnath ko pakadne jati hai to us raat vo use pakad leti hai but as per aaruhi illusion uske bilkul opposite hota hai ... sivai iske puri kahani mein aaruhi ne sirf illusion dikhaya.. nothing is real uske baad...
Puri kahani padne ki jarurat nahi hai mai jawab de raha hun na...
Vo sab imaginary tha aaruhi ka bec usne shruti ko aisa frnd bana liya tha apne illusion mein uska main point tha Supriya ka... bec jo vo illusion mein dikha rahi thi college life vo actually supriya ki life ko dikha rahi thi and just like that jaise supriya ki frnd thi megha usi tarah aaruhi ne shruti ko apna frnd bana liya tha. Par shruti ko us time yahi lagta tha ki aaruhi uski illusion drug se aisa kar rahi hai jabki aaruhi use ek alag dunia dikha rahi thi taki vo shruti ko har jagah bevkuf bana kr rakh sake.

I hope ab relate kar paoge

Hn bhai apne is review mein sab kuch sahi samjha to mai apko koi jawab nahi de sakta... Barhal library wala scene ek aisa scene tha jisme mein end mein decide nahi kar paya ki use aap logon ko as a illusion dikhau ya sachai mai.. Par agar kahani par gaur kiya jaye to vo ek illusion wala part nahi tha kyun ki shruti khud us college mein reh kar khoj been kar rahi thi aur usi wajah se uska shaq Meghnath ki taraf badh raha tha. na dikhane ki wajah thi confuse create karna warna vo sab jo meghnath ko khojne ke liye usne kiya vo ek real tha tabhi vo end mein aaruhi aur meghnath ko connect karne ki kosish karti rahi par use kuch mila hi nahi



Shruti ka funda baht simple tha, vo behad intelligent thi isliye science ki madad se usne time par control paa liya tha lekin usi science ke chizon ko hasil karne ke liye usne mythology ka sahara liya but galat tarah wala just like black magic.. vo Ek cruel entity jise kahanimein kali kaha gaya use jud gayi aur vo usme itna kho gayi ki usne use hi sach maan liya. Paisa kamana to uska kabhi koi sapna hi nahi tha... Sab usne hi kiya tha.. she killed those person jab unma time mein role khatam ho gaya tha...



bas bhai vivahik jeevan bada hi kathin hai par kiska nahi hota Aap kahani mein bahut piche ho kabhi samay milega apko to ana jarur ab to khatam ho gayi hai


Light deni jaruri thi na tabhi kahani end hoti Han bilkul wahi drug tha ye.. bas isme itna inclusion tha ki vo memory ko dhire-dhire corrupt kar raha tha but ye hua kyun iska maksad ye nahi tha.. iske piche ki wajah thi shurti jo chahti thi ki Kali ki ek entity ka janam ho sake jo creator dwara banaye gaye insano se ho taki vo Kali ki powers ko creator ki dunia mein invoke kar sake. She planned it for all.. baki sab to mohre the sirf ...
No juice ki wajah se vo pregnant nahi hui balki vo pehle se hi pregnant thi us raat par pata nahi tha.. she was pregnant bec of that Drug and unaviodable sex jo uske sath college mein kiya gaya..
Shruti was a Dr Mahajan ka bnna jaruri tha.. So kahani ko aisa samjho Urvashi shruti ki mother thi.. Jab shruti badi hui tab usne us box ka creation kiya ... vo past mein gayi.. and become Dr Mahajan... She created everything... jise future badla aur timeline mein ched - chaad ho gayi jiski wajah se ye puri timeline create hui ... aur tab hua.. tabhi in the end aaruhi kehti hai ki u remove Ved and create a time hole.. vo usne apne change kiye hue timeline mei kiya tha jiska impact use jhelna pada aur end mein vo haar gayi... Thats what happened..

Book of hoax ki line ko yaad karo to yaad aa ayega jisme as per creator kaha gaya tha ki time mein kabhi piche nahi jana chahie ... it will destory timeline but shruti ne bina soche samjhe aisa kiya... she went back in time.. she created everything after that.. which alter the future..


Shruti ka young rehne ka reason yahi tha ki vo ek to present se past mein chali gayi aur fir usne multiverse travel karke apne time ko hi badal kar rakh diya for her body time badh hi nahi raha tha jo uske liey badna chahie.. all though ye ek fantasy kahani hai to maine is chiz ko use kiya hai par theortically kitna sahi vo nahi keh sakta ki multiverse mein time same rehta hai ya alag-alag tarah se chalta hai... kyun ki koi conclusive kisi ko nahi pata to maybe aisa ho sakta ho...

Iska reason mein is reply mein leon bhai ke comment par diya hai ki ye sab to sirf bahana tha ... aap use padoge to clear hoga ki usne aisa sab kiya kyun..

Aisi ki taisi dekh naina ke review ki jhalak aa gayi isme

Mahajan to isi world ki thi kyun ki shruti ka naam hi wahi tha. Aur same naam ki to multiverse mein bhi maujud thi... Usne kya kiya tha samjhata hu thode detail mein. Usne us multiverse word ki Mahajan ko mara, uski technology chura kar usko apne hissab se thoda tweak kiya aur fir uski jagah us world mein le li taki time ko budhu bana sake warna us world ke timeline mein chedchad ho jati jo vo karna nahi chahti thi. Ab as shruti vo is world mein thi (Aaruhi wala) aur us world mein Dr Mahajan ban kar ... taki time mein balance bana rahe.. simple na



Changes to usne tabhi kr diya tha jab vo present se past mein gayi... anuman lagao.. uska janam takreeban 25-30 saal pehle hua aur kahani use pehle shuru hui to vo time mein piche jakar pehle hi sab badal chuki thi usi ne to Dr sharma ka drug ka pura chakrwau racha.. uske hissab se future badla nahi tha.. jabki yahi future already decide ho gaya tha jab vo past mein gayi us box ki madad se.. so that means timeline to already change ho chuki thi.




Mythology plus science is too much fun
I think yahi mera ek point tha ki kahani ko real rakhte hue usko myth aur science se judun.. but to be honest.. usko words mein utarana bada challenging tha.. kuch chizen maine clear likhi hi nahi taki vo aap sab khud samajh sko warna aur jada confuse hote jaise vo box... Box actually mein ek multiverse ko travel to karwata hi hai par vo actually mein uska use shruti ne pehli baar past mein ane ke liye kiya tabhi to vo 1980-85 ke bich paida hui aur fir bhi 1970-1980 ke time puri umar ki bhi thi ... to vo ek clue tha jisne shayad kisi ne pakda nahi




Kali to always is kahani ka eham hissa raha hai... usi par to kahani ka base tika hai... Han ye acha sawal kia apne ki kali kaise sampark karta hai.. vo reason hai uska bachpan se un books ka padna jisne use science ke sath myth se joda aur vo myth usne Kali jaisi ek story aur uski entity padh kar sikha. Maan kar chalo aisa ki hum bachpan mein ishwar ki batein padte samjthe hai lekin usne uska bilkul ulta pada..

VVo best isliye thi kyun ki wahi ek lauti aulad thi jo usdrug ki wajah se paida hui thi...

Are bhai font jada bada kar deta hu idhar forum par to aisa lagta hai rakshas type story ka update hai isliye normal hi rakhta hu




shruti ko aaruhi ke illusion se hi pata chala ... and usne fir time mein piche jane ka faisla kiya aur use mara



Meghnath ka hi naam to atharva hai ...Actually aaruhi use multiverse ke dusre world se is world mein le aayi.. vo ek aisa world tha jisme meghnath tha blkul usi tarah, bas usne usi same position mein meghnath ko ek dusre world mein daal diya .. and that creates a timeline change jiski wajah se vo mara gaya. otherwise vo apne world meinkisi aur tarah hi jee raha hota..



Hn... sound hi hai jo reality se jud sakti hai and same as energy



Book ki chamak yani uski power ab flush out ho rahi thi ... Haha yahi to twist tha kahani mein bhai.. Yaad karo jab aaruhi paida hui thi... vo roo nahi rahi thi .. na hi koi halchal hui thi but vo Nandini ke hathoniche gir gayi thi (Kahani urvashi ne sunai thi as per aaruhi illusion shurti ko par asal to ye sab nandini ke sath hua tha ) aur aaruhi sar ke bal giri thi bina kisi chot ke aur vo fir rone lagi thi.. Bec aaruhi creator aur kali jaise entity ke drug mixutre se create hui thi to usme achai aur burai dono maujud thi ... its not a conclusive but thats the way connection is...

VO clifhanger hai bhai.. ab usme kya nikla kya nahi.. mai kahani ko hamesha ek possibility ke sath end krta hu taki uska agla part bhi likhne ke liye story bachi rahi.. isliye likha.. but han likha hai to wajah hai uske piche


Nahi nahi.. Urvashi ko ek beti hui jo usne anath ashram mein chhod dia use pata nahi ki vo kabhi mari ya nahi na hi shrtui ko uski maa ke bare mein pata chala na usne socha kyun ki bachpan se usne kali jaise entity mythlogy ki kitabein padna hi pasand kiya.. aur wo usiko sab kuch manne lagi..

ZAc darsal vo log the jinhe vo drug diya jata tha yani ki pateints..



Kidnap hi kiya tha sabko aur fir illusion drug diya gaya tha.. sabka alag alag time tha.. aaruhi takreeban 10-12 din.. baki uske hissab se inhi din ke bich vishal, nandini aur urvashi ko laya gaya..





Han jaa sakti thi lekin shruti urvashi ki isi world mein beti thi ..



Shruti kaise janti urvashi ko? Usko aisa world kabhi mila hi nahi jisme uski maa urvashi thi ... vo har world meinek anath hi paida hui.. for her its a same story ... aur ye aisa hua kyun ki usne past mein akar sab kuch badal diya jise har timeline par impact pada and which changes her time in every world... har world mein uska time badal gaya.

Mai to tabhi samajh gaya jab unhone gumrah kiya aur aap sab bhi ho hi gaye
Wo bahut main point tha.. Aaruhi ki batein agar dhayan se padi to usne kaha sirf ek hi world tha jisme vo khud se connect kar payi jo ki supriya ka tha .. hubahu world tha ek dum aaruhi ke world ka.. wahan bhi wahi sab ghatna ho rahi thi jo uske world mein ho rahi thi thats why ek link tha dono ke bich aur usi ki wajah se aaruhi is ladai ko jeet pai..

Urvashi ke sath kuch galat nah ihua tha.. Use ek ladki bache ke roop mein nahi chahie thi isloye usne use nahi apnaya. Jo kahani urvashi ne shruti ko aaruhi ke illusion mein sunai vo sirf shruti ke liye thi.. Asal mein ye kahani to nandini ki thi.. Aaruhi ne urvashi ko isliye rakha taki nandini kabhi kahani mein na aye taki use kuch na ho sake kabhi. Urvashi shruti ki maa thi bina kisi kalle ku kuram ke

Nahi bhai urvashi ne nahi ki koi bhi uska bachpan ki palan poshan... vo to aaruhi ko janti tak nahi thi isliye to vo bar bar chilla rahi thi ki uska muh kholo to vo sach bataye ki kaun ho tum log aur use kyun laye ho... Palan poshan sab nandini ne hi kiya tha.. Urvashi to bekar mein hi dharri gayi ... aaruhi janti thi ki vo maregi lekin fir bi usne aisa chuna just like ki aaruhi do jano se create hui hai.. Creator ki meharbani aur Kali jaisi entity ki soch mein banaye gaye us drug ki wajah se...

Nahi bhai.. Train se vo log bhandara nahi gaye the.. vo to shruti aur aaruhi apne ghar gaye the jo ek illusion ka part tha aur kuch nahi.. Bhandara to bus se jane wala rasta tha..

Iska jawab maine leon bhai ko diya hai.. aap use padna.. theek ise pehle review mein tab aapko mere us likhne ki wajah milegi.. waise maine aaruhi ko mara nahi ab to aapko kush hona chahie pehli baar kaahni ka main character mara nahi

Thank u sanju bhai... for being with me in the story.. have a great life ahead

Ab apko malum hua na vo itna bleed kyun karti thi aur uske baal kyun jhadte the
Urvashi ke bache nahi the shaurya aur vandana.. urvashi ki beti to shruti thi i guess apne yahan mis spell kar diya...

Kaun si baatein nahi samjhe bhai

Shruti ne timeline tabhi badal diya tha jab vo past mein travel karke pahunchi 1975 ke as pas jab us drug ka nirmaan chal raha tha, she gave the idea to Dr sharma jisne is drug ko puri tarah banaya and then she killed him.. Ye usne past mein jakar kiya tabhi to timeline change ho gayi. Ved ko maar kar to usne ek time hole create kar diya jiski wajah se aaruhi ko shruti ke bare mein jaan payi bec of that hi use apni shaktiyun ka abahas ho paya warna kabhi nahi ho pata.

Aapke jo sawal hai vo please likh kar dena tabhi samajha paunga

Bahot saare points clear ho gaye sir thank you waise kuch tha jo hum bhi samjh nahi paaye lekin aapke reply ke baad ab sab thik se baith raha hai again hats off maza aa gaya ​

 

[Aakash.]

Aaplogon ne kaha tha aaruhi ko nahi marna to maine kaha tha nah imarunga.. kahan mara
Continue nahi hogi yahan se kyun ki kahani ka end bhale hi maine cliffhanger mein chhoda hai lekin aage ki kabhi sochi nahi to kabhi likh bhi nahi paunga.. Jo soch li ho wahi likhna chahie jabardasti to kuch bhi ban jayegi
Nahi bhai apun ab retirement ki taraf hi badh raha hai.. kyun ki mai kuch bhi shuru karunga to kahatam karne mein salon lagenge isliye fayda hi kya hai likhne ka...

Baki apne sawal puchna .. jawab jarur dunga..

Waqt humesha ek jaisa nahi hota hai jab aap free the aapne kai kahaniya likhi jo beshak lajawab thi.. ha kahani ka end dekhkar aisa laga ki iska ek part or likha jaa sakta hai khair chodo koi jabardasti nahi hai.. Haa lekin kabhi mood raha koi accha plot raha mind me to likh dena rahi baat complete hone ki to ye zindagi konsi abhi khatam ho jaani hai haina jaise iska maza le rahe hai dheere dheere waise kahani ka bhi lete rahege...

Ab koi sawal bacha hi nahi hai mitra lagbhag sabhi sawalo ke to aapne jawab de diye hai ​